Tsuchigumo [AU ; ALT-Power ; Crossover ; Worm/One Piece]

I always hate when authors use japanese words in their stories. I feel like it's incredible stupid and just shows that the author likes the language (in this case japanese).

I mean, for the readers sake the original language that they are speaking is being translated to english so everything that they should be speaking should be in english (in this case Hancock should be saying "big sister"), but the fact that the characters are speaking some words in japanese and others in english means that they know that they are speaking in more than one language. If so why? and if not why is the author/narrator doing that?

I always felt the reason being that some words dont sound right in English or are clunky with translation when I see it done in manga translations. This gets compounded into a sort of language of manga translations that ppl get used to. The levels of familiarity that words like aneki or senpai is much greater than the English word equivalent and sounds better if u just used Japanese. In writing dialogue is the easiest part of a manga to emulate because it's all dialogue so the problem comes in making differences in dialogue between characters stand out. Taylor does not use any of japanlish speaking because she's a raised English speaker but boa and her sisters come from anime world where the two languages are intermixed.

Well Sethll7 pretty much said it all - there just things you get used to by watching anime or reading manga that stick with you and one of those things are the japanese suffix -

While you are right in the case Onee-sama is used it could be easily exchanged for big sister it becomes more difficult the very moment a name precedes the suffix - like Hancock-nee-san or something.

Translating that is hard because one way or the other you lose something - either the degree of familarity you can express by using this phrase or if you just use the word "sister" you end up losing the descriptor of the name - in most cases who exactly is addressed. Sure dialogue tags can help make it clear to the reader, but it might not be clear for the sisters who of them is adressed.

Like with everything this problem could be overcome if tried hard enough - but I like using them - It is a stylistic choice, I'm aware that not everybody likes them.
Someone made a similar comment on my Naruto story - despite that I have no plans to change that going forward.

Sorry -

Not really true....->

I think he meant "using" in the sense of Taylor making use of them as she speaks.

After all, Taylor grew up in Brockton Bay. The ABB was a thing - Therefore I find it reasonable that she is at least somewhat familiar with those suffix.
 
Chapter 09 - The Florian Triangle
Chapter 09: The Florian Triangle (Late Winter 1505)

Captains Log: 15.12.1505


It has been three weeks since we left Sabaody. The daily schedule I established, beyond some little hiccups in the early days of its implementation, worked without a hitch.

The three girls are coming along nicely. Their training is already showing remarkable progress, in a few days time, they will possess the necessary leg strength to start them on Soru. From there, it won't take them long to get Geppou down, which brings me back to my initial conundrum - Do I offer them the devil-fruits?

With every passing day, they get closer to the requirement I set for allowing them to eat a devil fruit, but my mind is still in flux. I'm hoping the coming days would help me to come to a decision.

The morale of the crew is good, even though at some days I feel like a kindergarten teacher, having to break up fights between the girls over the most simple things. Fortunately, none of their fights lasts long, and after they are separated and had time to calm down, they usually make up within minutes.

Strangely enough, those quarrels only started last week, and it took me a while to connect the dots of why? It was the small things that gave me the final clue.

At first, they were on their best behavior, always taking great care of everything to clean up, to do their chores the moment they arose, which then slowly started to degrade.

To the point, I was agitating about what to do, should their behavior towards each other worsen below a certain threshold, and get untenable in the process.

When I happened to come upon a discarded piece of clothing lying in the hallway. At that moment, it all began to make sense. They finally started to feel at ease. Their prior behavior was what you would expect from a guest, always tense careful not to anger their host, not one you would expect from someone calling the ship their home.

Needless to say, the loss of pressure to fulfill some self-imposed code of conduct would also result in removing inhibitors regarding expected and proper dealings with their sisters.

On the one hand, this was great, and I'm really glad for them, for them returning to their true (unmasked) selves. On the other hand, I'm being exposed to girl-drama. I shudder at the thought. I was more than happy when I graduated from all of that. Especially the teenage-drama with all the bullying. I had high hopes to never coming across such things only to end up, right in the middle of it.

The worst part of this all, I can't even run away; living on a ship made that rather difficult.

Of course, I'm exaggerating. They aren't that bad. On the contrary, they grow on you - eventually. More than once, I caught myself wondering is this what having a little sister is like?

Would I have come to think the same, if Mom and Dad would have had another child, or would it have turned out into sibling rivalry kind of thing?

Having those girls around me is definitely different than taking care of all the orphans, back in Brockton Bay was - I never really got close to any of them. I was their part-time caretaker, their protector at best, with Charlotte and Sierra filling the roles of mothers and sisters for them.

I really regret not having gotten the chance to find out what it would be like to have a sibling. Strangely enough, I never talked to my parents about it - never found out the reason I'm an only child.

Therefore being here, with them turns out to be more than just a second chance at a life, a chance to make new experiences. Well, at least as long as my stay here would last.


"Onee-sama, Onee-sama did you see how I pierced the fish right through his head?" Hancock excitedly wanted to know.

"Yeah, I saw," I said.

"But you weren't even looking..." she accused me.

I closed the log-book and looked up at her reeling in her harpoon via the rope it was connected to. This, throwing spears at fish, was the next exercise I had them do after they graduated from catching fish in the bowl.

It didn't only train to sense the exact position of their target but also required them to predict where they would be in the time it took the harpoon or any projectile weapon they may decide to wield to reach the position of it.

It was not future sight, which was also a possibility if you got far enough in Kenbunshoku Haki training, something they wouldn't manage for quite some time. It was only reading the intent of the fish, where they want to move with the information they gleaned about their current position. It was just combining it into one coherent picture.

"Onee-sama, what is the next task?" Sandersonia wondered. "I already managed to catch thrice the number of fish you said was needed to clear this exercise."

A look at their respective piles confirmed what she said. Sandersonia was clearly in the lead and had no trouble to get any number of consecutive hits on even the fastest and most erratic fish. On the other hand, both her sisters were struggling with this, Hancock doing better than Marigold, which was no surprise since she had a few years more training in this, but she was still behind her other younger sister.

It was clear to me that Sandersonia must be naturally inclined to Kenbunshoku Haki, whereas her sisters were not. Marigold clearly was a Busoshoku type and, I was tending to say the same about Hancock if not for her having showcased far more endurance and therefore Haki at her disposal than both her sisters combined, being able to go strong long after her sister had already flagged some time ago, a disparity that couldn't be explained solely by her being a few years older.

A theory that was supported by the fact, that the discrepancy in Haki endurance between Sandersonia and Marigold was far smaller.

Nevertheless, despite my suspicion, I refrained from addressing it at this point. For one, I wouldn't want to get her hopes up and end up wasting her time to bring something forth that she might not even have. Furthermore, I was not sure I would even be a help to her in developing this ability. Since my Haoshoki Haki and the way Rayleigh described his and how it was used varied greatly.

I never found out if I was just special with a unique version of it or if I just experienced using it differently. Owed to the fact, that I once possessed a similar ability.

I decided to delay crossing that particular bridge until she showed some actual signs of awakening it.

Talk about luck to have two blessed with the disposition of a conqueror within the small group of people I interacted with after coming here - one to teach me and one to be taught by me.

"Continue, for now, perhaps your sisters might get inspired by your prowess to do better, and tomorrow you will get to do a more advanced exercise. Wouldn't want for your sister to hold you back now, would we?" I said.

Hancock glared at me, while Marigold saw fit to say
"That was mean Onee-sama"

"Why?" I asked, "I just stated a fact, everyone with some eyes would be able to confirm just looking at the fish at your feet."

It was clear neither Marigold nor Hancock were satisfied with just that.

"Listen, so what if Sandersonia is better at piercing some fish with a spear than you Marigold, or has some more talent as a navigator. You are better at cooking and probably a dozen other things than her, and the same is true for Hancock. You aren't the same, you are different, unique in your own ways with your own strengths and weaknesses. There is absolutely nothing wrong with one of you being better at something, that is just how it is." I lectured them, and I could see understanding in their eyes.

"We train in order to find our strengths, develop them and to conceal our weaknesses, knowing what you are good at is just an integral part of this, and who knows, when we come to train your Busoshoku Haki it will be your turn to be better than your sisters." I teased.

"Doubt it," murmured Sandersonia under her breath.
Marigold's response was sticking out her tongue, which was mirrored by Sandersonia, the recipient.
Hancock stepped in between them, and without warning, caught both their tongues with her fingers.

"If you have time to be silly, you clearly aren't training hard enough. Back to work, you two!" Hancock chided her sisters, stifling the nascent argument in its tracks.

I gave her a small smile. She was really growing into her role as a vice-captain and took my suggestions what that included to heart. Being the arbitrator between the crew and the captain, enforcing discipline and taking care of the crew.

Which, in this case, meant keeping her sisters in check.

"Mgkay" Marigold and Sandersonia both managed to voice without being able to make use of their tongues.

Hancock gave both of them a stern look before she released them from her hold.

"That hurt Nee-San." the second oldest complained.

"Bully" were their simultaneous whispered responses.

Hancock's eyes narrowed "Did you say something?" she inquired in a saccharine tone, which left no doubt in what consequences objections would encompass.

"No Onee-san." her younger sisters said cowed at the same time.

"That must have been the wind." Sandersonia tried to offer as an excuse.

"The wind, really?" The black-haired girl wondered skeptically.

"Of course, Onee-san what else could it have been?" Marigold backed her sister's flimsy excuse.

"I see," Hancock let the issue slide but couldn't help to give them both a stern look before she said, "let's catch some more fish."

Their bickering was worse than Regent and Aisha's had been at their worst.

I felt a sudden drop in temperature, a short glance towards Sandersonia made it clear I wasn't the only one who noticed it. We both looked ahead and saw a screen of fog forming directly in our path stretching along the horizon.

A look at the Eternal Pose for Water 7 attached to a small pedestal, right next to the helm showed the needle pointing right at the fog.

Sandersonia noticed the same and was staring at me, awaiting orders.

Well, it seemed like it couldn't be helped we have to go through it since it didn't look like the fog would dissolve anytime soon.

"Reef the sails," I ordered.

We had to reduce our speed to increase the time at our disposal to evade, should something appear right in front of the ship we might crash into.

While Haki allowed us to sense the presence of Lifeforms feeling inanimate objects, that weren't interacted with on a regular basis by living things was next to impossible.

I could still make some guesses in order to locate the placement of rocks through the movement pattern of the fish in their proximity.

Unfortunately, it was not a hundred percent accurate method, for it required fish to be present and only worked under the assumption the Rock wasn't hollow or possessed holes that allowed fish to traverse through them, throwing off this form of detection.

The girls went to work and rolled up the canvas of the mainsail, through the next to the mast fixed pivotable contraption (boom) stretching alongside its length up to top. Being separated at the Gaff like the two sails connected to it. By rotating the small capstans at the bottom of the contraption connected to the gaff sail it started rotating, and the canvas was rolled around it, reducing the length of the sail and therefore the area the wind could hit to propel our ship.

Sandersonia lectured me, the first time this came up at great lengths about the correct term for this being roller furling. By now, she seemed to have accepted the fact, since she refrained from correcting me, that I couldn't care less as long as they knew what they were meant to do when the order was given.

We steadily began to lose speed. I had the girls reduce the gaff sail to less than one-quarter of its original size, which given that the height stayed roughly the same, reduced the area of the canvas by around 80%, and our speed dropped by a similar amount.

Our ship slowly got closer to the wall of fog, which turned out to be thicker than I originally assumed it to be. I considered reducing our speed further down to crawl when the fog started to change color going from milky white to a multi-colored kaleidoscope.

"So pretty," Hancock mumbled.

I ignored the accurate observation from Hancock. I was far more concerned about this phenomenon and what it might mean for our crew. Rayleigh warned me about strange, dangerous, and random effects the grand-line even Paradise has to offer those that travel on it.

No matter the nature of what we were witnessing, it didn't look to be dangerous, which in most cases meant it was. Nature had a way to lull the intended victims of a trap into a false sense of security, and I had no plan to fall for it.

"Shake out the sails, we are going around it," I ordered.

"Huh, why? it's only fog" Hancock asked surprised.

"pretty fog," Marigold added.

"I have a bad feeling about it," I told her. Well, that wasn't the whole truth I felt an urge to steer the ship right into it. I never felt something like this, but the resemblance to how others described being subtle mastered felt like couldn't be denied. In addition, there was a transparent line, a spider thread intangible extending from my chest and disappearing into the fog - calling for me to follow it.

To say I was reluctant to blindly trust another power trying to influence my actions was without a doubt an understatement, especially since I had no idea how this one operated. The vague description I got of `being able to change fate´ was as indeterminate as it can get. Dinah's prediction, she had me follow, in contrast, were crystal clear.

I turned our ship around, with the wind blowing in the direction of the fog, we couldn't just sail away from it in a straight line and had to close haul the ship.

Which, of course, reduced our speed tremendously compared to what it could be sailing the other way. The strange thing, despite the wind blowing with quite some force, the fog wasn't blown away from us. Instead, it moved against the wind's direction, as if it was pursuing us.

Looking back, it was easy to see that it was gaining on us, the distance separating us constantly shrinking.

