The Seventh Coming [Dragon Age/Lord of the Rings] (Complete)

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It is said that the seven fathers of the Dwarves returned again to their kin in Middle-Earth, returning life to their fallen forms to lead their people once more. Of these, the most renowned was Durin.

The dwarves of Orzammar have lost much. Their collective grief dominates their thoughts, their politics, their beliefs. Durin has lost even more. But he will not allow their trauma to drive his people to ever darker extremes. There is only one path, and it does not lead back. It is upon them to follow it forward.
Part 1: And Walked Alone

Lithos Maitreya

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This story is already mostly drafted. It's seven chapters long, and one chapter will be posted per week, on Monday mornings.

To those who read
Ring-Maker, you will know already that this story takes place in a shared multiverse with that one. However, to be entirely clear, reading Ring-Maker is in no way required to enjoy or understand this story. It is entirely standalone.

I doubt I need a long intro post for such a short story, so without further ado, please enjoy.


Many thanks to @BeaconHill for betareading.


Part 1: And Walked Alone

His entire life, Durin Aeducan had felt as though he were walking half asleep. He was not the only one who noticed this. His elder brother had frequently thrown indulgent smiles his way when he caught Durin staring at a wall or gazing up at the high ceilings of the Orzammar cavern, deep in thought, though more recently as Trian's pride had grown, so too had his harshness. His younger brother, Bhelen, had been less forgiving of his perceived slowness of wit. You have to live in the moment, Durin, he would snap. The Assembly would love a chance to have a King who never pays attention to what they're doing.

It wasn't like that. Durin wasn't slow. He just…

Sometimes, while he slept, he dreamed of things that were unholy. Forbidden. The light of the Sun and Moon; a crown of stars reflected in deep, still water; forests of trees with silver bark and leaves of gold in the autumn…

He never told anyone of these visions. He had no idea where they came from. Dwarves weren't even supposed to have dreams in the first place. He had never seen a tree in person, let alone the sky. He had no idea whether what he was dreaming was how they really looked.

But there were other visions, some of which came to him even while he was awake. He would look at the Assembly in their rich robes and traditions and think, Such hubris. He would listen to the Shaperate honoring the Memories and wonder, How much have they forgotten? It unsettled him, on those occasions when he felt awake enough to be unsettled. What was wrong with him? Why did he doubt what everyone else held in esteem? Why did he feel nostalgic for things he had never seen, things which were profane? Why did he always feel like either he was half asleep, or the world around him was?

He knew Bhelen was right. He saw the way some of the more conniving members of the Assembly looked at him, like he was a particularly fat nug for the slaughter. He knew it wouldn't be that easy for them, if they ever did make him King.

Bhelen, however, did not know. And it was that uncertainty, that fear for the future of Orzammar, Durin knew, which spurred him to action. It was almost enough for Durin to forgive him.

Almost.

-x-x-x-​

It was supposed to be an auspicious day for Durin. He had been appointed as a Commander within Orzammar's military guard—a position as honorable as it was meaningless. The dwarves fought only one war, these days, and that line was held by the Legion of the Dead.

"Ah, good. You're dressed and ready." A voice drifted from the entrance to Durin's overly-spacious rooms. He turned. Gorim, the sworn-shield King Endrin had appointed for his second son (as a glorified bodyguard) had come to fetch him for the feast.

Durin nodded slowly at him, his finely crafted over-engraved armor clinking around him. He'd always felt it was too heavy for its size, but he had long since grown accustomed to the weight.

"Lord Harrowmont said the armor should have an accompanying dagger, but I couldn't find it," Gorim said with a shrug. "I found a longsword in the same style, however. Should I fetch your shield as well?"

"Of course," Durin said. "It's part of the uniform, isn't it?"

"Understood, my Lord," nodded Gorim, heading for an armor stand on the side of the room. "Your honored father expects you to make an appearance at the feast, but there should be no rush. Every other noble in Orzammar will be bothering him for the next few hours."

"Trian will be displeased if I'm late," Durin said. It was always best to avoid annoying Trian, where possible. The King's eldest son was a bit like a rock in a river. The water soon learned to move around, rather than through.

…Or so he imagined. Durin had never seen a river, after all.

Gorim just shrugged. "Isn't Lord Trian always displeased?" he asked rhetorically. "We should have time to visit the Proving Grounds. Lord Harrowmont ordered an open Proving in honor of the day."

"Well, it wouldn't do not to show my face at such an event in my own honor," Durin said, enjoying the way Gorim's face lit up. He smiled slightly, passing his second and taking the shield. He took the leave as they left the Royal Palace. A young woman darted into Bhelen's room as they passed. Durin thought he caught a glimpse of a casteless brand on her face. The sight put him in a sour mood. He had only managed to visit Dust Town once, and he had been numb with horror the whole time. This was the last great bastion of dwarven culture?

He paused at the door, then knocked once. No one responded. "Miss?" he called, loud enough to be heard but hopefully quiet enough not to draw attention. "If I might be so bold—my brother Trian should be out for the next few hours, but I'd advise you to make yourself scarce before he returns. He can be… unkind, to those of lesser privilege than himself."

There was still no sound from Bhelen's room. With a sigh and a shrug, he kept walking.

"You needn't look after people like her," said Gorim with a long-suffering air. "You know she's just a noble hunter after your brother, right?"

"Highly likely," Durin murmured. "Stone, what a horror it must be."

"Hm?"

"The desperation of it." Durin shook his head. "Noble hunters shouldn't exist, not because they should be better than they are, but because no one should be in such awful conditions that they find such measures necessary to escape."

"A radical sentiment," said Gorim carefully.

Durin sighed. "True enough."

They left the palace and started down the thoroughfare. As they walked, Durin's eyes wandered upward, driving to the high ceiling of the Orzammar cavern. Here in the Diamond Quarter, the upper reaches were more than a hundred feet above the streets, and intricately carven and vaulted. In the lower quarters they were far less ornate, and in the slums of Dust Town they were barely better than the bare rock of the cave, only reinforced slightly with—

"Lord Durin! You can vouch for my work, can't you?" Durin blinked, brought suddenly back to the present. Two people were standing directly in his and Gorim's path, clearly in the midst of an argument. The one who had spoken was a scholar whom Durin vaguely recognized—a historian by the name of Gertek. Earnest, and generally trustworthy, if a bit prone to sucking up. "Your father loved my History of Aeducan: Paragon, King, Peacemaker!"

And there was the sucking up. "He did," Durin acknowledged, blinking, trying to catch up to the situation. He turned to the other man, a relatively minor noble of House… "Is there a problem, Lord Vollney?"

"This worm," spat the noble—and, yes, Durin had gotten his house right—"has written a book that slanders my house! He deserves to die for what he has written of Paragon Vollney!"

