Thank you :) Hercules as commander of the relief army who intervened in the last moments of the Battle of Hogwarts was something I had in mind for a pretty long time now so I am glad to finally get it in writing and getting feedback on it :)

I did not put it in writing because it would probably mean he survived to see Riddle defeated and I wanted your input before doing that but I could definitely Lucian among the peoples Hercules kept for his personnal command during the Battle of Hogwarts. Either that or maybe even he could have gotten his own subdivision of the army to lead ;)
Lucian at this point probably would have been yo eager to accept a command. Also considering Lucian's predilection to having a large family. Very likely that several of his Grandkids are at the battle alongside some of his children. Now as far as survival. I don't see Lucian surviving the battle. Most likely succumbing to wounds suffered during the fighting. Then dying in the direct aftermath of the battle.
 
Lucian at this point probably would have been yo eager to accept a command. Also considering Lucian's predilection to having a large family. Very likely that several of his Grandkids are at the battle alongside some of his children. Now as far as survival. I don't see Lucian surviving the battle. Most likely succumbing to wounds suffered during the fighting. Then dying in the direct aftermath of the battle.
Make sense, a fitting end for an Auror even if a sad one.

I might be a bit too sentimental about it but I imagine him as at least living long enough to hear that the war was won and that he and so many others hadn't died in vain.

I tought of Hercules dying at Hogwarts too but at the end I decided against it since IMO its more interesting to see how somebody who was in so many ways a product of the old order and yet who played a significant part in bringing it down for good would live in the new Wizarding Britain.

In a way he will be both an anachronism in it as well as one of its founding figures.
 
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Make sense, a fitting end for an Auror even if a sad one.

I might be a bit too sentimental about it but I imagine him as at least living long enough to hear that the war was won and that he and so many others hadn't died in vain.

I tought of Hercules dying at Hogwarts too but at the end I decided against it since IMO its more interesting to see how somebody who was in so many ways a product of the old order and yet who played a significant part in bringing it down for good would live in the new Wizarding Britain.

In a way he will be both an anachronism in it as well as one of its founding figures.
Lucian would have smiled at the news of Riddle's final death and probably made a very crass joke at the end. His funeral would almost certainty he fairly large with him being buried alongside his long dead brothers, mother, and father
 
A Short Biography of Hercules Greengrass: Part VI, Old Age and New Begginings
A Short Biography of Hercules Greengrass: Part VI, Old Age and New Begginings
The Biographical Dictionary of Wizarding Britain, Thirty Seventh Edition, 2058

As the sheer scope of the reforms the Shackelbolth Ministry hoped to enact became apparent many segments of Wizarding Britain's society began to panic. To be sure, in the political climate of the immediate aftermath of Riddle's fall some reforms were desired by a quite significant majority of Wizarding Britain and even those who did not want them accepted them as inevitable. The end of Laws explicitly favouring Pureblood, for example, was deemed a mere question of time and all agreed that Azkaban could not be again confided to the Dementors following their treason. Talks of the end of House-Elves servitude and of hiding of the Werewolves registry to the public, providing that they willingly go to secure locations during their transformations, made many more hesitant, however. The crimes of Fenrir Greyback and its followers, in particular, had ensured that fear of Werewolves were as high as ever. Moreover, they were rumours of further rights to be granted to all sentient magical beings, as well as Squibs, and of replacing lifetime appointment and cooptation for members of Wizengamot with fixed terms and election. Some, with hushed voices, even spoke of the Goblins and Centaurs soon is allowed to wield wands, should they be allowed to teach their own magical arts in metal working and divination to wizards and witches in exchange.

For those who were appalled by such prospects, and they were many, the situation was rather dismal. Former leader of the Order of the Phoenix and celebrated war hero Minister Shacklebolth had seen his star rise hard and fast and was immensely popular. While opinions on the wizard in question varied among the heteroclite group of which made Shacklebolt opposition it was nonetheless accepted by all of them that there was only one political figure alive in Wizarding Britain who had the clout and the prestige the caretaker Minister from being elected for a full term. Thus an unofficial delegation made its way to Foxridge to try to convince Hercules to resign as Head of the Department of Magical Law Enforcement and run against Shacklebolth. In yesteryears Hercules might have been tempted but following the end of the war a desire to retire from political life had begun to manifest once more in Hercules. In 1992 he had willingly contemplated such a prospect and only events had managed to suck him into the maelstrom once more. Now peace and apparent stability had returned, however, and no occasion seemed better to retire on his own term, safe for attending meetings of the Wizengamot and of the Hogwarts Board of Governor. If such feelings had not been sufficient to dissuade him it could have not escaped Hercules that, even if those attempting to entice him that, even if those who had been sent to him were selected to exclude any wizards and witches under such suspicions, he could only hope to beat Kingsley by depending on the support of some who had wished for Riddle's victory. As such an idea was utterly repugnant to him he politely declined their offer, stating that ''We must all accept the changes who, our minds know it very well, necessary, regardless of whatever weaknesses our hearts may reveal when it come to them!''. By all accounts such words summed up Hercules' own feelings rather well but the former Sphinx would have nonetheless preferred that someone else help these changes and thus a letter of resignation was quickly drafted.

Upon receiving it Minister Shacklebolth begged him to reconsider, however. As a Wizard widely known for politics who, even at such a late date and often in the past, not necessarily aligned with those of the new Minister for Magic but who nonetheless possessed unimpeachable credential as an enemy of Pureblood Supremacy Hercules was needed to preside over the trials of the former Death Eaters and in the purges of guilty Ministry employees to follow. Few in Wizarding Britain could, Shacklebolth argued, be both above any suspicions of any leniency toward the accuses and shield the new administration from any accusation of simply punishing its opponents under legal pretences. Moreover, the last few months had given the Minister for Magic a rather high opinion of Hercules' ability to manage the Wizengamot, as the laws and actions of the last year were unmade, and the changes Shacklebolth wanted made with all urgency, all passed through the legislative body in the few days following the Battle of Hogwarts. Succumbing to the pleas of the Minister Hercules agreed to stay on as Head of the Department of Law Enforcement for Shacklebolth's first term.

It was in this capacity that Hercules met a war hero of equal, or even greater, stature then himself: the future Minister for Magic Hermione Weasley (the Granger). In spite of vastly different upbringings and significantly different political beliefs a quick intergenerational friendship quickly blossomed, nourished by their shared intellectualism. The all of the Ministry soon resonated with their many good natured debates on Magical History. Soon Hercules was often found saying that the two greatest tragedies Ravenclaw suffered in the 20th​ century were that Sullivan Travers was shorted there while Hermione Granger hadn't been. In retort she was fond of joking, tough only half so, that the two greatest tragedies Gryffindor suffered in the 20th​ century was that Hercules hadn't been shorted there while his grandnephew Cormac had been. As he had never been too fond of the boy the joke always drew a guilty laugh. While such banter and academic debates had formed the basis of their friendship it soon grew more profound. For the younger witch, who even in adulthood was always eager to discover more about the world she was a part of, the older wizard represented something of magical society she had only known true books, for all those coming from it that she had met before had either rejected it or had hated her for her origins. The very fact that so many of his fellows among the Wizarding aristocracy who had existed had turned to Pureblood Supremacy made his role in fighting all the more praiseworthy in her eyes, and the sympathy for the terrible price he had paid for his victories all the greater. Hercules, for his part, would often describe her as ''Colville as she could have been, as she should have been, had she had the friends she needed, had Ria and I been humble enough to gain her trust and be that for her!''. As Hercules found himself invited to the Burrow from time to time he also became quite well accounted with the other members of the wider Weasley clan, something that would very much help him in his last historiographical endeavours.