I went through my options, which, to be honest, weren't many and not very promising. The best would be to grab the kids and Geppou the hell away from here, but with their added weight, while not much, having to carry it for days would undoubtedly take its toll on me. I estimated I could keep us in the air a few days, with spider silk kiting perhaps a week - at most. But would that be enough to find an Island, a ship on this vast sea anything? Before the strength would leave me, and we would slowly drown.

It would come down to luck, something I wouldn't risk our lives for. Especially if there were other options still open to me, and despite my reservations regarding the fog. It probably wouldn't kill us outright, meaning our chances going in it were better than abandoning the ship on the open sea.

There wasn't much else I could do, short of abandoning the girls – in case this fog was only after me. Something I couldn't be sure of. It was just an inkling, which also told me that leaving the girls alone as we entered that fog would be a monumentally bad idea.

So I stayed put – hoping that I wasn't about to make a huge mistake -

The rainbow fog made contact with the outer edges of the boat. Some of the tension left my body when it didn't start dissolving our ship. I made a few steps in the direction towards the slowly on the ship encroaching fog and put my hand in it. To my great relief, nothing seemed to happen.

Which struck me as odd – if there was no effect why did my power want me to go inside – or was I missing something?

I chose not to stress over it. Simply because there wasn't much I could do until I got an idea of what was special about this fog.

I turned around, and the fog passed over me, and the rest of the ship – including the girls. Aside from the sight restrictions accompanied by such an event, everything being overcast by a milky hue everything was normal. Despite that, I didn't lower my guard.

"Reef the sails" I ordered. With the visibility so low – around a dozen feet, which barely allowed us to make out both ends of the ship while standing in the middle of it – Speed became the greatest threat to us.

"Sandersonia get up within the crow-nest. The very instant you see something you let us know." She saluted and climbed up the mast. I didn't expect for her to see much not through this fog, which uncharacteristically reached far above the sea level instead of clinging to it.

To be fair, Rayleigh did warn me to expect coming across strange weather phenomenons going against common sense. This just seemed to be the first instance of it happening to us.

"Marigold, I want you to get the furthest you safely can towards the bow of the ship with your eyes straight ahead – looking out for anything that might be a threat to the ship..."

"and inform you the moment I see something." she interrupted "got it."

"Hancock, I want you to stay on the helm. Be ready to follow your sister's directions. In case they see something, you won't have much time to react." She grimly nodded and put her hands on the helm.

We cruised through the fog for quite some time. The eerie feeling was compounded by a lack of sunlight, sight, and sound. The only occasional noise that broke the silence aside from our breathing were the droplets of water that built up on surfaces of the ship falling down.

Suddenly out of nowhere, I sensed several people right in front of us hidden by the fog closing in fast. Faster than only our speed should have allowed for. Sandersonia disturbed aura was a clear indication, that she sensed it too. Being taken by surprise unsure of what she sensed, she reacted just a tad bit slower than myself.

I immediately ordered "hard starboard". The glimpse I got of the future showed me, that the crew from the ship on a direct collision course with us would react the same way when they would finally notice us.

As predicted, not a second later the fog revealed a huge shadow more than 30 feet in height and twice the size of Sakura. A panicked voice out of their Crowsnest screamed "EVADE!" which got their helmsman, without waiting a second, to turned the rudder, and their ship swerved starboard.

Risky doing such a thing, quite a lot, in fact, changing the course of a ship without first checking which direction was safe - without access to Haki, I could have just as easily ordered us to avoid them by steering backboard, and then our ships would have crashed into each other.

My musings were interrupted when I noticed two silhouettes on the bow of the other ship. The sudden shift of their ship had them lose their balance.

As a consequence, the smaller of the two lost hold on the two objects in order to steady itself on the railing. I only got a short glimpse at the objects sailing through the air – that high up, and with all the fog; it was impossible to identify what they were.

The bigger silhouette lost no time, and in going after one of the objects shoved the smaller silhouette out of the way. Already unsteady on its feet the forceful push, was all that was needed, for the silhouette to fall over the railing - just as our ships passed each other.

The object forgotten, I jumped into the air and grabbed the small silhouette, which turned out to be a girl, at the gruff of her neck just in time to prevent her plummeting into the ocean.

I registered hearing a splash as I geppoued again and brought us both back onto the deck of the Sakura. I lowered the girl back down. Her feet barely made contact with the ground when I saw another glimpse of her reaching out with the palm of her hand towards me. Under normal circumstances, nothing that I or anybody else should have had to fear. But what I could sense from her hand was an ominous feeling paired with the ill intent - behind her attack because it was one - had me act on the side of caution.

I swatted her hand that went for my midsection away while making a half-turn. I raised my knee at the same time to give her a light tap to her ribs to open up some distance between us.

I wasn't sure what the reason was - Did I misjudge my own strength? Her weight perhaps? either way, my hit barreled her over the deck. She only came to a stop when she crashed against the railing.

Hancock, who stood close enough to observe what happened, gasped. She was about to run over to the girl, when I moved my still sheathed Nodachi in her way, blocking her from advancing toward our new passenger.

A shake of my head made it clear to her that she had to keep her distance.

I turned towards Hancock at the helm and said, "turn the ship around, we've got something to give back, and we wouldn't want to lose them in this fog."

"Aye, Aye" was her curt response as she steered our ship into a wide turn and started to pursue the other ship.

I tracked them through the fog through their auras. Just as I was considering shaking out our sails to catch up to them, they took in their sails and brought their ship to a stop. About time – going under full sails in this fog was reckless, and I wondered if they had a reason to.
I double-checked our surroundings and came up empty – curious.

As we neared the other vessel towering over the sea. We were able to see its shadowy outlines cast by the light from their lit torches on deck.

I ordered Hancock "Bring us alongside the other ship. Marigold, Sandersonia get over here."

I turned to our new passenger. She was close enough leaning against the starboard railing that I had an unobstructed view of her. The girl was small, perhaps eight years old, with pink hip-length hair. She wore a green hat, orange, and black striped knee-length loosely fitting pants, - were those suspenders? - and something that seemed like a mix between a sleeveless t-shirt and a tank top.

The girl was wide awake and staring at me. Unbothered nor dazed by my hit, which could only mean she somehow rolled with it. No easy feat, not against me even though I held back considerably. This in itself spoke volumes of her. The dexterity and flexibility necessary to do this were not easy to come by, and the instinct and experience to do so even less.

At a closer look, the visible signs of abuse on her body were hard not to see, bruises in various stages of healing strewn on her limbs. I had no time to regret my choice in handling here when I sensed on an elevated position on the mast right next to me an aura appearing out of nowhere. It was weak, barely noticeable, belonging to something around marble big. The curious thing was it had the exact same signature as one of the people I sensed on the other ship.

I was about to turn my head to look at what it was that appeared on my ship when suddenly from the railing above the girl sprang forth two muscled arms clearly belonging to a man and moved to strangle her.

When the arms were crossed and about to close around her throat, I moved. With a flicker of my wrist spider-silk wound around her ankle, a slight pull, and prior sitting girl landed on her back. Her head out of the way of my sword pierced right through the palms of those arms.

Looking straight up, to the space which a second ago was occupied by her head. The girl's eyes widened unnaturally at seeing what was nailed above her against the railing. Before she could make any headway scrambling away from the railing towards myself and the Boa sisters. They, at that point, all converged around me.

Along with them, I witnessed the arms simply disappearing, dissolving into flower petals, and at the same time, a scream originating from the deck of the other ship reached us.

With my head turned towards the mast, I found myself stared at by an eye-ball which also disappeared in the same fashion a second later.

Interesting – This Devil-Fruit apparently allowed for the user to manifest body parts on any surface. A versatile power, no doubt, perfectly suited for espionage and assassination even in the hands of a person with no fantasy – Handling the downside, on the other hand, would require some intelligence.

I split myself in two – one iteration was stepping out of the other. The girl fear-stricken crawling towards us, her head turned looking over her shoulder was trained at what was behind her, didn't even notice. I grabbed her, and before she could realize what was happening, I already put her down on the deck of the other ship.

All around us were heavily-armed sailors running around - Not unlike what I imagined headless chickens would act like. A few gathered on the bow of the shit forming a circular cluster. They were surrounding a man sitting on the floor, cradling his arms close to his body.

"Dammit," he cursed "get away from me you incompetent idiots. Stop the ship and find me that damn fruit!"

"Where?" the girl at my legs asked. Our presence went unnoticed. Nobody was paying attention to us appearing out of nowhere on their ship. Most were looking over the railing down below to the sea, searching for something. Ignoring us - that wouldn't do.

I put my mask over my face and said, "I think you might have lost something." My voice easily cut through their chitter.

Some of them jumped at hearing an unknown voice behind their backs, others didn't. What they all had in common - Without exception, all eyes, of everybody on deck, were suddenly trained on us.
There was surprise clearly displayed on most of their faces, with the sole exception being the face of the guy sitting on the ground.

He painstakingly stood up with the help of the men around him, taking great care not to use his hands. When he stepped out of the cluster his face showed nothing but anger. Addressing the girl at my feet he shouted.

"You damn brat – Do you even know how much money you just cost me. It wasn't enough that you somehow hid on this ship and made trouble. No, you had to steal two Devil-fruits... and then you idiot dared to take them hostage, and now look what you have done. One went overboard and the other I took a bite off by mistake."

True to his words there was a strangely formed fruit rolling around on deck missing a chunk behind his feet.

"I should have killed you the moment my eyes fell on you, instead of trying to sell you as a slave." He lamented "It would have been a fast clean death. But now... now you damn little hellspawn I'm gonna make you suffer. And somehow, someway I'm gonna use you until I get every single berry out of you, you fucking owe me!"

The girl just shrugged while scratching her ear. Nonchalantly she said.
"What did you expect would happen if you don't feed the best thief this world has ever seen – duh huh – idiot."

The men nearly had a heart attack at her dismissal of the devil-fruit. Her reaction was a stark contrast to her behavior just a few moments ago, as she tried to crab-crawl away from those sailors frantically looking around for a way out. My eyes fell on her hand now back at her side, trembling like a leaf.

That was all I needed to know. I grinned under my mask – She had some spunk. I loosened three strings of spider-silk rope and threw them behind me down the side of the ship. Their sticky ends clinging to the ship.

Back on the Sakura, my other iteration ignored the starstruck girls demanding an answer of what I just did and brought us alongside the ship.

"I'm gonna answer all your questions later – for now you are needed up there," I said and pointed up the deck of the other ship. "So, up you go."

The glare Hancock sent me promised a continuation of this discussion, without further protest, she and her sisters jumped over the railing the short distance separating our ships and used the ropes dangling from above and climbed them.

Meanwhile, this iteration moved to fully take in the reefed sails to bring the Sakura to a stop.

Hancock was the first to make it on deck, followed by Marigold and Sandersonia. Standing behind me, they took in their surroundings.
"Where the hell did you come from?" The injured guy demanded to know.

"These bitches are multiplying captain." Someone to his right said as he reached for the cutlass at his side. "Permission to take them down," he requested grinning, displaying his rotten teeth to us.

"Permission granted" the now as captain identified man said. "But take them alive, all of them. We have got some losses to make up for and you all know, damaged merchandise fetches a lower price."
His words diminished the earlier enthusiasm until he added. "but just this once I'll make an exception."

"That means Captain" someone inquired.

"No lasting damage," was his heavy with meaning answer. Smirking he added, "now get them."

Well, any reservations I might have had in not killing them disappeared after witnessing this particular display. Granted, it would have been criminally easy to do so, given how weak they were.

Instead, I said, "Girls take them down." I needn't to turn my head to know they were pleased by this turn of events. Being given a chance to take down slavers, to redeem themselves in their eyes ... perhaps it might even be enough to help them shake off the occasional nightmare they suffered. Who knows – but what I was sure of was, that it would be a great workout for them.

Because none of them was able to get down a single Rokushiki technique so far - even though they were close - allowing them to experience first hand, despite that, they actually made progress would do them some good. Furthermore, allowing them to fight here, with me ready to intervene made this situation as safe as it could possibly be short of a spar.

Getting a look at how they chose to fight might give me some insights into how to help them to develop their innate abilities even better.

For a moment, some doubts about the Rightness of my actions crept up. Stating they were kids, they should be playing, not fighting for their lives, least of all at my behest.

I squashed it – In this world, even in my old one. The luxury of being allowed to grow up away from the ugly side of life was not something many had the privilege to enjoy. Those girls lost their innocence the day they were captured by slavers. And no matter how much I wished for it, it was outright impossible to restore it. They were now irrevocably part of this world, and the only thing I could do for them was to make sure they would survive having to live in it.

The girls lost no time and stepped around myself and our blind passenger. The smiles on their opponents grew, assuming their victory to be a sure thing, most likely thinking of only myself as a moderate threat. Since I had a sword on my back and my appearance clad in an elaborate armored spider silk costume under my hooded ankle-length coat made it clear I meant business. My bug-themed mask just served to emphasize this.

But because I wasn't brandishing my weapon – it was just about teaching a few little girls a lesson.

A muscular bald man was the first to make a move trying to grab the three heads smaller Sandersonia from outside her line of sight. She slipped below his outstretched hands and found herself behind him with one precise kick against his right knee, which carried all his weight at that exact moment and broke.

With a deafening scream, his leg gave out. He fell down and curled into himself another perfectly aimed stamp, and she crushed his windpipe against the floor.

