Without War to Guide Me [40k/Trek]

13g0guy1)u1)3 said:
Did none of these characters exist before sixth ed? That would make more sense. What characters were there before?
There were no named Necrons before 6th edition at all. The Necrons had no society or culture. Before 6th edition necrons did not talk, they could not talk. Before Matt Ward the Necrons were a singe uniform consciousness that fulfilled the will of the C'Tan much in the way the Tyranids served the Great Devourer. There was no communication with the Necrons of any kind.

The only two named entities were Nightbringer and The Deciever, and the only interactions we had with either of them are of the "You are so TOTALLY fucked" variety.
 
Todeswind said:
If I were to write about a Necron in the old cannon it would essentially be just outright "monster I cannot kill tries to murder me." And there is a limited number of directions to take that. The character (a) escapes (b) kills or (c) is killed by the monster.

Talking, interacting, actively shaping the Universe in ways that have a comprehensible narrative structure. Trazyn the infinite's collection of oddities, the Silent Kings quest to restore his people, Orikan's meddling with time, none of these are badd additions to the story of the game. Giving the Necrons a voice allows them to speak and interact with a protagonist, to lie to them, to betray them or just to ignore them.
To be honest, I dislike the new Necron characters. They're too human to be a race that apparently shattered their own gods (who could counter the chaos gods). I don't want to read about Trazyn being a sperg who collects limited edition humans in his basement. I don't want to read about them at all. I preferred when they were unknowable and they had barely any fluff, purely because it actually gave us the perception of everyone else, rather than going on about how awesome the Necron heroes were like they do in other codexes.

With Eldar, IoM, Tau, all of them get various heroes and they're all great and can do anything and whatever. With the Necron, you didn't get any of that. You got a metallic horde of robots that slaughter their way through whatever they face. I liked the horrifying mystery of it all. Now they're just robots with funny hats that do silly things.
 
SneakyGato said:
Thanks for continuing this. I very much enjoy your stories and i'm looking forward to the next update.Any idea of when you'll be able to write more?
As of next week my application for OCS will be finished, so I should have more free time to write.
 
Night_stalker said:
Nice, so you've applied to West Point, Annapolis, Colorado Springs, and Norwich?
Those are the Academies, OCS is for those who already have advanced degrees (officer boot camp).

Edit: For now if you wish to continue this line of discussion please take it to PM. We're off topic enough for the moment.
 
5
Reginald Barclay knew that he shouldn't be this close to the holo-decks, the temptation to go back and lose himself in one of his little worlds was still greater than it ought to have been. And he really did intend to keep from loosing himself in fantasy again – honest – but Data asked him to consult on the holo-program holding the Giant of Antiea. Reginald didn't often praise his own work, but he was very good at constructing holographic programs.

Reginald was a lonely man. Nobody called him "Broccoli" any more, well not to his face anyway, but he still never quite felt like he fit in. Geordie did his best to make him part of the group but the truth was that he wasn't quite part of things. He stuttered and slurred his words. He grew quiet when women spoke with him. Lanky and awkward, he never quite seemed to fit into his own skin.

Reginald tried to fit in. He went to meetings with Deanna Troi, he told her how he felt, but there was always that damn barrier that he couldn't get past – separating him from forging lasting relationships. How was someone like him supposed to be on even footing with someone like Commander Riker? The man oozed sexual charisma from every pore. Or Worf? The Klingon had no respect for anyone who was not up to his code of honor – something Reginald could not hope to be. Geordie was probably his best friend – if Reginald even had such a thing – and no matter how hard he tried he knew that Geordie's relationship with Data would be stronger than anything he could manage.

And Data wasn't even capable of emotion. How was he less charismatic than someone incapable of comprehending charisma?But there it was, all the same, Data had managed to woo more women than he. He was less romantic than a robot.

What did they have that he didn't?

No – If he was honest, Reginald knew what they had. They had respect – respect for doing important things. How could someone not love Data? The man had saved the lives of the crew a hundred times over. He'd sacrifice himself for them without blinking an eye simply because 'that was the most logical course of action.'

"More Vulcan than most Vulcans," He muttered to himself, nodding to the security guards as he passed the first check-point. Security was abnormally high. Shields separating the holo-decks from the rest of the ship were guarded by teams of three security officers. They were only armed with their phasers, but any obvious armament on the Enterprise was uncommon.

He smiled at the security officer and was rewarded with an irritated grunt from the guard for his effort. The man didn't even bother to glare at him, dismissively waving him along as though he hardly merited notice. Reginald was used to it.

But that was about to change. This was finally his big break, a chance to do something that for which his fellow crewmen would respect him. If he could find some way of breaking though to the Giant, his name would be in the history books. People would want talk to him – maybe even women – maybe even Troi.

He bit his lip, thinking about Troi as security rifled through his bag – checking it's contents, two padds and some tools. Deanna had been especially kind to him. She was a beautiful, caring woman. He had developed feelings for her - strong feelings. The sort of feelings you really don't want to be having about a telepath. She never looked down on him. She never made him feel small.

He really liked her. And maybe, just maybe, if he did something important enough she would see him as a man. Maybe he would do something big enough for him to seem as wonderful as Riker.

He could dream.

As he passed the third barrier Reginald had a horrible thought. What if he couldn't help? What if they blamed him for the failure of the project? That would be a convenient way of dealing it, bring in a patsy who could take the fall. His heart beat a mile a minute as he imagined a court martial for his ineptitude.

"No," He reminded himself. "Data wouldn't do that to me – neither would Geordie."

He knew it was true, but his palms still sweat all the same. Damn it, why couldn't he just ignore stupid thoughts like that? Other people did.

"Other people weren't Reginald 'Broccoli' Barclay though, are they?" He muttered to himself as he fed the cables from his padd to the holo-deck door, checking the current readings.

"Not bad, Data," He muttered to himself. "But not quite perfect either."

Data had been very precise in his re-creation of the Vulcan Archive's subterranean chamber. The temperature, lighting, physical items, and even the smells of the archive were being mimicked with a 4% margin of error. Not a mean feat for something he'd put together in a couple of hours.

Reginald could get that up to a 2% margin of error. He smiled, highly pleased with himself. Data was highly efficient but as an android he lacked certain qualities necessary in writing the proper holo-program. He couldn't quite get the ambient noises and sensations of a place correct – he couldn't feel out the space.

