Shards of Awakening

Interesting.

So, affinity is the number of dice rolled when you cultivate. As written, cultivation applies to many different things, such as advancing and learning techniques, base and Qi cultivation, or opening meridians. That's a lot of stuff.

It can be increased with rare cultivation resources and techs, as well as opening meridians looking at the opening post. Probably why the richer starts begin with higher Affinity.

Talent is success threshold for when you cultivate, and determines how likely each dice will succeed. Sounds like it'd scale quick with more dice.

There doesn't appear to be known ways to increase it, or at least, the methods/materials that are needed are much harder to find.

Xing Hua:
Affinity - 3, so 3 dice.
Talent - Usually 5 (50% chance of success per die), 6 when cultivating any polearm-related arts. (60% per die.)

Starting average: 1.5, 1.8 for polearms.

Quan Jia:
Affinity - 6, so 6 dice.
Talent - 4 (40% chance of success.)

Starting average: 2.4

Xiao Lien
Affinity - 2, so 2 dice.
Talent 7 - (70% chance per die.)

Starting average: 1.4

Perhaps unsurprisingly, the richest start has the early-game advantage. I guess I should have anticipated that.

Though, for how long that advantage lasts depends on how easy it is to open meridians, I suppose. The richest start will have the initial speed advantage on meridian opening, but ultimately it's a comparison between two linear functions with a higher slope to a linear function with a lower slope but a higher y-intercept. But that's only taking into account Talent and Affinity, of course. Money may cushion the gap for longer than that, depending on how things work. Ultimately I'm working off limited information.
 
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[X] Quan Jia

The high talent of the spirit blood is tempting but that 50% efficiency hit without resources would mean we would be we are working our butt off just to scrape bye.

And honestly that's just justification for me already wanting to be rich for once.
 
Gonna go ahead and close it here. Looks like we'll be playing as a rich kid this time.

I've often wondered how the children of truly exceptional parents navigate life, especially when they end up following in the career that made that parent exceptional. Looks like I'll have a bit of space to explore that a bit more here.

Adhoc vote count started by dmclain2 on Mar 18, 2021 at 2:08 PM, finished with 26 posts and 18 votes.
 
A Nap Interrupted
Set along the ridges of Heavensmount as it juts bladelike out of the stillness of the Azure Mirror is the Imperial City. Encompassed within those, inviolate, iridescent walls are the three pillars of Empire.

Ringed around the peaks of that singular mountain lie the first of those pillars of the Eternal Empire: the High Clans. Those august lineages hailing from both the core kingdoms and the provinces plot and scheme to ascend ever higher. For to climb the Heavensmount is to claim preeminence within the empire.

As the nobility of the Empire have claimed the exterior of the mountain, so have the Imperial Bureaucracies claimed the interior. Within massive massive hollowed out caverns and strung between a web-like array of tunnels are the seven great bureaucracies. Here the apparatus of government becomes a manifestation of the Empress's Will.

Below the heights, where unimaginable wealth and incomparable power can be won or lost with the flickering of an eye are the great harbors and trade centers of the Empire. Through bustling fora of trade and endless warehouses flow goods both raw and finished from the farthest corners of the empire and beyond. It is here that trading consortia, and ambitious lesser noble clans alike, arrange the trade deals that are the lifeblood of the Empire.

A Traveler's Guide Vol. IX: The Heart of Eternity. Published under the auspices of the Ministry of Radiant Culture. Author Unattributed.


"You are Count Quan Jin's daughter, no?"

The question pulls Quan Jia from the comfortingly warm embrace of an afternoon nap, one brought on by the gentle rocking of the carriage and a delightful lunch. Blinking owlishly, she lifts her head from Liu Mei's shoulder and smiles thankfully up at her attendant before turning her attention toward where the question had originated.

What meets her gaze is a boy sitting properly, his back ramrod straight, in loose bright crimson and gold robes. A focused sort of intensity is painted on the intruder's face while dark brown eyes bore into her.

All considered, it's a handsome face, meticulously framed by shoulder length blond hair, but unfortunately devoid of any of the myriad imperfections that made people interesting. It was also a face she'd seen dozens of times, at any one of a dozen of the different, and tediously boring, old people events that her dad liked to host.

Do they all get together and discuss what they're going to look like in some secret meeting or do they come from a factory with that face pre-installed.

The thought of mechanical hands slapping faces onto a long line of faceless Diamond Souled cultivators brings a slight smile to her face. A smile that makes her wipe discreetly at the edge of her mouth where a trickle of saliva had gathered.

Hopefully Mei Mei won't notice the spot of drool on her dress.

