Comic book publisher: Make a splash!

Uno
I was planning on listing submissions in the next post but I'll just put a write in option and let everyone go wild. Also use plans next time.
Scheduled vote count started by Blackangel on Oct 14, 2022 at 1:00 PM, finished with 5 posts and 1 votes.

  • [X]Plan Uno
    [X]Three: Gives me room for doing whatever I want and I can flesh out some character ideas.(20 pages for 3 characters)
    [X]Characters are important: The characters design, dialogue, direction, how they carry themselves etc. are very important.
 
Make some protagonists!
+5 to character related rolls for this issue.

Three gives me enough room to do whatever I want and I can flesh out some ideas… So why can't I think of any?!

I look around the warehouse that was renovated enough for me to do basically everything I need. It's actually really nice.


What is required for making a character.

Absolutely required:
Name, Personality, Backstory/Origin, Powers and Abilities, Appearance (preferably not just a picture, but a written description)

Would make me feel better: Personal goals and motivations, Relationships, Likes/Dislikes, Location Notes

Not necessary but go ahead if you'd like to include them: Character archetypes, Design Notes/Reasoning, Where you'd like to take the character, Potential places/time-frame to introduce

Absolutely do not: Plagiarize, NSFW, Creepy gross stuff (of the genuine or unironic kind), etc. Use your common sense.



Make your protagonists!:

[]Write in?

[]Write in?

[]Write in?




If you have more questions ask! Very short post, as I'm unwilling to suggest suggestions of my own. So it's up to you all to do that.

Anyway, have fun!

Also if you want you can make a story for said protagonists or at least an overview of one. Making an overview of one will let me make that an option ahead of time.
 
Name: Penny Cassady AKA Fortuna
Backstory/Origin: Penny was simply born lucky became luckier the older she got. As a 16 year old girl in L.A. she dreams of making it in Hollywood and so she joined her schools drama club and while out on a club field trip to popular tv show set an attempted murder occurs which Penny prevents.
Powers: Luck; Passive luck always on, although depending on her karma that week its strength varies. Her luck also depends on her opponents moral alignment her offensive luck strong against morally bad people and weak to morally good people.
Appearance: 5'7, Caucasian American, Light Brown shoulder length hair, Green Eyes
Goals/Motivations: Wants to be a Star. She craves attention and to be looked up to.
Relationships: Mother Joana, Father Ted, and 2 year younger brother Teddy. Drama Teacher Ms. Elizabeth.
Character archetype: The Outsider: due to her good luck her parents often neglect her in favor of her younger brother who they felt needed more care for. Also due to her luck her peers are jealous of her so she has no close friends with the exception of her drama teacher.
Combat Style: Savate/Ballet fusion

So I just came up with this as I wrote it...so yea.
 
Name: William Myrtle aka Little Slayer
Backstory: A year ago he discovered the monster under his bed was real, it took him and his parents away to its lair and attempted to eat them, he was the only one that made it out alive, he tripped the monster with a trap and made it fall into its own cauldron and boiled it alive, the creatures magical lair The Cave Of Shadows now recognised the boy as its new master, currently living with his Uncle Toby
Powers: The Cave Of Shadows; He has the ability to crawl through sufficiently dark places into another world comprised of creepy caves and abandoned toys, uses it to store useful items or weapons, or just a shortcut
Personality: Shy, timid, brave only when it counts, think of his personality like courage the cowardly dog, you'd think he would abandon others if danger was around the corner, but he'll risk life and limb to help someone in deep trouble
Appearance: Caucasian American tween, short blond hair, glasses but one lens is slightly cracked from the encounter, on patrol wears some strange armour stolen from the monster that took his parents away
Goals/Motivations: Protect and help people, especially from monsters, he doesn't want other kids to experience what he did
Relationships: Uncle Toby, Bff Benny, Dog Slobber
Combat Style: Mostly trickery and traps, he is still a small child so he can't overpower most foes, so he uses his smarts instead
 
