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Named characters are an excellent source of ablative plot armor
Named characters are an excellent source of ablative plot armor
The opening does read as in media res to me as well, but worst comes to worst we're either blessed with momentary foresight and have a chance to avoid the future, we're a doomed protagonist and we can (maybe) save someone more important with the last vote, or we're justifiably paranoid and having stress related dreams before the quest even starts. I imagine it's the last option.
Or the narrative doesn't perfectly follow the temporal perspective of the viewpoint character? We OOC have no reason to believe that we IC have the slightest hint as to what's coming.
Or the narrative doesn't perfectly follow the temporal perspective of the viewpoint character? We OOC have no reason to believe that we IC have the slightest hint as to what's coming.
But how else will we make Enemies in High Places? It is never too soon to officiate your position as The Cursed Squad.
Let it be male protagonist. It's actually quit rare to find good quest where male gender was chosen for protagonist by questers. Usually it's always she or some weird they, I can't completely empathize with them.
I mean no harm to anyone.I don't actually remember where it is, but I vaguely recall that we did statistical research about this once upon a time, and it turned out that where gender was up for a vote, protagonists for quests are mostly male. This being said, the female protagonists remaining in such quests are overwhelmingly queer; questers on SV overwhelmingly like dating other girls. Anyone who discovers that I'm wrong is free to remind me that my memory sucks by smacking me across the head.
One other thing: I would advise you remove the third/last sentence of your post. I want to make it clear that I am not making this request of you in my capacity as assistant administrator, but purely as a member of SV. While I personally understand that you may not completely understand or empathize with why people are located in atypical parts of the gender spectrum, and while I personally don't think you actually mean harm, referring to non-binary people - some of whom are members of SV who may very well be reading this quest - as "weird" is not necessarily very mindful, and I would ask that you reconsider.
Should you be willing to delete that part from your post, I'd similarly be more than happy to delete any reference of it from mine.
I mean no harm to anyone.
But I wouldn't remove my words just because they might be perceived as not politcorrect (is that right term?), it's a pity when people seek negative context anywhere they look. Anyway, thanks for your advice, even so I didn't agree.
Ugh. Psychology, again... No, just no. I had enow of this at my university. 🙁“I’m Sorry You Were Offended” Is Not Really an Apology
Consider these five steps to get good at saying sorry when you aren’t even sure you did anything wrong.www.psychologytoday.com
It was not a very nice sentiment to read from where I'm standing either and I would like it if you wouldn't refer to non-binary identities as "weird" in a thread I'm running. I think it was understood by everyone that you didn't intend harm, but like... you can still apologise for an accidentally ignorant comment and move on without having intended harm. It comes across as very poor form to dismiss concerns like this as "seeking negative context", instead of considering your own words more carefully. I'm not really interested in continuing this as an argument here, and obviously I can't make you change anything, but I have multiple people who are very important to me who you have called "weird" for how they describe themselves, and I'm glad that Kei said something here.I mean no harm to anyone.
But I wouldn't remove my words just because they might be perceived as not politcorrect (is that right term?), it's a pity when people seek negative context anywhere they look. Anyway, thanks for your advice, even so I didn't agree.
I completely agree. Though now I am interested who is non-binary people, never ever met one (well maybe met but didn't knew).I'd appreciate it if we could all leave it at that for now, though.
Was just gonna tell you to Google it, then I got curious about what resources are out there and found this. It's short and sweet, hope you enjoy!I completely agree. Though now I am interested who is non-binary people, never ever met one (well maybe met but didn't knew).
That's something, I suppose.Was just gonna tell you to Google it, then I got curious about what resources are out there and found this. It's short and sweet, hope you enjoy!
Understanding Nonbinary People: How to Be Respectful and Supportive
Nonbinary Definedtransequality.org