Underquest (Undertale)

[X]:rolleyes: Ummm Guys? it's a straight line with no danger. ...I think we can do this.
-[X] Oh, I got one! What's the shortest distance between two jokes? (A straight line!)
 
Ruins 11
They're both starting to hyperventilate. Well, Frisk is the only one actually breathing, but you can hear Chara's voice in your shared headspace getting more and more ragged.

"Guys?" You say, "It's a straight line to the end. She probably hasn't gone too far."

"Nobody's going to come, nobody's going to come..."

Ok, that's...not helpful. "Hey, Frisk, look! It's just a straight line! You can get there, right? I bet Toriel just forgot you have little legs and she has big giant feet."

Frisk sniffles, and nods.

"Y-yeah," Chara says. They sound like they're starting to recover a bit from their episode. They sound more determined with every word. "You don't need her. Just keep going."

Frisk nods. "Big kids don't cry," they say. It sounds like a mantra, something they've said to themselves before. They shake their head."I'm not a crybaby."


For some reason, that word makes you flinch. You look where Toriel is, and you can see her toes poking out from behind the pillar. This time, Frisk sees them, and squeaks in surprise and delight.

"See, she's still here!" You say. Frisk bounds over to the pillar and looks behind it. But Toriel's quicker; she shuffles around the pillar with surprising stealthiness. Only her clear-as-day footprints in the dust give her away. Frisk laughs, and ducks around the pillar. But Toriel is too fast. They keep this up until Frisk, gasping for breath, stops for a break. Toriel leaps out, bright-eyed and not winded in the slightest, from the pillar, picking Frisk up by their armpits.

"See, my child!" she says, swinging Frisk around in a gentle circle above her head. "I did not leave you! I was merely behind the pillar the whole time!"

Frisk howls with delight. Toriel sets them on their feet. Slightly dizzy, Frisk sits down on the stone in a tangled mess of limbs. Toriel, standing with her hands held in front of her, smiles benevolently down at them.

"But there was a point to this exercise," she says. Frisk looks up at her in confusion. "...To test your independence," she says. She looks off to the side. "I have some business to attend to, and you must stay alone for a little while."

You feel a sinking in Frisk's stomach.

"No."

You can feel that Frisk is about to cry. But the strangest thing happens. Before, Frisk was very emotional, but now...it's like a wall comes up. Their face stays eerily neutral, despite the turmoil you can feel, like a hurricane behind opaque glass.

"Nonono," Chara continues, "She's a liar! She's lying, they're all liars!"

"Please remain here."

It's raining at the bus stop. A woman sits on the bench, fidgeting nervously. Her child stands. They pick at a Band-Aid on the back of their head.

"Stop fidgeting."

They stop fidgeting. A bus pulls around a corner. The woman suddenly takes the child's hand, and spins them around to look at her. She won't meet their eyes, just barely peeking out behind long, brown bangs.

"You need to stay here," she says. "Stay right here for Mommy, OK?" I'll be right back."

The child nods. Their expression is empty. The woman's voice, warm and comforting, turns cold. "And stop looking at me like that."

The child looks at the ground.

"Take the next bus," she says. She has two bus tickets. She gives one to the child, then stands and walks towards the approaching bus. The child stays in the stop, holding the ticket. The woman starts to climb into the bus.

"Uh, that your kid, ma'am?" the driver asks. He doesn't sound particularly interested. There's no one else on the bus, this far out, this late. It's nearly midnight; there usually isn't anyone at the Mt Ebott Nature Sanctuary station anyway, and he's upset that he had to stop at all.

The woman looks back. Her eyes are concerned, but it's a falseness to fool an inattentive stranger. "No," she says, "But it looks like they have a ticket for the next bus."

The driver grunts an acknowledgement, and closes the door. The child watches, silent, as the woman walks to the middle of the bus, and take a seat. The bus pulls away from the bus stop and the woman never looks back as she leaves. The child's expression never changes.

The child didn't get on the next bus. It arrived to an empty station, a single, unused ticket in front of the doors.

Toriel said something about a cellphone, and to call her, but you didn't hear any of it. Frisk just nods, while Chara mutters incomprehensibly.

"Be good, alright?" she says. Frisk nods blankly.

Hesitantly, Toriel stands, and starts to walk away. Frisk watches, silent, as the woman leaves.

Toriel slows, and looks back, face full of concern. Frisk's expression never changes. She starts to turn around again.

[] Tell Frisk to say something!
[] "Hey, she'll be back! Try calling her in the meantime."
[] There's nothing really scary in these ruins! See if you can beat her home!
[] Write-in
 
[X] Tell Frisk to say something!

There's no use in calling her. It would be a funny personal moment, but she won't come back if this is like the game. Calling her would only cause a delay and make Frisk more scared. Telling Frisk that "nothing is scary in these ruins!" isn't quite a lie, but it's superficially deceptive enough that it'll give Chara a chance to turn Frisk against us. I will also admit that telling Frisk to say something could make the abandonment issues that Frisk and Chara flare if Toriel says something wrong, but I think it's the best temporary action.
 