These were still years in the future, however, and as the year 1999 was beginning most of those who had gone into hiding after Riddle's had been captured or had dying resisting capture. The trials that had loomed so large in the political landscape of Wizarding Britain since the immediate aftermath of the battle were, at last, to take place. For most the courtroom of the Ministry was judged more than enough but many feared that the most powerful among those awaiting trial might have too many contacts remaining in the ministry and may use the occasion to escape. Thus another location was needed, more isolated from the rest of Wizarding Britain and easier to secure. Once again, it was the Boy who lived who provided a solution by proposing Grimmaud Place. The old house of the Black family not only met both criteria but, as she was more strongly associated with Pureblood Supremacy than perhaps any other place in the country, there was symbolic potency in holding the trial there.

The Grimmaud Trial, as it went down in history, opened under great tension. Save for the members of the Wizengamot, the accuses (a mixt of prominent Death Eaters and Ministry Official having played a key role in the persecutions of Riddle's enemies), the Aurors guarding the site and the witnesses only a handful of journalists were allowed to attend the court's sessions. Most of those on trials followed the lead of Corban Yaxley, senior among the surviving Death Eaters and proudly clung to their dead Dark Lord, ranting against the Mudbloods, Half-Breeds and Blood Traitors (to use their words) who judged them and predicted that Pureblood Supremacy would eventually triumph in Wizarding Britain. Most of them were sent to Azkaban, never to leave while still breathing. Similar, and yet different, from them was Fenrir Greyback, who freely admitted that he hated most of those with whom he had fought but that Werewolves like him would gladly collaborate with them to prepare their vengeance over the Wizards and Witches who had oppressed them. Disparaging the memory of Remus Lupin, and all other werewolves having died for the Light, he chillingly predicted that the triumph of his kind would come in due time and that all those in attendance, their families and everyone they knew would in time be turned or dead. Such words proved a formidable obstacle in Shacklebolth's pursuit of legislations protecting werewolves and it is a great testament to his political talent that he succeeded nonetheless.

Not all displayed such defiant attitudes, however. For some, like Minister Thicknesse, a defense of Imperius was advanced and, unlike so many after Riddle's first downfall, it soon became evident that they weren't faking it. Quickly acquitted, they were sent to St. Mungo. Most have never left it. Other ministry officials, such as the infamous Dolores Umbridge, attempted to plead that they simply followed the directives of the Ministry of the time, and that they therefore were not responsible for their actions. The argument did not fly high and long stints in prison awaited them. At the end of the day it was that rare accuses who expressed remorse that was the objects of the fiercest debates among the members of the Wizengamot. Most notable among this latter group were Lucius Malfoy and Sullivan Travers. Abraxas' son failed to convince most, as witnesses were brought to the stand and, as comments made by Malfoy on some of Shacklebolth's reforms were repeated, it soon became evident that any remorse he may express was rather insincere. His attempts to claim that he only collaborated because of threats on his family were only slightly more successful for, while the Wizengamot recognised that such treats did exist during the Second British Wizarding War, there was no sign of them during the first. In definitive it was Malfoy's health that saved him from Azkaban, for several healers spoke of the damages caused by the tortures he had suffered at Riddle's hands during some of the latter's moments of anger. As the Ministry did not wish to condemn him to what would have effectively been a death sentence he was instead condemned to a lifetime of house arrest.

Famously, Travers' defense proved far more impressive. His claims of having never been a Purist but having merely allied with them in a misguided attempt at promoting traditionalist policies were first met by derisions by many but even Hercules had to admit that there was a ring of truth to them. A stream of witnesses was called upon to give testimonies supporting such a version of events. Even more shocking was his revelation that he had begun to feel enough remorse to take upon himself to anonymously pass information to his hated old rival. Many could not restrain their gasps when he revealed, documents in hand, that he had been the Wizard known as ''The Farsighted'', who had anonymously warned the Council of Riddle's project to start systematically give the Dementor's Kiss to prisoners and who had managed to pass to Hercules the crucial information who had allowed the Battle of Hogwarts to be as decisive as it was. While he had nonetheless willingly acted as the Death Eaters' propagandist for long years and helped them bolster their ranks, and was condemned to several years in Azkaban as a result, he nonetheless saw his sentence commuted to a very heavy fine by Minister Shacklebolth. Sullivan Travers would die a few months after his old rival, having spent much of his later life writing of the Death Eaters and of their supporters from an internal perspectives and serving as a precious source to other writers, Hercules among them. To this day opinions remain divided as to whether the pardon Hercules had argued for was a proof that Old Lord Ravenclaw still did, in spite of everything, try to protect a wizard of his class or if it was an admirable show of heavy handedness toward a wizard he has so long hated.

The last years of Greengrass' political career also saw him play a key role in the creation of the Commission of Honor. This organ of the Ministry designed to answer the unique challenges coming in the aftermath of the Second British Wizarding War, challenges that the Wizengamot could not handle alone, was tasked with trying those wizards or witches whose actions during the Year of Darkness were deemed not too benign for Azkaban but nonetheless too serious to be forgotten. Unlike the Wizengamot it could not condemn wizards and witches to time in Azkaban but it could fine them or pronounce them ''Guilty of Dishonorable Conduct'', a sentence which would bar them from employment inside the Ministry, in the press, or at Hogwarts, either for a certain number of years or for life. While the Commission crippled the power of Purism in Britain even more then it had already been it had also made Hercules the, in the word of a later magical historian; ''once almost stereotypical scion of the Wizarding Aristocracy who signed the death warrant of his class' power in Britain.'' Significantly for the Greengrass' future family life, Narcissa and Draco Malfoy were both cleared by the commission. The lack of proof of direct involvement by the older witch as well as her protection of the Boy who Lived proved enough to save her while her son's young age, threats he received and refusal to identify the Golden Trio at Malfoy Manor did the same for him.

While he also helped push many of Shacklebolth's reforms through the Wizengamot they remained the Minister's rather than Hercules' and thus we see no need to speak of them in any further details. The last of such changes, and the most momentous of the reforms of the aftermath of the Battle of Hogwarts, was the end of cooptation and lifetime appointments to the Wizengamot. Resigning from all his posts soon afterwards, Hercules last political act was to help his grandson Cleisthenes to be elected to his old seat. Continuing a proud family tradition Cleisthenes would prove an influential figure during the last decades, sometimes ally and sometimes honest opponents of Shacklebolth and Weasley, but this is another story.

