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[X] Yeah, it hurts…
After only a few minutes of testing(and some quick searches on your phone) you figure out how it operates.
Oh my god the research list, it's real...Well, that's fine. You have some things you'd like to research on this phone of yours. Quickly, your searches turn to those weird feelings you've been having lately. 'Masochism'? It's definition is close… but you mainly feel this way about battle injuries, certainly nothing sexual.
Well, if ANY of our checks were to fail, I'd think I would take stuff like this Everytime.<Composure[Easy:Failed] Easy: 8 vs Your Total: 5(Roll: 3 + Composure: 2)> Damn it, why does she have to be so pretty?
Skills flowed a bit easier this time, especially for that last section, though I'm not certain if I quite got the correct point across. I honestly can't think of much to say(which I feel like I say a lot in these 'rambling' notes). Ignoring the end, I think the first Off-Hours/free time went well enough. Normally I would have an End-of-Day Debrief after free time, but I think I'll leave that for next time. I'm interested to see how people feel about this chapter, though.
<Electrochemistry[Medium:Success] Medium: 10 vs Your Total: 11> Suggest sharing a bed, with a wink and a smirk.
<Volition[Easy:Success] Easy: 8 vs Your Total:9> Don't.
I second this. A bit of Drama interjecting into Stelle's flirting attempts could work too, they can ramble on in a very different way to encyclopedia sometimes.I really liked it! I think you did a good job with the intrusive thoughts and sensory information and overall it flowed pretty well. The skills actually talking to each other is nice.
One thing I noticed is that the skills as you are writing them generally don't say more than a sentence or two at once. I don't consider this a problem, maybe big paragraphs don't suit the situation or Stelle or your writing style, but it's something to keep in mind because some of Harry's skill could be pretty long-winded. Encyclopedia infamously can blather on about topics for a dozen paragraphs, Shivers has pages and pages of things to say, and Inland Empire will straight up make inanimate objects into full-blown conversations like the ugly tie or the corpse.
Speaking of Inland Empire, I feel like it should have some things to say about the Stellaron inside Stelle. Maybe later.
Anyways:
[X] Yeah, it hurts…
I feel like Stelle would be inclined to confront this.
We need a "compromised" reaction from Volition later. If you've played Disco Elysium, you know.Speaking of Kafka, I think she did plant some mental compulsions into Stelle using her powers.
Oh Stelle is gonna enjoy the spiked tea on the Luofu.<Electrochemistry[Medium:Success] Medium: 10 vs Your Total: 11> Oh, you most certainly would. Even if you were to ignore the incredibly beautiful woman you'd be sharing it with -which you shouldn't- that sweet sweet caffeine would already make it worth it.
"Yeah, that sounds nice." You can't actually remember having coffee, but if Electrochemistry is so excited, you must have liked it.