I know. Teenagers kissing is downright pornographic! They should reign themselves in to fond glances and nothing more!

Of course, for poor Shade, even that much intimacy must be discomfiting. Since he recalls being much older.

That mostly what I was mentioning. Physically, he's in his early 20s at this point, which is still-bad-but-not-quite-as-squicky when dealing with an almost 16 year old, but mentally he's been alive for almost 50 years if you count old-world memories and that's well into 'Woooooah' territory.
 
What do you think he was gathering the blackmail for? Those investigated who showed loyalty to King Joseph have done nothing wrong and receive minimal punishment. Those sympathetic to Charles, or disloyal in general can enjoy having their face rubbed in the dirt Henry gathered. Or being stabbed to death by commoners with bayonets.
I don't think we are reading same story. Nothing like that happend in this story at all. In fact it is other way around everybody was forgiven, Henry merely made a point to inform his wife so she could use that fact.

And bayonet thing had nothing to do with Charles at all. It was to stop a noble from hiding behind the religion. So stop bullshitting.
 
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That mostly what I was mentioning. Physically, he's in his early 20s at this point, which is still-bad-but-not-quite-as-squicky when dealing with an almost 16 year old, but mentally he's been alive for almost 50 years if you count old-world memories and that's well into 'Woooooah' territory.
Wait. That may put Henry in the same category as a vampire or an elf or whatever. The only thing is is that I'm not certain if the age difference is large enough for that... actually your right It's a little too close for comfort. How dare Isabelle go after someone too young for her!

Joking aside I don't know if I see the problem. If reincarnation is just how the world works, and it would seem to be case given Henry's situation, then I don's see why he should have to punish himself and anyone who is interested in him for daring to keep his memories from a past life. Sure that is probably not normal, though for all he knows it might be, it still isn't something that should demand he be chaste for... ever. Or is everyone stating he has too stop dating humans altogether? because frankly if we consider the past life as just extra years of age then he's not going to date humans who would be willing to date him.
 
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That mostly what I was mentioning. Physically, he's in his early 20s at this point, which is still-bad-but-not-quite-as-squicky when dealing with an almost 16 year old, but mentally he's been alive for almost 50 years if you count old-world memories and that's well into 'Woooooah' territory.
A 50 year old with the mentality of a edgy teenager? Is he Reaper?
 
I think part of the issue is some cultural dissonance between posters. I'm guessing some come from places where a 16 years old is already at or above the age of consent, plus the general public opinion doesn't see anything particularly wrong with it, if still considered somewhat weird and a bit creepy.
 
I think part of the issue is some cultural dissonance between posters. I'm guessing some come from places where a 16 years old is already at or above the age of consent, plus the general public opinion doesn't see anything particularly wrong with it, if still considered somewhat weird and a bit creepy.
That is part of it. The other part is the differing life experiences.
 
That is part of it. The other part is the differing life experiences.
Your also forgetting the fact that our culture rightly hates pedophiles. So people are often leery of taking stances that make them appear kin to said individuals. But like all falsehoods it is still a lie. People often are not actually bothered by the idea that a teenager has a body that functions in the manner that evolution intended(as much as a concept can intend something). After all the vast majority of people in the west where sexually active long before they could vote. Let's be honest here.

Besides I don't think of Henry as older than his body. Now he is wiser than you might expect for someone his age due to a wealth of experience. But his brain? it hasn't finished its development meaning his judgement is impaired just like everyone else under the age of 25. I mean I'm reasonably intelligent(actually this was a point of personal frustration since my parents where obsessed with my intellect due to my IQ) and have a good memory and I was interested in learning. I still did stupid things that I knew better than and so did everyone.

Henry is the same age as his body because his brain, the organ that does his decision making, is not fully developed. Sure he thinks of himself differently, but that doesn't mean anything aside from what I said.
 
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Is that the official imgur album the artist put up?

Because IIRC, whilst singular pages are fine, I'm pretty sure posting an entire comic or two from an unofficial source is against SV regulations. Copyright Infringement and all that. Under Rule 1.
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The funny thing is that teenager's brains aren't fully developed even when they're 18 (they finish at at least mid-20s), so dating them then means dating someone who's not got a completely adult mindset.
Your also forgetting the fact that our culture rightly hates pedophiles. So people are often leery of taking stances that make them appear kin to said individuals. But like all falsehoods it is still a lie. People often are not actually bothered by the idea that a teenager has a body that functions in the manner that evolution intended(as much as a concept can intend something). After all the vast majority of people in the west where sexually active long before they could vote. Let's be honest here.

