Confringentur 3; a Madoka Magica / Fate/Stay Night 3quel

Day 8 Chapter 27 New
[X] Plan: What The Hell, Girl?



Once you've finished giving those two crooked cops the illusion of choice, they agree to your terms, and you send them on their way. Unfortunately, you're still left with the stylist – who saw everything and is currently still only halfway through cutting Tomoe's hair – and the receptionist who called the cops on you in the first place. You sigh, and fall back into the chair you had claimed earlier. "Why can't things just go easy on me, for once?"

"I apologise, Archer," Tomoe says. "This is my fault. Had I left when it seemed like the receptionist was being cagey about our presence, we never would have found ourselves in this mess to begin with."

"Tomoe, the only thing you're at fault for is snapping before I had the chance to," you say. It's hardly anything to fault her for. You were trying to keep your cool, even after those bastards said those awful things about Minako and threatened to sell your daughters. "Frankly, even still I'm glad you did. Those bastards had it coming once they brought Minako and the girls into it."

Tomoe's hair stylist is still standing there, slack-jawed and stunned speechless at everything he's just borne witness to. You've got to do something. But more importantly, you've got to do something about the receptionist first. "Listen," you say to the stylist as you fish a ten-thousand Yen note from your wallet. "Finish cutting my daughter's friend's hair and this whole thing's yours." You hand the man the note without a second thought. "You deserve it after the shit you just had to see."

"I…" The stylist, still stunned, has little choice but to accept the note you've just offered him. "Thank you, sir. I… I'll do my best to forget I saw anything."

"That's a good man," you say to yourself as you advance on the receptionist. You'll make sure he forgets everything, but unlike his co-worker you'll let him down gently. He's done nothing wrong. "Hi there." The friendly gesture is laden with poison. "So… Do you mind telling me what that was all about?"

"I don't know what you're talking about," the receptionist insists. "I didn't see anything."

"Like hell you didn't." You aren't playing around now. Those cops threatened your wife and daughters. Cops who were very open about their Yakuza affiliation threatened your wife and daughters. "I can understand being nervous in your position: What if I really were someone dangerous and the girl I brought with me weren't my daughter's friend? Considering the position this city is in, I can understand why you'd have acted the way you did." "So then what's your problem?" you can almost hear the receptionist mumbling. That's not good enough. "The problem, ma'am, is that the cops in this city are on the Yakuza's payroll." You'll take great pleasure in breaking her blind loyalty to a police force that doesn't deserve it in this city. "That's right, the same cops who are supposed to protect this city from the kidnappers and abductors are on the payroll of the very same."

"I… I didn't know…" the receptionist mumbles. "I just thought that-"

"No, no, you thought rightly, at least for your position," you say. "You had no way of knowing that the cops are corrupt in this city. But I do; and those two cops you called on me just so happened to threaten my wife and my two daughters, so I'm not exactly in the most agreeable mood right now." The receptionist tries to shrink down in her seat, but you won't let her. "So, here's how things are going to play out," you say, seeding your words with a spell of command. "You're going to tell me where the security cameras are in this place. I'm going to wipe any evidence from them that the police were here. Then when I'm done, you are going to forget that my daughter's friend and I were ever here. Understand?"

Shakily, the receptionist nods her head, and points you to a back door you had overlooked. "The cameras are hooked up to a laptop in the closet over there," she says. "I know it's not the safest solution, but we're small. We can't really afford a lot better than that."

It's better than nothing. Fortunately, you're better with technology than Rin is, or you'd be completely screwed. Growing up in the modern era does have its benefits, after all… "Now, let's see…" The easy part is going to be deleting just the footage of the cops. The hard part is going to be making it look afterwards as though the video has never been tampered with. You can do the former, but you wager you'd need to be a certain kind of mage proficient with video editing software to make the latter go as seamlessly as you'd like. As it stands, while you're able to get a pretty good approximation of a job well done, someone with a more careful eye and a more technically proficient hand would still be able to identify where you've altered the footage.

