Welcome to Anime, Try Avoiding Cliché Take Two [FATE RPG/Original Quest]
- Thread starter shadenight123
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- Original
- Location
- England
"Oh boy oh boy, I can't wait to be evil today-" Notices people are around. "Ahem. Excuse me while I dress myself."
I can get behind this. Changing my vote to this.
- Location
- Portland
[X] Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
Ambit
Help me
- Location
- Third Circle of Hell
[X] Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
[X] The Overlord groggily wakes up, punches Seraphima on the head for having woken her up, then goes back to sleep.
[X] NOT Wake up while this song blare out:
[X] NOT Alteration: Title - The Evil Overlord's Obligatory Evils
[X] NOT Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor.
[X] NOT Wake up while this song blare out:
[X] NOT Alteration: Title - The Evil Overlord's Obligatory Evils
[X] NOT Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor.
- Location
- Somewhere
[X] Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
Madou Sutegobana
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- Location
- Twin Realms Mandala
[X] Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor.
-[X] Instead of the proposed image, I prefer an armor that fits the name Seraphima, with an angelic look to it.
[X] NOT Alteration: Title - The Evil Overlord's Obligatory Evils
Sorry, I too believe we should hold off on retitling.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
I was going to vote this anyways, but since someone beat me to it, I decided to go along with most of their vote.
[X] NOT Wake up while this song blare out:
All of a sudden, the gesture commands on my phone have completely changed the way they interpret my screen touches into zoom in/out and text highlighting. I suspect an "update", and if I hadn't gone through the same thing with Windows previously, I'd assume a virus.
However it makes it very difficult to copy and paste posts now!
Edit: Cleaned up some of the Editing done from the vote I plagerized borrowed.
-[X] Instead of the proposed image, I prefer an armor that fits the name Seraphima, with an angelic look to it.
[X] NOT Alteration: Title - The Evil Overlord's Obligatory Evils
Sorry, I too believe we should hold off on retitling.
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
I was going to vote this anyways, but since someone beat me to it, I decided to go along with most of their vote.
[X] NOT Wake up while this song blare out:
All of a sudden, the gesture commands on my phone have completely changed the way they interpret my screen touches into zoom in/out and text highlighting. I suspect an "update", and if I hadn't gone through the same thing with Windows previously, I'd assume a virus.
However it makes it very difficult to copy and paste posts now!
Edit: Cleaned up some of the Editing done from the vote I
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- Location
- England
I see where you are coming from, that an angelic name might go well with angelic armor. I didn't even notice her name had angelic undertones-in my mind, that makes having a demonic outfit a strong juxtopisition with what we expect, creating comedy. Especially from their personality.
Still, how about a compromise-an angelic sort of armor, but with dark/sinister look so she doesn't appear out of place working for the villains?
I would have liked a bulkier armor but I couldn't find one. Open to suggestions here.
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Madou Sutegobana
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- Location
- Twin Realms Mandala
That looks better, Seraphim could indeed look very scary -- after all their name means 'burning'.I see where you are coming from, that an angelic name might go well with angelic armor. I didn't even notice her name had angelic undertones-in my mind, that makes having a demonic outfit a strong juxtopisition with what we expect, creating comedy. Especially from their personality.
Still, how about a compromise-an angelic sort of armor, but with dark/sinister look so she doesn't appear out of place working for the villains?
I would have liked a bulkier armor but I couldn't find one. Open to suggestions here.
Malbutorius
C'est le bien qui fait mal
Something along those lines is nice! Space for tits inside but not outright boobplate. Optimal Knight Armor has hips like a women and shoulders like a man after all, we'll have to get the animation just right with the rotation of her hips and movements of her legs to show that she's female under that armor. Probably have silky black wings instead of ragged ones? I can see her wanting to be pretty for her Overlord and subtle things like that would be nice.I see where you are coming from, that an angelic name might go well with angelic armor. I didn't even notice her name had angelic undertones-in my mind, that makes having a demonic outfit a strong juxtopisition with what we expect, creating comedy. Especially from their personality.
