My reactions to your changes
I changed the plan for dealing with fear aura from being afraid of the aura to Reasonable Meguca Fears, which I think will do a better job at keeping Kyoufu lucid and sociable (it's not clear to me that these things don't understand what kind of fear/anger people are feeling).
The problem with this is that Kyoufu's aura is different from Muhou's right from the start. Kyoufu's fear is overwhelming panic where Muhou's is more of a simmering rage. I'll find and edit this with the relevant quotes in a bit but from the start we were told to expect that Muhou's rage aura would be easier to redirect, but harder to shrug off entirely, an ever-present insidious influence compared to a crushing, foreign weight over our shoulders.
Edit: relevant quote
[] The anger seems less insidious than the fear, and easier to think through. Just focus on your goal; letting yourself feel the anger might make Muhou less antagonistic, as well.
I will note that while Muhou's aura is in many ways easier to work through than Kyoufu's (it promotes targeted anger, rather than unthinking rage) it's proportionally more difficult to disregard entirely.
With that in mind, I want to channel a clear, overwhelming fear, and I want to follow through with that by gtfo-ing asap. I'm not sure we can really channel the nebulous, distant fears of fighting witches or whatever compared to the pants-wetting fear we were subjected to less than an hour ago.
And then staying to make requests... I'm not actually against that in theory, I just wanted to follow through with selling our fear (about her fear) properly. I can add that part in, or maybe add it to the note? Actually yeah, note is better, otherwise it's just in case she wakes, which means it's a chance we don't tell her at all.
This bit is probably a value-add either for Maiko socialing Kyoufu, or for Maiko researching Kyoufu
Not sure if this part is necessary... Maiko has the Grimoire and was there when she talked. I'm sure she noticed most everything about her we did, but I guess it doesn't hurt to share it anyways. I'll add something similar to the brainstorming ideas section of my vote.
In case you're keeping score, that's 2 for 2 suggestions turned into changes to my plan. GJ.
For healing, I generally agree to the types of actions being discussed, but if we have the opportunity to heal visible injuries before going home we should take it.
This is where I break your record. The vote specifically says 'stay as long as you need to'. The backup about sleeping over at Asami's is there for a reason. Obviously, if the healing is easy and quick we can skip all the trouble right from the start, but all those 'what if' backup plans are there in case it isn't.
I guess I could reword my vote to make things more evident since this isn't the first criticism leveled at it, but I'm ultimately changing nothing but the wording here.
Edit: On second thought, go ahead and keep your perfect score, 4/4. The rewording was a significant change and you helped me optimise it. Great ideas all the way.
I think consoling Maiko is important. Like, I half-expect Yui to do something along those lines anyway, but I'm voting it. Maiko is wise and experienced, but she's stoic, and not actually half as put together as she manages to project. And I think the business with Muhou might have poked some wounds.
This however gets my full approval. Added as-is. Hell yes. First thing, top of the list.
I'll post my updated vote [a]here[/s] below. After finding quotes about the auras. Brb.
Edit: Darklight liked your post and not mine? What am I doing wrong?!? *Panics in Kyoufu*