Besides I don't think of Henry as older than his body. Now he is wiser than you might expect for someone his age due to a wealth of experience. But his brain? it hasn't finished its development meaning his judgement is impaired just like everyone else under the age of 25. I mean I'm reasonably intelligent(actually this was a point of personal frustration since my parents where obsessed with my intellect due to my IQ) and have a good memory and I was interested in learning. I still did stupid things that I knew better than and so did everyone.

Henry is the same age as his body because his brain, the organ that does his decision making, is not fully developed. Sure he thinks of himself differently, but that doesn't mean anything aside from what I said.
Are we talking about how people have different view points or pedophilia? Because I was thinking of the former, and the latter was justified in the past due to the need of large families to overcome the high death rate when children are still growing.

Basically, if they started making kids at a younger age, they might have enough time to make enough kids who won't die. This obviously changed with the development of better medical tech and how society transitioned from agricultural to industrial.
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Got it.
 
I don't think we are reading same story. Nothing like that happend in this story at all. In fact it is other way around everybody was forgiven, Henry merely made a point to inform his wife so she could use that fact.

And bayonet thing had nothing to do with Charles at all. It was to stop a noble from hiding behind the religion. So stop bullshitting.
You have a funny definition of forgiveness. While Henry appears to have left the punishment for discovered wrongdoings to his wife, he also mentions that she had no mercy. So I seriously doubt there were no consequences for the tax-evading and/or incompetent nobles. And even for the completely loyal nobles visited Henry's troops still need to be fed and housed. Just touring the lands would have drained everyone's coffers, but Henry went a step further in weakening them by investigating every household by force. So not only did everyone lose money, they also lost their dirty little secrets.


And yes the bayonet incident is relevant as Henry was perfectly willing to use lethal force during these inquisitions:
"Full broadside aimed at the castle," I said flatly to the second in command, who sharply stood to attention a few steps behind me and the knight in question, "I'll personally deliver the last warning," and with that said, I mounted aboard my manticore and flew off straight in the direction of the castle's walls, where nervous-looking servants were clutching on to bows and arrows. This wasn't really going to be a fight, as much as a slaughter if the noble didn't see the right to it.
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"Count Balmorre," I spoke crisply, "whatever it is that you are hiding from the crown of Gallia, I care not," I exhaled. "We are looking for a particular person, and while I understand your reticence, both of the princes of Gallia are for once in agreement. I act with their combined blessing. I can do this the hard way, break your walls, shatter your castle, and murder everyone in this place that opposes the rule of the Crown," I sighed, "But I'd rather not have to. This...this doesn't please me, Count Balmorre. I really do not like having to kill faithful followers of the law, so...let my knights search your castle. They are nobles, just like you-they will not impeach on your most precious secrets."
Both his internal and external statements match up. Had this noble continued to refuse to allow his troops in Henry would have had to follow through and fire or lose his hardass Rule of Steel reputation.

Side note, since you seem to be confusing my rambling speculations for statements of fact. I am posting speculations on the worst possible scenarios, I am by no means making definitive statements about the way the fic should go. Though the reason these scenarios come to mind so frequently is due to the lack of dramatic tension in the story, that doesn't mean I think things should go down the more drama bomb path, it means that I've gotten bored. So stop taking this so seriously, I'm doing this as a thought exercise for fun.
 
Are we talking about how people have different view points or pedophilia? Because I was thinking of the former, and the latter was justified in the past due to the need of large families to overcome the high death rate when children are still growing.

Basically, if they started making kids at a younger age, they might have enough time to make enough kids who won't die. This obviously changed with the development of better medical tech and how society transitioned from agricultural to industrial.

Got it.
What I was talking about is that I think people are exaggerating due to the fact that failing to do so could reflect negatively on them. We all know people do this, after all you would be hard pressed to find a human who doesn't regularly contemplate murder, torture and the like. But you will also struggle the same amount to locate a human who would admit to that in public. People act vastly different from their beliefs and when it comes to this I don't think most people are being honest. It looks bad to be so because no one is, so people think that if you are willing to admit {insert here} what do you need to hide?
 
Oh for gods sake just kiss the girl. There's nothing wrong with a kiss, especially since you are already married. Yeah sure, don't want to hurt her by actually going all the way fine, but all she wants is a proper kiss. BTW: Even in the real world, marriage trumps age of consent.