[X]Penny Cassady AKA Fortuna

I do hope people come out with more because

[X]Name Will Feral Wolfen

Backstory/Origin:Abadoned by his mother He was raised by wolves he spent his childhood learning how to stalk his prey and hunt them eventually he became one with the Great wolf spirit
Powers:Constant Spirit wolf possession
He is constantly possessed By the great Spirit Wolf
they work in perfect harmony
Powers include growing sharp fangs and claws regeneration strong enough to replace missing limbs That is slowed by sliver super strength strong enough to crush diamond superdurablity that is bypassed by sliver superspeed and the power to Understand wolves can also imbue his claws and fangs With lightning
Appearance
Honesly just looking kind of like razor from genshin impact
Personality:Feral but not cruel not afraid of most things due to his durablity But does Fear Sliver and doesnt know how to speak communicates by Growling in different Tones
Relationships: Wolves and the great wolf spirit
Goals/Motivations: Protect His home From anything seeking to cause harm to his home or family
Combat Style:fights Like a wolf
I suck ass at making characters i wish someone would help give me ideas to refine it
 
Last edited:
Name: Lilian Crow
Backstory: Earlier this week Lilian Crow, or Lilly to her friends, died. On a little excursion out into the woods with her friends she got separated and happened upon a large, seemingly never-ending pit in the middle of the woods. She then felt someone push her into the pit and darkness took over her. Lilly woke up the next day in her bed, but it wasn't really her bed. Her parents that greeted her for brekfast weren't really her brekfast, and her friends who asked what happened the other day weren't really her friends. Lilly was in another world that was similar to her own, but oh so obviously different. Little things like the fence surrounding her neighbors yard having pointed tips instead of rounded ones, or the boy across the street riding a blue bike instead of a red one. Lilly realized suddenly what had happened, the pit had transported her into a another world, and she needed to find that pit again if she wanted to make it back home.
Powers: The ability to realize that the world she's in isn't her own, and to use the pit in the woods to travel between worlds.
Personality: Outgoing and questionable about the things around her, while at the same time confrontational when things don't go her way or she's questioned on her stances.
Appearance: Native-American, long braided black hair, brown eyes, fifteen years old and usually wearing dungarees and a blue and green stripped long sleeve shirt.
Goals/Motivations: To get back to her own world and to keep the other world's inhabitants from invading. Also finding out who pushed her into the pit.
Relationships: Mother Sarah, Father Kent, friends Sally, Macey, and Amber
Combat Style: Running away mostly, but will use pepper spray and taser.
 
[X]Penny Cassady AKA Fortuna

I do hope people come out with more because

Name Will Feral

Backstory/Origin:Abadoned by his mother He was raised by wolves he spent his childhood learning how to stalk his prey and hunt them eventually he was blessed by the Great wolf spirit

Powers:Werewolf he can turn into a werewolf doesnt need the full moon has a weakness to sliver

Appearance White hair Purple eyes
Honesly just looking kind of like razor from genshin impact

Relationships: Wolves and the great wolf spirit

Combat Style: Feral
I suck ass at making characters i wish someone would help give me ideas to refine it

Maybe instead of making a full on plain werewolf, you could make a different kind of animal or something?
The origin would basically be the same except it's just a different animal

Were-Badger, ferocious and unyielding
Were-Deer, graceful and quick
Were-Fox, cunning and charismatic

If you wanna stay on the werewolf side of things you can make the Wolf-Spirit shed a bit of itself to form a tiny moon that follows Will around and allows him to transform, it also does small gravity based attacks to help from time to time

I've also got a couple others

Wolf-Amalgamation: Fuses with wolf pack to form a beast of many claws and maws

Wolf-Matryoshka: His jaw unhinges and sheds his human body behind like a snake sheds its skin in order to transform, unhinges jaw and spits out his human form to transform back
 
