"Just so," Helena nods, with a level of enthusiasm you are content to attribute to what must be a staggering level of narcotics in her system at this point, "Seven Gates, seven tests, and when it is done you'll have proven beyond doubt that you deserve to stand among us, a full Magister of the Bright Order. That's when the real fun begins."

She takes an elegant sip of wine, leaving you to dwell on the thoughts such words have provoked. The lure of becoming a magister is a potent one, but you know your school well enough to spot the unstated counterpoint to that promise. Aqshy is a violent, tempestuous wind, more than capable of wrecking terrible havoc at the slightest lapse of attention. Only those who can truly be trusted with such power will ever receive the blessing of the College.

There are no perpetual apprentices in the Bright Order. You will pass these tests, you will make Magister, or you will die trying.

"The First Gate is simple; it's a test of scholarship," your master continues, waving one hand in lazy dismissal, "you choose a spell or a ritual, one that I am willing to confirm you don't already know, and learn how to cast it. Self study, with full documentation, no teachers or external advice. When you're happy with it, you present your final product to a panel of magisters."

You nod thoughtfully. In other Colleges, you would have to write a paper, perform some manner of arcane research into the more intellectual and theoretical side of magic and its impact on the world, but this is the Bright Order. You are trained as soldiers, not mystics, and your teachings are focused appropriately.

"The Second Gate is where things get serious," Helena says, and her voice is abruptly serious as she looks at you, "I'm not allowed to tell you the details, but that is where we test your purity. Every few years we get a journeyman who goes astray while out in the world."

You swallow. She doesn't need to tell you what happens to those who are foolish enough to put themselves through the crucible of a Magister's trials with any such flaw in their soul for the inquisitors to find.

"Won't be a problem," you say as firmly as you can manage, forcing aside the memory of a witch hunter and nails piercing your flesh, "I'm not… I'm not that stupid."

"For both our sakes, I hope not," your master says primly, taking another sip of her wine and leaving you to wonder if it is merely her reputation on the line should you fail, "Now, as for the Third Gate… that too is fairly straightforward. It is a test of skill - you will perform magic, as wide a range as you know how, before a board of review."

You frown slightly. "This seems… far easier than I would have expected. I understand the idea that I must prove myself capable of the foundations, but surely any journeywoman would be able to pass at least the first three trials?"

"Funny you should mention it," Helena grins at you, a wicked gleam in her eyes, "Because the fourth test is that of Will, and this is where most fail. You will go to the top of the College, before the eyes of your would-be peers, and you will throw yourself on the pyre."

You blink. "You're shitting me."

"My dear, I have never 'shit' anyone in my life," Lady Cerventes says archly, taking yet another mouthful of her wine, and how much has she drunk by now anyway, "and I do not intend to start today. The pyres atop the towers are the closest thing to pure aqshy as anyone has ever managed to create. If your will is strong, you will master the flame and take it into your soul. If not… well, that's what apprentices are for."

You swallow, remembering long days spent at the top of those towers, scrubbing down charred bronze and baked-in ash while an inferno raged mere handspans away. You always assumed the stains were a natural byproduct, but… gods.

"With the Fourth test behind you, you will have proven your skill, your scholarship, your purity and your will," the explanations continue, your master having apparently decided your stunned silence constitutes an invitation to resume, "The Fifth and Sixth are often combined; you will be assigned to an existing army formation for a variable time, your behaviour and choices overseen by a more senior Magister. The goal is to assess your insight and reason, but dear Thyrus often likes to throw in additional challenges here and there."

Only your master would refer to the Patriarch of the Bright Order in such a familiar tone, and… wow ok you did not need that immediate flash of insight into why she might feel so comfortable doing so, moving swiftly onwards…

"And the, uh, seventh test?"

Helena Cerventes, Lady Magister of the Bright Order, your master and the closest thing you have to a parent, gives you the single most ghoulish smile you have ever seen on a human face.

"The Seventh Gate is that of Might," she says, and you can feel the ground opening up beneath you, "and it is arguably the most simple of them all. In front of all our peers, I will do my level best to kill you. All you need to do… is not die."
Would it be possible to learn what kind of final exams the other Colleges demand? Cause, the ones from the Bright College sounds metal.
 
