[Worm] Pride

... yeah...

.... I hope I got that one right.

Sorry for any if that pushed some buttons, or if... I don't know.
Feel like I should say something, but honestly, poured all my words into the story and its just....
sometimes it do be that way.
 
there's two instances where Amelia thinks, "Scion is and endbringer" when it should read as "an" instead of And. just wanted to point that out.
 
... yeah...

.... I hope I got that one right.

Sorry for any if that pushed some buttons, or if... I don't know.
Feel like I should say something, but honestly, poured all my words into the story and its just....
sometimes it do be that way.
I like this resolution to some of the uncertainties of the last installment.

Also, there is an interesting question here, if you start making out on top of someone you're not making out with, do you fold them into the fun as if that's what you meant all along or do you admit you forgot all about them?

And poor Trinket: separately violated by a Stranger of an authority figure and a Master she thought was her friend. She's just not safe.
 
Found a few things confusing here.

Some here from her town?

I was confused by who this is referring to, since it had been a while since Trinket/Amber was mentioned.

Amber's story was also a bit confusing to read without remembering Satitical's power, it's not until Amelia spelled it out that I was able to reread and follow what happened.

And I'm wondering how Rey knew to get Satirical put on the lethal force list.
 
Invitation (Amelia)
"Wake up."

I roll. Adrenaline flooding my system, falling off the bed, and dropping to a crouch, the bed between me and...

Taurari.
Right.
Right. Of course, Taur'.


There's a chuckle. A chuckle in the darkness. Low and wry and somehow utterly lacking in humour.

Too slow.
I was too slow.
All that dumb melodramatic shit I just did was too slow, and wouldn't have done shit against her if she was actually an enemy.


"Get your gear on Lavere," she tosses a pair of smelly sneakers at me "Time to get you outside."




We run.


Absko comes with us, lumbering along behind. Not slow, just... something about the shape of his body means it always feels like lumbering, even when he's moving fast, and quiet as a cat.
It's early. Dark, and the air is bitingly cold, and damp, and stinks.
The streets are mostly illuminated, but its early enough that no one is really about and about.


There's still words in my head, cold fucking echos of what Chene told me last night, and images of Trinket laughing and shoving him, and I want to throw up and-




We run.




Taruari sets a grueling pace, but still doable. Still just doable, if I ignore lungs, ignore the build up of lactic acid in my thighs. There's no music, no tune in my head, I don't feel safe enough for that, there's just running, and awareness of my surroundings, and memories swirling from the day before and-




Run.

We make it six blocks, twelve blocks.
We keep running.
Eventually we make it to central park, and then out along the trails and there are other runners, and Taurari is still in front of me, and I'm still keeping pace. Dawn blushes into the sky, illuminating clouds, illuminating office and apartment buildings, illuminating leafless trees, and it is so fucking cold, and then Taurari lifts the pace, breaks into a sprint, and I fucking follow.

If I could control my own body, I'd just replace all the oxygen as needed. Who needs blood flow, just pour oxygen direct into muscles.

I know Dad has a trick like that, destroying and regenerating his lungs, breathing underwater.

Was he afraid the first time he tried that?
Was he afraid his power might just not bother to recreate his lungs when the bone withdrew?

Drowning out in the open air?
Did he just not care about the risk.




Taurari stops, at the top of some tiny hillock.
Absko pauses and sits over on a bench off to the side.
I stagger over, drop to hands and knees. Sit down, lie down, collapse, my breathing coming in heavy rasping breaths.

God fucking god.

I want to vomit.
The air is so cold.

I can feel saliva trying to turn into mucus in my throat.
Anything to stop the pain.



I hate it.
God damn I fucking hate it.




I'm wearing trackpants and an old shirt, and its still cold. Taurari is wearing gym shorts and a sports bra. Neon lines on it. Standing over me. Still smiling.
I hate her so much.

Gonna fuck with your metabolism.
Make you slow and fat.
Wipe that smirk right off your face.

My breath clouds above me.
Somewhere sunlight touches the tallest skyscrapers.

Taur' drops down into a crouch beside me.
Her body there and athletic, and not even in a sexy way, but like, in a this is a physical human, and she could kick your ass, kind of way.


"Feeling better?"
"Fuck you."
"Yeah, but you feel better right?"
I sit up. Prop myself up on my elbows, and the ground is so fucking cold.
"Yeah?" I admit.

"Good," she says "You been spending too long in your head, Lavere. All this law and politics and bullshit. You need to feel alive. Do things. Be that human animal. Run."

I look around us. At the skyscrapers. At the city.
Cities full of human animals living in glass boxes. Living inside their brains.
What do you think of this place Taur'?
This too is a form of living.




She stands, glances around. Waiting for me to catch my breath.
When I stand, she's going to start running again.
When I stand she's going to-

"
I had a call in with Dad last night,"
The words are abrupt, cutting through my concerntration, reminding me of the call I'm meant to be having reminding me of-
"You know, just keeping him updated. Reassuring him this isn't the same shitshow we had in Panama."

The girl shudders.
Shudders, and for just a moment I catch a vision of her body hanging from the barbed wire, the blood draining out of her. Her constellation of a blade fading out.

"I never did tell him how bad it was..." she muses "I never did tell him I almost died."

Fuck.
"I'm sorry."
Taurari shrugs.
She doesn't look down at me, eyes focused on the distance, on the city.
Absko is busy stretching, doing press ups a short distance away, headphones in, pointedly not listening in on us.

"You saved my life," she states "I was only in there trying to save yours, so I figure it roughly balances out, but still, it ain't nothing. I owe you."
I nod.
She offers me a hand, pulls me up to my feet, meets my eyes.


"Told my dad about your weird old lady's predictions. Her saying your Dad would lose the case. PRT trying to give you new parents or whatever."

"Legal Gaurdianship. Yeah."
Taurari shrugs. "Sure. Whatever. Me and Dad talked it over. Figure things are probably gonna be pretty shit for you here if your Dad loses… Dad wondered if maybe you might like a change of scenery"

"Uuhhh.. what?"
"Fly back with me and Absko. Join the Wildfire crew. Ditch this fucking place." She gestures over at the city with her head, the Skyscrapers, the cold sky. "You've got other options Lavere. We're cool. You're plenty strong enough. You won't have the law giving you grief because that's us. We can fight and watch movies and go out dancing and shit."

Taur's grip on my hand is tight, her words hurried earnest, a little anxious even.
Is this the first time I've seen her flustered?
I crack a smile. Can't help it.

"You asking me out on a sleep over Taurari?"



"Fuck off." The girl gives me a shove, but we're still holding hands, so even as I topple she's forced to pull me back up again, and we're both laughing.

"I'm serious!" she says "We could use you! You kick ass. Everyone knows your Dad is badass, and everyone hates when, like, our best men get fucked up and injured, and you could do like one hours work a week, and spend the rest of the time eating grapes and getting high. I could join you!"

Eating grapes and getting high.
I could be a pet, an asset.
Maybe play the role Dad did. Professional Cape geek and strategist.
A scientist.
Couch-surfing a bit.
A princess in the tower.
Living comfortably, being lent out as needed, for my power, for my political symbolism.

Maybe Taurari's Dad would pretty me up, marry me off.
Maybe he already has someone in mind.



Taur' continues to squeeze my hand, boofy hair moist with sweat. Vulnerable, anxious, earnest, heart on her sleeve.
So dumb.
I can't help but smile at that. Grin. The expression cracking my face.

"Dad ain't gonna lose."
"But-"
"He won't." I shove Taur' lightly, let go of her hand. "He'll win, or sneak away, and then me and Dad can come and visit you, and I'll get to hear all your Dad's stories of him being badass or stupid, and we can watch some movies, and I'll patch up some people while I'm there."


Light continues to soak into the sky. The first sunbeams of the day catching at skyscrapers.

Taurari seems momentarily stunned, unsure, and I've stalled long enough to catch my breath.
"Race you home," I tell her "Five bucks says I win."
And then… I run.
 
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I like this chapter.
I particularly like how much it feels like Amelia's slice of life instead of a more generic slice of life inserted for pacing reasons.
 
Diplomacy (Amelia)
Chene arranges the process leading in to The Call.

Chene acting as seneschal, with Taur' leaning in over his shoulder, poking and prodding at the security details. Annoyed.
I spend the morning with the Lawyers, not thinking about it. Trying to sink into the question of how do we win, ignoring the upcoming call with Dad, the twisted painful feeling in my gut.
Trinket makes pancakes for us. Cupcakes. Tasty beet and feta salad for lunch. Humming away to herself, as she potters around the kitchen, periodically coming over to hug Chene, or sometimes me, or sometimes even Taur'.

Every time she passes by, I notice Chene just sinking into her arms. Going limp. Eyes closed. Smiling.
... and then propping himself up again, focused again on the details. Moving.