She's probably going to snap and turn into a villain and it's going to be all your fault for not kissing your wife.
 
The funny thing is that teenager's brains aren't fully developed even when they're 18 (they finish at at least mid-20s), so dating them then means dating someone who's not got a completely adult mindset.

And there is further development of "adulthood" beyond that. Ongoing research suggests that (parts of) the human brain continues to develop at least into our thirties and even forties. Whether that's true for homo sapiens halkeginia (or whatever nomenclature) though...
 
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Oh for gods sake just kiss the girl. There's nothing wrong with a kiss, especially since you are already married. Yeah sure, don't want to hurt her by actually going all the way fine, but all she wants is a proper kiss. BTW: Even in the real world, marriage trumps age of consent.

She's probably going to snap and turn into a villain and it's going to be all your fault for not kissing your wife.
Right also she can't read your mind. She doesn't know the reason. She just has to wonder why she isn't good enough. There was a reason I included punishing her when I said Henry was punishing himself for daring to retain memories of a past life.
 
Right also she can't read your mind. She doesn't know the reason. She just has to wonder why she isn't good enough. There was a reason I included punishing her when I said Henry was punishing himself for daring to retain memories of a past life.

Especially considering her father's recent insult, which is going to leave her doubting herself, wondering if maybe daddy isn't right. And her own husband refuses to even kiss her, let alone actually seal the marriage. For all she knows, he's refusing because he want's to wiggle out of the marriage.

I love the story, but the whole "I am too old for everyone my age" is a huge trope, way too common in practically every story, and needs to die. We don't need graphical lemons, just a fade to black is quite acceptable....
 
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You have a funny definition of forgiveness. While Henry appears to have left the punishment for discovered wrongdoings to his wife, he also mentions that she had no mercy. So I seriously doubt there were no consequences for the tax-evading and/or incompetent nobles. And even for the completely loyal nobles visited Henry's troops still need to be fed and housed. Just touring the lands would have drained everyone's coffers, but Henry went a step further in weakening them by investigating every household by force. So not only did everyone lose money, they also lost their dirty little secrets.


And yes the bayonet incident is relevant as Henry was perfectly willing to use lethal force during these inquisitions:

Both his internal and external statements match up. Had this noble continued to refuse to allow his troops in Henry would have had to follow through and fire or lose his hardass Rule of Steel reputation.

Side note, since you seem to be confusing my rambling speculations for statements of fact. I am posting speculations on the worst possible scenarios, I am by no means making definitive statements about the way the fic should go. Though the reason these scenarios come to mind so frequently is due to the lack of dramatic tension in the story, that doesn't mean I think things should go down the more drama bomb path, it means that I've gotten bored. So stop taking this so seriously, I'm doing this as a thought exercise for fun.

This is all accurate, the thing that is causing people to call you out in you're previous comments is your apparent fixation that all of Henry's actions are direct and obvious sabotage against Charles, which is false.

Let's start with Brittany. The Duke there has no connection we know of to Charles. The execution in question was purely because the Duke had committed a crime, an illegal Inquisition, and brutally murdered a lot of people because it was expedient. So that incident has nothing to do with Charles.

Next is the search for Josette. Henry removed Josette from a fucked up situation in order to allow her to live her life without the constant threat of being found and executed or puppeted. You claim that Henry only visited harsh measures upon Charles supporters, but that isn't true. He was working his way through all of Gallia as he was ordered, until the child trafficking ring came up. He used the ring has an excuse to claim that Josette died and ended the search. It was stated multiple times that no one knew who was being searched for, just that both princes, Charles and Joseph, were willing to have every noble in the country searched and investigates to find said person. It wasn't until after the funeral that the royals announced who exactly died. Charles reputation suffered for it, but there was nothing connecting it to Henry at all.

Lastly the supposed abuse of power Isabella is doing due to Henrys spying. Again there's no indication that Henry focused on Charles supporters. He sought information on all the nobles for her to refer to when she became queen. Things like how one count has the tendency to skim his taxes. She has not done anything yet because while she is the crown princess, she can't rule because it's Joseph who is the prince regent, and will be king. That info will come into play when she takes up the crown, and not before.

Through out all of this, Henry hasn't taken any side in the conflict. He's obeyed the orders of the prince regent, as he should, and defended him from potential attack, as he should. Both actions a result of his Rule of Steel. Henry's not done anything obvious against Charles at all, and Charles has no reason to hate or even suspect him.