But it's the best you're going to be able to do with the limited time you have, so it'll have to do. You close the laptop and head out, ready to- "Tomoe, are you almost finished?" You have to stop yourself when you see the work the hair stylist has done.

"It… Might be a little shorter than you were hoping for," the stylist says to Tomoe as he holds up a mirror for her. "Some of those cuts were quite jagged, so I had to take a bit more off than I anticipated in order to level everything out. But, I hope you like it."

With a stiff hand, Tomoe reaches up to brush her fingers over her new, shorter, hair. "It's lovely," she says. "It's definitely not a style I would have gone for if the choice had been mine, but now that I'm seeing it…" You see a faint smile grace Tomoe's lips, and she says "Now that I'm seeing it I find myself wondering why I never tried cutting my hair this short before."

"I'm glad you like it, miss," the stylist says, brightly smiling as though he's just seen the sun for the first time in forever. "For what it's worth, I'm terribly sorry that our receptionist called the police on your gentleman friend. I've got two young daughters myself, and hearing them talk like that left a sour taste in my mouth. Even if I… Don't understand entirely what happened, I'm grateful to you for shutting them up."

It almost hurts, but you make sure to leave that man's smile intact as you erase his memories of tonight's encounter. Doing that to a fellow parent… You hate making him forget that there are people out there who are trying to make the city a safer place for his daughters. But you know you have to. Too many people know of magic's existence in this city. You can't put any more lives at risk by leaving someone you have absolutely no connection to unturned. So, as much as it hurts, you're forced to wipe that man's memories so he can go home to his wife and daughters and not put them at risk. "Come on," you say to Tomoe as you finish up. "Let's get you home."

Getting Tomoe home is the easy part. Having to face Minako and explain to her what happened when you had to cut her off is going to be another thing all together. You wait until your shoes are off and you've locked the door behind you before giving an "I'm home," to Minako.

"Archer?" She sounds as worried as she looks. "Archer, what's the matter? Why'd you have to hang up on me so suddenly? Did something happen?" No sooner have the words left her mouth, than it's as though she already knows the truth. "Whatever happened… How bad was it?"

"On a scale of one to ten?" It's a rhetorical question. "I've had worse, overall, but it's…" This time it's different. This time, it hit you that close to your home. It's rare that whatever is causing trouble hits you that close to home, but somehow you've managed to line up two such instances in the span of one week. "The receptionist at the place I took Tomoe to get her hair cut called the cops on us," you say. "I can't say I blame her. From her position, I'm a total stranger escorting a young, vulnerable-looking girl in the middle of the night. She doesn't know who I am or what I'm up to, but she thinks she's doing the right thing…" You sigh, reluctant to relive the experience. "Unfortunately, the cops who arrived were Yakuza flunkies, something I didn't realise when I handed them my phone so they could call you to verify my identity."

"What happened." It's not a question, and you know it's not a question. "Archer, what happened?"

"Instead of calling you," you say, "They took one look at my home screen and started talking about selling Homura and Kirika." That was after making tons of unnecessarily promiscuous accusations about Minako, but really, it's the fact that they talked about selling your daughters that you know Minako will care more about. "If Tomoe hadn't been there to take them down first, I might have…"

"You should have." You don't know when you and Minako pulled each other into the other's arms. It just happened, somewhere in all the worry. "If you didn't… If Tomoe didn't… I would have, Archer. I don't care what that would have done to me, nobody threatens my babies and gets away with it. I've thrown away my life for Kirika's sake once before, and I'd damn well do it again if it meant putting a pair of bastard cops in a shallow grave for thinking they could talk that way about my girls."

"It was unhealthy the first time you threw your life away for Kirika's sake," you say to Minako as you pull her in tighter. "I'd hate to see you do it again, no matter how badly they'd have deserved it. Besides, if you went to jail, who'd be there to make sure our girls had a mother?"