The earlier smiles they wore on their faces froze and were replaced by a serious grimace – Sanderonia display rattled them but not enough to abandon the fight. They drew their weapons, mostly consisting of swords and daggers. With the girls now registering as credible threats in their minds, they closed their ranks around the girls.

The first one to get near Marigold didn't fare any better. Marigold, instead of displaying a knack for where and when to strike with surgical precision, used what little basic she possessed of Busoshoku Haki and somehow got a thin unstable layer to form around her fist.

It wouldn't stand up to scrutiny or last for any length of time without needing to be reapplied, shaky as her skill with it turned out to be. But as it turned out, it was more than enough, to punch right through the sword her opponent brought in front of him to defend himself. The sword splintered into a thousand pieces, whereas Marigold's fist went on unobstructed to cave in his chest. The remainder of his body was sent flying, right through the railing into the sea.

Hancock downed her first opponent by letting him take a downward swing at her with his sword. She took a step back to get a hairbreadth out of the sword's reach and, in one fluid motion, made a backflip from a standing position. This allowed for her leg to connect cleanly with the chin of her attacker, who fancied himself outside of her reach. His under and upper jaw crashed into each other at high speeds. What little of rotten teeth remained in his mouth were pulverized.

His body was flung backward and crashed into two of his comrades standing right behind him. Taken by surprise, the unconscious body coming their way dragged them down to the ground in a tangled mess of limbs and opened up their lines even further.

I wasn't the only one to notice that at this point, with their encirclement broken, the crew of this ship essentially lost. They were just too stubborn or stupid to realize it. Their only chance to win would have been a concentrated effort of attacking the girls all at the same time. Creating a situation where evading everything got impossible and to make something stick, which at this point was a pipe dream.

The first successes of my girls had their spirits broken and cast them into disarray, uncoordinated attacks from opponents, who would like to do nothing more than to turn around and flee, just wouldn't be enough.

This was precisely why their captain had no other choice but to intervene. It was a now or never situation. He couldn't lose more of his men, since any further losses meant his people wouldn't be able to turn this around. Therefore, despite his injuries, he materialized an arm on the deck right behind Hancock. His intent was clear, an attempt to trip or, in case that should fail, unbalance her.

Which, if successful would have been fatal. Hancock clearly used a mobile, leg-favored combat style making great use of centripetal movements to gather the necessary force to deliver devastating attacks.

Some things she did kept reminding me more of what an Olympic gymnast would do than somebody in a fight, but it also meant she was susceptible to unintended or forced shifts in balance more so than her sisters.

I took a step forward and stamped down on the appendage reaching for Hancock's ankle and squashed it under my heel with little difficulty. If it would have been a real limb, mush consisting of blood and bone-splinters would have been found under and around my foot, instead of some flower petals.

Despite that, the damage I inflicted was still transferred back to the source and had him scream out as his already injured hand turned into a mangled mess.

A small dash of Soru and I came to a stop at the stern of the ship – a good 30 feet from my previous position behind the enemy captain. In a casual motion, I grabbed his jerkin and threw him overboard. A loud splash later and his screams of pains were silenced, for good.

I shifted my attention back to the fight, which was nearing its end. It looked like my initial assessment was right. Sandersonia preferred an evasion based style centered around fast and surgical precise counters strikes against weak points she could reach, like limbs and soft tissue.

Resembling a snake dancing around her prey and striking when least expected designed to inflict the most damage with the least expenditure of strength, which given her knack for Kenbunshoku Haki and her observation skills were the perfect match for her to maximize her effectiveness. No doubt she would profit the most from Kami-E and perhaps Shigan of the three of them.

Marigold on the other preferred a style centered on her hands. Her feet barely left the ground throughout the whole fight and only were repositioned to allow for a better transfer of power into her fists. You might have gotten the impression that she was rooted to the ground like a thousand-year-old tree, and every one of her punches she unleashed on her opponents generated the power of said tree collapsing around them.

Although she clearly lacked the flexibility, speed, and foresight of her sisters, she made up that deficit in the strength, endurance, and sturdiness department many times over. With her clear disposition towards Busoshoku Haki and her immobile and steadfast combat style, hardening her body with the use of Tekkai would easily increase her resilience and offensive power manifold even before Haki came into play. This would allow her to weather her opponent's attack and waste them with her own juggernaut attacks.

In Hancock's case, it was a similar clear cut case – Rankyaku was probably gonna end up being the Rokushiki technique she would gonna get out the most of.

It was apparent the kids had prior training – someone must have coached and even helped them develop their fighting styles because they perfectly catered to their respective strengths.

The more I got to know about them, the more it became clear that those Amazons must be a force to be reckoned with if their children receive this kind of training. And those were just the individual strengths they showcased, their teamwork was immaculate. They had a perfect understanding of each other, they not only knew the current position of each other, they knew where the others would move and what they would do without even looking. - It wasn't a Haki thing the only one perhaps far enough in her training to manage that was Sandersonia - To get to this level of teamwork, that they worked in tandem like a well-oiled machine, required hundreds of hours of concentrated teamwork drills. The Undersiders at the peak of our ability were nowhere near that good when it came to teamwork – we came not even close.

One such display of teamwork in that short fight stood out - when Sandersonia's opponent prevented her from closing the distance by wildly swinging around his sword. Without prompting Marigold gave Hancock a leg up and catapulted her over the head of Sanderonia and with a perfect somersault that devolved into a guillotine dropkick. The head of their enemy went through the planks – not that he noticed – he was out the second Hancock foot connected with the top of his head.

The fight wound down when a roundhouse kick from Hancock downed the last of them. The girls were all breathing hard but came out of it otherwise unhurt.

Some of them were still breathing, and under different circumstances, I could have afforded to let them live. On the ocean with a crew of three girls and what I assumed they had in their cargo hold made that into a non-viable option. They had to go – the faster, the fewer problems they would generate in the long run.

"Strip them of their valuables and then throw them overboard," I said to the girls and then made my way down the stairs into the belly of the ship. "I'm gonna take a look around – shouldn't take long."

My younger self would probably berate me for having three young girls first kill some people and then make them do the work of a mortician and heave the bodies into their wet graves. What she, on the other hand, would agree with was that I couldn't allow for any of the girls to set a foot down here and even she might concede the point the best way to do that would be giving them something to do.

It was bad enough that some of them might be aware of what they would find here – Sandersonia definitely was.

When I reached the base of the stairs. I ignored the cots, and the supplies stacked right and left and moved to the aft of the ship. I came to a stop when a heavy metal door blocked my path. Trying to open it the conventional way made it clear that someone must have locked it after the pink-haired girl somehow escaped.

I didn't have the time nor the inclination to look for the key. Which I suspected by now had reached the ground of the ocean hanging around the neck of their captain.

The padlock succumbed to a hard yank from my hand. I opened the door and stepped through into a barely lit room. The only light illuminating the room came from a lamp behind me. I didn't need to wait for my eyes to adjust to knowing what I would come to see but did so anyway.

The room was two stories high, the whole star and backboard side were lined with cubical metal cages. In every single one of them was a person, held like animals.

Their skin in various shades of pale white – an indicator that they didn't see the sun for extended periods of time. If they wore anything, it was for the most part just rags, and clothes, in general, were far more sparsely found on the women than on the men.

I balled my hand into a fist. Suddenly I regretted not having paid their captain the attention he was due.

It took a single step inside for me to be hit, with the stench of human feces, sweat, and blood... I'd rather avoid thinking too hard on what else might be mixed in with that. With a hand in front of my mask which had nearly no effect to suppress the smell.

"The crew of this ship is no more – I'm now gonna release all of you. But before I do that is anybody in here who knows how to operate a ship of this size?" I asked.

The first reaction I garnered was unintelligibly grunting then disbelief and then the murmuring started.

I had no time for this – I needed to be done here and gone before the girls were finished with their task. They definitely didn't need a reminder of what happened to them. I materialized Kain and Lilith on my shoulder blades, and they sprung into action opening those cells – an easy feat with their sharp claws and a little bit of Haki.

A small burst of Haoshoki Haki directed their way – nowhere near enough to make a human subservient – was all it took to get them to shut up.

"I asked you a question and, I want it answered, or I'm gonna leave you in your cages – Is that understood?" I stressed with a dangerously low tone.

"Yes, here ..." someone said, interrupted by a cough. "I served as the first mate on a trading ship." From there, the dam broke, and around a dozen more people followed, all stating various degrees of experience with sailing. That was good enough for me.

Sure they were all in bad shape – but that was nothing, a few good meals and some sunlight couldn't fix with time, and as it so happened, this ship was stocked with food.
Therefore I had no problems leaving them to their selves.

"Good – This ship has everything you need to reach a harbor. I advise you to do just that."

With that out of the way, I turned around and left. The last padlock fell away from a cage a moment later, and its inmate stumbled into his newly won freedom. Kain and Lilith caught up to me as I reached the stairs.

The first thing I saw when I emerged from below deck was the pink-haired girl kneeling above one of the still-living slavers. Her hand was touching his cheek, and I could see how he aged in fast motion, from a thirty-something-year-old to somebody I would have pegged a hundred or more years in age.

Satisfied by the result, she removed her hand. Hancock and Sandersonia then took a step forward and picked the skin and bones he was atrophied into up and, in a concentrated effort, threw him over the railing.

"Thanks, Bonney-chan – doing your thing makes it easier to get rid of them," Hancock said.

So that must have been what she tried to do to me back on the Sakura. Either some kind of draining ability or a time manipulating striker power – Could be dangerous when she actually manages to get close enough to use it.

"Let's go," I said to my crew without looking at them. I made three steps when I noticed that nobody was following me. I stopped in my tracks. I needn't turn around to know that Hancock was fidgeting as were the other two. They shared a glance, and then Hancock began to speak.

"Onee-sama, we were wondering if Bonney-chan can join our crew – you know she wants to be a thief, and we thought ... that ..." was as far as she came when she lost confidence.

"she would make a good addition to our crew. Every Pirate crew needs a thief." Sandersonia took up the slack.

"It is known," Marigold added.

When did they have the time to befriend Bonney - was it - let alone come up with the idea to recruit her and prepare a request to that effect. I was only gone for a few minutes.

I sighed, I really should have known when I saw an aura similar to the Boa sisters around Bonney that I wouldn't get rid of her that easy. Seems there really was something to this fate-spider thing, after all. Or was there? They were three girls away from home. It was clear that they wouldn't want to let go of the first acquaintance their own age they met after weeks on the sea with only interaction being with each other and myself.

Admittedly she had a useful Devil-fruit – one that could be dangerous in the wrong hands – Then again, a girl more or less shouldn't make a great difference. It would certainly be safer for her to come with us than allow her to stay with ...

My mind came to a screeching halt – I searched my memories, and no. I wasn't wrong. There wasn't a single child in any of those cages - only adults. Given the numbers of prisoners and the fact that children are usually easier to catch, not to speak easier to indoctrinate... there should be more children present if those slavers went after what they could get.

But just one – something wasn't right.

I turned around and crossed my arms in front of my chest "Sure, I'll allow it – After I'm told what you can really do. The full scope – no holding back" I said in a stern voice.

"What gave it away?" Bonney asked.

"You are the only child on this whole vessel," I answered.

"I see – then it can't be helped I guess." She shrugged with her shoulders, "as you might have already guessed. I can steal store and transfer life forces – this comes with the side effect that I can use this life force for myself," she said and to demonstrate she became younger and younger until she reached what I would think was the age of a two-year-old. She was near to drowning in her own clothes "I can also do the reverse steal my own life force and add it to my reservoir." This time she became older much older – she passed twenty, thirty and stopped as she reached her sixties, with her pink hair partially turned grey.

It was now obvious why she wore those suspenders. It was the only way her loose-fitting clothes wouldn't get lost when she drastically changed her age. With her demonstration done she returned to her eight-year-old self.

"How old are you really," I asked.

"I'm not sure – where I'm from we didn't exactly celebrated our birthdays. This," she pointed at her current self, "is what I looked like when I ate some strange fruit."

I couldn't be entirely sure she wasn't lying to me – Her aura was steady and didn't imply otherwise, but I couldn't rule out that she was just a notorious liar. Then again, the maturity over what I suspected was her years, could be explained by a harsh upbringing and malnutrition. She was just skin and bone... that the effects of the latter weren't more pronounced could be another side effect of her power. Substituting nutrition with life-force.

"She can come with us," I said. For now, I was appeased -

I jumped down on the deck of the Sakura and the girls followed sliding down the rope. My other iteration set the sails and we remerged as I moved to the helm.

"Onee-sama are you now going to tell us how there can be two of you," Sandersonia asked, obviously still remembering me using my Devil Fruit.

"It is magic, it has to be," Marigold stated.

"So Bonney can use magic too," Hancock interjected starstruck. "You have to tell us all about that. My sister and I really want to know how to do magic."

"Only if we don't have to use blood to do it," Marigold said as she moved closer to Bonney "I don't like needles."

"What are you talking about?" Sandersonia wondered walking over to them. "Bonney didn't use any needles or blood, or did you see her use any? So it must work different a chant perhaps... wholly consisting of unpronounceable words."

Bonney seemed to get increasingly uncomfortable with the Boa sister standing around her and pestering her about "magic".