Upon retirement Hercules turned once more toward his first love: history. It was in these early years of the 21st​ century that he wrote what would go down in memories as his most important work: The Long Fall of Purism: Wizarding Britain in the 20th​ century. Drawing on documents usually jealously guarded by the ministry, personal letter, diaries and archives as well as interviews with wizards and witches of six generations the five-volume work followed Wizarding through its ''Second Time of Troubles'' (after the late 17th​ and early 18th​ century), from the first actions of Grindelwald to the Battle of Hogwarts. Hercules' analysis of how events in the Muggle World affected Wizarding Britain was deemed particularly praiseworthy by latter day's magical historians. Unlike many others he did not limit its observations to the mere demographic explosion of the Muggle world but also explored the effects of the improvement of economic and educational standards, as well as the influence of political liberalism, in Muggle Britain. According to his thesis ensured that Muggleborns of the 20th​ century proved far less willing to accept a status of inferiority compared to those previous generations and it was those peaceful demands, more than mere numbers, who lead the proponents of Pureblood Supremacy to turn to violence. The five volumes also proved noteworthy for Hercules' willingness to depict himself in a critical light, to the point that, far from having to shed further light on unflattering decisions and actions, many subsequent historians would in fact defend him against some of his own criticisms.

The same period also saw the ranks of the Greengrass clan widen, for several members of the younger generation began to form families of their own. Several of their choices of partners no doubt pleased him. On new years' eve, 1999 Cleisthenes wedded Arbela Cuffe, granddaughter of the editor and old friend of the Greengrass family Barnabas. A few months later his younger brother Thrasybulus followed by tying his destinies with Calla Toliphant, his colleague at the Department of Mysteries and one of those Hercules had handpicked to follow him into battle at Hogwarts. A few years latter Ernie also tied the knot with an old friend from his Hogwarts' days, as well as Hercules' ward, Susan Bones. The old patrician that, in spite of everything, part of Hercules still was probably found such a union comfortingly familiar. While most believe he was not as close with the husbands Daphne, Atalante and Margaret picked for themselves he nonetheless appeared to have liked them well enough.

Things proved more complicated when it came to Astoria's choice of partner. By the beginning of the 21st​ century the Malfoys had decidedly replaced the Travers as THE family whose very name would lead Hercules to grumble when mentioned. In the mind of the old Ravenclaw Draco Malfoy's grandfather remained the assassin of Hercules' old brother in arm and, through his earlier reaction to Leach's election, the wizard who had done more than anyone save Riddle himself to set the stage for latter tragedies. Lucius Malfoy, for his part, was deemed to not only be a despicable Death Eaters and coward but also the horrible influence who had kept Hector in the claws of Pureblood Supremacy for so many years. If one also take into account the fact that Hercules was well aware of Malfoy's own role as one of the main proponent of Pureblood Supremacy at Hogwarts during his years there it is hardly unsurprising that, upon being informed of Astoria's choice, the elderly wizard had a bout of anger unequalled since he had heard of Umbridge's torture on students.

It took several months for not only Astoria, Hector and Daphne but also, surprisingly enough, Ernie MacMillan to wear Hercules down sufficiently for him to believe that perhaps, just perhaps, there was some good in the boy and to agree to meet him. That particular conversation did not begin well as, immediately upon Malfoy's entry in the room, Hercules immediately began to read Draco's Ministry and, upon concluding, stated that its content might not have been enough to make him legally guilty but that it was more than enough to make him morally so. As Astoria protested that Draco was just a child at the time Hercules coldly replied that he had also been called a child just before he was about to head to Europe. Surprisingly enough it was Malfoy himself who managed to diffuse the tension by acknowledging its own flaws and past actions. He continued by saying that he admired Hercules precisely because his own attitude had been so different despite the similarities in their background. He continued by stating that he would love to have been a better man and, with little more than a whisper since he still loved him in spite of everything, to have had a better father. As he also added that he was now trying to turn a new leaf and that he intended to raise any child he might to reject Purism it proved to be enough to get Hercules to, at the very least, tolerate his presence among the family.

Astoria and Draco were wed on March 31, 2002 at Foxridge. While Malfoy had, at first, tried to argue in favour of Malfoy Manor so as to allow his father to intend several of Astoria's guests had simply refused to set foot there. While Astoria and Draco Malfoy would visit the latter's family regularly she would prove to be a rather disappointing daughter in-law for the Malfoys, who were hoping for the daughter of Hector Greengrass (as the estrangement between him and Lucius had ensured the former Death Eater didn't know how much the opinions of his former friend had changed) but got the granddaughter of Hercules instead. Discretely supported by her husband, Astoria would fight tooth and nail to ensure that her only son Scorpius would be, for all intent and purposes, raised as a Greengrass and that his grandparents would not pass an ounce of their own toxic belief to him. More subtlety she also encouraged her husband in his own growing distanciation from the prejudices of his youth. Hercules, for his part, eventually made his peace with Astoria's choice, at least to a certain extent, softening toward his grandson in law and even maintaining an almost cordial relationship with Narcissa Malfoy. Until his death, however, he refused to even enter Malfoy Manor, having no desire to converse with Lucius Malfoy.

Hercules' last years also saw him discover at last a world that he had only truly glimpsed at before. Having had his curiosity peaked by the tales given by several members of the Greengrass clan coming from that world he rose up one day and resolve to get some Muggle clothes and sterlings and arrange for an escape on the other side. At the beginning he was always accompanied by others, who knew it better then him, but eventually he began to go alone. Internet, in particular, proved to be a revelation, as he used it to plunge into Muggle history with the same gusto then he had studied magical history. So impressed was he by the advance of Muggle technology that he sometimes found himself saying that the Muggles did, after all, turn out to have a magic of their own… Moreover, Hercules also came to develop for the Muggle game of football a taste he never had for Quidditch. A well filled vault at Gringotts also having a magic of its own he arranged for experts in Muggle artifacts to adapt a Muggle television so as to allow it to run on magic, so that he could more follow more easily his beloved Arsenal.

Unfortunately, as the new generations were begging to build a life for themselves the time of the old ones was beginning to run short. His mother had died in 2010 and, ten years later, Hercules' old ally Barnabas Cuffe died from a sudden bout of Dragonpox, before being followed two years later by Greengrass old rival, Sullivan Travers and by Chryseus, Hercules' beloved house-elf. As the years went by Hercules' own health had begun to decline steadily, a product of his old injuries, of the treatment he needed to follow for life to be bearable despite them and, perhaps, a consequence of what inbreeding his ancestors did engage in. As 2024 was unfolding he could be found joking through gritted teeth that he needed to make it at least to a hundred if he was not to dishonor his lineage. At the end he did manage to do so, by three days.

Surrounded by his family and old friends in his final moments he bided them to not be sad because he was going to reunite meet again all those he had loved who had left before him and that they would all be reunited in time. In his last hours he called Rubeus Hagrid to his bedside, begging for his forgiveness for not having prevented his expulsion. As the half-giants, with tears in his eyes, retorted that he didn't need to apologise, that he was just a student like him and that apart from Dumbledore he was the only one with power who had defended him Hercules muttered that ''Still, I should have done more!'' It was his last words.