You're glad that, in spite of what you've just told Minako, she can still find it in herself to laugh as she says "Well, if anything ever happened to me, I'm sure Kirika would happy to see you and Caren get together." You find the thought repulsive, even more so when you remember how frequently Caren talks about that time she was intimate with All The World's Evils. While he was wearing your face, no less. "At least then she and Oriko would have a reason to go back to living together…"

"Minako, please don't ever talk like that again." The real reason is because you can't stomach the thought of being intimate with Caren Ortensia, but you'll pretend for Minako's sake that it's because "I don't want to have to think about what would happen to our family without you." That is another real reason you don't want to think about it. But not wanting to think about being intimate with Caren Ortensia is just more immediate.

But, something you will have to think about is what to do with the remaining Yakuza and with the corrupt members of the city's police force. Causing operational disruptions like you had been has only worked out so much, and with the revelation that the captain of the city's gang violence unit has been throwing out arrests of Yakuza members left and right, you're doubtful it's even done the little you'd thought it was doing. Then there's the rest of the crooked cops in this city, of which there are apparently more than you'd bargained for. Homura's contact in the force only tipped her off regarding a few police captains and maybe the city's police commissioner, but digging through the gang violence captain's office you found records of several other officers in his unit also being on the take. Then there's crooked beat cops, and probably more than just the one crooked koban sergeant you found last week…

You don't want to be thinking this, but your current methods haven't worked to root out the problem nearly as well as you'd first thought. Causing chaos isn't good enough. You need to make examples of the people in the wrong. But, what sort of danger would you be putting the rest o the city in by calling out the corruption and making its knowledge publically-known? Mitakihara is already on thin ice, can you really afford to adopt such a drastic tactic? You know you've compared yourself to Batman before in jest, but what would Batman do in this situation? Bruce Wayne had to root out corruption in Gotham's police force as well, but real life isn't like in the comic books, and Batman never had to deal with a society of mages waiting to doomsday the entire city for revealing one too many of their secrets.

[ ] What should you do?
-[ ] Call Homura* and Kirika and make sure they're both safe
-[ ] Go over to Tomoe's apartment and confront Caster about why he didn't keep his master safe tonight
-[ ] Develop a more in-depth plan for making an example of the Yakuza and the corrupt police
-[ ] Take Minako to bed and make sure yourself that she's safe
-[ ] Other (write-in)

[Homura] (choose only if * was chosen)
-[ ] How do you think Madoka is coming with her lesson?
-[ ] Did Archer tell you what happened to him and Tomoe tonight? (write-in yes/no)
-[ ] After you're done sitting in on Madoka's lesson, do you
--[ ] Call your contact in the police and ask him what he knows about corruption among street-level cops
--[ ] Go for a walk and try to run into some corrupt cops yourself: maybe you can scare them into submission like your other contact
--[ ] Head back to Tomoe's building without going out and doing anything else
---[ ] Go straight to your parents and reassure them that you're still safe
---[ ] Pay Tomoe a visit and check in with her before going back to your parents
---[ ] Pay Matou Sakura a visit and see how her work is coming along
-[ ] Other (write-in)
 
What would all of you like to see from a fight with Kim?
and to not involve a lot of chess-piecing (I.E, I don't want to have to do a lot of micromanaging)

To add to this, with me bullish on using familiars more as one of the more practical Grief abilities Homura has, with the whole rather large team participating and maybe even Sakura and Medusa getting involved, I expect us to take more of a high-level commanding role, possibly even delegating some responsibilities, say, to Mami.

And a fun part will be preserving Kim for our bargain with Touko. That reminds me, we are still yet to field test how we're doing it.
 