Farah and Jaqueline Vance are reading. Looking for precedent. Past cases. An in, an angle, any angle.
Farah looks frustrated. Upset.
Caged.
Vance looks bored.
Already given up.
Fuck.





Me and Starmer sit off to the side and argue, trying to figure out the political angle.
He approaches it from the point of view of connections- trying to sway particular judges, particular politicians. People who matter.
"Your old man knew this was coming," Starmer growls "Why didn't you prepare for this? Get some politicians in your pocket. Hold a few of them hostage to their own mortality- same as you're doing for those two over there?" He gestures at Jaqueline and Farah. "Way harder to set that up now once the ball is already rolling. Gonna be eyes on you, kid, and anyone who bails you out will have to spend a fuckload of political capital. You had a pet politician earlier, they could have nudged things so that no one was looking for you or your Dad in the first place."

Why not? Why not? Why not?

Starmers swearing is particularly harsh. Guttural, the sound of phlegm in his throat. I'm staring at the files. Stacks and stacks of corrupt people that Starmer thinks might have the influence to sway this.
Lawyers. Politicians. PRT beurocrats.

But like he said... I'm being watched.


Paige's lawyer is amongst the stack.
That was one of the ideas Starmer floated, trying to fuck things around, get our own pet lawyer on the prosecution side of the case, someone to deliberately fuck up the case in some critical way.
We don't even need Dad's cooperation to do that.

But how do we arrange things so
we control the prosecution lawyer.

I stare at the folders some more, flip through them, eventually push them away.
Flip back to scrapbooking through the Newspapers, trying to see the big picture. Public opinion. The Narrative of it.
What would Verity do?

"Look, kid, none of that matters kid," Starmers has started repeating himself. There's frustration there too. "Public opinion? Doesn't matter. Public opinion don't me shit." He licks his lips. I continue pageing through Newspapers. "Only thing public opinion is good for is moving politicians, and there's plenty finer ways to tha' directly."


"Marquis of Brockton Bay Caught."
"Serial killer arrested- court date set for November twelfth."
"Father of B-list Parahuman Celebrity, Amelia Lavere, accused of-"


"None of this matters. Civilians don't have power. No one gives a shit what they say."

The PRT does.
The Protectorate does.

The Protectorate spend approximately thirteen million per year on Public relations exercises. On convincing the public that everything is under control. Normal.
That Parahumans can be
safe. Trusted.

If I threatened that....
Threatened to break the illusion.






"Scion is an Endbringer."




Noon arrives.

Noon arrives and there's this nasty tangled feeling in my gut, a spring waiting for release, and I push it down instead.
Continue talking. Continue being encouraging. Continue being the politician, the princess, that booksie librarian girl next door Verity wrote about, and I can feel it weighing on me, but also...
I need these people...
I need them to
do things.

Starmers is on the phone to the Qatari consulate. We have an angle, the inkling of an angle, and its risky, and its stupid, and there's leverage. An in. A way of doing things.
Starmers told me that civilians were small.
Fine then. What's bigger than politicians? Bigger than Judges? Bigger than lawyers and law?
Same game, different scale.

I breathe in. Breathe out. Jacqueline scowls, but I can tell she knows its the correct play.



Farah and Trinket flit around serving lunch. Farah with a far off expression, vexed, her hands moving, but her mind distant. Trinket smiles, humming away to herself, delivering cup cakes and sliced oranges to each of the working tables.



I catch Chene looking over at her, interacting with her, smiling, and Taurari watches me watching Chene watching her, and Taur' raises an eyebrow and I....
don't really know what to do with that?

This is dumb.
The whole thing is dumb.

If I fuck this up, Dad is going to jail.
I can have a crush and sort out all my crush feelings later.


I stick my tongue out at Taur' give her a wink, go back to reading newspapers.



"President to discuss new emergency retreat and retrainment laws in light of Brockton Bay Endbringer attack."
"Lavere Endbringer speech: An analysis from three sides."
"Doc-shroom; everyone's favourite parahuman couple."


I stick my tongue out at that one.
Feels wrong.

Can't leverage that for anything.

"Iranian ambassador to Canada killed in Parahuman attack."
"CUI issues strongly worded statement regarding cape activities on Indo-china border."
"Brazil to hold elections this November, incumbent defiant in face of public unrest."





I get dressed up.



It's a long flowy evening gown, a bit bulky, modest, dark indigo fabric, and then a suit jacket over the top.
Trinket helps me get into it, helps straighten everything out, adjust and tighten, pulling out a dozen or so hair widgets and checking each of the colours against my hair, against my dress.
We do it out in the hallway, as close as we can to natural light. Taurari watches.

Feels like donning armour.
Amber is my squire. Taurari my sargent.
Trying not to look like a kid.
Trying not to look sexy.
Just....




I don't wear make up.
I turn left and right, practice walking, practice turning and sweeping, gesturing and gesticulating with the extra weight of the suitover my shoulders.
It's made to fit.

Me and Dad had my measurments taken two month back, and now we just send them out whenever we need something made.
No going into the shop. No wasting time.


I've only got one outfit for the time being. One outfit for today, for the meeting with Messerene, for journalists, for the court date. Probably I should invest in a second one, now that everthing I own back at the candlelight institute is gone.

My old outfit was designed by Mirage.

Was that a Simurgh effect?
Was that outfit intended to
do something, trigger something?
And if it was, would I ever know?




Trinket continues fussing over me. Taurari is already dolled up, already looking cool.
And we'll have Vance along too.
Starmers is good for the wheeling and dealing, but Vance has presence.
I imagine a fair few of the heroes in this town have found themselves in her courtroom before.
Sometimes even on the wrong side of it.



It's all about projecting an image. Appearing prepared, forceful, bulletproof.

Do I feel bulletproof?
Do I feel bulletproof?





We arrive outside the United Nations building at one eighteen: me, Taurari, Absko and Jaqueline Vance.
There are guards. Men with submachine guns. Parahumans; Protectorate members, and also representatives from other nations.

The building is a huge slab of concrete. A Monolith of sorts, surrounded by fences, security checkpoints, trees. During our first visit to New York, while touristing around, me and Dad talked about whether maybe one day I would speak here, what it might be like, what I would say....

Why hasn't the Simurgh targeted this yet?
So many world leaders, so many diplomats, connections...

And just on the other side is the ocean, and Uppercrust is dead, I killed him.





Its easy to image Leviathan looming over the building, water cascading off of them like hammers, and broken desperate heroes trying to defend this building, this symbol.
Ziz sits on the rooftop, singing, smiling, wrapped in feathers and-
No. Don't think about that.
Don't let her in there, in your mind.


Instead I try to imagine Behemoth. Coming up from underneath.

Behemoth always spent so long walking towards his target. Crawling. Stomping across the groun.
Why not come up directly underneath?
Is its aim bad?


"Amy."

I continue to stare at the building, and it feels like I understand.
They're saving this one for last.

They're beat us, grind us down.
Change the rules, break the rules.

This will be the where they come when they want to end it.
It won't be the last battle, but it will be our last
stand. The turning point. The point of no return.
That's what this will be.


Clouds wash by.
Clouds wash by above, behind the building, behind the center of a civilization.
"Amy!"




I turn. There's a limousine making its way out through security, and we line up on the side of the road as it pulls out, pulls up beside us, the door opening.

"Miss Lavere, and company, do please step inside, so I may indulge you with my hospitality."
The voice is delicate, masculine, and slightly accented.
The man behind it, Sayed bin Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani, leans out, skin dark, smile wide, teeth white.

He settles back into his seat as I climb in, continues smiling. There's a young man in the car with us, eyes and eyelashes dark, and a tiny table fitted topped with beautiful mosaics, fresh bread and oil.

"This is my Grandson," Sayed explains. "He is visiting in America for his studies."
Of course.

He is a prince.
I am a princess.
Introductions must be made.


I lean forward, shake the boy's hand, meet the boy's eyes, meanwhile Taurari and Jacqualine Vance climb in.

The Boy seems anxious, unsettled, uncomfortable, heightened Cortisol levels, his Grandfather completely at ease. The car door closes behind us, Absko joins the driver in the front.

The car starts moving, we're packed in pretty tight, Taurari in contact with me, her body a space ship, a world in and of itself, a river, or an ocean, overwhelmingly huge, and complex, and alive, and my power loves the correctness of it, the perfect matching of machinery to blueprint.
Focus.



Taurari leans forward, takes a fragment of bread, dips it in oil and scarfs it down.

"Thank you for your hospitality," I say. Hear myself say. Recite. "This is Taurari, wielder of Constellations, and Jacqualine Vance, my lawyer."
"One of your lawyers," Sayed clarifies.
"Yes."

Sayed nods back, nods to each of my associates in turn.
Sayed bin Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani. Second Cousin to the current Emir of Qatar.
Forty third in line for the throne.
The Diplomat.