In reality he's only on Josephs 'side', because he is married to Josephs daughter. But all of the back room stuff isn't for Josephs benefit at all. Cause the third side waiting in the wings is Henry and Isabella. And all of the information gathering is for them to have every advantage they can get when Isabella ascends to the throne.
 
Watch Raven contract reverse-lycanthropy and turn into a woman occasionally.

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Chapter Seventy-Seven
Chapter Seventy-Seven

My eyes adjusted to the morning light, and as I yawned and stretched, I dressed myself with calm and graceful movements. No servants to bother me in the morning, being able to dress myself as much as I wished, and no Isabella to follow...this was truly a vacation for me. It wasn't like I disliked Isabella, mind you. She was a good kid, but having to keep up appearances and thus suffer being dressed by other servants, keeping myself at the ready for every tiny wish she had, or try to smudge a bit of her pretentious self-she was earnest, all right, but after weeks of it even I couldn't go without grumbling in the back of my head.

The air in the gardens outside was cold, but not so much that it would require myself to cover up. The few servants in the mansion had been told how to act in my presence -starting from not coming to dress me in the morning- to what I wanted for breakfast -coffee, bring me all your coffee. I had departed the Petite Troyes with enough coffee to last an army a month, so for me alone it would last be a year and even more -not that I planned to stay away for a whole year, but still, it was better to be prepared than not.

"So..." I mumbled as I looked at the letters in front of me, grimacing, "It's begun."

The letter announced the death of the king of Tristain, having finally succumbed to his old age. The Queen, in her sorrow, had refused to claim the throne yet. While there was no mention of a regent, the princess was too young to rule. As my father put it, it wasn't rare that in circumstances like these a regent was picked either from the nobles or from the clergy. I knew that Cardinal Mazarin would be chosen, as he was the better fit. Still, even then-

I shook my head. As a prince-consort of a foreign country, there was no way I'd be nominated as a regent. Of course, in the meantime the news that one of Wales' younger siblings -a certain Theodore Tudor- had been found killed in his rooms had reached the main continent. Even Albion was going down the path of civil war, and I couldn't help but inwardly shudder as my thoughts had turned into reality.

Starvation had kicked in, the wines had failed, and thus without the wines to sell the nobles didn't have the money to buy food for themselves and their servants from the mainland. Since in this world the concept of humanitarian aid did not exist, the starving people were dying one after the other, and the royalty refused to bend the knee and ask help from other crowns. It would make them look weak, even to their allies.

The proud and strong Albion country was henceforth starting to burn in the names of revolution, and most of the nobles -directly responsible for the troubles themselves in their folly- were playing the game of throwing the blame at the crown's head, with their taxes increased in order to find the money to buy the food to solve the problem.

It was schadenfreude, pure schadenfreude.

And horribly sad.

I blinked as one of the maids that served me coffee had long pink hair. Calmly sipping coffee, I showed no outer sign of having recognized Jeanette for whom she was -even though she looked quite young to be a maid, but with knights of the North Parterre, one could never know.

So, Isabella didn't trust my guards? Oh, alas, the poor dear. No, seriously, I don't need protection with skilled assassins.

The knights that guarded me weren't of the Parterre, admittedly. No, to be more precise, they had renounced the Parterre title to join up under the Night Wind command structure. Honestly, even though I didn't need to make such a ceremony out of it, I had named them out of the four main winds used in my summoning. I had four companies of knights under my employment, the Audri, Sudri, Westri and Nordri knights, while the Gale and Maelstrom divisions were cavalry, and the Thunder and Lightning were musketeer corps.

All in all though, even though I called them divisions, and companies, they totaled a grand number of one thousand troops and some loose spare.

The fun fact was that paying them didn't require me more than seventy thousand ecus a year, and the revenues of the Duchy of Brittany were easily ten times that. Gallia was a rich country, and the army proper could easily reach far, far higher costs. Course, lodging and food came out of my pockets too, so if I made them march, the costs skyrocketed. But if they didn't, then they remained fixed.

Still, as the letters from the nobles that had me as their liege were soon read one after the other, I couldn't help but groan at the sickening amount of ass-licking that came from them. It was obvious that while saying things like I would really enjoy meeting your grace in person! the true reason for it was if I show myself sympathetic, he might cut down my taxes! and the addition of having the best wines, it was clearly a way to entice me.