Last edited:
[X]Penny Cassady AKA Fortuna

I do hope people come out with more because

[X]Name Will Feral

Backstory/Origin:Abadoned by his mother He was raised by wolves he spent his childhood learning how to stalk his prey and hunt them eventually he became one with the Great wolf spirit
Powers:Constant Spirit wolf possession
He is constantly possessed By the great Spirit Wolf
they work in perfect harmony
Powers include growing sharp fangs and claws regeneration strong enough to replace missing limbs That is slowed by sliver super strength strong enough to crush diamond superdurablity that is bypassed by sliver superspeed also he can imbue his claws and fangs with lightning and the power to Understand wolves
Appearance
Honesly just looking kind of like razor from genshin impact
Personality: Feral but not cruel not afraid of most things due to his durablity But does Fear Sliver and doesnt know how to speak communicates by Growling in different Tones
Relationships: Wolves and the great wolf spirit
Goals/Motivations: Protect His home From beings seeking to cause harm to his home or family
Combat Style:fights Like a wolfs
I suck ass at making characters i wish someone would help give me ideas to refine it

The lightning bit seems kinda shoved in there, how did that get in?
Does the wolf spirit have distant relations with a storm spirit or something
 
You are correct i was thinking about razor from genshin impact while i made it but i have removed the lightning

There is no need to remove it, I just gave a good explanation for it
We're trying to make comic characters, interesting ones will sell well

I'm pretty sure a dude that can transform into a werewolf cause he is possessed by the result of the union of 2 entirely different nature spirits sounds interesting
 
There is no need to remove it, I just gave a good explanation for it
We're trying to make comic characters, interesting ones will sell well

I'm pretty sure a dude that can transform into a werewolf cause he is possessed by the result of the union of 2 entirely different nature spirits sounds interesting
Either that or the wolf spirit is a wolf that died by being struck by lightning
 
I'll give this a day or two more, if we don't get enough for 3 I'll cut it down to 2. Either way I love the ideas so far!

Also In my personal opinion, lighting werewolves sound awesome.
 
Name: Bairre Adair McFee aka Mr. Wizard

Appearance: Clean shaven, his blond hair cut militarily short, 6'8 tall and 5'10 at the shoulder, this bonny lad is most definitely not what people would associate when they think of a wizard.

Backstory: And yet, a wizard he is, a graduate of Isle of Skye Academy for Magical Arts and Crafts, specializing to become a Banisher - one whose job is to track down dangerous and/or disruptive extra-and-intra planar entities, abjure them out of the plane of existence he inhabits, and close, seal or destroy their means of ingress into the said reality plane.
This is the kind of Work McFee family has been engaged in for centuries, and the reason he came to the States and Tenessee was to investigate the suspicious disappearance of his Niece Barbara-Ann.

Location: Memphis Tennessee

What he found in Memphis was an absolute nightmare for a McFee.
Shapeshifting Fairies infiltrated into the mob, Vampires manipulating local city council, Voodoo-run smuggling rings shipping magical regents, creatures, concoctions, and who even knows what else up and down the Mississippi, and no one even attempting to regulate all that mess.

This might not be the wild west, but there is a new Sherif in the city of Memphis and the surrounding regions.

Powers: A wide array of magical spells, rituals, and tools, and when all else fails, fists that can knock out trolls in a single blow.

Gear: His custom-tailored clothes might mark him out as a fancy dandy, but his walking stick is a Banishing Rod, the pockets on his vest are wast and hold more than small warehouses, and his fetching boater hat can morph into a tiny hut with full amenities inside.

Personal goals and motivations: Primary goal is to unveil the mystery of what happened to his niece and find the girl, and in the process, he will do his damnedest to force down some form of order and lawfulness to the clusterfuck that is magical Memphis and its effects on the mundane parts of the city, and protect those he finds in need.

