- Location
- HELL
- Pronouns
- They/It
No, it's a drawing.
No, it's a drawing.
It's too long and tries to get faaaaar too much done for a single vote, has several poor ideas in it on top of that (we don't need to discuss wishes with these girls, I think it's telling us to get drunk at one point?, etc), it's unfocused (jumps between far too many different actions and topics, due to its length), and lacks much in the way of what specifically to say/do on several important topics (how to fix Tomo/Akane's friendship, for example).I'd vote for it for the sheer length if I thought it would be practical. My will is weak.
However, I don't think Moid would want to write all that. So much. Moid seems to like short update, and that's kind of longlonglonglong. So, yeah.
Can other people say why they don't like it as well as posting the reaction image? Constructive criticism!
EDIT: And two people just posted reaction images while I was typing this.
Okay, shutting up now.
Huh. I didn't actually read it. Reading now.It's too long and tries to get faaaaar too much done for a single vote, has several poor ideas in it on top of that (we don't need to discuss wishes with these girls, I think it's telling us to get drunk at one point?, etc), it's unfocused (jumps between far too many different actions and topics, due to its length), and lacks much in the way of what specifically to say/do on several important topics (how to fix Tomo/Akane's friendship, for example).