Durin closed his eyes momentarily, trying to remember his lessons. Paragon Vollney… named Paragon for… economic contributions, wasn't it? It wasn't an unusual claim to ascension. Of those houses in the Assembly, more than half fell under the umbrella of 'economic contributions.' What was unusual, however, was that Durin couldn't remember ever hearing what exactly those contributions had been. Normally it was the discovery of an exceedingly rich ore or lyrium vein, or the invention of a new way of mining or smithing, or the establishment of a new trade route. What had Vollney done, exactly? "What was the slander in question?" he asked, opening his eyes again.

"Lord Vollney was elected Paragon by the narrowest margin in history, a single vote," said Gertek. Then, desperately, "It is a matter of public record—of fact! Not liking history doesn't make it untrue!"

"You claimed that Paragon Vollney was a fraud!" bellowed Vollney. What was his given name, again? Durin was sure he had known at some point. "You wrote that he bribed the Assembly!"

"I acknowledged that the vote at the time was mired in accusations of corruption, intimidation, and intrigue," said Gertek shrilly.

"Bah!" The noble—Brunther? Bruvus?—turned back to Durin. "You hear this! He slanders the name of a Paragon! Surely you would react the same way if Paragon Aeducan was so dishonored?"

"Paragon Aeducan's confirmation had not a single dissenting vote!" Gertek said.

"After the one dissenter was murdered on the assembly floor by Paragon Aeducan's supporters," murmured Durin. That was a lesson he was always careful to remember. He looked Vollney in the eye. "Not only would I not react this way if such things were said about Paragon Aeducan," he said, "I have been known to say such things about my ancestor myself. My Lord Vollney—if you wish to honor your house and protect your good name, murdering scholars and silencing historians is not the way. Instead, be exemplary in the present. Raise your House up by example. Live to the example of all Paragons, from Vollney to Aeducan, and you will be above any reproach. If you truly believe that Ser Gertek has lied in his book, approach the Shaperate and ask that they consult the Memories themselves. Do not sully yourself with cold-blooded murder in the streets of the Diamond Quarter. It is beneath you."

Vollney's—really, what was his name?—jaw was set, but beneath his bluster he looked a little ashamed. "Yes, my Lord," he said stiffly. "I shall approach the Shaperate tomorrow—after, of course, the coming feast is commemorated."

Durin nodded. "Stone keep you," he said as Vollney stalked off.

Gertek sighed in relief. "Thank you, Lord Durin," he said. "You have shown yourself a true friend to scholarship and history—"

A true friend to scholarship? Durin thought, amused and a little ashamed. Surely a true friend to scholarship would be trying harder to make sure that the excesses of House Aeducan were remembered with the same frequency as those of the lesser houses. I do my best, but… was there a better way to intervene? All I meant to do was prevent a man's death, but have I stepped into Trian's blustering shoes inadvertently?

"My Lord Durin?"

Durin blinked at the scholar. "Hm? Oh, ye—"

Gorim elbowed him sharply in the side.

Durin made as smooth a transition as he could. "—eeou were saying? Apologies, I was distracted."

"Of course, My Lord, of course," said Gertek, with that same odd mixture of pity and disdain in his eyes that Durin so often saw. "I was merely asking if you wished to endorse the historicity of my account. In order to prevent such conflicts with others of like mind to the Lord Vollney in future. I would be more than grateful for your patronage."

"Ah," said Durin. "No."

The scholar blinked. "...Ah. Well. Might you, perhaps, consult with—"

"No," said Durin. "Speak with Trian if you want an Aeducan to endorse your pageantry. For myself, I would prefer my histories to be more historical."

"My Lord!" The scholar drew himself up in shock and offense. "I assure you—"

"I read your History of Aeducan," said Durin. "And I have also studied all that I was permitted to see at the Shaperate." There were many Memories forbidden even to Durin—information that remained sensitive today, as well as prophecies which might become unreliable if their contents were made public. But many more were available to him, so long as he was accompanied by a Shaper while perusing. "If you could not acknowledge my ancestor as the murderer that he was," Durin continued, "then you will have to seek another of his descendants as your patron. Good day."

Then he turned from Gertek's astonished face and continued down the thoroughfare, Gorim at his side.

"You recovered well," Gorim said quietly.

"Thanks to you," said Durin. "I apologize—I should know better than to default to 'yes' by now."

"You are learning," said Gorim. "And I am here to assist you until you do."

They continued through the small bazaar of market stalls that clustered about the lower Diamond Quarter. As he passed a stall of fine surface-dweller silks, a familiar voice called out.

"Atrast vala, Durin!" Durin blinked and turned as Bhelen and Trian approached, coming in the opposite direction. Bhelen was the one who had spoken. His eyes studied Durin's face. "You look well today, big brother."

"He means," growled Trian, "that you do not look like a lackwit, for once. He is also lying. Why are you out here? Have you so little regard for our father that you would fail to attend his feast in your honor?"

"Lord Harrowmont has organized a Proving in honor of Lord Durin," said Gorim, glancing at Durin.

Durin took the offered opening. "I decided that it would be unseemly for me to miss such an occasion," he said. "I will return in time for the feast, but to have a Proving organized in my name is an honor I cannot ignore."

It was an old maneuver. Gorim would take the initiative to seize the thread of a conversation, giving Durin the time to regain his focus and collect his thoughts so that, when he spoke, he did not appear to be scrambling to catch up. In this particular case, it was unnecessary, but Durin appreciated the thought nonetheless.

"Hmph." Trian grunted but seemed somewhat mollified. "An honor indeed." He glowered at Gorim, but it was the perfectly mundane glower Trian wore when his mood was neutral, rather than the vicious glare that flashed when he was angry. "See to it that he returns to the feast before the formalities begin."

"Of course, Lord Trian," said Gorim.

"He will not need to," Durin assured his brother, keeping his tone conciliatory. "I know how important this feast is, and how shameful it would be to fail to attend my own father and King."

Trian looked as close to being satisfied as he ever did. "Good." Then his expression turned sour again as he met Durin's eyes. When he spoke, it was slowly, as if he feared Durin would miss his words otherwise. "Do be careful with your soldiers tomorrow. It would be a poor thing indeed for an Aeducan to get honorable Orzammar soldiers killed."

"I will remember all of the lessons I have received," Durin promised diplomatically, "from both our tutors and you, elder brother."

"See that you do." Trian stomped past him, heading back towards the Palace.

"Nicely handled," Bhelen muttered with a nod each to Durin and Gorim before jogging after their brother.

They passed through the market, Durin giving a nod and a smile to a pair of noble hunters lingering outside a door. These were much more well-off than the poor casteless woman who had been in Bhelen's room, but they giggled and batted their eyelashes at him nonetheless.

"They don't seem all that desperate," Gorim muttered.