It would only take a matter of - Reginald paused, examining the radiation readings within the program. "That's not supposed to happen."

Reginald checked the rad-scrubbers to make sure that nothing was malfunctioning but be damned, there it was again. There was a concentrated source of radiation coming from within the chamber – some sort of a fission emission coming from within the chamber. A rapid reaction of concentrated microwave fission, but that could only mean – Reginald dropped his Padd and ran towards the security officers screaming, "It's a bomb!"

He hardly had time to slap his hands over his ears before a concussive wave of holo-deck door fragments and melted bulkhead burst forth, thick smoke poring down the corridor. Shrill klaxons howled, warning that main power to the section had been cut. Dull red emergency lights automatically switched on as the primary illumination died, bathing the smoke-filled passageway in hellish light.

Barclay coughed, squinting through the smog as he dropped the the floor to be closer to fresh air. He crawled along the ground, edging towards the turbo-lift. He felt the floor shake as a massive yellow greave collided with the floor next to him, the foot of a titan. The Giant ignored him, running through the thick smoke as though it were not there. He charged towards the nearest trio of guards, disabling them with laughable ease.

Barclay winced in sympathetic agony as he watched the Giant twist Bolian man's arm the wrong direction, crushing the bone and pulping the arm. He tore the Bolian man's phaser from him and fired it at the other two security officers, rendering a Vulcan and an Andorian inert.

The Giant stared at him with wild, crazy eyes the phaser held in his massive fingers like a child's plaything. Reginald was too terrifed to run as the Giant picked him up, lifting him by the shirt collar and lifting him so high that his feet dangled in the air. Barclay whimpered as the Giant sniffed him twice, tilting it's head in confusion. "Du bist nec aliena – nec xenos."

"Oh god," Barclay felt hot tears in his eyes. "Please don't kill me. Please don't hurt me. I just wanted to help."

The creature sighed in apparent exasperation, dropping him to the floor. "Ich werde nec vyksta morte."

It was not till the giant strode off into the thick smoke that Barclay reconciled himself to the fact that he was not going to die. For once in his miserable life, Barclay was thrilled to be unremarkable. Barclay tapped his comm-badge, "Barclay to – well anyone – can anyone hear me?"

"Status reportLt. Commander Barclay," The worried voice of Commander Riker replied nearly instantly.

"Sir," Barclay wandered though the smoke. He was following the Giant, though God alone knew why. "The Giant has escaped. He incapacitated the guards – they need a doctor, fast. Three to beam directly to sick bay."

"Are you alright Lt. Commander?" Riker riker asked.

"Yes sir," Barclay stuttered. "But I couldn't stop the Giant – he's heading towards sector 3. You have to beam him to the brig."

Riker swore, "Barclay, I need you to listen to me. Our sensor readings for the sector are going wild because of whatever it was that he did. We can't get a lock on him. Worf is leading a team to you, but they're going to take time. I need you to stand near the wounded so we can get a lock on them. "

"Sir I don't think he's going to wait," Reginald shuddered as he moved closer, looking at the still sobbing Bolian with pity. He was very pleased to see pale blue light enveloping the three men.

"Is Data with you?" Riker's voice colored with concern. "Is he harmed?"

"I don't know sir," Reginald coughed as he fiddled with an emergency wall panel behind which would be breathing masks and survival gear. "Power is out to the deck. Has he contacted you?"

"Communications are misbehaving due to power fluctuations, you are the only one on that deck we've managed to hail so far." The Commander grew deadly serious. "Lt. Commander – what direction did you say the Giant was heading in?"

"He was heading starboard towards the – oh no, he was heading towards the school!" Reginald wrapped the mask around his face, grabbing the emergency cutting torch from the wall as he went. It was an engineering tool intended to break open doors in a crisis but he suspected it would work on the Giant's armor just as well.

"No, no, no, no," Barclay muttered to himself. "What are you doing Reg? What are you thinking? That guy is the size of a house."

It was stupid – monumentally so – to believe that he could do anything to harm the Giant if it came down to it. But if he could delay it for even a couple of seconds that might be enough for the power to come back on and for someone to trap him with shields – time for Worf to come.

Cowardice be damned, he wouldn't let the Giant harm children.

The Giant had simply run roughshod through the ship's security personnel. Broken, bleeding and stunned men lined the corridors heading towards the school. Stunned – it seemed that the Giant did not know how to switch his stolen weapon's settings. Small mercies were still a blessing.

His eyes still stinging from the smoke, Reginald ran towards the massive yellow figure as it pried open the school room doors.

He could hear the children's confused and frightened voices as well as the soothing voice of Miss Kyle shouting, "It will be alright children – just file into the back room" over the din.

The Giant grunted in frustration as his fingers slipped, slamming his arm between the pressurized doors. He struggled against the pneumatics, trying to get leverage with a single free hand.

Reginald activated the cutting torch, waving it around to get the Giant's attention. "Hey! Hey you! Over here. Look over here."

The Giant's eyes focused on the flame, his free hand batting at Reginald in frustration as the federation officer jabbed blue flames towards the behemoth. The flames sparked and scorched the man's armor-doing little visible damage but irritating him immensely.

"Th-that's right y-you bully," Reginald's stutter accompanied the wave of terror he felt as the Giant yanked his arm from the door and strode towards him with deliberated menace. "Follow me!"

Dropping the still lit torch, Reginald cut and ran in the opposite direction. His heard beat a million miles a minute as he heard the Giant's lightning fast footfalls behind him – quicker than he could hope to outrun.

Luckily he wasn't going far. Reginald knew the ships internals inside and out, giving him a unique perspective of the Terrain that the Giant couldn't hope to match.

Ducking down a jefferies tube as the Giant grabbed for him, shoving his hand through the wall in fury. Sparks showered down from shattered circuitry as the man tore his gauntleted fist from the wall and reached down the tube, struggling to reach him.

"No-not so b-big now are you!" Reginald yelled as the scooted down the tube. "Catch me now – oh no!"

Reginald flinched as a gauntleted hand holding a stolen phaser poked down the tube, firing energy beams blindly into the passage. He tucked to the right, hiding behind a support strut as the phaser beams cut down the tube, the bright red hue of them a clear indication that the Giant had discovered alternate power settings.

