Shards of Awakening

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At the far edges of the Eternal Empire, the Sect of Riven Stone serves as the military and cultural heart of the Province of Shattered Peaks. The time has come for a new crop of cultivators to enter into the ranks of the outer sect and seek fortune and the Dao.
An Auspicious Meeting
Civilization accretes along the edges where land and water meet, drawn to the oppositional emanations of the qi of Earth and Water. Never has this been more true than when the seven tribes of the Sky Father sought an end to their ceaseless wandering. In a whirlwind of blood and qi, the tribes descended through the Emerald Pass, sweeping the indigenous people from the land and settling along the countless rivers and lakes of what would in time become the core kingdoms of the Eternal Empire.

History and Historiography in the Age of Antiquities, Sagacious Bao Zhu, 3rd Age, 4th Year of Our Glorious Empress, Dawn's Fire Li Lian, forever may her light shine.


Sect Elder, Multifarious Chen Bai drifts out of contemplation at the sound of a delicate chime. Around him, hundreds of tiny bronze automata still and the echoing sounds of labor fade from his workshop. Few were the cultivators powerful enough or discourteous enough interrupt him in the midst of his craft. The laughter of wispy spirits as they coalesce and dissolve in playful testing of the nullification ward that separates his workshop from more mundane reality tells him it is both.

Unable to ignore the waiting elder, at least without risking her displeasure, Chen Bai melts into countless flecks of jade and orichalcum, each ringed with eight writhing, razor tipped legs. A thought sparks in a thousand separate clockwork minds and the horde of tiny arachnids scurry through cracks in space twisted such that not even an Amber Soul could pass un-maimed.

As the intricately crafted bits of his Soul swarm upon a pillow of woven cloud, a painting, the only splash of color in an otherwise undecorated room, stirs to life. Grey clouds envelop the room and disgorge the actinic flash of lightning and a deluge of rain, in the distance, waves crash against high rocky cliffs. It would have been telling, if there were any at the sect who had known of his past, that the imagery of a content childhood spent along the fjords of the Stormwall was what had been chosen.

As the comfortable tapping of rain bounces off an invisible barrier, a trio of man-sized silver automata put the finishing touches of decoration on a low table. The last items to be set soundlessly on the table are a pair of white jade teacups. Steam rises from the amber liquid held within and carries with it the heaviness of failure mixed with bittersweet longing. For a brief moment, nostalgia fills him, an instant that lasts almost too briefly for him to even catalog before the curious feeling is torn apart between the teeth of grinding, interlocked gears.

Importing Lin Huo's Regret from beyond The Veil was exorbitantly expensive. It was also a useful and at times necessary expense. With a sigh that might have been called resigned were it to come from someone less self-possessed, Chen Bai rings a responding chime, and the wards around him fade to quiescence.

The playful laughter, and the wispy forms of tiny sprites grow clearer as his fellow Sect Elder, Maddening Wind, Xia Mei enters the room. Respectfully, he rises. "Elder Sister Xia Mei fortune favors me this day with your presence."

Long black hair flutters in a non-existent breeze as she inclines her head respectfully. "Junior Brother Chen Bai, it has been some time since last we met." With those words, Xia Mei smiles, and the laughter around her quiets.
A faint tension in Chen Bai's spine relaxes as she does so. It was considered a courtesy for those with a higher cultivation level to mute their domain when around those that were susceptible to it. A courtesy only, and one the Maddening Wind rarely followed. So it was a welcome, and more than slightly reassuring gesture that she had bothered this time. After all, few even among his fellow elders could claim to be completely unmoved by the whispering insanity that was Xia Mei's unrestrained domain.

"I do hope you will forgive me if I have interrupted anything important," Chen Bai can hear the faint edge of insincerity in her words, but as ever, the unwanted flicker of annoyance emotion is quickly ground away from his thoughts and he shrugs.

"It is of no moment, Senior Sister, please do not trouble yourself over it." He gestures to the seat across from him. "I have prepared some tea. If you wish we may indulge while discussing the stroke of providence that has brought you to my humble abode."

Xia Mei nods an easy acceptance and gold-threaded crimson cloth unfolds elegantly around her as she settles into the cushion set across the table from him. While Chen Bai follows suit, fingers tipped in black lacquer wrap around the cup nearest to her, and with a pleased sound, Xia Mei take a sip. Courtesy would indicate that she wait until he had seated himself, however, there was only so much this particular elder would ever be willing to sacrifice in the name of courtesy..

"You always have the most delightful ambience," she remarks between sips. "If only others amongst our brethren were as considerate."

"Perhaps some among our fellow elders find themselves more concerned with Senior Sister's previous occupation than they do the current one," he replies a touch blandly. Xia Mei had earned her Daoist name extracting information from the minds she had shattered in service to the Chamber of Whispers.

"Perhaps," she muses and a chiming laughter tugs briefly at the edges of his mind, "what would that make you then, Junior Brother? A fool for ignoring his fellows caution? Or brave for treading forth where others hesitate?"

"It makes me what I am, nothing else," Chen Bai replies and is momentarily gratified to see her acknowledgment of his statement.

