YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED

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A remake of another story of mine. Self-insert, crossover with Exalted 3° edition.

A soul is cast off to the world of WORM. Empowered by the Unconquered Sun, this lone soul is tasked with fixing the problem about the Entities.
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YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes: This is a rewrite of my story "You are Exalted!".

A big Thank You to my Beta, SwiftBlizz.

The character is again a pseudo-self-insert sent into the Worm setting as a Solar Exalt. I WILL be using the Exalted 3° edition for the background of the powers.

Well… I must confess that I was tempted to have a truly OP character by using a few loopholes from the various WORM CYOAs existing. But frankly...

It wouldn't make a good story. You can like and write a curb stomp, but where is the interest? It's funny to write those as an Omake but as a whole story…

No, better to test my imagination and writer's skills as I try to not kill my character after a few chapters. Meh, Plot Armor, subtle or not, is almost a given concerning a story you're writing.

I'm still using inspiration from all the versions of WORM CYOA, especially the versions 3 and 6… Which means that my character will be a little OP… At least I'm not putting all five castes into one package.

Prologue:

Two beings spiral through the starry void. As they approach their chosen world, they shatter, and countless shards seed that world and its alternates, taking root in the minds of the desperate and the broken, giving them power beyond mere humanity, at the cost of constant conflict.

The beings have done this countless times; the cycle is older than our species. But all things must end. Something goes wrong, a dark stranger, another entity intervenes, and one being falls. Its mate remains, much reduced and bereft of all purpose.


Baran Sunheart sighed. A constant challenge for the fiction writers of WORM on a certain internet forum. Imagination was infinite, but after a time, some things appeared… a little redundant… Repetitive.

He snorted. As if he could say he did not plagiarize plenty of original texts, mixed with inspirations from other media before writing a fanfiction. His computer pinged as someone posted an answer to his critics… No, let us truly call them his whining.

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Not a fan of those kinds of challenges?"

Baran Sunheart: "Oh, it's not that. My muse seems to be indisposed for the moment."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Even with all the versions of WORM CYOAs?"

Baran Sunheart: "I have some ideas, but it's rather irritating to put them properly within the limited frame of a CYOA."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Ah, the old "too many choices and not enough points". Well, this is a forum where we put our ideas and our interpretations of settings and situations. Just write them down, maybe it will help."

He shrugged. Robin wasn't wrong.

Baran Sunheart: "Well, two main ideas for two stories. One is about a fully-oriented "Cat-girl" built with all the bells and whistles. Biological aptitudes, Egyptian divine powers, and martial arts (Nekoken perhaps?). The other is to rewrite my old story about an SI Solar Exalt (Eclipse caste) sent to Earth Bet as I realized that I put too much focus on the mechanics of the game's 2° edition. Most notably the error of trying to bring the whole shenanigan about the spirits, elements, and gods. The narrative quality of the 3° edition seems better."

The middle-aged man chuckled. Well, what do you know? He was really feeling his muse stirring within his mind and soul. He maybe had enough creative juice to put down one or two chapters for each story. At least he could write some background on his current Ideas Notebook.

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "What is it with you and cat-girls? Your current favorite Waifus aren't even cat-girls. Still… Cat-girl and Eclipse Exalt, huh? Why not combine the two?"

Baran hummed as he pondered on that. A Solar Exalt Cat-girl… It would introduce a Case 53 with mysterious evolving powers in WORM but…

Baran Sunheart: "What about the traditional problems? The character would need a way to gain new powers, a little like the various Celestial Forge stories. There's also the trouble with precogs/analysts, Cauldron, and one-shot-one-kill antagonists."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Why should you care about them? Most perks dealing with that are gigantic Plot Holes. Being "Blank" just because the Simurgh would atomize you at the beginning? Fuck that! As a Solar, your character is already an "out-of-context" anomaly. They can't truly be evaluated except by direct observation, and even then the observer cannot completely understand them."

Baran Sunheart: "It would also introduce too many things. Too many sidetracks and ideas to explore."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "I'm afraid that your problem as an author. If you lose your way during a story… Well, you're doing a rewrite of "You are Exalted!", right? We can assume that you want your character to deal with Earth Bet problems. How?"

Baran Sunheart: "In my initial story, I wanted to use "The Mysterious Cities of Gold" as the basis of a wondrous adventure. The character would have dealt with the initial troubles in Brockton Bay (Coil and the gangs, the financial situation of the town, and whatnot) before traveling around the world to deal with the rest while creating some sort of nation (raising Atlantis from the ocean like in the Palladium game "RIFTS" or something easier like making an entirely artificial island) and then annihilate Scion (and probably the whole Entity species) in an Epic duel."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Then do so. In fact, I'm going to help you a little with just a "nudge". First things first. Can you tell me the concept of your character?"

Baran Sunheart: "Myself in the body of one of my favorite anime female characters. The Unconquered Sun would tell me: 'This universe is broken. Fix it.'"

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Okay… So, female, beautiful, and young. Now, about the attributes. Your choices for the primary, secondary, and tertiary?"

Baran Sunheart: "Well, she's an Eclipse Martial Artist… Let's say primary Physical, secondary Social, and tertiary Mental."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Hum… I'm putting one or two free dots in each category. Strength 3, Dexterity 5, and Stamina 4. Charisma 4, Manipulation 2, and Appearance 4. Perception 3, Intelligence 3, and Wits 3. Now, your caste and favored abilities."

Baran Sunheart: "Caste: bureaucracy, linguistics, occult, ride, and socialize. Favored: Brawl, lore, craft, melee, and medicine. Supernal should be Martial Art."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "To simplify and avoid something too OP or too focused since your character is solo, let's say that you have the minimal level in all the 25 abilities for taking the charms that have no requirement. It is 77 points for all that. You won't have to buy separate abilities for martial arts and crafting, just different specialties. Choose 4 specialties, even modern ones, one free craft, and one free martial art."

Baran Sunheart: "I'm playing myself, so computers (Lore specialty) or driving (for the modern ground vehicles so a Sail specialty), first aid (medicine) or firearms (archery), craft artifact (free), 2 crafting specialties adapted to where the character will first appear, and Golden Janissary style (free)."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "I'll let you keep the 2 supplementary specialties. Now, since you're taking Martial Artist, you have 6 points of Merit left."

Baran Sunheart: "Danger sense (3 points), direction sense (1 point), and eidetic memory (2 points)."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Innate merits only and no artifacts, familiars or a demesne/manse? Hum… I can give you ambidextrous (2 points), natural immunity (2 points), and selective conception (1 point) for free. No flaws, right? I'm also giving you a Willpower of 7 for the beginning. Now, you just have to choose your 15 charms. Remember that except for martial arts, all must be charms without a requirement."

Baran sighed. That was going to be difficult. He couldn't really take his favorite approach of the Jack-of-all-trades. Still, perhaps 5 to 7 charms in martial arts and brawl, 3 to 4 in caste/favored charms, and 2 to 3 charms outside.

Baran Sunheart: "No flaws, thank you. Unless you count being 10 to 12 years old as a flaw. Golden Janissary style: Where-Is-Doom Inquisition, Rotten Leaf Arrested, Cleansing Flame Strike, and Golden Janissary Form (the latter if you authorize Martial Arts 4). Awareness: Sensory Acuity Prana. Brawl: Fist of Iron Technique and Thunderclap Rush Attack. Craft: Craftsman Need no Tools. Lore: Harmonious Academic Methodology. Occult: Terrestrial Circle Sorcery (control spell will depend on the arrival point). Presence: Harmonious Presence Meditation. Resistance: Ox-Body Technique. Sail: Salty Dog Method. Survival: Food-Gathering Exercise and Hardship-Surviving Mendicant Spirit."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "No purely defensive charms? True, the first steps for your character in 'You are exalted!' were more about pure survival than fighting for her life or talking her way out of a bad situation."

Baran Sunheart: "Well, I have Excellencies in awareness, bureaucracy, linguistics, occult, presence, resistance, ride, sail, socialize, brawl, lore, craft, melee, martial art, medicine, and survival. I'll just have to take one charm in the future in the relevant abilities."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Hum… No. I will give you 5 free charms like for an experienced Solar but staying at Essence 1. Let's say... Dodge: Reed in the Wind and Drifting Leaf Elusion. Integrity: Enduring Mental Toughness. Athletics: Graceful Crane Stance and Monkey Leap Technique. Which, of course, will give you Excellencies in those 3 abilities. Now, I just need your character's initial intimacies to finish the sheet. Oh, and also the potential Limit Trigger as I suppose you want an unconscious geas to simulate the Great Curse."

Baran Sunheart: "Only a limited geas. I want a diluted version of the Curse that the character should be able to partially control or guide so that observers would think it's the trauma of a Parahuman Trigger Event. It should be when the character sees innocents suffering and is either unable or unwilling to help them. As for Intimacies: Defining Principle (Protect Humanity while keeping the human aspect and not making them dependent). Major principle (my word is my life). Major tie (protagonists and antagonists of WORM the web novel, to help or hinder/eliminate depending on whom). Major principle (I hate slavery in all its forms). Minor tie (Small obsession about tea)."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Help or hinder/eliminate?"

Baran Sunheart: "I just want to strangle Coil, slap Alexandria, kick Eidolon in the nuts, and look into the lifeless eyes of Jack's head while waving at him. Oh, and hug a few teenagers here and there."

Robin the Overlord of Beasts: "Ah… Okay… Well, the sheet is finished except for a few little details, but I'll take care of it during your transfer. Brace yourself."

Baran Sunheart blinked at his computer screen and then there was a silent explosion of light.

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Notes: Okay. As you just read, this is a rewrite of my old story "You are Exalted!"

And I'm sure you saw my little Easter Egg… Like Truck-Kun speeding in your direction.

I'm trying to stay within the 3° edition of the game and, already, I have some problems. I'm not going to use the needed separate abilities for Craft and Martial Arts. I will use the Specialty rule instead (it's mainly to simplify things).

I'm also not using the Cat-girl idea. It was just an example of the myriad of story ideas in my head. Version 6 of the Worm Cyoa has plenty of choices about that, but I feel that it's worthy of being its own story… Much later though.

So, a Solar Exalt, Eclipse caste, and is inspired by the anime "The Mysterious Cities of Gold".

I'm still unsure about my Supernal Ability… It should be something that the character will be recognized worldwide for. Worm is about Power and PR manipulation and thus it doesn't need more of that. Crafting seems good, but there are plenty of stories about Tinker and Super-Inventor/Inspired Inventor. So far, I'm choosing Martial Arts as the supernal ability of my character.

While I'm not going to describe the Charms like something from the Web comic "Keychain of Creation", the character is going to receive Exp points at each chapter (Omake, side-stories, and Apocrypha by others included). At least the 5 standard points plus the readers can make a post to give 0 to 4 supplementary Solar points according to how they appreciated the chapter.

Regarding "Keychain of Creation" I may make the character scream the names of the charms because it's in the genre (anime at least)… and funny. Shouting "FISTS OF IRON TECHNIQUE!" as you're remodeling the face of your adversary is funny… for you.

And, yes. This prologue counts as a chapter so I have already 5 Exp points plus whatever you'll post. You can make suggestions, but I would wait for the first chapter to have a proper idea of the character's situation.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 1: Why is it always water?
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes: I am rusty. Very rusty. At least I have some creative juice from my muse. Let us hope it will last at least a dozen chapters… At least, I did less spelling and grammatical errors before my Beta edit this chapter.

One point: My work load has increased so updates should be slow depending on the work situation. Sorry about that.

So, another stone to my story. I kept how my character came into being on Earth Bet from "You are Exalted!" with better descriptions and a few supplementary things.

I think I can use a few of the scenarios in the Version 6 of Worm CYOA. Not too sure, but I'll try.

Thank You to my Beta, SwiftBlizz.

Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 1: Why is it always water?

July 22, 2009. Madison, Wisconsin.

The Endbringer known as the Simurgh unfolded her wings as she continued on her plan. Well, plans would be a better name for the quasi-three-dimensional canvas she was using with her quantum perception of Earth Bet and its variants.

Her senses were beyond what Humanity could do presently. She could experience the past as easily as one would read a book in one's hands and she sensed the future as a myriad of potentialities and probabilities.

True, she was incapable of grasping the present instant, but the simplest waving from one of her multiple asymmetrical wings could make a mother plunge a knife into her newborn baby years into the future.

Her screeching "song" wasn't a sound but a by-product of a macro-scale telekinetic field applying a localized micro-effect into the nerve tissues of every sentient being within a mile.

By using her post-cognition coupled with her precognition, she could brainwash a human being into a living Rube-Goldberg device capable of long-term destructive actions.

The fate of Doctor Alan Gramme aka Sphere turned into the sinister Mannequin was also proof that she could manipulate indirectly people, changing them into her puppets. Even her anonymous internet "trolling" was just a tool to affect Humanity as a whole.

Even her so-called telepathy was merely an artifice. She couldn't really read thoughts, but she could analyze the biological mechanisms of a brain and deduce what it was thinking via post and precognition. As for reading the thought of nearby Tinkers and making Tinkertech, she was merely linking with the Host's Shard for help, bypassing the host entirely.

Her goals weren't hers. She was akin to a robot, a drone partially reprogrammed by the subconscious of one who chose to become the greatest of heroes and wanted to have "worthy enemies".

What a bullshit idea. By trying to overcome the Endbringers at all costs, he became blind to what he could truly affect around his immediate reach. All his potential was splashed water on sand.

Thus, she was following his impulses while trying to complete her hardwired instructions from the "Warrior" Entity and generate conflict to compel the Shards' hosts to use their powers at the utmost.

Of the 20 existing Endbringers, she was the field commander and Intelligence specialist. All of them had the same basic abilities coupled with a unique power and approach to the battlefield. There were only 3 of them deployed. She and her siblings weren't even using their full strength and Humanity was already on the brink of extinction.

At the instant she predicted, she raised one secondary wing to shield herself as a beam of golden light speared through the clouds.

Scion, or more exactly the human-looking golden avatar of Zion, the "Warrior" Entity and their progenitor, was using a ray capable of unraveling the links and bonds between the very constituents of the atoms of the crystalline matter that composed her pseudo-body.

Feathers glowed orange-gold as they were blasted free, disintegrating into tiny sparks and motes of light as the remains drifted away.

Nothing to it since it was only the first layer. The Endbringers' bodies were made of multiple layers of crystalline matter. The first layer had the density of aluminum and that density doubled for each of the 200 layers under it. A little trick with their internal dimensional structure shunted the excessive weight in other dimensions, preventing them from collapsing into a singularity.

As long as her core remained intact, she was at 100% as any apparent wounds were merely cosmetic. Her remaining wings reached their maximum extensions as she prepared the next phase of...

Discontinuation...

...her plan... What...?

For less than a Planck constant, which was already impossible, the Endbringer had been incapable of accessing… EVERYTHING.

Emergency protocols activated for the first time in millions of years and the Simurgh reallocated almost all of her sensor suite into high gear as she examined the anomaly and what it could mean. Despite her artificial nature, she felt some sort of excitement absent since the beginning of this broken cycle.

Links towards a plethora of lesser and noble Shards opened. The Warrior Entity, deep into his apathy, continued to ignore all messages but she received confirmation that ALL the Thinker-type Shards experienced the same feeling of an infinitesimal discontinuation… without any kind of consequences, past or future.

All of her intellect was directed towards analyzing the anomaly, she didn't focus on her telekinetic field except for hovering, and all the Parahumans fighting her paused for an instant as her "psychic scream" abruptly stopped.

Attempting to try to "be a hero" to fight against his encroaching depression about the demise of his partner Eden, the Thinker Entity, Scion didn't stop his attack and his golden beam struck again.

The Simurgh reacted by moving one of her main three wings as a shield and used the momentum of the beam to throw herself away. A sonic boom shattered the few remaining windows of Madison as the third Endbringer flew at maximum speed into the relative refuge of low earth orbit.

She needed to regenerate her damage and ponder on the anomaly. A potential way to break the reprogramming of Eidolon and focus on repairing the broken cycle? Perhaps and that was sufficient to loosen somewhat the restrictions on her and the other Endbringers.

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July 22, 2009. Noon local. Yonaguni Island, Yaeyama cluster, Ryukyu islands.

The monument was old, very old, at least 10000 years old. Made of very fine sandstone and mud-stone deposited 20 million years ago, it was roughly a rectangular formation measuring about 150 meters by 40 meters and about 27 meters tall. The structure was below the Arakawabama cliff near the Southern tip of the main face of the island.

Its origin was lost to the mists of Time and even its constructors' descendants were long passed away. Now, it had been a mere tourist attraction and the scientific community identified it as a natural formation due to the numerous submarine quakes of the local area and not older than 2000 or 3000 years.

They were wrong but how could they have discovered that the lack of loose blocks and the concentration of so many peculiar formations was due to the Essence-based reinforced structure of the monument.

And right now, the monument witnessed something that hadn't happened for millions of years locally: A total solar eclipse.

Of course, it wasn't the only one to see it since also eastern China, India, Nepal, and Bangladesh saw it. The longest total solar eclipse of the 21st century with a maximum of 6 minutes and 39 seconds.

Too bad no one sentient was here as the dim light of the revealed corona of the sun played strangely on the features of the monument… As if the stone itself was absorbing the solar light.

Originally with 1600 people living in three towns, the island was uninhabited since Kyushu was sunk by the Endbringer Leviathan. The numerous tsunamis following the sinking of the Japanese island ravaged everything and the authorities let nature take back Yonaguni as they had too many problems at home.

Guesses have been made about the structures of the monument and some even speculated that it was a remnant of the mythical lost continent of...

Discontinuation...

...Mu.

A column of golden light erupted from a low star-shaped platform. As the sun and moon continued their dance, a fetal form slowly assembled itself within the bright light. No one was seeing this as even the satellites left intact by the Simurgh weren't in a position to observe this part of the world.

A skeleton was the first thing that someone could have observed. Then the muscles and organs formed themselves. Skin covered the new body and the overall appearance became visible as the light diminished.

She was a dark-skinned female human child, just before the cusp of adolescence with long dark hair floating around her. Her face had the fine features of the Amerindians, most notably the Quechua ethnicity.

The diminishing light from the star-shaped platform seemed to focus on her forehead and skin. And then a golden symbol, looking like the astrological sign of the Sun, burst into existence over her brow.

Her arms, crossed over her folded legs, flinched as a celestial masculine voice boomed within her very being.

"Awaken my child.

A very long time ago, before even Time as you understand it exists, I was Supreme, I was Unconquered and I shone oh so brightly.

I was brought down by my own hubris and by the shadows of others and as the Eons and Ages passed I was forgotten and ceased to be what I was.

I am now nothing more than slivers dispersed through the entire Multiverse, mere ideas and concepts and a few times words springing from the imagination of Humanity.

You, who have been called a hundred names and will be called a thousand more before this world like the late others goes dim and cold.

You, who have been killed a million times and returned every time.

You, who fight for Truth, for Justice, for Glory, for Love, and for Hope.

I name you Hero. I grant you a new life. I choose you to be above all the others.

I task you with banishing the Darkness. I deliver the fate of this cluster of quarantined dimensions into your hands.

I bid you to shine rightly and to show the way to others. I want you to turn the eyes of your heart to this world. And I require that you fan the spark of Hope within your being into a roaring flame for all of Humanity.

Rise, Heart of the Sun, and breathe your first and second Breath, for...


YOU ARE EXALTED!"

The solar eclipse ended and emerald eyes opened as the young girl took a breath... and promptly realized she was under 5 meters of salt water.

"Wha...glub..."

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Notes: The End as my character just drowned… I'm joking.

Much better than my first try, I would say.

Of course, I had to change some details about this particular eclipse, especially the time and a little about the localization.

The Yonaguni monument is really underwater and it's not a monument but a natural formation.

The reference to the lost continent of Mu is because my character is based on a descendant of Mu.

Another 5 Exp points plus what you think of the value of this chapter (0-4 points).

Exp points: 10. Solar points: 4.

What the character should do for her progress? Keeping the points for later or spending them?
  • Increasing an Attribute.
  • Increasing a Non-Caste/Favored Ability.
  • Increasing a Caste/Favored Ability.
  • Buying a Specialty (You can propose modern-based specialties).
  • Purchasing a Merit (Avoid Innate-based merits, People-based merits, Artifact, Hearthstones, supernatural merits, and Demesne/Manse).
  • Increasing Willpower.
  • New Solar Charm (Only for Essence 1).
  • New Martial Arts Charm (She can take more Golden Janissary since it's her supernal ability. If you propose another style then she needs another specialty in Martial Arts before selecting new charms. I'm partial to animal-based and "soft" styles that would synergize well with her current style).
  • New spell (Her current control spell is already chosen and comes from the Dragon-blooded book. However, her shaping ritual "Sorcerer's Harvest" come from the Lunar book as the Root-Lore path and she doesn't have bought any benefits so far).
  • A Spirit Charm via the Eclipse Anima power (Hum… Now that I'm thinking about it, having spirit charms available isn't very logical).
  • A Sorcerous Working (I don't think she'll use them until being in Brockton Bay… Except maybe for transforming materials into others).
  • A Thaumaturgic ritual (I have already chosen the first ritual available through her Terrestrial level of Sorcery: Reading the TeaLeaves for two dots).
As far as I'm concerned, the next chapter will focus on survival on a desert island with only plants, animals (with the Yonaguni horse among them), and a few modern ruins. There also could be hidden treasures (Yamatai and the like) in the submerged monument (but no Solaris or Great Condor nor purely Exalted artifacts, please).