[X] Try not to mention what you learned about Chara's past. I doubt they would appreciate us being privy to that info. Instead tell Frisk to call up Tori, ask about what she's doing and tell her preemptively that we like both Butterscotch and Cinnamon.
 
[ ] "Look. This is the first area. It might be a little dangerous, but it's nothing to lose your heads over. Both of you."

[ ] "Toriel would probably keep contact with us in the meanwhile. She did pass us a cellphone."


Changed vote. :V
 
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[X] "Chara and Frisk listen to me, calm down, and remember what Toriel said, she is not leaving us alone forever, we have the cellphone to call her if we need help."
-[X] "Hey Frisk if you truly don't want to wait for Toriel, we could explore and find her house, it would be a adventure! I mean the monsters as we have seen are all good guys, the flower being the exception! If we just talk or play with them we will make them our friends."
-[X] "Hey Chara...come on buddy we need to give Frisk our support, give them advice, and cheer them on, if they falter we need to push them so they don't lose their determination...but first instead of trying to kill those we fear, why don't we give them a chance for Frisk to befriend them ? Frisk looks like they would love to make some friends."
 
[X] Tell Frisk to say something!

Ah, that doesn't bode well. Seems Frisk got abandoned by his mum, unless that was Chara we saw in the memories.
 
[X] Okay both of you? CALM THE HECK DOWN. She trusts us! she would not leave if she thought we could not handle ourselves! Take a miniute and breathe.
-[X] Call her if you want to Frisk to reassure yourself . Toriel is a kind soul she cares about you and by extension us. Let's not prove her wrong and not be able to handle our selves. Lets move forward.
-[X]Also we have a SAVE file what are you guys scared of? (Explane what a Save File is with Chara)
 
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[X] Get a bit indignant
-[X] "Hey, is she saying that we we'd run in circles if we're left alone?!"
-[X] Try to poke Frisk into crying and letting it all out.

Goat Momma is a great tear sponge.
 
[X] Okay both of you? CALM THE HECK DOWN. She trusts us! she would not leave if she thought we could not handle ourselves! Take a miniute and breathe.
-[X] Call her if you want Frisk to reassure yourself . Toriel is a kind soul she cares about you and by extension us. Let's not prove her wrong and not be able to handle our selves. Lets move forward.
-[X]Also we have a SAVE file what are you guys scared of?(Explane what a Save File is with Chara)
 
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[X] Okay both of you? CALM THE HECK DOWN. She trusts us! she would not leave if she thought we could not handle ourselves! Take a miniute and breathe.
-[X] Call her if you want Frisk to reassure yourself . Toriel is a kind soul she cares about you and by extension us. Let's not prove her wrong and not be able to handle our selves. Lets move forward.
-[X]Also we have a SAVE file what are you guys scared of?
 
Maybe try to explain SAVING before bringing it up in conversation.

Oh didn't we explane it before? okay then
[X] Okay both of you? CALM THE HECK DOWN. She trusts us! she would not leave if she thought we could not handle ourselves! Take a miniute and breathe.
-[X] Call her if you want Frisk to reassure yourself . Toriel is a kind soul she cares about you and by extension us. Let's not prove her wrong and not be able to handle our selves. Lets move forward.
-[X]Also we have a SAVE file what are you guys scared of?
[X] Okay both of you? CALM THE HECK DOWN. She trusts us! she would not leave if she thought we could not handle ourselves! Take a miniute and breathe.
-[X] Call her if you want Frisk to reassure yourself . Toriel is a kind soul she cares about you and by extension us. Let's not prove her wrong and not be able to handle our selves. Lets move forward.
-[X]Also we have a SAVE file what are you guys scared of?

Can you guys edit in (explane what SAVE file is with Chara)
 
I'm more wondering why we need to explain it. And uh. Why would we bother explaining anything when they're both having panic attacks?
 
[X] "Quick grab onto her leg, don't let her leave without you!"

We can talk about how trustworthy Toriel is all day, but Frisk and Chara need to judge for themselves. Trust in Toriel to not leave if they show how distressed they feel about this.
 
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[X] Okay both of you? CALM THE HECK DOWN. She trusts us! she would not leave if she thought we could not handle ourselves! Take a miniute and breathe.
-[X] Call her if you want to Frisk to reassure yourself . Toriel is a kind soul she cares about you and by extension us. Let's not prove her wrong and not be able to handle our selves. Lets move forward.
-[X]Also we have a SAVE file what are you guys scared of? (Explane what a Save File is with Chara)
 
[X] "Quick grab onto her leg, don't let her leave without you!"

This is a primal fear. No amount of words or logical actions soothe a primal fear that lurks in your subconscious.

It is like my fear of failure. I know it is irrational to be that afraid of tomorrow, but I still am. Everyone has them, and for a child no amount of logic will make it go away.
 
[X] "Quick grab onto her leg, don't let her leave without you!"
 
[X] "Quick grab onto her leg, don't let her leave without you!"

Abandonment issues huh, dammit that's sad ;-;
 
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