Taking another run at this. I wrote an outline this time so I now actually know where the story is going so hopefully it won't all fall apart again.
It'll start a lot like the last draft, but diverge rather quickly. Expect a lot of familiar scenes in new contexts until we clear Act 2
Sergeant Theodora Fusilier, serial number 110552, is one of a hundred thousand machines that share her name, line soldiers in the army of the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Beyond. She was designed to carry a laser musket, protect human space from alien threats, follow the orders of her human officers, and be happy to do so.
But Dora's always been a rather ambitious machine...
Set in the same universe as Maid to Love You. Expect worldbuilding that doesn't try to make sense, laser...