His funeral was well attended, with prominent wizards and witches of both his youth and elder years in attendance. Many spoke but it was Minister Weasley' words who were reminded the most: ''for me fighting was the only choice but wizards like Hercules Greengrass had another. He could have gone to Riddle or Grindelwald, they would have welcomed him with open arms, but instead he stood for what was right! He stood for what was right and he paid a terrible price of it! Without the choices and sacrifices of wizards and witches like him we might not be here today, alive and free!''. As the time for speeches had passed Hector and Cleisthenes Greengrass step forward toward the pyre and, as was the long-held tradition in Foxridge, stated that ''from Magic he had come and to Magic he return!'' before lighting it up.

Before his death Hercules had stated that he wanted nothing more than to be among the status of his ancestors but Cleisthenes simply could not accept to do nothing more. His own status, alongside Astoria's were put at the center of the Foxridge's crypt, next to Ulysses ''the Great'' Greengrass and his two beloveds. While the right wall of the crypt would remain covered by tapestries telling the tale of the 18th​ century wizard's fight against Loxias the left wall would soon be decorated as well, this time by tapestries of Hercules and Astoria's deeds in three wars and against two Dark Lords. Next to the plint of their statues the following was inscribed:

Few Ravens have been more deserving of their place in heaven.

For they understood that those who are wise enough to know what is right have a duty to fight.


In time the page would be turn and normal life would resume at Foxridge but Hercules would always be remembered, not as a paragon of virtue or as an invincible force for good but as a Wizard who, for all his flaws and mistakes, nonetheless earned the name of hero. For my part, I will also remember him as has well a grandfather any witch might have asked for.

Astoria Malfoy (Née Greengrass).
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For…. minutes… hours…. days… Hercules had followed the bright light before he, at last, began to clearly see his surroundings once more. Everywhere his eyes darted he could see familiar sights. In fact, he might have believed himself still at Foxridge were it not for the fact that what had once been made of solid material was not ethereal, made of clouds and lights. For long moments he walked around before he could feel a hand on his shoulder and a soft, familiar, ''Herc'' in a voice he had all too often yearned to hear in the last decades. He pivoted and an instant latter Astoria and he were kissing once more.


As they separated he saw that she wasn't as he last seen hear, on that blood day in Northern England, but as she had been in their days of happiness in the 1950s, a young mother radiant in beauty and with eyes shining with intelligence. Fears began to grip his heart and the face of his beloved adopted a puzzled expression. ''What is wrong Herc?'' She asked. ''You are so beautiful Ria! How long are you going to stay with an old, decrepit wizard like me?'' he asked with desperation. She answered with a clear and happy laugh before telling him to ''Look Hercules! Look!'' ''I don't understand…'' he began to answer in turn before she kissed him again, more deeply, more hungrily. ''Look!'' she asked him again, this time more intently, and this time a mirror, or something that could be defined by that word, appeared in front of him and he saw that he now also looked like he once had, when he was busy founding a family and indulging in his happy illusions.

''They are waiting for you!'' she continued. ''the two Ulys, your parents, Aneas, Chryseus, Nobby, Niké, Perseus, Crecy, Lucian, Colville, Bagshot, Dumbledore, Beery, Cali, Barty and so many others! But they are still going to have to wait a bit I am afraid! Your wife will keep you all to herself for sometimes!'' With a mischievous, yet good natured, smile she twirled on herself and, suddenly, she was wearing one of her most beautiful robes and music began to play, the same song during which they had first kissed during a ball at Foxridge, so many years ago. ''Will you dance with me my Lord Greengrass?'' she asked, knowing the answer very well. ''Well yes, my Lady, I would!'' he answered, finding himself suddenly wearing one of its own favourite outfits before joining her on the celestial dance floor. And for the rest of eternity they knew only happiness.
 
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And that is that, I might come back to some of my ideas in the future or I might not but at least it brings me some closure as to a setting and a character I gave allot of toughts too, which is its own reward. :)

Thanks allot @Yanez and @ByzantineCaesar for all the virtual chats we had and for your parts in getting the setting Hercules evolved in up and running. Its a pity we didn't get the RP to go as far as I (and I assume you as well) would have liked it to go but I did enjoy the worldbuilding for its sake. Also thanks @CommanderBlade for your continued interest and positive comments. Last but not least, thanks to anybody who didn't react in the thread but nonetheless took the time to read my humble stuff and/or who made some of the characters I mentionned in Herc bio :)

My appologies if the little epilogue was too cheesy, I am affraid I might have become too sentimental for my own good in the last years :p
 
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As, in my part of the word at least, we are getting in the cold months and Frostpunk 2 is announced I tought it could be good to explore what I feel is one of the less well-known great settings of the last years. Frostpunk is a steampunk universe who get it by an apocalyptic winter during the 19th century. To allow at least some of humanity to survive massive generators were built to make their immediate surroundings habitable, provided that the generators keep being feed coal continuously.

In the videogame you are in charge of one of these colonies, trying to ensure the survival of your people while also keeping your collective humanity as much as possible.

Cold or Cold Hearted?: A Frostpunk Quest


We were proud.

As machines replaced men and women in so many tasks we spoke of progress and believed that it heralded a new age, a time when humanity would come to its rightfull inheritance and control the Earth in everything in it, enjoying it in ever greater comfort and plenty until perhaps the time would come to jump into the stars.

And then we were humbled for the cold came.

The brightest minds of the age gathered could not explain, let alone prevent, the coming of snow and ice and as they babbled about god and nature they found themselves admiting that there was no discernable why and it simply would be. It was not evil, nor vengefull but it would come nonetheless and it would extinguish most of life on earth. And yet, we refused to go gently into the winter night.

For we were still proud.

In the wanning years of the Last Autumn mighty generators to produce life-preserving warmth were built in the northernlands, where coal, metal and wood could be found applenty and where the only fauna and flora who could hope to survive, to offer some shelters for at least a very small number of our kindred. The costs in human lives and suffering was beyond comprehension, and yet we paid it for we could see no other path forward for humanity save oblivion. We prayed to whatever god who might be that he would understand.

Now Autumn is gone and Winter is here and we are among the few who yet live, the few who have found a place near one of the mighty generators. We are cold and hungry but we are alive. For how long? Will the flame of humanity continue to kindle in our earths?

This remain to be seen.
 
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So, how is the inevitable revival of A Spell in Parseltongue going, with the imminent release of The Secrets of Dumbledore? I miss my Crecy :p

The hype of the new movie, if it's any good, could do wonders for player interest, if you're up for it.
 
