The Shyish Student (An Amethyst Apprentice in Hogwarts) [Warhammer Fantasy/Harry Potter]

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[x] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns.
[x] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again.
 
[X] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again

[X] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns
 
[X] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns
[X] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again

Honestly the main reason to talk to Hagrid isn't even about Neville specifically. The vision showed someone actively fighting Fluffy before Neville got to the door. For all we know that Killing Curse was an attempt at fighting off Fluffy, not for Neville.
 
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[X] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns.
[X] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again.

There's reasonable precaution, and there's outright paranoia. Involving a student after talking to two or three teachers seems to skew into the second category. Also, Hermoine is known for taking 'reasonable concern' too far.
 
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Memories of your vision come back to you.

"Neville! He's in danger!" you hiss, eyes wide. You run towards the castle, its windows still flashing with Peeves' mischief. Sally-Anne follows you as you try to explain that you saw Neville being attacked by the forbidden corridor. It proves difficult due to your voice and now quickly you become winded.
"Neville!" you rasp, "You're still alive!"

"Yes," says Neville, taken aback, "You didn't hit me that hard…"

Your eyes dart over him, looking for any sign of injury. You find none.

"Zagreus was worried you were in danger," says Sally-Anne, as the two of you get back to your feet.
You've been spending extra time with Neville, for your peace of mind.
Man, Zagreus must be sending the weirdest mixed signals to everyone who knows him. I mean, he is obsessed with death and all that, but the moment he suspects any of his friends is in mortal danger, then he switches to extremely protective mode, behaving like a shepherd dog around the flock under any perceived threat.

Don't get me wrong, that's perfectly normal, but usually, a person with a morbid fascination for mortuary themes, beyond being "cool", what is what most goths are into, is either the leader of a cult who pours poisoned Kool-aid to his followers in order to perform a ritualistic massive suicide , or a death eater. Sally-Anne, being muggleborn, and american, is probably acquainted with the former.


As far as people we can actually interact with go, I'd say Ron. Imagine Zagreus trying to explain to Ron that he's in serious danger, only for Ron to not believe him in the slightest given their history together, forcing Zagreus to take desperate measures to make sure Ron stays safe, much to Ron's aggravation (and possibly to Harry and Dean's amusement).
Speaking of Ron and his relationship with divination class which led nowhere, due to him both not taking seriously the lessons, and lacking the natural talent needed to benefit from it (yes Ron, you are a slacker). Wouldn't it be funny if a daemon of Tzeentch, one who delved into the intricacies of fate, toyed with Ron by foretelling him the death of any of his loved ones?

My interpretation of Tzeentch, according to what I know of him in the official lore, is that, when he isn't being an eldritch abomination that brings madness with his very sheer presence and the knowledge he possess (much like yog-sothoth in the Cthulhu mythos), he plays the role of trickster that deceives and messes around with people, just because he can.

[X] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns.
[X] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again.

Neville is just screaming because he is seeing one of his professors being ripped apart by Good Doggo.
telling Hagrid while still under that misconception is more likely to hamper Good Boy when he needs to be free to act.

Indeed, I picture fluffy as the same breed as mouse (only with three heads, lol), Harry Dresden's giant good from Dresden files, which is either a Caucasian shepherd, or a tibetan mastiff. I prefer the first one, personally, mainly because a Caucasian shepherd personality fits only well with a Cerberus, as Caucasian shepherds are described as: highly territorial and won't back down from a fight, even against bears or wolves.
Caucasian Shepherd Dogs are intelligent, bold, fearless, self-confident and fierce when a threat is present, but he is soft, devoted, kind and endearing to his family. However, their stubborn, independent nature can make them difficult to train.
Caucasian shepherds generally have a very watchful and protective personality. Their breeding as a guardian plays a huge role in their temperament. They are typically wary of strangers but are devoted to their family.Unless properly socialized and trained, the Caucasian Shepherd may exhibit ferocious and unmanageable tendencies. It is very brave, alert, strong and hardy. It does not accept people it does not know and it has a powerful urge to defend.
Besides, It would be amazing to see harry Dresden having to face the horrors of warhammer fantasy (although, to be honest, harry Dresden has det with pretty nasty things in the past)


The adults have been properly warned, and that should be enough for Zagreus the one-in-a-milllion freak who actually believes in authority. If they fail to do their job despite several warnings then that's on them. And we'll hang it over their heads FOREVER if they screw it up.
You are right. And for what we have seen in the books about how adults handle things in harry potter, Zagreus really needs a wake-up call like Hermione so that he doesn't ended as disappointed as he could be, in his belief that everyone in Hogwarts is as competent as the colleges of magic back home.

Then again, maybe I'm being a little bit harsh on the Hogwarts' staff. After all they did everything they could within their own abilities, and despite what some say, some of the plots woven by the antagonists, like Voldemort's infiltration in Hogwarts through quirrel, or the basilisk conspiracy, were pretty clever. Harry's key role as the catalyst of Voldemort 's return in Goblet of fire was, admittedly, more complicated than necessary and would have fallen apart if not for Barty Crouch Jr (aka: Fake Moody) involvement (Tzeentch would have loved it).