Still, how about a compromise-an angelic sort of armor, but with dark/sinister look so she doesn't appear out of place working for the villains?
I would have liked a bulkier armor but I couldn't find one. Open to suggestions here.
- Location
- England
Do we want her to appear female at all? I mean, yes, get her to act like a female adorkable maid is great. But I find it more funny to have a beefy bulky masculine armor doing all those actions. What you expect and what happens are at complete odds-makes you wonder what exactly is under that armor.
Like the umbrella monster in Order of the Stick. It's adorably naive, but looks/comes across as an incredibly dangerous monster. Hence the humor.
But yeah, I can see our armored maid becoming self-conscious about their appearance. "Oh, I wish my wings were prettier. Maybe I should wear Christmas lights in them to pretty them up?" or "Some stickers on my armour will make my master's undead heart go Doki Doki!"
Malbutorius
C'est le bien qui fait mal
It's more of a bonus for people who are perceptive enough and knowledgeable enough to notice those kinds of tiny details, but I understand your point.
Malbutorius
C'est le bien qui fait mal
I just don't think any more of the artists want to talk about it.
- Location
- https://discord.gg/z9tBvbh
Voting's closed.
Let us see what the tally says and an update shall be incoming soon.
Let us see what the tally says and an update shall be incoming soon.
Episode One - The Evil Overlord Awakens - Take Two
- Location
- https://discord.gg/z9tBvbh
[X] Keep Seraphima's voice, actions and personality exactly the same. But, Seraphima is wearing a very masculine full body and face covering suit of armor. (Costs 1 Fate Point)
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
[X] Make bed out of enslaved fluffy woodland spirits (0 Fate Points)
[X] Alteration: Character Design - Evil Overlord - Is a Skeleton with silver and gold embroidery, still female, her hair is made up of strands of fine gold, she's just a skeleton now. She can cast an illusion to appear human if necessary, although it has glitches sometimes. (Costs 1 Fate Point)
Current Fate Points: 3
All right all right. I applied the alterations as you wanted me to. Some things were utterly minor, others required a bit more of inventive. Still, you're being the death of the CGI team! Don't you know that those poor guys must slave away drawing strange, non-cliché stuff since they can't reuse previous animes if we do that!? -Shadenight123
Episode Start
The evil castle of the evil Overlord overlooks a majestic lake filled with toxic miasma from which countless monstrous creatures spawn. The castle itself is filled with towers, crackling thunder and lightning bolts streak the sky as the dark clouds make everything dark and dreadful, if not for the flickering candles that lit the hallways of the castle, it would be impossible to see further than one's nose.
The klutzy, fully armored yet definitely buxom maid Seraphima is busy dusting off a nearby suit of armor haunted by a ghost. She would have long, dark hair and silver eyes, if a full plate helmet weren't covering it. Her skin would be dark, the color of milk chocolate, and her pointy ears would portray her as a Dark Elf...if only she weren't utterly covered inside a bulky armor that shows absolutely nothing at all, not even a meager cleavage window. She also would have a heart-shaped tail emerging from her armor on the back, which would twirl lazily in the air...if said tail wasn't also heavily covered in armor and thus clinking right and left, rather than be visible. "Love, Love, Love Dessu!" she says with a bright giggle as she finishes dusting off the armor.
She then looks outside, and cocks her helmet to the side. "Oh my, the time!" and with that exclamation, she rushes towards a large set of onyx doors guarded by two tall and threatening ogres in full battle-armor. The doors are swung open, but unfortunately Seraphima trips on the luscious carpet within the room and rolls, falling flat on her face against the ground. The noise she emits at her fall is akin to the noise a mountain of iron would make if it hit another mountain of iron, and yet said noise does nothing to disturb the occupant's sleep.
There is a brief moment where Seraphima emits a cute "Owiee," and then stands back up to near the sleeping figure of a Skeleton with silver and gold embroidery, still female, her hair made up of strands of fine gold, and a pair of thin rimmed golden glasses on her face. The bed on which she sleeps is filled with woodland spirits, who are all moving across the wooden frame in an effort to stay the furthest away from Seraphima's dangerous klutzy actions. They know fully well they might end up chipped if she touches them without...care. And she isn't famous for her...care.