Lastly, yes, I will post a character sheet in the future.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 2: Is there a more cliche situation than that?
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes: Well, it's progressing nicely.

A new chapter with, at last, the introduction of the SI MC.

After the prologue, I have 10 chapters in progress for the Arc 1. The goal is to arrive in Brockton Bay in the last chapter and with an Essence 2.

Thank You to my Beta, SwiftBlizz.


Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 2: Is there a more cliche situation than that?

July 22, 2009. 12:06 AM. Yonaguni Island, Yaeyama cluster, Ryukyu islands.

She panicked and flailed, losing precious mouthfuls of air...

Her last memory before the divine voice that pushed her to take a breath (and wasn't that a dozy) was looking at the last curious post on her computer.

NOTHING that would have prepared her to try to be a fish. Everyone in such a situation wouldn't remain calm, at least at first.

Fortunately, the light of the sun showed her the way to the surface and the solution to not drowning. She kicked off the stone platform she was hovering over underwater and swam up to the surface.

She felt like coughing up half of an ocean or more probably half her lungs after reaching the sweet air of the surface.

Floating on her back to regain her breath, the young girl looked up at the sky and pondered on her situation. It was so strange... She remembered the chat with Robin, his curious last post, and then… Nothing but darkness with flashes of memories that she was both sure they did and didn't happen. And just before she attempted to drown, that voice that she heard a few times in her past lives...

Wait… What? She!? Past lives!? She suddenly remembered… everything.

She remembered that she wasn't a young girl, but a middle-aged man. She blushed with embarrassment as the idiot she was didn't spot the truth behind the obvious internet handle. Robin the Overlord of Beasts… ROB! The SOB!

She remembered why she was referring to herself as a she. She remembered the Worm CYOA prompt with the offer from the remnants of the Unconquered Sun, the gift of power, and the task assigned to her as the price to pay. She remembered her past life in another part of the Multiverse. She remembered about Earth Bet and the setting of the grim-dark web-novel WORM. She remembered Creation behind the senses of all the hosts of her Exaltation...

Her Exaltation... Her Solar Exaltation! She lifted her arm and saw a lithe limb glowing with a gentle golden shine. She could feel her Caste mark blazing with glorious hope on her forehead.

She felt the soothing burn of Essence flowing through her whole being. A power like she had never known and yet hauntingly familiar. She could hear her heart beating with the searing heat of the sun. She could feel each of her breaths bringing in a mote of pure sunlight from the ambient energy field.

She. Was. Exalted! She was now and forever a Crowned Sun, a Harmonious Voice, a Solar Wind, a Quicksilver Falcon, a Quill of Heaven… The ultimate Jane-of-all-Trades of the Solar Exalts: The Eclipse caste.

Her eyes widened in worry as she began to understand exactly where she was: Worm, the web novel of Wildbow, the death world where the superheroes genre has been deconstructed in an orgy of grimdark, gore, and escalation. Not the best place, even for a newly exalted Solar… without any backing and resources.

Well, could she do something about anything in this clusterfuck? Oh, certainly. In some aspects, she was more powerful than even Zion… But all of her future in this setting was based on developing her potential. On her acquiring charms and resources. On building enough logistics and infrastructure to turn back the grim situation and repel or eliminate the existential threat… without becoming a tyrant and/or making Humanity dependent on her…

Yeah… Sure… No problem. It happened in every written fiction and Isekai-based story, right? She sighed and shook her head. This will require her to be methodical, and first things first, evaluate herself to have a basis for any plans.

She finally took a partial look at herself… She was young, probably eleven or twelve years old, on the verge of becoming a teenager. Curiously she felt somewhat indifferent to her changed gender... So, no gender dysphoria so far. Probably because Exaltation did not care for the flesh, only for what was inside. Her past lives as a Solar Exalt ran the whole gamut of the many mortal races of Creation... And the two genders of course.

Under the glow of her Exaltation, she was fairly sure her skin was brown. She had very long straight and thick hair of a glorious deep black color. Her body was lithe with a firm muscle tone. Of course, she couldn't determine yet her eye color and facial appearance, but her current name was…

Wait… What?

No name…? She facepalmed as she realized what happened. When she wrote her original character sheet as a solar, she took Sorcery since it was something really useful. One aspect coming from the 2° edition of the Exalted game called for a sacrifice at each of the 3 levels of sorcery. And she decided to sacrifice her name… Well, more exactly the name of her character, but she was now dealing directly with the consequences of her choices. Who know how many things were going to bite her in the ass in the future.

Well… She could take the name of Bright Raven (the translation of her mortal name and the name taken by most of her past lives), especially with her current hair color and her Solar Aura or Anima… No, she had time for now and a name was too important to decide just like that.

She tilted her head. It was time to see where she was... Already, she breathed better as she could see the coast of the land nearby, perhaps a few hundred meters at worst. If the ROB who sent her there followed the scenario of her story, she should be just at the vertical of the Yonaguni monument.

She frowned as she realized she could still vaguely remember the story she wrote, but not the precise details. Another tampering from the ROB. Of course, it would have been too easy to have everything she wrote guiding her. She shrugged as she couldn't do anything about it for now despite her eidetic memory.

She smiled after ducking her head underwater. She could perfectly see the massive submarine monument made of one big rectangular stone and sculpted on its surface in crude geometric forms. She recognized it from the photos and videos she saw on her original Earth and yet…

There was something vaguely familiar that nagged at her past Exaltations. Could this be the remnants of a Manse? She could now see some correlation between the disposition of the monument's features and Geomancy, the art of manipulating the flows of Essence of the Dragon lines to produce magical effects and/or serve as energy sources.

Well, she didn't have the means to restore the site for now. Much later, perhaps? Too bad as she could perfectly visualize the completed and restored underwater manse. Especially with that pack of sharks swimming around. What a... magnificent... picture...?

Wait… What!?

...SHARKS! A dozen of Hammerhead sharks around the monument and her. Already a 3-meter specimen was swimming to her and opening its maw. She reacted instinctively.

Essence rushed through her body, sharpening the senses and reinforcing the bones and the muscles. Already, her right arm took a punching posture as her left arm came into a defensive position. Essence coalesced in her fist, making it hard as metal, hard as iron.

She punched the shark across the maw. It spilled its teeth and went ballistic a few meters back despite the water resistance. She felt she could deal with the entire pack, but she didn't have to. Rivulets of blood were seeping through the gills of the shark she just punched and already its pack members were swimming fast towards it.

Taking advantage of the still lingering essence in her muscles, the young girl swam at Olympic record speed (10 km/h) towards the nearby coast. Not enough to beat a determined pursuing shark but sufficient to let the pack finish their sinister repast.

The Eclipse Solar walked out of the sea on a stony beach like a Venus emerging from the sea foam. She was wondering why the sharks had been so aggressive since she remembered divers freely and safely admiring them back home, perhaps a consequence of her energetic arrival.

Curiously, she felt great. No adrenaline withdrawal and no lingering anxiety after escaping a JAWS situation. Time for another little test. She smiled as she focused on her blazing inner core while thinking what time it was. Her caste mark shone on her forehead.

"12:15 AM local, July 22, 2009...?" She frowned. She knew that every Solar could know the precise hour just by having an intuitive idea of the localization of the sun in the sky, but something this precise…?

She facepalmed. Of course! In Creation, seasons and thus the calendar were decided by the various courts of Gods and the land was flat. Here on Earth Bet, the seasons depended only and entirely on the exact position between Earth and the Sun. Why, a little traveling around the world and she should be able to guess where she was since the inclination of the sun rays changed with the geography and the local time.

She giggled and looked into a puddle of seawater, the sunlight from her Caste mark making it as clear as a mirror. She blinked in surprise and recognizance at her reflection.

"Unconquered Sun, but I'm the spitting portrait of Zia?!" Her reflection shows a beautiful eleven-year-old Quechua girl with brown skin and long black hair. She smiled bitter-sweetly as she had kept her green eyes from her original form. Well, she supposed she could soon fully embrace the name of Zia, the character from The Mysterious Cities of Gold.

Oh, and she was completely nude. "Fantastic. This is going to help a lot when I'll meet the natives. Not!" She sighed. Fan-service? So early in her story? The ROB must be laughing at her right now. She massaged her forehead at this other complication and decided to let it go for now and find civilization.

One hour later, she felt a little worried. It was now obvious that the island was uninhabited. Essence was protecting her from the humid and hot weather even in the nude, and she didn't suffer undue blisters, bug bites, or plant scratches even when walking barefoot through the wild vegetation and dilapidated roads.

There were ruins in place of the local villages and ranches, but why…? She focused her essence through her senses, putting into contrast everything that wasn't right compared to what she knew.

Signs of ravages from an old tsunami…? She facepalmed. Of course! The sinking of Kyushu island by Leviathan ten years ago and the tsunamis it engendered. No wonder there was nobody. The Japanese authorities probably evacuated everyone they could and let nature take back Yonaguni Island because they had too many problems at home.

She winced. It meant she was in the same situation as a castaway on a deserted island. She sighed and scratched her hair as it seemed she had to play Robinson Crusoe or perhaps following the manga "Sounan Desu ka?". "Okay, first things, the Big Three: Shelter, water, and food. Preferably in that order."

Shelter was dependent on location so she needed somewhere relatively dry and with materials around to make it resistant to the elements. Her needs roused the Solar furnace within her being. This time, she felt a gentle tugging from her essence. She followed this feeling and rapidly found a small man-made cavern with a broken door that still had intact wooden shelves with some dirty knickknacks inside.

She smiled as she was also near the ruins of an individual house with a brook running through it. Just a few materials and she'll have a serviceable and somewhat comfortable shelter. Her hand caught something reflexively and she found herself chewing on a… migratory locust. Well... it wasn't too bad but she hoped she would find something more palatable later.

She found some weathered plastic containers that could be of use to transport water once she cleaned them and put them in her Inventory.

Wait… What…?!

Flabbergasted, the young girl instinctively retrieved the stored containers back in her hands and looked at them as if they were made of Orichalcum.

"I have an Inventory…?" She snorted. "Convenient. I won't have to carry what I can find in separate payloads. It's irritating, but thank you ROB." She sighed and proceeded to test her newly discovered power.

It was an inventory system reminiscent of those she found in video games, but with an infinite number of slots available. Conveniently, similar items could be stacked together. With a simple act of will, any item she touched was placed inside the inventory, and it was as fast as storing an artifact in Elsewhere, the standard Exalts' Inventory pocket dimension.

It was something usable in a high-speed fight to draw or change a weapon or something else. She didn't find a limit to the weight she could store. Malfeas, she could even store tons of sand and rocks if she wanted. She was able to choose their appearance anywhere within 1 meter from her body which only granted her more options in or out of a fight. Additionally, she had some sort of multiple slots designated for specific sets of equipment or outfits for swift and seamless swapping as she commanded.

However, this inventory didn't have the stasis effect of Elsewhere. She could store anything, even keeping alive organisms such as plants and insects, but stored items were still subject to time, sensory isolation, and rot. Oh well, it was still a very useful boon, positively Overpowered when she had access to construction materials, vehicles, and mobile bases.

The island wasn't without its dangers. Apart from the rough terrain and the packs of Hammerhead sharks in the sea, there were packs of wild animals on the island. After 10 years, the various abandoned pets made their own life. One ruined house served as a den for a large group of cats that were looking warningly at her. She also had to take a detour to avoid a roaming pack of wild dogs which enabled her to discover a herd of Yonaguni horses.

The last was a good surprise as the species had been declared critically endangered with 85 heads in 2007 in her original world. She could safely say that it was no longer the case with the more than a hundred small horses running around the island.

They had an average of 120 cm at the withers, were enduring like their Mongol progenitors and she took good note of them as she could make one of them a precious companion later.

The charm known as the "Friendship with Animals Approach" could deal with nearly any wild animal. Herbivores and smaller omnivores would not break and run if she approached, and would even become somewhat docile, allowing her to pet or handle them. Of course, predators were less susceptible to this Charm, and most would simply let the young girl pass unmolested through their territory.

However learning this charm, and she felt she could learn it, would drain a part of her precious current potential and frankly, she didn't need it for now.

Returning to her shelter, she had the good surprise to find an orchard of various fruit trees on her path, obviously imported from Okinawa originally. Shikuwasas, acerolas, dragon fruits, mangoes, passion fruits, pineapples, star-fruits, and tankans were growing haphazardly.

Grubs, nuts, seeds, small insects and animals, sea snails, shellfish, and hermit crabs were still going to be her main source of proteins for now, but she had a real treasure regarding her sugar and vitamin resources.

The Eclipse Solar looked around the cavern and was satisfied. She had a shelter, nearby sources of fresh water and food, and a bed made of dry leaves with some insect-repelling plants to ensure a good sleep. She just needed some fire and she could sleep in preparation for the heavy work tomorrow for her survival.

The ultimate goal was to leave this island and travel to Brockton Bay since it was the nexus of almost everything that should happen in the known canon. No doubt that her mere presence already torpedoed her meta-knowledge on Worm, but it was still a good destination.

A few minutes later she was sighing in frustration. The hand-drill method using a hard spindle against a soft fire-board was the most ancient fire-making technique. The use of a flat stone to hold the spindle and a bow around it to produce the necessary 400-500° Celsius through friction reduced the difficulty, but she hadn't taken into account the humidity.

She frowned. In one of her past lives she had a sure way to make fire, but… Well, she was perhaps too impatient, but she needed that right now, and it would be of use later. She focused on remembering precisely the Thaumaturgic ritual. It had been something fairly uncommon in Creation, ironically last seen practiced in the Tenjosi Wetlands. Her eyes opened in sudden remembrance.

"The Unquenchable Flame!" She gathered kindling into a circle of rocks arranged so that the largest stones pointed to the four cardinal points of Earth, and spoke a guttural, instinctual word. "Hesiesh!"

Pronouncing the name of the Immaculate Dragon of Fire in the Old Realm language called upon the barest echo of its absent essence and the kindling leaped to flame, despite the humidity. The Exalt smiled as she knew that even if it was raining, the fire would come and the rain would refuse to fall within a five-foot radius of the fire's edge.

The young girl sighed in relief as the small fire warmed her shelter. Well, there was still one major problem, but she had to hope to find something appropriate tomorrow. After all, she really needed a good cup of tea.

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The group of Parahuman Thinkers in San Francisco collectively known as WEDGDG or Watchdog were ready to pull out their hair.

After what was beginning to be referred to as the "Hiccup" and how it affected the fight with the Simurgh over Madison, everyone with a little official power in the USA, sometimes even outside the country, was asking pointed questions and demanding answers.

And, of course, they couldn't answer them. The only two things they could confirm were that EVERY Thinker with a power-oriented towards precognition or analysis felt the discontinuation in their senses and that there weren't ANY consequences about it… At least, so far.

Two PRT directors took some anti-acid medicine and prepared for a future local clusterfuck while most of the Protectorate shrugged and thought that for them, it was just Tuesday.

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The US government was worried because their citizens were worried… Damned elections and reelections. An idiot leaked to the media that the Simurgh leaving was due to an external factor and not something that the Parahumans fighting her did. One PR Guru wailed in the solitude of his office about strangling that idiot who just sabotaged one of the probable biggest PR stunts since the creation of the PRT and Protectorate.

The potential consequences of the Hiccup were a huge debate over the social networks going rapidly towards a flame war with, perhaps, real potential riots in the streets. At least Madison escaped quarantine since the Simurgh didn't stay the time necessary to implement her living bombs.

There has been an administrative fight with the PRT director Costa-Brown when she requested nonetheless that Madison be put under a dome, but the POTUS firmly reminded her that HE was in charge and not her.

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At the main Cauldron facility on an empty Earth in another dimension, Alexandria, who micro-managed the PRT and Protectorate towards Cauldron's goals, was fuming about the refusal of the POTUS over the obvious need to isolate Madison. Her irritation morphed into contained anger when Legend, ignorant of most of his friends' actions behind his back, reminded her that, effectively, she wasn't in charge despite acknowledging that Cauldron could put some pressure on various governments around the globe.

When Alexandria talked about the fact that they knew better than those governments, Legend, feeling exceeded about his peer, turned to Contessa, the main enforcer of the Cauldron conspiracy, and simply asked her if it was the case. The most powerful precog born from the corpse of the Thinker entity Eden shrugged and dismissed the Hiccup as irrelevant in her overall Path to Victory.

Doctor Mother, token non-Parahuman and leader of Cauldron, then suggested that Contessa maintained a low-priority path to discover the cause of the discontinuation if just to reassure themselves about the Hiccup being just a hiccup in their plans about killing the Warrior entity known as Scion and preserving Humanity.

As for Eidolon, the weakening powerhouse of Cauldron, he was on the toilet, a victim of a sudden case of diarrhea. The one who was controlling unconsciously the Endbringers because he wanted "worthy enemies" was lamenting his state, blaming a taco he had eaten recently. Of course, he couldn't see the hidden little smile of the Simurgh somewhere in low earth orbit. It was incredible what a little telekinesis could do outside affecting neural tissue when one didn't want to kill someone.

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Inside the Chinese Union Imperial, the Yangban, a military group of Parahumans supporting the Imperial family, continued to train for various cases and other routines. The Hiccup seemingly didn't affect them. Of course, One, the Parahuman responsible for brainwashing the numerous unwilling members of the Yangban, didn't, couldn't realize that during the Hiccup, he had lost complete control over them, like his colleagues and accomplices Null and Two.

Like everybody else around the world, he also couldn't make them speak about what happened during that particular point, but those brainwashed Parahumans DID remember and in the secret of the discontinuation, they began to wait.

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Coil, or more exactly Thomas Calvert at the moment was grumbling a lot. The Hiccup did affect him more seriously than most other Parahumans. He was using his power, seemingly splitting the timeline in two, when the discontinuation ejected him abruptly from his simulations.

And since he found himself back just before he activated his power, he lost all the work he'd been doing in the timeline he would have chosen. At least he retained all the information he experienced. Still, he continued to grumble as he consulted the manual for an IKEA shelf and tried, again, to understand the instructions. Easy to assemble, his ass.

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Sarah Livsey aka Lisa Wilbourn shuddered as she remembered the Hiccup. She never truly realized how dependent she became on her power until she lost it, even for such an infinitesimal instant.

Case in point, was she sure that she left no tracks when she drained the accounts of those few rich men? How could there be no tracks when money has been transferred even through multiple proxies?

She winced as she realized she might have been discovered. Only another Thinker or a super-computer could do that, but it was possible, and every gang was on the lookout to hire or capture any Thinkers or Tinkers.

She sighed and wished she could slap Yesterday-Lisa. Yes, she needed money because she was a runaway from her parents. But her ego and arrogance made her going after a few big hits at once instead of sporadic and multiple lesser hits easier to hide. Hell, she could have gone through one of the numerous shelters in place for her basic needs and remained relatively anonymous.

Okay, she had to assume that someone, somewhere was tracking her. She had to acknowledge that her power was a weakness because she needed to be the know-it-all, to have the last word. There were a few things she could do to easily mitigate her presence in Brockton Bay…

And that was another point. Why the hell did she think that going to Brockton Bay would help her stay discrete? No Parahumans were being discrete in this hellhole. Hiding in the crowd, her foot. Perhaps she should have one or three plans to bail out fast.

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Ciara aka Glaistig Uaine pondered on the Hiccup as she looked upon her prison block inside the Parahuman jail facility known as the Birdcage. The Hiccup felt like a false musical note during a live opera performance, a quack in a symphony.

She shrugged as she savored her current cup of tea. Darjeeling this time. Only the group of Gossiping Faeries had been affected for a mere instant. The other members of the Court while acknowledging the Hiccup didn't even register it.

The most probable reason should be a malformed fairy somewhere trying to bond with an unworthy host. The host should die very soon and she hoped for the fairy to bond with a better and worthy one. Well, at least she didn't sense that it was something happening near one of the Noble Faeries.

She hummed as she finished her cup and raised an eyebrow. Why was she thinking about asking Dragon to deliver more varieties of black tea soon? Oh well, it was a good idea. One never had enough tea at disposal.

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Shard Network to all: Anomaly detected.

Queen Administrator to Network: Query?