"Stupid – If they are unpro ... unpronninciable – or whatever" Hancock frustrated gave up to get it right "how could she say them in the first place. No, there has to be another explanation... Bonney has to be a witch."

"A witch, what is that," Sandersonia asked.

"I know – it's somebody like Yosei-Onee-sama," Marigold said.

"Can't be – witches are strong." Sandersonia said eying the overwhelmed Bonney "she isn't."

"She must be. She has a witch's power." Hancock mysteriously said "You'd better not doubt a witch. It could anger her to use her witch powers on you."

Oh boy -
I could see the shudder running through Sandersonia's body even from where I was standing, and I knew I had to stop Hancock now from filling her sister's head with her made-up stories lest I would end with girls unable to sleep at night.

"Girls, stop that. I'll explain..."


Authors Note: If it wasn't clear. That one "slaver" ate the Hana Hana no Mi Robin´s canon Devil-fruit. Some might wonder, how he was able to grow limbs on board the Sakura since Robin fruit seemed to be sight dependant. Well, I don't think it to be sight dependant there are a few panels that indicate otherwise. I think she sort of has a range (measured in Hanas according to Oda) and in that she can identify surfaces that can be used to "grow" a limb. With them being on the open ocean the Sakura was the only other location where this was possible. And indeed the "slaver" got a really fast handle on how to use the very basic of this power.

In regards to Bonney – I fear that including her in the crew will come to haunt me. One of the great many problems writing a fanfic to an uncompleted original work is that some things aren't known by the time the fic is written ... and I have a feeling that Bonney might come to play a major part in the future One Piece canon (the hints are there – ) and that her past will be fully disclosed ...which given some theories can range from her being a Charlotte (resemblance to Big Mom, similarities in their devil fruit powers ...) to being hundreds of years old.

So everything I come up with when it comes to her, most certainly at one point will turn out to be wrong. Which more than likely won't be changed/retconnced by me later – so just bear with me in that regard -

Her Devil-fruit power: I will go with the interpretation that she can steal the life-force of living creatures (including herself) and store it to be used later on. Either to make herself or others younger by transferring that lifeforce – those effects are permanent and her power requires a touch, no extra conditions necessary- A Worm typical striker power. The speed of how fast she can do that is dependant on her training ... so at the beginning, it will take some time ...
 
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Bonney is basically a level grinder's dream, being able to extent the life of other individuals at the cost of their enemies.
Without a time limit and a fully serious batch of participants, this could mean a superiorly drilled crew with decades of experience, still at their prime.
 
About DF, I think Taylor would research the effects of fruits in a book. I would like DF users to be changed, it would be something that would differentiate their fic.
ps. The fic is yours, it's just my opinion.
 
I don't know when Robin ate the Hana Hana no mi but I think it's still possible. After all I doubt she buy it ^^ She probably found it after it 'respawn' so the fact that it respawn earlier can still work with that.
 
I don't know when Robin ate the Hana Hana no mi but I think it's still possible. After all I doubt she buy it ^^ She probably found it after it 'respawn' so the fact that it respawn earlier can still work with that.
In the original timeline she had it on Ohara, so that got me offguard. However this is an AU, so we'll see how it goes.
That was a good way to show that it's one of the things that are different from canon.
 
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In the original timeline she had it on Ohara, so that got me offguard. However this is an AU, so we'll see how it goes.
That was a good way to show that it's one of the things that are different from canon.
It's a clue about what happened to her aka she didn't get to eat it but she's good a running so its fine or maybe she got another one like the zip zip fruit
 
Please keep in mind that this happened in the rainbow mist. As in the Eldritch anomaly that laughs at your primitive preconceptions of time.
That devil fruit was set free now, but that doesn't mean anything.
When it emerges it might go through a few more owners and still be eaten by Robin before she turns 5 (I have no idea what age she actually cannonically eats it)
 
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Unlikely, only Zoans have different versions of the same "type".

It's presumably also why only Zoan Fruits can be replicated with SMILES.

A idea is that there is multiple hana hana no mi fruit
No, in this case it's Rainbow Mist timey-wimey wibbly-wobbly bullshit as opposed to Devil Fruit bullshit. Nameless slaver captain's short lived use of the Hana-Hana Fruit was as a previous or later one than Robin.
 
Chapter 10 - Ohara
Chapter 10: Ohara (1502 – two years prior to Taylors Arrival)

Captains Log: 23.01.1506


By now, it has been a little over a month that Bonney joined our little crew. So far, she seems to have integrated seamlessly. For the most part, Hancock is to thank for that. Without her including Bonney in everything she and her sister do, it might not have been so easy.

Bonney is an odd kid, intelligent and usually subdued, but when it comes to food, she changes into a gluttonous extroverted little monster.

At first, I thought her recent captivity has to be the reason for that behavior. Since the prisoners Bonney included showed signs of malnutrition that she was overcompensating. Eating, what she was denied, during the time she spent in a cage, like an animal. I assumed it would normalize overtime when she realizes that there is no longer a shortage of food. Especially after she regained the bodyweight she must have lost.

Unfortunately, it was not to be. Even after weeks of her never leaving a table hungry it continued. Strangely enough, she put on some weight to the level one would expect a girl her age to be, but then she stopped gaining weight for some reason. Despite her unchanged eating habits, the training she joined in with the others, and her muscle gain in time doesn't account for all those calories she ingests.

If so, the Boa sisters who eat a fraction of what she does would be in quite a bit of trouble since it would mean they were underfed for quite some time, which clearly wasn't the case.

For now, I put it down under Devil-Fruit shenanigans since I can't come up with another reasonable explanation, and it is unlikely I will without consulting a doctor. I mention this because we are now trapped in this rainbow mist for exactly 39 days. If I also count the time since our departure from Shaboady, it adds up to 60 days on sea.

60 days of uninterrupted sea-travel, if not for that little encounter with those slavers.

Slowly but surely, our provisions are depleting - we stretch the time that the provisions will last us with fishing for food, and collecting the rain helps us with our water supply. Despite that, I assume we won't have much time until we inevitably end up with deficiency symptoms of some kind.

In this world, there are no freezers. Therefore the ways to preserve food are severely limited. While producing dried fruits is a known procedure, it is not commonly used, which makes it rare and expensive. The very limited supply we, thankfully, had onboard lasted us till today, with it now at an end, I suspect it won't be long until the first of us begins to show symptoms.

This usually wouldn't be so much of a problem, with the few eternal Pose and the Log Pose we have onboard, we could make way for an Island.

But we find ourselves in extraordinary circumstances since this rainbow mist seems to prevent the Poses, no matter which, from functioning properly.

All they do since the moment we entered the mist is spinning uncontrollably - unable to point us in a direction.

We are stuck inside with no way out of it. The only form of navigation we have. If I can even call it, that is the ability I gained from the fate-spider. An invisible thread, originating from my chest extending into the fog. In default of any other viable options, I have us follow where it was leading.

But with every additional day that we got nowhere. I feel more and more like Theseus. I just hope I could trust my Ariadne. Because I'm unable, despite more than just trying, to make any sense of her mind her memories. Hell - even just looking through the fate Spider eyes has me suffering vertigo. Like she possessed senses that just wouldn't translate to my human mind. As if her senses grant her access to an additional layer of reality existing and perceiving things in a different manner than everybody else.

In the past I had a similar problem with some of the bug senses - it took time getting used to them which is why I originally only relied on their sense of touch and suppressed their other sensory impressions. This is similar but a thousand times worse. I can't see myself getting a grip on this any time soon. I just hope it won't be too late by then.

The girls training proceeds smoothly. They are ahead of the curve I estimated they would follow. It is most likely due to Bonney since Hancock took her under her wing. The novelty of having another girl train with them seems to have reinvigorated their motivation.

With Hancock already able to use a bastardized version of Soru and able to use Geppou for a few minutes. I'm confident her sister won't take much longer to get there too. This also means that the day I have to make my decision, if I should allow them to eat a Devil-Fruit is getting closer with every passing day.

I'm not sure what they would decide to do given the option. They showed some interest in Bonney Devil Fruit ability and my own but eventually lost interest in the topic - Accepting the fact and then moving on.

At least for the most part. After I showed them, a few things I can do with my power, including Kain and Lilith. My spiders sort of ended up as our mascots, the girl's new pets, so to say.

I could glean some information from the girls while cooing over them.
The amazons have a long history of having snakes as pets and companions which is reflected in their Pirate flag. A human skull surrounded by clockwise oriented snakeheads.

Even now weeks later, the girls leave no opportunity out to pet them. I would have expected this behavior would weaken with time. But no such luck. The girls even forbade me, to fuse them back into me.
For this very reason, Kain and Lilith have taken up residency in the crows nest. The only place they are spared from the girl's overbearing affection ... well for the most part.


With a smile on my lips, I signed my logbook entry and closed it. I was getting back in the hand of writing things in my old cipher I used to make notes about my powers back in the day. Given some things I wrote in this book, I thought it prudent to take every precaution to make its contents as safe as I could manage.

I looked upwards and saw Sandersonia, again, climbing the mast to pet and cuddle them or any of their many smaller and therefore cuter offspring, who also use the crows nest as a sanctuary.

"Sandersonia, leave the spiders alone," I said. "They are sleeping."

"I know Onee-sama that's why I want to see them. They are so cute when they are sleeping atop of each other." She cooed.

I just shook my head. - girls.

I pushed myself to my feet from my position on the ground and took a step to my right in order to not be overrun by Bonney. She was closely followed by Marigold.

"Give it back," she demanded.

"No, I'm a thief. We don't just give back the things we have stolen. You have to catch me first." Bonney said grinning from the stern of the ship as Marigold slowly moved closer. Her hands spread out ready to obstruct Bonney's way past her at a moment's notice.

This didn't cow Bonney in the slightest, she used the few feet she had as a run-up and allowed herself to be directed towards the railing. But instead of closing all avenues of escape, Marigold thought her herding might result in. Bonney used the railing as a springboard and just jumped over Marigold. She landed right next to me in a crouch, grinning over both ears with her haul clasped in her hands.

With a swift hand swipe, I took it away from her. She looked at me with disbelief plastered on her face.

"A thief shouldn't allow herself to be stolen from this easy," I told her with a straight face.

As it turned out, the object in my hands was a rolled parchment. Opening it up revealed a drawn portrait of Marigold. Another one of Hancock attempts to get her drawing skill up to snuff for her to feel confident enough to tackle our flag.

A superficial glance showed me that she got better. She demonstrated a talent for drawing when she first started. A talent that was clear to see by now.

I handed it over to Marigold, who immediately pressed it close to her chest and gave Bonney an evil glare.

"So you wanna elaborate why you decided to steal from Marigold?" I asked with a raised eyebrow and stern voice.

If I didn't know any better, the frequency with which those events occurred, - Bonney stealing something - might have gotten me thinking that she was a kleptomaniac. If not for her explanation, which with some small changes stayed the same since the first incident.

"To train Onee-sama, how often do I have to repeat myself for you, to finally get it," she said agitated.

"Remind me again, what kind of training." I wondered feigning ignorance.

"Anti-theft training, of course. Marigold has to learn to defend her possessions against thieves the Grand Line is full of them," she said grinning.

So this time, it is theft-training, no longer vigilance or endurance or any of the half dozen other excuses she used in past.

"And you are the best and worst of them all," I played along.

"Exactly - If she can keep her stuff save from me, she needn't fear any other thieves."

"Right -" I said. It was only a half-truth. She was also training herself in being a better thief.

"If that would be true, why aren't you stealing from my sisters," She asked.

Bonney shrugged and walked away.
The answer to Marigold's question being, because Bonney knew better than to mess with the others. Sandersonia was too aware of her surroundings, foiling her attempts to steal something from her right at the start, and Hancock was currently faster than her.

Something, I was sure wouldn't last. I suspected that she would try to excel at Soru. Her Devil Fruit, personality, and self-chosen profession all pointed in that direction, and she happened to be the fastest of the lot, not accounting for the others using any Rokushiki techniques.

I suspect that the moment she makes some headway in that direction, Sandersonia and Hancock once more become possible targets in order to keep her own and their skills sharp.

It was one of the reasons I didn't put my foot down and stopped this. The other it wasn't down maliciously at the end if she got caught or not Bonney always handed back what she stole undamaged.

The Boa sisters knew it was all in good faith. So they always left it at a token protest, humoring Bonney. There has yet to be a retaliation of any form, and with Marigold preparing the meals she was in the prime position to teach Miss gluttony a lesson. But chose not to - not sure if wasting food this would undoubtedly result in, played a part in her decision making.

Either way, I appreciated it. As the Cook, and as a direct consequence, thereof the rationing of food was an important task on any ship, and I was glad she was up for it.

I noticed the fog was getting thinner as I was able to see further.

Suddenly the fog lifted itself, and we saw something else than the milky hue we were surrounded with for too long.

There was an Island a few kilometers ahead of our ship. A huge tree towered over the small landmass, its branches ranging to the outer edges of it.

On the far side of the Island, I could make out a group of warships shooting salvo after salvo on land, the big tree, already on fire, was enduring the bombardment so far.

I recognized the tree immediately. There was no doubt this was Ohara. The tree of knowledge was the huge giveaway, and if I was right in this, we just stumbled onto the Buster Call that wiped out the entire Island and killed every one of its inhabitants.