"A fascinating offer your jurist brought to my people this morning," the mans accent is perfect British English, backed with the gentle rumble of warmth brought from brighter lands. "An hour or so of my time, a visit to the local Protectorate offices, and for this... perfect health, perfect healing, a new lease on life for myself, or someone who I love."


"Yes," the car is moving, I keep my ankles tucked under me, tucked under the seat I am sitting on. "I had also hoped to start a conversation, set up a basis for future friendship."
Alliance. Reaching outside the United States of America. Reaching beyond their immediate allies.

"It is a very generous offer, young Miss Lavere. A very strong basis for friendship."
Sayed continues to smile. Enjoying all the little implications. All the little bits of diplomacy and manipulation beneath the surface. "You must be stressed at the moment- given the current situation with your father."


And there we go.

"Not especially," I press down upon my dress, smooth it out, flick the man a knowing smile. "My father can handle himself."
There it is. The lie.
Bulletproof.
 
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I think I followed this chapter, but it jumped around enough to leave me uncertain. Basically, Amelia is making back room friends and deals.
 
Society (Amelia)


The New York Protectorate building sits on Governor's island, something gilded and symbolic, with views out across the water towards the statue of Liberty. Touched up with Legend's White and blue colourscheme, and just far enough from the city to avoid getting scuffed or graffitied upon. Far enough out to remain a symbol.... with the regular flashes of light as Legend himself (along with other flyers) zip in and out, acting as reassurance, a reminded that there are people keeping watch, that there are people who could arrive in the knick of time.
Someone is in control.


I stare out across the water at it as our boat putts closer.

And beneath the city, the PRT and Protectorate buildings are plugged into all of the subway tunnels, using them for their speedsters, Teams of brutes and Tinkers on bikes, zipping back and forth from A to B.
Me and Dad had talked about it. We'd quizzed a couple of the Candlelight guests- Jouster from the local Wards team, and Pangelic from a local Corporate.

That's what I'm up against.
Dozens. Probably hundreds of capes. Hundreds of capes centered in their home city, complete with their home infrastructure, PRT officers, civil society, rules.
The entire fucking system.


I have to beat them if I want to get my Dad back.



I slouch against the guard rail of the Ferry boat. Sayed bin Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani, forty third in line for the throne of Qatar, stands beside my; back straight, one hand against the rail, his robe wafting around him.

"So," I can hear the amusement on his voice. "You do not trust them?"
"I'm not in the business of trusting people,"



The Protectorate building looms over us, looms closer. On a sunnier day, light might shine off of the building, reflecting again in turn off the water, sparkling.
A symbol of hope.
I shake my head. There's clouds up above, the Protectorate building looks dull, and Sayed is watching me.

"I'm especially not in the business of trusting organizations."
"Yes," Sayed acknowledges "But you do not trust them."
"No."
"And you plan to use me as a blade against them?"
"A shield."
"You believe I can protect you?" The man feigns surprise.

Except you are not a stupid man, and I can not help but think you enjoy to play the game.

That was one of the reasons Starmers went chasing after
you. We wouldn't have to offer you so much if we piqued your curiosity.

"I certainly hope you do not expect me to fight against the likes of Legend on your behalf."

Pontificating. Man likes to listen to the sound of his own voice. Enjoys the drama of it.
Similar to Ihina in a way.


"You have been invited as an international observer, your eminence. As a referee to keep them honest."
"And you certainly do not intend me as show of force, young Miss. No attempt is being made to browbeat the protectorate with your international connections."
"No. Just as a referee... an external pair of eyes, with enough connections of your own that they dare not threaten you. Someone to make sure I walk out of that building and come home."


He watches me for a few seconds after that. Tidy mustache and silvered hair.
Eventually he snorts.
"Little idealist aren't you?" He shakes his head, goes back to watching the incoming island "You actually believe all that don't you?"
"Yes."
"You surprise me, young Miss."


We might browbeat them later.
Pull on those connections later.
It's an option.
For now there is no spite. Just a shield.
Just a means of keeping me safe.



The building is closer now.
The entire island.
Waves from our ferry slosh-crash against the shore and pier, and I can see nautical staff preparing ropes and gangways for our arrival.

"I'll use my power on you briefly upon my return, as a means of demonstrating that it is actually me, that I have not been replaced by Doppleganger or Stranger."

Satirical. Satirical.
How many nasty games have the Protectorate played with that man and his skillset?
Messerene. Heartbreaker. Mirage.
Doubtless the Protectorate had access to a large number of Strangers... demographically they should, but of course, unlike other heroes, secrecy was the name of the game.

All the other heroes get publicized, get used as symbols, given recognizable costumes and sent out on branding exercises, or school camps.

Not the Masters.
Not the Strangers.
Me and Dad estimated that Protectorate had access to about twelve hundred strangers which they just never told anyone about.


That was a threat.



"And if you don't return, Miss Lavere?"
Ahead of us, PRT staff prepare to lower the gangplank from the pier side. Behind us, the main bulk huddles forward near the exit gate, eager to move forward, get on with their days.

I turn and watch them.
This bobbling bumbling bulk of humanity. Anonymous office workers, cleaners and tourists. Geezers and kids.

"If I don't come back," the gangplank lowers, people begin filing out. "I'd appreciate it if you'd go to the papers, raise a fuss in the general assembly."
"Of course."
"Also, if I don't return, you'll die in eight to twelve days."

There's a pause, this gentile prince freezing for a moment. Long seconds pass, as the crowd squeeze and glomp themselves out of the boat. Then Sayed bursts into laughter, the sound overload and sharp, people glance over, Taurari and the man's grandson included.
Welp... that was weird.

The man continues to chuckle as we make our way towards the gang way.
"A fine bluff, young Miss Lavere... a fine bluff indeed."






There are rose gardens, rose gardens with a shallow rectangular pool in the middle, and then glass doors leading into a wide open foyer area- stone floor, velvety black ceiling, glass walls, lighting streaming in from every side, the entire space overwide, making the ceiling feel low.
A construction of air and stone, in contrast to the water we just crossed.

By now the "Crowd" of people which seemed so packed and tight upon the boat has dispersed, becoming sparse, individuals and little clusters each going their separate ways. My own unit is probably the largest coherent group remaining. Voices and footsteps echo throughout the space. There's desks, and a reception area, but we have an appointment, and so I hang back, waiting.


But not for long.

I'm standing, gazing out the window as the beam of light arrives. Falling swiftly, then catching, touching down gently against the ground, and taking a second or so to coalesce.

There's a thrum through out the room, across the island, just the slightest change in how people stand, how people move. Tourists and reception staff stand up straighter, people turn slightly, conversations still, as the light outside hardens into the shape of a man.

Even Vance. Even Justice Vance is effected. Pulling herself just a little straighter, her usual serious demeanor softening with just a touch of warmth.

Threat. Conflicted loyalties. Danger there.
I turn to Sayed, realize I haven't been breathing. The man cracks me a smile, seems relaxed, apparently the only one uneffected.

Yeah.
Right.
A Prince.
Like... not just "Princess", but actual genuine fucking
royalty.
Okay, that's what we brought you for.



By the time I turn back, Legend is already approaching, strolling towards the great glass doors, giving passers by a smile, a nod. He catches my eye as the doors part in front of him, flips a lazy two finger salute:
"Miss Lavere!"
Oh god. He's pretty. That means Taur' is going to spend the whole ride home talking about him.
"and entourage!" He's got wavey brown hair, a delicate domino ask over his eyes, and rich booming voice. His eyes dart past mine for a moment, glancing over the assembly of people behind me, before returning his focus on me.

He offers a hand, shakes mine, his grip firm, his costume all encompassing-
-no contact-
and with that greeting completed, he moves on to my guests.

"Justice Vance- so good to see you again, how is your husband? .... and... Sheikh Sayed bin Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani? I don't believe we've formally met, please forgive my poor pronounciation!"
"It was perfect"
"Wonderful!"
Legend continues to shake hands enthusiastically, including everyone in a way that many celebrities don't, ushering us forward, guiding us towards doors. "Now Miss Lavere, I must apologies for the circumstances, and thank you for your efforts in Brockton bay, you were a real life saver down there, it means a lot to me, personally and-"
We keycard our way through a pair of doors, make our way down a staircase, swipe through another pair of doors, another staircase, and-

"- really that's what we're all here for right? Try to make the world a better place, save some lives, fight the good fight-"

Andrea predicts civilization will collapse in the next five to thirty years.

Legend continus talking and I try to wrestle my attention around, set myself in the here and now.

Five to thirty years.
My lifetime.


We enter a second lobby area: like the glass space upstairs, except this one is like a bunker: bomb shelter vibes, with concrete walls and neon light fittings. There's people in the room, some just passing through, some of them waiting for us: A severe grey looking man. Middle aged, and sharp eyed, with his entire face sort of... bent inwards towards his nose.
He has a young IT assistant following him around with scruffy hair, a bulky looking suitcase/laptop.