"My overlord," Seraphima says, shyly fidgeting with her index armored fingers, making a clanking noise all the while. "My overlord," she continues, "It's time...you need to wake up," there is the sound of a voice cracking from unshed tears dwelling beyond sight within the thick helmet that covers the view of the woman's face. "Please...this humble maid needs you to wake up..."
The overlord doesn't appear to wake up. Seraphima begins to sniffle louder, and that actually gets a reaction from the sleeping Overlord, since the rattling increases the noise tenfold.
In that moment, the Overlord wakes up and jumps out of her bed, the golden strands of hair following her like glittering pieces of glitter, which then flail in the wind and end up hitting her skull for a moment, a couple even ending in her teeth. She quickly pulls them back where they belong, and then starts to walk with all of the calm and poise that she can possess towards a nearby mirror, where she begins her daily routine.
"Seraphima," the voice that comes out of the skeleton is girly at first, and cheerful like a young girl's one. "Bring me the—" she catches herself, and her voices grows deeper and darker, "Bring me the magic ring of concealment." She finishes.
Seraphima cheerfully obeys, rushing over to a cabinet which she opens, the wooden doors of the cabinet exploding out of their sockets as the woodland spirits that compose the furniture cry out in dismay at their cousins' death, before swiftly recovering the broken pieces and reforming the cabinet's doors while they hug one another within the wooden frames, sending curses to the klutzy armored maid who is meanwhile handing over a ring to the figure of the Overlord.
"Illusion, Illusion, Illusion," she whispers to the ring on her index finger, her skeletal body and golden hair being replaced with a red-haired, red-eyed, snow-white skinned woman with a large pair of breasts held on by a tight corset.
A few seconds later, and the illusion apparently glitches, revealing the tight corset to be holding on to two strange round-shaped Slime monsters.
The illusion stops glitching as the Overlord rises from the ground. "I, the glorious Necrys," she proclaims with a dark and booming voice, thunder and lightning echoing outside the castle, "Wish to know how my armies are faring in the world, Seraphima!"
Seraphima nods, and eagerly lifts her Overlord up on her back and then proceeds straight for the door, "Wait Seraphima, lower me down a mom—"
Not hearing anything over the clangor of the armor's motions, Seraphima powers through the doorway while destroying the upper part of Necrys' body, which rapidly regenerates a few seconds later, though this time the figure has her arms crossed in front of her chest, and a very cross look on her face.
With a final tumble of feet after a quick run across half the castle, Seraphima lands face down in the throne room, Necrys floating in the air and landing comfortably in her throne room. In front of her, countless monsters are gathered by the sides of the room, and one among them nears to update her on the situation.
He is Crystallite, a blond-haired, smartly dressed devil with icy blue eyes.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are holding us at bay.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are pushing us back.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily pushing us back.
[X] Other
The reason for it is...
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light have a powerful artifact.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Dark have a powerful artifact.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light have a Hero in their Party.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Dark have an Anti-Hero in their Party.
[X] Other
[X] The Overlord wakes up, energetically jumps out of the bed, and then proceeds to get dressed and act like a cold and cool Kuudere.
[X] Make bed out of enslaved fluffy woodland spirits (0 Fate Points)
[X] Alteration: Character Design - Evil Overlord - Is a Skeleton with silver and gold embroidery, still female, her hair is made up of strands of fine gold, she's just a skeleton now. She can cast an illusion to appear human if necessary, although it has glitches sometimes. (Costs 1 Fate Point)
Current Fate Points: 3
Episode One - The Evil Overlord Awakens - Take Two
All right all right. I applied the alterations as you wanted me to. Some things were utterly minor, others required a bit more of inventive. Still, you're being the death of the CGI team! Don't you know that those poor guys must slave away drawing strange, non-cliché stuff since they can't reuse previous animes if we do that!? -Shadenight123
Episode Start
The evil castle of the evil Overlord overlooks a majestic lake filled with toxic miasma from which countless monstrous creatures spawn. The castle itself is filled with towers, crackling thunder and lightning bolts streak the sky as the dark clouds make everything dark and dreadful, if not for the flickering candles that lit the hallways of the castle, it would be impossible to see further than one's nose.