He flinched as a beam bored a hole in the strut he was hiding behind, missing his big toe by centimeters. Feverishly tapping his comm-badge, Barclay stuttered into communicator, "Th-this is B-Barclay. I'm at the p-primary school. I n-need help."

"Acknowledged Lt. Commander," Replied the precise tones of the Android Data. "I will be there imminently."

Reginald did not even have time to thank him before the sound of tripolymer alloy colliding with ancient armor clanged it's way down the tube. There was the sound of struggle as Data's unconcerned retort of, "Two to beam up, contingency plan Data 3 Echo Charlie 9 commence," preceded the flashing blue light of a transporter.

Curious about the sudden silence Reginald hesitantly poked his head from the tube, looking to where the two men had been only moments ago. There, still frozen in the throes of battle, was the massive suit of yellow armor – noticeably bereft of an occupant. It's legs moved forwards once, some mental command still being processed by the armor's internal computers before it fell to the ground – dead.

Reginald tapped it nervously with his toe before calling up to the bridge. "Barclay to Riker – can you hear me."

"This is Commander Riker," The furious voice of the first officer replied. "Reginald just what the hell is going on down there?"

"Data transported the Giant away – I don't know where," Reginald flinched as the armor's fingers pulsed. "It's safe to send repair crews when you can."

"Oh you've got to be kidding me." Riker's sighed in exasperation. "Data why?"

"You found him?" Reginald asked, worried for the Lt. Commander.


"Oh I found them both alright," Riker whistled, "Ten kilometers off the port nacelle."
 
...Even the smallest mouse can defeat the largest lion with the right motivation.
 
They just keep teleporting him out of shit don't they.
First up to the Enterprise, and yanking stuff out of his head without realizing it.
Now they beam him out of armor that he's cybernetically attached to.

What next, they port him out of his own damn skin?
 
Not bad Barclay, not bad at all.

Might even be enough to get people to quit calling you that HORRIBLE nickname to your back or face.
 
6
Theoretically first contact situations were supposed to be enacted without indulging in ego, in spite of whatever ills might beset you. The delicacy of contacting a new sentient species was invariably dangerous – potentially fatally so – meaning that any crew agreeing to make first contact with a new species tacitly acknowledged the very real possibility one or more crewmen may well die in the name of the federation. Being in Starfleet came at a price, and it was not a slight one.

The burden of leadership in these situations meant that one was forced to do what was right rather than what one wished to do. For example, Will Riker very much wished that he had given the order to destroy the Giant with the ship's main phaser banks rather than recovering and restraining the giant. It would not have been the diplomatically appropriate solution or his duty as a Starfleet officer, but it would have been deeply satisfying.

Will Riker hated the Giant of Antiea as much as he could recall hating any man. Five – the giant had killed five crewmen and had done his damnedest to kill another fifty, most of whom hadn't even been part of security. It was pure chance that he hadn't killed a room full of elementary school students.

So it was that when Lieutenant Worf voiced his concerns, William found himself agreeing with his Klingon counterpart.

"I do not understand why we are allowing it to continue to live." The Klingon smashed his hand on the table. "The very notion that it continues to breathe is offensive after the carnage it caused."

"Mr. Worf – this is a first contact situation. One that we have grossly misjudged." Captain Picard steepled his fingers in thought as he leaned back in his chair. "We assumed – incorrectly – that Mr. Data's deception would be sufficient to fool the Giant. We detained a sentient against his will and he reacted to that situation with fear and anger. I am to blame for this – not he."

"With respect Captain, might you be allowing your interest in the distant past to cloud your judgment for the present? Thisthing is a cold blooded killer without remorse. It would skin you as soon as look at you." The Klingon growled. "You can't negotiate with a rabid dog."

"I wonder, Mr. Worf, if the Federation might not have said the same about the Klingons not so long ago?" The Captain sighed. "The birthing pains of forging ties with a new species – especially one who represents as unique and strange of an opportunity as the Giant does – must be endured. If the Federation declared every species who killed someone in a first contact situation irredeemably anathema to us, there would be precious few sentient beings in the Federation."

"Fewer still if the Giant has his will." Lt. Worf growled. "He fights without honor, attacking those without weapons to defend themselves – killing without mercy."

"Did he not allow Lt. Barclay to pass by him unmolested?" The Captain asked. "His report seemed to indicate that the Giant had every chance to harm to the Lieutenant but the Giant just walked past."

"The Giant's… aggression was primarily directed at non-humans." Worf's lip curled, exposing fang. "The human officers were attacked for trying to protect the wounded or acting aggressively to his person."

"Captain." William interjected, "I share a number of Mr. Worf's concerns. Every effort to communicate with him has been met with violent and unwarranted aggression. Even if we don't incarcerate him for his actions on this ship, I don't know how we can justify forcing a diplomatic engagement without considering it a wanton violation of the Prime Directive."

"We woke him up Will." Deanna replied. "We're responsible for everything that's happened to him since. This isn't some species we can just leave alone and give time to mature – he has no home upon which we might drop him off. He's an orphaned son of a dead society older than the Federation by countless ages. There likely isn't a society left for us to affect."

"But this is still a thinking being." Will retorted. "He has free will, the will to choose what happens to him, and nothing he's done indicates that he would chose to remain with us."

"Actually, that might not be precisely accurate." LCDR LaForge said, furrowing his brow. "When we beamed the Giant up to the ship we ran a standard pattern recognition routine to detect and transfer him up to the holodeck. We didn't account for a number of rare atomic particles used in the Giant's cyborg components, specifically those in his brain. The rare elements were left behind, affecting functionality."

"Are you telling me that we lobotomized the man's brain?" Captain Picard said in horror.

"Not precisely Captain." The android Data replied. "He has a network integrated into his brain which would, in theory, allow him to continue operating after massive cerebral trauma or to modify cognitive function. Without the rare elements used in the cybernetics, the components misfired randomly – presumably defaulting him to a survival state. One can only speculate how complex his thoughts were, but it is reasonable to assume that his higher reasoning skills were deeply impaired."

"So he is a wounded and cornered animal – that makes him more dangerous, not less." Worf Growled.