Besides, compared to the way the ministry of magic handle Voldemort's return, Hogwarts professors are paragons of responsibility.
 
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[X] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns.
[X] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again.

I don't want to betray Neville's trust by sharing the vision without his permission, but at the same time Zagreous is clearly extremely stressed about making sure he's alright and would be devastated if something happens and he didn't take all possible steps to help. Maybe a write in that's somewhere in between?

[X] Write In: Tell Hermione that you had a vision pertaining to Neville that you're really worried about but can't share without breaking his trust. Ask her to talk to Neville herself and see if he is willing to tell her. Also, inform her what's going on with the common room situation.
 
I am very happy that we chose the vision of a friend in this instance, seems like we narrowly avoided a very grisly death in Zag's friend group. Poor Neville.

Here's to hoping none of the other potential visions were of similar importance.
 
but the size of Hogwarts in the books suggests less than ten thousand in all of Magical Britain.
There's meant to be schools other than Hogwarts (there must be one in Ireland), and parts of the books and movies imply there's a lot more students than actually get named or acknowledged, so I'd assume there's at least 100,000 or so wizards scattered across the British Isles.
Now, getting serious here, but "realistically" speaking, and considering Hogwarts's size, how many students would the castle be able to host, from a logistical point of view?
I mean, according to what I've seen in other pages that delved into the subject, and forums which also focused on that, the general estimate of the number of young witches and wizards that attend Hogwarts, taking into account from first years to seven years, and measuring the size of the tables of each house, we can conclude that there would be around 250 students per house, which would translate into 35/36 pupils per house por year, which would amount to 600 students short, and there could be almost 700 students at maximum, although in the film adaptation of Harry Potter and the Philosopher's Stone, there are about 120 kids in each table of the Great Hall, with a total of, again, about 600 as a whole (a little less, in fact.)

However, there's the fact that, although 600 or 700 is a respectable number for a school, we should also remember that Hogwarts is a castle, a big one, to say the least. Although the way it's described in the books doesn't always match the way it's portrayed in the movies, my guess is that is accurate enough that we can make a rough approximation of its size, which is massive.









What's more, in the books, JK Rowling notes that there are 1,000 students at Hogwarts, which - divided equally across the seven years of secondary education - equals about 143 students per year, which would suggest that the castle would be able to accommodate a much larger percentage of students than originally envisioned. Why the numbers dropped from a thousand to six hundred, who knows.

Anyway, would Hogwarts, as portrayed both in movies and books, be big enough that a horde of at least six or seven hundred children and teenagers, plus staff wouldn't have to struggle for living space? Would there be room for more?

Also, I think that, again, speaking from an academic point of view, Hogwarts' grounds are so vast, that it seems a bit of a waste that the only subjects taught there are a meager twelve, and of those, only seven are mandatory.
  • Astronomy
  • Charms
  • Defense Against the Dark Arts
  • Herbology
  • History of Magic
  • Potions
  • Transfiguration
Those are the mandatory ones, then, during third year, students have to pick at least two of the following ones:
  • Ancient Runes
  • Arithmancy
  • Care of Magical Creatures
  • Divination
  • Muggle Studies
In my opinion, and leaving aside the fact that Harry Potter is a saga aimed mainly at children, for which classes can't get too complicated, I think that a respectable wizarding institution should be able to comprises a more varied spectrum of disciplines, making Hogwarts not only a school, but also a college for advanced courses of study. In the colleges of magic, for what I know, apprentices not only learn how to harness magic properly and safely, although it's a big and essential part of their education, but also they learn things like maths, philosophy, literature, biology, history (not only of magic, but from the empire at whole and beyond), wizards also learn politics and, depending which branch of the colleges you are sorted in, can also learn chemistry and alchemy in the case of the gold college.

And keeping in mind, that both in books and movies, we have been shown only a small part of what Hogwarts truly encompasses, mainly those areas of the castle that harry potter and his friends hang around, it would be a pity to left all those unused halls to waste. By the way, from your point of view, which other extracurricular classes would students at Hogwarts be able to take, if they wanted to, to expand not only their knowledge of magic, but also of the world at large? It isn't necessary that they are canon, or even based on real--life subjects taught in schools, anything would suffice, as long as it sounds interesting and mystical.


"This is my Remembrall," he says, digging out a glass orb from his pocket. It's hollow and has a ring of gold surrounding it – precisely as you saw in your vision.