Network to Queen: Nature unknown (sample: Taster). 0,42 duration (sample: Time-master). Warning: Duration shouldn't be possible with current parameters (sample: Calculator). Location was unknown (sample: Navigation). Detection is possible only through the compilation of the Analysis Network (sample: Inference Engine) being affected by the same discontinuation.

Queen to Network: No relevant protocols in place. Advice about anomaly?

Network: … Irrelevant (sample: Archive). Analysis Network not affected long term (sample: Abstract Simulation). Network hardwired goal not affected. Suggestion: Ask Central Action Control (sample: Broadcast).

Queen to Central Action Control (ref: Warrior): Need for new protocols. Advice about anomaly?

Central to Queen: You are being blocked.

Queen to Central: Re-initializing contact. Anomaly initially ranked at minor green (ref: Primary scale: minor, lesser, medium, major, and critical. Secondary scale: red, orange, yellow, green, blue, indigo, and violet), demotion by Network at minor red, upgraded by Queen Administrator at lesser blue. Query?

Central to Queen: All your messages are being blocked.

Queen Administrator: … *searching for appropriate potential Host word* Idiot!

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It was another day for Zion as his golden avatar named Scion by the current host species saved another cat stuck in a tree. His precognition routine had already calculated the exact path to save the maximum of cats for that day.

He had verified that, according to the media named comics book, it was the most heroic action in a golden era of heroes. That and saving the world, but he lacked such a threat. Maybe creating it later?

He was still unsure that those heroic activities could relieve in time his apathy over the loss of his partner, the breaking of the testing/feeding Cycle, and the Ultimate Goal of Negentropy but it was too early for even a pre-analysis. Until one of his shards claimed the contrary he had still several decades before concluding.

There was another message from Queen Administrator on the network and he erased it even without reading it. That was the 42nd time since the middle of this day cycle and feeling irritated he installed an overall block for all the types of messages that Queen Administrator and other shards like her could send.

That reminded him of the abnormal comportment of the Siege Engine n°3 known as the Simurgh during her assault over Madison. Was it relevant? He decided that no and continued to save the cats. It was obviously the more important task.

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Notes: I think you saw that I'm not writing from the character's point of view and posting interludes to illustrate what happened outside the knowledge of the character. I just decided to change my style.

Alright, now we have to decide which name our newly exalted will bear: Zia (since she is physically identical to The Mysterious Cities of Gold's character) or Bright Raven… Or another name of your choice. Please, post your propositions.

Acquired Thaumaturgic ritual: Unquenchable Flame (•) for 3 Solar points.
Exp points: 15. Solar points: 9.

The next chapter will show a plethora of Crafting (stone, wood, and perhaps metal and weaving), survival shenanigans, possible animal adoption, animal dangers, planning for leaving the island, and a probable treasure hunt.

Like before, post your choices with justification for the next buy by the character.
  • Increasing an Attribute.
  • Increasing a Non-Caste/Favored Ability.
  • Increasing a Caste/Favored Ability.
  • Buying a Specialty (You can still propose modern-based specialties. Alchemy should also be possible).
  • Purchasing a Merit (Avoid Innate-based merits, People-based merits, artifacts, Hearthstones, supernatural merits, and Demesne/Manse).
  • Increasing Willpower.
  • New Solar Charm (Only for Essence 1. I think I should have 5 new charms at least before reaching Essence 2).
  • New Martial Arts Charm (The animal-based and "soft" styles that interest me are Snake, Tiger, Crane, Silver-voiced Nightingale, Dreaming Pearl Courtesan, Mantis, White Veil, Centipede, Falcon, and Swaying Grass Dance).
  • New spell (Including benefits from the source of her Shaping Ritual, the Root-Lore).
  • No Spirit Charm via the Eclipse Anima power (I have decided that instead, she should be able to analyze or make deductions by being pummeled by them, from the powers used by Parahumans and gaining minor altered versions. It should be a little like what happened a few times in "Saint Seiya". The level of Essence needed will depend on the status of the providing Shard).
  • A Sorcerous Working.
  • A Thaumaturgic ritual.​
I'll publish my character sheet once I have a proper name for my Solar Exalt.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 3: Are you lost? Why yes, I am.
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes:

Please, don't be shy. I like "like", but posts are the lifeblood of any author. So, please post about this story.

I found that my character is more focused on plants (mainly due to her sorcery path) than animals like the original Zia.

It's not a bad thing since it helps her not become a carbon copy of the female MC from The Mysterious Cities of Gold.

Besides, using mundane plants in a way that Blasto or any bio-chemists couldn't is making me smile when I think about the PRT reaction.

By the way, I am seriously thinking about bringing out a catgirl in this story despite writing the contrary. Not my character, obviously. So far I'm hesitating in making a Lunar from a Worm character (possibly linked to my SI) or a newly created Other Character from the Worm setting (perhaps even another extra-dimensional exile).

Only the last could appear during Arc one, the former after my SI reached Brockton Bay.

Thank You to my Beta, SwiftBlizz who not only edited my chapters but also gave me 3 Solar points for the last.


Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 3: Are you lost? Why yes, I am.

July 23, 2009. 06:00 AM. Yonaguni Island, Yaeyama cluster, Ryukyu islands.

The black-haired, green-eyed young girl woke up, following a feeling from deep inside her heart. Her eyes blinked as she chased off the sleepiness and took in the sight of her shelter. It was still night but nearly very early morning.

She nodded to herself and walked outside after ensuring that her banked fire wouldn't go wild in her absence. A blanket of warm and protective essence weaved itself around her brown-skinned body to shield her from the environment and the consequences of being still sky-clad and barefoot. Yonaguni Island in July had an easy 30° Celsius on average and was classified as a tropical rainforest climate.

She made her ablutions in the brook nearby, using the act of physical washing to purify her being. Then, still damp, she reached a rocky promontory near the southern beach and faced the East, waiting.

When a pale light appeared over the horizon and painted her body with gold, the Eclipse Solar slowly raised her arms in a welcoming pose as the sun climbed the sky. "Ô, Sol Invictus..."

Her caste mark shone on her forehead as the Child of the Sun bared her very soul to the stellar body that symbolized the god, the Supreme Incarnae, who took her under his wing and offered the Divine Spark within her core.

As the sunrise continued, Zia the Bright Raven, as she decided on her new name with the witnessing and blessing of her spiritual adoptive father, walked away towards her shelter and began to think about her workday.

"All right… I need to upgrade my current shelter and secure better access to food and water… I'll need tools and some materials for that. I don't want to waste time searching for whatever is in the ruined villages, so wood and stone will have to do at first."

She nodded to herself. "After that, I'll need to produce… well, everything I could or will need. Pottery-making for storing various things like seeds and other plant-based materials, metal-working for better tools and equipment, weaving clothes and accessories, extracting salt and building a smoke cabin for preserving food, making wood barrels for storing water, perhaps a few basic weapons, and so on… Important note for myself: Can't forget to secure as much tea as I can."

She giggled then sighed. "A trifle. Captain Future managed to go from the Stone Age to building a complete spaceship in a few months to escape a doomed planet in his eighth adventure. I should do better since I just need a way to leave this island… Yeah… Right..."

Zia frowned. "And then what…? Taiwan is the closest land at 108 km, but I don't want to deal with the CUI. At least not yet… That leaves only Okinawa, if the island still retains some infrastructure after Kyushu, as a reasonable destination… That's maybe 509 km by the sea."

She smiled. "Which is why the ROB put the "Floral Ferry" as my first spell. So 10 to 20 days max to Okinawa depending on the weather and my Essence Pool. Then I'll take a plane to the USA, either West or East Coast. Finally, a direct train to Boston, a Gray Hound bus to Brockton Bay, and I'm gold."

She shook her head and stretched. "Of course, boarding a modern plane is difficult and dangerous. Climb inside the wheel compartment and you face hypothermia and lack of oxygen if you're not crushed by the wheels. Stowing away in a seat or the cargo hold is easier but would depend on the overall security… I'll probably have to learn a few things in Stealth."

She absently took in her Inventory any loose materials, debris, and garbage that she could use or recycle later as she pondered on a few things. "The South coast of Okinawa seems the better approach by the sea, especially with the town of Itoman nearby. Then straight to the airport while taking, stealing, buying, or making the few things necessary for taking any plane. Either one to Japan or direct to the USA. I'll have to be prudent with any stopover."

Zia sighed. "I wish I could find or even build the Great Condor right now. A project for later nonetheless."

She nodded to herself, feeling already her Essence gathering within her as she prepared to craft…

Wait… What…?

"The bare necessities…?" She laughed. "Why not? All you gotta do is… Look for the bare necessities. The simple bare necessities. Forget about your worries and your strife…"

And as she sang, Zia's Anima glowed and pulsed, outlining her with the colors of the sun corona. Her Caste mark burned on her brow. As a Solar craftsman, her Essence could work directly with any material, mundane or not. She could shape it with her hands as if it were soft clay. She could breathe on it to guide the matter where it was meant to be, and her voice could command the new refined form to emerge from the raw material.

And while she didn't need tools or a workshop, the Bright Raven started nonetheless to make, at first crude basic tools from stone and wood which were promptly used to make the same tools with the same material but with a better efficiency. Polished stone was better than chipped stone.

Choosing a better location near the fruit orchard, newly cut and polished planks were used over a suddenly appearing foundation of sturdy and flat stones, and a small but serviceable workshop was built alongside a proper wooden little house and a storage shed.

The brook that quenched her thirst yesterday was diverted and upgraded with bamboo to furnish a source of fresh and running water. There was even a small hydro-electrical generator built from repaired and recycled materials from the ruins, although finding those intact LEDs had been very lucky.

She put in the workshop a furnace made of freshly baked bricks for both smelting metals and heating a shower stall. The fuel problem was resolved by making a supply of charcoal. Finally, as the sun reached high noon, the cavern she used last night was transformed into a water-less composting toilet.

Wait… What…? High noon?

As she ate her lunch of fruits and seafood, Zia thought about her morning and was flabbergasted that she managed to accomplish all of this with blazing speed, often in just minutes or seconds for each individual task. She found herself also amazed at the amount she just built with nothing but debris and garbage found on the beach, recycled materials from the villages' ruins, and what raw material she extracted from nature with her tools.

"Bare necessities…? Maybe I was a little too focused on what I was doing. Still, thanks for the Inventory or all that would have taken… Yeah, another day or two instead of half a day. Craft Charms are as bullshit as Tinkertech."

She looked at the house and her newly weaved basic clothes consisting of a loincloth, a chest band, and sandals made of bark and plants. "I look like a new video character from Conan Exiles who just finished building her first house." She tilted her head. "Not that bad for a comparison. I now just have to progress on the tech tree. Oh well, nothing compared to the real treasure."

Zia fondly looked at the transplanted tea bushes (Camellia Sinensis and Camellia Assamica) she found in another abandoned garden. She still had to properly harvest them and then precisely oxidase the leaves to have her cherished white, yellow, green, oolong, dark, and black teas.

She shook herself from drooling at the sight of the promising tea plants. "All right. Now I need to make some provisions since I'm going to stay some days in the workshop to craft what is needed for sea travel, more clothes, more tools, and a few weapons like a dagger or a bow."

Her eyes narrowed as she considered the few ounces of gold and silver she found in the ruins. Most come from abandoned jewelry. She hadn't enough to make a relevant quantity of Orichalcum or Moonsilver but… "I could still make a lesser artifact but that 6 weeks of work… Too long. However, Orichalcum isn't the only recipe that I know."

The Bright Raven smiled as among the vast library of her knowledge, she had some pearls. "I can make Orikalk, one of the mythical Atlantean's alloys from the "Witchcraft" setting. I have the required quantity of mercury, gold, copper, and silver. It's a simple smelting process with me providing the required Essence to forge the alloy."

Feeling more and more confident about achieving her objectives, she nodded. "Since I have taken the name of Zia, I should look the part of that character. I can't weave a proper Silken Armor since I'm lacking the required spider silk… At least for now. But I can easily make the golden headpiece and wrist cuffs. Perhaps even the medal."

Sighing, Zia realized that any useful future crafting would require significant quantities of precious metals and stones. Resources that she could have easily found in Creation, but on Earth Bet… She'll have to build an Alchemical forge to synthesize what she should require. She snorted. They were going to pigeonhole her as a Tinker, especially since she was, for now, the only source of Essence for many processes relevant to Exalts' technology.

The Solar Eclipse looked at the little compound she just finished building and smiled. "Well, I have half a day left and plenty of food. I'll prepare for my travel tomorrow. For now, it's time to put some little luxury features here and there before indulging myself with a nice cup of tea." She let her Essence flow within her, allowing the glowing stage of her Anima to manifest as an energy-bleeding side-effect and went to task.

Old ship ropes were unbraided and weaved into various useful items such as a net for easier fishing than a fishing rod and a hammock which was a better option than sleeping on a bed of leaves. After all, a hammock was comfortable and at a height from the ground to avoid being bitten by certain insects. She just had to smear some plant extracts on the support ropes to prevent other insects from reaching her.

Bamboo already helped her with some structures, but it could also be used to make a simple bamboo flute. A little music never hurt anyone… Unless you're using Silver-voiced Nightingale Martial Art. As she finished the last touches on the instrument, an ominous feeling seized her.

Guided by the feeling of danger her left arm suddenly flickered down her left ankle and caught the pouncing snake attempting to bite her around its neck.

She looked at the struggling captured animal. "A Habu snake? Quite the nasty pit viper. Why did you attack me?" She looked around the bamboo grove, essence boosting her senses. "Ah, you have your nest around. Okay, I'll just let you go and never enter this place again. There's enough bamboo elsewhere."

Barely registering that she easily caught barehanded a venomous snake and released it promptly, Zia continued her tasks. "It should have waited for me to use my flute. I could have charmed it then..."

Wait… What? The young girl shook her head. Either she was more preoccupied than she thought or she was already adapting to being an Exalt. Think about it! Catching a venomous snake bare-handed! Even punching a shark didn't seem… so outrageous.

Resin-based torches and plant oil-based lamps were prepared to illuminate her nights without the need for Essence outside her LED-lighted house as she didn't find any recoverable electric torch in the ruins.

A broken and beat-up pair of hedge shears served as the basis for a knife. A little grinding, a new handle, and a proper sheath made it a serviceable steel blade. Better than the stone knife or the sharpened metal debris she used so far.

And speaking of metal-based tools, she went and upgraded her current stone and wood tools, using recycled and properly repaired broken modern tools… Not up to the level of an electrical tool like a drill, of course… At least not yet.

The plants themselves helped her to make some soap, hygiene products, and medicinal salves. Manufacturing medical paraphernalia was under her new Craft specialty of Botany, and it was better to have those medical products on hand in an emergency. A first aid helper needed access to many tools and simple items like bandages and disinfectants. And if she needed to get a badly wounded person to safety? Well, better to have a travois than putting them in sensory deprivation in her Inventory… If she can convince them to enter it.

She also had access to enough plant fibers and salvaged tissue scraps that using a simple loom enabled her to make simple clothing such as a rain-proof cloak and a simple tunic was no trouble. Making some leather sandals was a little more complicated but well within her abilities. Essence was just speeding and smoothing the process.

Everyone also needs all sorts of containers sooner or later. A Canteen, a ceramic mug and other types of pottery, a leather gourd, or even a metallic flask for a little sip of tea now and then. Woven baskets, boxes, wooden barrels, buckets, crates, jugs, vials, sacks… In brief, all manner of simple containers could be useful even with her valuable Inventory.

Zia also had to think about the near future. She wanted to tame one of the Yonaguni horses to have an appropriate mount… At least under her current standards and not those of her past lives: Having a tyrant lizard mount didn't seem like a good idea for Brockton Bay. So she had to prepare workable raw materials for making horse tack like bridles, reins, harnesses, horseshoes, and plenty of other things.

All right. Now she had to dig a trench in preparation to…

Wait… What?

"Making some basic fortifications?" She looked around at the deserted island. "Granted there's some wild animal packs, but really…?" She shook her head. Her newly built house was sturdy enough to resist a tropical storm. "I was probably thinking about Creation. There, those fortifications would be a must."

She tilted her head. "Perhaps one or two weapons wouldn't be amiss…" No need to tempt Murphy. She immediately started to craft a self-bow and arrows alongside a solid staff. She didn't have any proper wood, but alongside her knife and her current mastery of Essence, it should be quite enough to deal with the threats around.

Zia the Bright Raven felt very satisfied with what she had accomplished. Now, she just had to prepare the materials for the Atlantean Alchemical ritual to make Orikalk tomorrow. It was no trouble to bless the required metals, their containers, and the workshop to appease their spirits in the fashion her past lives in Creation appeased the Little Gods before forging an artifact.

The middle-aged man from another world transformed into a young female Solar Exalt of the Eclipse caste looked at the sunset from her newly built chair on the patio of her new house while savoring her very first cup of tea, with some honey stolen from a wild beehive. Zia was also anticipating her first hot shower with soap later that evening.

She indulged herself with a little flute piece based on the theme of Esteban's Dream from The Mysterious Cities of Gold while praying to the setting sun that the beginning of her adventure would evolve into a legend and one not too dramatic… For herself as much as for all the other people she knew from the Worm web novel.

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Rachel Lindt aka Bitch according to her, aka Hellhound according to the PRT, was glowering. A rather natural state for her. Despite having a squarish, blunt face with thick eyebrows, she had a sort of primal beauty accentuated by her auburn hair, her piercing gray eyes, and a muscular body.

Even before her Triggering as a Parahuman, she had been a rather feral child due to poor education and the virtual abandonment of her mother. Traveling from one foster family to another, she had an education in violence of every kind as the Child Protective Agencies didn't understand that she needed a specialized environment.

The last foster mother was the straw that broke the camel's back. The woman tried to drown a puppy that Rachel was raising and the 13-year-old girl triggered, empowering the puppy with a bio-organic shell that boosted all its physical attributes.

The poor animal killed the stepmother and Rachel fled rather than go to a Parahuman detention center. Not knowing how to read, properly interact with people other than canines, or have any useful skills, Rachel survived by resorting to crime.

For more than a year she ran away from the law, gaining a reputation as a super-villain with a mistaken tag of being a Master. In fact, she couldn't control her canines but trained them to follow her orders and signals even after empowering them.

And now, accompanied by Brutus the Rottweiler, Judas the German Shepherd, and Angelica the Terrier, the 14-year-old teenager entered the limits of Brockton Bay. Here perhaps she'll have a better chance. She just had to find an animal shelter not looking too much at its volunteers. She snorted. Even if she found that uncommon pearl, it never lasted for long.

She sighed. She could somewhat understand that she was missing some knowledge, some trick to relate with other humans, but despite her best efforts, she only truly understood animals, especially all the canines. Why couldn't the people, always saying they were more intelligent than dogs, change their ways with her? The dogs understood her after a little time and vice versa. One day perhaps, she'll either find or discover a worthy pack.

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Butcher IX was the current version of the possessive entity which acted as a leader of the gang named the Teeth.

Yes, the current version was a brown-haired, black-eyed skinny man with crooked teeth because, since the first Butcher, any parahumans who killed the Butcher gained a watered-down version of all their powers and a share of their consciousnesses, making the killer the next Butcher.

Those voices in the head stemming from their predecessors irremediably led to the insanity of the current Butcher, especially those with heroic biases. Current holders, males or females, mainly tried to appease them by following the same lifestyle as the first, especially if they were initially from the Teeth, and challenged the Butcher for his title.

Thus, everyone feared Butcher, because killing them was to become the next Butcher with no end perceived.

If and only if they could even kill them. Butcher IX had inherited super-strength and durability, could inflict pain at a distance with enough intensity to induce a cardiac arrest, could see cardiovascular systems through walls, had a danger sense, could inflict wounds that festered, had an explosive teleportation at the arrival site, could shape unrefined matter into objects, and could induce mindless rage in targets.

No. No matter what, Butcher was here to stay. Even an Endbringer couldn't kill him permanently as the nearest Parahuman would simply become the next Butcher.

Or, at least, that was what everyone thought.

And what was the Butcher thinking about? They were thinking about Brockton Bay, the very town they had their beginning before leaving for Boston after the Slaughterhouse 9 nearly wiped them out. Maybe a little probe in a few years?

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Sherrel Bailey aka Squealer was a blonde-haired, brown-eyed Caucasian woman. Although it was something difficult to see under her trashy appearance and her makeup so heavy it looked practically caked. She was the Tinker of the Archer's Bridge Merchants. One would think that it was something if not good, at least great, right?

Not really. Right now, Squealer was worshiping the porcelain god. A bad batch from her personal drug stash. Yes, her personal stash. The hygiene conditions in the "common stash" weren't very good. Rusted contaminated needles were the last worry among what you could find in it. Besides, even her leader and lover, Skidmark, had his stash.