At the very same moment, I had this thought; another ship came into my view. Given its size and the strength of the presence on board, I could sense from it; there clearly were only civilians on board. Survivors evacuating the Island? But I thought there were none before the realization of what was about to happen hit me. The ship went up in a huge explosion; destroyed by the concentrated fire of the warships.

"Hard backboard," I ordered. "Get us out of the sight of those ships. Use the Island as cover and hide us on the opposite side of them."

I knew this couldn't protect the ship from being detected via Kenbunshoku Haki, since only I could completely erase any trace of my presence, but it might buy me some time to find Robin, and perhaps with her the answers I sought.

"Hancock you are in command, circle the Island the way I told you," I said. "Should you get discovered use your own judgment to address the situation. But keep in mind nothing is as important as your lives."

"Where are you going Onee-sama?" she asked.

"I'm just going to take a look around," I said ominously and vanished with a Soru. I immediately suppressed my presence to the best of my abilities. Erasing the average civilian presence I usually emitted.

For the first time in quite a while I set my foot on solid ground, it was not like I actually missed it. But there was a slight feeling of longing that was hard to deny existed. I just hoped it could be satisfied under better circumstances.

A few short Soru burst brought me closer to the center of the island, where the population center was located. From the edge of the small town, I saw people running away. Most of them were Marines, their uniforms leaving little doubt about their affiliation, but I also saw another group accompanying them.

Men in Black Suits, given the demeanor the fact they also were armed, and the occasional look for guidance leveled towards them from the regular Marines, made it clear they were working together in some fashion.

Some high-ranking members of the World Government, which were not directly integrated into the hierarchy perhaps?

None of them took notice of me, although I did nothing to hide from their eyes or paid any attention to their surroundings.

Their minds solely focused on escaping. I took a step further inside the town when I noticed it. The smell of burnt human flesh permeated the air, a smell I, unfortunately, grew accustomed to such a degree that I had no problem in recognizing it.

Despite the omnipresent fire, explosions, and the in part panicked screams of the fast retreating Marines. I could sense a group of people milling around in the depths of the tree of knowledge.

Which I realized now that I was closer, turned out to be a human-made structure. The huge tree was grooved out, like a building with the difference, that it wasn't built but grown. It must have been an incredibly arduous task to manage that without killing the tree in the process and spoke volumes of the people that lived here.

Unfortunately, this would be one more monument of human ingenuity, that I would witness being destroyed. The flames were already licking at its base, fast working their way upwards. There were the occasional impacts of cannon-fire on the tree bark, but so far the tree weathered it.

No wonder, given the thickness of the wood. Without the fire consuming it, I was certain the tree could have withstood it for years.

My curiosity piqued by what was going on inside the tree, I decided to take a look. I let my gaze roam the tree and found an open window at roughly the same height and distance I sensed people at. The unusual thing about it was, that at irregular intervals books were thrown out of it. They all landed in the small lake under the window at the bottom of the tree.

A few Geppo-steps through the air brought me to the outer edge of the window.

I barely made a step inside, as I already had to dodge books that were thrown recklessly my way. Only for the books to land outside with a splash inside the lake. Marking the start of them sinking down the bottom next to all the others already there. Within moments of my appearance, all the work ceased and the people present were looking at me with suspicion.

A battered up tall white-haired woman in her mid-thirties was the first to address me.

"Did they grew impatient?" she hissed, "Does it take too long for them to see us burn to death? Is that why they sent you here?

I raised an eyebrow at those allegations and was about to correct her when an elderly man preempted me. He uprighted himself behind the woman, where he was busy clearing out the bottom shelve of a bookcase, and laid his hand on her shoulder. This immediately served to let the woman lapse into silence and she slightly turned her head to give the man an inquiring gaze.

The man was old, he looked like a three and a half leaf glover come alive, the hairs of his beard and two strangely formed pigtails sprouting from the back of his head together resembled the petals of an upside-down three leaves glover. Whereas his Iroquois hair-style resembled the stem, even his hair had a slight green touch to it, reminiscent of a plant.

"Olivia calm down and take a look at her. She clearly isn't a Marine." He admonished the woman, now identified as Olivia, and then refocused his attention on me "But that begs the question why you are here young woman?"

Olivia interrupted his inquiry.
"It doesn't matter why she is here. we don't have time for this. In case you forgot we are about to be burned alive and the same goes for all the irreplaceable knowledge in those books, so stop standing around and get moving!" She ordered.

The other people present who had halted their activities resumed them without delay. Only the leaf glover guy, didn't ignore me. I didn't need to be a precog to know they would never be able to save all the books in the time it would take for the fire to reach them and the tree to burn down.

When it did they would all share the fate of what they so relentless tried to save. Of course, assuming the constant cannon-bombardment from the Marine ships didn't weaken the tree stem sooner and it collapsed around them all.

I took a second and marveled at their dedication to preserve knowledge they even at the cost of their own lives.

But this wasn't why I was here, and I doubted any one of them would pause to answer my questions until all the books were safe.

I turned around and jumped out the window, a few steps through the air, and I was above the source of the fire raging to bring down the tree. It was clear at first glance, putting out the fire would be delicate work. A burst of air too strong could bring the severely damaged tree down. If it is too weak, it wouldn't stop the fire but might end up fueling it instead, for it to return even stronger.

I took my time to gauge the exact needed force, and when I was certain I clapped my hands hard together, the resulting shockwave of fast-moving air in every direction blew out the fire like a three-year-old would have done to her birthday cake candles.

This should buy us some time, hopefully the Marines wouldn't come investigate the reason the fire stopped and just keep firing in the hopes to relit it. This was also the reason I refrained from deflecting or blocking any of the cannon-balls exploding around us. Because in doing so, I might risk alerting them to my presence even if they couldn't sense me.

I returned inside the library and was received by a horde of people staring at me. The curiosity I saw reflected in their eyes was one I would have expected to see in a scientist shortly before he took out his scalpel to dissect a newly discovered specimen.

A cold shiver ran down my spine when I remembered the last time I was on the receiving end of such a stare – fucking Bonesaw – It took me a moment to shake off the unpleasant feeling.

Without addressing them, I walked into the middle of the multi-floor library.

"You better hold onto something, it will get windy in here," I said.

I left it at that warning and slowly started to spin on the spot, getting faster with every completed circle. The books were ripped out, one after another, from the shelves they were placed onto and were carried along by the small Tornado I created. I increased my speed steadily in order to not inflict more damage on the books than absolutely necessary. I kept spinning until all the shelves were empty.

Following this, I came to an abrupt stop with another strong burst of wind every item suspended in the air was blown outside through the window I originally entered.

Doing this created an underpressure inside the room. The backlash of air filling it up again was enough to send all the people unbalanced by the first burst of air sprawling to the ground.

They all sat up and gave the now empty room a look over. The Leaf-Glover guy uttered: "My god," under his breath.

"I suggest we leave before the tree comes crashing down on us," I said to them. Before I managed to take two steps I saw Olivia's face contort in horror and I heard her say.

"Robin, I have to get to Robin." She scrambled to her feet but was unable to make a single step because I appeared right in front of her.

"Are you talking about Robin, Nico Robin?" I asked her.
She looked at me bewildered but caught herself from going places.

"Yes, that's the name of my daughter. She is out there" she mulled over what to say next and suddenly grabbed my upper arms and pleaded "please you have to protect her."

"Don't worry, I won't let anything happen to her." I paused. "After all she is the reason I'm here in the first place."

However, considering the people present in the room, Robin was no longer the only person who might have been able to help me. On the contrary, the chance that one of them could help me was, in fact, a lot higher.

This, of course, didn't stop me from trying to help a little girl. By now, there were only two other presences on the Island a small weak one, fitting the presence on would expect a child to have, and a really strong one. What alarmed me was, that the small one was getting closer to the other presence.

Despite what I sensed with my Kenbunshoku Haki, I had to be certain it really was Robin, which was why sent out a weak burst of Haoshoku Haki to make every insect on the island subservient to me. What I saw through countless eyes put me immediately on edge- Wordlessly I disappeared in a Soru.

As I reached the clearing next to the sea, I could make out two persons. One was a very tall man sitting on a wooden log and across from him stood a small child.

I just caught the tail end of their conversation with my own ears.

"... Absolute justice ... sometimes drives a man insane. I've decided to let you escape from this island ... A seed that Saul protected I wonder what it'll become ... It's none of my business against whom you'll bear a grudge, but be glad, that you have your life now. In the future ... try to live a life as ordinary as possible."

The words were spoken by the man. He had curly dark hair emerging in bangs from under his bonnet and framed his long slender face. The goggles he wore combined with his coat made him look really shady, which was further emphasized by talking to a little girl alone in the outskirts of a forest that transitioned into a beach.

The small row-boat swaying in the waves really didn't help that impression.

A child that looked awfully familiar. Black straight hair, a simple worn strapless dress, and tear-filled eyes was the first impression I got from her. A far cry from what she was depicted as on her wanted poster. She was no child of the devil. She was probably as far away from earning that epithet as you can get. I should know, I have met a certain bio-tinker for whom this description would be more than apt. Therefore I knew exactly what I was talking about.

"As if that would be possible after what happened here today," I said after I emerged from behind the trees and walked towards them. I was careful not to place myself directly in between them in order to not block their view of each other. We ended up standing in an isosceles triangle with the girl, who I identified without a doubt as Nico Robin to my left and the towering man to the right.

"You know where I come from there is a saying `those that burn books also burn people´, I never thought I would actually witness the truth of that statement. I always assumed it was hyperbole, a warning to make it clear to people, that burning books destroying the knowledge contained within is the first step of a long path that eventually ends with dead people. That just shows how naive I was in my younger days."

"Who are you?" the man questioned.

I couldn't resist to channel my inner Tattletale at the opening his question provided. Gods how I missed her.

"Well, wouldn't you like to know? I think just for today, I will be the guardian of Ohara and its inhabitants, especially of that little lady over there. Which, to be frank, puts me at quite odds with you.
I mean, as noble as the sentiment is, not to kill a kid. Doing so because another person died protecting her, a person you killed, and in doing so, robbed her of that little protection she had does not tell me good things about your moral compass. Would you even have had any compunction or second-guessed your actions if not for this Saul person?"

There was only silence as a response.

"Didn't think so. Well I really hope the other marines out there aren't such radiant paragons of virtue like you, but considering what I have seen so far, you probably can be counted among the best of them, which doesn't reflect well on you lot, at all."

"Are you done mocking me?" he asked.

"Oh, I haven't even started yet. Just out of curiosity, what exactly do you think would have been the life like for an eight-year-old girl known to be able to decipher the Poneglyps? A life you so graciously saved, alone out in the world possessing the ability to uncover what happened during the void century, able to read the Road Poneglyps leading to Raftel. Surely you can't be, that naive in thinking that the glorious world government who didn't shy back to slaughter the inhabitants of a whole island, in order to keep that secret from getting out, making an example out of them - Thereby warning anyone of attempting to do the same - wouldn´t come after her the moment they learned of her survival. After all, you are working for that very Organisation. Given your rank insignia, you are pretty high up there in the chain of command. Shouldn't you know about their... crimes"

When he didn't respond I added.

"Oh another round of silence, why is that? Can't you face the truth to what life you just condemned her to? Constantly being on the run, unable to trust anybody the moment a bounty is placed on her head. Because there won't be anyone, not even the civilian populace, not after the riches such an easy mark provides. You sentenced her to a living hell, killing her would have been a mercy compared to that."

His countenance hardened into a mask of determination, and then he moved.

I hadn't much time to think things through.
If this guy was anything like me, I wouldn't be able to change his mind after a goal was placed in front of him. With four other strong presences close by, I couldn't take any chances.

Especially with one of them being equal in strength to this one, the remaining three were weaker, but not by much. Fighting all five of them, at the same time at that, would be a problem, one I might not be able to overcome. Since I wasn't willing to risk the lives of my crew nor Robins for a misplaced sense of morality. I was left with little choice, I couldn't afford to show him any mercy, which is why I didn't.

I deflected his punch aimed at Robin with a shoulder check from my left side to his right underarm. This diverted his attack, and he only hit empty air. I noticed a short flicker of surprise on his face as he recognized his fatal mistake. By then, it was too late to regret it. I was already within his guard Izanami unsheathed gripped by my hands angled low poised to strike for a diagonal rising cut, and strike I did. I poured everything into it to make sure to end it in one clean strike.

My sword flashed upwards. It entered his body from his left hip and left it under his right shoulder, severing his body in two. He staggered for a moment, disbelief clearly written on his face emphasized by the softly spoken "Oh, my" he brought over his lips until his body registered it had just died. He managed an unceremonial step backward and then fell down both parts of his body separated by ten-centimeter guts and blood exposed in the rift between them.

A short glance over my shoulder made it clear to me how close Robin came to dying. Behind her was a trench of pure ice that froze the landscape for dozen of meter rock solid. He must have been a logia-type devil-fruit user no wonder he was surprised when I was able to make contact with his body, and he thought me, not being a threat. A Haki user in West-Blue, especially someone with such a weak presence I allowed him to glimpse of me surely couldn't ever hope to touch him.