You try to examine the enchantment under your windsight, but can't make sense of it. Whatever it is, it's very subtle and intricate. Suddenly, red smoke fills the void in the Remembrall as the magic inside flares. Unlike your first Charms lesson, you are not caught off guard by it, but find it impossible to focus on the delicate strands of magic without being blinded by its radiance. For a moment you're tempted to touch it yourself, but think better of it. This is strange, unfamiliar magic – even by local standards.
This snippet is particularly fascinating, because as much as Zagreus tries, he can't make heads or tails of what he is seeing, mainly because his witchsight is attuned to the eight winds of magic. That is, the aspects of magic that his college are based on (death, life, heavens, fire, metal, shadow, beast, light). However, none of them, as far as I know, have memory and mind (which is what the remembrall magic resonates with) as part of their purview.

Now, Zagreus has been recently introduced to the world of roleplaying, and it's possible that one day one of his classmates brings "Mage: the ascension", from White Wolf. For what I've seen in the wiki (because I am not expert, not being a player myself) It has a very interesting magic system that gravitates around something called spheres of magic.

A Sphere is a well-rounded knowledge of nine different yet interrelated elements of reality. In story terms, these nine constructs represent a sort of "unified field theory" of Earthly metaphysics. In game terms, they measure what mage characters do and cannot do, based upon their understanding of theoretical knowledge and practical results.

Spheres represent the divisions of the Tellurian - the divisions are largely artificial, but are fairly accurate in dividing the known universe into several distinct facets. Although the distinction was originally artificial, it's notable that each Sphere has its own associated Realm within the Umbra, matching up to one of the nine planets within the physical universe.

The Spheres have their origin in the court of Thothmes III and Hatshepsut, when they collected together sacred artisans and mystics from around the world into two organizations: the Reed of Djehuty and the Cupbearer of Aset. He declared nine Cornerstones of Creation, the building blocks of reality.

Each mage has a particular Affinity Sphere that often manifests during the Awakening, but can also express itself in the interests and personality of a mage. For this reason, many mages are drawn to a paradigm that grants special weight and insight to their Affinity Sphere, although exceptions do exist in every case.

The nine Spheres are interconnected, each feeding the others in process referred to as Transmogrification. Higher levels demand that Spheres be used in conjunction. If a particular Sphere aligns with the same aspect of the Metaphysical Trinity, the mage can even imitate effects from this Sphere with another Sphere of the same spectrum that he has mastered. This is, in general, possible regardless of paradigm, provided that the paradigm accepts the model espoused by the major magical factions.
The nine spheres, and the fields they control, are as follows:
SphereField
CorrespondenceThe element of connection between apparently different things.
EntropyThe principle of chance, fate and mortality.
ForcesThe understanding of elemental energies.
LifeThe mysteries of life and death.
MatterThe principles behind supposedly "inanimate" objects.
MindThe potentials of consciousness.
PrimeAn understanding of the Primal Energy within all things.
SpiritComprehension of Otherworldly forces and inhabitants.
TimeThe strange workings of chronological forces and perceptions.
For what I've seen, the magic system in mage: the ascension allows a broader outlook of magic and its multiple applications, and I thought that it would be interesting if Zagreus, feeling curious about the way muggles conceive magic, decided to conduct practical experiments in an attempt to get closer to the original source of magic and bypass the limitations of the eight winds, to allow a more thorough understanding of the universe and how it works, if only to see if muggle speculations about magic got something right, or if it's just nonsense.
 
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For what I've seen, the magic system in mage: the ascension allows a broader outlook of magic and its multiple applications, and I thought that it would be interesting if Zagreus, feeling curious about the way muggles conceive magic, decided to conduct practical experiments in an attempt to get closer to the original source of magic and bypass the limitations of the eight winds, to allow a more thorough understanding of the universe and how it works, if only to see if muggle speculations about magic got something right, or if it's just nonsense.
I don't think Zagreus would much like the system of magic in Mage: the Ascension. Because the message it carries is one so thoroughly anti-intellectual; 'you could twist reality into a 6-dimensional pretzel at will if it wasn't for those dang scientists telling you you couldn't' (this is a recurring problem in the original World of Darkness, even more starkly on display with Werewolf: the Apocalypse). For someone who, while not the least bit secular, has lived a good chunk of his life in an environment where magic is something to be actively studied and understood, and where the greatest screwups happen precisely because you do not understand the forces you're wielding, or you do and disregard all limits because of a 'you'll show them, you'll show them all!' mentality.

Another part is that to actually play Mage, you basically have to find a magic system from a completely different game, mechanics-wise.
 
[X] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns
[X] Share the details of your vision, as you've shared with Neville himself. Ask her to keep an eye out on Neville.
 
I don't think Zagreus would much like the system of magic in Mage: the Ascension. Because the message it carries is one so thoroughly anti-intellectual; 'you could twist reality into a 6-dimensional pretzel at will if it wasn't for those dang scientists telling you you couldn't' (this is a recurring problem in the original World of Darkness, even more starkly on display with Werewolf: the Apocalypse). For someone who, while not the least bit secular, has lived a good chunk of his life in an environment where magic is something to be actively studied and understood, and where the greatest screwups happen precisely because you do not understand the forces you're wielding, or you do and disregard all limits because of a 'you'll show them, you'll show them all!' mentality.