So, how is the inevitable revival of A Spell in Parseltongue going, with the imminent release of The Secrets of Dumbledore? I miss my Crecy :p

The hype of the new movie, if it's any good, could do wonders for player interest, if you're up for it.
Lol, I would be lying if I said the idea did not cross my mind.... Especially since I am cautiously optimistic about the video game as well. :p

I am not gonna say never (way too attached to the setting for that!) but TBH I don't think it will happen, at least not with me at the helm (If anything wanted to give it a shot I'd be more then willing to help out) and as a game. If there is one thing I have noticed in the previous itteration is that I have a hard time keeping on top of the demands of being a GM and the part I enjoyed the most were the worldbuilding, both the one I did and reading that of others. Part of writing Herc's not so short bio, which honestly wound up as more of an history of Greengrass clan in the 20th century through his and Asoria's eyes, was to give myself some closure and put ideas I had in mind for a long time on paper/keyboard (just to give an example, Herc as the tactician of the army that would relieve Hogwarts is something I had in mind since back on AH.com).

This isn't to say I am completely done with the setting and the worldbuilding done for it though, as I still do have attachment for them. Herc and his familly remain my favourite creation. I do have some self-criticisms on his bio. If I was to come back and polish it I'd withdraw any part about martial involvement of the exiles until their return and replace it with diplomatic stuff and I'd just cut the last part, as it is just too soapy and tonally different, and instead have a few sentences describing Herc's last years until a death in 2008 as a mix of sadness at the past, satisfaction at his ultimate victory alongside with relief for his grandkids and just generally coming to grip with everything that had happened in his life, before leaving him, Slughorn and Hagrid drinking and talking of the old days as the last scene and natural conclusion of his story, among other smaller stuff. I didn't actually do it at the time, as I didn't know what your reaction to the idea would be, but I would admit the tought of Herc and Crecy being lovers, after their spouses were both dead and as a ''until we meet them again on the other side of the veil kind of thing'' also crossed my mind and might be something I'd be up to explore further :p Still, I am reasonably proud of said bio as a whole. The chapter on the first Wizarding War, in particular, was hard to write but IMO probably also my best piece of writing ever.

I did have writing ideas coming along at one point or another and involving the Parseltongue lore, for lack of a better word, in some capacity, that I might come back to if the movie and/or the video game leave me inspired:

-Updating and detailing my vision of the Global Wizarding War, with a good place given to Herc and Ria's campaigns and, if you are amenable, apperances by Crecy as a double agent, alongside other Parseltongue characters.
-A run down of elections for Minister of Magic in the 20th century, with a bunch of Parseltongue characters, of the Parseltongue versions of cannonical ones, playing a role, Herc and @Yanez Eleanor in 1962.
-A series of one shots showing how Herc and @CommanderBlade Lucian's war forged bound affected both of them and evolved over time (tough of it around November 11 and might do it for that date this year).
-Finishing writing my take on the story of the Elder Wand I started as worldbuilding for the RP
-Writing a piece on the post-Battle of Hogwarts trial of Death Eaters and Riddle's collaborators, with apparation, either as individuals or in memories, of several Parseltongue characters.
-Either in a more modern RP I'd be part of or as some standalone stories, I'd like to write about the Greengrass clan's young generation around the time of the book, with past events in the background and Hercules as a father figure for several of them. Especially writing about Daphne, Astoria and Ernie MacMillan.
-Maybe some Marauder-era stuff, once against either as part of an RP as a writing piece, with Parseltongue characters or their kids.
-This one is more ambitious, and definitely not for now, but one of these days I might try my hand at a multiple POV stories about the year 1942-43 at Hogwarts, people's approval to use being their characters pending, of course. Hell, making it a collaborative venture would be even better if I could find takers! :p
-Maybe just more random worldbuilding efforts too. I know it doesn't attrack as much attention then a game, but it does work better for me if that make sense?
 
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The Parselverse must go on! :p

But yeah, I get where you are coming from. If you do decide to run it as a game again, I'd definitely sign up. Personally, I think the idea of a RPG has its non-negligible merits when it comes to worldbuilding and writing a collaborative story. I've always found it much easier to roleplay in a play-by-post manner rather than writing large "chapters/POVs" on my own. Without input from a second person, my dialogue gets clunky really fast. If you're serious about wanting to turn the Parselverse into a proper fanfiction, as I have often considered doing myself (until I remind myself of my limitations), I do think picking it back up as a game, even if it doesn't last long, could give you new interesting assets in a way a quest/collaborative timeline just doesn't. When you roleplay as a character said character tends to be more real than anything else you write because you actually have to put yourself in your characters' shoes while dealing with the unknown and unscripted, i.e. other player actions rather than the story you want to tell. This generates engagement, interesting stories and believable characters. But that's just me.

Regarding their love affair in widowhood, IMO it is believable. Crecy did have a lowkey crush on Hercules during school, and I don't view her relationship with Ignatius as the "soulmate" type (Crecy wasn't very romantic), although they definitely saw each other as husband and wife and I suppose generally had a happy marriage. Crecy wouldn't have had an easy life after her stint with Grindelwald, which I'm still figuring how it went exactly (maybe started as a double agent, became enthralled in her role and seduced by Grindelwald's charm and promises of station and power, then regretted it and turned double agent again, I don't know; either way, she would have suffered). If Lucretia is considered to be the Weasley aunt who lived in Shell Cottage prior to Bill and Fleur's marriage, as a cool and natural way to insert her into canon in a semi-prominent place, there needs to be significant character development between the aristocratic and highly ambitious Crecy whom we met at Hogwarts and the Crecy who would choose to live in a lonely cottage by the beach and would be content about it. Ignatius Prewett, I think, would play a big role in Crecy's post-war transformation and trauma recovery, but more in a camaraderie than a proper romantic fashion. So a widowhood affair isn't unlikely, as Crecy isn't the type of person to remain grieving forever (unlike Hercules, perhaps, an unapologetic romantic :p). The only downside to the romance is that Lucretia died young in canon (for wizarding standards), at about age 67 or something like that. I can't imagine her last years were easy since something must have killed her so young, likely an illness or perhaps a curse cast upon the family as the Blacks started dying in droves around that time, which may also be related to her infertility. So she would have had a short time window to hook up with Hercules while still being in good health, unless the Parselverse throws canon out of the window and fully becomes an AU.

Either way, this is a long time removed from 1942/43. If you're burned out from the Hogwarts setting, perhaps after the movie hits theaters there could be a sequel-like game to A Spell in Parseltongue, covering the post-Hogwarts years between graduation and Grindelwald's defeat. Though it would be a pity to never properly develop what exactly happened to those characters during the first opening of the Chamber of Secrets.​
 
The Parselverse must go on! :p

But yeah, I get where you are coming from. If you do decide to run it as a game again, I'd definitely sign up. I. Personally, I think the idea of a RPG has its non-negligible merits when it comes to worldbuilding and writing a collaborative story. I've always found it much easier to roleplay in a play-by-post manner rather than writing large "chapters/POVs" on my own. Without input from a second person, my dialogue gets clunky really fast. If you're serious about wanting to turn the Parselverse into a proper fanfiction, as I have often considered doing myself (until I remind myself of my limitations), I do think picking it back up as a game, even if it doesn't last long, could give you new interesting assets in a way a quest/collaborative timeline just doesn't. When you roleplay as a character said character tends to be more real than anything else you write because you actually have to put yourself in your characters' shoes while dealing with the unknown and unscripted, i.e. other player actions rather than the story you want to tell. This generates engagement, interesting stories and believable characters. But that's just me.