`Pride comes before the fall´, came to mind as I looked at his dead body at my feet.

Despite what I had said, I had no intention to manipulate him into attacking. I just wanted to gauge the person responsible for Robin's cruel fate, to find out the motives behind his actions.

I wanted to know if he was a good person with good intentions that found himself working for an organization that perverted his ideals. Therefore, he was trying to do the most good within the boundaries the organization set for him. Even going as far as to disregard some of the orders given when the opportunity presented itself.

Or was he something else? Someone who, for the most part, agreed with the actions taken here today? Just not when it came to killing kids, the innocent? Was he someone who just couldn't stomach the murder of kids or was he a hypocrite that was okay with it only if he himself had not to do it with his very own hands? Or was he just some twisted fuck, for whom it wasn't enough to have everybody the girl ever knew killed and saw the opportunity to torment her for the rest of the very short life she had in front of her after this incident?

In one of the former cases, I might have been able to get him to cooperate, a bounty for a little kid is no way acceptable. However, in the latter cases, this situation was a great opportunity to rid the world of him, because if he really turned out to be such a twisted person. He sooner or later would have come after Robin, after us. So I thought it would be better to remove him from the board now before he could become a problem later on.

What I didn't expect was this conflicted person thinking he would be doing her a favor by saving her life, without any further help on his part. Did he think it would be easy or manageable for an eight-year-old girl to survive in this world with a bounty on her head, never to be able to trust anyone for the rest of her life?

But to think my justified objections would get him to the point where he tried to mercy kill her, was unexpected. When all I wanted was for him to go all-in with helping her and not do it half-heartedly.

I was painfully reminded of one of the worst deeds of my life when I killed a girl even younger than Robin, a toddler, for what end exactly?

I was not a person who constantly looked back and analyzed every past action. Regret always seemed like a pointless endeavor, learning from one's mistakes I could understand but asking yourself what you could have done differently and lamenting having acted this or that way - that was just not me.

Still, I couldn't deny that I lay awake more than one night and thought back to Aster - and asked myself; Was it really necessary to kill her?
Every time the answer I give myself was yes - that even if, the assumption we operated under was wrong, that Aster trigger and resulting power could lead to the end of the world. As we later came to learn, there was nothing short of killing her that would have spared her the eternal torture at the hands of Grey Boy.

We, I had no other option -

Nonetheless, on particularly bad days, I found myself back in that situation, and there was this niggling doubt that came to the forefront of my mind - Did I really exhaust any option?

To be perfectly honest, even years later, after the fact, I had no definite answer to this question. If I had, I was certain, I would no longer be confronted with it.

The only thing I was sure of was that right here, right now. I found myself in a similar situation. Was this the universe attempt at a joke? Was this karma?

I honestly didn't know, and I was not sure I cared. Because this time, I found myself definitely on the right side of things. This time I could save the girl prevent the bad things from happening, and maybe I could even atone for what I did. - silence the niggling for good.

The selfish reason, finding a way back home, didn't even play a part in my thought process when I acted.

I had not much time remaining, the strongest remaining presence already got agitated.

I separated myself in two splitting my power fifty-fifty. One half immediately erased her presence and moved at top speed to the other side of the Island to where the cordon of Marine Battleships was located. My other self turned its head and shouted at the top of my lungs out at sea. "HANCOCK!"

To flag her down, after Kain transformed into me send her my way.

My eyes landed on Robin, her body shivering, tears streaming down her face. While her eyes were fixed on the body lying next to me in the ever-increasing puddle of blood. I would have liked nothing more than to spare her from witnessing the death of a person no one should see something like this at her age. Hopefully one day she could forgive me for it.

A more cynical part of me mentioned that without the actions I took in defense of her - to forgive me - she might not have lived long enough to get the opportunity to do so.

A moment later Hancock arrived with a sloppy Soru next to us. My gaze wasn't directed at her, but towards the sky, at the fast-approaching presence.

"Take her out of here," I gestured at Robin. "Get as much distance between me and what is coming our way as fast you can. And Hancock, whatever you do, stay away from the ship."

"Got it Onee-sama." She said and reached for Robin's hand, softly prompting her to move. Robin, at first, didn't react, she clearly was under shock, just staring ahead of her. We didn't have time for this.

"Get her away from here, right fucking now!" I barked. Those words prompted Hancock to give up her considerate approach. Instead, she just grabbed Robin's and dragged the catatonic girl with her.

Satisfied, I put on my mask and finished donning it just in time because not a second later, a huge spheric mass of glowing viscous liquid dropped out of the sky like a meteor.

The impact unrooted the trees in the immediate area, and the steaming red hot liquid spilled out of the crater. There were hissing sounds, and smoke appeared everywhere it made contact with, anything other than stone. Trees without the liquid getting nowhere near them just ignited from the sheer heat coming off from it.

In the very midst of the crater a human emerged, his body slowly formed out of the lava. Again, I saw myself confronted with a marine. This one was easily as tall as the one whose dead body lay at my feet. He wore a white marine cap under a gray hood, that was part of his marine coat, designating him as someone with a rank of captain or above.

He looked at me in a way that left no room for interpretation regarding his intent.

"Surrender yourself immediately or die," he announced without a shred of emotion as if he was stating an immutable fact of what was about to happen. I saw lava dripping from his right hand, clenched into a fist in greedy anticipation.

I would have preferred to face someone with such a dangerous-looking devil-fruit while being whole, on the other hand, it wouldn't stay a one on one in that case. It seemed like I just had to hold out long enough for my other half to return from her little errand, divide and conquer wouldn't be the first time I had to use this tactic.

"Leave now and I won't kill you and everybody else wearing a uniform in the vicinity of this Island." I threatened back.

My counteroffer wasn't meant any less sincere. The difference was I would prefer not to make it a reality.

I saw the chaw of his square face clench hard, in a smooth well-practiced movement, he retreated his hand and punched the air in front of him aimed at my position. From his first emerged a huge blob of lava that flew my way at high-speed. I sidestepped it, only to have to dodge another one and another he was relentlessly attacking, trying to back me into a corner.

He was unsuccessful. I could read his movements far too easy and his attacks weren't nearly fast enough to trouble me, which was why I swayed left and right and avoided his attacks with the least amount of movement possible.

But for some reason, the fact that he was didn't even try another venue of attack put me on edge. By now, after more than a dozen failed attempts to nick me, even the dumbest person should be aware of how futile his attacks were and change them into something else, something with a greater chance of actually hitting me.

I dodged another blob of lava, and in order to do so, I had to move diagonally to my upper left instead of just left because there was a blob of lava right next to me, when the realization hit me.

He wasn't trying to hit me, he was preparing the stage, reducing my ability to move.

He must have concluded given the death of his comrade through a bisecting slash that I might have taken him by surprise either through speed or trickery. Therefore he took no chances, taking control of the battlefield, reducing and hampering any possible attack vectors.

Furthermore, by doing this he was taking away my ability to dodge, slowly chipping away at the territory I can step on safely. Even his arrival worked towards that goal. He was literally standing in a sea of magma and barely moved a step since he arrived, probably thinking himself untouchable being protected this way.

If I wouldn't have been used to fight in a similar way with my bugs. I probably would have noticed this far later than I did. This meant I couldn't afford to waste time.

Sure, I could start running away from him turn this into a moving battle, but I wasn't confident I could contain the fight this way, Hancock and Robin were still close by, and our ship wasn't that far from the coast.

Obviously, I would prefer if this whack job of a morally bankrupt organization wouldn't start using them as target practice or even worse attacking them in an attempt to draw me out.

This was also the reason I didn't send the girls back to the ship, given how they handled the refugee ship. I was sure someone trying to get off the Island would have triggered the use of drastic measures. It might even have brought all the marines here.

Therefore seeing what this guy was able to do while holding back, the four on one fight I didn't fancy a few moments ago, was now something I really didn't want to occur.

It was time to turn this up a notch. An overhead sword strike from me sent a vertical wind-blade his way. My attack ended up severing a blob of lava which was rapidly approaching me, in the process. As it turned out, he was no slouch more than just a blaster, because he evaded it by moving his right foot behind his left, leaving me facing his left side, an opening I intended to use.

Because I doubted his physical abilities came close to mine, I suspected he would be too slow to avoid an attack coming from behind.

With a combination of Soru and Geppo, I moved to my right outside of his line of sight, and behind him, my sword was mid-thrust aimed right at his heart when my Kenbushoku Haki screamed at me to get away.

I pushed as hard as possible against the air surrounding me and focused my Haki into a dome facing forward, encapsulating me in an attempt to shield me.

A moment later, I softly landed over a hundred meters away from him. I was barely able to avoid my opponent's violent eruption into a magma spewing explosion that leveled the whole area into a burning crater. In addition, it was raining ash and magma down from the sky.

Now I knew why Rayleigh said Logia fruit users are tricky to fight even if you can overcome their intangibility. They only had the need to use Haki when they defended against a Haki reinforced attack, their opponent, in most cases, wasn't so lucky. Depending on the specifics of their fruit it might be necessary to use Haki in order to protect oneself from the damaging nature it possesses.

Forcing you to spend far more energy in a long drawn out fight – therefore it was no wonder he wanted to drag this out -

It also became clear this wasn't the only reason he was trying to buy time. He probably thought the longer he was in a fight against me the greater the chances his comrades would notice and move to intervene on his behalf.

But when I just went for the kill, given his reaction, I came closer to success than he would have liked. He misjudged me, and I forced him to rely on a move of desperation to avoid dying. A move that at the same time also served as a distress signal. There was just no way anybody could miss the ash cloud darkening the sky.

Unfortunately for him, his actions backfired to an epic degree.

The explosion and the ascending ash clouds distracted the other three high ranking marines for just a single moment, in which their vigilance was reduced as they looked at the darkening sky. A moment my other half currently separated into three entities was waiting, hoping for, an opening big enough to move against them all and take them out in a single devastating surprise attack.

The chances of success to kill the three strongest with an iteration of myself, holding just one-sixth of my power, without an opening were slim to nonexistent. If only one of them somehow survived my initial attack, thereby putting the remaining ones on edge. I would be in for a fight I couldn't afford and most likely not win.

I needed to take them all out in a single devastating attack. Thankfully Lava boy delivered exactly what I required of him.

My three clones moved in unison the instant I sensed his attack. A Soru burst brought one of me right behind the second strongest remaining presence, and I put my Haki reinforced fist right through his back, destroying his heart in the process. Another me's clawed gauntlet ripped out the throat of the next, and the for the last one I swiped my right clawed gauntlets through the air and four red lines appeared on this guy back, he didn't even have enough time to recognize what happened like the two others before he fell down in a lifeless heap at my feet. Blood started to pool out from the five parts of flesh I turned him into.

Only at that point, my three iteration became visible again.

One of the suit-wearing guys with a striped coat approached me. He was guarded on both sides by similar clothed guys without the coat. All the while radiating a smug confidence that was completely misplaced considering the events that just took place.

"A Rokushiki user," He said grinning. "If you yield and place yourself under me in CP-9 I'm sure we could find some ways to forget about your" he paused for a moment searching for the right word in his no doubt limited vocabulary "transgression against the Governments rule."

While he was occupied with essentially undressing me with his eyes, even though I wore my heavy coat and my full body armored costume san mask, nothing was justifying attracting this kind of attention. Sure, my costume clung to my body like a second skin, but the armor panels hid what little curves I had - even as a near twenty-year-old - to near perfection.

And that didn't even factor in that I just brutally murdered someone right in front of him. Given the lack of reaction, he showed probably not a comrade or a subordinate of him. Or was this just some kind of sick-fetish? Didn't matter; I was far more interested in the clues he let slip.

CP-9 this organization he seemed to be part of - No that didn't seem right he acted more like the Boss of it, thinking himself special, because of the authority that came with it - Was it some sort of secret service? All the circumstantial evidence pointed that way. This was, after all, an operation to suppress Government secrets from leaking, and there was no way just anybody would be allowed to participate in it.

Was he and this organization the reason this all happened in the first place? Seemed likely, which meant I had a lot of questions to ask him.

"You," I glowered as I took a step towards him, followed by another, and I could already see his confidence wavering, his smile became strained, and he slowly started to shrink back from me, for every step I made, in his direction he made two away from me.

Until he finally let fall all pretense and just yelled, "Kill her!" Kami-e allowed me to avoid all the bullets shot at me from the Marines that had slowly started to surround us from all sides after I killed their superior. To their misfortune, no one taught them how to do that in such a fashion that you avoid shooting your own comrades. They essentially took care of themselves without me helping it along.

Those, who escaped being shot by their own comrades stared fearfully at me. An effect that was further amplified, when I blocked the kicks aimed at my head from the two suit-wearing guards that appeared to my left and right with absolute ease. Even though this part of myself was made up of little more than one-sixth of the whole.

The most shocked about this were the two, that attacked me and whose attacks I stopped cold with seemingly no effort.

They didn't even try to flee after witnessing the gap in our abilities firsthand. Instead, gritting their teeth, they tried to overpower me. Increasing the pressure, they exerted on my arms I used to defend myself with. Amateurs, I thought to myself but didn't bother wasting another one on them. Because at that moment, translucent incredible fine weave of spider silk descended upon the whole area, covering the ships and everybody on them.