All right, hopefully that about covers the important stuff from the last vote. There's still Homura's lesson with Madoka that I've been putting off writing for, but I thought this was the more interesting tangent to walk down, and as payment for putting up with my constant delays I've tried to give us a bit more things to do in Homura's perspective, should we choose to follow them. If not, and you'd prefer we choose to have Archer fade to black, I can always address them tomorrow when we're back in Homura's perspective. But if not, maybe we'll see something interesting in Homura's selection of choices and latch onto that. Who knows?

And a fun part will be preserving Kim for our bargain with Touko. That reminds me, we are still yet to field test how we're doing it.
Ah, yes, thank you for reminding me. I had completely forgotten that part. I believe Archer got confirmation from Touko that deep-freezing wouldn't hurt the puppets she's restoring, but we should think of a way to test the same for preserving a live subject as well. But, how would we go about doing that? What's the safest path to success?
 
Ah, yes, thank you for reminding me. I had completely forgotten that part. I believe Archer got confirmation from Touko that deep-freezing wouldn't hurt the puppets she's restoring, but we should think of a way to test the same for preserving a live subject as well. But, how would we go about doing that? What's the safest path to success?

I think it was downgraded to a backup plan, with Plan A being Lancer (or possibly Assassin, but preferably not, for obvious reasons) using her actual proficiency in the stasis application of Isa. So the field testing I mentioned was about that, attempting to completely suspend a target in time, see how well and for how long it holds, how mana-costly it is. If these results are unsatisfactory, then we begin planning for experimenting with deep-freezing.
 
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Ah, now that is a bit unfortunate, because I actually think it's the final fight with Kim that would make for a more interesting long-form combat than the final fight against Franziska. There's just more space to explore the ways his abilities would make combat interesting beyond merely "Big number hit hard" and that would probably involve more puzzle aspects to it than Franziska's fight would. What about literal chess pieces?
...Perhaps? Ultimately, you know best about how the fight would best go down, so if you think a fight like that would work then I say go for it. I am just trying to avoid some of the pitfalls Sidonia had. Literal chess pieces sure; it might be better since we only have to manage 14~ people this time (depending on if we leave anyone behind as rearguard or not), I'm just scared of large-scale managing after Sidonia totally blew all of my steam out the gate from having to figure out the positioning and general abilities and combat roles of 30~ people.

Now that I think about it, the final team back in 2 was pretty damn big, wasn't it?
 
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I am just trying to avoid some of the pitfalls Sidonia had.
With Sidonia it was quite literally a war of annihilation, and I'm not sure how better it could have been handled for the time in which it was handled and the mental space we were all in at the time. Maybe now I could have figured something better for her, but I distinctly remember wanting to do something other than "Big number hit hard" and you were the one who said you enjoyed the puzzle and strategy aspects more than "Big number hit hard". Obviously our exact numbers are dependent on who we actually bring with us, but we're not fielding a 30+ man team against a literal army this time, so even if I get a bit complicated with the game plan there won't be as many pieces to keep track of.

No, what I'm more concerned with is getting players to engage with the fight on its own terms, rather than trying to brute-force a "Big number hit hard" style of encounter, because I think it would be more fun for players to engage with the combat in less obvious ways.
 
[X] Plan: Over-the-Phone Check-In
-[X] What should you do?
--[X] Call Homura* and Kirika and make sure they're both safe
--[X] For Homura:
--[X] How do you think Madoka is coming with her lesson?
---[X] Well, you think it's going nice, and you'd like it to be going nice, but you'll admit your bias.
--[X] Did Archer tell you what happened to him and Tomoe tonight? (write-in yes/no)
---[X] Yes
--[X] After you're done sitting in on Madoka's lesson, do you
---[X] Call your contact in the police and ask him what he knows about corruption among street-level cops


Did what I think I could. Not sure if:
-[ ] How do you think Madoka is coming with her lesson?
is a question for us, or a thing to see how Madoka and Assassin rolled. If more clarification is necessary, I can provide.
 