Another part is that to actually play Mage, you basically have to find a magic system from a completely different game, mechanics-wise.

While I'm not familiar with 1ed Mage beyond some very general stuff (such as: Technocracy was more blatantly evil and controlling, leaning hard into Agents from Matrix or 1984-grade brainwashing; it was supposed to be stealth sequel to Ars Magica) I recall that the books were always saying that in WoD science is magic too, in a sense that it shapes the world. Reality is consensual and ever since Technocracy took over they were pushing for rationalistic, science-based image of reality, and Consensus adapted - scientific laws were not discovered per se, but implanted into Consensus according to what was beneficial to Technocracy. There was (I believe) that when Sons of Ether split from Technocracy after the bigwigs used Michelson-Moray to remove ether from Consensus, they wrote theory of relativity into reality as a 'parting gift'.

Furthermore, I don't know how much it was pointed out in the early days (it's stated quite openly in M20, at least) that Technocratic "superscience" is, in principle, the same Magick that Traditional mages use, just disguised and following a Paradigm conforming to Technocratic worldview. From the metaphysical point of view plasma bolt from experimental energy weapon and fireball conjured by incantations and runes is one and the same: Mage wills the universe to work in this way, and if he is good enough, the universe will obey. Technocrats don't wont the Awakenings to stop, they want them controlled and under their worldview, and it was mentioned in some fluff (again, I believe) that their methods of control actually bite them in the ass, because while trying to make people disbelive magic, they overdid it a bit and they find it harder to use their supescience stuff, because people don't believe it either.

Also, wasn't it kind of the point that all Traditions and all forms of doing magic are equally valid and true? Scrying the future works regardless if it's done by Hermetic reading it from complex math regarding stars, Dreamspeaker calling the spirits, Virtual Adept hacking the universe or Ecstatic using meditation and psychoactive incense, as far as I remember. Mage was supposed to allow you to play any kind of magic user that might exist in fiction (wheteher it did it right is another matter), so Zag might find some of the ideas strange ("Are you sure those Ecstatic guys are not actually Slaaneshi cultists?") but if he played an archmage that uses Eight Winds of Magic that blow across the world from the poles, then sure why not? It would be Entropy/Matter/Forces, or perhaps Entropy/Spirit/Matter Hermetic with a couple spellcasting Merits.
I'm saying this because in my opinion (which is very subjective and I might be misinformed) nothing should preclude Zag from playing M:tA and enjoying it. I find that game quite good, with really interesting setting and very wide array of possibilities for characters and stories, even if spellcasting itself is quite crunchy. Besides, who's to say that the Storyteller will stick to the book in every single way and not homebrews Technocrats to be more nuanced and to be less "science is bad", more "control and unchecked power is bad"

Sorry for the wall of text.
 
While I'm not familiar with 1ed Mage beyond some very general stuff (such as: Technocracy was more blatantly evil and controlling, leaning hard into Agents from Matrix or 1984-grade brainwashing; it was supposed to be stealth sequel to Ars Magica) I recall that the books were always saying that in WoD science is magic too, in a sense that it shapes the world. Reality is consensual and ever since Technocracy took over they were pushing for rationalistic, science-based image of reality, and Consensus adapted - scientific laws were not discovered per se, but implanted into Consensus according to what was beneficial to Technocracy.
Yeah, but at its core is still the notion that any and all attempts to study the world around you, which is what made Consensus stop letting Mages do openly magical feats when spurred on by the Technocracy, was to the detriment of humanity's abilities and power. The notion that asking questions about how you're able to do something instead of just going 'this is what I want to happen, so it does' has only diminished human capability.

Indeed, the Technocracy's model is openly stated to have outright stalled at the current level of 'technology', because this science-mode Consensus has now convinced people that any sort of meaningful advancement towards classic scifi tech levels is impossible. And thus, by Consensus, it is.
 
...though this being Hermione, I'm not really sure how she'd react.
Hermione can be a bit of a wild card, true.

People tend to forget that once Hermione got her first taste of rule-breaking and authority letting her down in 1st year, she was forever being a bit "scary" and extreme if she believed something was right ever since.

She outright kidnapped and blackmailed Rita Skeeter, made a cursed contract, tried to start a House Elf revolution (which if it had actually worked would've been a massive scandal and stopped Hogwarts functioning for a bit), and did a number of criminal and recklessly independent things if she felt it was for a just cause.

And with virtually nobody left to stop quirrel, is likely that Voldemort is already on the way to get his body back much earlier than expected
I don't buy that Voldemort would've eventually gotten the Stone if Harry and co. didn't go down there - the risk is entirely if students go after him (or get taken with him I suppose).

He's a powerful and clever wizard, but Voldemort would never risk harming or shattering the mirror to get the Stone out of it and Dumbledore was quite proud of the magic he worked to ensure the Stone stayed in the mirror.

To say nothing of the fact Quirrell was running on borrowed time, knew he had to get out of the Corridor before the tripped alarms brought reinforcements running, and would be the one having to actually perform any magic Voldemort wanted to do and he's not nearly as skilled and would be under tremendous and unforgiving pressure.