"How curious then that it is Junior Brother's very nature that brings this retired Seeker to his door this day," Xia Mei sips at her tea as dark eyes focus inscrutably on him.

Chen Bai doesn't miss the emphasis she placed on her retirement, and can hardly miss the increased tug of insanity on his consciousness. A singular golden gear begin to turn and he focuses past the intrusion, "my apologies then, Elder Sister for interrupting your retirement. It is difficult to judge time in the Reflection, but that is no excuse for shirking duties such that it would result in Elder Sister's presence."

"It is not a dereliction of duty that brings me here," Xia Mei replies after a long moment of consideration. Consideration that ends with the laughter ringing in his mind fading away. "Rather Elder Fang Ai, Elder Li Jun, and I decided that Junior Brother would make a most suitable arbiter for the deadlock we have found ourselves mired in."

Chen Bai nods at that, feeling somewhat back on familiar ground. His disinterest in things beyond his craft was well known, and as a result he was often called upon to cast a deciding vote in any number of matters. "In that case, I will endeavor to be worthy of the trust my fellow elders have placed in me."

"Of that, there can be no doubt," it is perhaps the first time Chen Bai had heard Elder Xia Mei compliment someone so openly, and for a moment it throws him more than the transient effects of her domain. "I'm sure Junior Brother is aware, but to reiterate the issue, in one month's time, the sect will accept a new year of outer disciples."

Chen Bai nods at those words, it had slipped his mind, and does his best to ignore the knowing look he receives in response, "It is an auspicious year, the forty-ninth since the founding of this Province."

"Indeed," she agrees with a measured sort of indifference, "as a result, admissions have been more… heated this year than in years previous. At this point, we three are deadlocked on which applicant should be granted the final admission spot for this year."

A spindly limbed creature with a round belly, jagged teeth, and bright red eyes manifests on the low table, bows deeply, first to Xia Mei and then to himself before carefully laying down three folders. "Each of us has a favorite, and none could be convinced to budge upon the issue, fortunately, Junior Brother's name arose during the debate, and all were in agreement that he would provide a most suitable compromise."

"May I," Chen Bai gestures toward the set of dossiers and upon receiving an agreeing nod picks up the first one.

"Xing Hua," Xia Mei summarizes as he reads through the documents. "A soldier's daughter, her father owns a minor estate almost on the western edge of the province. Proficient in the guandao and her family's martial cultivation techniques. An average student at best and Elder Fang Ai's choice."

It was little surprise that the Elder in charge of the sect's First Expeditionary Force would select a soldier's child as her pick. Still, Chen Bai thinks there is probably more to Elder Fang Ai's choice than just that and as he reads through the dossier, it appears that thought is correct.

Xing Hua was just shy of gifted with the guandao and had begun learning a pair of cultivation techniques built around the weapon. In addition, while her father would likely never Ascend, he had still managed to build a loose confederation of like minded cultivators that had chosen to settle near the frontier. With a strong affinity for weapon based cultivation techniques and burgeoning list of noble connections, it was only her average talent, and the auspicious year, that had kept her from having a guaranteed spot within the outer sect.

"An acceptable choice," Chen Bai comments after placing the folder down, "if not necessarily an inspired one."

With a flick of the wrist, the second dossier replaces the first. Once again, Xia Mei provides commentary, "Quan Jia, only child of Count Quan Jin, otherwise completely useless, and Elder Li Jun's choice."

This situation as well was perhaps a bit more complicated than Xia Mei's easy dismissal made it seem. In a century or three, the ambitious and talented head of one of the hundreds of branches of the Quan clan, Quan Jin would likely be one of a very small number of prominent nobles. A noble that would control vast portions of the province's wealth and power as it shifted from expansion to consolidation. In a century or three.

As with Elder Fang Ai's choice, there was little surprise that Elder Li Jun would choose to sow seeds on the chance that they would bear fruit a century hence.

As he reads through the second dossier, Chen Bai is unable to completely still the minute frown that crosses his face. Quan Jia's lack of talent would make it difficult to advance beyond the Lesser Souls even if her father became viceroy of the province. Still, she did appear to display a certain minor affinity for elemental fire. It was hardly enough to overcome her lack of talent, but it was better than nothing.

On the other hand, unlike Fang Ai's choice, and presumably Xia Mei's, Li Jun's choice would have little uncertainty in her life. Regardless of her own diligence, her father's resources and influence would be enough to see her graduate to the inner sect in a few years time. That same influence would, more likely sooner than later, garner her a core-discipleship with one of a handful of the ambitious and but untalented sect elders that seemed to grow like mold throughout the Imperial Sects.

"And if the esteemed Lord Quan Jin were to sire a more competent heir?" Chen Bai muses more or less to himself, though the way Xia Mei's lips quirk in what may be amusement causes him to focus more clearly, at which point the answer, and the source of her amusement becomes readily apparent.

"Ahh," Chen Bai coughs uncomfortably, "I had forgotten that rather sordid business. I suppose it's safe to say he won't be siring any more children then."

"Thus Elder Li Jun's support," she murmurs, not quite bothering to hide the disdain she feels for her fellow elder.

"The third is Elder Sister's choice then?" Chen Bai comments as he picks up the final folder. "I wonder what this choice will say about the Maddening Wind?"