II. Regarding their love affair in widowhood, IMO it is believable. Crecy did have a lowkey crush on Hercules during school, and I don't view her relationship with Ignatius as the "soulmate" type (Crecy wasn't very romantic), although they definitely saw each other as husband and wife and I suppose generally had a happy marriage. Crecy wouldn't have had an easy life after her stint with Grindelwald, which I'm still figuring how it went exactly (maybe started as a double agent, became enthralled in her role and seduced by Grindelwald's charm and promises of station and power, then regretted it and turned double agent again, I don't know; either way, she would have suffered). If Lucretia is considered to be the Weasley aunt who lived in Shell Cottage prior to Bill and Fleur's marriage, as a cool and natural way to insert her into canon in a semi-prominent place, there needs to be significant character development between the aristocratic and highly ambitious Crecy whom we met at Hogwarts and the Crecy who would choose to live in a lonely cottage by the beach and would be content about it. Ignatius Prewett, I think, would play a big role in Crecy's post-war transformation and trauma recovery, but more in a camaraderie than a proper romantic fashion. So a widowhood affair isn't unlikely, as Crecy isn't the type of person to remain grieving forever (III. unlike Hercules, perhaps, an unapologetic romantic :p). IV. The only downside to the romance is that Lucretia died young in canon (for wizarding standards), at about age 67 or something like that. I can't imagine her last years were easy since something must have killed her so young, likely an illness or perhaps a curse cast upon the family as the Blacks started dying in droves around that time, which may also be related to her infertility. So she would have had a short time window to hook up with Hercules while still being in good health, unless the Parselverse throws canon out of the window and fully becomes an AU.

V. Either way, this is a long time removed from 1942/43. If you're burned out from the Hogwarts setting, perhaps after the movie hits theaters there could be a sequel-like game to A Spell in Parseltongue, covering the post-Hogwarts years between graduation and Grindelwald's defeat. Though it would be a pity to never properly develop what exactly happened to those characters during the first opening of the Chamber of Secrets.​
(I put the numbers myself because it makes it easier to organise my toughts)

I. I get your point, which is a large part of why I didn't get really going with the attempt to turn it into a quest. For me a large part of the setting's attraction was the ensemble piece. IMO that's the one change I would make to Fantastic Beasts as a concept: I love Newt as a character but I'd rather the story be told trough a bunch of POV, GOT style, with Newt being one of them, and be a tv series :p

Honestly, I feel the best possible scenario for me here would be someone else doing the day to day modding and I'd be the worldbuilding, NPC builder and event conceived mode if that make sense?

In any case, the Parselverse as fully-fledged fanfic would be a longer term project, if it is ever to happen.

II. That make sense, Crecy doesn't strike me as massively romantic. One idea I had is that the experience of the war, both what she went through and what she saw, around Grindelwald's created a chasm between her and the rest of the Blacks, as well as push in a perhaps more Sphinx-like direction as she increasingly wouldn't relate so much with many people she did earlier in life. After all, no matter what happened in Europe that's the kind of experience that change someone.

Maybe she could wind up as something of an interlocutor between the more Purists minded and moderates ala Herc as they themselves would take a more reformists post-war and the gap between the two groups will just get widder and widder...

III. My take on Hercules is that he wasn't so much a natural romantic as some who genuinely found his soulmate, and became a romantic as a result, and had a very hard time loosing her. I don't mean it just romantically either, altough its obviously a huge part, but someone who had similar interest then he, similar opinions, whose personality worked well with his and who fitted well with what he wanted in a partner while he fitted well in what she wanted as a partner. Long before they became a couple they were each other's favourite person if that make sense?

On a deeper level they also both came to fill up a need they both inherited from their childhood and stuff that happened during it (in the grand HP tradition of characters needing therapy :p ). Astoria's was pretty straight forward: she was a smart, driven girl whose parents continuously criticised for having said qualities and whose ambitions they discouraged. To meet someone on the train who genuinely appreciated her witts and shared her intelectual pursuits was already a relief, which was only increased when their friendship got going and fairly early on she got told ''trust me, your parents could not be more wrong! You are gonna do the things you dream off and if you need help me and my familly will give it!" was obviously massive. Basically Hercules was the first person who saw her for what she really was in term of talent and potential and told her to not doubt herself and he was at the center of the new life she builded, where she got the respect, recognition and support she so sorely needed.

Hercules is a bit more complicated, as he obviously has way more of a strong connection to his familly, but since his twin brother got cast away there was always a fear that he will be too some day, for some reason, and a sense that it was never fully him as a person that mattered but is place in the familly tree, which he was proud off but still. He really needed something that was about Hercules, not about the Greengrasses, and his friendship with Astoria (and later romance) became that to some extent. The fact she was also at the center of his friend group and how he saw Ravenclaw, which a minority of his ancestors wounded up in but critically not his dad, only reinforced that. These were the things, alongside many of the intelectual projects they worked on, which he could look on and call it fully his as an individual during his formative years.

Then they lived through the opening of the Chamber, they went to war, had kids, appeared to be on the verge of seeing their political dreams come into being, saw them crumble and went to war again, the ties always depenning...

The hole in Herc's life was just too big for it to be ever completely filled :( Obviously, the fact that the two kids he got along with, his brother, his sister, the brother in law he watched over for a few years and a bunch of his friends from Hogwarts (which I'd definitely flesh out more if I come back to it) also died during the war didn't help...

EDIT: I am not that big a romantic myself so I genuinely got surprised at how much of a central role their romance took while I was building their characters and how much I enjoyed thinking it through and building it :p

IV. That's fair, altough I suppose it could have been a later illness. The best AU option is to with ''Alphard is in Gryffindor and the butterflies are subtle for a while'', while they still wind up saving Crecy down the line. Alternatively, if one goes with the curse idea you could have a later POD where Crecy got blown off the tapestry and survive as a result?

V. That's definitely a possible option, altough obviously we'd need to flesh the war far more for that. One thing a piece of creative writing could allow would be more foreboding and foreshadowing that reflect the tragedy of their generation, who would live through three wars with everything coming with them.
 
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I. I wonder how much of a difference there would be between day to day modding and being in charge of worldbuilding and NPC and Event Modding. It seems to me that those last two would be the more intensive roles, with regards to time commitment and word count. True, directly dealing with players and stats and the like can be stressful, but I don't remember the games having salt at all, especially since they didn't last long enough (and why didn't they? This is a question that needs to be addressed if a reboot is in consideration. Was it lack of direction, maybe? Or perhaps a different Voldemort player is needed to move things along?).