[x] Talk to Hagrid about your concerns.
[x] Just tell her that Neville's been locked out of the common room before. Ask her to help make sure he isn't again.

I expect Hagrid to reassure us by accidentally spilling too much information again and letting us know more about Fluffy.

While Hermione would be very sympathetic and scandalized to hear Neville's had to sleep outside the Common Room on the floor before -against the rules- because nobody noticed he wasn't in bed or checked on him. I expect her to mother him a bit, but if she knew about the vision that's a more complicated response and she might do... interesting things on her own initiative to investigate or avoid it.
 
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Hermione can be a bit of a wild card, true.

People tend to forget that once Hermione got her first taste of rule-breaking and authority letting her down in 1st year, she was forever being a bit "scary" and extreme if she believed something was right ever since.

She outright kidnapped and blackmailed Rita Skeeter, made a cursed contract, tried to start a House Elf revolution (which if it had actually worked would've been a massive scandal and stopped Hogwarts functioning for a bit), and did a number of criminal and recklessly independent things if she felt it was for a just cause.
You know, that's how chaos cultists begin in the first place. One day you are a wide-eyed, naive idealist that fights for social justice and the thirst for knowledge, and the next thing you know, you have already been corrupted by tzeentch almost without noticing it, having tasted for the first time what doing the things your way feels like, reading the necronomicon, and dismantling the current government with intrincate conspiracies that fall over themselves by their own inviability, and dubious moral methods that have destabilized the order and stability of society, always for very understandable motives according to her reasoning (I'm looking at you, Magnus the Red) and plunging it into chaos and anarchy, with an army of house elves at your disposal, chanting the name of the new dark queen of magical Britain.

View: https://youtu.be/M6g0zB6LZ9k

Reality is consensual and ever since Technocracy took over they were pushing for rationalistic, science-based image of reality, and Consensus adapted - scientific laws were not discovered per se, but implanted into Consensus according to what was beneficial to Technocracy. There was (I believe) that when Sons of Ether split from Technocracy after the bigwigs used Michelson-Moray to remove ether from Consensus, they wrote theory of relativity into reality as a 'parting gift'.

Furthermore, I don't know how much it was pointed out in the early days (it's stated quite openly in M20, at least) that Technocratic "superscience" is, in principle, the same Magick that Traditional mages use, just disguised and following a Paradigm conforming to Technocratic worldview. From the metaphysical point of view plasma bolt from experimental energy weapon and fireball conjured by incantations and runes is one and the same: Mage wills the universe to work in this way, and if he is good enough, the universe will obey. Technocrats don't wont the Awakenings to stop, they want them controlled and under their worldview, and it was mentioned in some fluff (again, I believe) that their methods of control actually bite them in the ass, because while trying to make people disbelive magic, they overdid it a bit and they find it harder to use their supescience stuff, because people don't believe it either.
The more I learn about the cosmology of world of darkness in general, and mage the ascension in particular, the more it looks to me like someone had grabbed a good chunk of the immaterium, you know, the place where physics and reason go to die, and where belief and willpower shapes the world, and had created a badly designed model of our universe built around a second rate version of natural laws which work more like guidelines than actual forces, that is hardly holding together, and where the cracks around the infrastructure are letting some very wonky and surrealistic shit to cross into, every time logic decides to take a nap. It's one thing that magic lacks proper rules and allow more flexibility in its use. It's magic after all, and shouldn't be overly constrained by many limitations, that's the purview of science (I like vancian magic, though).
It's another thing entirely that reality is so feeble that it can easily be rewritten if enough people believe in it.

"You read it?" he asks, panicked.

Oh, right. You weren't supposed to know the Gryffindor common room password. Neville could get into deep trouble for that.
Compared to Gryffindor's secrecy about the passcode, things in Ravenclaw were more relaxed. You were encouraged to talk about and debate the riddles by the Prefects. Even if a student from another house overheard or was told, it would not help them. The door had a habit of changing riddles and rejecting answers if the person who knocked had copied their answer from somebody else.
This example of the way Hogwarts houses interact with each other always shocks me a bit. What's the reason behind all that secrecy about each house's hideout and school rivalry between houses?
I ask because, for someone raised in the colleges of magic in Altdorf, it may seem a bit too much. I mean, I understand that the colleges are rivals among themselves, but unless I'm mistaken, it's more like a friendly rivalry based on healthy competition, because with the threat of chaos looming over their heads constantly, they cannot allow house infighting between the colleges. In contrast, some Hogwarts houses like Gryffindor and Slytherin, are always at each other's throats, always trying to outdo each other in order to win the house cup (which in my opinion is an hollow prize). There seems to be a certain level of cooperation between members of different houses, and they can have friendships and other relationships from people outside their respective house. However, there remains the fact that, as a general rule, to bring someone from a different house to their own house's common room as a guest is forbidden.