A few steps to the sides there's a young heroine. Semi-familiar. No mask, brown hair, a dark costume with lines of neon blue.
Who is she? I'm meant to know this one.


Even as I try to figure it out, Legend runs through introductions:
"Miss Lavere, John Winston,"
"Pleased to meet you," Techincal assistant. One of my fathers jailors. Voice waspish.

"Behind him you have Reese Clayk," - the young intern.
He knows the interns names...

"And..." somehow an extra layer of warmth is plastered over the superheroes already sunny demeanor. "This is Battery. One of my favorite proteges…"
There's a pause, as the man regards her, smiling. Battery squirms under the gaze, obviously uncomfortable being the center of attention, but even so it is a long moment before the man turns back to me, "Like I said," he speaks gentle "You were in Brockton Bay. That means a lot. It means a lot to me personally."


What is this? Why are you-
"Enough for you to give me my Dad back?"

Even before the words are out of my mouth, I know its a mistake.
A show of weakness.

Legends brow furrows in concern. Behind him, I see Battery wince.

Indelicate. Indelicate- I could have used that opening as a weapon, more finesse, more...

Twisted tangled emotions spill over the boyish hero's face, eventually coallescing into a sad smile. "As your esteemed lawyer, Justice Vance, will tell you... it doesn't really work that way."
There's light around him- his power firing up just enough to give him a glow, just enough to make him look cool and-



"Why not? Why doesn't it work that way? If you said- If you said it people would listen right? They'd have to."
"I-"
Mistake. Mistake mistake mistake.
"You could just tell them to let my Dad go, and people would do it, so why can't you?"
Stupid stupid stupid stupid.

People are starring now.
People in the group. Passers by in the hallway behind us.

Vance.
Taur'
Sayed and his grandson.

Fuck. I'm such a fucking idiot.

My hands are balled up.
Shoulders tense.

Everyone seems pissed, everyone except Legend, who flounders, stares at me sympathetically.

How many times per day does this man deal with people asking him to save them?
Make exceptions, use his influence, make the world
not be this way?


We're in a stupid fucking PRT building, and I watch as Legend, the Legend, kneels down in front of me.
Calm.
Gentle.
I want to fucking punch him.
That's a bad plan, Nunce, dude shoots lazer beams, and tanks hits from Levi.

"You're right," he says simply "I could..."

For a moment his eye contact breaks, jumping to someone behind me. Vance?


"But I don't think that leads to the kind of world any of us want to live in," he continues.
His eyes are blue, deep blue, and focused, and calm.
"I am a man who flies and shoots lazer beams from his hands. I don't think... I don't think me making decisions about justice, or what... ought to happen, leads to good places."
Stupid. I scrunch and unscrunch my toes... trying to dissipate tension, trying not to let the hate and anger crawl into my eyes as I stare at this man.

"I don't think I should be deciding who lives and dies, who is imprisoned or set free."
"You are," the words escape my throat. They sound weak. Pathetic. "You do. Every time you hold up the system, every time you say your power will support their power, that's you deciding."
I shouldn't have said that.

Behind Legend, wasp nose glowers. Squinty eyes. Enjoying watching me squirm. Enjoying watching a young villain fuck it all up. Battery cringes empathy, you've heard these arguments before. This is what Ethan would say.
The young intern gawks, surprised, hungry for juicy gossip or something. Not important.

Legend mainly just frowns, rolls his jaw back and forward thoughtfully.

"Every time you don't go to a hospital to save people, is that murder?" The man shakes his head, clearly perturbed. "I don't think it is. Or... if you go to a hospital, then you're not helping the people not at the hospital, and that's sort of supporting a system? I... no one is responsible for all the choices they could have made, only the choices they do."
Pretending to be a simple man with simple tastes.


"I won't come to the Endbringer events," I speak the words, and I know I mean them, and I can feel the ice in it, and it feels good.
Fuck you Legend.

"If you take my Dad off me, if you take him, I won't help you any more. I'll walk away, I'll-"
You take my Dad from me. I'll take something you want from you.
I'll let people die.



The man sighs, frowns, shakes his head.

I was meant to be smart with this.
If I had said this in private, it might actually be a threat.
In public? Out here...



"I hope you change your mind on that," Legend stands, pulls back from me. Gaze still soft, still gentle. The shape of Battery just half a step behind him. "I think you'll grow up to be a great hero one day. A greater hero than you already have been. And I hope to see that. We could really use your help."

Out here in public he's forced to refuse the threat.
He can't not.

"Fuck you," I tell him.


The man chuckles. Glances past me, gives Justice Vance a wink.
"I'll leave you in the capable hands of Mr Winston then. Miss Battery will be here to show you out once you've had a chance to speak with your dad. I hope it is a productive conversation for you.... for both of you."



Fuuuaarck.
Fucking idiot.
 
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I'll be honest: the scene was meant to go somewhere else, or cut more quickly to the Marquis phone call, or all sorts of other things.... but instead Amelia is a angsty weirdo trainwreck, who yells at super heroes. :/

Not sure what I think about it, but there is it.

Probably I'll have to see how it pans out long term to decide how I feel about it.
 
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I'll be honest: the scene was meant to go somewhere else, or cut more quickly to the Marquis phone call, or all sorts of other things.... but instead Amelia is a angsty weirdo trainwreck (AKA, teenager), who yells at super heroes. :/

For me it was more of a contrast. The teenager versus the Protectorate / PRT with Legend as the representation / personification of the two organizations.

So we have the raw, honest emotion on one side and on the other... Legend, the Hero, both with what is shown here and what is known of him because of the original story.

Amelia arrives "normally" and doesn't stand out / attract attention. Versus. Legend comes as a beam of light, drawing everybody's attention.
Amelia is awkward and blunt. Versus. Legend is practiced, smooth and charismatic.
Amelia shows honest emotion. Versus. Legend lies.

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It shows, in a personal way, what Amelia is up against.
 
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Impatience (Amelia)
Time passes. Mr Winston talks, and I have a chance to cool down.

Winston's voice is nasal and waspish, and I'm pretty sure he isn't out to get me, even though I hate him.

He seems bored- one of those "place and process" type people. Not my friend, but not particularly vindictive either.
There's no joy in watching me squirm, he mostly just seems annoyed to be dealing with all this drama. He refers to "your father" with no small amount of disdain, but that disapproval doesn't seem to spill over on to me, which is… good? I guess.

"… There may be some minor lag in the call, due to the number of redirects used to mask your father's location- do not be alarmed…"

Mr Winston continues to drone on. We're out in the hall. Me, and my entourage, and Battery, standing by awkwardly.

Just a ``chance encounter'' this. Trying to soften me up for when they suggest she become my guardian.
She looks awkward. Uncomfortable. "Dutiful" is perhaps the word that comes to mind.
She knows too doesn't she? She knows what this is about…
I meet her eyes, she looks back, looks away.

Yeah.
She knows.




The young intern has gone into some conference room in order to set up the tinkertech I'll be using for my call.
Sayed is apparently schooling his Grandson- quizzing them on my latest encounter in hushed Arabic.
Taurari meets my eyes. Gives me a nod. She seems worried. Trying to push warmth at me. That unspoken question: "are you okay?"

I give her a nod back, a wiggly hand gesture, a thumbs up.

Jacqualine seems annoyed at me.
Makes sense. I basically proposed parahuman supremacy, giving up even the pretense of rule of law.
Bit of a sore spot for a woman who built her whole life on it. A theater to build civilization upon. All those lies.



Mr Winston drones on.

"...your call will be monitored, naturally; do not attempt coded messages, or other forms of subterfuge, these will lead to-"
"Hold up," I interrupt.
"HhhmmMmmmmm?"

"Me and Dad need to verify each other. Confirm that we are actually talking to the real person. That requires codephrases."
"That… has not been signed off by the justice department."
"Too bad – you're using tinkertech, you refused to give me contact in person. I need proof that its my real Dad, and the only real proof is those codephrases."

Mr Winston glowers… going slowly cross eyed as he processes this information.
"You couldn't… discuss some unique childhood memory shared only by your father and yourself?"

"If I don't use the passphrase, then he will assume the call is fake."

"Hhhhhhmmmmmmmm,"
The man buzzes.

I can see Battery and Jacqualine Vance wanting to jump in; I meet their eyes, shake my head.
Don't need your help.
Your interference.



"This is irregular… and has not been signed off on."
"Then make the calls you need to and get it signed off."

"Hhhhmmmm…"

The man continues to make noise as he pulls a phone out and starts to dial.
I walk away from him.


He's obnoxious, and a weirdo, and they still choose to send him down here to be the one to read me through the process.
Why?
What are his talents?
What is he good at?