As her chain of thought rounds finally back around to what the boy had asked, Quan Jia manages a muddled sort of response that's caught somewhere between the confusion of her drifting thoughts and a rather solid desire to fall back asleep. "Pops? Yeah, that's him. I mean, that's me."

There's an incredulous sort of shock that flashes across the boy's face and he seems to mouth pops to himself before pasting on one of those practiced, courtier's smiles.

So boring.

[1d3 - 1 = 3 - 1 = 2. Relationship with Zhang Bao starts at 2]

His head dips respectfully, "Lady Quan Jia. I am Zhang Bao, eldest son of Baron Zhang Chao, one of Count Quan's many loyal retainers."

Quan Jia hums disinterestedly in response and her eyes drift toward the scenery blurring by outside the nearby window. Moments away from blatantly ignoring him in favor of returning to sleep, she perks up slightly as an old memory slides into place, "Cherry Orchards… I remember riding beneath a rain of pink petals with dad one spring."

"Father was quite proud that his estates were chosen for the…" the boy smiles proudly and speaks, or at least his lips move, but Quan Jia's thoughts are already caught in memory.

A sprinkling rain of pale pink petals floats along a gentle breeze, settling lightly along her hair and dancing in front of her eyes. Enraptured by the rain of pink , Quan Jia's eyes follows one particularly brave petal as it settles in the thick black hair of her father's beard.

Father laughs as he notices her focus, and reaches out a scarred hand to tousle silvery blonde hair. Childishly, and at that point she would have been no more than six, she bats at his hand, and eventually he pulls back, still amused.

An unfamiliar tug pulls at her hair, and Quan Jia reaches up, smiling delightedly as she plucks a wreath of pink and white petals from atop her head. The horse underneath her continues its steady plodding pace as she drops reins and twists the wreath about, admiring the seamless connection of between what must have been hundreds of tiny flowers.

"Thanks pops," she chirps and hops, limbs flailing, out of the saddle to hug her dad. Those scarred hands catch her before she can fall, and settle her in front of him. Quan Jia plops the wreath back on her head proudly and leans forward the way dad did when he was paying real close attention to her.

An attentiveness that lasts for at least a minute before she's lulled back into slumber by the warmth and safety of her father's presence.


A sharp elbow digs into her side and draws her from memory. Turning betrayed eyes toward her attendant, a look Mei Mei studiously ignores, Quan Jia notices a somewhat expectant silence.

Zhang Bi. No, that's not it. Zhang Bai. No, not it either. Zhang… umm... well Zhang whatever his name was must have said something.

Quan Jia fidgets slightly in her seat as the silence lengthens but with absolutely no idea what's going on makes no move to speak.

Eventually, thankfully, Mei Mei decides to speak.

"Would Lord Zhang Bao," it's hard, at least due to their years of familiarity, for Quan Jia to miss the pointed emphasis Mei Mei places on the boy's first name. "Be willing to wait until my lady has become settled in the sect before providing an answer?"

It seemed, fortunately for her, that her continuing silence had robbed Zhang whatever of the bravery that had brought him over in the first place. The boy nods, just a touch quickly, and stands, just a touch more quickly and with a formal bow and the words, "Of course. Thank you Lady Quan Jia, for gracing me with your attention. Please forgive my interruption, I will leave you to your privacy." He practically flees.

Red robes practically flutter in the wake of his departure, and Quan Jia shrugs, leaning back on her attendant's shoulder and mumbles, "what'd he want anyways?"

"A date, I believe," is the wry response as Mei Mei shifts in a way that makes her a more comfortable pillow. "Though given how you noble types like to talk around things, he might have been challenging you to a duel."

"Don't want either," Quan Jia doesn't quite whine, "he's too boring."

There's a slight sigh, one Quan Jia can feel in the shift of her attendant's shoulders, but can't hear as she replies, "that my lady would have such a particular criteria for judging others. Though I suppose I should be thankful that those criteria fall in my favor."

"I like it," Quan Jia murmurs, already feeling the pull of sleep. "makes you look cool."

Above her head, eyes covered in bandages of embroidered silk crinkle at the edges in the faintest of smiles.

[Didn't see any natural place to insert the vote in, so instead you get a completely awkward transition to a vote that has very little to do with the chapter, though not nothing.

Since Quan Jia has been awakened for a period of months now, she has already imbued her Diamond Core with a resonance. This resonance is a theme or idea that forms the foundation of her future cultivation. Additionally, a cultivator may only use arts and techniques that have at least some overlap with the theme of their Diamond Core.

For purposes of the quest, the theme chosen will inform both the narrative approach Quan Jia takes to things as well as the flavor of how she cultivates. There is no mechanical difference in choosing one option vs. another. Dao insights as well as the imbuement of peripheral souls with different sub-themes can allow any theme to accomplish almost anything.

[] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.

[] Reverie. Years of dull lessons on exactly how far to curtsey or which fingers should hold a teacup in a formal tea ceremony honed an ability within Quan Jia to distance thought from reality. One day that separation crystallized into an awareness that internal reality could take precedence over the outer one.

[] Nature. The view outside her bedroom window overlooked a riot of vibrant colors in spring, an untamed verdancy in summer, the burning embers of autumn, and the quiet slumber of winter. As years passed by, the cycle of seasons, of growth and death and rebirth, settled deeply in her soul and sowed a seed of understanding.

[A/N]
As I was thinking more deeply about Quan Jia's character, it became quickly apparent that an affinity for fire didn't really fit with how I wanted to characterize her. I don't think that particular point was a deciding factor (since it wasn't really reflected in the voting option) but I apologize anyway. Instead you'll get a minor affinity (mechanics to be revealed in an upcoming chapter) in whatever you choose as a resonance for your Diamond Soul.

I think there will be one more character creation chapter or at least a vote on character creation stuff.
 
[X] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.

Because Sleepy Dao just sounds hilarious, that's why.
 
yeah, that's a fair interpretation. it's sleep vs. daydreaming, though granted there's some overlap
I don't really understand what sorts of magic kung fu would derive from either.

That said, even if it's a little reminiscent of the last quest, I like:

[X] Nature. The view outside her bedroom window overlooked a riot of vibrant colors in spring, an untamed verdancy in summer, the burning embers of autumn, and the quiet slumber of winter. As years passed by, the cycle of seasons, of growth and death and rebirth, settled deeply in her soul and sowed a seed of understanding.
 
[X] Reverie. Years of dull lessons on exactly how far to curtsey or which fingers should hold a teacup in a formal tea ceremony honed an ability within Quan Jia to distance thought from reality. One day that separation crystallized into an awareness that internal reality could take precedence over the outer one.
 
yeah, that's a fair interpretation. it's sleep vs. daydreaming, though granted there's some overlap
TBH, I kind of feel that there's enough overlap between Slumber and Reverie that they feel like they'd be facets of a larger core theme.

Do you mind elaborating more on the differences to help with deciding between the two?

And now for a bit of speculation.

Currently, I get the impression the second leans a lot more towards the passivity of dreamless sleep while the second one focuses more on actively using dreams to influence reality. I guess that the first one would probably be better at inflicting sleep-related effects than the second due to specialization, but it seems that the second would be more broad in potential effect. First might also be more inclined towards self-recovery effects, due to the body needing deep sleep for that, though that might be a stretch.

TBH I'm not totally sure if the above interpretation includes sleepwalking for Slumber, and considering it's the one thing that was verifiably confirmed, clearly I went in the wrong direction. But then again, I guess if it's more of a subconscious thing than of something even just kind of deliberate like a dream, that could fit? It's not like sleep is absolute dormancy, after all, it's not like it's death.
 
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Sleep sounds interesting. And from your writing so far I think you would make some unique uses for it.

[x] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.
 
I don't really understand what sorts of magic kung fu would derive from either.
Do you mind elaborating more on the differences to help with deciding between the two?

In terms of the narrative aspect of a resonance: a cultivator can modify/expand/specialize in one or more things that touch on the base. As an example Xiao Mei (from the prologue) started with wind, found the Dao in the hair-raising way that wind whistled through a cave. From there she doubled down on that uneasiness and found fear which led to a meeting with an unpleasant sort of spirit that touched everything with madness. That and perhaps too long a time in torture and interrogation left her the sterling example of a sect elder she is today.

In terms of how this could (though you'd likely get a choice of arts/techniques) play out: choose sleep and you get a cultivation art focused around periods of hibernation and a technique focused around sapping an opponents energy. Alternatively, choose reverie and you get an art focused around building ever more elaborate and realistic daydreams and a technique focused on creating visual and auditory hallucinations in an opponent. Nature, I think is the most straightforward one, but in the interest of completeness, nature could start with an art focused around the renewing of spring and a technique that creates and manipulates flowers.

If you want to look at sleep as a more yin aspect of a greater whole with reverie as the more yang aspect... I don't necessarily think that'd be incorrect. The search for that greater truth would be in line with a cultivator's journey toward the Dao.

All that said, you can still become proficient in martial arts, and the baseline improvements in stats probably blurs the edges between what's technically a cultivation technique and what's a manifestation of the martial arts (e.g. the shockwave created from a strike) at least from a narrative perspective (though there are cultivation techniques that derive/enhance martial arts).