The klutzy, fully armored yet definitely buxom maid Seraphima is busy dusting off a nearby suit of armor haunted by a ghost. She would have long, dark hair and silver eyes, if a full plate helmet weren't covering it. Her skin would be dark, the color of milk chocolate, and her pointy ears would portray her as a Dark Elf...if only she weren't utterly covered inside a bulky armor that shows absolutely nothing at all, not even a meager cleavage window. She also would have a heart-shaped tail emerging from her armor on the back, which would twirl lazily in the air...if said tail wasn't also heavily covered in armor and thus clinking right and left, rather than be visible. "Love, Love, Love Dessu!" she says with a bright giggle as she finishes dusting off the armor.
She then looks outside, and cocks her helmet to the side. "Oh my, the time!" and with that exclamation, she rushes towards a large set of onyx doors guarded by two tall and threatening ogres in full battle-armor. The doors are swung open, but unfortunately Seraphima trips on the luscious carpet within the room and rolls, falling flat on her face against the ground. The noise she emits at her fall is akin to the noise a mountain of iron would make if it hit another mountain of iron, and yet said noise does nothing to disturb the occupant's sleep.
There is a brief moment where Seraphima emits a cute "Owiee," and then stands back up to near the sleeping figure of a Skeleton with silver and gold embroidery, still female, her hair made up of strands of fine gold, and a pair of thin rimmed golden glasses on her face. The bed on which she sleeps is filled with woodland spirits, who are all moving across the wooden frame in an effort to stay the furthest away from Seraphima's dangerous klutzy actions. They know fully well they might end up chipped if she touches them without...care. And she isn't famous for her...care.
"My overlord," Seraphima says, shyly fidgeting with her index armored fingers, making a clanking noise all the while. "My overlord," she continues, "It's time...you need to wake up," there is the sound of a voice cracking from unshed tears dwelling beyond sight within the thick helmet that covers the view of the woman's face. "Please...this humble maid needs you to wake up..."
The overlord doesn't appear to wake up. Seraphima begins to sniffle louder, and that actually gets a reaction from the sleeping Overlord, since the rattling increases the noise tenfold.
In that moment, the Overlord wakes up and jumps out of her bed, the golden strands of hair following her like glittering pieces of glitter, which then flail in the wind and end up hitting her skull for a moment, a couple even ending in her teeth. She quickly pulls them back where they belong, and then starts to walk with all of the calm and poise that she can possess towards a nearby mirror, where she begins her daily routine.
"Seraphima," the voice that comes out of the skeleton is girly at first, and cheerful like a young girl's one. "Bring me the—" she catches herself, and her voices grows deeper and darker, "Bring me the magic ring of concealment." She finishes.
Seraphima cheerfully obeys, rushing over to a cabinet which she opens, the wooden doors of the cabinet exploding out of their sockets as the woodland spirits that compose the furniture cry out in dismay at their cousins' death, before swiftly recovering the broken pieces and reforming the cabinet's doors while they hug one another within the wooden frames, sending curses to the klutzy armored maid who is meanwhile handing over a ring to the figure of the Overlord.
"Illusion, Illusion, Illusion," she whispers to the ring on her index finger, her skeletal body and golden hair being replaced with a red-haired, red-eyed, snow-white skinned woman with a large pair of breasts held on by a tight corset.
A few seconds later, and the illusion apparently glitches, revealing the tight corset to be holding on to two strange round-shaped Slime monsters.
The illusion stops glitching as the Overlord rises from the ground. "I, the glorious Necrys," she proclaims with a dark and booming voice, thunder and lightning echoing outside the castle, "Wish to know how my armies are faring in the world, Seraphima!"
