- Location
- Denver
I would love to see you write this to post-GM with exploration. But still love it as is.
Vulcan's Forge
- Thread starter hume
- Start date
John Tarsitano
Iron Scout
- Location
- United States, Florida
Dear Hume,
I just found this story and loved reading every word of it. From the title, I thought it was going to be something about the gods, but instead you turn Taylor into a Vulcan Tinker. Star Trek science versus Worm Craziness would make even Q happy for millenniums with the level of chaos that would come out of it. Now the question is, will Taylor use the "cold equation" formula to travel back in time and save her parents (switching their bodies with doppelgangers at the last second via Transporters)? Also, is Caldron really OK with Taylor coming in and ruining all their plans?
Yes she killed an Endbringer, and showed she can kill Agents, but if there is one thing I have learned from reading books about shadowy organizations, its they hate it when someone better comes along and does a better job. It is illogical, and ironic in a dark way, but it happens. Thank you for letting us read your work and I can't wait to read more of it.
Sincerely
John
I just found this story and loved reading every word of it. From the title, I thought it was going to be something about the gods, but instead you turn Taylor into a Vulcan Tinker. Star Trek science versus Worm Craziness would make even Q happy for millenniums with the level of chaos that would come out of it. Now the question is, will Taylor use the "cold equation" formula to travel back in time and save her parents (switching their bodies with doppelgangers at the last second via Transporters)? Also, is Caldron really OK with Taylor coming in and ruining all their plans?
Yes she killed an Endbringer, and showed she can kill Agents, but if there is one thing I have learned from reading books about shadowy organizations, its they hate it when someone better comes along and does a better job. It is illogical, and ironic in a dark way, but it happens. Thank you for letting us read your work and I can't wait to read more of it.
Sincerely
John
- Location
- The Wild and Wooly Wastelands of Ohio
I find myself coming back to this time and again. It is a wonderful piece of work and I would love to see more of it. More snippets of the reactions people have to Vulcan and her technology. Not so much the big battle with Scion, but little interactions outside of that - that's what I think would be most interesting
johnwedd
Above Average man
- Location
- usa
This the trouble with any well crafted story. Especially one this short. In spite of all strings tied off and a satisfying conclusion follow well written character, world, and plot development; we the audience want more.
We really like to keep a good thing going, and a good story is no different. The problem being is that the ending is an equally important part to all the other parts in story. If said end was made either moot via continuation by the author, shifted to be the beginning of a sequal, refined via use of side stories, it's important to respect the structure the author laid down and NOT demand something the story or the author can't do without messing the story as a whole. Otherwise the story looses that polish that made it stand out.
That being said, I would more of this world, but would be equally ok if it wasn't expanded upon. This lovely story has journalist of trust in its author that I would abide by what ever they decide.
Awesome story, ten out of ten, will read again.
We really like to keep a good thing going, and a good story is no different. The problem being is that the ending is an equally important part to all the other parts in story. If said end was made either moot via continuation by the author, shifted to be the beginning of a sequal, refined via use of side stories, it's important to respect the structure the author laid down and NOT demand something the story or the author can't do without messing the story as a whole. Otherwise the story looses that polish that made it stand out.
That being said, I would more of this world, but would be equally ok if it wasn't expanded upon. This lovely story has journalist of trust in its author that I would abide by what ever they decide.
Awesome story, ten out of ten, will read again.