[X]Bairre Adair McFee aka Mr. Wizard
 
Last edited:
[X]Penny Cassady AKA Fortuna
[X]Bairre Adair McFee aka Mr. Wizard
[X] Oscar Nellan/Mechanaut


Name: Oscar Nellan/Mechanaut
Backstory/Origin: A man born with dwarfism. Treated differently by many he decided to use his intellect to craft himself a mechanical suit to appear normal. While testing his first suit he realizes he could potentally do more be more.
Powers: Tech, Suits, armors, extra limbs, mechanical enhancement
Appearance: 3' 8, light skin shaggy brown hair, blue eyes
Goals/Motivations: Be respected.
Relationships: Mother passed, Father Roland well cared for, Brother James estranged
Location: New York
 
[X] String Theorem
Name: Avana Eventer (String Theorem)

Personality: Cheerful and excitable on the outside, with curiosity and madness in the inside, Avana is a girl that wishes to understand the world around her and solve big mysteries, too! Just like her favorite mystery & crime novellas! Hopefully as long as her power would be as kind to cooperate with her, of course. She hates losing things, mental or physical, due to an event related to her power.
Sometimes, she gets caught up dreaming big or thinking large, and that sometimes leads to her getting in trouble, sometimes in BIG trouble. Trouble such as getting scolded for daydreaming while doing something important or accidentally getting hurt.

Backstory: Coming from the Eventer Family, one of the normal ones, but with a twist. Every 4 generations, a certain gene will manifest on one or more children, causing them to have superpowers. During times of extreme emotion, the gene will activate. Avana's powers activated during a time when she lost something important and she knew that she had to get it back or her family will be so so mad and she didn't know where or how. It was like a mystery, but she wasn't the protagonist, where she had intellect and powers, so she tried and tried and in a fit of desperation and realizing that she wasn't in a mystery novella, activated the latent gene in her.

Powers and Abilities:
Her power comes in two. First, the power to see imaginary bonds between everything, familial ties, emotional bonds, physical bonds, you name it! Shame that her power refuses to show her everything, just the parts that would be interesting, without instantly solving problems that Avana currently faces. This is due to a hidden mental block, stemming from Avana wishing to have an interesting life. So it wouldn't do for Avana to just have all the pieces handed to her, right? But even if Avana overcomes this mental block temporarily, the power would simply overwhelm her with all the information, causing her to pass out after a few moments. (Perfect for a temporary overcome my limits moment, where Avana uses this to asertain something instantly, in exchange for passing out or an information headache.)

Second, the power to make those bonds wiggle, at least that is what she calls it. As long as Avana can see it and is close enough to interact with it if it was real, she can manipulate it slightly. Which means strengthening or weakening the thread, strumming the thread to make it do something according to it's type, or entangling the thread around herself to make it always pass through her first. There are more applications, but Avana currently does not know how to do so. It's not like her power comes with an instruction manual, anyway.

Appearance: A tween girl with reddish brown hair, brown eyes, and light-brown skin. She usually wears red/black colors, with a focus on black shady colors. You can't snoop around if you are wearing something attractive, after all?

Personal goals and motivations: Solve BIG problems! Impress her family! Trouble avoidance! (and… make sure she doesn't lose anything in the process.)

Relationships: Her parents, Aran Eventer (Elder brother), Asamoa Eventer (Elder Sister), Dania & Sela Eventer (Younger Twin Sisters),

Likes
Mysteries. Being Interesting. Exploring. Pistachio Gelato. Annoying/Caring for her younger sisters.

Dislikes
Losing things, whether be a memory or something important to her. Lightning. Fires.