Those few, who were able to make it out with their eyes were taken aback. I, on the other hand, had to reassure myself of the necessity of what I was about to do. I couldn't allow for there to be anyone left able to report, anybody to spill anything of the events that took place here and the fact that there were any survivors. Another me appeared behind the scared out of his mind guy and vanished with him in tow. His disappearance allowed me to resume with my plan.

All those that remained, I denied the time to wonder about it and just pulled at the strings coiled around the hand of the one iteration still standing on top of another Marine vessel. The Haki reinforced spider silk went taut and cut through all ten battleships and their crews like a hot knife through butter.

No matter what was in their way or what they were wound around, it was cut into small bite-sized pieces, no exception.

I watched from the beach as the ships fell apart and the sea was colored red by the blood of the thousand people I killed with extreme prejudice. Ended their life without mercy should have left a bitter taste in my mouth, but strangely it didn't.

For a moment, I wondered if I was already this far gone, that such a carnage done by my hand didn't even faze me. It was gone as fast as it appeared because I couldn't forget what all those people that I turned into fish-food did to this Island to its people - they had it coming and got what they deserved.

With that thought on my mind, I left a catatonic guy behind at the beach. He was a low priority. There was nowhere he could run to, or hide on this Island where I couldn't find him. I vanished in the direction of the huge smoke plume forming in the distance.

The smile on the Lava guy's face froze on his face. Understandable, he was anticipating the arrival of the reinforcement, he alerted to his situation just with his eruption and found himself confronted with their deaths. Thereupon it disappeared and gave way to an even more disturbing grim expression.

"I warned you, didn't I," I said. "But you just wouldn't listen."

His demeanor changed from one instant to the other, from a predator thinking himself moments away from succeeding at taking down his prey. To that of a cornered rat trying to come up with ways to ensure its survival.

I certainly didn't forget the phrase that - a cornered animal is a dangerous animal - and that was doubly true for a human. Which was why I prepared myself for anything.

That was when I noticed, that Hancock and Robin stopped moving around the same time I evaded his attack. Seconds went by where we just stared at each other, gauging our opposite.

But what had me really worried was the fact that the girls didn't continue to run. Their auras were still strong and unwavering which ruled out that they were seriously injured. However, something had to be wrong because Hancock knew better than to stop and watch what was going on. So why didn't they move?

It took me a moment to direct some of the bugs under my control to where I sensed them to see the problem for myself. It didn't help matters that in addition to hot ash raining from the sky, blotches of Lava, spots of burning vegetation were littering the whole area. Not only did this kill a lot of my bugs but made turned moving them into a version of running the gauntlet.

I barely managed to get a picture of their predicament.

When I noticed the subtle shift in his stance, the changes in his presence, and before he knew what he was about to do, I was already aware. I dreaded this exact scenario, one of my charges being dragged into this fight.

He once more called forth incredible amounts of Lava from his body and formed it into an enormous tsunami that rolled towards Hancock and Robin, while his true self was somewhere liquified within the murder wave.

The scale of destruction a single user of such a logia-fruit was capable of was outright frightening, just going by this display, I was reminded of Endbringers all over again. With one major difference, this time, I was not powerless, unable to do anything about them.

For a moment, I considered going after him, take him down while he was hiding within his attack. But ultimately decided against it, there was no guarantee I could do it before the wave reached them. In case I was still tangled up in a fight by the point it reached them, I wouldn't be able to help them.

Which left me with just one real option, I had to spring his trap and hope my counter-strike would be enough to end it.

I appeared in a Soru right in front of the two girls, and a short glance towards them confirmed my earlier observations via bug why they had stopped moving. Hancock was jammed in between a tree and the ground. Given the scraps and dirt on Robin's knees and palms, she must have pushed her out of the way only to be caught by it herself.

Hancock was trying in vain to lift the in part with burning tree from her hip. Since she lacked the necessary leverage was unable to do so. Robin was still in a daze and was fear-stricken staring at the wall of superheated wall of lava, which was fast approaching.

I readied myself. I angled Izanami horizontally parallel to the ground. I was reapplying and fastening my hand's grip on her leather-bound handle. Meanwhile, I gathered my Haki and let it flow in a concentrated effort along the length of the blade, turning it into a physical representation of my Will, sharp, unwavering, unyielding, and most of all indomitable.

I could feel the heat permeating from my costume. The surrounding forest started to fume more of the residual water was vaporized, the closer the lave got to us. The air devoid of any humidity had me wet my lips.

I waited to the very last moment to strike. Izanami flashed from my very left to the very right, and a broad wind blade shot forward and met the tsunami of liquid fire head-on blowing it to pieces, dispersing the lava it consisted of throughout the clearing.

Exactly what I knew my opponent wanted to happen, slithering through a tunnel beneath the ground. He emerged from the earth at the exact moment my slash came to an end. His fist was poised to strike, my arms holding onto my blade to my far right out of position, my stance vulnerable, unable to shift to defend myself in time.

I only managed to raise my left elbow to meet his attack aimed for my heart head-on reinforced with all the Haki I could muster after expending the considerable amount I poured into my sword. Our wills clashed against each other, and both shattered like glass into tiny pieces. His attack was meeting my now unprotected arm, the momentum of it forced me to my knee. I was unable to compensate for the shifted balance my prior attack left me in.

I heard the sizzling sound of flesh being burned, as the lava flowed down my arm and threatened to spill on my torso. I felt the heat and the subsequent cold I knew followed burnt nerve strands. It didn't feel nearly as bad as I remembered having an arm stump cauterized. Nonetheless, it hurt like hell and I had to clench my teeth in order to not give him the gratification of hearing me cry out in pain.

"I win," he leered.

Under normal circumstances, he would have been right. He inflicted major damage to my arm, debilitating even. My mangled arm was moments away from being burned through, opening up an unobstructed path to my heart. The Haki I used to reinforce what little was left of my limb could only prolong the inevitable.
Most would lose the arm from the elbow down after receiving such an attack, and it definitely would have been checkmate against anybody else.

But not against me and certainly not today.

I presented him with the bait, and he bit down on it hard.

He was the fly that got caught in the net of the spider. I grinned under my mask as two razor-sharp spider legs burst out of his chest, piercing his heart in the process.

"No, you didn't," I mumbled to myself. And the appendages moved sideways in opposite directions severing the top quarter of his torso from the rest. His body fell lifeless to the ground, revealing my other self standing behind him, with spider-legs sprouting from her shoulder blades. While she walked around the corpse, she retracted them and went on to touch my upper arm, and we became one once more.

I shifted the damage my arm suffered to a few spiders who joined the dead on the ground, and my arm restructured itself from a mass of spiders into pristine condition. I sheathed Izanami and turned towards my vice-captain, who was still stuck struggling to free herself. I wedged my foot under the tree-trunk and lifted it off Hancock. She scrambled to her feet and dusted herself off.

Hancock's cheeks were tinged rosy. The way she avoided looking into my eyes and had her gaze firmly pointed towards the ground made it clear to me she felt ashamed. She failed to fulfill a simple command, get the girl to safety, and instead ended up putting herself, the girl I ordered her to protect, and me in danger.

I knew any encouraging words I could have said to her in this moment, would just be perceived as me taking pity on her. Which was why I decided not to voice any. I put my hand on her head and ruffled her hair.

"Take your charge to the huge tree in the center of the Island. Her mother should be there waiting for her. I will be there shortly." I said to her.

All I received from her was a nod of her head as acknowledgment.

I sighed and made a mental note to carefully monitor her behavior, in the coming days. It was one thing wanting to do better, but something entirely different to see herself as a failure. With their still mending self-esteem, I had to be careful that it didn't turn into self-loathing.

I waited until Hancock took Robin piggy-back and left the burning field towards the tree before I moved in a different direction. I had something to verify, twice during my fights; I noticed a fruit suddenly transforming into something else. If the spiders in the vicinity wouldn't have felt a sudden drop in temperature around a fruit-bearing plant after I killed the first high-ranking marine.

I might have missed an increase in temperature near another fruit after killing the fifth and wouldn't have sent some spiders to investigate.

Should my suspicions turn out to be correct, the number of unused devil-fruits in my possession would go up to six.

I arrived in a small clearing, away from prying eyes hidden in the midst of the forest. As I looked around, I noticed a huge variety of different plants within it. I was no botanist. Therefore I couldn't be entirely sure. But it struck me as odd to find such a variety here, far above what was usual for a natural grown part of the forest. A closer look revealed what perturbed me, there were at most two of every plant present, and their placement was orderly.

No plant had to compete with its neighbor, not for sunlight or space to grow in. It was by design that no one had any deficits - human design.

I was in a garden, and if I had to guess, I doubted most of the plants found here are indigenous to this Island. What purpose it served was anyone guess, either way not something I cared about.

I walked to a small bush, the fruits growing on it reminded me strongly of pepperoni. They were red and had a cylindrical shape that attenuated from the top to the bottom of the fruit. Amongst a good dozen of them growing on the bush was an outlier, it had black tendrils spread along the fruit, and the color was a deeper red. As I reached for it, I could feel the heat it emanated. I plugged it and resumed my trek to the other `strange´ fruit in this garden.

The tree I neared had fruits hanging from it. They looked similar to a maracuja, the difference being a dark blueish tinge to them. The fruit I was interested in, on the other hand, was light blue with a white pattern displayed on it. A small wind-blade attack sent forth from the tips of my fingers severed the fruit from the tree, and I caught it in my hand. I immediately noticed how cold it was to my touch, and on closer inspection, the white pattern on the fruit turned out to be stylistic snow crystals.

I stashed the fruit to the other one in my backpack and then walked toward the real reason I sent the kids ahead, the lone CP-9 Agent left on the Island. I needed some questions answered ...

Authors Note: The attentive Readers might have already noticed what Taylor being there means.
  • The violation of cause and effect -
Let me explain – In chapter 3 Taylor learned about Ohara and Robin in particular, which was the defining point of the goals she set for herself - find the girl and hopefully with her a way back. Therefore, if Robin was never reported as being the sole survivor of the destruction of Ohara or any other major alteration happened to what was reported everything from chapter 3 onward would be in violation of cause and effect.

One of the results might have been, without a small girl in need of saving that Taylor never would have undergone training under Rayleigh, which would have had a rather large impact on the story.

Given my pen-name, everything Taylor did in this and to be honest in the prior chapters with Bonny should have generated a Time-Paradox ... Since she actively removed the cause for her actions.

Not sure if some of you know the movie "the time machine" from 2002 the latest movie adaption of the book of the same name by H.G. Wells. In it, the main character built a time-machine after the death of his betrothed with the sole purpose to prevent her from dying.

The problem with this is quite clearly also a violation of cause and effect -
Since his betrothed death, was the cause for him to build the time machine in the first place. Therefore if he now travels back in time he would effectively be removing that very cause. In a causality-subjected universe, he wouldn't be able to alter this event in any way.

This is my preferred way of how time travel should work in (science)fiction – it pretty much only allows you to change things that you have already changed. Another very good example of this would be the movie Twelve Monkeys.

Unfortunately, this is also is the least interesting form of time-travel possible solely because events can't be changed. Meaning everything is fated to play out exactly the same despite somebody time-traveling... which let's be honest more often than not (if the time-travel mechanics are known) makes for a boring read.
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Which is "unfortunately" not what is needed for this story – Sure I could make it work ... have Taylor shadow Robin for the duration necessary for the report of Robins sighting to be made. Perhaps with Taylor being the one ending this Pirate gang, Robin was seen in the company off. So in essence, forcing Taylor to not create any inconsistency in the timeline.

Having said that – please don't overthink the time-travel you witnessed here so far. It is pretty much just a tool to allow Taylor the crew I want for her to have despite them living all over the place. A tool to allow Taylor "easy travel" to other and different regions of the world, a way to assemble her crew in a short and hopefully interesting way.

So pretty much everything Taylor did while not in the Rainbow fog is part of a timeline she essentially erased from ever having happened (more to this effect in later chapters). For the items and people she brought with her they gain the same protection from causality Taylor has going for her (Fate-spider). Meaning when they return to "normal time" at one point, persons and especially items/devil-Fruits won't exist twice. Their existence got overwritten by those Taylor & Co have in their possession.

Not that this makes a lot more sense, but at least it helps against the headache-inducing problems ...Not that it really matters - Taylor will return to a time after she made those changes to history, but sometime before the start of One Piece canon.

Originally I intended to write this chapter as an Interlude from the point of view of Robin, but it would have been a retelling of pretty much anything that happened to her in canon with the divergence point being the conversation between Robin and Ao Kiji. On the one hand, it would have been a good opportunity to show how others, especially a close to despair Robin, would have reacted to Taylor. Being saved by her from the fate that would await her. On the other hand by doing it this way I could spare you all having to read a rehash of what occurred on Ohara in canon.

This chapter contains excerpts of One Piece chapter 397 – unfortunately, I can't seem to find the group responsible for the English translation I took my excerpts from to credit them for it.

Another thing - since it was mentioned several times.
In the non-altered timeline from the two fruits Bonney held hostage the Hana Hana no Mi (Robin canon fruit) would have fallen into the ocean and from there made its way to Ohara to be eaten by Robin. Instead, since the slaver's ship was forced to evade to the right, the other fruit fell into the ocean. So yes - expect Robin to have a different canon fruit.