"Yes, but it's an issue that we can hopefully fix. The cybernetics in the Giant were clearly designed by someone who indented for their technology to be easily repaired with more primitive tools than were involved in their fabrication. I think that a standard medical tricorder and hypospray could be used to restore what we undid." LCDR LaForge tapped his visor. "The implants in my head work on similar principles."

"I confess that I'm reluctant to expose a medical team to the potential dangers of the Giant in open surgery." Captain Picard chewed his lip. "Can he be sufficiently sedated to even try it?"

"I don't need to remove him from the brig Captain. Presumably I can program a remote hypospray to inject him with the necessary inoculation of nanomachines to restore his cybernetics. That's not our problem." Dr. Crusher sighed. "That's the least of our problems. Exposing him to the vacuum of space has activated some sort of willfully induced comatose state. His body has started secreting a viscous waxy oil that is hardening over his dermis, presumably to protect him from radiation."

"Tough bastards aren't they?" Joked Will.

"Tougher than you could imagine." Data nodded, immune as ever to the intended humor. "As you are aware, it took a full fifteen minutes for the Giant to be rendered unconscious. The Giant spent those fifteen minutes attempting to crush me. Though he was unable to do more than superficial harm to my exoskeleton, I do not believe that I would have been able to extricate myself from his grip under my own power. The doctor had to forcibly separate me from his interlocked arms with the aid of a muscle relaxant."

"You're telling me that the Giant managed to keep trying to murder you while he was in a coma?" Will chuckled at the sheer absurdity of it. "This guy is so ornery that he's even trying to kill people in his sleep."

"So it would seem." Captain Picard smiled sadly. "Dr. Crusher, it was not my intention to endanger this crew when I brought this man aboard. And yet I must burden you with the unfortunate task of ministering to our most 'ornery' guest."

"I've faced ornery patients before. Rage I can handle." Beverly sighed. "No, my problem is going to be having a recovering patient responsible for the majority of the other patients in sick bay or the morgue. There are going to be a lot of angry crewmen that we're not killing him outright."

"Their rage will have to be subordinate to their duties as members of the Federation." Picard's words slowed with deliberate intensity. "We cannot allow our passions to overwhelm what is right."

"Passions or no, I may not be able to fix him at all. It's hard enough to fix injuries in someone whose physiology has been studied for centuries but I've got less than two days of documentation on how to treat the Giant." Dr. Crusher bit her lip in agitation. "I'm largely operating blindly. But even I can see that if he doesn't wake up soon, his organs are going to collapse due to sheer stress. Not to put too fine a point on it, but he hasn't eaten since before the dinosaurs and he has about 0% body fat content. I can get intravenous nutrients going, but that's a stop gap at best. He needs to actually digest some solid food and his body has currently put the digestive process on hold."

"Can you wake him with a stimulant or something?" Will asked.

Beverly shook her head. "I've already tried all the cerebral resuscitation methods I dare. I don't feel confident enough in my knowledge of his chemistry or cybernetics to try anything stronger. I could end up damaging him even more than when we started this process."

"Captain, I've looked over the readings on the Giant's brain." Data intoned. "There are similarities between the cybernetics inducing the Giant's coma and known technologies used by telepathic species. It seems likely that the Giant's trance might be broken with the use of a telepath."

"Absolutely not." Will interjected before Deanna could offer to do some damn fool thing. "The last time the Counselor tried to make contact with the Giant's mind he used it as a way of attacking her. We can't assume that he won't do the same twice."

"No, we can not. But it is still our most viable option." Data replied. "The situation remains, if nothing is done to ameliorate the Giant's current condition he will die. Deanna is the most powerful non-Vulcan psychic to whom we have access. Vulcans appear to elicit excessive violence from the Giant. Logic dictates that it must be the Counselor."

"Will," Deanna put a comforting hand on his arm. "It's ok. I will be ok."

"Deanna, he had you in tears for hours." Will replied.

"Yes, but I've been sifting through the memories. Trying to piece them together in a way that makes sense." Deanna stared out the viewport at the stars. "It's like watching several movies at once. There is a lot of noise and motion that doesn't all seem to mesh together the right way. I think – I think it is worth trying if it means I can save a life. Enough people have died today Will. I have to try."

"I can modify a force field generator to specifically bind the giant." LCRD LaForge offered. "He shouldn't be able to break out of it."

"He should not have been able to break out of the Holodeck either." Lt. Worf asserted. "And yet he was more than capable of repurposing components of his armor into an explosive device."

"Well it's not like we could have removed the power supply from his armor without him noticing," The dark skinned head of Engineering shrugged. "And I honestly didn't even know that that sort of a power supply could be turned into an explosive. I've only even seen it used in theoretical mock ups for entire star ships."

"Indeed." Agreed the android. "However he no longer has the use of his armor. We have removed all power sources to ensure that they can't be activated remotely, and have moved them to a runabout off ship just to be doubly assured of their security. The relative threat he represents should be neutralized with the use of localized force fields, rendering him impotent."

"Having seen the man, I don't believe 'impotent' is necessarily the appropriate choice of words, Data." Dr. Crusher replied with a puckish smile. "But I would appreciate some additional security around him, for the Giant's protection as much as my own."

"I will see that the detail are all human." Worf replied in a voice of world-weary resignation. "If we are to try this foolishness again."

"Good," The Captain sighed. "Very well, you have your orders. Make it so."

Will chose to stay, even as the other officers filed out of the room. He took care to let the door shut behind the last of them before saying what had been on his mind for hours. "Captain, you know that even if we manage to heal the Giant, we're going to have to address the fact that he killed five people and assaulted an entire deck crew. That can't just be swept under the rug."

"Nor should it be." Picard replied. "But if it is true that we are responsible for his current mental state the one who will have to respond to the charges is I."

"Captain you can't be serious." Will blanched.

"I very much am." He walked away from will to the replicator, addressing the computer firmly. "Earl Grey, hot."

"Why? Why in God's name would you do that?" Will massaged his forehead with the palm of his head to address the sudden pain in his temple.

The Captain sipped his tea in thought before looking out the viewport. "Commander Riker, when the Borg took me and used me as their interlocutor I became the instrument of many deaths – Federation deaths- as a result of what was done to me. By no will of my own I was forced to do things that were – and still are – abhorrent to me. In our fumbling efforts to connect it would seem that we have undone this man's– this Giant of Antiea's – sanity. We robbed him of free will, took away choice."