Taurari comes over and gives me a punch in the shoulder – a motion weirdly reminiscent of Discoqueen.
I punch back, and then Taur' punches really hard, and then I decide not to escalate further, knowing full well that I would lose that fight and Taur' would laugh about it.




Stupid power won't heal my bruises.

What's up with that?
What
is that?

Won't heal dad either.
I can't fix him.



My feet move. Pad up and down in place.
I feel anxious. Annoyed.



Am I going to be able to talk to Dad?

I'm not scared, just… frustrated, pent up.
Maybe I'll talk to Dad soon. What will I say to him?
What... what can I say to him?


All that crap with Chene and Trinket was so dumb and weird. Scion is an Endbringer. Legend is an enemy. Stupid legal ideas that I've got to keep secret.
Dad might be an enemy too; all of this was his plan, somehow, or maybe it wasn't, and he's just pretending like it was, because that's A Thing Dad Would Do.
"How was your day? Why am I so angry and scared all the time?"

Justice Vance is judging me. Battery is watching too. Forming opinions.
I'm meant to stand tall and project confidence and all that shit. Instead I'm folded in on myself, staring at the floor.
Stupid.


Why'd you do all this Dad?
Why'd you do anything?
Why couldn't you just… just be a normal Dad?
Would it really be that hard to just… not be a serial killer?
Not pick fights with heroes?
You told me losing wasn't hard - couldn't you just pretend or something?



I look up. Mr Winston is off the phone now. Frowning, tapping his foot impatiently… presumably waiting for someone to call back.

Battery is still watching me, and this time I stare back at her, meet her eyes.

Well?
Are we going to both pretend like all this you being here is an accident?


She smiles, smiles apologetically, and strolls on over.

"Hey,"
"Hey," I reply.

"Thanks for taking care of Assault for me."
"Sure."
Not like I took super great care of him.
"And the legs. I hear I owe you for that."
I shrug.
It wasn't just the legs, lady.
You would have died.
You would have died without me.
Bleed out like fucking roadkill.
No questions asked.



"No trouble," I say.


She looks so young. Mid Twenties or something. Mid twenties- not the sort of person who is supposed to die on a hospital bed.
That would be bad. Wrong.


There's some anger, some feeling inside me all tangled up by that.
Scion is an Endbringer.
All of this is all a great big scam.
Is the PRT in on it?


But you believe in it don't you? You're one of the Protectorates ``most loyal assets'. A true believer.
You'd die for them. Over and over again.
But what's the point?


"Ethan took care of me too," is what I say.
Battery seems confused.
Right. Non-sequitur. Right. "You don't owe me anything," I tell her "I tried to look out for him, he looked out for me."
"But-"
"You were at an Endbringer event. You fought bravely. I patched you up- saved your life probably, but like…" I gesture at the building we are in, gesture and try to get her to understand. "That ain't you owing me something. That's the Protectorate owing me some. That's on them, and they're doing a fucking shitty job of it, but that's not on you. You stuck your neck on the line with useless support and fuck all gratitude, and patching up your legs is just the crappy prize you get for risking your life or whatever. We're even. We're done. You don't owe me anything."


I could have leaned on that.
Could have used it, or manipulated it.

Dad would know how. How to spool out payments from that so that the lady
kept giving me things, but never ever ever felt like the debt was done.
Dad would know how to ask a favor, and make it feel like there was no way she could refuse without being
ungrateful.
Dad would do lots of different things with that.


I hate the way people look at me when they owe me something.




"Oh...kay?" is what the woman says.
"We're good?"
"I…" I watch as the hero straightens herself out. Shakes the feeling off. "Yeah," she says "We're good."
Oh thank fucking god.
"And we can talk about the fact the PRT plans to make you my guardian if all this shit with Dad goes to shit?"
"I…"
"I already know, Battery."
Ethan calls you Puppy.
Ethan calls you puppy, and gave up on crimes for you, and thinks the world of you.


I watch as the woman collects herself again. Nods. "Sure," she says.
"It ain't going to happen," I tell her.
Other people are watching. Other people are watching, and I'm being blunt. Bullheaded. Again.
"It ain't going to happen, because Dad is going to win this court case, but if it does happen, I don't hate you, and I won't be a dick about it, but like… don't try to pretend like you're one of my parents, okay?"
"We were never going to-"
"Good. Maybe I'll live with you, maybe I won't, but don't try to talk to me or get me to `open up' about things, and like… it ain't going to happen anyway, so don't get too worked up about it."
"Okay."
"I hope you and Ethan have a really good time together. I hope he comes home soon, and sweeps you off your feet, and you.... you fuck off out of this mess."
Some complex emotion flickers across the woman's face. She's pretty. Seems honest.

"I hope he come home soon too,"

He's your boyfriend or whatever. No shit.






We have to do things better.
We have to
fix things.

Scion is an Endbringer.
The Endbringers have to die.
I have to kill them.


I sit on a bench in the hallway.
Everyone is wound up, wrung out, bored.

Every so often there's capes and PRT officers milling past.

I have to kill the Endbringers.
What resources do I have available?




A call comes in for Wasposaur. He buzzes into the phone for a few sentences, then hangs up, gives me the new communications rules and protocols.

I nod, agree to them. Acknowledge that I know the call will be monitored, speaking in code will be limited to a few quick sentences to verify identity, and then finally, after nearly half an hour of waiting around and kicking at walls, I am lead through into the next room.

It's a conference room. A "remote viewing" style conference room, with a projector screen and cameras, and a great semicircular table in my half of the room, pressed up against the wall.

On the "other" side of the room, some other remote access conference room has a toilet, and a cot. There's chairs and bookshelves, and all sorts of other furniture, a little sculpture of a bonsai tree in the corner. All of it grey. All of it white. Aside from the cot and the loo, every single piece of furniture is made of bone.

Dad sits in the middle of the room, hunched over, perched on his chair. Everything about him is tidy. Well kempt. Neat.
Everything except the pale of his skin, the hollow look around his eyes. He looks older, now. Distant.
But he's here.
He's here he's here he's here he's here he's here.


For long seconds, we just look at each other.
Just look, try to drink one another in with our eyes, and he's here, and he's my Dad, and we'll figure this all out.
I promise that we'll figure this all out.


"Good evening, Princess."
"Hey."
 
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"Ethan took care of me too," is what I say.
Battery seems confused.
Is using Assault's civilian name going to cause trouble, or is it meant as another one of Amelia's "blunt" missteps that will look different to observers than it does to her?

We know that she's not in the mental state to do any kind of power play by calling him by his first name. But the Protectorate is going to take one glance at Battery's report and start extrapolating. Battery herself might have complicated feelings about it too, and Amelia isn't in the position to notice or care.
 
He's obnoxious, and a weirdo, and they still choose to send him down here to be the one to read me through the process.
Why?
What are his talents?
What is he good at?

Why do I get the idea that his "talent" is being difficult enough to deal with, specifically so that Legend or Battery would have had the excuse to step in and assist. But not too difficult, not enough to be seen as an opponent. In fact....

"Hhhhhhmmmmmmmm,"
The man buzzes.

I can see Battery and Jacqualine Vance wanting to jump in; I meet their eyes, shake my head.

It seems as if Battery was waiting for an opportunity?

Which, actually leads me to a thought or two. Legend and Battery. From what was shown in the last two chapters and the previous reveal that the PRT / Protectorate is planning to have Battery and Assault made Amelia's guardians, it appears as if a most of the planned interaction was intended to manipulate Amelia. But Amelia was just too blunt and honest, derailing the plan.

I mean, look at the below.

"Enough for you to give me my Dad back?"

Even before the words are out of my mouth, I know its a mistake.
A show of weakness.

Legends brow furrows in concern. Behind him, I see Battery wince.

Both Battery and Legend knows that Amelia knows Assault is Madcap. And they can't be 100% sure that Amelia isn't aware of the fact that Legend just decided, on his own, without consulting anybody, to accept the offer AND that he manipulated a Ward into a situation she flat out said NO to when it was brought up at first (and second and third) to gain Madcap. So Legend has to abandon whatever he had planned to answer this in a way that hopefully calms Amelia down and doesn't have her bring up Madcap. And he can't stay around because he's angered Amelia and she knows he's lying on some level and because she just might in anger mention Purity and Madcap.

Same with Battery.

"Oh...kay?" is what the woman says.
"We're good?"
"I…" I watch as the hero straightens herself out. Shakes the feeling off. "Yeah," she says "We're good."
Oh fuck fucking god.
"And we can talk about the fact the PRT plans to make you my guardian if all this shit with Dad goes to shit?"
"I…"
"I already know, Battery."

Bringing it in the open, in front of everybody like this, means that "thanks" and "want to pay you back" and other such things look like manipulation. Her approaching Amelia? It looks like it was an attempt at manipulation. Continuing to try and engage with Amelia? It would look like manipulation.