Xia Mei laughs. The world tilts sideways as tendrils of burning red violence creep through the edges of Chen Bai's sight and fear sinks burning claws into the back of his skull. "Why, Junior Brother would it say anything? After all, chaos is just the Madness of the universe."

Between one moment and the next, insanity lifts, and Chen Bai takes a moment to ponder what was just said. It had the ring of Dao, and for single, utterly terrifying instant, he realizes the depth of Elder Xia Mai's Madness was far…

Chen Bai flips through the dossier as for a third time Xia Mei provides commentary, "Xiao Lien, exceptional talent, an unfortunate lack of lineage or political connection and…"

Unsanctioned. "An unfortunate stain on an otherwise unimpeachable application," he replies neutrally and then a thought occurs, "Would Elder Sister perhaps know the provenance of her ancestry?"

A smile that makes the skin at the back of his neck crawl is his only response and Chen Bai sighs as he returns his focus to the papers in front of him.

Xiao Lien, spawn of a human mother and an unknown spirit father had passed an unremarked and unremarkable childhood in a quiet, unawakened neighborhood near the outskirts of the provincial city of Linxia. Quiet at least until several months previous when her awakening had been observed by the sensory wards, primed as they were to detect the intrusion of unwanted spirits. After a regrettable incident with the local constabulary, fortunately stopped prior to lasting harm occurring, the city magistrate had decided to make her existence someone else's problem, namely the local Imperial Sect.

Her talent was prodigious, just shy of legendary in fact, but there was a risk of… contamination, as there was with all unsanctioned spirit-blooded cultivators. In cases of lesser talent, shattering the Diamond Core would have been the kinder fate, but for one such as this… well there wasn't a cultivator of the Greater Souls who had ever been averse to risk. And for the reward: powerful, and more importantly powerful unaffiliated cultivators were coveted by everyone from sects to individual elders to the Imperial Bureaucracies themselves.

For a long moment, Chen Bai remains silent as gears of precious metal and faceted gemstone work through fact, supposition, and potential. Finally, he speaks:

[] Xing Hua
Strength: ●●●○○ Potency: ●○○○○
Dexterity: ●●○○○ Awareness: ●●○○○
Stamina: ●●○○○ Resilience: ●○○○○

Talent: ●●●●●
Affinity: ●●●

Prodigy of Polearms
Xing Hua's Talent counts as 6 for cultivating arts related to any type of polearm (quarterstaffs, spears, halberds, etc.) likewise her potency counts as 1 dot higher for using any of these arts.

Minor Noble
Xing Hua is one of several children of a minor baron with estates near the frontier. She receives a stipend of 2 additional spirit ores or gems of the highest level she can cultivate (up to iron and agate respectively) per turn.

[] Quan Jia
Strength: ●○○○○ Potency: ●○○○○
Dexterity: ●●●○○ Awareness: ●○○○○
Stamina: ●○○○○ Resilience: ●○○○○

Talent: ●●●●
Affinity: ●●●●● ●

Major Noble
Quan Jia is the only child of a prominent provincial Count. She receives a stipend of 5 additional spirit ores or gems of the highest level she can cultivate (up to silver and amber respectively) per turn.

Scion of Clan Quan
Quan Jia is the scion of Clan Quan, one of a small number of powerful noble clans within the province. There are few individuals or organizations who will not be positively predisposed toward her due to this fact. Upon meeting an individual or coming in to contact with an organization, a 1d3 - 1 is rolled and added to the relationship or reputation score with that entity.

[] Xiao Lien
Strength: ●○○○○ Potency: ●●●○○
Dexterity: ●○○○○ Awareness: ●○○○○
Stamina: ●○○○○ Resilience: ●○○○○

Talent: ●●●●● ●●
Affinity: ●●

Spirit-Blooded
As the child of a ???, Xiao Lien receives ???. She is also susceptible to ???.

Imperial Prejudice
While the carefully planned and sanctioned breeding of spirit and humanity is allowed and even celebrated in certain cases, the Ji have interbred with the Verdant Court such that Court and Clan have merged into one entity, unregulated miscegenation between human and spirit has long been viewed with skepticism. The aftermath of the Calamity of Fire, and the actions taken by spirit-blooded contaminated by the God-Beast, upgraded that skepticism to prejudice. Upon meeting an individual or coming in to contact with an organization, a 1d3 - 1 is rolled and subtracted from the relationship or reputation score with that entity.

A/N
In case it isn't clear, this is the first of a few (maybe two or three) character creation votes.
 
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Character Sheet


  • Attribute​
    Base​
    Inherent
    Bonuses​
    External
    Bonuses​
    Total​
    Strength (2/20 XP) ●● ●●○○○
    Dexterity (0/30 XP) ●●● ●● ●●●●●
    Stamina (0/10 XP) ●●● ●●●●○
    Potency (0/20 XP) ●● ●● ●●●●○
    Awareness (0/10 XP) ●●● ●●●●○
    Resilience (0/20 XP) ●● ●●○○○


  • Minor Affinity: Slumber
    Quan Jia Awakened within a dream and a small piece of that realm followed her out. (+2 dice to cultivation of all arts or techniques with the keyword Slumber.)

