The Steep Path Ahead [Familiar of Zero AU]

Saito is whining bich and Luise is an angry bich. I'ma stay for a while because Shade and character development potential but so far... Don't feel any sympathy for a characters, and that is a big thing in my book.

Wait, what? o_O

*Goes to check who the author of Enslaved is*

Holy. Shit.:confused:

Shade wrote Enslaved!

I know your feelings. I was realy surprised too...
 
Chapter Four - Time and Time Again
Chapter Four - Time And Time Again

It had been a week. It had been a week, and silence had fallen. Well, it was a comfortable silence, and Luise could get used to it. The complains had died out, some form of brain had woken up in Saito's head, and apparently everything was turning out to be on the path of a quick resolution.

While the monastery was still far, the weather was holding up pretty decently and the snow had begun to melt. The wolves hadn't stopped howling, but they hadn't been keen on attacking them at night with a fire ongoing.

"All right," Luise said. "We're making progress."

Saito blinked. "We're nearly there?"

Luise scoffed. "No, but there's a village in that direction. I can see the smoke of the chimneys. And where there's smoke, there's life. Let's go. Maybe we'll be able to sleep in a barn this night."

"After chopping wood and cleaning floors?" Saito hazarded.

"That too," Luise replied. "Or maybe we'll just sneak in through a window and leave at the crack of dawn."

Saito didn't bother pointing out how that was wrong. If he thought about it as a strange form of 'life experience', then he just had to think of it as a 'camping trip in the wilderness' with a 'survival expert' who happened to be a pint-sized girl.

As long as he thought that, he could avoid feeling miserable about the entire situation.

His feet didn't hurt any longer, but if that was due to the general lack of mercy in trudging along the dirt path that had desensitized them or the fact they were too far gone to save, he didn't know.

What he did know was that the howling of the wolves was becoming a bit too loud for his tastes.

"Whatever happens, don't run," Luise said suddenly, stopping her march to stand unnaturally still. Saito halted, mostly out of fear as he felt the hair on the back of his neck rise suddenly as a bead of sweat fell down his forehead, across his cheek, and down his chin. A soft rustling of melted snow being moved reached Saito's ears, and as he turned his neck around, his eyes winced from the sun's rays reverberating on the snow.

And then he saw them.

They weren't like the pictures he had seen in his school books, or the animal documentaries. These wolves were ugly, mangy, hungry and feral. Froth spewed from their mouths, and their eyes were bloodshot yellow things that seemed to harbor a malice of their own.

"In my bag," Luise said very calmly, "There is a dagger. It's right on the top. Get it."

Saito's hand moved slowly towards the bag, the growls of the wolves as they drew near utterly nerve-wracking. His hand fumbled through the top of the bag, and past it. His fingers gripped around a leathery handle, and as he pulled it out, the jagged looking blade came into view. It was a crude dagger, something that would have normally been used to skin pelts, or cut hardened leather straps.

"I can cast a spell," Luise said in a whisper, "But they might jump on me if I turn around quickly. Just push them away-"

A wolf growled, and snarled. The beast was slightly larger than the others, and advanced very slightly past the 'line' of the other beasts. It bent its hind legs, gripped the snow with its claws, and then howled so hard that it made Saito wince and close his eyes in fear.

"Don't close your-" Luise's scream was accompanied with the wolf's charge, the fangs gleaming in the sunlight as they aimed at the neck of the boy. Luise's spell exploded as was usual, but while the cloud of smoke that came from the impact was great, the end result was mere annoyance on the part of the larger wolf, who snarled as he easily stood back up on its paws.

"Keep your eyes open!" Luise snapped as she half-closed her eyes -going against her own words- due to the smoke cloud. The wolves snarled and charged, but as Luise waved her wand around, and a subsequent rocking of explosions echoed, more and more dust lifted up in the air obscuring the pack's view of the prey.

When silence fell, she took a deep lungful of dusty air and coughed. She couldn't see further than her arm's length. "Are you still alive, Saito?!" she asked.

"I-I think so?" Saito hazarded. "I'm not a ghost, right?"

"Are you hurt?" Luise asked next, trying to pinpoint where the boy was. The dust was starting to settle, and as she heard the negative reply from her familiar, she turned to face the direction his voice came from. Saito didn't look any worse for wear, appearing only slightly dirty with the soot from the explosion, but otherwise unscathed.

She had her wand on him, mostly without thinking, but as she saw him tense, she realized a very startling fact. He did have her dagger in his hand. If he suddenly decided to point it at her, her explosions wouldn't hold him off for much longer. Maybe he hadn't noticed the fact, or maybe he wouldn't use it, but she couldn't risk it.