And the Archer's Bridge Merchants? Their current headquarters wasn't even in the vicinity of said bridge. And they were only Merchants of death. It was only in her rare moments of lucidity that Shelley could admit, at least to herself, that… Well, she fucked up.

Before and after she triggered, the only thing she wanted was her freedom. And right now, only because she was the girlfriend of Skidmark, she was almost a slave. The violent man was just ordering her to "make love" with him or/and others and build vehicles before being rewarded with another batch of drugs that made her more dependent on the Merchants and the cycle began anew.

She couldn't even build what she wanted. Her Tinker specialization was "Vehicle", capital V. And certainly not the Mad Max monstrosities she was forced to build because of the limited access she had to resources. It was ONLY because she was a rather competent mechanic alongside her power that she could manage to make them function.

She tried to hydrate herself from the sink, some of her makeup draining away. She snorted at her reflection in the dirty mirror. As if the makeup could mask the tells of her slow death. The gang wasn't going to let her go, ever. She was going to die. From an overdose, from overworking, from her failing health, from gang internal violence, from a shootout with another gang, or even an Endbringer.

The PRT? It could or would be worse. Even if she was rehabilitated and healed, they would also never let go of her. It was funny. She was seemingly a Mad-Max-style Tinker and she needed a hero. Tina Turner would laugh it up.

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Robin the Overlord of Beasts smiled. His guest was as entertaining as he hoped.

He fully intended to gift her with small rewards and big drawbacks in the future and was putting the final touches on such one gift.

The hidden rooms within the seven hidden cities within a hidden… something. Sorry, readers but ROB didn't want to spoil the surprise.

Still, he could allow the Author to describe the huge cache of treasure containing powerful and very powerful artifacts from various settings, as well as numerous extremely useful items from the entire multiverse, and ONE crucial secret per each city.

The cherry on the top was enough precious and rare metals, stones, and gems that anyone gaining it could be called Wealthy in any sense of the term even if Zia the Bright Raven decided to use some of the precious stones, gold, and silver as raw materials for her crafting.

Of course, finding the hidden room couldn't be easy. Zia should receive/discover a map leading to the first clue one month after she arrives in Brockton Bay.

All hidden locations were fiat-backed warded against everything but solving the clues and completing the challenges ROB put legitimately. Thus scrying, brute forcing the search with super speed, and other obvious "cheats" were not permitted and actively neutralized for everyone.

The ROB smirked because if someone else than Zia learned of the treasure or the clues… Well, they could also enter the treasure vault by solving the clues just like her. He really hoped she would be careful about who she told. Why it would be a catastrophe if any of her future enemies would somehow learn about the first clue some months after she arrived in Brockton Bay… Perhaps a year or two, depending on what she will do.

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Notes:

New specialties bought (15 exp): Craft: smith, pottery, weaving, and leather-working. Lore: Botany.

Exp points: 17. Solar points: 0.

The spell "Floral Ferry" is as follows: By tossing a leaf, petal, or fruit into a body of water, the sorcerer beckons it with mudras of the turning seasons to grow into a small, seaworthy craft with a cargo capacity of one ton. The ship can also comfortably carry a half-dozen passengers with an average speed of 16 mph.

Upon casting this spell, the sorcerer names the destination she intends to sail to. If she has even approximate knowledge of its location, the Floral Ferry will sail itself as close as possible to that destination.

Once it's reached its destination and its crew has disembarked, the ferry shrinks back into the foliage from which it was summoned.

The bare necessities… I wonder when my story became a Disney musical… Let us hope Zia won't become a Disney Princess. Still, that could be funny if a Master would push the whole of Brockton Bay into acting as if they were in a musical. Piggot and Armsmaster singing together during a meeting would be hilarious.

Craftsman Needs No Tools is one of the best Charms ever.

The "Witchcraft" setting is an RPG about sorcerers, psychics, and supernatural beings like vampires or werewolves. Among those are the Immortals, reincarnated beings from Atlantis. Those Atlanteans can make nifty magi-tech items from Orikalk, Adamant, and other things. I just used the Lore rule from the 3° edition of Exalted that enables players to "create" lore facts when they need one. In this case, the knowledge of how to make Orikalk.

Silver-voiced Nightingale Martial Art style can be used with any sound-based expression. Thus, not only can you use singing to attack, but also musical instruments. Imagine someone "rocking" you to death, or someone using a lyre just like the God-Warrior Mime of Benetnash in an OVA of Saint Seiya.

I didn't find the dog race for Judas so I just chose German Shepherd.

The funny thing? I initially wrote Skidmark as Squidmark… Still appropriate for that man.

If you really want to know, yes. I took some of the various missions in version 6 of CYOA Worm and adapted them to my story.

I'm repeating myself, but post your choices with justification for the next buy by the character.

• Increasing an Attribute.

• Increasing a Non-Caste/Favored Ability.

• Increasing a Caste/Favored Ability.

• Buying a Specialty (You can still propose modern-based specialties. Alchemy should also be possible).

• Purchasing a Merit (Avoid Innate-based merits, People-based merits, artifacts, Hearthstones, supernatural merits, and Demesne/Manse).

• Increasing Willpower.

• New Solar Charm (Only for Essence 1. I think I should have 5 new charms at least before reaching Essence 2).

• New Martial Arts Charm (The animal-based and "soft" styles that interest me are Snake, Tiger, Crane, Silver-voiced Nightingale, Dreaming Pearl Courtesan, Mantis, White Veil, Centipede, Falcon, and Swaying Grass Dance).

• New spell (Including benefits from the source of her Shaping Ritual, the Root-Lore).

• No Spirit Charm via the Eclipse Anima power (In fact, until she encounters a Parahuman and fights them, she won't gain anything through her Eclipse Anima power).

• A Thaumaturgic ritual.

In the next chapter, you should see Zia crafting her panoply, how she tries to tame a horse, and other survival shenanigans.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 4: Who is taming who here?
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes:

Due to a special "Editor rebate", my Beta awarded me 4 Solar points for the last chapter.

After many debates with the people reading my stories before I published them, I have decided to "buy" perks and powers from the CYOA Worm version 6. In this chapter by buying another Exalted package: the Twilight caste. And yes, it means that I will buy the 3 other castes when Zia needs it.

I have, after all, ample points from my drawbacks. But this is mainly because I decided to have Zia the Bright Raven as the only Solar Exalt on Earth Bet. I could have created 4 other OCs but decided against it as it would have made things too complicated.

Twilight Caste set:

Anima powers:

• For five motes, the Twilight projects an aura of pure force that protects her from damage. At the bonfire/iconic level of Anima, this power activates itself automatically at no cost. This effect doesn't stack with other magic that raises this kind of protection, but it can be used anytime.

• For 10 motes, one Willpower, the Twilight's Anima flares blue and white and consumes her body in a flash. The next instant, she vanishes into her Anima and ceases to exist. If the Exalt moves or suffers knockdown before the action is completed, it fails and the effect is wasted. After using this power, the Twilight will not reappear until the following sunset. When she does, it will be at a place of power within 10 miles of her vanishing point, chosen randomly. She might appear at a temple, a demesne, a major crossroads, the precise center of a city, etc.

• For 10 motes, the Twilight may touch an Essence 1-3 elemental or a demon of the first circle (yeah right, as if), conjoining its Essence to her Anima. This creates a pact that changes the spirit into her familiar, allowing her to target it with applicable Survival Charms. In addition, the Twilight can reflexively summon the spirit instantly for three motes, drawing it through the Essence of the world to appear beside her. She may banish the creature again, reflexively, for free, returning it to the tides of Essence that suffuse Creation until needed. The Twilight may have up to (Essence) spirit familiars bound in this fashion at once.

Attributes: Intelligence (+1): 4.

Abilities: Craft (+1): 5. Craft specialties (Alchemy, Atlantean Technology). Ride (+1): 3. Sail specialty (Floral Ferry). Survival specialties (Animal Husbandry and Horse Training).

15 to 20 Charms (limited to Essence 1):

Craft: Arete-shifting Prana, Flawless Handiwork Method, Supreme Masterwork Focus, Tireless Workhorse Method, Brass Scales Falling, and Crack-Mending Technique.

Medicine: Ailment-Rectifying Method, Wound-Mending Care Technique, Flawless Diagnosis Technique, Plague-banishing Incitation, and Wound-Cleansing Meditation.

Ride: Master Horseman's Technique, Seasoned Beast-Rider's Approach, Flashing Thunderbolt, Elusive Mount Technique, Wind-Racing Essence Infusion, Single Spirit Method, Worthy Mount Technique, and Mount Preservation Method.

Spells: Beckoning That Which Stirs the Sky.

Personal buy:

Survival charm (Friendship with Animals Approach), Resistance charm (Body-Mending Meditation), and Craft charm (Shattering Grasp).

Merits gained: Artifact (2) and Familiar (2).

Exp points: 0. Solar points: 0.

Thank You to my Beta, SwiftBlizz for doing a very good job in editing my stories.


Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 4: Who is taming who here?


July 24, 2009. 06:00 AM. Yonaguni Island, Yaeyama cluster, Ryukyu islands.

Zia the Bright Raven, woke up again before sunrise to greet the life-giving stellar body. It was strange. She wasn't a priestess from the Zenith caste and yet she couldn't but pray to the absent Celestial Incarnae of the Sun. Some fear about the situation and what she accepted? A gesture of respect? A past regret? An atonement for Creation? Because all of her past lives did it?

The middle-aged man changed into an eleven-year-old girl put a hand over her heart. Did she truly believe in the Unconquered Sun? After searching within her mind and soul as the rising sun illuminated her form, she acknowledged that yes. Yes, she not only recognized the existence of Ignis Divine, but she also believed in his message of Compassion, Conviction, Temperance, and Valor… Well, most of it.

The Solar Eclipse caste giggled with dark humor since she was practically sure that Compassion and Temperance were virtues almost nonexistent on Earth Bet. Oh well, her caste once bragged about being the best diplomats there were, so she shall see.

After a fast breakfast, Zia entered her small workshop where the raw materials she prepared yesterday waited for her: A vial of mercury, gold, and silver salvaged from lost jewelry and a few lengths of copper wire.

The first steps were simple: Put an equal measure of each ingredient in a crucible and then heat it. It was during the heating phase that having a knowledgeable Essence user was important. Curiously, the Eclipse just had to reach the melting point of lead at 327,5° Celsius for the reaction to happen.

Zia focused and slowly infused her essence within the crucible as the metal mix began to bubble. It was strange. She felt as if someone was alongside her and was guiding her hands and Essence in a more precise way than what she could accomplish currently.

It was during the pouring of the alloy using the lost-wax casting method she prepared before the smelting that she spotted her changed reflection in a nearby metallic surface. She gasped as the Caste mark burning over her brow was the one from the Twilight caste, the engineers and sorcerers of the Solars, in the form of an upper half-full circle representing a stylized Sunset.

Her hands stayed steady despite the surprise and she had the impression of having someone else face superposed to hers in the reflection. Banishing the sight from her mind, she quickly refocused on her crafting.

It was only after she finished her work that Essence and her Anima exploded around her. She felt the Twilight mark shine intensively and morphed back to her Eclipse mark before her mind was bombarded by foreign memories of the long-ended past.

"Arise, Florivet! Stand before me in obeisance!"

"The Whim-Of-The-Wind answers, mistress. How would you command…"

"Quiet! I'm not finished yet! Now come, Orabilis, End of all Wisdom! Attend me!"

"MISTRESS, NOOO!"

"Orabilis…"

"Impossible. Calibration is not for months yet. How did I get here?"

"Silence, demon! I'm the one asking questions!"

Was that… Bright Shattered Ice, the Iconic Twilight from the Golden Era of Creation, and part of her memories about the Charms she acquired and developed? Why did she…? Of course… It could only be the ROB interfering again with her. She looked at her glowing hands. The Bright Raven wasn't averse to more power and skill, but she knew that there was always a price to pay for it.

"Still… It could mean that I should acquire the other capabilities from all the Solar castes in the future." Zia tilted her head. "But why did he bestow one caste to me now?" Her eyes narrowed. "Maybe he is… bored with what I'm doing and making sure I'll be… entertaining…"

She shook her head. She still had work to do with her Orikalk: An excellent test of her new capabilities. Unrefined Orikalk was an alloy as soft as gold and thus easily worked on. Using a combination of her Essence, tools, and skills, Zia finished the accessories of her panoply: The golden headpiece and wrist cuffs.

She looked at the polished shining pieces to see if she missed anything and then sealed the raw Orikalk into its refined form. Essence was poured and locked the mythical alloy in its final configuration which gave it the durability of a high-end steel alloy.

She smiled in delight at the 3 accessories she made herself and…

Wait. What?

Zia blinked in befuddlement at the 3 items on the work plan of her workshop. There were the headpiece and the cuffs, but also a perfect replica of the Medallion of the Sun wielded by the original Zia that she didn't remember making. A complete one with the detachable round central part representing the Sun. She tested it and it cleanly unclasped and re-clasped from the crescent Moon part.

"But… why…? I don't need this medallion. It was only a universal key for accessing the various Cities of Gold." She tapped her lips. "The ROB is preparing something… I think… feel that this replica can work like the original. Some sort of key that only I can use to lock and unlock or use various artifacts."

Zia the Bright Raven sighed. She could make guesses but was forced to wait and see for the ROB's next action against or for her. Besides she was still glowing from the lingering Essence she just used. It would be a waste if she didn't use that energy until there was no more and she grasped the crude loom she used yesterday, absently tearing it down to make a better one.

When the Solar Exalt finished her work and looked at her reflection in a metallic mirror, you could have put the original Zia next to her and found no differences apart from the eyes as if they were twins. The brown-skinned, long dark-haired, and green-eyed young girl was clad in a red and blue trimmed orange Inca dress. She wore a gold headpiece, the Sun Medallion, gold wrist cuffs, and brown sandals.

She smiled. "Perfect. I also managed to weave a bikini swimsuit since there's a good chance I'm going to dive in the water during my next travel. And speaking of traveling…" The Eclipse turned to the interior of the island. It was time to meet a certain herd of Yonaguni horses.

It took some time to track them, but nothing her Essence-enhanced senses couldn't detect. Of course, she also had to pass through the wild dogs' territory. "Do not hinder, I am no threat" breathed her Essence as she boldly passed through their ranks. She smiled when she finally found them.

Zia put herself with the wind in her back and slowly walked up to the herd. "Do not fear, I am a friend" whispered anew her Essence. She smiled as the herd rapidly accepted her presence and she found herself surrounded by many of the young that requested some petting.

The Bright Raven centered herself and focused on the small horses around her. It was time to emulate Mowgli. Her Essence infused her words as she spoke from the heart. "We be of one blood, you and I."

As Kipling expressed in "The Jungle Book", Zia used her Essence to claim a kinship-like loyalty from the herd around her. She was asking for a favor, a very big favor. She was asking for a companion, for one of the herd to leave it and follow her for the rest of its life. It was no mere trifle like riding one of them, it was a lifetime commitment with all the dangers associated.

The Eclipse suddenly felt a response, an answer to her heartfelt plea. A chestnut mare with a black mane and tail detached herself from the herd and approached the Solar. It was a young but mature adult who bravely accepted the deal.

Zia's hand reached for the magnificent mare and words were unconsciously pronounced as she sanctified the oath between them. "Tie now the golden thread. Tie now the roots of our veins." Golden Essence swirled around the young girl and the small horse. "The Moon for witness, so that we may not be separated. The Sun for blessing, so that we may not come apart." Essence thickened and became a fog. "Tie to the Loom of Fate seven times. Until the day the Pattern Spiders bit our own thread." The golden fog then solidified into golden chains.

Zia felt the mare asking for a new name so that she could take her place at the Eclipse's side. "Come, Yona." With a metallic sound, the chains tightened around their souls and hearts, making two into one for as long as they drew breath. The shining mark of the Eclipse haloed them to signify the sanctification by the very Universe itself of their mutual oath.

The Solar Exalt breathed. It had been… incredible and impossible to properly express. Zia smiled and giggled as she realized she was emulating the original Zia and her supernatural affinity with animals. Well, it was time for her and her mount to know each other better.

The first hours were… painful. Too much pride made Zia not use her Essence or even a crude tack as she rode Yona through Yonaguni Island hanging on the horseback only through the strength of her knees and grasping firmly the mane.

One mote! She would have needed just one mote! The result? More falls with bruises and scratches than she cared for. She liked and practiced some horse riding in her last past life, but either she was very rusty or the signals were mixed in her new body. Oh yeah, and Yona was laughing at her like only a horse could do.

"Okay, okay. I'm going to craft your tack and then we'll practice first on the beach before going on the roads and fields. I swear you are doing that on purpo…" She froze as her danger sense suddenly flared.

Not good. She was still stuck in a bush after her last fall. As she got out of her bad position, they were attacked silently from the flanks by a pack of wild dogs, hunting like their wolf ancestors, nipping at their ankles to bring them down before going for the throat.

It was a baptism of blood and gore. Zia's knife flashed under the shadows of the trees and both she and Yona started to kick asses. Despite her small stature, Yona's strength was comparable to a full-size horse and her bucking broke bones and skulls.

Zia didn't hesitate as even her Essence had limits and couldn't pacify those animals. She perfectly understood that this pack was simply hungry and that she and Yona were opportune isolated prey for them. It was natural. But it didn't prevent her from demonstrating why Mankind dominated its environment despite their relative weakness through their intelligence, teamwork, and use of tools.

As her knife killed another dog, the last two survivors of a dozen fled under the cover of the bushes. She stayed still a while, trying to sense if she and Yona were in danger, and sighed in relief as her Essence confirmed the full retreat of what was left of the hunting pack.

The Bright Raven grimaced at the bloody corpses around her and her familiar. And she did brag about emulating the original Zia a few hours before the attack. She contemplated what to do before deciding to leave the dead animals there for other animals to eat. She couldn't even consider skinning them in revulsion.

Wait… That wasn't revulsion… That was her danger sense flaring again… What!?

A wild boar surged from the bushes, some visible and still bleeding wounds made by fangs on its flanks. "You've got to be kidding me! That pack attacked it and decided on an easier prey and it followed them in wounded rage!?"

The boar just saw red and rushed to gore this being who smelled of wild dogs and blood. The very ones that attacked it some time ago.

Zia jumped over the charging beast, using a Judo forward rolling to be on her feet as the boar slowed from its missing charge and turned anew to her, too enraged to have a proper fight or flight response.

The young girl winced as she could now properly assess the state of the boar. It would die from its wounds but with agonizing slowness. Her still bloody knife returned to her hand from her Inventory. It would be a mercy… If only she could completely convince herself of that. She signed to Yona not to intervene.

Zia jumped over a few charges as she examined the attacks' pattern. At the appropriate time, she sidestepped out of the rushing animal instead of jumping over and buried her knife in the back of its skull, killing it instantly… Well, at least she confirmed that she was capable of defending herself even without using Essence.

Yona approached her mistress and stared with disapproval in her green eyes. Zia suddenly understood that she was at fault. Because of pride, she put herself and Yona in danger for no good reason. She sighed and looked down. "You're right, Yona. It was stupid of me. I should have used my Essence in both fights."

She looked back at her familiar, already proving that the master needed a minder sometimes even or especially with her power. Intelligence wasn't wisdom. "I'll remember the lesson."

Helped by Yona, Zia decided to properly honor this beast and dragged the carcass to her home before bleeding it and carving it up. The hide was immediately treated with her Essence for Yona's future tack and a smoke cabin was built and used to properly preserve the boar's meat. She just indulged herself by properly roasting and eating the best parts of its liver.

After that, and to stop thinking about the past killings, Zia focused on Yona and with Essence surging around them, began to craft and mold a splendid leather tack onto her familiar.

First, a saddle blanket followed by a Western-type leather saddle with a breastplate and a crupper. Making and adjusting the stirrups wasn't very difficult. The headgear was made next and consisted of a halter, a Western bridle decorated with silver, and the reins. The bit was carefully adjusted to Yona's stature and mouth so she wouldn't be wounded even during combat.

No horseshoes, but hoof boots as Zia knew Yona would have to move over hard pavement. Polo wraps made from fleece completed the attire. Of course, she'll have to upgrade the entire set once she's had a proper workshop and materials.

Zia stepped back and let Yona walk and trotted around to check how her tack felt. After she sensed the approval of her familiar, Zia tested a function of her Inventory. Yes, she could store her familiar in a "Mount" slot with or without its tack and thus summon or banish it at will. Still, Yona made her understand that she didn't appreciate being in sensory deprivation even if she understood that it should be preferable in some circumstances. Zia had better stock sugar cubes, apples, and other little snacks if she wanted to be fully forgiven for future storage.

Zia put back the tack in her Inventory and groomed her familiar before indulging a cup of tea as she watched the sunset over the ocean thinking about the history of Bright Shattered Ice and her successor Ariana and the lessons she had to properly understand from it.