    Major Affinity: Dream
    On the windswept peak of a mountain tall beyond compare, Quan Jia ingested a fragment of Dream. (+1 Talent when cultivating all arts or techniques with the keyword Dream.)

    Intuitive Awareness
    Quan Jia has gained an intuitive understanding of some of the connections between qi and metaphor and reality. (When attempting perception checks, 10s count double toward successes.)

  • Physical Stats
    Attack =3
    2(Strength) + 1 (Unarmed)
    Defense = 5 (10)
    5 (Dexterity) + 4/2 (Potency) + 3(Technique)
    Health =20
    4 (Stamina) * 5

    Esoteric Stats
    Attack = 4
    4 (Potency)
    Defense = 4
    4(Awareness)
    Health = 10
    2 (Resilience) * 5


  • Talent
    Level: ●●●●
    +1 Talent to cultivation of arts and techniques with a theme of Dream. (Major Affinity for Dream)

    Affinity
    Level: ●●●●● ●●●●● ●
    +2 dice to cultivation of arts and techniques with a theme of Slumber. (Minor Affinity for Slumber)
    +3 dice to cultivation of meridians, qi, and base cultivation. (Large Estate Vent)

    Cultivation
    Level: Diamond Soul
    Stage: Mid
    XP: 23/40


    Meridians
    Number: 11
    XP: 4/14

    Qi
    Pool: ●●
    XP 0/50

    Bound Sites
    Number: 1/3
    Nature sleeps in winter. The vibrancy of life fades before inexorable cold and yet remains defiant in coiled, waiting slumber. In places where year after year, decade after decade, century after century, life both animal and otherwise return to weather the grasp of winter, the qi of Slumber gathers.

    Site Potency: Lesser Cultivation Site.

    Keywords: Slumber, Winter, Beast.

    Bonuses: +3 to stamina and awareness.


  • Potency: Diamond Core
    Theme(s): Slumber, Dreams, Travel
    Growth: 6 Paths
    Description:
    Those who wander the Dream speak of paths, glittering highways and twisted game-trails alike, portions of consistency within an infinitely mutable whole. While no two cultivators can agree upon where a path lies, or what it leads to, there are a few paths within the Dream where effort and understanding can set the stage for one's journey along it.

    This art, created by the Sage of a Thousand Eyes lays out the meditations required to begin the journey upon six such paths.

    First Path: the paths of Dream are as fractured mirrors to the roads of the waking world. A cultivator of the First Path takes their first steps along this fractured way and begins to perceive the branchings of if and perchance.

    Mastery of the First Path grants a +2 (to a 1d100 base roll) bonus to random event, exploration, and loot rolls
    Mastered

    Second Path: A fractured mirror yet reveals truths unseen. A cultivator of the Second Path once again takes their first steps along the twisted paths of Dream and refines their ability to tell true from false.

    Mastery of the Second Path grants a +5 (stacks with previous bonus) bonus to random event, exploration, and loot rolls
    Mastered

    Third Path: A lotus grows from the muck, ever seeking the light of the sun. Such was the Enlightenment imparted by Lady Shifting Sands. The paths through Dream that Quan Jia walks are now illuminated by the gentle light of the noon-day sun.

    Mastery of the Third Path grants an intuitive understanding of where a path leads (mechanically voters may choose from a selection of rewards offered within the tier achieved by that roll)
    XP: 1/75

    Potency: Diamond Core
    Theme(s): Slumber, Earth, Shield
    Attribute: Dexterity
    Type: Physical Defense
    Growth: 5 Dunes
    Description:
    Throughout the Dream, sands blow, a metaphor carved into the Dream by waking minds and enacted upon waking minds by the Dream. Despite its recursive nature, the sands of sleep may be manifested with slumber aspected qi and used to rob the impetus of an attack upon the cultivator. The Dreaming Tempest, Ma Qiu was the first cultivator to tap into this particular facet of the Dream and use it to defend herself from attackers. While this technique retains little of the potency of its progenitor, it is still an effective means of shielding a cultivator from harm.

    First Dune (Qi cost: ●):
    The Sands of Sleep draw away force, impetus, verve, from the waking world. Practitioners of the First Dune learn how to interpose discs of this sand between themselves and attacks.

    The First Dune provides a +1 dice bonus to physical defense pool.
    Mastered

    Second Dune:
    Sand flows as liquid and absorbs with languid stillness. Practitioners of the Second Dune begin to refine their control over their sand constructs.

    The second dune increases the defensive bonus provided by the First Dune to +3
    XP: 45/50

    Third Dune (Qi cost: ●●)
    Sand abrades clarity and erodes precision. Practitioners of the Third Dune learn how to thread grains of sand throughout an opponent's techniques

    The Third Dune eliminates an opponent's physical attack technique bonuses.