II. I think Crecy is in for a reality shock. She has had an easy life in Hogwarts and was used to being the center of all attention in an evident position of authority throughout her entire school career. She's very sheltered and naive in this regard, which is why she thinks highly of herself and assumes she could play the role of a double agent rather effortlessly. Of course, this is not the case, as Crecy is way out of her league and doesn't realize what she signed up for until it was too late to back out. Her world is going to be shattered and she will be forced to grow up, not in the least because Lucretia would have become a witness to the Holocaust, which makes her seventh year in Hogwarts pale in comparison. Crecy is also set up to fail due to her flaws, so it wouldn't surprise me if she spent time locked up in Nurmengard; perhaps that's where her infertility comes from. The pureblood supporters of Grindelwald wouldn't murder a Black, but they could ensure a "blood traitor" doesn't get to reproduce. It's dark, but any story involving this time period and imprisonment in Nurmengard is going to be.

Of course, when she comes home to Britain she wouldn't have been very happy with grandpa Sirius, who manipulated her into signing up for the job against Arcturus' advice. The characterization of Arcturus Black in fandom often depicts him as a level-headed and calculated moderate whose main concern is the House of Black and not any dark wizard, whom he often considers to be too much of a destabilizing figure in the political scenario to be worth it. This characterization can be worked into the Parselverse's Arcturus, but there is no established fan-canon regarding his father, Sirius, so we can work with that. In my mind there could be a rift between Lord Sirius and Heir Arcturus in regards to where the house should go. Arcturus, like Lucretia, leans more to the Dragons' side, while Sirius could be an outspoken Basilisk and an elusive Grindelwaldite in the format of the purebloods in the Lachaise cemetery from Crimes of Grindelwald. Perhaps his daughter Lycoris, a sister of Arcturus, is already with Grindelwald, as one of his original supporters. Lucretia would be offered as a sacrificial lamb to the Ministry by Sirius, who would get his way no matter what. If Grindelwald wins, his family is promoted twice as much. If he loses, Lucretia's status as a double agent could spare Lycoris and the family from official retribution. Of course, Lucretia's own interests and safety are not a matter of priority concern in this scenario, as she is employed as a pawn by the head of the House of Black. However, her own pride, insecurities and narcissism keep her from seeing things that way and she ultimately pays the price for it, because there must be costs to her own arrogance. Physical costs, yes, due to torture and imprisonment, but also psychological costs, as there is no way she wouldn't have to collaborate with the Nazis and witness the Holocaust in her position, no matter how hush hush Grindelwald tries to keep their mutual relations. If Lucretia becomes a true believer in Grindelwald during her time there, witnessing the Holocaust would be the reason for her return to the light, as she didn't sign up for mass murder when Grindelwald was speaking of the greater good and natural rights to wizarding supremacy.

So Crecy comes back home scarred and damaged, possibly facing charges of treason laid out against her by the Ministry. Black money could rescue her from conviction (unlike dear auntie Lycoris, who would be facing life in Azkaban or wherever the ICW kept Grindelwaldites imprisoned), but this would likely overshadow any heroics and accomplishments she might have had (as Crecy is still meant to be a sympathetic character, so she needs redeeming actions in the war once she does witness the Holocaust; a random thought I had was tipping off the Ministry of an analogue to Star Wars' Operation Cinder, in which the inner circle of Grindelwald would have been instructed to destroy Muggle cities with fiendfyre or something of the like in order to force the Statute of Secrecy to be abolished as a last resort if Grindelwald was himself defeated. Auntie Lycoris would excitedly leak the plan to Crecy, and in her hurry to inform the authorities she finally exposes herself as a... quadruple agent?).

What does the future have in store for Crecy after all of this? Other than her slow medical recovery and marriage to Ignatius Prewett, I don't know. She has become tainted, so her lifelong dream of winning a seat in the Wizengamot seems to be out of reach. A career in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, perhaps as a judge or prosecutor, which would have brought her the prestige and station she always yearned for, also seems unlikely. She could become a researcher and traveler to try and find a cure for her magically-induced infertility, sort of like Yennefer in The Witcher. Further academic career and advancement may be out of the picture, as Dumbledore is in charge of wizarding education and I doubt he would be employing her at Hogwarts anytime soon. She could attempt a career at the Department of International Magical Cooperation to try and make up for her mistakes during the war (then again, she might be too tainted to work with foreign affairs). Crecy is still Crecy though, and it's a cliche that people always radically change even after harrowing experiences, so she's not about to become an activist for Muggle rights or something like that as a redemption arc. No, she is still insecure, now more than ever, with a burning desire for recognition and reputation, if not power anymore. She is still at odds with Orion (and therefore will be at odds with Walburga soon), and although she might grow closer to Arcturus, the same may not be true for the rest of the Blacks. Where does Crecy go from here until eventually owning Shell Cottage and becoming the aunt of Molly, Fabian and Gideon Prewett? I'm not sure.

IV. I suppose that any fic that has Lucretia as one of the main characters must at least include the Second Wizarding War and Voldemort's ultimate downfall. Perhaps she takes over as the "regent" of the House of Black after Arcturus dies while Sirius is still in Azkaban, in order to deny the Malfoys the Black estate. Perhaps she has a deeper connection to Molly and goes from there, though it is doubtful she would ever have close relations with Dumbledore. Hercules might be an important friend/lover in this context, not only for emotional support, but also as one of the few relics of the only time when everything was going right for Crecy, i.e. during the Hogwarts years.​
 
I. I wonder how much of a difference there would be between day to day modding and being in charge of worldbuilding and NPC and Event Modding. It seems to me that those last two would be the more intensive roles, with regards to time commitment and word count. True, directly dealing with players and stats and the like can be stressful, but I don't remember the games having salt at all, especially since they didn't last long enough (and why didn't they? This is a question that needs to be addressed if a reboot is in consideration. Was it lack of direction, maybe? Or perhaps a different Voldemort player is needed to move things along?).

II. I think Crecy is in for a reality shock. She has had an easy life in Hogwarts and was used to being the center of all attention in an evident position of authority throughout her entire school career. She's very sheltered and naive in this regard, which is why she thinks highly of herself and assumes she could play the role of a double agent rather effortlessly. Of course, this is not the case, as Crecy is way out of her league and doesn't realize what she signed up for until it was too late to back out. Her world is going to be shattered and she will be forced to grow up, not in the least because Lucretia would have become a witness to the Holocaust, which makes her seventh year in Hogwarts pale in comparison. Crecy is also set up to fail due to her flaws, so it wouldn't surprise me if she spent time locked up in Nurmengard; perhaps that's where her infertility comes from. The pureblood supporters of Grindelwald wouldn't murder a Black, but they could ensure a "blood traitor" doesn't get to reproduce. It's dark, but any story involving this time period and imprisonment in Nurmengard is going to be.

