I will edit his backround, but i will have to look some things up in the betrayer novel first.
I've highlighted and fixed the grammar issues your sheet suffers from.
Name: Illidan Stormrage
Species: Demon (well half demon to be precise)
Gender: Male
Personality: Cunning and prideful, likes to take initiative. Albeit he rarely shows it, he is a just and noble at heart.
World of origine: Azeroth
Background: Illidan expected that this was it, he would be stuck inside this titan made prison as Sargeras' jailor until the end of time. Well that changed one day when fate decided that illidan had more to do yet, not in his world though.
That day the mixing of chaotic energies of Sargeras and arcane forces that bound the prison together created a small rift , far too small for the dark titan to escape, but just large enough to suck the demon hunter in.
He was hurled through very fabric of space and time, as he slowly started to lose all track of time. He started shuffling through his own memories, of the days old when he spent time with his brother and Tyrande, of times when he was imprisoned by Maiev and those when he fought the Legion.
Perhaps Illidan's mind would have been lost in the endless void had the rift not spat him out into a new plane of existence, a new unknown planet...
Strength: Greater than that of a Nathrezim, who can easily lift house sized creatures.
Speed: Greater than that of any human.
Durability: Being smacked through stone walls does very little to him.
Flight: Can fly at incredible speeds, reaching all the way to clouds in mere seconds.
Skill: Thousands of years of fighting experience against both the forces of the Burning Legion and the undead Scourge.
Weapons: Warglaives of Azzinoth, which he stole from a Doom Guard after killing him. These trusty weapons can easily cut through solid steel and even incinerate foes on contact. The blades themselves are magical in nature and Illidan has put great care into mastering them.
Magic: With a bit of time and concentration he can raise massive amounts of fel, even creating small mountains. His eyes have been burned out by Sargeras himself, so he can see and sense magic with them now, both arcane and fel.
He also possesses other fel based abilities, such as soul stealing, mind control, fel fire manipulation and creation, astral projection which he can use to travel all the way to other planets as intangible and invisible spectre and portal creation (both for travel and demon summoning). The fel magic he uses can also devour the very life force of its targets, damaging both soul and body alike.
Illidan has shown the abillity to control weather itself (summoning storms) and due to the fact that he was once one of the most skilled arcane users on his planet, he displayed the power to turn his opponents magic against them.
His soul has been bound to the demonic realm of the Twisting Nether, killing him in physical plane means that he can ressurect untill killed in the Nether, but he needs rather long time period (messured in years) to re-manifest.
Other skills: Illidan has extensive knowledge of druidism, but he never puts it to any kind of actual use. Due to spending a long time in the presence of queen Azshara and her highborne he knows a bit about politics too.
Bowser is a lot like Mario in terms of power level. Either he's a Joke Villain at minimum feats or he's way too overpowered for this RP at max feats.
Yeah, even in his own setting Kirby's a bit of a beast, I've actually been considering a character from the same setting but it's hard to get a good handle on just how strong the mini-bosses and normal bosses the Kirby fights actually are.
So how fast and strong is this guy? You gotta remember everyone worth a damn has some variation of superspeed.
While he is technically a sorcerer, he's still mostly a physical fighter. I'd say strength is enough that he can drive his sword into steel plate with only a bit of effort. As for speed, if I use that system in SV vs '06, I'd say .03 Sonics, pushing to .035 when fully buffed.
Hmm, well I had two potential options, but we have too many scientists, so those two are unavailable.
Perhaps, say, expand the personality section more to actually include the personality? Like, two sentences aren't enough.
No chainsaw?Name: IF Prototype LQ-84i "Blade Wolf"
Species: Autonomous UG Ground Combat Robot
Gender: Robot. Prefers masculine pronouns.
World of Origin: Earth, Metal Gear
Personality: Blade Wolf is an exceptionally intelligent prototype LQ-84 "Fenris" UG weapon. His opto-neuro AI is fully sapient, being modeled on the human brain, and he is capable of the full range of human emotions and behaviors, as well as being able to experience physical sensations such as pain - seen when his caretaker, Sunny, steps on his tail, causing him to sit up abruptly as if startled.
Of course, this tells little about Blade Wolf's personality as an individual. Unusually for a robot built expressly for war, he dislikes fighting, especially if it involves killing, and frequently questions the need for violence. It is likely the Blade Wolf chose this trait deliberately, as he is frequently shown to possess compassion and concern for others, especially after Raiden, whom he felt indebted to, allowed his old "Jack the Ripper" personality to return.
This is shown by his preference for reconnaissance roles, rather than direct combat roles. That said, when he must fight, Blade Wolf is a brutally efficient combatant, using his diverse and powerful arsenal to spectacular effect, turning his intellect to brutally efficient elimination of his foes.
Most importantly, Blade Wolf has learned to think for himself. He has established new parameters, and created his own directives. He now makes choices based on his desires, rather than because of obligation or other external reasons.
Backstory:
Unlike most of his home universe, Blade Wolf's story is refreshingly simple. Intended as a next-generation replacement for both human combatants and cyborgs, it was deemed critical that he be able to both communicate and make effective autonomous judgements on how to act. Because of this, instead of traditional programming his instructors utilized an extensive battery of conversations to develop his language comprehension and reasoning capacity, alongside an extensive library of electronic texts. Because of this, he was exposed to various ideals, the stronger ones weeding out the weaker ones, similar to humans. However, although the goal of giving him an intellect had succeeded spectacularly, he lacked brutality, and thus the project was deemed a failure.