Seraphima nods, and eagerly lifts her Overlord up on her back and then proceeds straight for the door, "Wait Seraphima, lower me down a mom—"
Not hearing anything over the clangor of the armor's motions, Seraphima powers through the doorway while destroying the upper part of Necrys' body, which rapidly regenerates a few seconds later, though this time the figure has her arms crossed in front of her chest, and a very cross look on her face.
With a final tumble of feet after a quick run across half the castle, Seraphima lands face down in the throne room, Necrys floating in the air and landing comfortably in her throne room. In front of her, countless monsters are gathered by the sides of the room, and one among them nears to update her on the situation.
He is Crystallite, a blond-haired, smartly dressed devil with icy blue eyes.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are holding us at bay.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are pushing us back.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily pushing us back.
[X] Other
The reason for it is...
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light have a powerful artifact.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Dark have a powerful artifact.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light have a Hero in their Party.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Dark have an Anti-Hero in their Party.
[X] Other
- Location
- Attempting to cast animate object on a black hole.
I want Crystallite to have a giant mustache. Not sure why.
JustinTim3
Lost soul of Ashes
- Location
- iowa
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily pushing us back.
Reason for it
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are using this strange power called friendship and love. Or 'Nakama' as they call it. - as the Overlord never heard of this power called 'Nakama'. Now wants to harness this power for herself.
Edit:
[X] Not. The Enemies that belong to the Light want to play card games instead.
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Joe or Tim.
[X] NOT Important individuals on both sides are being abducted by a third unknown party
[X] NOT Because we have a powerful crystalline with a mustache
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Bob
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Savina or Sabina.
Reason for it
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are using this strange power called friendship and love. Or 'Nakama' as they call it. - as the Overlord never heard of this power called 'Nakama'. Now wants to harness this power for herself.
Edit:
[X] Not. The Enemies that belong to the Light want to play card games instead.
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Joe or Tim.
[X] NOT Important individuals on both sides are being abducted by a third unknown party
[X] NOT Because we have a powerful crystalline with a mustache
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Bob
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Savina or Sabina.
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[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light want to play card games instead.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light want to play card games instead.
Zedman7054
Eternally 3rd
- Location
- United States
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are holding us at bay
[X] The Paladin Order, a legion of holy warriors, have reinforced the frontlines for the forces of Light.
[X] The Paladin Order, a legion of holy warriors, have reinforced the frontlines for the forces of Light.
JoshieWoshie
Mister Doge
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily pushing us back.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are using this strange power called friendship and love. Or 'Nakama' as they call it. - as the Overlord never heard of this power called 'Nakama'. Now wants to harness this power for herself
Kek.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are using this strange power called friendship and love. Or 'Nakama' as they call it. - as the Overlord never heard of this power called 'Nakama'. Now wants to harness this power for herself
Kek.
- Location
- England
I didn't even see the woodland spirits...damn it. Well too late, let's make this work!
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light have a Hero in their Party.
I've changed my mind, I like to think an incompetent Hero is leading the Light to ruin.
[X] ALTER make our overlords disguised/concealed hair blonde instead of red. It's weird it doesn't match her actual hair colour. [I hope this doesn't cost a fate point]
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Joe or Tim or Bob. Female names I'm fine with.
It's too early for the power of love. Our protagonist hasn't even gotten out of the village yet. Only his OPness can bring the power of love and friendship!
Edit: I'm so happy this game is still going on. I really missed it.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light are easily being defeated.
[X] The Enemies that belong to the Light have a Hero in their Party.
I've changed my mind, I like to think an incompetent Hero is leading the Light to ruin.
[X] ALTER make our overlords disguised/concealed hair blonde instead of red. It's weird it doesn't match her actual hair colour. [I hope this doesn't cost a fate point]
[X] NOT Change Necrys name to Joe or Tim or Bob. Female names I'm fine with.
It's too early for the power of love. Our protagonist hasn't even gotten out of the village yet. Only his OPness can bring the power of love and friendship!
Edit: I'm so happy this game is still going on. I really missed it.
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- Location
- England
You want to change the name of our female evil overlord to Joe or Tim?