"Everyone craves what they do not have," Durin replied. "And when there is only one way to get it, well…"

"You almost sound like you object to the castes themselves."

Durin didn't answer. Fortunately, he had an excuse in the form of a nearby merchant, hosting a stall of weapons. "My Lord Aeducan! My Lord, if I might…?"

Gorim scowled thunderously at the breach of caste protocol, but Durin just smiled, putting a gentle hand on Gorim's shoulder to calm him. "Yes?"

"I am sorry for the interruption, my Lord," said the merchant nervously, almost ingratiating. "I sent an errand boy to the palace earlier with an offering in your honor, but he was turned away by Prince Trian. He bore a dagger, made to accompany your royal house's armor?"

Durin glanced at Gorim. "You mentioned a dagger. Would this be it?"

Gorim shook his head, looking doubtful. "Not unless this man has some connection to Lord Harrowmont."

Durin turned back to the merchant. "Was this piece commissioned by the Lord Harrowmont?" he asked.

"It was, my Lord," said the merchant, with an odd reluctance. Strange.

"Might I see it?"

"Of course, my Lord!" the merchant hastily produced a cloth-wrapped bundle. Opening it revealed a truly fine work—a dagger of careful craftsmanship, engraved with runes and the signage of House Aeducan. "I hope it is to my Lord's satisfaction. I wish to bless his first command, and one day, when he rules, he will wear it."

Gorim's armor suddenly stopped clinking as he froze. "Trian is heir," he said slowly. "He will rule when King Endrin returns to the Stone."

"I see," said Durin quietly. And he did. Despite what many thought, he was at least as clever as his elder brother. He gave the merchant a nod. "I am honored by your gift. I will, of course, accept it in the spirit that it is intended. My compliments to all of the craftsmen involved."

"Thank you, my Lord!" said the merchant with another low bow. "You bring me great honor!"

"He means," muttered Gorim as they walked away, "that you'll bring him great gold if you wear that thing in public, and it's recognized."

"I'm aware, Gorim," murmured Durin.

"Then what were you—"

Gorim cut himself off as they reached the gateway down to the Commons. Two guards were posted there. "Lord Durin," said one with a shallow bow. "Are you going to the Proving Grounds? Allow us to accompany you."

"Stone, I forgot about that," muttered Gorim. "Your father said you weren't to pass through the Commons unguarded."

Durin's lips twitched. "He's worried I'll daydream and fall into the chasm?"

"He's worried," Gorim said, giving him a look, "that you will be harassed by those merchants who were turned away from the Diamond Quarter. Perhaps rightly."

"As my Lord Father wishes." Durin shrugged and gave the guard a nod. "Lead on."

Later, once they had taken a seat at the Aeducan box in the Proving Grounds and settled in to watch a few matches, Gorim leaned close to whisper. "You heard what that merchant said?" he asked. "It's not the first time I've heard such things. Keeping that dagger, especially if you wear it and Trian recognizes it, will send a message."

"Refusing it sends a message to Harrowmont," Durin whispered back, wincing as a particularly brutal blow sent blood scattering across the stones below.

"So does keeping it."

"Yes."

Gorim looked at him sidelong. "Are you actually playing the game now?" he asked, a touch hesitant. "You almost sound like…"

"Like I think Trian will be a poor King? I do, Gorim." Durin took a deep breath. "I'm not what they think I am. You know that. I can do this. More to the point: I must."

Gorim looked around, as if expecting eavesdroppers, before leaning even closer. "Be careful, my Lord," he said, so quietly that even straining, Durin could barely hear him over the bustle of the city. "I know he is your brother, but I really would not put much past Trian."

"If Lord Harrowmont has his way, Trian needn't know what's happening until after Father passes and the Assembly's decision is announced," Durin answered.

"I suppose that's true," Gorim murmured. "Do you want me to start covertly reaching out to key deshyrs?"

Durin thought for a moment, head bowing slightly. "…Yes."

-x-x-x-​

The feast was… trying. Durin did his best to remain in the moment, to smile when expected and look proud and stern when it was called for, to respond to the conversations around him without needing Gorim's elbow in his side or for his name to be called directly. For the most part, he even succeeded.

Part of his motivation for remaining focused was fear. The ornate, princely dagger remained at Durin's side all evening, and he saw one or two nobles' eyes drift to it during the meal. But Trian, on whom he kept a careful eye all evening, never noticed. He was far too busy staying close to their father and blustering to anyone who would listen.

He did, however, loudly mention that he would be 'watching over' Durin's command the following day, 'just to avoid any unfortunate mistakes.' The clear vote of no confidence was not unexpected, but nor was it heartening. Not for the first time, Durin wished Trian was, well, better. He didn't want to go against his brother, but if Trian continued as he was, Durin would have no other choice. Not unless he wanted Orzammar to decline even further than it had already.

But the most interesting conversation of the evening happened as the guests were leaving. Trian bustled away, sternly ordering Durin and Bhelen both to bed in preparation for a busy day.

Then, for the first time today—the first time in several days, actually—he and Bhelen were alone. Not entirely, of course; there were still nobles leaving the manor, servants clearing the tables, loud conversations outside, but for a moment Durin and his younger brother were able to seize for themselves a quiet corner to talk in something like privacy. Only their Seconds, Gorim and a grim man named Vartag Gavorn, stayed nearby, and they did their best to run interference, giving the brothers some privacy.

Bhelen sighed in obvious exasperation. "I swear," he said, "our dear brother grows more infuriating by the day."

"Yes," agreed Durin.

Bhelen eyed him. "You did well this evening," he said, an odd note to his voice. "I only saw you lose focus once, when Lord Narghell tried to draw you into a conversation about the artisans he was patronizing."

"Was that what he was talking about?" Durin asked. "I missed the beginning of the conversation, so I thought he was talking about artifacts recovered from the expedition tomorrow."

Bhelen chuckled. "No, but you could be forgiven for the mistake. The man blusters so much you'd think every scrap of clay his sculptors mold came from the deepest heart of the old empire." Then his face fell. "I noticed something else when I was watching you today," he said. His eyes drifted down to the dagger at Durin's side.

Durin nodded once, stiffly. "Trian," he said, trying not to say too much aloud, "would have to learn a great deal before he was ready to rule Orzammar."

Bhelen looked grim. "I agree," he said. "But as much of an arrogant boor as our brother is, he is no fool."

"He didn't notice this," Durin said, running his finger along the hilt of the dagger. "I was watching him."

Bhelen chewed his tongue thoughtfully. "I'm impressed that you were so careful," he said. "You really are improving. But Trian didn't need to see that dagger tonight, not when he is already concerned about what it represents." He leaned forward. "Brother—Trian is preparing to move against you."

Durin's eyebrow rose. He glanced around, but no one seemed to be near enough to hear them. "What do you mean, move?" he asked.