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So Erika sort of wants to sleep with her mom figure, but is doing her best to pretend that she doesn't...

looks at her pasted 'romances' in the quest so far; older than her, dominate, powerful and/or dangerous women....

explains so much.
 
So Erika sort of wants to sleep with her mom figure, but is doing her best to pretend that she doesn't...

looks at her pasted 'romances' in the quest so far; older than her, dominate, powerful and/or dangerous women....

explains so much.
Is there anyone in the empire named Freud?
 
XXXI - Fundamentally Fire
The first thing you realise when you wake is just how badly your head hurts. A dull throbbing ache radiates out from your cranium and all the way down your spine, like an exceptionally small dwarf with a pickaxe is tapping away just behind your eyes. That would explain why you can't see anything other than a series of indistinct blurs, but does nothing for the coarse heat beneath your hands. Is that… sand? Why are you lying on sand?

With a groan you roll over, feeling your stomach flip and start crawling its way up your throat in rebellion. The heat is everywhere, a reassuring constant from which you slowly draw the strength to stand, and from there you have but to look around for a moment to catch the silvery gleam of water in the distance. The mere sight of it brings the harsh burning of your throat into sharp relief, thirst running rusted nails across your tongue, and with all the grace of the living dead you stumble across eternity and fall face-down by the shore. Clumsy, desperate efforts gather glittering moisture in your hands, and with a half-formed prayer you lower your head and drink.

The second the water touches your lips it vanishes, soaking into skin and bone as easily as sand, and the cool progression as it sweeps through your body brings not only relief but clarity as well. The headache disappears, your vision sharpens, and the frantic mess of disparate thoughts clunking around inside your skull are replaced by true awareness at last. Blinking, in shock, you look around.

The skies are clean and blue in a way they never are above the Empire, marked only by the blazing light of a sun at least thrice the size of the one you know. What land you can see is hidden beneath endless miles of sand, great dunes and rolling valleys of burning gold that stretch out to the distant horizon, and only the small oasis at your back serves to break the monotony of the terrain. Here silken banners hang between a dozen foreign trees, great strips of vibrant colour brought together to form an elegant compound around a pool of silvery water, and when you see the tent on the far side the bottom of your stomach seems to fall away.

"Ulric preserve me…"

There is a woman sitting outside the tent, though in truth the term hardly suits. Her hair is the bright white of a fresh-forged blade, her skin so black she seems more an absent void hung motionless in the air, and what you would otherwise call eyes or perhaps tattoos are in truth streams of liquid fire that burn eternal and absent source. Nothing human could look like that, and as that thought sinks in so too does the realisation of just how incredibly, unavoidably fucked you are.

"If I have offered any offense to you, knowing or otherwise, I apologise without reservation," you say, bowing lower than you ever have before, lower than you would bow to the actual Emperor, because this is a Djinn and you are in her sanctuary and you will be polite or you will cease to be anything at all, "my senses deserted me, and I can only beg your forgiveness."

"If you had offered offence," the Djinn replies, her voice as sweet as honey and cloying as the smoke that chokes your lungs, "you would not be here."

Well, that's a sentence that could be taken in far more ways than you are evenly remotely comfortable with, but you know better than to seek clarification. No two texts you have read agree on anything more than the broadest of generalities when it comes to the Djinn, especially not the capriciously malevolent Ifrit, but their propensity to see humour in tormenting those who think themselves cunning is an unsettlingly common theme.

"If I am not here to apologise," you say carefully, deferentially, only just about daring to look at your potential executioner directly, "then might I ask why I am here?"

The Djinn dissolves, abandoning all pretense of humanoid form for a drifting cloud of smoke and embers, and flows across the surface of the water towards you. You force yourself to stand very still, not flinching or backing away even when the cloud becomes a woman once again, roughly your height but floating half a foot above the ground and far, far too close for comfort.

"You are here, little one, because you intrigue me," she says, taking your jaw in one elegant hand and peering into your eyes from barely a foot away. She smells of dry grass and incense, and it is a physical effort not to lean into that hand as it caresses your face.

You may have a problem.

"I am, uh," you stammer, unable to look away, painfully aware of those burning eyes and the suggestion of curves so evidently within arms reach, "fl...flattered, of course, but… um… details would be, ah, appreciated?"