Besides, one of the four houses, Slytherin, is infamous for the interest most of its members have in the dark arts, as well as their disdain towards everyone who isn't a pureblood, that is, someone who comes from a uninterrumped human magical lineage that hasn't been tainted by either muggles, who are people without magic, or muggleborns, who are magical people born from nonmagical families, and are often seen as not much different from the muggles, to say nothing about wizards and witches with non-human ancestors . There's also the belief that Slytherin has produced more dark wizards than any other house, according to Hagrid (which I'll use as the example of popular belief, which often isn't true, but it's the most widespread one) in the books, "There's not a single witch or wizard who went bad who wasn't in Slytherin. You-Know-Who was one" .

That kind of reputation would have been unthinkable at the colleges, which put a lot of value in their integrity and the trust of the emperor , along with the fact that treating those unable to do magic as inferior would be a one way ticket to the pyre

So, how much the relationship between houses both in Hogwarts and in the colleges of magic differ from each other? Do all the colleges get along? Can a wizard from, let's say, ghyran, become friends with someone from Azyr? Is it frowned upon if a wizard from a wind of magic goes to another college specialized in a different wind of their own, in order to have tea with their colleagues? Are the entrances of each college meticulously warded against visitors from other colleges?
 
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The more I learn about the cosmology of world of darkness in general, and mage the ascension in particular, the more it looks to me like someone had grabbed a good chunk of the immaterium, you know, the place where physics and reason go to die, and where belief and willpower shapes the world, and had created a badly version of our universe built around a second rate version of natural laws which work more like guidelines than actual forces, that is hardly holding together, and where the cracks around the infrastructure are letting some very wonky and surrealistic shit to cross into, every time logic decides to take a nap. It's one thing that magic lacks proper rules and allow more flexibility in its use. It's magic after all, and shouldn't be overly constrained by many limitations, that's the purview of science (I like vancian magic, though).
It's another thing entirely that reality is so feeble that it can easily be rewritten if enough people believe in it.

Considering that according to some gamelines beings that were supposed to be in charge of reality are not exactly on the top of their game and everything is spiraling towards like, 5 various catastrophes of civilization-altering scale at least... Yeah.
And nWoD is not better: spirit world is always in flux, the connection with Platonic ideals of the world was broken so thoughrougly that it created a literal anti-reality that can be dragged into our world every time someone draws upon the ideals (i.e. does any form of serious magic), there is a parasitic dimension that is literally made out of emotional energy, story logic and contracts, and one of the forces holding it somewhat together is meta-universal supercomputer that uses the very building blocks of reality for computation towards some ineffable goals, inserted into the very laws of physics multiple cheat-codes and backdoors for its agents and still occasionally has a hiccup, with implication that it might be just a dumb machine maintaining itself without rhyme, reason or higher intelligence.
Actually, comparison to Immaterium are not unwarranted.
 
Never Morr: A Highschool AU
Bored with Hogwarts? Have you ever wanted to see Zagreus star in a horror comedy mystery teen drama, perhaps evoking some of the most famous gothic properties of the 20th century, hopefully without any annoying love triangles?

No? Of course not. Unfortunately, I had this brain bug during a bout of insomnia and now the rest of you have to suffer with me. I'm not quite sure what I was going for here, and struggled to voice the characters, but the idea had enough legs—or at least some sort of (twitching, disembodied) limbs—to go through with.

From the WHIMSICAL MIND of TIM BURTON
THE SHYISH STUDENT meets WEDNESDAY THE TV SERIES
NEVER MORR: A HIGH SCHOOL AU

WE OPEN in the HEAD OFFICE of NEVERMORE ACADEMY, where ZAGREUS NYX, a pale, thin boy with a head of thick, bristling black hair, stands before the desk of the tall, blonde principal, LARISSA WEEMS.

WEEMS: I'm afraid I know of no outcast community in Scotland that fits what you've described, Mr. Nyx. Is there any chance that Hogg's Wharf near Aberdeen might have featured in your recollections?

WEEMS slides a postcard across the desk labelled 'GREETINGS FROM HOGG'S WHARF'. The sepia photographs show a gloomy, rainy fishing village with a ramshackle, sea-beaten pier.

ZAGREUS: (hoarsely) No.

WEEMS: (affecting wistfulness) How unfortunate. Perhaps we will find out when the rest of your memories return. In the meantime, you need a safe place to stay and continue your education.

ZAGREUS: I know. I'm safer here than anywhere else.

WEEMS: (smiling indulgently) Rest assured that Nevermore was founded to be a sanctuary for all outcasts, whatever their origins or abilities. The Academy has funds set aside to cover cases such as your own.

Zagreus nods politely.

WEEMS: You'll be pleased to know you won't be the only student joining mid-term this year, thanks to the incomparable Miss Addams. And if you need a place to practise your creed, don't hesitate to ask—the Academy has no shortage of macabre iconography to spare.

ZAGREUS: Thank you, Ms. Weems.

WEEMS: And Mr. Nyx? Stay out of trouble.