  • 19 Spirit Diamonds

    1 Robin's Grace Pill: a pill crafted from the fluttering grace of a robin and mixed with base materials before being cooked in a cultivation furnace. +6d10 to cultivating dexterity

    1 Glowing Attribute Pill: A hero's defiance of Fate, at the moment of triumph. +10d10 to cultivating all attributes

    1 Plain Pill: The endless sea of Earth, framed in a torrent of stillness. +10d10 to cultivating base cultivation.

    Wind's Dancer
    A branch of a cherry tree, engraved with inhuman precision into a simple golden-jade plaque sways ever so slowly amidst an unseen breeze. [Talisman provide +2 dots to dexterity, a bonus that will increase to +4 upon reaching Quartz Soul, +6 upon reaching Pearl, +8 upon reaching Agate, and +10 upon reaching Amber.]

    Moon's Radiance
    A pearl, glowing with the soft luminescence of the moon, dangles from a simple silver chain. [Talisman provide +2 dots to potency, a bonus that will increase to +4 upon reaching Quartz Soul, +6 upon reaching Pearl, +8 upon reaching Agate, and +10 upon reaching Amber.]

    Gyre of Five-Fold Enlightenment
    A censer scribed with the character for heat embossed in black enamel on each of its sides. [The Gyre of Five-Fold Enlightenment provides a multiplicative bonus* of 1.2 to the number of cultivation dice that can be applied to the cultivation of arts, techniques, attributes, and base cultivation level.]

    Thousand Trainings Mirror
    A simple bronze mirror, its edges wrapped with the serpentine form of an Azure Skies Dragon. Curiously, it offers no reflection, unless, that is, a cultivator were to practice a cultivation technique in front of it. Then the mirror reflects, in patterns both chaotic and fractal, a thousand separate mistakes and inefficiencies. By studying these countless mistakes, a cultivator can rapidly improve their understanding of their techniques. [Multiplies the successes obtained when cultivating techniques by 1.5]

    Abnegation Chamber
    A ring, several feet in diameter, made out of a flattened ochre material and twisted in a way that gives the appearance the ring has only one side. Cultivating qi while within the chamber is rendered incredibly difficult by twin forces that both constrict the cultivator's meridians and scatter the ambient qi within. [cultivating qi within the chamber confers a -1 penalty to talent and doubles all successes.]

    A unique creation of the un-aspected qi upon which the Sect of Riven Stone was built and the artifice of Multifarious Chen Bai, these vents are an incredible boon to almost all outer-sect cultivators. A cultivator who spends at least one evening a week sleeping or cultivating within an abode containing one of these vents will absorb the un-aspected qi that is emitted. Due to the purity and lack of aspect of this qi, it rotates freely within the cultivator's meridians until being absorbed into the Diamond Core. (Large Estate Vents provide a bonus of +3 cultivation dice to all cultivation that does not involve aspected qi up until Agate Soul.)

  • Whether it's due to an impressive mental capacity, to notice, and process the minute flaws in the apparatus of a game of chance, or whether it's due to a burgeoning ability to interpret the interface of chance and fate, you have gained a supernatural competence in playing games of chance.

    Quan Jia succeeds in all gambling checks where either her opponent(s) lack an applicable skill or the game itself isn't protected against this kind of advantage.

    Your mother sought enlightenment through beauty and found it in the blossoming of a flower. Your father modified his core in an unusual, and dangerous, way to win the hand of the woman who had stolen his heart. Is it any surprise then that the sprawling estates of your childhood were full of gardens and jungles, oases and forests, home to ten-thousand species of plants? Is it any surprise that an easily bored child would escape to wander those endlessly changing vistas? That you would learn of the natural world by yourself, and at the knee of your father?

    Quan Jia automatically succeeds in all gathering attempts for plants with a cultivation level equivalent to Diamond Core. The DC for gathering all plants is reduced by 1 dot.

    Hitting things wasn't necessarily your favorite thing to do, though, you had learned how to do so. It was, after all, one of the few places where your pops wouldn't compromise: if you wanted to explore outside of the estate you had to learn how to defend yourself. Since there were only so many things to see, and nap on, inside the estate, you had agreed, and despite your preferences learned how to both punch and kick.

    Quan Jia can fight off an arbitrarily large number of unawakened beings (e.g. animals or people) she also received a +1 dice bonus to her physical attack pool.

    The Heavens were cruel. That was the only explanation for the hours, days, weeks, months, years, centuries, ages... well maybe not the last two, you had spent learning the endless minutiae of trade agreements and political alliances in the Province of Shattered Peaks.

    Quan Jia understands the underlying power structures and alliances that form the province. (Skill will be expressed narratively more than mechanically)

    If lessons on politics had been torture then lessons on cultivation were... still torture. Why did pops always try to keep you cooped up inside? Regardless, your lessons exposed you to a thousand different cultivation resources, taught you to recognize the ambient ley lines that made up a cultivation site, and gave you a theoretical foundation for how talismans worked.

    Quan Jia will automatically identify all common cultivation loot she finds and receives a +1 dot bonus to identifying rare loot.


  • Eldest Son of Baron Zhang Chao one of Lord Quan Jin's retainers. Either wants to date you or fight you, you're not sure, and don't really care

    Character Details
    Resonance

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    He's kind of creepy, but in a good way. Plus he knows some cool people and he can probably tell you cool things about the sect. Next time Mei Mei's not looking, you may try and meet up with him and his friends again.