I would say that however you all want Quan Jia to develop, none of the themes will block out any future options. It's as much a matter of aesthetics as it is anything else at this point.
 
I like the idea of Reverie as it appeals to me personally, being part of a demographic that enjoys hobbies such as reading and online forum quests, and I'm sure most people here can empathize.

Sleep, however, is also very interesting. The idea of controlling a seemingly worthless Young Mistress who appears constantly lazy and unproductive, but is actually cultivating the whole time (possibly using astral projection or something as well) and could crush everyone upon waking up, is highly amusing.

Another take on sleep cultivation I found very compelling is the Eternal Physique (I believe it was from the Emperor's Dominion novel, which I dropped a while back). The idea is that it's an incredibly powerful cultivation technique that takes you directly to immortality and incredible power on its own, but almost no one can master it because it requires you to completely divorce yourself from the rest of the world (something cultivators frequently fail at no matter how much they pretend they're above everything), staying detached and forcing yourself to remain asleep and motionless for eons without ever getting up and exerting your power.
 
Brainstorming things each one would be capable of so correct me if I'm wrong.

For sleep my mind is going to Pokemon attacks/abilities.

Rest to regain energy, Comatose to be resistant to status effects

Sleep Talk to still react while asleep, Snore would probably be good at passing defenses.

Hypnosis/Yawn to put enemies to sleep, Dream Eater to steal enemies energy, Nightmare would be a strong combo attack, Wakeup Slap would be a great combo finisher.

Posting this while I think of stuff for Reverie.
 
Huh, this is neat--how did I not notice it earlier?

Since the story is still young, I must ask "Which one of us makes us to be the most quirky protagonist who just sort of toddles from event to event barely cognizant of what's actually going on and thus able to substitute our own silly narrative on top of things?"
 
[X] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.
 
Just fully read the content out so far, and OOOF

money's definitely a superpower, but Talent 4 is... Uh, very, very poor. I hope we've got ways to compensate for that given time.

Then again, one of the Xianxia Protagonist Character Types is "Princeling with garbage Talent who stumbles upon a heaven defying opportunity", and given the options we have on the table, I guess what our character lacks in conventional talent, she makes up for with a strong innate grasp on esoteric stuff.

But yeah, Reverie or Slumber is my pick, whichever makes her a more amusing perspective.
 
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....Very well, I'll vote as well

[X] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.
 
[X] Nature. The view outside her bedroom window overlooked a riot of vibrant colors in spring, an untamed verdancy in summer, the burning embers of autumn, and the quiet slumber of winter. As years passed by, the cycle of seasons, of growth and death and rebirth, settled deeply in her soul and sowed a seed of understanding.

Slightly concerned the MC's doziness might slip from amusing to tiresome over time. I would rather balance it with something more active (we could take up gardening!) Than double down on the absent minded princess routine.
 
[X] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.

[X] Reverie. Years of dull lessons on exactly how far to curtsey or which fingers should hold a teacup in a formal tea ceremony honed an ability within Quan Jia to distance thought from reality. One day that separation crystallized into an awareness that internal reality could take precedence over the outer one.

I like both of these.
 
I love the idea of her continuing this trend of napping through conversations and still somehow managing to nail them.

[X] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.

Also nature is pretty and I'll never say no to it.

[X] Nature. The view outside her bedroom window overlooked a riot of vibrant colors in spring, an untamed verdancy in summer, the burning embers of autumn, and the quiet slumber of winter. As years passed by, the cycle of seasons, of growth and death and rebirth, settled deeply in her soul and sowed a seed of understanding.
 
[X] Slumber. One day while Quan Jia was hiding from her tutor, she happened upon a particularly inviting patch of grass underneath the flowing boughs of a willow tree. There, in sleep, she awoke, and realized that the line between somnolence and consciousness wasn't quite as stark as she had thought.
 
[X] Reverie. Years of dull lessons on exactly how far to curtsey or which fingers should hold a teacup in a formal tea ceremony honed an ability within Quan Jia to distance thought from reality. One day that separation crystallized into an awareness that internal reality could take precedence over the outer one.

[X] Nature. The view outside her bedroom window overlooked a riot of vibrant colors in spring, an untamed verdancy in summer, the burning embers of autumn, and the quiet slumber of winter. As years passed by, the cycle of seasons, of growth and death and rebirth, settled deeply in her soul and sowed a seed of understanding.
 
[X] Nature. The view outside her bedroom window overlooked a riot of vibrant colors in spring, an untamed verdancy in summer, the burning embers of autumn, and the quiet slumber of winter. As years passed by, the cycle of seasons, of growth and death and rebirth, settled deeply in her soul and sowed a seed of understanding.
 
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