The other hand comes up, trailing a path along your stomach and breasts that causes your mouth to work soundlessly. Does she know what she is doing to you? Do Djinn even have the concepts for this sort of thing? Such questions have never seemed even half as urgent before today as they do now, and it takes you a moment to realise where her hand has stopped - just above the wolf-fang amulet that you wear around your neck.

"You are fundamentally fire, as we are," the Djinn says, her lips moving slowly in ways seemingly unconnected to the words she speaks, "yet you honour the god of winter cold. The contrast marks you, a contradiction in your soul. I would know why."

Ok. Ok, Erika, keep it together. The words run in a circle around your head, but at least the question helps you focus. Your faith is something true and dear to you, and this would not be the first time you have taken solace in focus on the divine. True, the trials assailing you are considerably more pleasant this time around, but… no, focus.

"There isn't much to tell," you say, as calmly as you can manage given the circumstances, "my life was saved by a priest that He sent, and I honour him for it. He has walked by my side ever since."

The Djinn seems to consider this for a moment, and though she tilts her head in thought her hair does not follow suit, remaining rigidly still as though painted across her skin by some celestial brush.

"No," she says at last, "I know obligation, I understand duty, and there is more to you than that. You are not marked as if by a burden, but rather… you enjoy it? The contradiction brings you pleasure?"

"Well," you say, because you are an idiot, "what is life without a little fun?"

Oh gods preserve you, gods protect you, gods keep your idiot mouth shut why did you say that, you truly do have a death wish…

"I see," the Djinn says, releasing you and stepping back. You think that she is smiling, but you have no idea if that is a good thing or a sign of some incipient disaster. "I thank you for the answers. You may depart."

There is a portal in the air, a swirling vortex of orange sparks surrounding a glimpse of home, and taking the implicit dismissal for what it is you swallow your words and step towards it. Only on the threshold, half a step from the College grounds, do you pause and look back.

The Djinn is watching you, one lock of golden white hair twisted playfully in her hand, and the sight of her smile is enough to compel one last question from lips that have yet to learn their lesson.

"Will I see you again?" You ask, feeling like a foolish teenager the second the words leave your lips.

"Perhaps," the Ifrit laughs, the sound of burning wood turned to merriment by your audacity, "if you remain worthy of my interest, little spark."

You nod, and being less than completely foolish, decide not to press your luck any further. Stepping through the portal is the same as passing through any other door, and once you are safely beyond it seals itself behind you with nary a whisper. You hesitate there, in the corridor, then let out a long breath and lean on the nearest wall for support.

You have no idea what just happened, but on balance, you are glad that it did.

Still, with the haze of alcohol cleared from your mind and more immediate distractions no longer quite so pressing, you can at last turn your thoughts back to what your master discussed with you during… well, what you suspect is only a small fraction of the night that you actually recall. You are to be entered into the trials necessary to become a Magister, and that means you need to head to the archives, and once there begin thinking about what your demonstration of knowledge will be.

You won't stand for anything less than the spectacular.

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A vote on what Erika wishes to research as proof of her skill and knowledge will be forthcoming, once I have fully assembled the options. However, while the stereotypical wizard performs their research in serene isolation up a tower in the far wilderness, a student at the College has no such luxury. Friends, allies and rivals will all take an interest whenever you do something interesting, and Erika is no exception.

Listed below are five options for people that Erika knows from her peer group. One of them is her friend, someone that she genuinely enjoys spending time with. Two are her rivals, people that seem duty-bound to antagonise her at every opportunity.

Which is which?

  • Thecia de la Rochelle, the daughter of the Bretonnian Ambassador, and hence one of the few magical children in that land to escape the grasping claim of the Fey. A dignified, idealistic woman with a love for daring-do and chivalrous adventures.
  • Rolanda Hohmann, a blacksmith's daughter with a legendary disdain for anything insufficiently material. Her absolute faith in Sigmar seems to largely take the form of a religious devotion to smashing things with a hammer.
  • Astrid von Behr, born of nobility so high you think her blood might actually be blue. Insufferably vain, garbed in armour of withering disdain for approximately everything, and tragically possessed of the skill necessary to back it all up.
  • Chalina, of no last name and unclear heritage stemming from somewhere in Tilea. Once a humble street rat, until her burgeoning magical talent caught the eye of a wealthy patron, and now a devotee of the arts in all their forms… including, most notably, swordplay.
  • Heidrun, a 'Nordlander' who actually hails from rather further north. An almost perfect example of a fish out of metaphorical water in Altdorf, if said fish carried a battleaxe and was willing to use it at the slightest provocation.