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is a question for us, or a thing to see how Madoka and Assassin rolled. If more clarification is necessary, I can provide.
It was meant to be some sort of hybrid "How do we think the lesson is coming along"/"How do we want the lesson to be going?" thing, but the first part is kind of hard if we don't know how Madoka and Assassin rolled for their lesson, and the latter just kind of smacks of "Well, we can just tell SVS that the lesson went great and we'll be good". So, I don't know. Use it at your own discretion with the knowledge that it was half-bad to begin with.
 
It was meant to be some sort of hybrid "How do we think the lesson is coming along"/"How do we want the lesson to be going?" thing, but the first part is kind of hard if we don't know how Madoka and Assassin rolled for their lesson, and the latter just kind of smacks of "Well, we can just tell SVS that the lesson went great and we'll be good". So, I don't know. Use it at your own discretion with the knowledge that it was half-bad to begin with.
Alright then, tried my best to incorporate it. Thanks for the clarification!
 
So, what's up? Would we all be more engaged if today were over? What are our plans for tomorrow? And, do we want to let Mami try her hand at going back to school, or do we force her to stay home until she's recovered fully?
 
So, what's up? Would we all be more engaged if today were over? What are our plans for tomorrow? And, do we want to let Mami try her hand at going back to school, or do we force her to stay home until she's recovered fully?
In order; mental health still on the low and I got busy today on top of wanting to focus on other creative endeavors so brainpower's running low. I think today being over would be good, given the supposed time of night in-story, unless our characters are able to squeeze out more action (did Kyouko get some usage from Uruz? That was voted for, but I don't remember if it went through). As for tomorrow, I mostly planned on having Archer beat up cops and otherwise seeing if we can bump up Hitomi's survivability; maybe we can have Archer make some swords for her, but we'd have to ensure that they aren't somehow stolen, so that Kim can't pull a Sidonia (I might be able to find a mythological sword that could work for something like that, gimme a bit). As for Mami, damaging to her reputation though it may be, I figure at least taking a day so that her wounds become less severe would be a good idea.
 
did Kyouko get some usage from Uruz? That was voted for, but I don't remember if it went through
Uh, shit, no clue. I think there might have been a period where we didn't have eyes on Kyouko (might have been when she was with Mami at some point?) where I suppose it could be implied that it went through, but honestly I can't remember. I should remember seeing as it was only a few updates ago.
but we'd have to ensure that they aren't somehow stolen, so that Kim can't pull a Sidonia
While a valiant suggestion, I don't think Kim has any plans to commit total muggle genocide. I mean, if he did who would there be to experiment on? Who would there be to make Pinocchio remakes?
Mami stays home, I think. Not sure about any of your other questions.
As for Mami, damaging to her reputation though it may be, I figure at least taking a day so that her wounds become less severe would be a good idea.
Just for the one day? Or do we want to keep her home until she's feeling 100% again? Maybe I should put in the works an omake from Minako's perspective of her watching over Mami while she's working from home?

And speaking of Minako, how long does it take a city's municipal crew to fix a broken water main? I ask because the real-life broken water main that happened at my job that inspired the incident is still being worked on, and it's been what, two months now? However long ago it was that I wrote that, because I wrote it pretty closely after the incident in question.
 
Just for the one day? Or do we want to keep her home until she's feeling 100% again? Maybe I should put in the works an omake from Minako's perspective of her watching over Mami while she's working from home?
I think for a day or two, or at least until she can slot back into her body without instantly feeling the weight of brain and nerve damage.

And speaking of Minako, how long does it take a city's municipal crew to fix a broken water main? I ask because the real-life broken water main that happened at my job that inspired the incident is still being worked on, and it's been what, two months now? However long ago it was that I wrote that, because I wrote it pretty closely after the incident in question.
Sources say from hours to days, so I have no idea what the hell's happening over there.
 
Sources say from hours to days, so I have no idea what the hell's happening over there.
I imagine it would take even longer in quest considering the city is kind of a mess right now.
Well, we did find a Drekavac down there. Imagining there's more of them, and they could be picking off crewmen when the rest of the work crew isn't around to watch. Even if there aren't, the workmen could just be getting the heebie-jeebies from being in such close proximity to the old Drekavac tunnels.