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    Resonance

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    You hijacked a dinner invitation and dragged her out to lunch and then helped her out with some cultivation stuff. It seems kind of like there's an unpleasant sort of parallel between her life and yours

    Character Details

    Resonance

    She used a shadow or darkness based technique against you during your first combat class.

    Derived Stats
    P. Off: 5
    P. Def: 3

    Mentoring Capabilities:
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    She hasn't really said, but it's not really hard to notice that things haven't been all that great for Xiao Lien recently. That's all going to change now, she's your friend, and pops always says how important it is to make sure your friends are happy. Also, she's a top eight pillow without even using her tail... her potential seems endless.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    She seems to like the sun, but also used a defensive technique that had feathers in it.

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    Due to distance and markedly different priorities, you and Shao Cuifen had never interacted much. That's changed now, you're friends now. You just have to remember to that she's even more obsessed than you are. Her sword likes to sleep too, how cool is that.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    Sword, clearly sword.

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    She's your neighbor that likes to grow plants, or imbue them with nascent spirits, or something. You're not quite sure. Either way, you've never met someone that can talk to spirits like that and you're determined to become friends with her.
    Character Details
    Resonance

    She can speak to spirits, but you're not sure whether that's a trait or a part of her resonance.

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    For as long as you've known him, and you've known him almost your entire life, Meng Chao's been odd. Interacting with him has always been a matter of exchange, even conversation has felt some of this. Despite that, you're friends now, with some of those transactional details that can be worked out later.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    Mei Mei says his resonance is based around connections, whatever that means.

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    Her life before yours is what Mei Mei always says, and she's attempted to prove it at least twice that you know of. She's been your attendant and constant shadow since the day you were born. She's also the second best pillow you've ever had.

    She's been at the peak of the Amber Soul for as long as you've been alive, but lately there's been hints that she might be close to breaking through.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    She says it's the flash of a blade that you don't see even as it kills you... Mei Mei's kind of scary like that.

    Derived Stats
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    Mentoring Capabilities
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    It's not easy to encompass everything your father means to you, to the province, to everything, but if you had to, he would be the sun around which everything orbits. You've never had even the slightest cause to doubt your father's love for you, but sometimes you wonder if it wouldn't be easier if he did doubt. Maybe your failures would sting just a bit less if that were true.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    Pops makes things, paints them, carves them, occasionally forges them, and then gives them life and absurd powers.

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    Mentoring Capabilities
    N/A

    You've always hated, and honestly, loved to hate Luo Lifen, a sentiment that had until just the other day seemed mutual. Now she hates your newest friend, and by extension you, with a loathing completely out of line with what it had been.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    Being a manipulative pig.

    Derived Stats
    Like she'd ever be good at anything

    Mentoring Capabilities
    There's hundreds of hells you would prefer to visit before entering the one where that pig tries to teach you anything.

    She teaches your cultivation class. You don't know much more about her.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    She manipulated space, at least you think that's what it was, during your first cultivation class.

    Derived Stats
    N/A

    Mentoring Capabilities
    N/A

    He teaches your combat class. The only thing you think you know about him is that he likes to laugh and smile.

    Character Details
    Resonance

    He appeared to have mastery over sound, or maybe runes, during your first combat class.

    Derived Stats
    N/A

    Mentoring Capabilities
    N/A

 
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Mechanics
Affinity
Successful cultivation relies on two factors unique to each cultivator: affinity and talent. Affinity is the ability of a cultivator to draw in the energies of Heaven and Earth. This intake of energy is a function of the size, number, and purity of their meridians, all of which may be increased via rare cultivation resources and techniques.

Mechanically: a cultivator receives a base of 1d10 per each dot of affinity they possess. These d10 (and any d10 resulting from any other source) are rolled against that cultivator's talent to determine the amount of cultivation progress gained (whether in base cultivation, Qi cultivation, opening meridians, or cultivating arts and techniques).

Talent
A cultivator's talent is their ability to retain the energies they take in during cultivation. It is a direct manifestation of the purity of their Diamond Soul (shattered, fissured, cracked, marred, scuffed, pure, luminous, radiant). Few in the history of the Eternal Empire can boast of a luminous core, and a radiant core is considered little more than myth.

Mechanically: a cultivator has a talent score of 1 + Diamond Soul Purity. The sum of affinity dice are rolled against that talent score and a success is recorded if the value is less than or equal to the talent score.

Qi
Qi is an internal energy drawn passively from the environment by a cultivator. It is expended to utilize cultivation arts and activate artifacts. Qi can be increased by direct cultivation of if, as a side effect of rare cultivation resources, as a bonus to unlocking levels of cultivation arts, rare cultivation sites, and certain events.

Mechanically: a cultivator has 1 or more dots of Qi that can be expended in the following manner: Qi cost = Qi - 3 (free usage of art), Qi - 2 (liberal use of art), Qi - 1 (handful of uses) Qi - 0 (singular use). Each dot of qi requires twenty successes.

Meridians
Meridians are channels within the body and soul that conduct energy to and from the Core and Peripheral Souls. The process of opening and attuning meridians gradually increases the affinity for cultivation energy that a cultivator has.