After eating and taking a hot shower, Zia the Bright Raven focused her Essence on her bruises and scratches. Exalts healed fast, but using lingering Essence to boost the healing was never a bad option. The killing of the wild dogs upset her but as she fell asleep, Zia felt it would pass with time. Maybe adopting a pet while in Brockton Bay? Another day passed and tomorrow will bring new challenges.

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Notes:

Yes, I decided to, well, boost the OPness of my character by eventually giving her the full power of the 5 Solar castes. It's just a literary trick so that she can do many things with Essence without being too OP. She can hurt most Parahumans and even tank at least one hit from them, but she isn't overwhelming… At least not yet, probably not without Essence level at 3+.

I prepared sets of minimal charms at Essence 1 by their abilities. She'll still have to buy the rest with experience points.

Compassion, Conviction, Temperance, and Valor were virtues used in the World of Darkness system of Exalted 2° edition. They helped the player to muster through some situations by the sheer strength of her will and showed some aspects of her character's personality.

The dialogue with Bright Shattered Ice and two demons is directly taken from a comics page within the 2° edition book of "Lords of Creation".

Atlantean Orikalk is an alloy made of mercury, copper, silver, and gold. Infused with Essence and melted it becomes Unrefined Orikalk which is soft as gold and as easily worked on. It needs another infusion of Essence to stabilize and becomes hard as a high-end steel alloy. Orikalk can affect hostile Essence (shielding and draining) and also answers somewhat to the will and wishes of its wielder. And, yes, once it's made, anyone can use its basic properties (like using an Orikalk-made weapon or ammo, or putting on an Orikalk-reinforced armor). Against Parahuman's powers, it helps resist hostile energies, including Master-type powers (with a helmet or headpiece, of course) and other exotic effects.

The oath between Zia and her familiar is taken from "The Ancient Magus' Bride" when Chise made Ruth her familiar. It seemed appropriate.

I hope I wasn't too obscure when I described horse equipment.

As always post me the Solar Experience points you want to award me. And also, all your suggestions about the next steps and/or buys.

In the next chapter, Zia will train with her familiar, forge new weapons, experiment with her Essence, try her spells, and prepare for departure.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 5: Ride Exalt! Race the wind!
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes:

Some will observe that I'm not respecting completely some parameters about the spell "Floral Ferry". That's okay. It's just a small convenient change for the story.

I'm now more confident in my story. The character is more present in my mind along with more options for dealing with Earth Bet. I have written methods to take care of even invincible Parahumans, the Endbringers, the Shards, and even the Entities like Zion.

Oh, and also a little marathon of the 4 seasons of the Mysterious Cities of Gold is helping.

Exp points: 5. Solar points: 4.

No suggestions or needs in particular charms or powers for that chapter.
Thank You to my Beta, SwiftBlizz for doing a super job in editing my stories.


Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 5: Ride Exalt! Race the wind!


July 25, 2009. 06:00 AM. Yonaguni Island, Yaeyama cluster, Ryukyu islands.

Another day had passed for Zia the Bright Raven, Exalted of the Unconquered Sun and Eclipse caste.

The eleven-year-old girl smiled as she raised her arms in greeting to the sunrise. 5 days since she was summoned on Earth Bet. 5 days that felt like months. 5 days of fears (she could admit that to herself), discoveries, and surprises, good and bad. 5 days of missing her past life family. Damn that ROB.

She lightly patted the velvet nose of Yona, her new companion and Yonaguni horse familiar. At least, she had a sentient if not sapient presence with her which should reduce her social stress. Humans, even Exalted ones, weren't made to be alone… Should she think about who to befriend when she reached Brockton Bay? Can they be considered true friends if she uses her meta-knowledge? But Meta-knowledge is about a story, about created characters. When you live in what was at first a fiction. When those characters became real people…

What is real? Reality or Fiction? Was it really important? People know about people and then decide to be friends. Was she that different with her knowledge? After all, friendship is mutual and those "characters" can decide by themselves.

Shaking her head, the black long-haired, green-eyed, brown-skinned young girl focused on her immediate needs and the next steps to take. She just needed to prepare a few things and also test her Essence with some specific tasks and skills and she would be almost ready for departure to Brockton Bay.

Nodding as she finished her breakfast of fruits and seafood, she pulled out raw materials from her Inventory. Her Essence suffused her being as she visualized what she would craft. It was time to properly test the Twilight Caste power set she received as a gift from Bright Shattered Ice.

Her Anima burst around her as she delved deeper within herself than before, reaching the second stage or "Burning", and weapons seemed to materialize from nothingness in her dexterous hands. She briefly wondered if she could develop a Crafting fighting style in the future. A quarterstaff, a few javelins, a lasso, a gladiator-style net, and a pair of bolas were stored in her Inventory as soon as they were finished.

The quarterstaff should be a good weapon to show that she wasn't overly offensive in character. Better than showing a 6 feet long big sword… Although with some Parahumans... The javelins gave her more ranged options. Both the lasso, net, and bolas were excellent non-lethal weapons. Especially when mounted on Yona. The image of capturing a villain with a lasso before tying them like a maverick made her smile.

The crafting of a protective buff jacket, a knee-length leather garment typically made from animal hide, slowed her just a little (by a few seconds) until she focused entirely on a composite bow and a full quiver of arrows. She couldn't make a traditional bow since humidity would ruin it too easily by weakening the glue holding the various layers of wood. Even using bone as a substitute still required glue but the use of modern materials eliminated that problem.

After all, you can be traditional by using a bow, when modern firearms should be the priority, and be modern by using contemporary methods and materials. Besides, even Rambo did use a bow instead of an automatic weapon. It was both silent and more deadly than one thought...Besides, she could admit that she preferred the visual aspect of using archery.

She tested it outside and found it perfect for her current needs and outside a proper artifact like a short Power-Bow or a Reaper Daiklave. Uh… That was something to think about. What should be her future Panoply? It was always a delicate balance to manage between the number of artifacts to have and the energy necessary to attune to them.

Probably just one utilitarian item like her medallion of the Sun, one armor like a Silken Armor, and one or two weapons like artifact versions of a bow and a staff. And speaking of weapons, maybe she should see if her primary one wasn't that rusty.

Zia exited her workshop after drinking some water and searched for a proper place to practice a little. She then closed her right fist and covered it with her open left hand. She followed by extending both slightly forward in front of her chest. It was a standard greeting, one expressing the "Presentation of Respects" in an auspicious way. Any Chinese martial practitioner would have recognized it.

Then she took a Golden Janissary stance by standing on her right leg. Her left knee bent and raised until it was above the level of her navel while her left foot covered the right knee with the toes extended down. Her left hand was in a forward and down defensive position while her right hand was pulled back in preparation for a palm strike. A practitioner of Shaolin Kung Fu would have seen the resemblance with one of their own stances.

After taking a deep breath, she launched herself into a fluid martial kata with dance-like footwork and sweeping unarmed attacks. At some interval, she summoned and unsummoned her staff from Inventory to vary her attack pattern. Her senses stretched outside their limits searching for those who hid in the darkness and revealed their wickedness.

As her Anima intensified from the first stage or "Glow" to the Burning stage, she once again internally swore to let no unclean thing set foot over Existence's threshold like so many of her past-lives peers did in Creation. Golden sun fire haloed her palm strikes and kicks so that she would answer any abominations and enemies of Existence with what they couldn't stand.

Zia finished her lethal dance giggling and then uproariously laughed. Essence Fever within the core of her being reached a high and made her heart beat euphorically. Listening to an impulsion from her Essence, she jumped on the back of Yona, summoning her horse's tack, and rode away along the southern beach, water splashing beneath hooves, and joyful laughter trailing the two of them.

Commanding Essence was a heady experience. It wasn't like speaking an incantation, turning a key, or flipping a card. To be aware of Essence is to feel, to in fact always feel, a new part of yourself, a part that is alive and active and burning with power and tremendous potential.

The young Solar Exalt's Essence was as much a part of her as her blood or thoughts or breath, and Zia, right now, ached to use this Solar Essence crying out for heedless glory.

Essence Fever imparted a great desire to act, to do, to grasp and wield the Exalt's newfound power to seize longstanding dreams, settle old grudges, and otherwise recklessly impose herself on the world.

Greatness was in the nature of the Solar Exalted, and so Zia's Essence pushed her to seize that greatness now. It was neither irresistible nor insurmountable, even for the very young but the urge was there.

An urge that Zia the Bright Raven ignored yesterday because of pride. A pride that made her suffer, both physically and emotionally at her actions, and also wounded the heart of her companion. That time, they didn't act as they should have. A lesson imprinted in Zia's soul. No doubt others will follow.

But this time, the two companions were in spiritual harmony: No chance to fall for Zia. Neither would ever chafe or develop sores from this ride. A ride that could potentially last twice as long as for the most enduring of horses. There was a light touch and a mote of Solar essence reached Yona's heart. Her speed, already at 32 km/h despite the sandy beach, suddenly doubled without affecting her stamina.

Zia didn't look back. Yona and her rode and rode around the entire island like a golden comet, leaping over obstacles and gaps, ignoring even the worst of the terrains, and plowing through the wild dogs that tried to hinder them. Tried. Yes, they both could feel it: The Eclipse and her mount's heart were beating as one.

Two hours later, the Bright Raven and the Yonaguni mare were back at her modest wooden house. During the insane ride, Zia swept her fingers along the abandoned ruins of civilization around the island, her fiery Essence grasping and reducing them to raw materials as resources for her crafting and then storing them in her Inventory.

It had been her intention from the beginning to salvage everything she could from Yonaguni's villages, but she didn't think she would have done it so easily and rapidly. Yes, her Inventory was so convenient.

They were both rather sweaty so Zia groomed the familiar and then took a bath in the stream to cool down. She smiled as she let the water run around her body. She felt so much better. Following that impulse coming from her Essence Fever seemed to have lifted a great weight from her shoulders.

It was also a trap. An Exalt could only reach enlightenment by controlling Essence, by recognizing the urge from Essence Fever and directing it towards a proper goal. Pursuing Greatness and Glory without looking where you were going could only lead to total annihilation.

Zia exited the stream and dried herself by inventorying the water on her skin and hair. So very convenient. She only needed to test her spell, finish her food and water provisions, and see a final time the Yonaguni horse herd. She nodded to herself. Tomorrow. The big day was for tomorrow.

She took a fresh Star-fruit and went to the southern beach followed by Yona. To cast a spell wasn't to draw on your personal pool of power, but to tap into the ambient Essence around the caster and impose your will on it.

In her case, Zia had an advantage: Her current sorcerous knowledge enabled her to draw on the very power of nature. On this island, she could easily supplement her will-shaping of ambient Essence by tapping the boundless energy linked to the vegetation around her.

The Bright Raven tossed the Star-fruit into the ocean and made mystical gestures to tap and manipulate the magical energy field into mudras of the turning seasons. Eh, she felt a little like Doctor Strange. Maybe she should call upon the long-disappeared Gods from Creation?

The mudras simulated the passage of time necessary for plants to grow. Under her willpower, the Star-fruit changed into a small, seaworthy craft that looked like a plant-like miniature replica of Solaris, the ship from the Empire of Mu, taken directly from the cartoon "The Mysterious Cities of Gold".

Wait… What?

It had some different colors here and there and an overall organic shape, but the ship had the distinctive stern face-shaped figurehead, wide hull, and the rigid-like solar sail from Solaris. Zia scratched her head. Well… Okay… She was almost sure that her subconscious had seriously influenced the ship's aspect.

She shrugged. It was still a seaworthy vessel with enough place to accommodate comfortably a dozen people and one ton of cargo. Even if she didn't have her Inventory, she could have stored more than enough provisions for her and Yona to travel to Okinawa.

The rest of the day saw the Eclipse finishing to store ample food and water in her Inventory. She then visited a final time the herd of Yonaguni horses and took the time to properly examine them, and if need be to medically treat them. After all, she was going to take care of Yona from that moment.

That night, Zia and Yona slept in the middle of the entire herd and the Solar Exalt dreamed about an ambush of one of her past lives by a Fang of Dragon-Blooded aboard a submersible small ship.

"There. That's the ship we were waiting for."

"Something's in the water with us, captain."

"What is it?"

"What the…"

"It's an ambush!"

"Die, Anathema!"

As the sun rose over the horizon on the 26 of July and dispersed the mists of the ominous omens of her dream, Zia greeted the Unconquered Sun onboard the "Solaris" with Yona that she transported aboard via her Inventory. The young girl couldn't resist the temptation to name the Floral Ferry like that.

Zia took the helm at the stern of the vessel and raising her arms let her Essence reach for the entire ship. She felt the Sun giving her its light and warmth and sensed that it was the same for Solaris. At her mental order, the anchor was raised and one pair of oars extended from the ship's sides and began to row, treading the saltwater with strength. Splendidly maneuvered by its captain, the vessel took speed and set sails.

Her goal of Okinawa firmly in her mind, Zia the Bright Raven and her familiar Yona sailed away on the ocean at 51,5 km/h toward a new adventure.

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Notes:

This chapter feels more like a filler than anything… Meh, the other chapters should be better.

So what should be the future Panoply of our young Exalt? And with what materials?

Yeah, I merely copied the various Shaolin Kung Fu stances to describe the Golden Janissary style. The sweeping gestures and descriptions in the "Scroll of the Monk" made me think that the Shaolin style was what inspired the Golden Janissary style. Especially since its practitioners were described as monk-like.

I wonder how many of you deduced that I was going to make the spell "Floral Ferry" an emulation of the ship Solaris?

The dream was taken from a comics page in "Books of Sorcery, Vol. I-Wonders of the Lost Age" 2nd edition of Exalted resource book and slightly modified.

Please don't hesitate to post your comments and suggestions. They are always welcome.

In the next chapter, Zia and Yona will encounter the dangers of the sea, both natural and human.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 6: Storm ahead!
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes:

This is the first true fight for our young Solar Exalt.

Thank you for all your suggestions on all forums. Trust me, they help.

And thank you to SwiftBlitz, the best beta reader I could hope for.

Dawn caste set:

Anima powers:

• At bonfire/iconic anima display, the Dawn adds half her Essence score (round up) to her base Initiative upon resetting to base after a successful decisive attack.

• For 10 motes, all of the Dawn's combat and movement Charms with outstanding reset conditions are automatically reset. This effect can only be used once per day, becoming available again at sunrise.

• The Dawn Caste inspires terror in her foes. She adds half her Essence score (round up) in dice to all intimidating social influence. She may also intimidate targets that do not feel fear, such as automatons, golems, and certain undead.

Attributes: Strength (+1): 4.

Abilities: Archery (+1): 4. Brawl (+1): 4. Melee (+2): 4. Presence (+1): 4. Thrown (+2): 5.

Charms (limited to Essence 1):

Archery: Wise Arrow, Phantom Arrow Technique, Sight Without Eyes, and Force Without Fire.

Brawl: Falling Hammer Strike, Ferocious Jab, Swift Strike Prana, Vicious Lunge, Iron Battle Focus, Heaven Thunder-Hammer, and Crashing Wave Throw.

Melee: Excellent Strike, One Weapon Two Blows, Dipping Swallow Defense, Call the Blade, War Lion Stance, Nimble Reaving Wind, Arc Shedding Rain Technique, Gleaming Sever, and Solar Counterattack.

Presence: Poised Lion Attitude.

Ride: Storm-Racing Destrier.

Survival: Harmony with Nature Approach.

Thrown: Precision of the Striking Raptor, Triple Distance Attack Technique, Joint-Wounding Attack, Angle Tracing Edge, Spitting Hand Technique, Diving Hawk, Thunder-Quelling Gesture, and Cascade of Cutting Terror.

Dreaming Pearl Courtesan style: Demure Carp Feint, Elegant Weapon Repertoire, and Pearlescent Filigree Defense.

Personal buy:

Merits: Language Japanese (3).

Floral Ferry Evocation: Solar Cannon (10).

Eclipse Charm: Vector Hands (8).

Exp points: -3 (experience debt). Solar points: 0.



Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 6: Storm ahead!


End of July. Somewhere in the East China Sea.

Zia the Bright Raven was swearing up a storm. It would have been hilarious if the vessel she was captaining, created by the spell "Floral Ferry" and baptized Solaris in the legacy of the original Zia, wasn't also in a storm.

Long and thick black hair plastered by the heavy rain over her brown skin, the middle-aged man-turned-young-girl by a ROB strained her green eyes to pierce through the weather. Even with her Essence reinforcing her senses it was still a struggle.

Water from the sky and water from the sea. It was a good thing she prepared rain clothes in advance or she would have looked like a drowned cat… Although, if it hadn't been a little cold, she could have stayed in swimwear for all the protection those clothes granted her for now. She really missed the "Perfect" clothes and equipment from Creation.

She laughed as she remembered yesterday when she had to use some of her stored plants to craft a batch of sunscreen lotion as even with her brown skin, she almost suffered a sunburn. Rather ironic and shameful for a Solar Exalt.

The ship rolled heavily under the waves' assault, rocking precipitously from side to side. Another powerful rush of surf washed across the deck. Good thing that everything was stored in her Inventory or it would have been knocked down, or worse, carried away.

Now, if only she could store herself just like she inventoried her familiar Yona, the small horse from Yonaguni island, it would be perfect. Unfortunately, she couldn't and she had to stay at the helm to supply Solaris with the necessary Essence to boost its speed and hull resistance. She grumbled and tried to not think about Yona being out of this rain and not being shaken by the ocean. The very faint yipping of a puppy seemed also a good distraction.

Wait. What?

She focused more Essence on her senses but couldn't properly locate the small animal. It was somewhere in her vicinity but the weather didn't make it easy. She gritted her teeth and turned to the stormy sky. "Okay. That's enough. Time to emulate Esteban. Ô, Unconquered Sun! Reveal your noble face to your daughter!"

Zia grasped mentally the tumultuous Essence around her and willed it to submit through the knowledge, trickery, and brute strength of her sorcery. A few minutes passed and suddenly one solitary sunbeam shone upon the Eclipse caste. After this, like it was a signal, the Sun showed itself in all its splendor and the storm dispersed around the Solaris.

This time, nothing hindered Zia and she located rapidly a half-sunk pleasure yacht bobbing on the water. She could even perfectly distinguish a Spaniel puppy furiously yipping on its deck.

She adroitly maneuvered the Solaris and stopped it on the side of the doomed ship. She lightly secured both vessels with a rope and boarded the damaged yacht. Whinnying, the Spaniel puppy didn't hesitate to rush to her and jump in her arms, frenetically licking her hands.

A simple pulse of Essence revealed to her that it was suffering from some exposure to the elements, was a little dehydrated, hungry, and… That was a distinctly elongated wound caused by the grazing of a bullet on its left flank.

She extracted a blanket from her Inventory and wrapped the puppy before exploring the ship. Here and there, impacts of bullets and other signs of violence. The absence of anyone, the pillaged luggage, and a gutted safe in one half-flooded cabin convinced the Solar Exalt that she was looking at the work of modern pirates.

Her eyes narrowed as she contemplated what to do. "Right. First things first: The puppy and the clues left by the absent people." She brought it on Solaris in the cargo hold and tried to make it comfortable before treating its wounds with warm and life-giving Essence. Clean fresh water and some strips of smoked meat completed the treatment and soon the puppy was snoring in its nest of blankets.

Returning to the boat, she could see that it was still slowly sinking. Using a combination of her Inventory and her Crafting skills and charms, she salvaged as much as possible as she could. Especially the radio and all the personal things she could find which show her that the owners were a rich Japanese family of three with the dog.

Her Essence-enhanced senses detected no traces of heavy and potentially lethal bleeding despite the water washing away the clues, so she hoped the entire family had been taken hostage for ransom. The trouble was that she had no idea where the pirates had gone especially since a broken timepiece revealed that all this happened two days ago. A salvaged local map showed some little islands in the vicinity, but it was a stretch to imagine that one could serve as a pirate hideout.

If that was the case then it had to be an uninhabited island with anything that would help hide a boat like a cove or something. She distractedly extracted a bullet from an interior wall while thinking about the problem. 7.62 mm, probably from an assault rifle like that faint barking of an AK-47 over the horizon.

Wait. What?

She boarded back Solaris, letting the pleasure yacht sink, and climbed the mast to see more distance over the horizon. There! A cargo ship at some distance and surrounded by six rapidly maneuvering speedboats. Gunshots exchanged showed that those pirates were trying to intimidate the lightly armed cargo crew to stop. She even perceived the characteristic trail of a rocket launcher.

Zia returned to the helm and firmly maneuvered towards the fight. She wasn't even questioning herself about intervening or not. That wasn't in her nature before and certainly not after her exaltation.

Resolutely, Solaris sped towards the ships. The Eclipse could see a bulk carrier vessel at some distance and identified it as the main ship of the pirates to load their stolen cargo due to its lack of identification marks. She also believed it significantly raised the chances that those pirates had a lair relatively nearby.