Choose THREE of the above, in the following format:

[ ] [FRIEND] [Choose One]
[ ] [RIVAL] [Choose One]
[ ] [RIVAL] [Choose One]
 
[X] [FRIEND] Chalina
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun
[X] [RIVAL] Rolanda Hohmann


Italian ex street rat sword lady LETS GOOOOO
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Rolanda Hohmann
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun
[X] [RIVAL] Astrid von Behr

Considering how much Sigmar and Ulric's followers tend to clash, feel like it would be fresh ground to have a friendship with a Sigmarite.
Was debating on whether Thecia's fairytale outlook would be irritating enough to Erika to cause a rivalry, but I settled on 'haughty, but skilled noble scion' in Astrid. Predictable, I know.
Heidrun, well... It's not as though anyone who grows up in the Empire's going to be short on reasons to dislike Norscans.
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Thecia de la Rochelle
[X] [RIVAL] Astrid von Behr
[X] [RIVAL] Chalina

Look, I don't make the rules. This is how science works. Of course she needs a !French exchange student as a friend who serves as a foil to Erika's earthy Ulrican temperament, and the two of them can get into mishap-filled courtly adventures where they rescue princesses together.

And with her friend as a classy !Frenchwoman, logically that means that she needs an even snootier aristocrat as a rival (with, of course, the best name for an Empire noblewoman - named, in fact, after a famous grand duchess during the Time of Three Emperors), and then naturally the logical conclusion is that there has to be another foreigner as a foil, except this one is a lower-class hot-blooded Italian who opposes the northern Erika.

Thusly, we have properly assuembled a thematic pairing which reflects the friendship and the rivalry. Properly balanced, as all things should be.
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Thecia de la Rochelle
I'm going to be honest, I'd be totally happy with Chalina as a friend, but the idea of Erika being close friends with someone who can sincerely be described as "dignified" makes me crack up laughing just from the sheer Odd Couple vibe to the idea, so I'm going with Thecia instead.

[X] [RIVAL] Rolanda Hohmann
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun
I want the NORTHERN RIVALS. I really, really want the NORTHERN RIVALS. And I also want SMASHY SMASHY RELIGIOUS FEUD. Can I back these up with snooty logic like ES has given for his choices? No. Am I going to stubbornly insist that MINE IS THE ONE TRUE WAY regardless? Oh my, you bet I am.

(Though if I were going to provide such an argument, I would say that my rivals are foils to Erika herself, rather than her friend. As a proper rival should be.)
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Rolanda Hohmann
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun
[X] [RIVAL] Astrid von Behr
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Rolanda Hohmann
Much like @Aleph I'm voting for the Odd Couple friendship. Unlike Aleph, I'm voting for the Ulrician-Sigmarite friendship.

No strong opinions on rivals.
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Thecia de la Rochelle
[X] [RIVAL] Astrid von Behr
[X] [RIVAL] Chalina
 
[X] [FRIEND] Astrid von Behr

Seems very contradictory, but what is life without a little fun?
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Astrid von Behr

Now, now, I know what you're thinking: Isn't this the absolute least likely candidate for any kind of friendship? Yes, yes it is. I want it and it will be amazing.

[X] [RIVAL] Chalina
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun

You see, my friends, we are the Otome villainess, and poor Chalina is clearly the heroine.
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Astrid von Behr
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Thecia de la Rochelle
I always like unlikely friends dynamic

[X] [RIVAL] Rolanda Hohmann
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Rolanda Hohmann
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun
[X] [RIVAL] Astrid von Behr
 
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[X] [FRIEND] Astrid von Behr
[X] [RIVAL] Chalina
[X] [RIVAL] Heidrun

Making a different pitch:
I think it most hilarious to have Astrid as the vain, snooty friend, setting the stage to where Erika must've done something impressive and/or hilarious to start that relationship.
Rival wise, Chalina interests me for the swordplay focus, highlighting a repeat of the scenario shown where Erika's lack of swordplay is a downside.
And Heidrun for a little bit of Erika being set up as "North, but not too North"
 
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