Mechanically: a cultivator starts with 1 meridian open (the minimum required to cultivate). The first ten meridians requires one more success than the meridian previous to it. Meridians 11 - 20 require two more successes than the meridian previous to it, 21 - 30 require three more, and so on. Each opened meridian provides a 1 dice bonus to affinity. Multiple meridians can be opened in one cultivation session.

Cultivation Resources
Pills, elixirs, talismans, and other items are commonly available for cultivators of the Lesser Souls. The simplest of these being the spirit gem of quartz, pearl, agate, and amber. A stone of the requisite level is required to cultivate with more than minimal efficacy.

Resources available for the Greater Souls are considerably rarer. Quantities of these resources sufficient to support cultivators is typically held by the large imperial institutes (Clans, Sects, Bureaucracies, etc.) with access gated by the performance of deeds and tasks in service to said institutes.

Mechanically: cultivating without an applicable cultivation resource carries with it a 50% reduction in the number of affinity dice available.

Usage of more than one spirit gem provides a stacking bonus of [3 * (level of ore or gem)] up to a maximum of [1 + (cultivation level)]. Thus an Agate Souled (third level) cultivator may use 4 spirit agates for a total bonus of [3 * 3 * 4] = 36 bonus dice.

Resources may add dice either additively (common) or multiplicatively (rare).

Cultivation Sites
Certain places are imbued with a surfeit of aspected qi. These sites, once found, may be attuned to and that extra qi siphoned off to strengthen a cultivator. Some sites allow multiple cultivators to attune to it while others can only be attuned to by one individual.

Mechanically: a cultivator receives bonuses for each cultivation site they have attuned to, and may attune to a number of sites equal to 1 + (cultivation level).

Talismans
Talismans are crafted by cultivators focused on the Dao of Creation, or a subset thereof. They utilize certain qi rich materials in the crafting process and can be customized to an individual cultivator. Cultivators may equip a number of talismans equal to 1 + cultivation level.

Mechanically: talismans provide passive bonuses to a single attribute, skill, derived stat, or similar.

Artifacts
Artifacts are a subset of talismans that have been crafted by a cultivator of the Dao of Creation who has awakened at least one of their Greater Souls. These items are then, it is said, imbued with the mote of the cultivator's Shen. As a result artifacts are both more versatile and more powerful than their talisman counterparts. Artifacts have specific restrictions upon their attunement and use, up to and including approval of the artifact spirit itself.

Even the least of these items is valuable to the point that few, even among the great clans of the Seven Kingdoms can claim to own one prior to awakening their first Greater Soul.

Mechanically: artifacts provide significant passive bonuses as well as potent activated effects. An artifact counts as a talisman for purposes of calculating how many of such items may be equipped.

Cultivation Stages
Progress through each level of cultivation includes distinct stages (e.g. early, middle, late). These stages provide qualitative and mechanical bonuses against opponents and challenges.

Mechanically: each stage of difference between a cultivator and their opponent or challenge level provides 1 additional dice to that DC.

Cultivation Levels
Progress through the Lesser Souls (sequentially: Quartz, Pearl, Agate, and Amber) provides uniform enhancements to cultivators, while progress through the Greater Souls (sequentially: Opal, Sapphire, Ruby, and Emerald) provides unique bonuses based upon the Dao and resonance of the cultivator.

Mechanically: each level of difference between a cultivator and their opponent or challenge level provides 2 automatic successes to that DC.

Breakthroughs
Once the peak of a cultivation level is reached a cultivator may attempt to breakthrough to the next cultivation level. The cultivator enters closed door cultivation and either succeeds in the breakthrough or exhausts their energies in failure and must make another attempt later.

Mechanically: a cultivator receives 2 attempts per dedicated action to breakthrough. This occurs as a 1d100 roll where breakthrough is successful when > (100 - Talent * 10). Each level of cultivation requires a number of successes = 2 * Cultivation Level. Each failure reduces the number of successes by one and a failure with no successes results in the loss of half of the cultivation experience gained from the last stage prior to peak.

Thus Quan Jia's breakthrough to Quartz Soul would require 2 successes with a DC of > 60 while Pearl Soul would require 4 successes, and so on.

Cultivation Arts
A cultivation art is an exploration of the themes and elements of the universe or of the self and an almost endless variety of cultivation arts exist. Arts can create or strengthen Dao insights, increase physical or cultivation attributes, enhance the speed and efficiency with which one cultivates, or permanently alter how the cultivator interacts with the world around them.

Mechanically: Arts provide bonuses to stats and attributes and differ from techniques in that they only provide passive bonuses.

Cultivation Techniques
A cultivation technique is an expression of the themes and elements imbued within a cultivator's core or peripheral souls.

Mechanically: techniques utilize qi to temporarily change some aspect of themselves or the world around them

Physical Technique
Any cultivation art which creates a physical manifestation of change is considered a physical art. This can include an art which generates a beam of molten sunlight as well as an art which transforms the user into glittering shards of stone. Edge cases can confuse the issue, but a good rule of thumb is that if you can dodge the attack it's a physical technique

Esoteric Technique
Arts which don't fall easily into the category of physical arts are considered esoteric arts. This can include an art which allows for long distance communication as well as an art which allows the user to catalog and process enormous amounts of information. Conversely to physical techniques, if a technique must be endured or otherwise surpassed, it is typically esoteric.