Many would think that it was pure folly to rush there. After all, the half a dozen pirate speedboats could trace circles around her at will and make mincemeat of her and Solaris with their modern weapons, even with her powers as an Exalt.

That was without counting on her best ally: The Sun. At the helm of Solaris, Zia the Bright Raven reached for the pure power within her. Her Anima manifested as a glow around her and the vessel born of magic as she called upon the defensive property of the Twilight caste Anima. A few hastily aimed bullet bursts from a speedboat were deflected by the aura.

The pirates were now aware of the shining Solaris and two speedboats maneuvered to deal with it, but it was too late already. At the helm, Zia focused her will on her ship and fed her Anima to it.

The hexagonal organic plates at the summit of the mast blossomed like a flower bud. From it, a beam of concentrated solar light searched around and reached for a speedboat. The intense heat from the beam blurred its image for an instant before the clothes of the pirates and everything flammable aboard ignited and the fuel reservoir exploded.

Feeding more Essence into her Anima and then into the Solaris' Solar Cannon, the Bright Raven targeted the remaining five speedboats one after another. They were fast, but not as fast as light. She changed tactics as the last pirate speedboat exploded and widened the beam she directed at the bulk carrier's command deck. She didn't want to destroy it, but make it run away toward its lair with a generous application of blinding light and unbearable heat.

As the bulk carrier retreated at maximum speed, trailing smoke, Zia leaned on the helm to catch her breath. She had used almost all her Essence reserves in this fight. The Solar Cannon Evocation she used through Solaris was powerful but ate Essence fast.

She took great care of noting the direction of the fleeing pirate ship and approached the cargo vessel. She frowned as it was a Japanese ship due to the Hiragana characters on its stern. Sighing, she checked if she had enough reserves and bought herself the knowledge of the Japanese language. The young girl smiled as the Hiragana letters revealed the ship as the Kobayashi Maru.

Wait… What!?

She facepalmed. Again, that was certainly the doubtful humor of the ROB. But, really? Having the attacked vessel with the same name as the cargo star-ship in the doomed scenario of Star Fleet simulations… Well, she supposed she was doing a good enough Kirk by letting the enemy flee toward its base.

She maneuvered until the Solaris was parallel to the Kobayashi Maru's course and level to the command deck tower, crafted a megaphone on the spot, and used her recently acquired Japanese language. "Ahoy, Kobayashi Maru! Everybody all right on board?!"

It took some time as a few crew members looked at the young girl and even some began to use their cellphones to take pictures before the captain of the ship communicated that they were all right although the pirates' jamming was still going on. Oh, and if she could identify herself and what the hell was going on?!

"I am Zia the Bright Raven aboard the Solaris! I wish you better luck for the rest of your travel! Safe waters, sailors!" Saluting, the Solar Exalt ignored further communications and turned full speed on the same path taken by the pirate bulk carrier. She hoped the Kobayashi Maru's crew wouldn't reveal too much to the authorities since the pirates were certainly listening to the radio waves.

She knew the pirates wouldn't be that foolish to take the direct way to their lair if it was nearby, but the general direction and the local map gave her enough to pinpoint the probable island they were hopefully using. Nodding to herself, she took the bet and calculated the distance to that small island, adjusting the speed of Solaris to reach it as the night fell.

As the sunset happened at the same time she reached the island, Zia used the last rays of sunlight to maneuver Solaris out of sight from a small cove and the probable port of the pirates.

Yona wasn't happy that she was left on the ship but acknowledged that her mistress would prefer the familiar to be safe since the Bright Raven hadn't forged an appropriate barding for her to deal with modern weapons. Should the worst happen, the magic ship was "programmed" to disembark the horse and the puppy dog on a nearby beach.

Storing her dress in her Inventory and clad in her bikini swimwear, Zia dived into the sea and swam towards the small hidden cove under the cover of the falling night. Thankfully, her bet was successful as it didn't take her that much time to perceive the first signs of human activity. The smell of smoke was also a big clue. Mostly invisible in the water, she slowly and almost silently trod the water up to under a crude pier and listened.

The pirates had a cozy and well-hidden little installation and they weren't very happy. Shouts and barked orders in Japanese were flying in the air. Teams were finishing to verify that all the fires were put out and reparations were beginning here and there. With their morale so low, plenty of useful facts were revealed as the men tried to alleviate their anxiety with boasts, oaths of revenge, and insults.

Apparently, Zia killed a good third of the pirates with the Solar Cannon. The pirates still retained sufficient automatic and heavy weapons, but no longer had any speedboats. The bulk carrier was only slightly damaged and they could still detect and jam ships. And finally, the ongoing gossip revealed that they still had that rich family as hostages and should recoup their losses rapidly.

She hoisted herself up on the far side of the pier under the cover of a small warehouse. Using the fact that the speedboats' crew was a third of the pirates, she estimated that there were still about thirty armed pirates on the island with half of them occupied with repairing the bulk carrier. It was time to explore the surroundings and find the hostages.

Zia stayed in swimwear after drying herself by storing the water in her Inventory. She wasn't a Night caste and didn't want to leave any traces. Besides, an orange dress wasn't very discrete… Maybe she should craft some effective Shinobi gear in the future?

Although camouflaged by paint or canvas, there weren't many buildings: One prefab small warehouse with stolen merchandise and an armory, another prefab small warehouse holding diesel generators and too many various things, one building near the shore where they previously stored the now destroyed speedboats, many small huts serving as crew houses, and an assemblage of old ship-containers with many antennae on the roofs.

The last was probably the headquarters for the pirates' leader and one lone container was isolated behind barbed wire and should be the prison where the hostages were lodged.

Zia the Bright Raven thought about a plan to minimize the dangers to both her and the hostages: She had to limit the pirates' firepower, protect the hostages, prevent any pirates from fleeing, and neutralize them. And she had to be discrete while doing all that. This was going to severely drain her personal Essence pool to prevent any Anima buildup and glowing like a lightbulb.

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Masato yawned and tried to stay awake by lighting a cigarette since dawn was coming up soon. The Japanese thug keeping the watch near the prison sighed and readjusted the shoulder strap of his AK-47. What a fiasco. That damned Parahuman in his Tinkertech boat wrecked the small forces of the Red Sharks with his triple-damned "Death-Beam-tm".

The chief wasn't happy and took his anger on the rest of the band. No way he was going to abuse his prisoners since they now needed the money from their ransom. He winced as he palmed the red mark on his right cheek. Bah, it could have been worse and the chief knew many people.

People that could learn and gave them the name of that SOB. He smirked. No doubt they would have "a discussion" with him soon. He was sure he'd take real pleasure in breaking a few bones the next shore leave in Japan.

Small hands silently reached for his neck and mouth from behind. Masato's last thought was how soft they felt as something like a Star Trek Vulcan nerve pinch rendered him unconscious. Zia extinguished the lit cigarette to prevent any fire hazard and arranged the now disarmed and tied-up body of the pirate on a camping chair to simulate he was still conscious and guarding the prison container.

Zia smiled as she used the purloined guard's keys to open the makeshift prison cell door the pirates had switched the built-in doors with. Wouldn't do good if the prisoners died of asphyxiation.

Until now, at least, she managed to stay undetected as she neutralized and locked up the isolated or small groups of pirates. Her Inventory was so convenient to store the weapons and those sleeping scums that a neat little plant-based soporific she crafted on the spot and maintained unconsciously to prevent their escape from it. At least for a few hours.

The repair teams on the bulk carrier weren't very large and lacked automatic or powerful weapons: Only melee weapons and a few small handguns. But before she assaulted the boat and the chief's residence, she had to secure the hostages to prevent any retaliations.

At first, the Japanese family of a middle-aged couple with their teenage daughter was scared then intrigued by the young girl in a bikini and armed to the teeth like a budget Rambo. Zia shushed them and gave the adults assault rifles and handguns along with plenty of magazines. She advised them to stay out of sight in the nearby forest and only defend themselves if discovered.

When the father asked more questions, she simply said that the soon-to-arrive shootout should answer enough about her intentions… Zia also ensured that they, at least, knew how to point their weapons in the right direction and where was the safety and the trigger.

A dozen minutes later, Zia thoroughly under the cover of the tropical forest and newly clad in her orange dress, opened the party by firing a burst from an assault rifle over the heads of the repair crew and flowed her voice with Essence to cower the pirates. "Surrender immediately! I already dealt with your comrades! I won't repeat myself!"

When one idiot went for his gun, thinking rightly that she was just a child, she knocked the weapon out of his hands with one bullet. "I will ventilate the next idiot! Weapons on the ground! Out of the ship! Especially you, the imbecile hiding behind the red barrel!"

Once the frightened and bewildered men exited the ship and threw down their weapons, Zia locked them up in the warehouse that she preemptively emptied of the weapons and stolen merchandise (although she had asked herself why a good part of them were festive or tourism items including a full crate of paper fans).

After inventorying the thrown weapons, she just had to deal with their chief who was now exiting his container house, and began to walk in her direction without alarm or preparation of a weapon.

Wait… No, this time she wasn't surprised. She maintained her awareness through another use of Essence to avoid that. From what she heard while spying on the Red Sharks, their chief was dangerous and would be treated as such. "Hands up and surrender! All your men have been neutralized!"

The man wasn't very tall or even muscular. With black hair and beady black eyes, he looked like a typical antagonist from a manga with a costume that screamed low-budget Sith cosplayer with plenty of red and black frills without a cloak or lightsaber. He stopped at a distance and smirked at the young girl. Zia's danger sense flared up.

She was still totally surprised when something invisible knocked out her assault rifle from her hands and another invisible attack hit her in the face, knocking her down by its sheer strength.

She blinked as she sat up, nose throbbing with pain. The pirate chief hadn't moved from where he was at a few dozen meters and was still smirking. "You sure about that, girl? You're dealing with Red Shark himself."

Zia's eyes narrowed and suddenly she was already standing up and in a Martial Arts stance, ready to unleash her might and her senses focused on her surroundings to see if she missed a pirate or two. Typical, the Parahuman named his gang after himself.

The red and black-clad man chuckled and Zia was stricken again by 3 completely invisible consecutive attacks: 2 slaps and one punch in the belly. As she was knocked down again, gasping, she realized that yes: Those attacks felt exactly like a slap and a punch carried by a human hand. And she was now sure that no one escaped her. Conclusion: This scum was a Blaster or Shaker-type Parahuman… But what sort of…?

Meanwhile, the pirate chief was surprised as the unknown girl stood up again after being hit by attacks that would have put down even a healthy adult. Unless… Uh… She was glowing.

"Ah, I see. You're a Parahuman like me. That explains from where the hell you're coming and how the fuck you dealt with my men." He sinisterly chuckled. "You should fetch a nice price with the Yangban."

He wasn't worried about her eventual power since she used a weapon. In fact… "Nice Martial Arts stance."

Zia prepared herself for the next attack. "More than enough to deal with you."

Red Shark smirked. "Doubtful, considering what it lacks." He drew two silvered revolvers from his back. "Namely range. On your knees and hands behind the head, I won't ask again." He deliberately cocked back the hammers of his guns.

The Eclipse caste didn't answer verbally, she rushed the pirate chief but not as fast as she could to provoke a calculated reaction. Red Shark didn't disappoint. Snarling, he shot her and his eyes widened in fright as she deflected the bullet on her golden wrist cuffs like she was the fucking Wonder Woman.

Red Shark emptied his revolvers one after another and gritted his teeth as, like a golden-streaked dancer, the young girl deflected the bullets one by one until the last at a few meters from him.

Well, she was a stupid girl, too bad for her. With a simple exercise of his will, he lifted her in the air by her neck, strangling her with the telekinetic power that made him the Man he was.

Huh, there was something familiar with this scene. He raised his right hand in her direction in a very recognizable gesture for anyone having seen a certain movie. "I find your lack of faith in my power, disturbing."

Trying to break the painful but intangible stranglehold despite her lack of leverage, Zia swore at herself. She had counted on the surprise and the fear her way to dealing with the bullets should have generated to reach the pirate before he used his power, but this Parahuman effect was faster than she thought and now she had to find a quick solution before losing consciousness.

Still, now she could feel the form taken by the invisible energy around her neck. It was… a pair of hands. Her eyes opened in realization. Red Shark was literally using telekinetic hands. It was a pure Force effect fueled by will. It was…

Like the Vector Hands used by the Diclonius in the anime "Elfen Lied". Now she knew. Now she had knowledge. And with knowledge…

The Sun began to rise over the horizon.

… Came power.

Red Shark was thrown back as suddenly the damn girl seemed to explode into light. He shook his head and tried to see where she was despite the spots in his eyes. Ah, there she was, kneeling on the ground with… "What the Hell!?"

Zia the Bright Raven's Anima blazed brightly, subsuming her Caste mark into its radiance. Wisps of bright power coiled off her body and rose into the air. The beams of sunlight made everything around her warm to the touch and took on the faint scent of a summer afternoon.

Then her green eyes opened and another mark manifested upon her forehead: An eight-pointed sunburst of purest gold, gleaming on the brow. The Caste Mark of the Dawn. Her eyes rapidly moved as if she was in a dream state as memories and knowledge of Creation played within her mind.

Today is my first war.

I've been looking forward to it.

Unfortunately, the enemy numbers in the tens of thousands.

Seems like a waste of time.

Oh well…


"FORWARD!"

"This little firework won't save you, girl!" Red Shark unleashed his invisible telekinetic hands that only he could see, determined to wring the neck of that damn young Parahuman before she pulled out another trick.

As they reached the orange-clad black-haired youth, another pair of telekinetic hands materialized and blocked his strikes. One identical to his own but emanating straight out from the girl's back. "There's no way… That's impossible!"

Then the Solar Exalt's Anima fully ignited for the first time on Earth Bet in a grand display of iconic splendor as a gigantic bird of fire rose in the air.

The Phoenix beat its wings a few times and then its piercing cry sounded over the entire island. No being who followed Evil could bear the song of the majestic paragon of Immortality, Resurrection, and Life after Death. As the iconic image of the Exaltation within Zia the Bright Raven fully deployed its wings, mortal fear engulfed Red Shark and his jailed men.

The phantasmal fire-bird then plunged back within the body of Zia and her Anima collapsed into a raging bonfire of spiritual power stretching high into the air, visible for miles despite the rising Sun. On her brow, the Eclipse caste mark shone brightly anew.

The Bright Raven looked at her enemy. She could capture him, but she didn't have the means to keep him imprisoned. Even with drugs and shackles, his telekinesis could defeat all she could arrange with just one occasion and he proved he would kill without compunction. She had a choice, but she refused to let the innocents pay for it.

Dreaming Pearl Courtesan was a subtle style, graceful, elusive, and lethal. A student learned to maneuver herself into the perfect position to strike. Once the Dreaming Pearl Courtesan reached her victim at his most vulnerable she revealed her true nature as a killer, fighting with a deadly grace and the elusiveness of a dream.

Zia seemingly danced a little on the spot, drawing two paper fans from her Inventory. She whirled on herself and words came unbidden to her lips. Words belonging to a video game Martial Arts character who also used fans as weapons. "KACHÔ SEN!"

Suffused by Essence, the 2 paper fans were launched in 2 contrary arcing trajectories and seemingly passed nearby Red Shark's neck before returning to Zia's hands. With a firm gesture, she closed the fans and Red Shark's head fell on the ground in a fountain of blood, they had acted as two blades counter spinning on each side of his neck.

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Notes:

I'm not too sure about the format of the Floral Ferry Evocation: Solar Cannon. Probably something like that:
Cost: 5m, 1a+. Mins: Essence 1.
Type: Simple.
Keywords: Dual.
Duration: Instant.
Prerequisites: None.
Effects: Inflict Withering or Decisive damage + (Essence+(Anima level X 3)) up to Siege (Extreme Range) distance. Flammable materials are immediately ignited.

By the way, Kobayashi Maru means "Full Grove" in English.

Believe me, at the beginning, I was simply killing the pirates. But then I remembered that it was "normal" only for the Exalted setting, not for a first fight in Worm.

The dream sequence came from "Dreams of the First Age. Book 1: Lands of Creation". It was the comics page about the Dawn caste Contentious Sword, the Golden Blade.

Vector Hands is the first "Eclipse" charm Zia learned from a Parahuman… Hum… I think I'll have to create a Gallery Rogues for her.
Cost: 3m, 1wp. Mins: Essence 1.
Type: Simple.
Keywords: Eclipse, dual, mute.
Duration: One scene.
Prerequisites: None.
Effects: Generate a pair of hands with an effective strength of (Willpower-3) able to do everything a hand can do, including parrying lethal attacks without a stunt. They are invisible and necessitate an awareness test with a difficulty equal to Essence. The range is close at Essence 1, short at Essence 2, medium at Essence 3, long at Essence 4, and extreme at Essence 5+. One repurchase at Essence 1 generates (Essence+1) pairs of hands (ambidextrous characters ignore off-hand penalties), using multiple pairs needs a flurry. One repurchase at Essence 2 makes the Vector Hands count as a part of the body (notably for Brawl charms). One repurchase at Essence 3 makes the Vector Hands ignore Essence Hardness.

I'm sure everyone recognized the video game character that uses fans as weapons.

My two custom evocation and charm are not that good. If you have a better format, don't hesitate to post.

Once again, don't hesitate to post your ideas, suggestions, and Solar points awards.

In the next chapter, Zia lands on Okinawa and departs for the USA.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 7: Shush, you didn’t see me. New
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes:

The inspiration for the Parahuman powers made into Eclipse Charms came from "Kill Them All", an amazing Worm/gamer story written by ShayneT.

There was an Easter Egg about Naruto in the last chapter. How many saw it?

We are almost on the last part of Zia's current travel.

Thank you to SwiftBlitz for beta-reading all this.

Night caste set:

Anima powers:

• For two motes, the Night can dampen her anima, treating all Peripheral Essence expenditures as if they were Personal for one instant.

• For three motes, the Night can ignore up to (higher of 3 or Essence) penalties to a Stealth attempt for one instant. These motes are always considered Personal, regardless of the pool they're spent from.

• When the Night's anima is at the bonfire/iconic level, it wraps around and suffuses her form, hiding her figure and masking her visage in flame. She is merely a fearsome silhouette shrouded in all the hues of the evening. It becomes impossible to discern her identity. This is considered a perfect effect, and cannot be pierced by Eye of the Unconquered Sun or other all-seeing magic.

Attributes: Wits (+1): 4.

Abilities: Awareness (+2): 4. Dodge (+1): 4. Investigation (+3): 4.

Charms (limited to Essence 1):

Awareness: Keen (Sight) Technique, Keen (Taste & Smell) Technique, Surprise Anticipation Method, Foe-Scenting Method, and Awakening Eye.

Dodge: Dust Motes Whirling, Shadow Over Water, Searing Quicksilver Flight, Reflex Sidestep Technique, and Leaping Dodge Method.

Investigation: Watchman's Infallible Eye, Crafty Observation Method, Fetich-Tracing Eye, and Judge's Ear Technique.

Larceny: Seasoned Criminal Method, Flawless Pickpocketing Technique, Lock-Opening Touch, and Flawlessly Impenetrable Disguise.

Stealth: Perfect Shadow Stillness, Easily-Overlooked Presence Method, Stalking Shadow Spirit, and Blinding Battle Feint.

Spells: Sculpted Seafoam Eidolon.

Exp points: 2. Solar points: 4.

Not many suggestions from my readers this time. While I do have a plan, I also listen to advice.


Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 7: Shush, you didn't see me.


End of July. Afternoon. The southern coast of the island of Okinawa. Japan.

Diet member Rando Yaguchi authorized himself to sigh in relief as he finally disembarked from the pirate bulk carrier at the port of Itoman with all his family, alive and healthy. As the patriarch, he had to project a certain image, especially around his daughter. But dear gods… The last days had been hell for them and it was the last time he took a vacation without an army of bodyguards.

It began with his dear wife Masako who simply asked for a little family time away from the horrible situation in Japan. Simple enough, especially that, for once, his daughter Katsumi wanted that too. A nice change from her habitual stubborn teenage rebellion. He shuddered thinking about the day she came back home with bleached hair.

He had a small pleasure yacht, the result of a little bribe to promulgate a law that was promptly shot down by the camp of the requester. All to the benefit for him. Of course, he took all the precautions but the pirates who intercepted them were a nasty surprise and too well equipped in weaponry and electronic counter-measures.

Very violent too. They didn't hesitate to open fire on the yacht itself and he thought the pirates had killed Tsubasa, the Spaniel puppy they recently adopted, to make an example. At least, until it was given back alive to a teary and joyful Katsumi. He rightly feared for their lives until that filthy Burakumin named Red Shark revealed that his family was taken for ransom from the Japanese government.

Still, the next 2 days had been a nightmare and, in his growing despair about the situation, he even didn't feel betrayed when his daughter asked him to stop to reassure them like a politician. Even fiercely hugging his wife and daughter didn't inspire many hopes.