"Sir…" Will's voice softened, recognizing the genuine hurt in the Captain's voice. "What we did is nothing like what the borg did to you."

"Are you so sure of that Commander?" The Captain raised his tea cup to his lips, looked at it, and set the cup back upon its saucer without drinking. "I fear that in our arrogance and haste we well many have done a greater disservice to the Giant than you realize. There is blood on his hands thanks to us – blood that we caused him to spill. I doubt the Giant will see me as any less of an antagonist for having made him a murderer than I see the Borg. No, I will not belittle him by claiming my innocence."

"But you are innocent. We are innocent. We had no way of knowing that transporting him would cause him harm." Will shook his head. "The odds of him having those elements within him – "

"The odds of his very existence are astronomical. For us to presume that a being older than written history would fit within the boundaries of our own limited understanding of the universe was foolish." Picard sighed, adjusting the front of his uniform. "Lieutenant Worf was correct. I allowed my eagerness to touch the past and connect with a living, breathing mystery cloud my judgment. Were I thinking I would have sent some sort of holographic transmitter to the planet rather than brining him up to the ship. I was just so thrilled to have the mystery of Antiea within my grasp."

"Captain." Will trailed off at the man's title, unsure what words of comfort to offer.

"Commander Riker, we will see this through to the end. We will see the Giant mended and I will not allow his actions resulting from my lack for foresight destroy a historical treasure." He fixed William with a steely gaze. "Is that understood?"

"Yes Captain." Will replied. "And Captain?"

"Yes Commander."

"For what it's worth. We don't blame you for what the borg made you do. Make sure that you're not using this as an opportunity to punish yourself for what the Federation wouldn't."

Picard's lips tightened as his eyes flashed in anger. "That will be all Commander."

"Yes Captain."


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The giant's chest heaved with each breath, a rumbling groan that felt like it shook the room. He didn't fit in the standard beds for patients, meaning that engineering had been forced to replicate an entirely new set up to ensure that the giant remained appropriately sedate and restrained. At Worf's insistence they'd added three redundant systems to the brig's shielding to restrain the occupant. Geordie had even tied it into the ship's main power rather than an internal system – the Giant wasn't going anywhere.

He almost looked peaceful.

"I do not like this." Spoke the taciturn Klingon. He was not in the room. They'd cleared the brig of all non-human security and limited themselves to only a minimal presence of medical crew presence, but Worf insisted upon being present via a surrogate hologram projector. An ethereal human shape spoke with the man's voice, keenly observing the proceedings from where he stood on the holodeck six floors down. There was more worry in his voice than Beverly suspected he would have liked, an anger tinged with an edge of fear to it. "It would be better to neutralize this threat before he has the opportunity to do greater harm to this ship."

"Worf, we can't kill everything we meet just because it's dangerous." Beverly replied, though she found a part of herself agreeing with the Klingon she was embarrassed to admit wasn't exactly small. "When he killed those people he wasn't in his right mind. We made this man a killer."

"He is a warrior." Worf replied, his avatar's expression doing a poor imitation of the Klingon's scowling frustration. "It was doubtlessly not the first time he killed."

"Killed perhaps, in war – but some of the people he hurt were civilians. And we rendered him unable to make another choice." The doctor shuddered, examining her patient through the shimmering energy of the force-field. "Can you even imagine how terrible that would be? To wake up and discover that you murdered innocents? We're going to have to tell that man that his body wasn't his own, that his thoughts were beyond him."

Worf paused, mulling over the idea. "To be robbed of your honor would be a most grievous insult in Klingon culture. I would be – angry – to say the least, were it to be inflicted upon me." His avatar shook its head. "But that changes nothing, to rob a man of his honor is to give him cause to seek your death. It does not matter if we face a warriors righteous vengeance or a murderer's callout rage, this will end in blood."

"Your opinion is noted Worf." Beverly replied curtly, reaching over to the man's holo-projector. "But I need to focus on the needs of my patient at the moment."

"You wish for me to leave?" Worf's irritation was visceral.

"You're welcome to keep watching but I need to have the space to think, yes." Beverly replied, depressing the button on its side – allowing Worf to watch but dismissing his avatar. She turned from the evaporating hologram and faced the giant yet again.

Nobody would call him handsome, rugged certainly, but not handsome. His face and body were badly scarred. There was barely a scrap of skin that wasn't marked with some sort of scar or blemish earned through some type of pain. Beverly couldn't be sure how old the man was, not entirely, he'd had so much modification done to his body that she wasn't certain how much of his genetic structure even began to resemble what his species had originally been.

The Federation ban on genetic research following WWIII and the genetically modified men and women of Sung's brood had all but killed the field of human genetic alteration. There were pockets of society which delved into such things, fringe societies operating outside the jurisdiction of the Federation, but the Federation itself limited research into the creation of "better" humans to the purely theoretical. Khan's later re-emergence to harry the celebrated Captain Kirk had done little to improve Federation opinions on the subject of human genetic modification.

Clearly the society who'd produced the giant shared no similar stigma upon the modification of their basic genetic code. She'd identified no fewer than ten organs that seemed to have been grown externally to the man's body and later implanted into their host. A redundant heart, a lung to filter harmful toxins, and various other redundancies effectively made the man impossible to kill short of decapitation or total disintegration. He was a marvel of medical science – a Frankenstein's monster from the far distant past, complete with metal protrusions jutting out from either side of his neck where the helmet had apparently interfaced with the man's spine.

Under other circumstances Beverly might have been excited to study the man, but she found herself unwilling to take joy in the scans of the man's body. She had too many coroners' reports going across her desk. Whatever else this man might have been, he was a murderer. He was a murderer whose crimes were due to a mental deficiency beyond his control, but that made his victims no less dead.

If Beverly was being honest, a small part of her wasn't sure if she even wanted to heal the Giant. Perhaps it would be better to just let the creature stay in his slumber forever. But as a healer, it was her sacred duty to tend to the sick and do no harm. He was in her care and she would make him well if it was within her power to do so. Life was life – there was always value in protecting it, even if the ones she saved couldn't see it. The Giant wouldn't be the first enemy soldier she'd treated.

He'd done bad things. Terrible things, but she was his Doctor. Until that stopped there wasn't anything that would stop her from doing her duty, even if she found it hard not to hate him. The tricorder in her hand felt unusually heavy as she monitored the man's vital signs.