Cultivation relies on two particular factors, the first is affinity and the second is talent.

Affinity is a measure of how much qi a cultivator can draw in during cultivation reflected as a pool of d10. Affinity is the sum of all meridians, all bound cultivation site bonuses, any minor affinities, and any cultivation resources.

In Quan Jia's case, she has a base affinity of 6. She has a minor affinity for Slumber which provides a +2 bonus to cultivating arts and techniques with the Slumber keyword (this does not apply to base cultivation). She also has an artifact that provides a multiplier of 1.2 to most cultivation attempts (since this is the tutorial, it also does not apply here). As a final bonus, she has access to a vent at her estate that provides a +3 bonus to affinity (this also does not apply for this tutorial). Finally, since she is cultivating with an appropriate level of spirit-gem, she can negate the 50% penalty to cultivation that applies when cultivating without it.

Thus, Quan Jia's final affinity results in a pool of 6d10

Talent is a measure of how much of the qi drawn in by a cultivators affinity score is retained. Talent is represented as the purity of a cultivator's diamond core (though npcs do not necessarily have their talent reflected as whole numbers). Talent interacts with affinity via the following rule: each dice of affinity is rolled, and any result equal to or less than a cultivator's talent equates to an increase of 1 to the thing being cultivated.

Unlike affinity, talent can only be increased by certain, incredibly rare, events.


In Quan Jia's case, she has a base talent of 4. She does not have any major affinities which would provide a +1 bonus to talent when cultivating arts or techniques with that keyword.

Thus Quan Jia's final cultivation attributes for this particular cultivation attempt are 6d10 and 4

6d10 = 08 04 02 06 02 08 = 3 successes = 3 xp

Cultivation
Level: Diamond Soul
Stage: Mid
XP: 0/40 -> 3/40
 
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[X] Quan Jia

The oh-so-mysterious bastard child of someone-or-another with super amazing super talent has been done to death. Let's try worthless rich kid.
 
[X] Quan Jia

I think a noble having to grapple with their lack of talent would make for an interesting choice
 
[X] Quan Jia

I'm convinced.

It'll be fun reading about the useless noble for once.
 
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[X] Quan Jia

I'm convinced.

It'll be fun reading about the useless young master for once.
"useless" is relative. Quan Jia has the highest Dexterity of the three, and a higher affinity than the other two combined. Heck, her Talent is only one behind Xing Hua (discounting polearm useage)
OFC, we don't really know what the heck "talent" or "affinity" actually do mechanically.
 
OFC, we don't really know what the heck "talent" or "affinity" actually do mechanically.

wow, that's my bad. I thought I had included that info, but clearly not.

Cultivation Attributes
Affinity
Successful cultivation relies on two factors unique to each cultivator: affinity and talent. Affinity is the ability of a cultivator to draw in the energies of Heaven and Earth. This intake of energy is a function of the size, number, and purity of their meridians, all of which may be increased via rare cultivation resources and techniques.

Mechanically: a cultivator receives a base of 1d10 per each dot of affinity they possess. These d10 (and any d10 resulting from any other source) are rolled against that cultivator's talent to determine the amount of cultivation progress gained (whether in base cultivation, Qi cultivation, opening meridians, or cultivating arts and techniques).
Talent
A cultivator's talent is their ability to retain the energies they take in during cultivation. It is a direct manifestation of the purity of their Diamond Soul (shattered, fissured, cracked, marred, scuffed, pure, luminous, radiant). Few in the history of the Eternal Empire can boast of a luminous core, and a radiant core is considered little more than myth.

Mechanically: a cultivator has a talent score of 1 + Diamond Soul Purity. The sum of affinity dice are rolled against that talent score and a success is recorded if the value is less than or equal to the talent score.
Qi
Qi is an internal energy drawn passively from the environment by a cultivator. It is expended to utilize cultivation arts and activate artifacts. Qi can be increased by direct cultivation of if, as a side effect of rare cultivation resources, as a bonus to unlocking levels of cultivation arts, rare cultivation sites, and certain events.

Mechanically: a cultivator has 1 or more dots of Qi that can be expended in the following manner: Qi cost = Qi - 3 (free usage of art), Qi - 2 (liberal use of art), Qi - 1 (handful of uses) Qi - 0 (singular use). Each dot of qi requires twenty successes.
Meridians
Meridians are channels within the body and soul that conduct energy to and from the cores and Dantian. The process of opening and attuning meridians gradually increases the affinity for cultivation energy that a cultivator has.

Mechanically: a cultivator starts with 1 meridian open (the minimum required to cultivate). The first ten meridians requires one more success than the meridian previous to it. Meridians 11 - 20 require two more successes than the meridian previous to it, 21 - 30 require three more, and so on. Each opened meridian provides a 1 dice bonus to affinity. Multiple meridians can be opened in one cultivation session.

I don't know if this changes anyone's opinion, but I'm fine with letting the vote continue for another day or so. I'm busy with work and whatnot anyway.
 
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