Some have mentioned Bonney's presumed connection to Sorbet kingdom and Bartholomew Kuma. I haven´t watched the anime in quite some time - but what I gathered from the manga and the wiki seems to agree with me. That Bonney infiltrated the Levely by
poising as the Dowager Queen Connie - So far there is nothing that would prove the contrary, that she is in fact the Queen.

To be honest I never considered that to be true - Given the hints that Bonney at one point was a "guest" of the world government. (Especially considering that I think her canon power can do exactly what I postulated in the last chapter - she is an incredible asset - second probably only to the Ope Ope no Mi (Law's DF)).

Therefore, I concluded, since she escaped from the WG at least twice that she had a knack for disguise and infiltration ... and a beef to pick with them.

I mean the circumstantial evidence that she has a deeper connection to Ace or Whitebeard is IMO more pronounced.



There won't be a chapter next week - Starting on December 20 I'm posting another story a "classic" Alt-power fic - But I will return to this one.
 
The problem with this is quite clearly also a violation of cause and effect -
Since his betrothed death, was the cause for him to build the time machine in the first place. Therefore if he now travels back in time he would effectively be removing that very cause. In a causality-subjected universe, he wouldn't be able to alter this event in any way.

This is my preferred way of how time travel should work in (science)fiction – it pretty much only allows you to change things that you have already changed. Another very good example of this would be the movie Twelve Monkeys.
That entire movie, all the issues he had with trying to change the past would have been solved if he just faked her dying. Either using some future tech or just more mundane paying off a cop to say she died then taking her in the time machine to sometime in the future after it had been invented would have solved the problem. Or leave a bunch of blood and have her missing, presumed dead. Or grab a dead woman from some other point in time that looked close enough to her to fool past-him...

He Built it because he wanted to save her, so any action that resulted in him no longer having her and needing to travel back in order to fix it would be enough. The whole movie I was just yelling in my head for him to use his brain and side-step the issue, but no - he just kept fucking missing the point every single damn time, and when the future bad guy straight up told him the answer to his stupid issue - he just gave up and gave no more thought to it even though he was obsessed enough that he built a time machine explicitly for this purpose.

That type of time travel, 'only change the things you have already changed' is actually my least favorite form of time travel. They never make any sense - as changes only happen because they have already happened... so where/how was the initial change done? It can't just manifest out of no where, there had to be a start point - but you can only change things that have already been changed, but you can't change anything unless it's already been changed so you can never make the first change to initiate it.

It's garbage. More so as it completely removes all point to having a time machine instead of a stasis pod, as any changes made to the past have increasing odds the further back you go that anything you do will fuck things up in your time and thus not be allowed to happen. Thus only the future is open to you, but since that should now be your present that should lock you off from going back to the past again - but it never seems to play out that way even though those are the rules that you are bound by in the 'present'.
 
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Okay, there is a lot to unpack here.

While I do like saving Robin, I am emphatically not a fan of this super-plot-convenient Deus Ex Oceania time traveling Rainbow Fog. Why? Why did we need to add such a nonsensically overpowered and thoroughly non-canon occurrence to what was shaping up to be a great story? What was wrong with just going out on an adventure and saving a several-years-a-fugitive Robin from some bad circumstances and getting her on the crew then? Slowly teach her to trust again after the world betrayed her. This whole time travel nonsense comes out of nowhere and seems to just ovetcomplixate things.

Second to that, all Taylor's actions on the island. Despite the lengthy author's note, the author doesn't actually provide any explanation how causality is supposed to work in this circumstance. Parallel timelines? Multiple universes? Just ignoring it? Who knows. Not to mention Taylor's even-more-OPness-than-usual by, if memory serves, killing off all the Vice Admirals and the head of CP0. Not to mention, her actions in saving Ohara have now written us into a narrative stalemate where there's no logical way to get Robin to join the crew. Taylor saved her mother (and seemingly half the island) from dying. Robin is neither a wanted fugitive nor an orphan now. What possible justification would have her joining Taylor's crew when she has family alive and well who's just as much on the run as her?

As fun and cathartic as this whole sequence was to read, it really irks me from a narrative perspective. I'll keep reading, but I fear we may have already jumped the shark.
 
Parallel timelines? Multiple universes?

Okay, I thought I made that clear - neither of the above but the typical I can change events ... but since I have the time-machine or in this case the fate-spider. I´m protected from the alterations and can still remember the original timeline ... that we see throughout most works making use of time-travel.

Not to mention Taylor's even-more-OPness-than-usual by, if memory serves, killing off all the Vice Admirals and the head of CP0. Not to mention, her actions in saving Ohara have now written us into a narrative stalemate where there's no logical way to get Robin to join the crew.

He is currently head of CP9 -
Why should that be impossible?
It is not like Olvia was a poster Mom she left her two-year-old daughter with her brother and his wife. Where she was abused physically and mentally - this fact could be ascribed to Olvia not knowing.

But when you look at all her other actions when she returned - especially placing the values of books over the life of her daughter ... behind her late husband's dream to find out what happened in the Void Century.
Add to that, that she is a fugitive a weak one at that. Who after the events of Ohara will be the prime suspect together with Saul for the disappearance of a Buster Call fleet.

I can see that happen rather easy ...

While I do like saving Robin, I am emphatically not a fan of this super-plot-convenient Deus Ex Oceania time traveling Rainbow Fog. Why? Why did we need to add such a nonsensically overpowered and thoroughly non-canon occurrence to what was shaping up to be a great story? What was wrong with just going out on an adventure and saving a several-years-a-fugitive Robin from some bad circumstances and getting her on the crew then? Slowly teach her to trust again after the world betrayed her. This whole time travel nonsense comes out of nowhere and seems to just ovetcomplixate things.

to be honest - I´m not the greatest fan either - but If you don´t want a cast full of OC ... there is not much I can do about it. Because most girls/women we know from canon are at best toddlers at this point - if they are even born.

So with the decision made I want the Boa sisters in her crew the timeline was more or less set ... so I either had the choice to somehow fill like at least 8 years to get some of the potential candidates to an age where they no longer need someone to change their diapers or go for ... like I said a crew mostly made up of OC ...
Sure with Bonney now a thing in her crew - which she might have gotten even without the mist - Taylor could instead just recruit the elderly ... Kureha for example ... to avoid an overflow of OC. But to say that would limit my options is an understatement.

You are definitely right it is Deus ex Oceania - in that sense that I want a specific crew -

But was One Piece canon any different?
If we look a bit closer the whole One Piece canon is super plot convenient Deus ex Oceania.

  • Luffy runs into Nami at the exact time she robs a cruise ship (anime) or Buggy.
  • Luffy runs into Zoro when he was captured and about to be executed - a day later Zoro would be dead.
  • Luffy runs into Usopp a day before his Island was attacked by Pirates and his friend Kaya to be murdered.
  • Luffy runs into Sanji around the time Mihawk sinks Don Kriegs fleet a day later he would be dead a few days earlier he would have never run into that Marine lieutenant and therefore wouldn´t have had to work in the Baratie ...
  • Luffy runs into Vivi shortly before she was to be murdered
  • Luffy runs into chopper shortly before his Island was retaken by Wapol - a few days later chopper would be dead
  • ... Robin ...
I could go on but you get my drift -
The only reason this is so on the Nose is because we already know what went down on Ohara and that Taylor was actually searching for Robin...

The reason why I did that is rather simple - authenticity.

In canon, Robin had a bounty of 79 million at the age of 8 and lived to the age of 28 while the world knew she can read Poneglyphs. An ability as far as we know only she possesses and is required to reach Raftel, to read about the Void-History ... Oh and she has the ability to revive/find Pluton and possibly Uranus. So essentially the World Government and every Pirate going for One Piece was after her.

She not only survived that but managed to dodge their attempts of forceful recruitment for 20 years ... So I found the chances that Taylor might be successful in finding her, where other equally strong or stronger people with a solid power-base failed for that amount of time, despite all of her advantages (she might have over those others) rather slim. You might have more luck finding a needle in a haystack ... than finding her ... especially since Robin is constantly moving and not staying at the same place.

Sure I could have made that whole story into a foxhunt - Taylor searching for Robin instead of One Piece ... but for most of her early years, it is pretty much implied Robin stayed in West-Blue. Not sure that would make for an interesting story ... finding clues on one Island going to the next rinse and repeat until Taylor finally runs into her. With Robin always staying in the shadows even in Organisation she joined for protection even that might be incredibly hard to do.

So at least in my mind - For Taylor to just run into Robin would have broken my SOD - I mean what are the chances of that?
How many Islands does the One Piece world have? What are the chances that both are on a ship or land at the same time etc ...

Without Vivre Cards or knowing someone's destination or base of operation finding them in this world especially if they do not want to be found is really hard.


He Built it because he wanted to save her, so any action that resulted in him no longer having her and needing to travel back in order to fix it would be enough. The whole movie I was just yelling in my head for him to use his brain and side-step the issue, but no - he just kept fucking missing the point every single damn time, and when the future bad guy straight up told him the answer to his stupid issue - he just gave up and gave no more thought to it even though he was obsessed enough that he built a time machine explicitly for this purpose.

So true - but to manage that in a convincing manner might not be as easy as one might think ...

I was actually considering at one point for Taylor doing something similar ... allow her to emerge from the Rainbow mist before she was found by Rayleigh - meet with him and Shakky and tell them what to do with her "younger" self. Point her in the direction she remembered in order to not distort the timeline.

After all, those two were the only people she interacted with and got information regarding Robin from - faking a wanted poster can´t be hard - didn´t Bellamy say it is a common tactic used by Pirates to make themselves look more dangerous than they are.

The Problem with that idea is ... that this would get really complex ... and I would have to keep track of a lot of things ... preventing Taylor to run into herself (depending on when she exists in the Rainbow mist, etc).

And I´m not sure that at one point I wouldn´t just royally screw that up. Without a beta or editor for this story ... somebody who is really deep into One Piece and knows the timeline with all those little tidbits like the back of his/her hand ... I´d rather not attempt it.
 
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For the sake of a good narrative and a story where the time travel isn't the main point, put it down to "It Just Works."

Time travel is always a confusing mess in any media.
 
is it really a problem to have OCs in the crew? The Butcher Bird does it and is one of the best one piece fics out there. I would have prefered some OCs than this blatant Deus Ex Power Trip, or at least make it more organic, it feels too rushed and so out of nowhere.
 
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to be honest - I´m not the greatest fan either - but If you don´t want a cast full of OC ... there is not much I can do about it. Because most girls/women we know from canon are at best toddlers at this point - if they are even born.

That my good man is what time skips are for. There a tooooooooooooooooooooooooooons of great characters in the OP universe to converse with and do plot things with to move the story along to facilitate your timeskips too. Im on the train with everyone else the deus ex stuff is kinda lame. Still a good story, just don't like that pivot.
 
is it really a problem to have OCs in the crew? The Butcher Bird does it and is one of the best one piece fics out there. I would have prefered some OCs than this blatant Deus Ex Power Trip, or at least make it more organic, it feels too rushed and so out of nowhere.

There already was a time-skip other than travel time - and the corresponding critics ...
Guess there is no way to meet everyone's expectations.

I don't think given the nature of that mist - making it not rushed is just not possible -
They are in the fog and when it lifts they are transported to when and where the fate spider led them to ... which is trying to fulfill Taylor's "desires" HALPING as it is called when Shards try to do the same.

More organic? If you mean have Taylor reach Ohara at another point in time ... give her time to explore the Island?
If so not sure that it would have made a great difference in the grand scheme of things ...
Taylor would still have needed to arrive there around the time of the attack or it would have been hard to convince Robin to go with her ... so what would a post-GM Taylor have done?

She has no way of convincing Robin or any other of the Islands inhabitants that she is from the future - they don´t know her so by telling them about a Buster Call would it have worked? (Glover and the others seemed to have a hard time believing Olvia as she tells them) Would Robin who was waiting for her mother to return have gone with Taylor?

-> those were all questions I asked myself in the original outline - where Taylor arrived before the Buster Call commenced. (No fight whatsoever intended of happening - )
Add the fact that Taylor already has to care for 4 kids - would she have risked their safety by waiting?
Or would she just have grabbed Robin for her own good and taken her with her? That would have resulted in some ugly consequences ...

Then consider all the Butterflies I created by doing the scene as written ...
furthermore, I sort of liked the abruptness ... the sudden scene change. Because outside of the rainbow mist it is pretty much impossible to do with Haki in existence ... so it most likely won't ever happen again - that Taylor gets surprised in such a manner.

Omniscience even in a limited form is a difficult thing to deal with - I'm somewhat a stickler for consistency ... so weakening or forgetting the abilities of the characters at opportune times in order to have a plot is something I find abhorrent.

There will be OCs - I currently plan for two -
But 1 or 2 OC is different than more than half the crew being OCs.
 
Personally I'm struggling to wrap my head around the time travelling consequences... for example when she returns to her timeline does she and her crew become aware of what she did in the new timeline as well as the original? Because in the new timeline recruiting Robin would never have been a goal as she's not the only survivor. Moreover each time travel event will inevitably lead to her own history retconning, every time she travels to the past, unless she remembers the new history alongside the original history she could be completely unaware of enemies she's made or events she's influenced
 
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