Honestly, what she did was probably far from the best things she could have done, but it at least wrecked their approach and showed her that Legend is a manipulator and some form of liar.
 
Heh, I wonder if Mr Winston...
"New comments have been posted. View them?"

Come on, riaantheunissen, I was just typing out that maybe being a lighting rod for annoyance was Mr Winston's purpose.

I bet Battery was picked because she's genuinely a nice person, in the hopes that Amelia gets tied of punching down.

Amelia already exists manipulation, so put a good person in her path and she is she feels bad for taking her frustrations out on her.
 
Come on, riaantheunissen, I was just typing out that maybe being a lighting rod for annoyance was Mr Winston's purpose.

Given my current situation it's actually kind of funny that I managed to get it in first....

I bet Battery was picked because she's genuinely a nice person, in the hopes that Amelia gets tied of punching down.

I actually think Amelia's history with Assault, combined with her loyalty, is the big reason. Her not being an objectionable personality? I think that is what was next in line.

Amelia already exists manipulation, so put a good person in her path and she is she feels bad for taking her frustrations out on her.

The problem of course is that the first meeting was an obvious attempt to manipulate her. Manipulation and lies, especially starting with them? I expect finding out screwed up the relationship Legend, the PRT, the Protectorate and, to a lesser extent, Battery wanted.

(And now I'm off.
 
The problem of course is that the first meeting was an obvious attempt to manipulate her. Manipulation and lies, especially starting with them? I expect finding out screwed up the relationship Legend, the PRT, the Protectorate and, to a lesser extent, Battery wanted.
Multiple conflicting objectives on the part of the Protectorate?

Perhaps Legend screwed the pitch on purpose?

I'm not sure what to make of that idea in support beyond that. It's just that incompetence is the most predictable and common issue in bureaucracy, but that also means somebody trying to do something sneaky can commit 'the perfect crime', in the situations where playing just a little dumb at the right time can accomplish the goal.
 
Multiple conflicting objectives on the part of the Protectorate?

Perhaps Legend screwed the pitch on purpose?

I'm not sure what to make of that idea in support beyond that. It's just that incompetence is the most predictable and common issue in bureaucracy, but that also means somebody trying to do something sneaky can commit 'the perfect crime', in the situations where playing just a little dumb at the right time can accomplish the goal.

I said obvious manipulation because it was obvious to Amelia (and us) because Amelia knows Battery and Assault have already been assigned as her guardians / wardens. If she had not known, would she immediately have suspected manipulation if Battery said that the reason she came was that she wanted to thank Amelia? And if Battery lied at a later date, saying she was sorry things turned out the way they had but she had volunteered to become Amelia's guardian and called in favors to ensure she, who owed Amelia and who would never manipulate her, pinkie promise, became Amelia's guardian... Would Amelia know it was lies and manipulation?

Honestly, I did not see Legend "screwing up the pitch", I saw Legend as a practiced, smooth, charismatic liar who did everything "right". He arrived in a beam of light, catching everybody's attention and charming everybody except Amelia and probably Prince Sayed. He greeted everybody by name, he asked about people's family members and he pronounced "Sheikh Sayed bin Hamad bin Khalifa Al Thani" correctly. (Which honestly gives me the impression that he received a briefing about everybody attending before meeting them.) His initial words to Amelia, those that we are shown, are smooth and without mistake, and Amelia is not showing any indication of realizing that he's a manipulative liar who is, from her perspective, actively working to screw her over.

When he introduces Battery he gives her an excuse why she could be there....

"And..." somehow an extra layer of warmth is plastered over the superheroes already sunny demeanor. "This is Battery. One of my favorite proteges…"

She's one of his "proteges" after all.

When Amelia asks he gives a sad smile and proceed to lie....

Legends brow furrows in concern. Behind him, I see Battery wince.

Indelicate. Indelicate- I could have used that opening as a weapon, more finesse, more...

Twisted tangled emotions spill over the boyish hero's face, eventually coallescing into a sad smile. "As your esteemed lawyer, Justice Vance, will tell you... it doesn't really work that way."
There's light around him- his power firing up just enough to give him a glow, just enough to make him look cool and-

"You're right," he says simply "I could..."

For a moment his eye contact breaks, jumping to someone behind me. Vance?


"But I don't think that leads to the kind of world any of us want to live in," he continues.
His eyes are blue, deep blue, and focused, and calm.
"I am a man who flies and shoots lazer beams from his hands. I don't think... I don't think me making decisions about justice, or what... ought to happen, leads to good places."
Stupid. I scrunch and unscrunch my toes... trying to dissipate tension, trying not to let the hate and anger crawl into my eyes as I stare at this man.

"I don't think I should be deciding who lives and dies, who is imprisoned or set free."

And she never suspect that he lies, that he has decided such, on his own.

So no. I really don't believe Legend screwed up.

Is using Assault's civilian name going to cause trouble, or is it meant as another one of Amelia's "blunt" missteps that will look different to observers than it does to her?

Battery was there without a mask, in front of everybody Amelia brought. Ethan's name is small potatoes next to that. In fact, I take the masklessness to mean one of three things. One that Battery is either fully invested in gaining guardianship of Amelia and is unmasking herself in order to gain some small advantage. Two, she's so certain that it's going to happen she has outed herself to Amelia in advance since it doesn't matter. Or three, she was ordered to do so to make her seem more approachable or trustworthy or some such.
 
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Aside from the cot and the loo, every single piece of furniture is made of bone.
I was wondering why they'd put Marquis in a space with a lot of furniture and a bonsai tree - this is a great image/characterization.

And she never suspect that he lies, that he has decided such, on his own.
Legend could easily think that he shouldn't be making decisions "about justice... who lives and dies, who is imprisoned or set free" and at the same time be able to sometimes rationalize why in a particular circumstance (Madcap) it's okay for him to make those decisions. It is pretty common to hold moral principles that you don't always live up to. It's probably also why Amelia recognizes that she messed up by making that demand of Legend explicitly and in public - in private she may have been able to convince him, in public he's forced to state his moral principles which makes him commit to them and means that later action in violation of those principles would be obvious both to the witnesses and also to Legend himself.

I said obvious manipulation because it was obvious to Amelia (and us) because Amelia knows Battery and Assault have already been assigned as her guardians / wardens. If she had not known, would she immediately have suspected manipulation if Battery said that the reason she came was that she wanted to thank Amelia? And if Battery lied at a later date, saying she was sorry things turned out the way they had but she had volunteered to become Amelia's guardian and called in favors to ensure she, who owed Amelia and who would never manipulate her, pinkie promise, became Amelia's guardian... Would Amelia know it was lies and manipulation?
From what I remember of Canon, it seems out of character for Battery to participate in this kind of elaborate setup. It seems more likely that Legend told Battery that since they were considering making her and Assault into Amelia's guardians, he'd like to make a low-key introduction and see how Amelia reacted. He might suggest that Battery shouldn't mention anything about a potential guardianship since it's not finalized/official and it's an emotionally sensitive issue. Battery would have reason to express (genuine) gratitude, and Legend could adjust approach on the guardianship issue based on how the interaction with Amelia went.

Remember that Legend didn't tell Battery he was involved with Cauldron even though she's a Cauldron cape. Even if he's doing something manipulative it doesn't mean that she's in on it.

Also, I think the issue of the PRT and Dr Yamada manipulating Amelia has come up before. We're used to talking about manipulation as something that is done at a person's expense, against their interests. But I don't think that people are always self-serving when they take action with the hidden intent that it will make another person react in a specific way. If Battery sees that Amelia is stressed, and walks over to express gratitude in the hopes that it will make Amelia feel better, is that manipulative? Maybe. Does it mean that Battery is taking that action because she's expecting that it will make Amelia trust her more as a guardian figure? Not necessarily.

Marquis is a highly manipulative person who is always thinking about how the way he interacts with people will benefit him long-term. Amelia thinks that way too. It's not normal.
 
Legend could easily think that he shouldn't be making decisions "about justice... who lives and dies, who is imprisoned or set free" and at the same time be able to sometimes rationalize why in a particular circumstance (Madcap) it's okay for him to make those decisions. It is pretty common to hold moral principles that you don't always live up to.

Maybe but there's also what we're shown in the original story. The story doesn't focus on him but even so we're shown a lot.

We know that Legend started his career as a Protectorate member / leader aware of the fact that Alexandria was Costa Brown and we know parahumans were not allowed to be PRT members / leaders. I cannot believe that there are / were no requirements to report illegal behavior. So during his entire career he regularly lied or deliberately withheld the truth.

"There's no guarantee your plan will survive contact with government," Legend said.

"There's one guarantee."

"What's that?"