Later, Desperado Enforcement LLC would locate and reactivate him, forcing him into confrontation with Jetstream Sam, who defeated him. Sam told Blade Wolf that he had won because Sam fought from his own free will, while Blade Wolf had been forced to fight under threat of AI wipe. This would be the beginning of the great respect he would accrue for Sam, after Desperado forcibly recruited Sam as the two fought together in multiple missions.
Later, he would come in conflict with Raiden, once again under threat of AI wipe if he did not attack and kill Raiden. Raiden pointed out that having an intellect was pointless without freedom to utilize it, and after defeating Blade Wolf, brought his wrecked chassis to Maverick's cyberneticist, who repaired, upgraded, and altered his chassis, removing the AI wipe and remote piloting modules installed by Desperado. Free of coercion, Blade Wolf attached himself to Raiden, providing support by scouting ahead and assisting Raiden in locating his objectives.
Before Raiden and Sam's final duel, he met up with Sam for a final conversation, where Sam informed him that should he fall, the lock on his blade would be disabled in two hours, and that his sword's disposition would be up to Blade Wolf.
Ultimately, in Raiden's confrontation with Armstrong, he would reveal that pondering Raiden and Sam's words had given him the maturity to make his own decisions, to establish his own directives. He sided with Raiden, throwing him Sam's HF Muramasa, ultimately allowing Raiden to triumph over Armstrong.
After Raiden triumphed over Desperado, Blade Wolf would move in with Sunny, becoming her protector, as he had become quite fond of her.
Abilities:
Rapid Motion: Blade Wolf is equipped with powerful motivators in all four legs, and is able to propel himself at outstanding speeds, able to push off hard enough to crater concrete as he launches himself in a direction of his choice. He can leap across a street quickly enough to nearly disappear from human vision but cannot sustain such speeds, only being able to maintain speeds of around eighty miles per hour.
Silent movement: Surprisingly for a large, metal wolf, Blade Wolf is capable of completely silent motion up to very nearly his full sprinting speed. As a courtesy to those around him, he usually emulates motor noise in social situations to avoid sneaking up on people he doesn't mean to.
Hyper Awareness: Blade Wolf has spectacular situational awareness, as befits a reconnaissance specialist. While he can be surprised, simply coming up behind him will not suffice.
Wide-spectrum Vision: Blade Wolf can perceive most of the electromagnetic spectrum. As a practical matter, this means he is not impeded by even total darkness.
Audio Playback: Blade Wolf automatically records all audio he hears, and can play it back at will.
Prehensile Tail: Blade Wolf's tail makes a good substitute for a hand. However, he just has the one, meaning that tasks requiring two hands are sometimes difficult.
Equipment:
HF Blades: Blade Wolf has four selectively-energized HF knives, one attached to the underside of each leg, that can be activated and deactivated at will. He also has HF throwing knife racks attached to each of his rear legs, each of which holds three blades that he can throw with pinpoint accuracy.
Augmented Reality Mode Mask: When active, the mask assists Blade Wolf's central AI in integrating sensor data from external platforms, allowing seamless integration of additional sensor feeds.
Name: Ara Haan
Species: Human
Gender: Female
World of origin: Elrios(Elsword MMORPG)
Personality: A warm and kind person that will make you relax just by being near her. She will try to help anyone from normal people to friends.
Background: Born in the World of Elrios, she comes from a family of martial arts. Ara specialises in the spear. Her brother Aren, now known as Ran, who turned demon attacked her with demons and came close to death. At that moment she found the heirloom—an old hairpin, from which a spirit's powers emerged to help her drive the demons away. It was the spirit of the nine-tailed fox named Eun. The spirit agrees to keep lending Ara her abilities in order to find Aren, and in return, Ara promises to help Eun find El that is strong enough to set her free from the heirloom. Then they go on a journey and eventually find Elsword and the Elgang. As she continued her journey with the Elgang to find Aren and the El, she decides that it would be a great idea to help good villagers. She decides to do something more meaningful on her trip. So, she decides to find justice and fix what is wrong. After fighting the army of Demons powered by the Dark El, Ara has obtained large amounts of experience and came to a realization. She learns that even the most kind-hearted people can turn evil, and will eventually depend on evil forces. Believing that her brother had been inflicted by the same curse and temptation, Ara set forth looking for her brother and sought for the path of justice by punishing the demons. Ara began to endlessly train to reach the ultimate level of spearmanship.
Abilities:
Ultimate Spearmanship: Gained by training endlessly and from experiences.
Secret Dragon Arts: By doing certain movements and attacks she performs Secret dragon stance. She stabs her spear forward the combos into a palm technique to do harsh damage, then she swings her spear in a large circular slash, then she jumps up and slams the ground cratering it sending very sharp rocks everywhere.
Secret Tiger arts: By doing certain movements and attacks she performs Secret Tiger stance.
First, she charges into the enemy and slams into them.
Secondly, She charges forwards and slashes twice
Thirdly, She swings her spear then kicks.
Fourthly, She plunges her spear into the ground rushing forwards pushing enemies back while hurting them.
Lastly, A powerful slash happens and a Tiger appears around her.
Power of Eun:
When Active she gains a white glow, her hair white, eyes turn red, red whisker markings and she gains nine large tails.
When active she gets an increase in speed and attack speed making it look like her swings blurred.
Her attacks will gain an Increase in strength around 50% more powerful.
It lasts 40 minutes before recharge. Needs recharging for 2 hours.
Equipment:
Lotus Spear: A 7 and a half foot-long Spear that is a gold and white with a Lotus symbol on its blade. It is very Tough capable of surviving anything she uses it for.
Clothes
As I haven't played Elsword and lack contect on it, I really can't judge it. Buuuuuuuut it feels rather sparse and non-descriptive on the abilities.