Of course, when she comes home to Britain she wouldn't have been very happy with grandpa Sirius, who manipulated her into signing up for the job against Arcturus' advice. The characterization of Arcturus Black in fandom often depicts him as a level-headed and calculated moderate whose main concern is the House of Black and not any dark wizard, whom he often considers to be too much of a destabilizing figure in the political scenario to be worth it. This characterization can be worked into the Parselverse's Arcturus, but there is no established fan-canon regarding his father, Sirius, so we can work with that. In my mind there could be a rift between Lord Sirius and Heir Arcturus in regards to where the house should go. Arcturus, like Lucretia, leans more to the Dragons' side, while Sirius could be an outspoken Basilisk and an elusive Grindelwaldite in the format of the purebloods in the Lachaise cemetery from Crimes of Grindelwald. Perhaps his daughter Lycoris, a sister of Arcturus, is already with Grindelwald, as one of his original supporters. Lucretia would be offered as a sacrificial lamb to the Ministry by Sirius, who would get his way no matter what. If Grindelwald wins, his family is promoted twice as much. If he loses, Lucretia's status as a double agent could spare Lycoris and the family from official retribution. Of course, Lucretia's own interests and safety are not a matter of priority concern in this scenario, as she is employed as a pawn by the head of the House of Black. However, her own pride, insecurities and narcissism keep her from seeing things that way and she ultimately pays the price for it, because there must be costs to her own arrogance. Physical costs, yes, due to torture and imprisonment, but also psychological costs, as there is no way she wouldn't have to collaborate with the Nazis and witness the Holocaust in her position, no matter how hush hush Grindelwald tries to keep their mutual relations. If Lucretia becomes a true believer in Grindelwald during her time there, witnessing the Holocaust would be the reason for her return to the light, as she didn't sign up for mass murder when Grindelwald was speaking of the greater good and natural rights to wizarding supremacy.

So Crecy comes back home scarred and damaged, possibly facing charges of treason laid out against her by the Ministry. Black money could rescue her from conviction (unlike dear auntie Lycoris, who would be facing life in Azkaban or wherever the ICW kept Grindelwaldites imprisoned), but this would likely overshadow any heroics and accomplishments she might have had (as Crecy is still meant to be a sympathetic character, so she needs redeeming actions in the war once she does witness the Holocaust; a random thought I had was tipping off the Ministry of an analogue to Star Wars' Operation Cinder, in which the inner circle of Grindelwald would have been instructed to destroy Muggle cities with fiendfyre or something of the like in order to force the Statute of Secrecy to be abolished as a last resort if Grindelwald was himself defeated. Auntie Lycoris would excitedly leak the plan to Crecy, and in her hurry to inform the authorities she finally exposes herself as a... quadruple agent?).

What does the future have in store for Crecy after all of this? Other than her slow medical recovery and marriage to Ignatius Prewett, I don't know. She has become tainted, so her lifelong dream of winning a seat in the Wizengamot seems to be out of reach. A career in the Department of Magical Law Enforcement, perhaps as a judge or prosecutor, which would have brought her the prestige and station she always yearned for, also seems unlikely. She could become a researcher and traveler to try and find a cure for her magically-induced infertility, sort of like Yennefer in The Witcher. Further academic career and advancement may be out of the picture, as Dumbledore is in charge of wizarding education and I doubt he would be employing her at Hogwarts anytime soon. She could attempt a career at the Department of International Magical Cooperation to try and make up for her mistakes during the war (then again, she might be too tainted to work with foreign affairs). Crecy is still Crecy though, and it's a cliche that people always radically change even after harrowing experiences, so she's not about to become an activist for Muggle rights or something like that as a redemption arc. No, she is still insecure, now more than ever, with a burning desire for recognition and reputation, if not power anymore. She is still at odds with Orion (and therefore will be at odds with Walburga soon), and although she might grow closer to Arcturus, the same may not be true for the rest of the Blacks. Where does Crecy go from here until eventually owning Shell Cottage and becoming the aunt of Molly, Fabian and Gideon Prewett? I'm not sure.

IV. I suppose that any fic that has Lucretia as one of the main characters must at least include the Second Wizarding War and Voldemort's ultimate downfall. Perhaps she takes over as the "regent" of the House of Black after Arcturus dies while Sirius is still in Azkaban, in order to deny the Malfoys the Black estate. Perhaps she has a deeper connection to Molly and goes from there, though it is doubtful she would ever have close relations with Dumbledore. Hercules might be an important friend/lover in this context, not only for emotional support, but also as one of the few relics of the only time when everything was going right for Crecy, i.e. during the Hogwarts years.​
I. TBH I just found that I was better with writing worldbuilding post and writing NPC and PC that then actual moding if that make sense. I can't really explain why, except that its more my fortay and the ability to write at fully my own rythm. I'd see myself as more doing that in a supporting role then for the person who actually get the game moving. Regarding Riddle I'd say an NPC would probably be for the best, as he is simply too key to the plot.

II. A lot to unpack on this one for sure! And, even more so, poor Crecy :(

I do agree that war any story in the Global Wizarding War does need to have its moments of serious darkness, all the more so because of the Second World War and everything coming with it happening at the same time, altough the childness can easily be explained by how consanguines the top famillies had become by that point (Hercules definitely did a solid for his familly by falling in love with a shoopkeeper's daughter). I can definitely see such doubledealings having happened and playing a key role in not only alienating Crecy from her familly but also isolating the Blacks and basically anyone who wasn't among the supporters of the Rainbow Ministry. I don't think their would be proof but there could definition be suspicions, which would essentially cement their wartime isolation and start a process of ever increasing radicalisation among the Old and Peace Dragons that would lay the ground for Riddle by basically making them all basilisks by the late 60s.

Regarding Crecy more specifically, an Operation Cinder-type of event could work for her redemption arc. I could also see her playing a key part in a wizarding version of Operation Valkyrie (Thestral?) and, if she never truly turned cloack but still did things that cannot be excused under any circumstances to not be detected, being a point of communication with the IWC. In any case, her fall and redemption definitely do seem like a tragic but interesting arc and it is perfectly believable she would come out of it in very bad shape, as you describe it. The worst case scenario for her in the outline you established would be for her to never be completely forgiven by her society, going from suspicion to suspicion and only Ignotius Prewett and a few friends and relatives to comfort her and her personnal research as distractions. The best case scenario would be for the people she knew who distinguished themselves in the war (Hercules among them) to help her get a second chance due to her later actions, with Law Enforcement being perhaps a bridge too far but International Magical Cooperation (which would loose a good chunk of prestige with the end of the war) being a possibility.

IV. That make sense. If we go with a scenario where Crecy survive longer I would assume they will both, in their own way, look at each other as one of the survivors of what was, for them, a kinder past that nonetheless come with a lot of ghosts and mistakes they very deeply regret. I could see them really becoming closer then they had been for a long time first with Crecy being invited to Foxridge to meet kid Ernie MacMillan, as he wouldn't have a ton of relative on his father's side left, and go from there. A key moment would be when Hercules would start his own political resurection in 94-95, with Crecy being eager to help as a war was on the horizon and therefore another chance for her to keep redeeming herself, if she still feel that way to some extent. Hercules, for himself, would have been accustomed to have a strong, magically talented, intelectually gifted and martially proficient (which I assume Crecy would be at that stage) witch helping him out in such matters so Crecy could naturally fill that slot. After that it would be fairly easy for their relationship to drift toward an affair for companionship, even if Hercules wouldn't have gotten over Astoria and still look forward to be reunited with her, altough obviously only when the time would come by itself.
 
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