What we need is to sabotage the Divine Navy's cloth supplies, so that the only uniforms they have left will be full dress red ones.
 
I know the plan is hopeless, but it's where my heart is.

I really enjoyed Petals of Titanium, and I'm looking forward to doing our best to make the best of whatever terrible mess this unfortunate series of events inevitably turns into.

The opening does read as in media res to me as well, but worst comes to worst we're either blessed with momentary foresight and have a chance to avoid the future, we're a doomed protagonist and we can (maybe) save someone more important with the last vote, or we're justifiably paranoid and having stress related dreams before the quest even starts. I imagine it's the last option.

[X] She
[X] Plan: Mercury's Revenge
 
The opening does read as in media res to me as well, but worst comes to worst we're either blessed with momentary foresight and have a chance to avoid the future, we're a doomed protagonist and we can (maybe) save someone more important with the last vote, or we're justifiably paranoid and having stress related dreams before the quest even starts. I imagine it's the last option.

Or the narrative doesn't perfectly follow the temporal perspective of the viewpoint character? We OOC have no reason to believe that we IC have the slightest hint as to what's coming.
 
Or the narrative doesn't perfectly follow the temporal perspective of the viewpoint character? We OOC have no reason to believe that we IC have the slightest hint as to what's coming.

Totally fair. I tend to consider IC and chronological explanations first, but there is, as you've said, no reason to believe that that's necessarily the case.
 
I'll give this another day, although the vote has definitely been slowing down. Gives me time to work on some stuff ahead of the vote being finalised.

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Adhoc vote count started by Gazetteer on Jan 15, 2020 at 12:00 AM, finished with 139 posts and 86 votes.
 
[X] He

[X] Plan I'm in this for your Revolution
-[X] A Reformed pirate
-[X] Practical
-[X] Conniving
 
Let it be male protagonist. It's actually quit rare to find good quest where male gender was chosen for protagonist by questers. Usually it's always she or some weird they, I can't completely empathize with them.
 
Let it be male protagonist. It's actually quit rare to find good quest where male gender was chosen for protagonist by questers. Usually it's always she or some weird they, I can't completely empathize with them.

I don't actually remember where it is, but I vaguely recall that we did statistical research about this once upon a time, and it turned out that where gender was up for a vote, protagonists for quests are mostly male. This being said, the female protagonists remaining in such quests are overwhelmingly queer; questers on SV overwhelmingly like dating other girls. Anyone who discovers that I'm wrong is free to remind me that my memory sucks by smacking me across the head.

One other thing: I would advise you remove the third/last sentence of your post. I want to make it clear that I am not making this request of you in my capacity as assistant administrator, but purely as a member of SV. While I personally understand that you may not completely understand or empathize with why people are located in atypical parts of the gender spectrum, and while I personally don't think you actually mean harm, referring to non-binary people - some of whom are members of SV who may very well be reading this quest - as "weird" is not necessarily very mindful, and I would ask that you reconsider.

Should you be willing to delete that part from your post, I'd similarly be more than happy to delete any reference of it from mine.
 
I don't actually remember where it is, but I vaguely recall that we did statistical research about this once upon a time, and it turned out that where gender was up for a vote, protagonists for quests are mostly male. This being said, the female protagonists remaining in such quests are overwhelmingly queer; questers on SV overwhelmingly like dating other girls. Anyone who discovers that I'm wrong is free to remind me that my memory sucks by smacking me across the head.

One other thing: I would advise you remove the third/last sentence of your post. I want to make it clear that I am not making this request of you in my capacity as assistant administrator, but purely as a member of SV. While I personally understand that you may not completely understand or empathize with why people are located in atypical parts of the gender spectrum, and while I personally don't think you actually mean harm, referring to non-binary people - some of whom are members of SV who may very well be reading this quest - as "weird" is not necessarily very mindful, and I would ask that you reconsider.

Should you be willing to delete that part from your post, I'd similarly be more than happy to delete any reference of it from mine.
I mean no harm to anyone.
But I wouldn't remove my words just because they might be perceived as not politcorrect (is that right term?), it's a pity when people seek negative context anywhere they look. Anyway, thanks for your advice, even so I didn't agree.
 
I mean no harm to anyone.
But I wouldn't remove my words just because they might be perceived as not politcorrect (is that right term?), it's a pity when people seek negative context anywhere they look. Anyway, thanks for your advice, even so I didn't agree.
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I know you didn't literally use those words, but in essence, your comment is doing the same thing.

You're saying that whomever feels slighted by your previous comment is the person in the wrong. That their feelings are invalid, that they're misinterpreting your actions and they're the ones at fault.
 
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I mean no harm to anyone.
But I wouldn't remove my words just because they might be perceived as not politcorrect (is that right term?), it's a pity when people seek negative context anywhere they look. Anyway, thanks for your advice, even so I didn't agree.
It was not a very nice sentiment to read from where I'm standing either and I would like it if you wouldn't refer to non-binary identities as "weird" in a thread I'm running. I think it was understood by everyone that you didn't intend harm, but like... you can still apologise for an accidentally ignorant comment and move on without having intended harm. It comes across as very poor form to dismiss concerns like this as "seeking negative context", instead of considering your own words more carefully. I'm not really interested in continuing this as an argument here, and obviously I can't make you change anything, but I have multiple people who are very important to me who you have called "weird" for how they describe themselves, and I'm glad that Kei said something here.

I'd appreciate it if we could all leave it at that for now, though.
 
[X] She

[X] Plan Heart of gold
-[X] A Reformed pirate
-[X] Compassionate
-[X] Conniving
 
Was just gonna tell you to Google it, then I got curious about what resources are out there and found this. It's short and sweet, hope you enjoy!

That's something, I suppose.
Hm, definitely didn't met anyone like that. How does it even work, is the reason wholly biological or psychological? Though no, don't answer. This is wrong thread for such discussions.
Thanks for information.
 
[X] They

This conversation was a pretty good case study in why we should have more enby protagonists, so I'm switching votes here in the final hours.
 
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