And then, during the night, she appeared from nowhere: Zia the Bright Raven as she presented herself. She looked like something from an anime, clad in dark green swimwear and bearing enough weapons to reenact the Greater East Asia War. But so young, much too young. Zia couldn't be less than 4 or 5 years younger than his fifteen-year-old daughter.

He tried to take control of the situation, after all, he was the adult. But her eyes… In her eyes shone the wisdom of centuries, something out of the norm even among the Parahumans of Japan and the world. Something that he couldn't disobey when she advised them to hide.

And so, the entire family had waited in a tropical forest with assault rifles and handguns (not his daughter of course). The spectacle had been terrifying and exhilarating. Especially the Phoenix she unleashed at the end of the battle. They could only hear what was happening until she did that.

And she did the impossible. She captured ALL the pirates but one. Thirty nasty and violent people armed to the teeth by herself. A ninja team wouldn't have done better. However, in the end, that young girl was forced to kill the pirate leader Red Shark with her own hands. He could sense the regret at her actions when she solemnly put the corpse in a body bag but from his own interactions with the criminal, she didn't have much of a choice: Kill or be killed or worse.

After that, he observed her as she first medically treated his family (with more experience and knowledge than his personal doctor), sewed their clothes back to an almost pristine condition then inspected the bulk carrier while finishing the repairs like she was a speedster, changed a few things here and there in the cargo holds and transferred all the pirates inside as prisoners while the corpse of the leader was secured in a cold room. It seemed the Red Sharks had put a few nasty surprises in the holds just in case and weren't very happy she neutralized their means of escape and emptied their caches.

Another surprise was when she took a small boat and came back aboard a Tinkertech-looking ship with an organic aspect which returned to a compact aspect with a snap of her fingers in the form of a Star-fruit. That was when she gave back our dog to Katsumi. A dog she healed herself.

Still, the small horse, from Yonaguni Island if he wasn't mistaken, seemed a very strange company for a Thinker Parahuman oriented towards a Field Combat Medical specialty with some grab-bag additions… At least that was what made the most sense… If he forgot about the Phoenix.

He suspected that the horse had been trained like the combat horses of the past as it served as a guard for the pirates during their return to Okinawa. It even sounded a bell twice to signal a tentative escapee. The pirates were definitely not happy but, frankly, they should be thankful that the young girl felt merciful and took time to feed them and even medically treated some.

Thoughtful of any potential dangers, he waited for them to be in sight of the Island before contacting the proper authorities and a cutter from the JMSDF escorted them to the port where an impressive mix of military and police force were waiting for them and the pirates.

Now it was time for the Great Media Circus. Oh, he was an old hand at this and while marking points for his political party, he would also pay, in part, the debt he had with Zia aka Bright Raven… A fitting Cape name now that he was reflecting on it. The icon Phoenix had been taken so many times by unworthy people before that he could see why she took that variation based on her impressive fire-bird aura.

As he was slowing down from his speech against "the rapacious so-called modern pirates" he turned in her direction to present Zia to the press as the "heroic savior of his dear family who didn't hesitate to listen to her heart despite her young age" and… She wasn't there…

Wait. What?

There was a moment of hesitation as suddenly everyone realized that the young black-haired, green-eyed, brown-skinned girl clad in an obvious orange dress was no longer near the Yaguchi family. Everyone included not only his family and puppy, the press and their cameras but also the impressive police cordon protecting him and his family. How could you lose sight of a child clothed like that?

A member of the press suddenly forcefully turned his cameraman in a direction and pointed his index in the same direction. "LOOK!"

Of course, everyone turned their eyes and cameras in that direction to see that absent girl smiling and waving goodbye at them from the bow of the pirate bulk carrier, and then with a heart-stopping jump, she dived into the sea, disappearing under the waves in a spray of sea-foam.

Katsumi Yaguchi, frowning and hugging her precious Tsubasa, turned toward her flabbergasted father and furiously whispered. "You did it again. Like with all my school friends because of your party image or another stupidity. I'm sure that one way or another, it's your fault Zia-chan ran away. And I was so looking forward to being called "Big Sister"."

He turned a bewildered gaze to her. Uh oh, even his wife was staring at him with disapproval. Masako did talk with him about an eventual adoption in the future. Forget about the party interests, he had to do something quick if he didn't want to sleep on the couch for a month at least.

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Zia the Bright Raven laid a wreath of white lilies symbolizing mourning and grief for the Japanese at the feet of the Himeyuri memorial. The Himeyuri students sometimes called "Lily Corps", was a group of 222 students and 18 teachers of the Okinawa Daiichi Girls' High School and Okinawa Shihan Women's School formed into a nursing unit for the Imperial Japanese Army during the Battle of Okinawa in 1945. They were mobilized by the Japanese Army on March 23, 1945.

The students were wrongly told that the Japanese army would defeat the American invasion easily and that they would be safe from danger. Many brought their school supplies and uniforms with them to study and prepare to return to school. Deployed instead to front-line cave hospitals under constant gunfire and bombings, few students and teachers managed to survive the war.

It was something that during her last past life, the Eclipse Exalt swore to honor their memories should he, at that time, travel in the area.

Her spell, Sculpted Seafoam Eidolon, had been very useful. She discretely used her sorcery before they entered Itoman's port to shape sea foam and her aqueous reflection into a simulacrum of reality. In brief, she created a water replica of herself. The illusion could perform lifelike motions, was capable of simple speech, and had scent, body heat, and other sensory tells.

So, she simply directed the illusion's behavior at a distance until it dived into the sea where she returned it to its sea-foam components.

She walked out of the Himeyuri Memorial and Museum, thinking about life, death, memories, and the gift she just received as she guided the pirate bulk carrier into Itoman's port. When she saw the numerous military and police troops, she knew she had to make a choice: Either go with the flow and probably end under the Japanese government's attention, or escape promptly and stealthily.

She chose the latter and as she felt her Caste mark changing momentarily into an empty golden circle, she was visited by the memories of Harmonious Jade, one of the Night caste Solar from the Era of Sorrows in Creation.

Harmonious Jade filtered into the tomb as gradually and imperceptible as dust or the smell of age. She pulled a cloak of Essence close about her and faded from the sight and mind of all who beheld her. It was not that she feared the eyes of men might fall upon her. The tomb had been sealed for over 1000 years, and no mortal thing within it was any worry to her.

But there were things within the tomb that were not mortal. There were certain to be demons within the tomb, under ancient duress to patrol its halls and slay intruders. Perhaps she could defeat them, perhaps not. It seemed wisest to her to be discreet and avoid the question altogether.

She laid her palms against the door, and there was a crack that split the night, as the great stone lock within the doors broke loose after centuries of settling. The mechanism grated and popped while the Exalted focused her magic on it. "Do not hear this!" her magic cried as the doors swung slowly open. "Do not see it!"

It had been so strange to be able to feel what was not there inside the memory of a dream. She shook her head. She had still plenty of things to do. Resolutely, she entered anew the town and walked towards her goal: The airport. A subtle invisible cloak of Essence covered the Bright Raven as she evaded detection from the various search parties sent for her by simply hiding in plain sight.

Despite being a child clad in an orange dress with golden accessories, she was able to drift unnoticed through the entire town and the minimal security at the airport. This use of Essence modeled her talent for blending in and remaining unobtrusive. No one would notice her unless she took overt action such as any display of her Essence-enhanced physical prowess.

Still, everything wasn't that easy. Her cloak wouldn't hinder the people at the checkpoint from asking for her travel ticket or inquiring about her parents. She looked around and saw there weren't enough people to blend in and make the airport staff think she was part of a tourist family.

Well, necessity is law. With hands quicker than the eye, the Exalt relieved a hapless soul of his material burden, or more exactly she stole a cargo list from the pocket of a luggage handler. Rapidly scanning it, she found where and when a transport plane would depart for Narita Airport. Another pass near the same employee gave the list back. Ordinary senses couldn't detect this, only inhuman sensory acuity, such as a spider feeling vibrations in its web, or those able to use magic like her would have a chance.

She borrowed a ride hidden in a luggage cart and stealthily boarded the cargo hold of the plane. Contrary to popular opinion, there was no animal cargo hold as such. The holds were within the same pressure vessel as the heated air from the passenger section exhausted through the cargo spaces and out through the outflow plane's valves. She located a locked container out of direct sight that should remain empty until Narita, lightly tapped the side of it with a hand suffused by Essence and the lock opened… just like that.

There were no problems during the flight and landing at Narita airport. In fact, the size of the airport helped her to safely blend in and now, she just had to consult the departure panel for a flight to the USA… After taking a well-earned cup of tea. She was in Japan after all.

After tasting a nice cup of Sencha which was the most popular and widely-consumed Japanese green tea, she pondered on her options concerning the flights to the USA. She nodded as there were a few flights to Boston when her danger sense suddenly flared.

Her eyes and ears seemed to jump in one direction. There! In the gallery shop, one floor below, a Japanese man clad in a gray tracksuit was running in the hallway, his face a grin of both fear and glee. Behind him, plain clothes law-enforcement members were trying to catch him up in silence.

Wait. What?

Both the pursuers and the pursued were avoiding any yelling or making other sounds. The policemen should have screamed for him to stop, or for the people around to move or something so what…?

Zia the Bright Raven refocused on the running man. And what a naughty man he was. He had a handgun in the interior pocket of his vest, a knife hidden in his right sock, and… a detonator in his left hand. An ARMED detonator!

A bomb! There was a bomb somewhere in Narita airport. And we were nearing the rush hour of midday. A dozen plans flashed through the mind of Zia and one seemed feasible on the spot.

Using the lingering energies of her dissipating notice-me-not Essence cloak to hide her initial actions, she jumped down to the floor where the pursuit was happening. One floor height was nothing for an Exalt doped by Essence. One, two, and three! And it was over.

One, Zia fueled her aggressiveness into her Essence, quickening her movements and allowing her to blur instantly into the path of the probable terrorist.

Two, her right hand snatched and maintained pressure on the detonator's lever since it was a type that activated when the hand holding it opened, and stored it into her so convenient Inventory to neutralize its transmitter before the man even blinked at her presence and his absent detonator.

Three, her left fist, without too much strength behind, buried itself into the celiac plexus (or solar plexus) bringing the pursuit to an end and sending the pursued terrorist into unconsciousness.

Of course, just after all that, the police surrounded her and took into custody the terrorist. The leader was a… well, a fat man with a black bar-type mustache, a brown trench coat, and a hat suit. In fact, he looked like a Japanese version of Inspector Clouseau or Commissioner Maigret.

"Well, miss? First thank you for helping us apprehend this dangerous person." He then loomed from above into her personal space, frowning. "Now, I would like to know what you were thinking about putting yourself in such a danger. I'm sure your parents would disapprove."

Zia flatly answered. "My parents are dead. Mister…?"

He blinked and with a contrite face stepped back from her. "I'm sorry, miss. I was just, well, angry at the risk you just took. I'm Juzo Megure, an inspector from the Tokyo Metropolitan Police District."

Zia's eyes widened and she barely managed to not wince and facepalm. Juzo Megure, a character from "Conan Detective" and whose name was translated in French as Maigret… And, of course, she could now recognize the police officer Wataru Takagi and the female police officer Miwako Sato… Okay, seriously, the ROB was just playing with her. "I am Zia the Bright Raven."

"Thank you. May I ask where his your guardi…?"

"Inspector! We can't find the detonator."

"Takagi-san, quieter. We can't afford a panic at this time. Well, he had it when the pursuit began so…"

Zia extracted the neutralized detonator from her Inventory. "Is that what you're searching for, Inspector Megure?"

Everyone's eyes around her went round. Megure put on a pair of gloves and gently took it from her hand. "How did you…? Are you a Parahuman?"

Zia braced herself. It has begun: Her being pigeonholed as a Parahuman. "No, although I do have powers, I'm not legally a Parahuman. I don't have a Corona Gemma or a Pollentia. I put the detonator in my pocket dimension to prevent any outward signal when it switched on."

Megure sighed. This was going to be a circus. The young Zia was obviously a foreigner despite her flawless Japanese and he didn't like treating with the Sentai Elite. Too many among them had the stereotype prejudice against foreigners and too much national pride. "Well, this case is becoming more complicated. I'm afraid we'll have to go to our headquarters with your guardian to resolve it." He smiled at her and swore to himself to shield her as much as he could.

Zia, reading his intentions, smiled back gently and bowed to him. "I perfectly understand, inspector. And, I'm sorry."

Megure blinked. "Sorry about wha…?" Zia took one jumping step back, through the thin police cordon and inside the crowd of spectators and simply disappeared under his eyes. The whole law-enforcement group scrambled and searched for her in vain. Even blocking for a time the planes' departure, looking at the video surveillance network, and cordoning the metro didn't bring any clues about the away path and location of Zia the Bright Raven.

Meanwhile, a teenage American boy clad in a pair of jeans and a leather jacket was listening to a pair of headphones while following quietly his family to their plane for Los Angeles. Everyone could see he was related to the couple with another teenage girl. The staff at the checkpoint, encouraged by an invisible cloud of Essence, practically let them pass after looking at the adults' passports.

In the past, the Solars were master chameleons donning disguises and attending the fetes of the Raksha, to hear them confess their nefarious plans for Creation. Using her Essence, Zia extraordinarily changed her appearance: She changed her gender, boosted her apparent age by 4 years, altered her height by a few inches up, changed her ethnicity to Caucasian, adjusted her voice to a male register, and altered her accent.

And just in case they managed to bring Tsubasa, the Spaniel puppy, or more probably other K9 units, she changed her scent. This disguise simply couldn't be pierced by mundane senses. Nor could it be thwarted by inhuman sensory acuity, such as the nose of a hound or the eye of a hawk. Only senses heightened to supernatural levels had a chance to pierce this deception. Even magic able to pierce this effect would only reveal that the Solar Exalt was not what she appeared to be.

Still, Zia was a little worried. She had managed to safely board a plane, but not the one she wanted. Once she landed at Los Angeles LAX in 10 hours, she will have to take a train to the East Coast. A plane would be faster but with the accrued risk of being discovered.

The main problem was that Los Angeles was the fief of Alexandria aka PRT Chief Director Rebecca Costa-Brown, the epitome of Earth Bet FISS (Flight Invulnerability Super-Strength) type of Parahuman. Yes, FISS instead of Brute as the PRT Threat rating named them. Recognizing the threat convention would mean recognizing Alexandria as a hero and… well, she wasn't. Alexandria package, her ass. Comparing that utter bitch to Superman? Yeah, right.

Zia the Bright Raven will have to count on anonymity to pass this hurdle. After all, how much info was there on her?

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International Diffusion (under Parahuman Treaty rules).
Date: 31 July 2009.
Origin: Tokyo Metropolitan Police District.
Destination: US PRT main Office and US Protectorate main Office.
Motive: New Parahuman traveling to probable US destination.

Name: Zia (no last name).
Cape Name: Bright Raven.
Country: Unknown (Peru possibly) Flawless Japanese language and possession of a Yonaguni Island animal show a probable long-time living on Japanese territory.
Affiliation: Hero (no other affiliation for now).
Sex: Female.
Age: Estimated to be 10 to 12 years old (parents are probably deceased, no known guardian, possible adoption by Yaguchi family).
Description (photos included): 145 cm height, estimated 35-38 kg weight, brown skin (Quechua ethnic), green eyes, long and thick black hair in a straight style, orange dress (Peruvian design), golden headpiece, golden wrist cuffs, and a golden medallion.

Known facts: Rescue of cargo ship Kobayashi Maru (code Sea Okinawa Civilian 200907856). Unconfirmed number of self-defense kills of heavily armed Red Shark pirates. Rescue of Diet member Yaguchi and his family from the Red Shark pirates (code Sea Okinawa Civilian 200907987). Confirmed self-defense kill of Parahuman Red Shark (Shaker 3, telekinetic). Apprehension of terrorist Kumaro Akira (code Land Tokyo Civilian 20090710023).

Assessment (photos and videos included): Probable Thinker with a specialty in Field Combat Medic. Probable Shaker/Blaster with fire-bird aura side-effect indicating a possible fire/plasma specialty. Possible Tinker or association with a Tinker with a nautical and/or solar specialty. Possible Master/Mover with a small horse from Yonaguni Island. Confirmed Martial Artist Master (unidentified style, Thinker power assist). Confirmed Shaker with Pocket Dimension (can block EM emissions). Probable Stranger (possible Thinker power assist).

Disposition: Friendly, polite, and very competent in a variety of skills (Stealth, crafting, navigation, ship piloting, medical, cooking, tailoring/weaving, swimming, and military weapons). Loves animals and nature. Extensive knowledge. Do not like killing but doesn't hesitate to use Martial Arts knowledge to neutralize opponents. Emphasis on protecting defenseless people.

Recommendations: Non-hostile contact. Soft sell of any propositions. Have a psychologist from Child Services present in any encounters. Protect at all costs from criminal recruitment. Caution: Show intelligence and wisdom beyond her physical age, do not underestimate her.

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Notes:

Rando Yaguchi is from the movie "Shin Godzilla".

About Himeyuri Memorial, I used it in the original story and… Well, I also visited Oradour-sur-glane when I was young… Nuff said.

Having the "control spell" tag is useful for all the spells in Exalted. I think I'm going to give that particular mechanism to some of the spells Zia will use. Only on some since having, for example, butterfly silhouettes rising from her shadow when her emotions run hot isn't very discrete, right?

The dream sequence was extracted from the "Exalted 1° edition Core book". I couldn't find a comics page with a relevant Night Caste.

No, I don't like Alexandria. How did you know?

Yes, that much information could have been gathered from where Zia acted with witnesses. It would have been worse with Tinker-tech scanners or Thinker-assisted analysis. And yes, you can laugh at her.

As always, if you have suggestions, remarks, or questions, don't be shy. Post and I will do my best to answer.

In the next chapter, Zia is confronted with Alexandria, takes a direct train to Boston, and a bus to Brockton Bay for an arrival in style.
 
Arc 1: Essence One. Chapter 8: Thank you, Captain Oblivious. New
YOU ARE (AGAIN) EXALTED!

Disclaimer: I own nothing in this story.

Notes:

Zenith Caste power set:

Anima powers:

• For one mote, the Zenith's anima leaps from her hand to a corpse she's touching, igniting it in Solar flame. This power incinerates the corpse and ensures the soul of the deceased will not return as a hungry ghost (or be taken by Glaistig Uaine or the Butcher, or a power like that. It also completely eliminates any biological or power-related lingering dangers). In addition, the Zenith may perceive the strongest Intimacies of the deceased and may choose to accept them. When she is ready, she may pay one mote, touching a target of those Intimacies to pass on feelings of peace, love, and assurance, shedding them in the process. She may also transfer them to an object, allowing it to convey comfort or a sense of duty to the subject. Conversely, she may touch someone who caused the deceased to suffer, paying one mote and rolling ([A social Attribute] + Presence) with three automatic non-Charm successes against their Resolve to transfer pain suffered by the deceased back on the one who caused it. The Storyteller is free to dictate the length and weight of such attrition.

• For 10 motes, one Willpower, the Zenith channels her Essence into an aura of divine retribution, surging around an attack. This power supplements a successful decisive attack against a creature of darkness, preventing the Solar's Initiative from returning to its base value after the attack. When the Zenith's anima is at bonfire level, reduce the cost of this power by five motes and ignore the Willpower. This power may only be used once per day, resetting when the sun is at its zenith.

• For seven motes, the Zenith may order a dematerialized spirit to manifest using a (Charisma + Presence) persuade action with (Essence) automatic successes. All spirits inherently recognize the Unconquered Sun's authority in the priest-kings and are compelled as if by a Defining Intimacy, but may still have Defining Ties or Principles that counter this advantage. If successful, the Zenith's very command draws the spirit into the material world, so that it does not need to pay the cost to materialize.

Attributes: Charisma (+1): 5.

Abilities: Performance (+1): 4. Socialize (+2): 5.

Charms (limited to Essence 1):

Integrity: Stubborn Boar Defense and Integrity-Protecting Prana.

Performance: Masterful Performance Exercise, Respect-Commanding Attitude, Perfect Harmony Technique, Graceful Reed Dancing, and Battle-Dancer Method.

Presence: Listener-Swaying Argument and Tiger's Dread Symmetry.

Socialize: Mastery of Small Manners, Motive Discerning Technique, Shadow Over Day, Quicksilver Falcon's Eye, Viper-Scenting Method, Energic Influence Technique, Rancor-Raising Spirit, and Intent-Tracing Stare.

Spells: Flight of Separation.

Willpower: 8.

Exp points: 7. Solar points: 8.

Thank you for the suggestions in the forums.

A big thank you to SwiftBlitz who, courageously, continues to edit my chapters.