"I'm estimating that it will take at least five years to establish this plan nationwide. In that span, we'll start with only a few groups in the largest cities, we'll gradually and gratefully accept involvement and oversight from government and law enforcement. We'll also create a sub-group for minors with powers, so we can strictly structure their environment and development. Those are the key points. That gives me time to address your doubts."

"Again, how?"

"I expect we'll be able to employ the remainder of the plan, the eight-stage integration of parahumans with the public, because I will be in a position of power in the government. I, my civilian self, can be in charge of the government-sponsored superhero teams within eight years."

"There's too many holes in that plan. People will wonder why Alexandria and your secret identity aren't in the same place at once."

"There's more than one solution to that. For one thing, I can work faster and better than my unpowered peers. For another, the Doctor thinks she can find a suitable body double with similar powers before the deadline. I designed this costume to be elegant without being attention-getting. No color, as you pointed out. And I don't seek leadership of the team. Instead, I will content myself with working to guide legislation to where we need it."

"It seems so manipulative. Everything people feared we'd be doing," Hero said.

"I have booklets of paperwork you can look over. All of the math, all of the projected issues for the future, and all of my proposals and plans. You don't have to give me an answer right away. Just consider it."

"Okay," Hero said.

"And," the Doctor said, "I think it goes without saying that everything said in this room stays in this room?"

"A reality that Ms. Hebert feels Miss Militia would be better equipped to accommodate," my lawyer added. "That's our third term."

There weren't any retorts or rebuttals from the 'good guys'. Instead, they exchanged glances across the table, everyone looking between Miss Militia and Director Tagg.

"The PRT is led by non-capes," Miss Militia said.

"That can change," I said. "Nearly a week ago, you and I had a conversation. We talked about the issues within the PRT, the fact that you had to kowtow to non-capes and all the problems that posed. I think the non-capes who tend to find powerful positions in the PRT are getting there by dangerous roads. They tend to have backgrounds with the police, military, and anti-parahuman strike teams. It sets up a combative mindset, where we don't need one. With a cape in charge of the local team, at the very least, I could hope that there'd be a shared perspective."

Legend "greased the wheels for some of Cauldron's top customers" and "diverted" people who got too curious about Cauldron. Ignoring rules against divided loyalties or reporting such or acting against such or investigating those who might have such? Well, I can't believe that years of greasing the wheels for Cauldron's top clients and diverting people who might find out about Cauldron was done without lies and manipulation.

Cauldron had given him his powers, had given him what he needed to be at the very top, to lead the largest collection of superheroes in the world. They hadn't wanted much in exchange. He kept an eye out to make sure nobody got too curious about Cauldron, diverted them if they did.

When Madcap was captured.... Hoo boy.... Legend does not look good in my opinion.
  • There's nothing showing Legend being firm with Madcap, reminding him that it's either play ball with no abuse of anybody or jail.
  • There's nothing showing Legend trying to defend Battery, who as far as I know is a Ward at this point in time, from future harassment by somebody who has been a criminal for more than five years and who has worked for murderers.
  • There's nothing showing Legend putting hard limits on what is acceptable behavior from Madcap's side.
  • When Madcap demands to be on Battery's team Battery says no. Legend ignores her and shows no care for Battery's wants or opinion.
  • When Madcap says he is a bit sadistic and wants to be on Battery's team specifically because it will "irritate the piss out of her" Legend shows no care for Battery's happiness, mental wellbeing or the fact that she says No.
  • Battery says No for the third time, being very clear that she does not want it. Then Legend gets manipulative, he says Battery's a good heroine, that it's her decision and that he won't judge.... But he makes it clear he feels she should say yes.
  • And there's absolutely no indication that Legend needed to get anybody else to approve the decision.

"I really don't want to go to the Birdcage," Madcap said. He was covered in containment foam from shoulder to toe.

"You've committed somewhere in the neighborhood of a hundred felonies," Legend answered him. "I don't think you have many options."

"Felonies, sure, but I haven't killed anyone, and that's got to be worth something. Now, this is just a suggestion, but what if I switched sides?"

"Get real," Battery replied.

"I'm serious, puppy. You guys need more bodies on the field, I don't want to go to the Birdcage, it's win-win. I'm strong."

"You've spent nearly six years perverting the course of justice for others," she replied.

"And now I can make amends!" They had removed his mask, but his real smile was almost more mocking than the one that had been styled into the mask.

"You spent the last five and a half years getting people out of the Birdcage, claiming to be against it and everything it stood for, but now you're willing to work to put people in there?"

"Maybe you've changed me. Your good looks, your winning personality, and your diehard persistence in the face of so many defeats at my hand."

Battery looked at Legend, "Don't suppose we can gag him?"

"Sadly, no. And he raises an interesting idea."

"He's going to run the second he gets a chance."

"There are options. Tracking devices, or perhaps Myrddin can put some countermeasure in place."

"I'm down for any of that stuff," Madcap said, casting a sidelong glance at Battery. He grinned, "But I want some concessions."

"Concessions? You asshole. You should be glad that we're even entertaining this asinine idea."

"I think you'll find them pretty reasonable," Madcap said, more to Legend than Battery.

"Let's hear it."

"I think this would work best if I took on a new identity. New costume. My powers are versatile enough that I doubt anyone's going to draw a connection. It also means I don't have any enemies or any paranoid customers from my shady past coming after me."

"That could be arranged."

"And I want to be on her team," Madcap said, pointing at Battery. He smiled. "Puppy changes to a new city, I go with."

"Hell no," Battery said.

"Why?" Legend asked.

"It's funny," Madcap said. "It's going to irritate the piss out of her, and I've got just a little bit of a sadistic streak in me. If I don't channel it somehow, this just isn't going to work out. Just give me this, and I'll be a boy scout."

"Boy scout? You'll be on your best behavior?" Legend asked. "This would be more than even regular probation."

"No." Battery said.

"Yes." Madcap answered the man.

"No," Battery said, stabbing a finger at Legend. "I've been a damn good hero for you guys. My record is spotless, I've put in the hours, I've put in the overtime hours. I've done the jobs nobody else wants to do, the unpaid volunteer crap, the patrols at the dead of night when nothing happens. This is a punishment."

"You're right," Legend sighed, "It would be a heavy burden for a good heroine. So it's up to you. You decide if Madcap joins the Protectorate or not. I won't judge you if you say no."

"But you think I should say yes."

"I do, if it makes us stronger in the long run."

Battery looked down at Madcap, and the villain offered her an exaggerated pout, his eyes large, his lower lip sticking out.

"Fuck me," she said. "You're going on paper as the one making the call, Legend, and you're taking the hit if this backfires."

After finding out that Cauldron wanted members of the Slaughterhouse Nine to escape and confirming that they were lying about human experimentation, the case 53's .... Well, he kept his mouth shut about it.

"All lies," Legend whispered the words to himself.

When Tattletale spilled the beans? He lied. (This is after Battery told him about Cauldron and he confirmed it via the lie detector.)

"It's true?" Gully asked.

"We started Cauldron in the early days," he said. "They had a way to give people powers, and each of us were desperate for our own reasons. We should have had trigger events, but we weren't lucky enough to have the potential. Nobody deluded themselves about the risks. We knew that it was all too possible to die or become a monster."

"But you did. You made monsters," Gully said.

"Everyone who took a dose went into it with their eyes open," he said. "They refined the process, and we reduced the chance to a single digit of a percent. Two, three percent, if that. And at the same time the numbers were decreasing, we were realizing how badly we needed the heroes that Cauldron could provide. Capes without traumas to drive them toward villainy. Cauldron turned it into a business, producing heroes and acquiring funds from the wealthy to redirect to Endbringer recovery and further research into powers. We knew it wasn't ideal, that some would turn to villainy, but with the appearance of the Slaughterhouse Nine and the damage the Endbringers were doing, we had to do something."

"It's not Cauldron," Legend said. His voice was flat, without affect. He met her eyes. "Manton worked for Cauldron, before an incident with his daughter led to a psychotic break and a break with the organization. He left with samples that he passed on to others. One of those people sold them for personal profit before Cauldron found him. Another was responsible for the case fifty-threes. We thought it was Manton, but it wasn't."

He glanced at Tattletale, and she cocked her head a little to one side.

"Why?" Gully asked. "Why do that? Why make us like this?"

"I'd give you answers if I could. Some people abuse others for the sense of power it gives them," Legend told her. His voice sounded hollow. "To change someone's body and mind completely and irrevocably? It could be the same impulse. The appearance of the case fifty-threes has stopped or slowed dramatically. It's little consolation, but we think the person who did this to you is be dead or completely out of formula."

"That's no consolation at all," Gully replied. The ground shuddered.

"It's worth noting," Legend said, "That we tracked Manton down. He and Siberian's master are the same person. Dragon and Defiant have a bead on the Nine. They expect a confrontation to start soon."