If you're talking about at my job, then I don't know what's going on either. But the street where the main broke has been blocked off for forever and I still see trucks coming in carrying piping, so I don't know what's taking them so damn long. At least we've got running water in the building.
 
If you're talking about at my job, then I don't know what's going on either. But the street where the main broke has been blocked off for forever and I still see trucks coming in carrying piping, so I don't know what's taking them so damn long. At least we've got running water in the building.

Hmm. In that case, they might have found additional damage down there when they went to fix the water main and are working on that now before it becomes a problem later?
 
[X] Plan: Over-the-Phone Check-In

And speaking of Minako, how long does it take a city's municipal crew to fix a broken water main?

There was an amusing contrast a few years back, when I was less of a recluse. In the city where my work was, there was a utility problem near that work, and it went on, and on, and on, for weeks. At some brief point my home in another city experienced the same problem, and it appeared and went away in one twenty-four-hour cycle of non-stop-work by the emergency services. What I mean to say is that it greatly depends.
 
There was an amusing contrast a few years back, when I was less of a recluse. In the city where my work was, there was a utility problem near that work, and it went on, and on, and on, for weeks. At some brief point my home in another city experienced the same problem, and it appeared and went away in one twenty-four-hour cycle of non-stop-work by the emergency services. What I mean to say is that it greatly depends.
I don't know why, but every single time my house loses power, it's always, without fail, after 3 in the afternoon. No matter the reason: thunderstorm, ice and snow on the power lines, a fallen tree branch, strong winds, etc... There has not been a single time in my entire life when, if we've lost power at my house, it has happened before 3 in the afternoon. Fucking wild, actually.

Not really related to what you were saying. Just made me think of how wild that is.
 
All right, update is almost done, but looking at my schedule it's probably going to be delayed regardless. Hopefully there's something that can kill these last four posts while you all wait. I'll get us started:
Why didn't we just give Sidonia some pretzels?
 
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Well, they are stress and anger issues, not anxiety. What food do you use for those? Baked potatoes?
Definitely a comfort food of some kind, but in Sidonia's corner of Europe potatoes weren't really eaten as a staple crop until the 1700s. So that rules out baked and mashed potatoes, as well as pierogis with potato filling. I'd guess something warm and hearty and something she'd be familiar with, maybe bigos stew and spaetzle au gratin with some pierniki for dessert. But then we're just cooking whole meals for her and hoping she doesn't kill us all afterwards.
 
Definitely a comfort food of some kind, but in Sidonia's corner of Europe potatoes weren't really eaten as a staple crop until the 1700s. So that rules out baked and mashed potatoes, as well as pierogis with potato filling. I'd guess something warm and hearty and something she'd be familiar with, maybe bigos stew and spaetzle au gratin with some pierniki for dessert. But then we're just cooking whole meals for her and hoping she doesn't kill us all afterwards.
While not a snack, maybe we can do a kebab, then? Customizable ingredients, and we can huck it like a javelin at her mouth to get over the time limitations.

Sorry I'm not much of help, and cannot provide such a dish. As an Idahoan with German and Irish in me, I am only capable of cooking potato-based meals, but gain a bonus to potato cooking and a +5% bonus to all stats when wearing tacky camo jackets with khakis.
 
While not a snack, maybe we can do a kebab, then? Customizable ingredients, and we can huck it like a javelin at her mouth to get over the time limitations.

Sorry I'm not much of help, and cannot provide such a dish. As an Idahoan with German and Irish in me, I am only capable of cooking potato-based meals, but gain a bonus to potato cooking and a +5% bonus to all stats when wearing tacky camo jackets with khakis.
Well, maybe we should have just set her up with someone who can cook. I hear there's a spare Archer hanging around somewhere that no one is using.
 
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