It had been difficult to configure treatment to repair the damages done to the man's cybernetic interfaces. Even with a supply of the necessary rare elements, one needed to insert the correct portions of the precise element in the exact locations within the complex interlacing of cybernetics to ensure that no greater harm was done to the Giant than had already been inflicted upon him. Fortunately for the Giant, Data was an expert on the subject. Though she knew that the Android had no true emotions, there was an unmistakable sense of longing in how the Lieutenant Commander had fretted over making sure that he was able to ensure proper functionality of the man's hardware without preventing his higher brain functions and emotional centers from operating at optimal efficiency.

It had been a slow process by design, fearing that they might trigger some sort of failsafe or involuntary response from the patient. She'd spent the time going over the man's medical scans in depth, analyzing and re-analyzing the man's vials to understand him better. The Giant was old. Not just in the sense of his timeless incarceration within the stasis chamber of the pillar, he'd already been an old man before entering the pillar. He looked no older than forty, perhaps fifty considering his salt and pepper hair, but her guess was that eighty or ninety was closer to the mark. Hopefully she looked half that good at his age.

She'd happily do without the scars though. The Giant had not lived a happy life. There were so many scars and burns across the man's flesh that she was hard pressed to even parse out which scars corresponded to which injury. He'd suffered several recent fractures unrelated to his time on their ship, cracking though not breaking the thick, interlocking bone-like ceramic plates protecting his organs. The man bore tattoos across his chest and parts of his back, curious angular script written in verse beneath the images of a black fist and a two headed bird. Beverly paused, something about the script seeming oddly familiar to her.

Beverly tapped the insignia on her chest twice, "Computer, run a translation program on the man's tattoos. Search early Earth languages, German."

The computer's droning female retort chimed in reply. "Partial translation of symbols managed. Similarity to known Earth linguistic patterns 20%."

"Try adding Latin, French, English, Spanish." Beverly noted, the jagged script seeming increasingly familiar to her the more she squinted her eyes.

"Similarity 45%." The computer replied.

"Computer run it through all known languages." Beverly replied.

"75% similarity to symbols and grammar present in known languages of existing sentient species." The computer replied.

"How many are human?" The doctor asked, feeling a jolt of electricity up her spine as a wild thought hit her.

"60% similarity to earth based linguistics." Replied the computer.

"Is it sufficient to approximate what it means?" Beverly asked.

"Negative." Replied the ship's computer. "Crucial elements of grammar and syntax do not correspond to known linguistic patterns. Further information is required."

That was unusual to say the least. Alien languages tended to be, for lack of a better word, alien. For the giant to have even partial linguistic similarly indicated linguistic cross pollination. Which was impossible. Or at least which ought to have been impossible… yet there it was.

Yet another mystery from the pillar.

"You're an odd one." Beverly pushed back a lock of crimson hair from her face as she adjusted her equipment, fretting over the readouts. The element appeared to have been properly re-integrated into the man's neural network. Appeared being the key word. There would really be no way to know until Deanna had her crack at him.

Beverly tapped her comm badge, "Beverly to Deanna."

"Yes Doctor?" Replied the ship's counselor.

"I'm ready when you are." Replied Beverly.

"I don't know if I'll ever be ready." Replied the counselor's voice as the doors to the brig opened, allowing her to pass the cadre of phaser rifle armed security personnel.

"Deanna, have you just been waiting outside the brig all day?" Beverly's face scrunched up in worry.

"Yes," The half-betazoid replied. "I don't think that I was going to be of much use for anything else today. I'd be too distracted to be of much use for any of my other patients."

"Other patients?" Beverly smiled. "Putting the cart before the horse aren't we?"

"Possibly." Deanna replied. "But I find that it's best to think of a damaged mind as a mind in need. Even a mind that wishes me ill. It makes it easier to help that person find their calm."

"So what do we do?" Beverly asked.

"I stand here and reach out to his mind, and if it works he wakes up." Deanna replied, the worry in her voice leaking through.

"What can I do to help Deanna?" Beverly asked.

"You could stay and hold my hand." Deanna replied.

"Will that improve the psychic connection?"

"No, but it will help me be less scared."

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HOLY SHIT, TODAY IS MY BIRTHDAY AND I JUST CHECKED THIS THREAD YESTERDAY!!!

Thank you todeswind, I'm gonna enjoy rereading the entire fic to refresh my memory :D
 
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Deanna's second attempt to probe the Giant's mind was less chaotic than the first. The Giant's mind scape was orderly, structured, and barren where previously it had been nightmarish and chaotic. She was in a great urban sprawl, larger than any she'd ever seen. Towering gothic spires and morbid statues stretched out as far as the eye could see. It was a mess of smog and industry, covered in the skeletal remains of humanoids. Bones had been turned to ornamentation in every possible nook and cranny, gilded symbols of eagles intermingling with carved scripts of alien origin along their macabre art.

Deanna was surprised, she hadn't expected the man's mental defenses to be this elaborate. He wasn't a telepath, so his mind must have been especially structured for his subconscious to be able to manifest a defense this elaborate. His subconscious had manifested a literal walled city, and endless metropolis full of defenses and guards looking for any intruder that might stray from the single path through it. Most telepaths had developed some sort of abstract defenses to keep out an intruder, some of the more structured non-telepaths were capable of similar constructs. But they were usually limited to crude walls and doors, not entire urban fortress worlds. Certainly not on a non-telepath, and the Giant was most decidedly not a telepath.

The training required to manifest defenses this elaborate must have been exhaustive. The closest she'd seen were from Betazoid monks who'd dedicated their entire lives to honing their minds. This was something else entirely.

She was walking along a long path, wider than any road she'd ever seen, surrounded by the ghostly images of penitent worshippers traveling on what could only be a pilgrimage. She walked among the translucent fragments of memory, following them as the chanted in the harsh tones of the Giant's language - cruel whispers intermingling into a dull roar of worship.

Armored Giants like the one whose mind she walked within stood along the parapets carrying all manner of cruel looking weapons, watching her with dispassionate eyes. They made no overtly violent actions, but she was certain that if she were to stray from the trail or to attempt any sort of aggressive action she would be forcefully removed from the Giant's mind.

