SayakaQuest: Trauma is a Thing

Carrnage said:
MMVP? Tower of monsters?
Old respective fanfics of ours. Tower of Monsters is a Halo/Mass Effect cross with the Arbiter and one of the Halo 3 Elites switching places with the Master Chief on the ship so they went with Cortana in the crossover.

It was bad and the directions I was planning for it were worse (although it only got 4 chapters into the rewite- the original was even more awful), although it is amusing as I started it before the existence of the Keymind was revealed in the Bear novels, which...was basically what was going to happen once the Flood got their hands on biotics...
 
thagguy said:
Old respective fanfics of ours.
The less said about them, the better.

...

Well, fuck it. MMVP, or "Magica Madoka Veneficus Puella" or, as I like to call it, "Fucking Unpronounceable", is a story that was more or less based around the idea of an alternate 'verse where an incubator went rogue and things went in the opposite direction.

TL;DR the characterizations were bad, the incubator OC was a fucking self-insert, the story was stupid, the events in the story were stupid, and a whole lot of things were set up but never really touched upon. Ever.

It was a fucking trainwreck.
 
Hey, at least you guys can write without thinking everything you put down on paper is complete trash. I usually can't even write a snippet.
 
TheOneMoiderah said:
The less said about them, the better.
Still can't fucking believe that my shitty fic got a trope page. Silly Invistext I will find you, even after Moid edited it out :p XD
Still we don't want Moid remembering past works. We are here to make NEW GLORIOUS things.
 
[x] Wait for Kyoko to finish eating. Then continue experiments.
[x] Lie down and watch the stars. Just relax for a moment.
- Let's try some of this musical stuff

Because Bards are cool damn it!
 
Magical Experimentation [121]
[x] Wait for Kyoko to finish eating. Then continue experiments.

"...Heh." You grip your hands. "Man, I love this!"

"I'd hope so." She smirks. "They're pretty damn cool." She eats something else. "So...now whatcha gonna do?"

[x] Lie down and watch the stars. Just relax for a moment.

You lie down and look at the sky. "...This."

"How productive." She says, before she chows down on something else.

"...hm." You grin as you look up. "It's pretty out here."

"We're not far enough to escape all of Mitakihara's pollution." She says. "But we can still appreciate the night sky." She smiles.

"...I'm glad we're friends." You say.

"Hm?" She looks at you.

"I said that I'm glad we're friends." You look at her. "You're a good person."

She smiles thinly at that. "...heh."

"What, don't you think so? I mean, you helped stop some witches! You've been saving lives."

"I...yeah." She says.

You frown. "What, you don't think so?" You tap her foot. "Come on! You're a good person!"

She waves a hand dismissively. "Yeah, yeah. Whatever you say, ya white knight, you." She chuckles a little before she frowns and puts her utensils down.

[OPTION SELECT]
[] Talk to her.

[] MORE EXPERIMENTATION.
-[] ARMOR.
-[] WEAPONS.
-[] TECHNIQUES.

[] Look around.
 
[X] MORE EXPERIMENTATION.
-[x] THE POWER OF ROCK (/classical/jazz/synthpop/dubstep/avant-garde post-hardcore/etc). Use every genre you know as fuel for spells. Just to see what happens.

Thread title: SayakaQuest II: Trauma Queen.
 
[x] Talk to her.
[x] Look around.
[x] So what's in this building?

Heeeeyyyyy guuuuuyyyyssss where are we?

GEE I WONDER IF KYOKO WANTS TO TELL US SOMETHING
 
thagguy said:
[x] Look around.
[x] So what's in this building?

Heeeeyyyyy guuuuuyyyyssss where are we?

GEE I WONDER IF KYOKO WANTS TO TELL US SOMETHING
>_> Ruined/abandoned building near a forest. I haven't seen the anime, was Kyoko's dad's church in the woods? Might want to un-invisitext that there thagguy, might get more people to vote.
[x] Talk to her.
[x] Look around.
[x] So what's in this building?
 
[x] MORE EXPERIMENTATION
-[x] MUSIC
-[x] I WANT HASTE.
-[x] I WANT HEAL.
-[x] I WANNA CAST SLEEP.
-[x] GIMME COUNTERSONG.
-[X] ENHANCE MY SWORDSKILLS UNTIL I AM THE GREATEST SWORDSMAN IN THE WORLD WITH THE POWER OF MUSIC!
-[x] When the fervor of possibility has died down...what's in this building?
...I think I might need to post a song or two here.
 
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