"What do you think I mean?" hissed Bhelen. "You're going into battle tomorrow against the Darkspawn. You will be expected to take a forward role in the battle, doubly so if you want to increase your reputation and prestige. In the chaos of battle, well. Anything might happen."

"You really think he would stoop so far?" Durin asked. "Assassination? From the honorable Trian?"

"I wouldn't have believed it either," said Bhelen, with a dark glance back at a small crowd of nobles leaving the manor as a group. "I happened to overhear him speaking with a mercenary this morning. He nearly caught me. I assume he kept me close today to try and determine if I suspected him. I kept my silence, and given he left us alone at last, it seems to have paid off."

Durin let out a breath. "This is… difficult to believe, Bhelen," he said quietly. "But I can promise you I will be careful. I will keep my eyes open and ready for ambush tomorrow."

"If you are ambushed, you will be outnumbered," Bhelen cautioned. "You know this. The safest option for you would be to strike first. I would support you if necessary."

"I appreciate the thought, my brother," said Durin, clasping Bhelen on the shoulder. "I cannot in good conscience be the first to strike against my own sibling, but I will be cautious. I will move with both eyes open, and my head in the present moment. You have my word."

Bhelen looked frustrated, but nodded. "That's all I can ask," he said. "Good luck, Durin. Be safe."

-x-x-x-​

"What do you think of what Bhelen said?" Gorim asked in a low voice. They were standing just inside Durin's room. In the distance, Durin could hear the singing of a drunken noble stumbling his way back home after the celebration.

"I think it's a bad sign," said Durin, just as quietly. "If Trian heard about what Harrowmont is plotting, it's possible he might seek to have me removed. He's never been much for sentiment."

"You sound doubtful."

"I am," Durin confirmed. "Because, consider: if one of us, myself and Trian, kills the other, and is exposed? Who becomes my father's heir?"

Gorim's eyes widened. "Ancestors, I didn't even think of that! Do you really think he's that ambitious?"

"No," Durin said. "That's what has me confused. Because I neither think Trian is wise enough to recognize me as a threat, nor that Bhelen is callous enough to eliminate the both of us to take the throne for himself. And yet, I cannot imagine but that one of the two is true."

"But you don't know which." Gorim grimaced. "No wonder you didn't commit to anything with Bhelen."

Durin nodded. "Exactly. I need to see which one is my enemy before I know where to strike."

"And when you do?"

"You're asking if I'll kill one of my brothers." Durin shook his head. "No—not unless I have exhausted every other option. But I would be more than willing to expose one or both."

Gorim nodded. "Well, my shield is at your back, as always."

Durin gave him a smile. "I appreciate it, my friend."

-x-x-x-​

The next day, everything fell apart. The dwarves lost great numbers against the darkspawn, and though Durin managed to complete his mission to seize Aeducan's shield, things only got worse from there.

"Up ahead is that paragon statue," Gorim said in a whisper as they marched along the path. "Where we met Ivo."

"I know," Durin said.

"It had excellent sightlines," Gorim continued. "And we only have one archer. If I were planning to secretly murder you, that's where I'd do it."

"Then we move carefully," said Durin softly.

In retrospect, he should have seen it coming. Bhelen knew Durin wouldn't kill their brother without more certainty, so of course he'd sent someone to do it before Durin had a chance to stop them. Of course he had somehow bribed or blackmailed the two scouts into claiming he was responsible.

As he was dragged down to Orzammar's dungeons, Durin couldn't even feel angry. He just felt cold. One of his brothers was dead, and the other had shown himself a monster. In all his solitary life, a life punctuated by whispers and giggles and rumors at his expense, he had never felt so alone.

Gorim was taken to the Assembly first. Durin wondered if it would be the last time he ever saw his only friend. For himself, he was thrown into a small cell and left there to think.

Minutes stretched to hours. He thought through Bhelen's plan, tried to see where the loose ends might be. There was only one left—the trial in the Assembly. If he could just convince them of his innocence…

But Bhelen was smart. He'd somehow gotten Ivo on his side—Ivo, who even traditional Harrowmont acknowledged as an honorable man. Durin had a feeling he had one more dagger in his boot.

He was proven right when Gorim finally appeared and brought him the Assembly's decisions. "I was sentenced to exile on the surface," he reported, his eyes hollow, his face still slack with shock. "My knighthood has been stripped from me, and I'm to be removed from the Memories."

"And now they'll call for me?" Durin asked. "To sentence me to the same fate?"

Gorim's eyes squeezed shut with pain. "No," he murmured. "Bhelen took Trian's seat and pushed for your immediate sentencing. He had enough deshyrs ready to vote on it in defiance of all tradition. You're not going to be brought before the Assembly, and you're not coming with me, either." Durin noted, with a sort of absent horror, that Gorim's hands were shaking. His expression was a study in despair. "You're to be exiled to the Deep Roads," he said, "to die to the darkspawn."

-x-x-x-​

"I am innocent," Durin said firmly.

Harrowmont nodded slowly. "I believe you," he said, his voice sad. "I am sorry."

"I have one request," Durin said, "before I go."

"I will tell your father, I promise," Harrowmont preempted him, but Durin shook his head.

"I ask that you not tell my father," said Durin. "Let him believe that the son he has remaining is innocent of all this. Let him believe in Bhelen."

"You do not think Bhelen will remove your father, as he removed you and Trian?" asked Harrowmont darkly.

"I do not," Durin said. "Bhelen is callous, cruel, and ambitious—but he does love Orzammar. Endrin is a good king, and Bhelen will respect that."

"You have great faith in a man who has condemned you to die," said Harrowmont doubtfully.

Durin shrugged. "I've had some hours to think," he said. "Perhaps it's naïve to think I know Bhelen after having been so soundly outplayed by him, but I do think so, nonetheless." He shook his head. "I mustn't keep you, Lord Harrowmont. If you must tell my father something to comfort him, tell him that I go to a warrior's death, with head held high."

"I will," whispered Harrowmont. He nodded to the guards at his flanks. "Open the way!"

The great gates creaked open. Durin stepped through. Behind him, they closed with a resounding clang.

Durin took a deep breath of the dry underground air, drew his sword and shield, and stepped forward into the dark.

The shrieking of darkspawn echoed through the caverns as he walked. More than once he whirled to face a sound from only feet away, only to realize it had actually come from down a long corridor, echoing oddly.

There were still torches near Orzammar, but he soon passed beyond their light. The darkness grew deep, then black as pitch. Even dwarves could not see in utter darkness. Occasionally, the black was pierced by the faint, blue luminance of lyrium veins in the deep.

For whatever reason, no darkspawn came upon him. Whether he was simply lucky, or if some instinct or protection kept him from them, he could not say.