Unfortunately for them, I had found coffee once more, so the poor substitute that was wine had soon put itself on the shelf.

"Uhm..." I hummed as I opened the letter detailing how much ecus in taxes I would be receiving from the lord overseeing the main port of the region, "St. Mallon's expected port revenue is a bit too low for my tastes," I looked up at the servant to my left. "You, go get me the thick ledger with the words Past revenues written atop it. In my office, on the desk," the servant bowed and swiftly moved to do so.

Meanwhile, I quietly resumed reading the letter. Excuses such as lower trade, increased trouble with black market, smugglers-the usual list of reasons. It was quite the detailed excuse, and it could also be honestly the truth. On the other hand, when you suddenly go from three hundred thousand ecus of expected revenue to merely one hundred and fifty thousand ecus, one needs to check.

"So last year...ah," I tapped my finger, "The entry for the Albion commerce and the tariffs and taxes-I see, a pitfall drop without doubt, even the merchants are wary of going to Albion -no money, no one buys their wealth," I mumbled to myself. "The problems of being an island is that-" I blinked then as I looked at the new year's revenue.

Someone was still doing traffic with Albion, a few loose merchants who sold...

Silk? Ceramics?

"Perhaps this explains the anger of the commoners," I muttered.

A shadow cast itself over me, and as it did, I looked up at Raven who in turn cawed at me flapping his wings. "Good morning!" he cawed, "I love you!"

"Good morning, Raven," I answered with a smile. "Enjoyed a morning flight?"

"Yes!" Raven answered primly, sitting down by my side like an eager dog, but without his tongue out to loll about. I proceeded to scratch the back of his head and grin.

"You have this to deliver," I said, placing a letter from my own pockets inside the pouch around his neck. "It goes to father," I continued. "Meanwhile, have a messenger sent to deliver this letter to the Duke D'Orleans," I remarked, taking another letter and handing it off to the servant by my right, which turned out to be Jeanette, who still dutifully did it. Whether she read it or not was of no importance, since the important thing was that it merely alerted the Duke -or his chamberlain- that I'd be crossing the border near the Ragdorian lake to meet with my father later in the evening.

Although I wouldn't be receiving a reply per time, it didn't really matter. The important thing was to have sent the letter. Theoretically, being a noble of both countries made it possible for me to border cross with impunity, but...asking permission made it look like I wasn't just doing it arrogantly to drive home a point.

Raven rubbed the side of his face against mine, and then hopped a bit away before opening his wings and flying up in the sky, swiftly disappearing from my sight over the horizon.

I sighed, and returned to my duties.

The revenue from the newly minted Count of Nantes had increased, which showed just how much the previous Count had skimmed on his duties, keeping some of the money for himself. The village chief had written a letter claiming everything was fine, and there was no need for a redress situation with the current laws firmly in place.

I had, after all, proclaimed a very problematic, yet largely went by unnoticed, law.

Protestants, Reformed, or whatever-if they're not hurting others, let them believe in the Gods and the Founder however the hell they want to.

This had gone by largely unnoticed because it had been the default reaction of many, but not all. This law didn't change the fundamental religion of the state, it simply allowed the practice of it in whatever ways they saw fit. To be honest, this law didn't grant permission to pray to different gods, or different faiths. It simply allowed one to pray to the Founder and the Gods of the pantheon of Halkeginia in whatever way they saw fit.

If it involved gold, then so be it. If it didn't, then so be it once more.

The Gods being who they were, they'd be the ones to decide who was right and who was wrong in the end.

And then I blinked as I moved on to the next letter of the line.

"New applicants?" I muttered, staring at the long list of names that wished to enroll into the Night Wind army, called officially the Petite Armée on the manifests. The list, truth be told, was long.

What caught my attention was a name amidst the commoners' recruits.

Most definitely, I had opened up my recruitment to people from all countries, as long as they swore fealty to the crown.

I had not expected Agnes to try to enlist in my army.

There even was a small note on the side of the paper from the recruitment officer. Though she is female, she has passed all of the requirements. What to do, your grace?

What stupidity are you saying, recruitment officer?

Recruit her. Recruit. Them. All.
 
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The fact that Isabella is clearly intelligent makes her affection and concern for Henry that much sweeter, if not as competently handled as he himself would have done.

And Agnes? Now there's opportunity indeed.
 
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