She couldn't see any unity between the phantoms walking along the path. Even as dull whispers of the men and women they'd once been Deanna could tell that no two men had come from the same place. Some could only charitably be called humanoid, so twisted and modified were their forms. A man who wouldn't have been out of place among the borg self flagellated his phantom limbs with the rusty cables that had replaced the digits on his hands, gleefully flensing the flesh from his arms and back.

It was a carnival of twisted flesh and desperate madmen, all marching beneath the banner of a great, two-headed bird. They made Deanna's stomach churn, but she could sense that these images were not intended to be unnerving. Though she could only sense the merest fragment of the man's mind, she could tell that these were peaceful images for the Giant. Things to soothe his troubled heart.

This place was important to him. These people, followers of a common cause.

They were marching towards a great cathedral, large as a starship. It's steeple seemed to pierce the very heavens themselves. It was at the gates of the Cathedral that Deanna met her first impediment. In the center of the insubstantial men was a man holding a book. He was an old man, hunched and covered in old scars. He regarded her with a cool, keen interest, speaking in the language of the Giants.

"I'm sorry." Deanna replied. "I don't understand you."

The man arched his brow and rubbed his chin, considering the matter before reaching out to touch her chest. Deanna felt a wave of cold run through her as he did so, a curious tickle of new knowledge nagging at the back of her head. The man spoke again – this time his meaning clear as day.

"You do not belong witch. Leave and never return else this I will crush you." The pressure of the man's finger against her breast was pointed, a sheer lance of will focused against her. Deanna just smiled back, politely removing the man's hand and patting the back of it.

"That won't be necessary, I mean you no harm." The man seemed confused by how easily she'd moved it. "My name is Deanna. What's yours?"

"I do not associate with witches." The man growled.

"Neither do I." Deanna replied, letting her good will seep into her words. Something told her that the Giant's mental defenses were poorly constructed to repel positive emotions. Few psychic defenses were. By their very nature aggressive psychic projections weren't accustomed to anything other than the malice and defensiveness that had been used to spawn them. "I'm not a witch. I'm just a woman – the ship's counselor for the Enterprise."

The Armored giants along the parapets lifted their weapons, moving from dispassionate interest to active aggression faster than Deanna could blink. She ignored them – they were just illusions, and they could be encouraged to go back to inaction.

"This…. This is a trick…." The man replied, another lash of hatred emanating from the construct. This time paired with a series of horrific images. Deanna was made to feel like she was being badly burned, her hands blistering and bubbling even as she looked at where she touched the construct.

She winced, reminding herself that the pain was just an illusion. It was merely a projection of spite from the Giant's mind. While he could hurt her, he could only hurt her as much as she allowed the psychic damage to divert her from her purpose. She pushed back with her mind, countering the images of burning flesh with those from her own mind. "I can show you things too. Good things – kind things. Friends, family, love – things more powerful that the anger you feel right now."

Deanna pushed back with her mind, sending him flashes of happy moments on the Enterprise. Laughing with Beverly as they worked out together. Lazing about in Data's quarters and watching him pain as she stroked his cat, spot, in her lap. Eating sumptuous chocolate mousse in Ten Forward. She countered the hate and pain and malice with as much love and concern for the Giant's wellbeing as she could force upon the construct.

The Giants along the parapets faltered, looking at each other and muttering in the language of the Giants. Some even lowered their weapons, looking at her with a wistful expression, hopeful even.

The construct stood stock-still, confused by what was happening. It shuddered, trying to articulate a biting response as Deanna leaned in and hugged the construct. The wizened, angry man flinched at the contact – seemingly confused by the action before hugging her back. The construct's bony arms wrapped around her his wizened face contorted into a smile as he nuzzled her cheek. It was the expression of someone long starved for human contact who hadn't even realized he was lonely.

The Giants along the parapets lowered their weapons.

With an expression of contentment, the old man faded into nothingness – his weight against her disappearing as he smiled. His book fell to the ground with a clatter and Deanna picked it up, thumbing through its pages – hoping for a clue of where to go next given that the cathedral doors hand no apparent handle or method of entry.

The book was empty, except for a single cryptic phrase. "Those who belong already have the key, within."

What key though? And within what? Deanna tried shaking the book, hoping that here might be a simple way of dislodging a key from the book's spine. That having failed she walked the courtyard, running her fingers along the wall of the cathedral, looking for some sort of indication for what she needed to do next.

She looked up to the Giants, wondering if they were capable of speech as an odd thought hit her. If the defenses were designed to counter aggression, perhaps the methods for entering the Cathedral were designed to be sort that would only occur to someone who wasn't forcing their way into the Giant's mind. How did you enter a house you were invited to enter?

You knocked.

Deanna reached out to the towering doors of the Cathedral and rapped twice on the doors. Her gentle rap echoed with a seemingly impossible volume, the sheer surface of stone splitting down the middle where she'd touched the rock face and swinging inward to allow her entry. She strode in gently, passing wooden pews and countless candles floating through the air – levitating without any apparent mechanism to lift them.

There was a sound of music in the air. A lilting sound of organ music that was clean and pure. She could feel the faith behind it, there was a purity of belief to it. It was the sort of conviction that lay in the hearts of the true believers. She let it wash over her, closing her eyes and holding out her arms to just bask in the moment. This was a place of hope and conviction, if she respected it and embraced it – faith could do her no harm. Deanna did not have to believe in this man's god to respect the man's principles. She knelt before a great statue of an armored man with a stern and naturally unsmiling face and a shock of short cropped hair holding a colossal blade with serrated teeth. She wasn't sure precisely who the towering man was, but given his placement within the room he was in a place of great respect within the Giant's mind and heart.

She reached out to one of the little candles and lit it, placing it at the base of the statue – leaning in to read the inscription on the statue's base. "Rogal Dorn, the Vigiliant. Praetoran of Terra. The Unyielding One."

Her lip quirked, as she looked him from head to foot. "Yes, you do look rather unyielding."

"He is my father, after a fashion." Rumbled a deep voice from behind her. Deanna turned, standing up to come face to face with the Giant where he sat in one of the pews. Even when he was seated Deanna had to crane her neck a bit to make eye contact.

"He's very handsome." Deanna replied.

The Giant laughed, a dark rumbling tone that reminded Deanna of Thunder. "I very much suspect that he never once worried about his own vanity."