"Good job," Luise said with a strained smile. "Now, let's get going-"

Saito moved towards her, and Luise could only scream wordlessly as she watched him run faster than she had ever seen a horse run towards her. The filthy liar! He had said he was tired and hurt, and here he was, running towards her to gut her, or maybe disarm her, or-or do horrible, unspeakable things to her!

Saito's left arm enveloped her before she could move her arm to cast yet one more 'failed' spell, and as his right one came down, she closed her eyes expecting to be stabbed literally in the back.

There was the sound of the dagger hitting flesh, and as she screamed, she felt Saito's fingers dig into the back of her head.

She remained like that for a few moments, hearing Saito's heavy breathing in her ears. It was only when she realized she wasn't hurting from the wound that she understood she hadn't been wounded at all.

She opened her eyes and carefully turned her head to stare at where Saito's arm finished, merging with what looked like the yellow crooked fangs of a wolf's open maws. Blood dripped down the spot where the fangs met Saito's clothes, ripped by the bite of the creature's death throes. The stupid boy had plunged his arm with the dagger straight into the wolf's open jaws -how stupid could he even be!?

"Missed one," Saito said with a dry and raspy chuckle.

Luise merely nodded, half dumbfounded. As Saito removed his arm from the wolf's dead body, the runes on his hand glinted softly. "Oh," Luise blinked. "Oh!" she clapped her hands. "So you weren't a liar," she mumbled. "It's your familiar's ability!" she added.

"Uh?"

"Yes!" she excitedly cheered. "So it wasn't useless!" she cackled. "I'm not useless!" she puffed her chest up in pride. "I, Luise, am not a worthless mage! Take that, Headmaster Franz! This pathetic failure of a mage has summoned a familiar capable of defending her! I'd make you eat your silly hat if only I wanted to waste time going back! Ah ah ah!" as Luise laughed, Saito didn't understand what was going on, or half of Luise's mad ramblings.

He did understand one thing though.

The world shouldn't be spinning around him like that.

And why was it getting progressively darker now?
 
Don't worry Saito: your eyes are merely closing themselves after a tiring day.

Sleep tight.
 
Guess calling on the familiar boost when exhausted isn't enough to keep one from fainting when it fades, eh? Ah well, the wolves are gone now, at least.
 
"Yes!" she excitedly cheered. "So it wasn't useless!" she cackled. "I'm not useless!" she puffed her chest up in pride. "I, Luise, am not a worthless mage! Take that, Headmaster Franz! This pathetic failure of a mage has summoned a familiar capable of defending her! I'd make you eat your silly hat if only I wanted to waste time going back! Ah ah ah!" as Luise laughed, Saito didn't understand what was going on, or half of Luise's mad ramblings.
Um, your familiar is losing blood lady.
You might want to get that seen to, before he bleeds out.
And since you lack the money to pay for a Water mage, rabies is a possible issue.
As is wound poisoning.

Although,you might try skinning the wolves for their fur...
 
@shadenight123
The one thing that stands out to me on consideration?
There really is no way that Luise should be mistaking Saito as a commoner.

The plumpness of a first worlder, the uncallused hands, the clothes, the lack of facility with stuff that poor people know like starting a fire?
Should promptly signal to someone who grew up in an orphanage that she grabbed a rich person.
Someone who would have people looking for him.

Heck, just the fact that he was wearing first world shoes, with their fine stitching and standardization, should be ringing all sorts of alarm bells for her.
You can maybe handwave it for the moment as her being worried about pursuit/wolves/whatever, but I expect it to come up sooner or later.
She wouldn't have survived this long if she missed such details.
 
In the world of FoZ, the word 'commoner' is equivalent to non-magic folk, like muggle. Even among the commoners, there is a large spectrum of economic classes. A commoner child can still be a pampered kid from a well off family. Commoners can't hold noble titles, but they can still own successful businesses.
 
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In the world of FoZ, the word 'commoner' is equivalent to non-magic folk, like muggle. Even among the commoners, there is a large spectrum of economic classes. A commoner child can still be a pampered kid from a well off family. Commoners can't hold noble titles, but they can still own successful businesses.
Sure.

But Luise seems to be using the term in the sense of "Person without influence".
When a cursory look at the guy's outfit would immediately make anyone as worldly as she is wary.
She herself is evidence that some people's magic is wonky, or not accessible; she has no reason to believe that would only be a thing for orphans.

And even assuming that he's a honest to goodness commoner?
His outfit shows that someone of influence cares enough to outfit him with good shit.
I mean, Count Mott is not supposed to be unduly unusual.
 
In the world of FoZ, the word 'commoner' is equivalent to non-magic folk, like muggle. Even among the commoners, there is a large spectrum of economic classes. A commoner child can still be a pampered kid from a well off family. Commoners can't hold noble titles, but they can still own successful businesses.
Except she grew up in Germania, which is the one country where both magic and non-magical folk can purchase and hold noble titles.
 