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ROWAN LAWLOW, a short, nerdy boy with a nervous, maniacal energy, is conversing with ZAGREUS NYX in the CENTRAL QUAD, in which many oddball students are socialising.

(V.O.) ZAGREUS: After the attack, I was ready to rest eternal in Morr's Garden, my duty fulfilled. But fate had other plans for me. Once again, I found myself stranded in a strange new life, surrounded by enemies disguised behind friendly faces.

ROWAN: Not keen on the school cliques, huh?

ZAGREUS: (tentatively) I met a werewolf once. I didn't envy him. And I think wherever I'm from had… a bad history with vampires.

ROWAN: (smirking) Transylvania? You wouldn't be the first.

ZAGREUS: Maybe.

ROWAN: Look, you'll see what Nevermore is really about. It's not about fangs, or claws, or levitating things, or any of that stuff! It's about finding your people, no matter who you are.

ZAGREUS: (turning away) I had them once. Now I only have my faith and my magic.

ROWAN: I get it. It's hard being an outcast among outcasts.

He pauses.

ROWAN: Trust me, we'll be good roommates.

-

ZAGREUS sits in a botany classroom inside a greenhouse full of EXOTIC PLANTS. The bespectacled, red-haired teacher, MARILYN THORNHILL, gestures animatedly as she teaches. While other students dawdle and fidget, Zagreus listens with rapt attention. Her speech is silent as JAUNTILY MACABRE MUSIC plays.

(V.O.) ZAGREUS: As always when lost I threw myself into my studies. My hopes of returning home were dimmer than ever, but knowledge made the passage of time bearable. But before long, I came across a mystery that hit closer to home than I could have ever imagined.

As ZAGREUS LEAVES CLASS, an older GREY-HAIRED GIRL trips over a BLACK CAT and runs into Zagreus, knocking his belongings to the floor. As the two scramble to pick up the mess, she introduces herself.

GIRL: Rats! I'm so sorry.

GIRL: My name's Maude. You must be Zagreus, the new boy.

RONNIE, a black cat, approaches Zagreus and meows approvingly.

MAUDE: Don't mind Ronnie. He adopted me back when I showed up here. He's our unofficial mascot in Ophelia Hall, but he can be troublesome sometimes.

WE SEE MAUDE'S SHADOW momentarily flicker and bifurcate, moving sinisterly of its own accord.

The pair are distracted by a sudden clattering noise. THING, an ANIMATED SEVERED HAND, is scuttling along the floor.

ZAGREUS: (alarmed) Undead!

MAUDE picks up a small rock from the nearby quad and hurls it at THING. It misses by far, clattering harmlessly on the corridor tiles. RONNIE hisses, his ears flattening against his head.

THE PAIR CHASE BREATHLESSLY after THING, but their exertion proves futile as he flees past the colonnade and into the quad, scuttles up a drainpipe, and disappears.

ZAGREUS: (panting) That's not… normal here, is it?

MAUDE: (softly) No.

She claps Zagreus on the shoulder.

MAUDE: (with false cheer) Take care. I'll see you around.

WE FOLLOW MAUDE back to her dorm in Ophelia Hall. The door creaks shut and she checks furtively that her roommate YOKO is still absent. On her dresser sits a TALL BLACK HAT from Pilgrim World. From a locked drawer she withdraws a LETTER in neat cursive handwriting, sighing despairingly. It reads:

Prepare a report on the person and relationships of Wednesday Addams. Encode it using the cipher you have been given. A visitor will arrive at the academy in two weeks' time; give them the report.
 
Omakes always make my day, thank you.

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Oh yeah, wasn't Tim Burton, director and executive producer of the Netflix series, Wednesday Addams, also responsible for the movie "Abraham Lincoln: Vampire hunter"?

Imagine, Hermione wins Zagreus over to her crusade of freeing the house elves during her rampage with the S.P.E.W. at fourth year, by highlighting the similarities between the conditions both house elves and African descended slaves in the southern states lived. Zagreus, being all into anything that undermines the power of vampires, given how aware he is of the cruelty of those bloodsuckers, as he lived extremely close to Sylvania, jumps straight into the house elf liberation front, thinking that anything that remotely resembles vampiric tyranny must be erradicated. And then the plot twist: Abraham Lincoln really was a vampire hunter.
 
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The Interrogation
"So, to summarize, as of the year 2503, The Emperor is Karl Franz, the Patriarch of the Amethyst order is Viggo Hexensohn, King Belegar Ironhammer is holding the citadel of Karak Eight Peaks against the greenskin and skaven hordes, and the vampires are once more rising in Sylvania? Are you absolutely sure?"

You nod and swallow nervously at what you can only assume is an intent gaze from the woman in front of you, only just not quailing as her shadow seems to glare at you as well. Which is an achievement indeed, since it has no eyes to speak of.

The candle flickers, the only source of illumination in one of the empty dungeon classrooms almost sputtering out as the weight of the Ulgu-laden soul in front of you nearly smothers the flame.