Character Archetype: The Investigator x Fear of Loss

Design Notes/Reasoning:
Avan is meant to be someone that tries to satisfy her curiosity to learn and appease her desire to solve mysteries, like the novellas she reads. However, her intelligence doesn't really reach as far as the protagonists in the stories that she reads, as much as she wants to. This would eventually lead to Avana losing her childlish worldview, but having a latent gene that would give you superpowers interfers with that. However, Avana loves a good mystery, and instantly solving problems wouldn't make up for a good mystery, now. So subconciously, she makes her power seal away most of her information aspect, and it only shows the 'solvable' problem part, where she is given clues and she has to solve them.

However, due to her fear of loss, this altered her power to be able to 'manipulate' the bonds shown to her. This is to avoid falling into a trap of loss, as long as she uses her power to figure that out. Her power can only go so far, though, before it gives out, and Avana falls into a pit of her own making, if she ever does that. Some character development for her would be accepting that life isn't just a bunch of mystery novellas to solve, trusting her family to tell about her powers, and accepting that she'll lose things eventually, and that is okay. (Or go the I WILL NEVER LOSE ANYTHING AHAHAHAHA route.)
 
Last edited:
Alright we have enough for 3! Currently we need another vote for a third.

The current options for a third are:

Will feral wolfen
Name Will Feral
Backstory/Origin:
Abandoned by his mother, he was raised by wolves he spent his childhood learning how to stalk his prey and hunt them eventually he became one with the Great wolf spirit
Powers:
Constant Spirit wolf possession: He is constantly possessed By the great Spirit Wolf, they work in perfect harmony.
Powers include, growing sharp fangs and claws, regeneration strong enough to replace missing limbs, which is slowed by sliver, super strength strong enough to crush diamond, superdurablity that is bypassed by sliver, superspeed, the power to Understand wolves, and can also imbue his claws and fangs with lightning.
Appearance: Honesly just looking kind of like razor from genshin impact
Personality: Feral but not cruel, not afraid of most things due to his durablity, does Fear Sliver, doesn't know how to speak, and communicates by Growling in different Tones.
Relationships: Wolves and the great wolf spirit
Goals/Motivations: Protect His home From beings seeking to cause harm to his home or family
Combat Style: Fights Like a wolf.

Oscar nellan/mechanaut
Name: Oscar Nellan/Mechanaut
Backstory/Origin: A man born with dwarfism. Treated differently by many he decided to use his intellect to craft himself a mechanical suit to appear normal. While testing his first suit he realizes he could potentally do more be more.
Powers: Tech, Suits, armors, extra limbs, mechanical enhancement
Appearance: 3' 8, light skin shaggy brown hair, blue eyes
Goals/Motivations: Be respected.
Relationships: Mother passed, Father Roland well cared for, Brother James estranged
Location: New York

String theorem
Name: Avana Eventer (String Theorem)
Personality: Cheerful and excitable on the outside, with curiosity and madness in the inside, Avana is a girl that wishes to understand the world around her and solve big mysteries, too! Just like her favorite mystery & crime novellas! Hopefully as long as her power would be as kind to cooperate with her, of course. She hates losing things, mental or physical, due to an event related to her power.
Sometimes, she gets caught up dreaming big or thinking large, and that sometimes leads to her getting in trouble, sometimes in BIG trouble. Trouble such as getting scolded for daydreaming while doing something important or accidentally getting hurt.

Backstory: Coming from the Eventer Family, one of the normal ones, but with a twist. Every 4 generations, a certain gene will manifest on one or more children, causing them to have superpowers. During times of extreme emotion, the gene will activate. Avana's powers activated during a time when she lost something important and she knew that she had to get it back or her family will be so so mad and she didn't know where or how. It was like a mystery, but she wasn't the protagonist, where she had intellect and powers, so she tried and tried and in a fit of desperation and realizing that she wasn't in a mystery novella, activated the latent gene in her.