I was trying to find out where I had written 'Commoner' for Saito, and I realized I did it only in the first chapter, two times.

She doesn't bring it up any time later.

Worry not, there won't be any 'You commoner!' ramblings after the first chapter.
 
Chapter Five - Spoiled Wine Can Still Be Fine Vinegar
Chapter Five - Spoiled Wine Can Still Be Fine Vinegar

The smell of vinegar was thick in the air. Saito pondered if his mother had decided to cook some form of exotic delicacy, but as he tried to move, he found his body was kind-of locked in place.

His muscles refused to obey him, and his fingers twitched from tiny spasms. His right arm felt even heavier than his left one, and his neck had tiny stinging sensations across it. Was his pillow always that uncomfortable? A soft touch caressed his forehead, a cool sensation passing over his sweaty forehead.

"...mom..." he mumbled feverishly, the mere act of trying to open his eyelids unfathomable.

"Seriously," Luise muttered, wiping the sweat off the boy's forehead. They were in the barn of a local farmer, the man being an old and wheezing elderly with twenty to twenty-five family members living nearby and going about their days without a problem in the world. Being faithful followers of Brimir, they hadn't dared refuse to help people in clear need, and she hadn't even needed to wave her wand around.

Having dealt with the wolf pack hunting in the area, the farmer's family had been more than content to strike a deal. They'd keep the meat and the pelts, and they'd give them the use of the barn and a hand until Saito got back on his feet.

It wouldn't take much either way. The wound either went gangrenous and the boy died, or it didn't and he'd live. There wasn't much else to it.

"You can't die and leave me like this," Luise grumbled. "Think about how I'd feel. Really-a familiar is responsibility of the mage. What does it say of me if my familiar dies after only a week?"

Saito's eyes were still closed, but his wound had been cleaned with vinegar and bandaged. It hadn't even been a deep wound, even though it had drawn blood. Yet using the familiar's power had probably exhausted him beyond belief, and that was why he was still down. Taking a rest wasn't a bad idea, and sleeping on a straw pile was way better than the hard road.

Eating warm food -wolf soup- was an added bonus.

"And I have to thank you for saving my life," Luise continued. "How could I face the Founder knowing that someone died for me without even receiving my thanks? What sort of expression would you have on the other side upon meeting me? You can't let me live with the guilt of your death for my whole life."

She stared at the still asleep Saito, and sighed. "Mom..." she heard him groan.

"Fine," Luise murmured. "I did put you in this mess myself, didn't I? If you recover, I promise I'll bring you back home before taking my vows. There, that should be fine, shouldn't it? I can't just leave you alone or you might die, or I might get worried and have sleepless nights," Luise grumbled, and grabbed one of Saito's cheeks to pinch it slightly. "So please-wake up."

Saito groaned, and finally cracked open an eyelid.

"Uh?"

Luise's shoulders slumped down as she exhaled in relief. "What made you think it was a good idea to plunge your arm inside the wolf's throat?" Luise asked, her voice low as she didn't want to burst the boy's eardrums -not yet, at least.

"Hurts."

"You are lucky it was merely a nick," Louise replied with her lips thin. "And that the farmers were followers of Brimir kindhearted enough to let us rest and tend to your wounds. You've been asleep for days."

"W-Water," Saito mumbled, while his stomach decided to growl.

"Yes, yes," Luise said with a huff, rolling her eyes as she grabbed a wet cloth and drew it near his mouth. "Suck on it. No fast gulps or you'll drown. If you can keep the water down, maybe there's hope you can stomach the soup."

Muffled sounds escaped Saito's throat as he avidly tried to sate his thirst, only for it to remain with a vengeance. Luise shook her head, a small smile on her lips. "It's not going anywhere, calm down!"

Her right hand absentmindedly touched the boy's hair. It was black, actually black, and as her fingers played with a stray lock of his, she could feel the grime beneath her fingers. Not that her hair was much better. Using only cold water she could barely rinse them, let alone 'clean' them back to their natural strawberry blond. She missed the hot water the most, but there was barely a scrap of firewood in the farmer's house, and what little they had gifted them had been needed to put the vinegar to boil.

"With your familiar's power," Luise said in a whisper, "We shouldn't have to worry about brigands or beasts any longer. If it makes you able to use daggers proficiently, then we can finally sleep comfortably at night. I'll give you the dagger, you'll definitely use it better than me."

Saito closed his eyes, still nibbling on the wet piece of cloth.

"And...I'm sorry," Luise said.