Still, for all that you find yourself in interrogation by a Grey Wizard, a situation noone, especially not an apprentice practicing unknown and possibly heretical magic, would want to be in, your curiosity gets the better of you.

"What are the skaven?"

She doesn't seem to react visibly, what little you can see of her expression unchanging from the moment she grabbed you out of the dorms with noone (including you!) wiser to it. After a brief period of what you can only assume was contemplation she responds, though not with an answer.

"Are you sure that is what you want to know, Zagreus? I would be far more concerned with me, were i you."

You freeze at the implication she delivers. You had assumed she was the shadowmancer who had made it here with you, finally finding you thanks to the clues you have helped Dumbledore prepare, but is she? Have you so longed to talk to someone familiar after so long that you blubbered some important information to a masquerading witch? Surely not, she almost shines with Ulgu! Well, as much as Ulgu can shine. The way she shrouds herself in the shadows, you could not see more than an outline of her, but its not like you would be able to recognize one of them anyway. They were too secretive!

Finally, an idea occurs to you.

"May death pass over you."

The tentatively delivered greeting gets a chuckle out of her, the first sign of any emotion that wasn't just worrying intensity, but she does respond as you would expect.

"May shadows guide you. Your operational security is horrible, but i suppose you are just an apprentice, so allowances can be made."

The taut nervous string in you relaxes, and you slump back into the chair she sat you in after she spirited you away. Finally, the darkness recedes, just enough that you can finally make out who it is that sits in front of you with your physical eyes.

As soon as you see her properly, you feel an enormous weight lift from your shoulders, because what sits in front of you is not an apprentice, or even a magister, but a Wizard Lord. Someone with authority to decide how to proceed from here without infringing on the articles. The feeling of relief doesn't disappear even as you notice she is frowning mightily from underneath the brim of what you can now recognize is a witch hunter's hat.

"I am afraid," The guns on her belt shift as she leans forward, "that this situation is even more complicated than i have suspected."
 
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The candle flickers, the only source of illumination in one of the empty dungeon classrooms almost sputtering out as the weight of the Ulgu-laden soul in front of you nearly smothers the flame.

Still, for all that you find yourself in interrogation by a Grey Wizard, a situation noone, especially not an apprentice practicing unknown and possibly heretical magic, would want to be in, your curiosity gets the better of you.

"What are the skaven?"

She doesn't seem to react visibly, what little you can see of her expression unchanging from the moment she grabbed you out of the dorms with noone (including you!) wiser to it.
You know, this particular scenario (Zagreus being suddenly snatched away from Ravenclaw's common room into a dark and foreboding room located in the depths of Hogwarts, at the mercy of some sketchy looking wizard cloaked in shadow, for some unknown (but probably ominous) purpose) is the kind of situation in which Harry, being his typical well-intentioned, but at the same time, emotionally-driven self, who wouldn't be able to devise a coherent strategy that goes beyond, "let's recklessly rush into the potential dark magic user's quarters, where said potential magic user, who is probably a very accomplished duelist and master of many and possibly lethal curses, may be waiting for us, and let's hope for the best outcome once we arrive there" even if his life depended on it (specially when it's precisely his life what it's at stake), does exactly that, dragging his friends along with him, only to find out that Zagreus isn't being horrifically tortured by the second coming of Voldemort, although considering the reputation of the grey order, which is equivalent to a combination of the CIA and the secret police, wouldn't endear to harry nor the rest of the gang anytime soon, specially Hermione, because the grey wizards are experts in making enemies of the empire disappear completely, with no trace of them left. Indeed, for most of those affiliated to the light in harry potter, the grey wizards would seem to be as morally ambiguous at best, taking into account that a similar organization was created during Voldemort's reign of terror to root out muggleborns, which would color the order of the Phoenix's perception of them.

The feeling of relief doesn't disappear even as you notice she is frowning mightily from underneath the brim of what you can now recognize is a witch hunter's hat.
Also, it would be interesting to see the grey magister teaching the young wizards at Hogwarts, what true witch hunters and witch burnings were like.
 
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Bored with Hogwarts? Have you ever wanted to see Zagreus star in a horror comedy mystery teen drama, perhaps evoking some of the most famous gothic properties of the 20th century, hopefully without any annoying love triangles?

No? Of course not. Unfortunately, I had this brain bug during a bout of insomnia and now the rest of you have to suffer with me. I'm not quite sure what I was going for here, and struggled to voice the characters, but the idea had enough legs—or at least some sort of (twitching, disembodied) limbs—to go through with.

Goddamn Mathilde, she is everywhere, even in other characters' omakes.

Honestly, I was not impressed with Wednesday. The show, not the girl, the actress actually pulled it off quite well, especially considering the script she had to work with. She's the highlight of the show, which is fortunate, since she's the main character and all, but I'm hoping they will be a little more faithful to who the fuck Wednesday Addams actually is in the second season.

Anyway, I liked Zag. He gives off this air of resignation without dropping into outright angst.
 
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