He walked for what felt like hours until, quite suddenly, the darkness lightened again. Suddenly he could see by a very, very faint gray light. He followed it down a series of corridors as it grew brighter and brighter, surpassing torchlight, surpassing braziers, surpassing any light he had ever seen until at last he turned a corner and had to shield his eyes.

The breeze hit his face, brisk and cold. Wonder in his eyes, he stepped out onto the surface. The sky overhead was a brilliant, clear blue, dotted with cotton clouds. All around him, mountains rose high—he had emerged through an opening in a narrow valley between two peaks. A little below him, a small stream trickled, its passage tinkling light laughter as it traversed the pebbles. High above he heard twittering whistles which must have been birdsong.

This was what the Shaperate held to be profane? This was the forbidden thing whose mere glimpse was enough to warrant banishment?

It was the most beautiful sight he had ever seen.

Half in a trance, he followed the bubbling stream as it giggled its way down a gentle slope. After a few hundred feet, it trickled into a deep, dark pool, somehow black despite the blue sky overhead. He wondered if water behaved differently in such large bodies, here on the surface—he would have expected the pool to reflect the sky above.

Then he noticed twinkling lights within the water. Frowning, he blinked, but they were still there. He approached, wondering if they were gems or coins fallen into the pool. They were not. By the way the vision of them moved as he did, he realized they were reflected in the water's surface.

His frown deepened as he looked up, trying to see what might be casting the reflection. There was nothing there but blue sky and a cloud drifting by.

He stepped up to the edge of the water, stooped, and looked in. There he saw his face reflected. As he watched, the twinking lights seemed to form the shape of a crown, resting upon his dark hair.

His hands shook. There was a pressure on his mind, starting small but growing rapidly. The sound of the birds and the brook faded away. In their place, he heard a gravelly dwarf's voice singing mournfully.

The world was young, the mountains green,
No stain yet on the moon was seen,
No words were laid on stream or stone
When Durin woke and walked alone.
He named the nameless hills and dells;
He drank from yet untasted wells;
He stooped and looked in Mirrormere,
And saw a crown of stars appear,
As gems upon a silver thread,
Above the shadow of his head.

Durin's eyes squinted against the blossoming ache in his head. His hands, still shaking, pressed against his temples. What was this song? Was this Mirrormere? Did it sing of another Durin, long ago?

Somehow, he knew otherwise. It sang of him. But he had never been here before.

The world was fair, the mountains tall,
In Elder Days before the fall
Of mighty kings in Nargothrond
And Gondolin, who now beyond
The Western Seas have passed away:
The world was fair in Durin's Day.

A low keening erupted from Durin's throat as the pain grew into a throbbing knife in his skull. What day did he have other than this one? What were these names, Nargothrond and Gondolin, and how did he know them?

A king he was on carven throne
In many-pillared halls of stone
With golden roof and silver floor,
And runes of power upon the door.
The light of sun and star and moon
In shining lamps of crystal hewn
Undimmed by cloud or shade of night
There shone forever fair and bright.

There hammer on the anvil smote,
There chisel clove, and graver wrote;
There forged was blade, and bound was hilt;
The delver mined, the mason built.
There beryl, pearl, and opal pale,
And metal wrought like fishes' mail,
Buckler and corslet, axe and sword,
And shining spears were laid in hoard.

The great dwarf-city the singer so mourned was not Orzammar, could never have been Orzammar. It was to Orzammar what pure gold was to pyrite, what mithril was to silver.

…Wait, what was mithril? He couldn't think. His head was pounding as though a battering ram was seeking entrance to his skull.

Unwearied then were Durin's folk;
Beneath the mountains music woke:
The harpers harped, the minstrels sang,
And at the gates the trumpets rang.

This nostalgia, this sense of lost glory… this, Durin knew well. Orzammar felt it, even with the recent rediscovery of Kal-Sharok. The dwarves had suffered a long defeat spanning well beyond the nine ages of the humans. An echo—destiny remembering destiny.

The world is grey, the mountains old,
The forge's fire is ashen-cold;
No harp is wrung, no hammer falls:
The darkness dwells in Durin's halls;
The shadow lies upon his tomb
In Moria, in Khazad-dûm.
But still the sunken stars appear
In dark and windless Mirrormere;
There lies his crown in water deep,
Till Durin wakes again from sleep.

And Durin VII the Deathless, Last of His Name, woke up.
 
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Durin the Deathless was Durin I wasn't he? Durin VII was the Last King in the future of the Fourth Age. Or is Durin in this cosmology like the Avatar, constantly reborn remembering his old lives?

Great start though, I could hear the music of Durin's Song in my head as Durin left the cave before the lyrics even showed up in the post.
 
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Durin the Deathless was Durin I wasn't he? Durin VII was the Last King in the future of the Fourth Age.

Great start though, I could hear the music of Durin's Song in my head as Durin left the cave before the lyrics even showed up in the post.
I do believe that Durin reincarnated at least seven times. Though, by that logic, this would be Durin the Eighth.
 
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Absolute banger, as expected. Very excited to see where this goes. Wonder if Moria ended up in Thedas somewhere, like how Mordor was Yellowstone in Ring-Maker?

I also love how each of these connected-universe stories has is kinda built around one of Tolkien's poems, The Song of Durin here and the Ring-verse in your previous story. (Where There's A Whip, There's a Way story wen? :V)
 
Durin the Deathless was Durin I wasn't he?
I wondered if someone would bring this up!

Technically, you are correct--Durin's epithet as 'the Deathless' was used in canon to refer explicitly to his first lifetime, and in reference to his extremely long lifespan, rather than his rebirths. I decided to ignore that bit and use the epithet in reference to Durin generally for two reasons.

The first has to do with the way that it appears Tolkien's notes on the mechanics of Durin's rebirth changed over time. In earlier publications, it seems that he intended to leave the reincarnation of the Seven Father's more ambiguous. The five Durins who came in the Second and Third ages were so named "due to their resemblance to the original father of the Longboards" or some such. However, in the more recent publications of his notes, it appears that Durin was less reincarnated and more resurrected--he returned directly to his original body, which was granted new life. Given that, except in this final case, Durin was literally the same dwarrow as the one who was buried, it made sense to me to give him the same epithet.

The second reason is that Durin's overall identity, carried through his incarnations, does not have any epithets canonically. I wanted him to. So I gave him one.

I do believe that Durin reincarnated at least seven times. Though, by that logic, this would be Durin the Eighth.
I reference this in Chapter 3, but there is a lack of clarity as to exactly how many incarnations Durin was meant to have. It says explicitly both that he would "return seven times" and that Durin VII "was also called Durin the Last". I choose to go with the latter, and I justify it (to myself, it's not currently in the text) by saying that his first 'return' was when he awoke after being put to sleep to await the arrival of the Elves when Ilúvatar first adopted him.
 