But I could only think of when Legend and I had been looking down at the Nine from above. He'd recognized the Siberian's master then, and he hadn't told me.

Was he omitting facts now, in the same way? Was he lying like he had then?

When legend was talking to Taylor in the aftermath of an attack by Scion he lied.

"No, it doesn't," I agreed. I had to scoot out of the way as some doctors hurried by with fresh tools and equipment. Removing the dissolved materials from burned flesh was something of a task, and there were a lot of people to help.

"I always knew there was something wrong, underneath it all, but there were bigger things to focus on. You finish dealing with one Endbringer attack or a potential war with parahuman attacks on both sides, it demands all of your focus. You're left drained, dealing with the event or the aftermath, and then you need to recuperate, you have an organization to manage. There's never a moment where you can stop, take a deep breath, and then say, 'now is the moment where I address that nagging doubt I had the other day'. Now is the moment I call so-and-so out on that less-than-complete truth they used while we were elbow-deep in Indonesian cyborg super-soldiers."

(He knew about Cauldron from the beginning of his career as the head of the Protectorate. He also knew from the beginning that Cauldron would expect him to divert attention away from them and grease the wheels for their top customers. He knew that Alexandria was Costa-Brown and that a parahuman as the head of the PRT was not allowed. And he didn't know her as a teammate or friend before then, so any claims about how he felt close to her because of what they went through together and how this closeness made him make decisions that weren't the most sound would be him lying and being manipulative. And he did find out they were lying to him about the human experimentation, so any claims that he only had a nagging doubt that he could never sit down and address due to lacking a free moment.... That would be him lying and being manipulative.)

So, in the original story we're shown a Legend that lies a LOT when you compare the lies shown versus the total amount shown. He's shown to lie easily and well. Now take that into consideration when thinking about his meeting with Amelia and wondering whether there's deliberate lies and manipulations.

It is pretty common to hold moral principles that you don't always live up to.

Or to deliberately not think about actions, both past and future, that are troublesome.

It's probably also why Amelia recognizes that she messed up by making that demand of Legend explicitly and in public - in private she may have been able to convince him, in public he's forced to state his moral principles which makes him commit to them and means that later action in violation of those principles would be obvious both to the witnesses and also to Legend himself.

Well, I did call Amelia awkward and blunt in a previous post and did say that she showed honest emotion.

Amelia is awkward and blunt. Versus. Legend is practiced, smooth and charismatic.
Amelia shows honest emotion. Versus. Legend lies.

Honestly though, I do not believe Legend would have helped her. If a deal was desired from the Protectorate or PRT's side then they've had ample opportunity to speak with either Amelia or Marquis.

From what I remember of Canon, it seems out of character for Battery to participate in this kind of elaborate setup. It seems more likely that Legend told Battery that since they were considering making her and Assault into Amelia's guardians, he'd like to make a low-key introduction and see how Amelia reacted. He might suggest that Battery shouldn't mention anything about a potential guardianship since it's not finalized/official and it's an emotionally sensitive issue. Battery would have reason to express (genuine) gratitude, and Legend could adjust approach on the guardianship issue based on how the interaction with Amelia went.

Remember that Legend didn't tell Battery he was involved with Cauldron even though she's a Cauldron cape. Even if he's doing something manipulative it doesn't mean that she's in on it.

I disagree.

Take a look at what Legend got Battery to agree to in her interlude. Him getting Battery to agree to "some" manipulation because it would be, according to him, better for the Protectorate in the long run. Especially...
  • If she knows that Assault would gain some measure of forgiveness for his recent escapades by acting as Amelia's parent, bodyguard and jailer.
  • If she knows responsibilities over Amelia may also earn some reprieve from frontline work, for both him and her.
  • If she knows she gets back her boyfriend, none the worse for wear.
  • If she knows she gets a potential transfer to a cushy post far from the main hurly-burly of major city cape scene.
  • If she was told it would be better for Amelia.
Then consider this:

A few steps to the sides there's a young heroine. Semi-familiar. No mask, brown hair, a dark costume with lines of neon blue.

Battery isn't wearing a mask. She's putting her identity on display. She's revealing who she is to everybody there. That is not something low key on Battery's part. That is not something minor on Battery's part. That is not something she can take back.

Also, I think the issue of the PRT and Dr Yamada manipulating Amelia has come up before. We're used to talking about manipulation as something that is done at a person's expense, against their interests. But I don't think that people are always self-serving when they take action with the hidden intent that it will make another person react in a specific way. If Battery sees that Amelia is stressed, and walks over to express gratitude in the hopes that it will make Amelia feel better, is that manipulative? Maybe. Does it mean that Battery is taking that action because she's expecting that it will make Amelia trust her more as a guardian figure? Not necessarily.

Battery wasn't wearing her mask. That is not a minor thing according to what we know. Her approaching Amelia without a mask? That's not something minor done just in the hope that it will make Amelia feel better.

Marquis is a highly manipulative person who is always thinking about how the way he interacts with people will benefit him long-term. Amelia thinks that way too. It's not normal.

No. It's not normal. It's a learned behavior (at least on Amelia's side) and Amelia isn't that good at it.
 
(He knew about Cauldron from the beginning of his career as the head of the Protectorate. He also knew from the beginning that Cauldron would expect him to divert attention away from them and grease the wheels for their top customers. He knew that Alexandria was Costa-Brown and that a parahuman as the head of the PRT was not allowed. And he didn't know her as a teammate or friend before then, so any claims about how he felt close to her because of what they went through together and how this closeness made him make decisions that weren't the most sound would be him lying and being manipulative. And he did find out they were lying to him about the human experimentation, so any claims that he only had a nagging doubt that he could never sit down and address due to lacking a free moment.... That would be him lying and being manipulative.)

So, in the original story we're shown a Legend that lies a LOT when you compare the lies shown versus the total amount shown. He's shown to lie easily and well. Now take that into consideration when thinking about his meeting with Amelia and wondering whether there's deliberate lies and manipulations.
Yes, absolutely Legend is capable of deep deception (and thank you for assembling all those examples from canon, it's helpful for refreshing my memory). My thought is that he's also doing a lot of self-deception and rationalization, that even if he was aware of things like Alexandria's civilian identity from the get-go, he was deliberately left out of the loop of some of their shadier activities, like the case 53s. He probably did use his duties as an excuse to not look too closely at any suspicions about those things for a while - then when he does find out he's too invested in supporting Cauldron that he doubles down on the lying in order to protect them. He's caught between knowing that it's wrong, wanting to think it was justified for the greater good, and wanting to think he was justified for having ignored it so long. So when he says something like "I shouldn't be deciding what justice is," he's absolutely being hypocritical but on some level I think he does believe it.

Or to deliberately not think about actions, both past and future, that are troublesome.
Yes precisely.

Battery wasn't wearing her mask. That is not a minor thing according to what we know. Her approaching Amelia without a mask? That's not something minor done just in the hope that it will make Amelia feel better.
It's not minor, it's a meaningful gesture of trust and vulnerability towards someone for whom you expect to be taking the role of a parent in the near future. It's the kind of thing you do to build a relationship with someone.

Take a look at what Legend got Battery to agree to in her interlude. Him getting Battery to agree to "some" manipulation because it would be, according to him, better for the Protectorate in the long run. Especially...
  • If she knows that Assault would gain some measure of forgiveness for his recent escapades by acting as Amelia's parent, bodyguard and jailer.
  • If she knows responsibilities over Amelia may also earn some reprieve from frontline work, for both him and her.
  • If she knows she gets back her boyfriend, none the worse for wear.
  • If she knows she gets a potential transfer to a cushy post far from the main hurly-burly of major city cape scene.
  • If she was told it would be better for Amelia.
If I understand correctly, the manipulation that Battery agreed to in her interlude was pretending that Assault wasn't Madcap. It's an extension of the entire practice of cape identities. It is a very different type of manipulation from telling a teenager a direct lie about having pulled in favours to become her guardian. Also notable - Battery agrees to concealing Madcap's new identity because it's going to be better for society despite the fact that the deal costs her personally. She's not going to be motivated by a cushier job. She might be motivated to make things easier for Ethan, but that sounds like the kind of motivation that would be used to convince her to take guardianship in the first place, not the kind of thing that would convince her to directly lie to and manipulate the teenager that she's expecting to be welcoming into her home (which is again, an entirely different level from concealing a cape's past from the general public).
 
False Alarm
So, I posted the next chapter... and then about an hour later realized about 15 different needles I need to thread over the coming 4-5 chapters and....
I'mma gonna need to sit back and look at things a bit more before I want to lock anything in.


Apologies for thems who read only for stuff to be taken down... but the more I think about it, the more I'm thinking the next couple chapters will take some decent planning to get right, and I probably need to write a few posts into the future, rather than just playing things one post at a time.

Sorry about that, may be some posting delays for this section of the story.
 
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