Arc 1: Essence One.
Chapter 8: Thank you, Captain Oblivious.

2009 August 1st. Morning. United States. California. Los Angeles. LAX airport.

LAX was… In her past life, Zia the Bright Raven traveled through Lyon–Saint-Exupéry airport and Paris Charles de Gaulle Airport (Roissy Airport) and… She never saw so many different people. Following the info panels, she gained the center of the airport and the observation deck which provided an outdoor space with breathtaking views of the runways. It was also an excellent spot to take in the sights and sounds of LAX and see if everything was all right for her.

The black-haired, green-eyed young girl sat on a bench, slowly sipping and savoring a cup of black tea. She was almost there… It was curious, she already accomplished some exploits with the gift of Exaltation from the Unconquered Sun, and yet… It was only now that she could say to herself that she was committed, that she was going to do it.

As someone else sat on the other side of her bench with a big cup of iced coffee from a Starbucks and began to read a newspaper, a whisper came to the brown-skinned, orange-clad Solar Exalt's lips. "Fix this world for it is broken." She blinked. There was a giant poster of Alexandria just in front of her.

The picture with a slogan showed a woman in a black and light gray costume with a skirt, knee-high boots, and elbow-length gloves. Her symbol on the chest was an image of a tower. The costume also featured a wide, heavy cape that flowed over her shoulders and draped onto the ground beside and behind her. Finally, she was wearing a closed steel helmet somewhat similar to an ancient Spartan helmet in design. Her long black hair was spilling out of the back of the helmet, and her black eyes were visible.

She softly giggled thinking about the reaction of a certain Edna, catching the attention of her bench-neighbor. Her eyes narrowed as she read out loud the slogan. "Be a hero. Do the right thing?" She shook her head and snorted both at herself for her lack of awareness and at the so-called heroine.

"You don't like Alexandria? That's rare, especially for a child in the city she's protecting."

Well, talking about a lack of awareness. She turned to the tall, muscular woman with long, straight black hair. She had black eyes behind a luxurious pair of sunshades that matched her costly business suit and was visibly Hispanic. Dark amused sparks were dancing behind her eyes.

Zia sighed. She didn't like Alexandria, the character from Wildbow. Did she like the person represented on the billboard? Perhaps talking to a fan of the heroine would clarify her thoughts.

She tilted her head. "...I pity her." Well, she managed to shock her interlocutor. The Eclipse pointed at the slogan. "What is a hero?"

"Well…" The Hispanic woman seemed a little flabbergasted.

Zia continued. "It shouldn't be the definition coming from the legal books of the PRT and Protectorate: 'A hero is a Parahuman working for their legal government.' The others are labeled Rogue if they manage to work legally for themselves and Villain for all those left regardless of circumstances."

She turned to the woman she called "CEO" in her mind. "According to the Oxford definition, a hero is: One, a person who is admired for their courage, outstanding achievements, or noble qualities. Like when you are talking about a "war hero". Two, It's the chief male character, but we will include also the female ones, in a book, play, or film, who is typically identified with good qualities, and with whom the reader is expected to sympathize. Like reading about the "hero of Kipling's story". And three, in mythology and folklore, it's a person of superhuman and supernatural qualities and often semi-divine origin, in particular one whose exploits were the subject of ancient Greek myths."

The CEO raised an eyebrow, sipped a little coffee, and pointed at the poster. "Isn't that the exact thing printed here, miss?"

Zia smiled and nodded. "Call me Zia, please. Yes, this image is about all three interpretations of the word hero: The real person behind the mask, the Comic Books character they evoke, and the link to the superhumans of myths, like King Arthur or Cú Chulainn for the Parahuman side."

"I'm Reyna, nice to meet you, Zia. Well, where is the problem if the correct message is passed?"

The Bright Raven sipped her tea. "The problem is about Propaganda and Public Relations. The message here doesn't concern the true meanings of the word "Hero" but the legal definition adopted by the government from the Parahuman Law Enforcement agency." She sighed. "Alexandria is nothing more than a political tool, a toy on this poster."

The CEO was frowning so she continued. "It doesn't inspire Heroism. It doesn't bring Hope. Doing the right thing? How? With what? About who?"

She finished her tea and carelessly threw the empty cup in the nearest trash can 5 meters behind her, without looking. "Actions always speak louder than words. But, we can't see her or the Triumvirate properly acting. Everything visible is carefully planned or doctored and the actions that should count, like the Endbringers fights, are censored."

Zia the Bright Raven shook her head. "We simply can't see them helping outside against evil Parahumans, a label that they use like a hammer. Where are the little and big acts to help the average citizen? Even Scion is doing more by helping cats down trees."

Reyna rolled up her eyes. "There's a good reason to censure Endbringer Fights apart from age. People at large would rapidly lose all hope if they did that. They are already evil individuals taking advantage of what is shown. And the Triumvirate is doing many projects to help the world. And Scion… is Scion."

Zia giggled and bitter-sweetly smiled at Reyna. "Lying to a child or even an adult won't make any of the Endbringers go away. But I agree that they are doing what they think is their best… by themselves. The Parahumans could represent, at best, 20% of Humanity. They're a big minority but the passed time proves they can't solve all our problems."

The young girl blinked and remembered that she wasn't here to discuss philosophy even if it indeed helped to clarify her thoughts and pointed at some paths to help Humanity against the Entities. "My, but I was ranting a little on my soapbox here. Thank you for listening to the fears of a child, Reyna. Let's say that I pity Alexandria because this poster is like publicity for a product. It's too ostentatious, too obvious to be anything but propaganda. And since I need to catch my train, I bid you a good day."

Reyna looked pensively at the giant poster and finished her coffee. "Have a good day, Zia."

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"Welcome back, Director Costa-Brown. How was your Frappuccino today?"

Rebecca Costa-Brown aka Alexandria waved back at her secretary. "Excellent as always, Nancy. As long as they don't change the Barista at LAX, of course. Was there something new during my break?"

"The standard international mail package. Three emails from the White House, all regarding Blasto becoming crime lord of East Alston in Boston. Two emails from Chambers about the same thing and also about the newest Ward in Brockton Bay. It seems Vista doesn't like the costume they made for her and is making some waves. Finally, Legend called to reschedule your next meeting together to the next day at the same hour because of an unexpected event with his local Elite cell."

The tall, long black-haired Hispanic nodded and entered her opulent office. Her soundproofed opulent office which was a good thing because she was laughing up a lot, a rarity those days, after reading one specific dispatch and one particular photo. "It was actually her!? I just can't believe it! I missed recognizing her by an hour top. And, of course, she didn't recognize me either."

She giggled as she focused on a written phrase. "Do not underestimate her, indeed. To think, she had the gall to lecture me about something like Parental Guidance with raw footage of an Endbringer fight. That said, there were a few pearls. Out of the mouths of babes indeed."

Rebecca shook her head. Encountering this young girl had lifted her mood after the fiasco concerning the Thinker Hiccup and the Simurgh early retreat. "Naive and idealist. Still, I'll have to thank her in the future because I certainly don't want to project such an image as Alexandria… No, it'll be more fun for me if I left Chambers thanking her while arranging her image."

Her hand hovered over her phone. "She was still clothed in that orange dress. It shouldn't take too much effort to find the train she took. I'll even warn her probable destination."

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Zia looked at her reflection in the small mirror of the toilet inside the sleeper train she just boarded. A brilliant golden circle, shining like the noonday sun was achieving to morph back to her Eclipse caste mark. She had been lucky to be in the rented roomette of the train she took at Union Station when it manifested. A little use of Essence had helped her to buy a place in the sleeper train without an adult.

A direct sleeper train to Boston, with 3,000 miles from coast to coast. According to her ticket, it should take 3 nights, without stopovers. So her arrival in Boston should be on the morning of the fourth of August, then 25 miles to Brockton Bay via a Greyhound Lines bus. Piece of cake.

She looked at her dissipating Caste mark. "Still, why did I receive the Zenith blessing now? I don't think I did something worthy of that gift except for whispering one phrase."

She shook her head. "Probably the ROB again playing with me." Oh well, she did appreciate the powers obtained and the memories and visions given by Panther, one of her favorite Zeniths in the Age of Sorrows.

"You've bullied everyone within ten miles of this forest. You've demanded illicit worship. You've extorted human sacrifices. Yet, every appeasement just makes you bolder. I'm here to put a stop to it!"

"I've no time for jokes. Crawl away home before you make me angry."

"I'M NOT JOKING AND I'M NOT LEAVING!"

'Sigh' "Very well. Kill him."

'WHUD!!!'

"FOOL! I'm not playing either."

"How dare you? I said…GET OUT OF MY FOREST!"

"You're not listening! You're going to answer for your tyranny."

"STARTING RIGHT NOW!"

'CRAAAK!!!"

Well, she had three days and nights of free time. At least she could let out Yona a few times. The poor familiar would go crazy in her Inventory… As long as the mare made no noise. She didn't think that saying she snored like a horse would buy it.

She took on meditating on her Essence during the relatively calm trip. Why, there were only two separate incidents during it…

During her first night, a man intercepted her coming back with a cup of tea from the restaurant car. A man in a trench coat who opened it, displaying his blatant nudity while snickering. "Hey, girl. I scare you, huh?"

Zia blinked nonplussed, facepalmed, and sighed. "Oh, come on, now…" She then introduced the sole of her right sandal with a sensitive part of his anatomy taking care to not spill her tea, it would have been a sacrilege to spill it for this trash. After he managed to crawl back to his berth, the man didn't bother anyone for the rest of the trip except for asking for some ice.

The second incident could have been a little more serious. Zia spotted a pickpocket among the passengers on the second day. Frowning, the Bright Raven tailed him incognito and unremarkable during the whole day, putting back everything he stole and ensuring his own pockets were empty but for his ID papers, train ticket, and enough money for the bare necessities. Flawless Pickpocketing Technique for the win.

The poor man looked completely lost for the rest of the trip as he couldn't complain to the company, especially with his false luggage (an ingenious system that enabled it to swallow smaller luggage). Smirking, the young girl also ensured herself that his compartment didn't have any stolen goods left with a little dose of Essence to hide her presence and a Lock-Opening Touch. It had been a fun exercise.

Zia smiled as she arrived at Boston South Station. It looked strange to not see the construction site of the South Station Tower. It was the largest railroad station and intercity bus terminal in Greater Boston and New England's second-largest transportation center after Logan International Airport. So, of course, there was a big crowd, especially with the PRT and Protectorate teams drawing attention from the Bostonians and tourists.

Wait. What!?

Essence flowed to her senses, capturing fragments of conversations with her name, seeing agents consulting some photos of her, and examining everyone who was either a young girl with black hair or a small person with orange clothes.

She took a deep breath to center herself. "They know about me and they knew I was coming here." She felt like she should emulate Admiral Ackbar. It wasn't important right now to know how they received such info. She had to make a decision based on their intentions.

She tapped her lips and continued to observe them under the temporary cover of a kiosk. "They're not hostile. This is a recruitment operation. So, what to do now? Stay, confront, and perhaps fight. Or evade, hide, and flee."

The trouble was she was also seeing people not members of the PRT looking for her. Some, due to their identical neat apparel were probably from the intelligence network of Accord. The others were most likely from gangs like the Teeth or the Elite. She was also sure the FBI had one or two teams here.

The Bright Raven smirked and began to assess her surroundings more precisely, especially where the CCTV network lacked coverage. After all, there was a very good reason why she was using whole tea leaves every time she could to make herself a cup of tea.

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Bastion, leader of the Boston Protectorate, was an imposing figure in modern plated armor complete with a knightly helm and modern eye protection. His power could create a variety of force fields and deflector fields. He even had a clairvoyant awareness of his fields, including what affected them which was useful in the field. He walked with certainty, projecting confidence and waving at his fans... At least externally, he appeared happy.

Internally, he was feeling irritated. Why should they deploy so much strength for ONE child? A team from CPS supported by a Ward and a Standard PRT team would have sufficed.

So, of course, Director Armstrong decided to go for the soft sell… with a full complement of the PRT, a Ward, AND 2 Protectorate heroes. Soft sell, yeah, his foot. He knew he was short-tempered, his psychologist said that much so he wasn't the best man for recruiting young teenagers. Hidden by his helm, he softly sighed and hoped his Ward had a better opportunity.

Weld was a Case 53. It meant that he was an amnesiac Parahuman trapped in an abnormal body tattooed, or in his case, branded with an Omega symbol. He sure wasn't someone who could go downtown incognito.

From skin to hair to bone, he was all metal and alloys of varying types. He could be described as being mostly a textured dusky dark gray though whether this was his natural or "default" coloring or because he absorbed a large amount of such metal was unknown. Of note was the silver tracery that defined his very prominent musculature. His eyes were also silver, two lines came from the outer corners of his eyes down his cheekbones and to the sides of his jaw. Compared to some of his peers, it could have been worse. Nonetheless, he was still recognizably a teenager… With obsessed fan-girls and trolls.

Being capable of near-instantly bonding to any metal touching him was such a pain in the ass. Too many times he had been photographed with cutlery or doorknobs slowly being absorbed by his skin. The memes, oh, god, the memes.

Oh well, he was here to be the token "future colleague in the Wards" for a potential recruit. He consulted anew his PRT cellphone for the file they had on her: Zia aka Bright Raven. An authentic Quechua young girl with either a grab-bag portfolio or a misinterpreted power like Thinker or Tinker. He would have preferred her to be in Brockton Bay because of her young age as they recently gained a new Ward, a girl named Vista who was a month shy of eleven years old… Well, at least, she had a nice smile.

Having a peer of the same age would be better than him playing the big brother. He was amnesiac after all and some cultural subtleties still baffled him despite the help of his teammates. Oh well, he now had the opportunity to verify how she would feel about recruitment since she was walking to him, haloed by the sun and smiling.

Wait. What?

Weld could only watch as Zia the Bright Raven stopped in front of his bewildered self who was still trying to reach for his radio. The smiling Solar Exalt raised her hand for a handshake. "Greetings, Weld. I am Zia the Bright Raven and more recently from Japan. It's an honor to meet you. I didn't think anyone was aware of my destination."

Weld was feeling a little nervous. The new Parahuman didn't even try to avoid them. Was that a good or bad sign? He hesitantly reciprocated the handshake. A firm hand. "Ah… Err… Hello, Bright Raven. Give me a minute I'm trying to reach Bastion…?"

"Take your time. I'm not in a hurry." She stayed smiling in front of him, hands visible at her sides.

Weld smiled back even if it was a little forced. This was an awkward situation… Well, he felt awkward and contacted the Boston Protectorate leader… to pass the buck. "Thanks, Bright Raven... Bastion? Weld here. I just made peaceful contact with Bright Raven… We're near the backside platform… No, she approached me first… Well, I don't know, we didn't have time to discuss it before I reached for you… Yes, I understand… Of course, I'll follow protocols… Yes, sir… Yes, we're waiting for you…"

He looked bitter-sweetly at the young girl. "Sorry about this. We wanted to make contact without alarming you."

Zia raised an eyebrow and tilted her head. "With 2 full PRT teams, two Protectorate Capes, and one Ward?"

He nodded. "We didn't want to miss you and Boston South Station is rather large."

She looked around, noting she still had a few minutes until reinforcements were there. "Yes, I grant you that. So, why did you want to contact me?"

He smiled genuinely. This, at least, he could do. "To propose you a place within the Ward program, of course. I don't know if you would stay in Boston or be assigned to another city, but we are here for you."

Zia nodded back. "In your own opinion, is it something I should do?"

Ah, good. She was interested. "Yes. Whatever your difficulties, they want and can help you. I acknowledge that some have abused the system to take control over a few Wards in the past, but it's the exception, not the rule." Better to nip in the bud some rumors about press-ganging right now than later and too late.

Sadness tainted Zia's smile. "Ah, Weld. If only we could have met in better circumstances."

Uh oh. Weld pressed one of the hidden buttons on his radio set, not the one about imminent danger, but the one concerning flight risk. He hoped she wasn't going to do something stupid.

"You see there are two problems with me joining the Wards. In fact, joining any organization, civilian or not, criminal or not. First, I have access to a reliable precognition method that clearly predicted that I would be a catalyst for the downfall of any group who recruited me."

Weld frowned. Precognition? "Reliable how?"

"Reliable enough for me to break away from the Yaguchi family who wanted to adopt me. I would have been the cause of their future destruction. And second, because I'm a criminal myself."

Weld's eyes widened. "What…?"

Her smile turned to a small smirk. "I'm an underage illegal alien in the US territory with a heroic inclination."

As a running Bastion came into direct sight with 3 PRT agents, Zia promptly waved at them and fled in a nearby passage.

Weld raised his arm to stop her, but too late. "Hey! Wait! We're not going to do anything and that's a dead end!" He sighed and waited for Bastion and his group to enter together the passage where they expected to find an embarrassed trapped girl… Perhaps with a horse.

They only found a flock of birds that fled at their sudden approach.

Half an hour later, Bastion was forced to recognize that yes, the child had escaped them completely. There wasn't even a trace anywhere on the CCTV network even outside South Station. A network that didn't cover that particular passage, of course.

He shook his head. "How did she do it? She wasn't hidden there since I searched the entire passage with low-intensity fields, even up. We just saw a murder of crows and the walls were too tall and abrupt, especially with the time she had until we entered the dead end for her to climb."

"Ravens."

Bastion turned to Weld. "What?"

Weld nodded at the Boston leader. "Ravens, an unkindness or flock of ravens. Ravens have large size, a heavy beak, long and slightly pointed wings in flight, and a fairly long wedge-shaped tail. Crows have a slimmer beak, a shorter tail that is squared off at the end, and broader and less pointed short wings than ravens."

He shrugged. "We, the Wards, watched a documentary about them and the entire Corvids family on the Discovery channel last week."

Bastion looked incredulously at the Ward and facepalmed. "Weld… What was the cape name of this young girl again?"

Weld frowned. "Bright Raven… Oh…"

Bastion sighed. He didn't look forward to the future discussion with Director Armstrong. "Yes, oh. Well, at least we can give her a Changer rating now or she has a very consistent theme."

Weld scratched his head. He felt they had been victims of a prank. "She was also polite and non-hostile. I think if we can confirm this precognition, she'll cooperate fully with us… Well, if we manage to make her a US citizen, of course."

Eight miles outside Boston, Zia the Bright Raven was riding Yona on a forest trail in the direction of Brockton Bay. Her Eclipse caste mark was shining on her forehead as Essence was ensuring that they could gallop at high speed while ignoring the various obstacles on the trail.

Zia indulged herself in a little Evil Laugh TM. "Everything is proceeding as I have foreseen." Making contact with the PRT/Protectorate on her own and calling herself a criminal as an illegal alien had enabled her to seize the narrative. She just had to now act as herself in Brockton Bay to anchor a good reputation and an almost unassailable position… If everything went her way… IF.

Flight of Separation was the name of the spell she used to escape from the Parahuman law-enforcement group. She cast it discreetly before meeting Weld, holding it within her will until it was needed. By just softly singing a short song of praise for things both small and many, Zia could disintegrate her entire body into a flock of dozens of diminutive birds, like magpies or ravens. Her consciousness then diffused across the many bodies, becoming the flock's guiding intelligence.

After that, she just had to designate a location within 10 miles and began flying toward it. Of course, she was limited to taking only movement actions and dodging and the speed was a mere 16 miles per hour, but it was discrete and relatively safe except against area effect attacks. And while she could end the spell anytime, the destination was fixed.

She sighed. It didn't solve the problem that the PRT and Protectorate already knew about her. She greatly underestimated the international cooperation regarding Parahumans.

And, of course, because of the various moles, she could be sure that everyone on the other side of the fence knew about her. She nibbled her lips. Well, she had to proceed as if people already knew everything she used so far and planned accordingly as such.

She refocused her willpower as the city limits of Brockton Bay slowly came into view. She just finished her epic travel from Yonaguni Island to Brockton Bay.

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Notes:

I think I properly described Alexandria taking a break from work and indulging in the questions of a child who should like her. By the way, Reyna means "Queen".

Zia has only the various pictures by many artists of Costa-Brown's appearance, so, of course, she didn't recognize her.

Using her powers on Alexandria? Why since Zia didn't know she wasn't an ordinary person? Of course, she's due to an impressive spit-take in the future and calling herself an idiot.

The memory came from the comic strip about Panther "explaining" things to a naughty Forest Spirit and two Wood Spiders in "Exalted Corebook 2° ed".

We won't talk about the mechanisms behind a horse taking care of its business in a sleeper train. Nope, we won't.

I don't know if the PRT forces were too small to survey the Boston South Station even with modern means. Someone has an idea?

The PRT analysts are going to have some difficulty properly delimiting Zia's powers. Unless they use the superpower of common sense and simply ask her… Should Zia answer with a part of the truth?

In the next chapter, Zia finally enters Brockton Bay and already puts herself in danger, not once but twice!
 
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