And here I thought we'd have an Aeducan Warden in the form of fucking Durin...

...but it looks like even the Darkspawn aren't that stupid.

Either that or the weight of Durin's fate is so strong that even the Darkspawn are fucking terrified of him.

It took a goddamn Balrog to kill him the first time. And a Balrog would look at all the horrors of Thedas and LAUGH.

I have to wonder which of the others will be the Warden this time. And if Durin will stand beside them? Because no way in hell is he not going to fight a Darkspawn invasion. And save as many lives as he can. Especially with the knowledge and utter SKILL he has.

Durin is the firstborn child of Aule. He who was held in the Maker's hands before he was gently saved.

Durin is going to be a god damn hero and a monster to all the evil on Thedas. And his brother is so damn lucky he never awakened until now. The Dwarves are going to have their True King once more, and be saved from the fate Bhelin put them through in the end.... sealing up the mountain and fighting in the dark.

And god, the reaction Durin is going to have to the Broodmothers...

...I could almost feel sorry for the horrors of Thedas.

Almost.

Edit: And... huh. I wonder. Will this Durin lie alone? Or will he finally find himself a bride on this world whereas in his original lives... he was never in a romantic relationship with anyone?
 
Edit: And... huh. I wonder. Will this Durin lie alone? Or will he finally find himself a bride on this world whereas in his original lives... he was never in a romantic relationship with anyone?
He clearly did find a wife in multiple of his lifetimes, since he explicitly is the ancestor of the kings of Moria and Erebor, and his sixth life is even Thorin Oakenshield's... great-great-great-grandfather, I think? Something like that.
 
He clearly did find a wife in multiple of his lifetimes, since he explicitly is the ancestor of the kings of Moria and Erebor, and his sixth life is even Thorin Oakenshield's... great-great-great-grandfather, I think? Something like that.

Dain I, Father of Thror, who is Father of Thrain II, who is Father of Thorin II Oakenshield was the 7th generation descendant of Durin VI who lived to 1980 of the Third Age, and who released the Balrog of Moria in that same year (guess how Durin VI died).

So Durin VI is the great x10 grandfather of Thorin Oakenshield, who was born in 2746 Third Age, over 750 years later. Thorin was actually 195 years old when he died in the Battle of Five Armies in 2941 Third Age.
 
Ah, now this should be good.

Hail to Durin the Deathless of Khazad-dûm!
 
Part 2: The Light of Sun and Star and Moon
Many thanks to @BeaconHill for betareading.

Part 2: The Light of Sun and Star and Moon

Durin made camp in a hollow just a few dozen paces from the still water of Mirrormere. He had no bedroll, no blanket, no tent, and no food. This last he corrected while the sun still shone.

Using his dagger as a whittler's knife, he carved himself a crude spear. Then he walked along the stream, moving slowly and quietly until he encountered a snofleur drinking from the brook.

He carefully approached, staying low among the underbrush. When he judged himself to be near enough, he raised his makeshift javelin and threw it. It struck true. The snofleur squealed, stumbled, and fell, struggling weakly as it bled red onto the grass.

Durin approached, drawing his dagger. He quickly slit its throat before hefting it over his shoulders.

He brought it back to his makeshift camp and quickly found a shard of flint among the detritus of the mountain. He used this to kindle a small campfire, over which he raised a spit. Between careful tending to the burgeoning fire, Durin butchered the snofleur. It was a shame he had no salt—the meat would no longer be fit to eat in the morning if he did not cook it now, and even if he did it would not last more than a day or two. It was wasteful, but he had few options at this point.

It was Durin's first time eating snofleur—he had heard of the animal, seen it illustrated in imported books describing Orlesian cuisine, but never had it made its way onto the Aeducan table. And if the snofleur had existed in Middle-Earth, he had never seen nor heard of it.

As he sliced strips of meat with his dagger, using his buckler as a plate, he tried to sort through his memories. How long had it been? His last life had been as King in Khazad-dûm beneath the Misty Mountains. How had so much changed? How long had he been asleep?

And why was his resurrection so different, this time? In his previous returns, Durin had been sent back into the same body, granted new youth and new vitality and bidden to rise from his enchanted tomb to lead his people once more. Why had he been born afresh into a newly-made dwarrow's body, this time?

Could it be that his original body had been lost? He had been slain by one of the ancient Balrogs from the War of Wrath—had the monster destroyed his body so completely that he could not be returned to it?

Not for the first time, Durin wished he could remember what passed between his incarnations. He knew that in those intervening times he returned to Mahal's hall and dwelt there with the others of his kin, and with his six brothers. But in one of his very few conversations with Mahal while he yet lived, the Smith explained that he would never remember these in-between times when he returned to Middle-Earth.

For the Undying Lands are now sundered from Middle-Earth forever, Mahal had said, sorrow and shame in his voice, and even word of them may not be brought back to those who yet remain here, not even by you.

But he was no longer in Middle-Earth, was he? Thedas bore no resemblance to the lands he had once known. It was possible that they had shifted, whether due to another great war or calamity like the destruction of Beleriand or the sinking of Númenor, or due to natural drift over times so vast Durin could scarcely visualize them. He had once theorized that the minute shifts caused by earthquakes and eruptions might, over thousands of millennia, change the very shape of the world. Had it truly been so long since he had last been here?

But even that could not explain some of the other differences between the Thedas he had spent the past decades learning about and the Middle-Earth he had been acquainted with for millennia. What had happened to the Elves? The modern Dalish taught that they had once been immortal, but the elvhenan of their legends bore little resemblance to the great kingdoms of Nargothrond and Doriath, or even to the diminished realms of Lothlórien, Imladris, and the Greenwood.

It was possible that the passage of time had weathered these stories as it had weathered the languages of Middle-Earth's peoples. The dwarves had even forgotten khuzdul, the language Mahal had given them at the dawn of days. Could Arlathan be a bastardized name by which the Dalish remembered Gondolin or Rivendell?

But that still failed to explain much. Even in the days of Durin's sixth life, the Elves had begun their slow return over the Western seas to the Undying Lands. Why, then, were so many elves still here? And how had they lost the immortality with which Ilúvatar had graced His Firstborn people?

And there were more questions, questions whose answers he could not even begin to guess. Whence had come the qunari? How had dragons returned to the world a mere thirty years ago? What was the Blight, and why had it only apparently surfaced long after the days of Durin's previous lives?

He slept fitfully that night, curled in a crevasse on the edge of the valley as these questions circled ceaselessly in his mind.

-x-x-x-​

Durin spent the next day prospecting.

He had ignored it the day before, but there was a singing in the rock. His ears could not hear it, but it made his heart leap. Something in the mountains was calling to him. Hear us, O King, it seemed to be crying. Hear us and reclaim us, for we have been forgotten!