Powers and Abilities:
Her power comes in two. First, the power to see imaginary bonds between everything, familial ties, emotional bonds, physical bonds, you name it! Shame that her power refuses to show her everything, just the parts that would be interesting, without instantly solving problems that Avana currently faces. This is due to a hidden mental block, stemming from Avana wishing to have an interesting life. So it wouldn't do for Avana to just have all the pieces handed to her, right? But even if Avana overcomes this mental block temporarily, the power would simply overwhelm her with all the information, causing her to pass out after a few moments. (Perfect for a temporary overcome my limits moment, where Avana uses this to asertain something instantly, in exchange for passing out or an information headache.)

Second, the power to make those bonds wiggle, at least that is what she calls it. As long as Avana can see it and is close enough to interact with it if it was real, she can manipulate it slightly. Which means strengthening or weakening the thread, strumming the thread to make it do something according to it's type, or entangling the thread around herself to make it always pass through her first. There are more applications, but Avana currently does not know how to do so. It's not like her power comes with an instruction manual, anyway.

Appearance: A tween girl with reddish brown hair, brown eyes, and light-brown skin. She usually wears red/black colors, with a focus on black shady colors. You can't snoop around if you are wearing something attractive, after all?

Personal goals and motivations: Solve BIG problems! Impress her family! Trouble avoidance! (and… make sure she doesn't lose anything in the process.)

Relationships: Her parents, Aran Eventer (Elder brother), Asamoa Eventer (Elder Sister), Dania & Sela Eventer (Younger Twin Sisters),

Likes
Mysteries. Being Interesting. Exploring. Pistachio Gelato. Annoying/Caring for her younger sisters.

Dislikes
Losing things, whether be a memory or something important to her. Lightning. Fires.

Character Archetype: The Investigator x Fear of Loss

Design Notes/Reasoning:
Avan is meant to be someone that tries to satisfy her curiosity to learn and appease her desire to solve mysteries, like the novellas she reads. However, her intelligence doesn't really reach as far as the protagonists in the stories that she reads, as much as she wants to. This would eventually lead to Avana losing her childlish worldview, but having a latent gene that would give you superpowers interfers with that. However, Avana loves a good mystery, and instantly solving problems wouldn't make up for a good mystery, now. So subconciously, she makes her power seal away most of her information aspect, and it only shows the 'solvable' problem part, where she is given clues and she has to solve them.

However, due to her fear of loss, this altered her power to be able to 'manipulate' the bonds shown to her. This is to avoid falling into a trap of loss, as long as she uses her power to figure that out. Her power can only go so far, though, before it gives out, and Avana falls into a pit of her own making, if she ever does that. Some character development for her would be accepting that life isn't just a bunch of mystery novellas to solve, trusting her family to tell about her powers, and accepting that she'll lose things eventually, and that is okay. (Or go the I WILL NEVER LOSE ANYTHING AHAHAHAHA route.)


Vote for one of these 3 and I can end this! Or I can wheel it, either way probably ending in 1-2 hours.
 
Last edited:
The protagonists!
Well than we got fortuna and mr wizard! Time to spin the wheel!

… Will feral!

Alright than! You guys might as well start thinking of basic villains to go for the first issue! That's optional but will help with rolls.
Scheduled vote count started by Blackangel on Oct 15, 2022 at 3:49 PM, finished with 16 posts and 4 votes.
 
A group of hunter trying to hunt wolves one of them can survive and swear vengence
Also i am very happy mine won
 
Last edited:
Feral: Bear spirit or otherwise looking to claim new land. also BEAR.

Fortuna: a collective of thieves about 3 differing reasons greed, need, entertainment, to show differing levels of morality for luck thing. maybe background forshadow of escalating killer

Mr. Wizard: small gang made up of various lesser entities like goblins kobalds and brownies
 
For Mr. Wizard, I am thinking of starting small.
A single, low-level but dangerous enforcer.

Something Bairre can easily defeat, but still needs careful handling, not the least because of issues spilling into secular? (I dunno, for the in-universe I'd happily use the term 'mundane' but some of my peers here on the forum might not like it) world.
 
Back
Top