"Handsome men rarely need to." Deanna held out her hand. "It's good to finally talk."

"I have little to say to a witch." Replied the Giant.

"What is this obsession with witchcraft? I'm just a person like you." Deanna smiled, lowering her hand when she realized that the giant had no intention of shaking it.

"You are in my mind without invitation. You are a witch." The Giant replied.

"Perhaps we should start off with names." Stifling her disappointment, Deanna made sure to lace her words with her genuine feelings of care. "My name is Deanna Troi. I am a counselor onboard the USS Enterprise from the United Federation of Planets."

"I have no name for you witch." The Giant replied. "Kill me or leave me to my slumber, I have no time for your mind games or riddles."

"I only want to help you. You're in a coma, you were wounded by the process of waking you from the pillar. It damaged your mind, we took you up to our ship and you reacted poorly. We've healed your body but I need your help to wake you." Deanna waved around the room. "This, all of this, is just an illusion. You are sleeping. Unless you want to spend the rest of your life alone in this dream, I need your help to wake you."

The Giant glared, saying nothing in response. He ran the fingers of his right hand across his left, tracing the lines of deep scars along their meat. His fingers had been ritually scarified, a ritual important enough to him that he kept the scars in the illusionary image of himself within his mind's eye.

"I know that you're angry. I would be too. Things are confusing. You woke up surrounded by strangers and then things stopped making sense entirely. I suspect that you started seeing visions of horrible things, things that you had to fight. You were wounded – your mind was deeply damaged. But that's over now. You're safe. You are healed." Deanna held up her hands, palms up.

"Devils appear to us in those forms which seem most pleasing, so that they might entice us to give our souls to them willingly." The Giant replied, lowering his hood. His mental image of his own face, unblemished by the horrible wounds upon his actual flesh, was that of a handsome man with a jaw too wide to seem entirely human. "What price would you have me pay for this 'liberation' from my slumber? What vengeance will you exact upon me for those I cut down, for though I recall not their names or faces I know that I slew those who stood before me."

"You were incapacitated, incapable of deciding right from wrong." Deanna shook her head. "We are to blame for your madness, and what came after that madness. There is nothing to feel guilty about."

"Guilt is the domain of the unrighteous." The Giant found Deanna's implications greatly amusing. "They were fools for standing before me, and you are a fool for allowing me to live."

"We have much to learn from you." Deanna disagreed. "And we are not so cowardly as to hurt a wounded man in his bed. Not when we have so much to learn about the people who came before."

"You speak of me as though I were a relic of distant memory." The Giant replied, a sad comprehension entering his tone. "For how long have I slumbered?"

"We don't really know. Our history for anything older than half a million years is largely speculative and your life support system has been keeping you for what could be millions or even billions of years longer than that." Deanna shook her head. "I'm sorry to be the one to tell you this, but as far as we know you are the last of your people."

There was a brief, pregnant moment of silence before the Giant replied in a voice of long suffering. "That is a lie. The Empire is eternal."

"Don't take my word for it. Let me help you wake up and you can see for yourself." Deanna replied. "If I'm lying then you can prove me wrong and get the satisfaction of having done so. If I'm misinformed you can prove me wrong and we'll happily help you meet your people. If I'm right then you can help us learn from a society that can truly become Eternal by teaching us to be like it. But if you don't come, and you stay here, you'll drive yourself mad wondering if what I say is true."

"I could crush you Deanna." The Giant replied. "We are within my mind. I could show you things that would shatter you."

"And then I would be dead or mad, and you would still be trapped in your own mind wondering if what I told you was truth or a lie." The ships counselor replied, this was not the first patient to have threatened her. The stronger and more brutal a man was, the more vulnerable he often was to his inner demons. "So, you can posture and threaten, or you can allow me to help you."

"I despise you witch." The Giant growled.

"And you're welcome to." Deanna replied, holding out her hand to the Giant. "I'll keep helping you heal in the meanwhile. You're my patient, your health and wellbeing are more important to me than my popularity."

The Giant eyed her hand warily.

"Do you prefer to be unconscious and at the mercy of whatever a witch might please to do with you?" Deanna chuckled, rolling her eyes at the Giant's continued obstinacy.

The giant clasped her hand in his own, dinner plate sized hands wrapping around delicate porcelain flesh. He growled what might have been an assent as Deanna cupped his fist in her other hand, closing her eyes and focusing on the Giant's mind as a whole. She impressed upon it her awareness of the space around them both, subtly making the Giant aware of the real world beyond the dream city. The cathedral around them began to fade, shimmering into an endless void of white. She continued to make that connection, pumping positive feelings towards the Giant as she did so.

The Giant's expression showed no signs that he'd noticed, apparently in no mood to allow even the remotest scrap of happiness to influence his decision making. Deanna spoke as the white enveloped them both. "I'm going to count down. When I hit one we will both wake up, rested and aware of our bodies."

Though she could no longer see him she could still feel the pressure of the giant's hand.

"Five."

Deanna wondered what they would do with the Giant once he awoke. Would he be hungry? Thirsty? What did he even eat?

"Four."

She felt briefly guilty at having helped the giant, given how many of his victims were her friends. But two wrongs wouldn't make a right, they wouldn't bring back her friends.

"Three"

She felt a feeling of longing and loss that was not her own as Giant lost control of the illusion, his subconscious becoming conscious thought.

"Two"

And his hate. God but this man had hate in his heart.

"One."

And the giant finally woke up, his eyes burning pits of hatred as he stared at Deanna across the brig. "Malificar."
 
Wow, this hit a spot I didn't even know I had. I'm really eager to see where you take this because there's so much potential for interesting culture clashes and introspective moments. I like how every character feels real and seems to be genuine in their motives, regardless of what they stand for. There was never a moment I thought 'this seems like shaky justification'.

I hope our Marine eventually gets named and finds some place for himself. I can't help but like him already, even if he spent about 70% of his time being psychotic. I foresee a lot of sadness in his future, considering he lost just about everyone he knew and cared for, along with the humanity he grew up with. Definitely watched.

My one critique would be that the syntax seems funny sometimes? Like, there are capitals where there shouldn't be or you don't stop speech with a comma or a period when transitioning into narration. There could also be a few more commas in sentences, but it doesn't largely detract from the overall work.

Good work and keep going :D
 
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