Whatever providence had led the Darkspawn to ignore him as he escaped the Deep Roads seemed to have passed. When he entered the mine that had borne him from the realms beneath the mountains, he was soon accosted by the creatures, screeching and gnashing their teeth. They bore some passing resemblance to orcs or goblins, but only very vaguely. Like those accursed peoples, the darkspawn were twisted mockeries of other folk. But whatever had created these was not the same force or process that had created the old enemies of Dwarves and Elves.

He cut his way through a small patrol, reveling in the youthful strength of this body and the way he could apply centuries of training to it. He soon found for himself a pickaxe. Then he made his way to a rock face near to one of the sources of the song he could hear inside the mountain's roots, and began to chip away at the stone.

It came away easily, and soon he exposed a vein of brilliant silver-white ore. The song rose up in jubilation, then fell into a satisfied silence as he looked on in wonder.

Durin had found mithril, here in the Frostbacks around Orzammar. The modern dwarves seemed to have lost the wondrous metal entirely, though they still had vague myths which referenced it, and now he alone could find and mine it.

Slowly, a plan began to take shape. He still lacked much of what he would need, but a small stock of mithril would be able to buy him food and equipment enough to begin a mercantile venture. Perhaps he could find Gorim in Denerim? From there… well, he wasn't sure where he would go from there. His final goal would be a return to Orzammar, to the throne of his people who needed him. But he needed to find a way first to have his exile reversed, and while mithril would be instrumental in achieving that goal, he wasn't yet sure how to leverage it.

Still, no matter what happened, he would need it. He raised his pick and began to mine.

-x-x-x-​

It took Durin nearly three months before he was able to make it to the nearest major hub of trade—which happened to be the gates of Orzammar itself. He had managed to acquire supplies in a Fereldan village near where he had awoken, and used their forges to produce for them equipment of iron and steel in payment. He was pleasantly surprised to find that, even though his new body had never worked a day in a forge, his old skills had not been forgotten. The villagers had been awed by his craftsmanship, even when all he was making for them were nails, ploughs, and shovels. They had even believed him when he told them that his work would last long enough to be passed down to their grandchildren, even if they were used every day. Their awe had been encouraging, in a way—it had lifted his flagging spirits, reminded him that his people had once been the envy of the world for their artisanry, and pushed him to return so that he might make them so again.

On his way to Orzammar, Durin gradually acquired some of the goods he would need to begin his work. Mules he had bought in another village in exchange for a week's work as a smith. A cart he had bought in a hamlet in the Frostback foothills. But it was only here, where trade was more common, that he was finally able to claim the last few items he needed to begin his journey to Denerim.

He had just finished packing his goods into barrels and loading them onto his cart, and was preparing to bed down for a night before beginning his journey in the morning, when he was forced to change his plans completely.

Durin looked up at the sound of voices, loud in the unhappy hush of the encampment. A group of travelers was crossing the stone bridge towards the great gate of Orzammar. His eyes widened as he took them in. Several humans, an elf, a qunari, and—unmistakably—a golem.

His eyes followed them as they approached one of the groups huddled beneath a drooping cloth tent. He watched them challenge another man over something or other. He saw his cronies attack them and die ignominiously.

He stood up slowly and began his approach. One of the humans, a woman with hair red as fire and a longbow in her hand, glanced his way, then nudged their leader, a woman in heavy plate. She turned and regarded him. He knew who she was.

"You're the wandering Wardens," he observed. "The group that survived the battle at Ostagar."

"That we are," said the woman. Her voice was quiet, low for a woman's—though still higher than most dwarrowdams'—and somehow resonant. This was a woman accustomed to command. "Who might you be?"

"I am Prince Durin Aeducan," he said. "And I believe we can help one another."

"A dwarf prince on the surface?" The redhead asked, raising an eyebrow. "Surely you would have had to surrender your titles to come here, unless Orzammar's traditions have changed?"

Durin shrugged. "Technically, yes," he said. "Practically, however… well. It's a long story."

"We have time," said the leader, pulling off her helm and shaking out her shoulder-length brown hair. There was a long scar across her cheek, still angry red for its recent acquisition.

"Very well," Durin said. "Come, I have food. Sit by my fire, and we will talk."

They followed him back to his makeshift camp. He offered them what he had—he'd managed to cobble together bread based on a recipe he had once learned from traveling Men passing through Khazad-dûm, which they had called cram, and when served alongside the cheese and salted meat he'd bought, it was a surprisingly pleasant meal.

As they ate, he told them his story. "I was born a little under a century ago, in the Royal Palace of Orzammar, the second son of King Endrin Aeducan—may the Stone welcome him home."

"King Endrin is dead?" the other armored human, a young man with short blond hair, interrupted with a grimace.

Durin nodded sadly. He'd heard as much when he finally made his way back around the valleys and up here to the gate. By the time he arrived, his father had already passed. Grief, it was said. Durin believed it, but that didn't mitigate Bhelen's responsibility.

"That will make it difficult for the dwarves to respect the Wardens' treaty," said a woman in ragged, dark robes which did little to shelter her from the cold. Even so, she seemed unaffected, not leaning into his campfire for warmth.

"Indeed," Durin agreed. "Orzammar's gate is shut until such time as the Assembly elects a new King, although as Wardens you may be able to enter. Rumor has trickled up that the two contenders are Prince Bhelen Aeducan, my younger brother and the only remaining son to my late father, and Lord Pyral Harrowmont, my father's friend and closest confidante. I suspect it will be a few weeks, perhaps a month, before Bhelen finds a way to remove Lord Harrowmont as an obstacle."

"Assassination?" asked the only elf in the group in an Antivan accent.

"If he can manage it," said Durin. "Otherwise, simple bribery and blackmail of enough of the deshyrs to have him elected over Lord Harrowmont's protests. He's already pulled both tricks at least once in the past season alone."

"Sounds like a story," murmured the leader. "Go on, please."

So Durin did. "My father had two other children—the elder, Trian, was the heir until his recent, untimely death. The youngest, Bhelen, was always given to jealousy of his position—a wound which Trian was more than happy to let fester, with his posturing and arrogance." Durin sighed, shaking his head. "I should not speak ill of the dead. Trian was skilled, intelligent, and capable, but he was prone to pride, and it was that pride, I suspect, which caused his death.

"For most of my life, I was prone to… daydreaming. I gained a reputation for slowness of wit. It was not accurate, but it is difficult to shake such rumors once they have taken hold. I had assumed that this reputation, and the accompanying status I gained as an outcast, would disqualify me from ever aspiring to high office. As it turned out, the exact reverse was true. It seems that there were ambitious deshyrs who might have sought to plant me upon the throne in the hopes of having a king who would be easily controlled. Given that Trian's blustering pride made him a dangerous choice, especially as the Shaperate believed a Blight might be approaching, I decided to use this opportunity. I resolved to court the Assembly in secret, allowing Trian to think he remained heir, and hopefully taking his place upon our father's death."