Saito blinked, staring up at Luise's thoughtful face. "I really am!" Luise added, her hands clenched into fists by her side. She had deep rings around her eyes now that Saito took the time to look at her, and her hair was frazzled and had seen better days.

"I know we didn't start this in the best way, but if possible-if you want-we can start again? I had no control over the summoning spell-I really didn't-so...so what I'm trying to say is...can we become partners rather than mage and familiar?"

Saito blinked once more.

And then he spoke four simple words.

"I would...like that."

No further words were needed. No further words could be spoken even if he wanted to, because he closed his eyes a few seconds later and dropped, once more, asleep. Luise smiled as if a weight had been lifted off her chest, and shoulders, and collapsed shortly after, needing to sleep herself.

Her arms encircled Saito's head out of reflex, and thus that was how the old farmer's son found the duo when dinner came around, and decided most aptly to close the barn's door and leave the two to their sleep.

They'd need their rest.

Especially if the words of the neighbors rang true about the religious turmoils further south near the border. The Reformed and the Non-Reformed faithful were clashing dangerously close to outright rebellion in the point where Halkeginia met with Germania, and there were rumors of the army being sent in to clear the troublemakers.

These were troublesome times.

Truly troublesome times indeed.
 
This is a major divergence from FOZ canon, and this is coming from someone who only knows the basics of the timeline.
If Luise is From Germania, does that mean Kirche is from Tristain?.

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In canon, wasn't the reason Saito passed out after beating Guiche was because it was his first time using the runes?.
 
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@Backlash177
This time round, Saito fainted due to using the runes after three days of hard travel, plus the quick movement of ten seconds combat. So basically collapsed from exhaustion, I think. As to Luise, she's the same one as per canon, just kidnapped as a child/baby by an Elf hired by Germinian nobles...who promptly got killed by the king for some unrelated manner before they could pay the kidnapper. As carrying about a child without hope of payment is kinda silly, the elf dumped her off at the nearest orphanage.
 
@Backlash177
This time round, Saito fainted due to using the runes after three days of hard travel, plus the quick movement of ten seconds combat. So basically collapsed from exhaustion, I think. As to Luise, she's the same one as per canon, just kidnapped as a child/baby by an Elf hired by Germinian nobles...who promptly got killed by the king for some unrelated manner before they could pay the kidnapper. As carrying about a child without hope of payment is kinda silly, the elf dumped her off at the nearest orphanage.

Then why is her hair brown?, and is Karin still looking for her?.
 
Then why is her hair brown?, and is Karin still looking for her?.
Her hair isn't brown, as mentioned by her thoughts repeatedly whenever it comes to washing. It's strawberry blonde/pink, as per canon, just so sooty and dirty at present it's functionally black in appearance. As to Karin still looking for her, no clue - nothing indicates thus so far, and seeing as I'm not the author I only have released story to go on here.
 
Chapter Five - Spoiled Wine Can Still Be Fine Vinegar
Yay new update!
Called it on the wolf loot thing, by the way.

Saito blinked, staring up at Luise's thoughtful face. "I really am!" Luise added, her hands clenched into fists by her side. She had deep rings around her eyes now that Saito took the time to look at her, and her hair was frazzled and had seen better days.
This update does a better job of selling the fact that Luise, for all her seeming competence compared to the noob?
Is still a teenager travelling cross-country with minimal resources, no weapons, an uncertain future, and until recently, being hunted by a wolfpack.
About time Saito noticed signs of physical stress.

As for weapons, it's probably of note that a dagger is a rather piss-poor weapon when both animals and brigands are an issue.
On the other hand, a staff/quarterstaff is also a weapon, gives range, and doesn't stand out in the hands of people trying not to draw undue attention.
And can be improvised, to boot, assuming the farmer(s) don't have a spare one.

Can't exactly afford a sword after all. Yet.
Especially if the words of the neighbors rang true about the religious turmoils further south near the border. The Reformed and the Non-Reformed faithful were clashing dangerously close to outright rebellion in the point where Halkeginia met with Germania, and there were rumors of the army being sent in to clear the troublemakers.
Oh dear.
Interesting times, only in Germania not Albion.
Looking forward to more.

And lol at the farmer drawing the wrong impression.
 
Now this is finally getting better! All you need is some form of dynamics between Luise and Saito, and you should be set!
 
Interesting story, I'd like to see where their quest for a place with one moon takes them!
That would be fun in its own way, if she ends up going with him back through the Gate of Shaitan. She has nothing keeping her there.

Earth may be their "hell", but it's absolute heaven compared to Halkeginia. And I think @minuseven is good enough to portray that, even if I doubt the story is going in that direction.

Come to think of it, has there been any story where the existence of that gate became general knowledge back on Earth? And, perhaps, they found a way to control it?
 
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