"Conniving of you," observed the Wardens' leader, her tone neutral.

"Not nearly conniving enough, as it turns out." Durin grimaced. "Bhelen had his own plans. On the night I received my first military commission as a commander of Orzammar's armies, Bhelen tried to convince me that Trian was jealous of my potential usurpation and intended to have me killed. I was unwilling to act first, so Bhelen took matters into his own hands.

"The next day, a great battle was fought against the darkspawn. I was sent with a small force into a long-lost thaig to retrieve the shield of the Paragon Aeducan himself. While I was there, Trian was lured into my path and murdered. I happened upon his body mere minutes before my father, led by Bhelen, happened upon us. I expect you can guess what happened next."

"Bhelen framed you for Trian's death," the blond man guessed.

Durin nodded. "He knew, however, that I would never simply give up and let him seize power. I was told that he pushed a vote to have me exiled immediately, without even the opportunity to defend myself before the Assembly. In defiance of all tradition, the vote passed—I suspect he bribed a large portion of the deshyrs, and blackmailed many more. I was sentenced to die in the Deep Roads that very day."

"Yet here you are," murmured an older woman—fifties or sixties, if he remembered how humans aged. "You must have escaped."

"In a manner of speaking," Durin said. "I was sent into the Deep Roads, but I found my way out through a lost tunnel and reached the surface."

"You must have fought through hundreds of darkspawn to get there," observed the leader, though her tone gave nothing away of how likely she thought that was.

"You would be surprised," said Durin truthfully. "I had no light, navigated only by Stone sense, and somehow managed to slip past them mostly unnoticed. I only fought them once I had reached the surface."

"Impossible," muttered the blond man. "The Deep Roads are said to be crawling with darkspawn."

"They were when I fought them to reach Paragon Aeducan's shield," said Durin. "I don't have any explanation for you, I'm afraid, save what I have said." Privately, he suspected that either Mahal or the one the Elves called Ilúvatar had been with him, down in the dark. But he didn't know.

"Understood," said the leader. "Go on."

Durin shrugged. "That's most of the tale. I scavenged enough ores and supplies from the upper Deep Roads to trade for food when I next reached a settlement, then made my way back up here to find Orzammar's gates already closed, and my father already dead."

"And now you want our help to reclaim your throne," said the woman in plate.

"I want your help to take Orzammar away from my dear brother," Durin corrected. "While I do not think Lord Harrowmont will make an excellent King, he will at least do little harm. Feel free to plant him on the throne if you do not trust me. I can still help you, even if you do not champion me."

"Why would you?" asked the blond man.

"In case you had somehow missed it," Durin said sardonically, "there's a Blight on. I expect the Legion of the Dead has been pressed back almost to Orzammar's very gates by now. Anything I can do to protect my city, and all of Thedas, I will do."

"Refreshing," murmured the leader. Then she nodded to herself, as if coming to a decision. "I am Elissa Cousland," she said, "one of the last two Grey Wardens in Ferelden, so far as any of us know. My companions are Warden Alistair, the mages Morrigan and Wynne, Zevran Aranai, the lay Sister Leliana, Sten of the Beresaad, and Shale."

Shale? Durin wondered, looking at the golem. He was suddenly startled when he noticed the intelligence in its—their? Her?—gaze. He had always assumed golems were little more than advanced war-machines, but this creature was intelligent. How could that be? The dwarves had created golems. Even Mahal could not create independent life.

The leader—Elissa—cleared her throat. Durin blinked, shaking off his thoughts, and looked back at her. "Apologies. Prince Durin Aeducan," he said. Durin the Deathless, Seventh of His Name. "At your service."

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There was a group of humans already arguing with the two dwarves at the gate when they entered the antechamber. Something about their king demanding Orzammar's allegiance? He suspected these were either uneducated charlatans or patsies sent to die, and resolved to pay them no mind.

The two guards seemed to feel the same way, turning towards his group and to Elissa at its head. They recognized him, of course—he might have been able to slip by unrecognized among servant-caste or casteless, or even among some of the middle castes, but these were Warrior Caste.

"Prince D—," one began, blinking rather rapidly, before the other elbowed him in the gut.

"Exile," the second growled. "You were to have died honorably in the Deep Roads. Are you so cowardly as to have fled?"

Durin considered the two for a moment. Before he could speak, Elissa moved slightly so that she was between him and the guards. "Prince Durin is with me," she said, holding out a scroll. "I am Warden Elissa Cousland, come to ask the Assembly to uphold Orzammar's ancient treaty in the face of the Fifth Blight."

Durin suddenly remembered where he had heard the name Cousland. It was a Fereldan noble house. It made sense for a minor member to have been sent to the Wardens… except that Elissa did not hold herself like a minor noble.

The leader of the other group of humans spluttered indignantly. "The Grey Wardens are traitors!" he exclaimed. "They led King Cailan to his death! They are sworn enemies of King Loghain."

"This is the royal seal," observed the second dwarven guard, who had taken the scroll from Elissa. He handed it back. "Only the Assembly, in the absence of a sitting King, has the authority to respond. You may pass, Warden." He looked grimly at Durin. "If you choose to bring this exile with you, it is within your right as a Warden—but know that his presence will win you few friends."

"I will keep it in mind," said Elissa.

"You're letting in a traitor and her pet exile!?" exclaimed the man. Durin had decided that, whatever else he was, he was clearly an idiot. "In the name of the King I demand you execute—"

"Please," Elissa said, her voice quiet and edged with ice. "Please, finish that sentence. I am begging you."

The man blinked at her. All the blood fled from his face. "I…" he swallowed, taking a step back, then seemed to rally. "You—you'll hear of this! King Loghain will—"

"Will what?" Elissa asked. Durin looked up at her and saw that her hand had gone to the hilt of the greatsword on her back.

The man was literally shaking as he turned away. "Enough! Come, men! We will report this to the King!" With that, at a pace that was barely shy of sprinting, he and his entourage fled.

Elissa took a deep breath and pulled her hand off her sword. Her other fist unclenched as she turned back to the gatekeepers. "Apologies," she said. "We surfacers are in the middle of our own succession crisis, as you may have heard—but as Grey Wardens, that is not our concern."

The gatekeeper shrugged. "So long as you don't bring further unrest into Orzammar, your surface issues are your own." He looked Durin up and down. "See that you don't bring further unrest."

Durin just looked at him. "We will do our best," he lied.

-x-x-x-​

"The guards did make a good point, Warden," Morrigan said in her low, silken voice as they descended into the mountain. "The dwarves are an exceedingly traditional people. Bringing an exile into their midst, mere months after his sentencing, is not the most diplomatic thing we could do."

"It'll win us enemies among Bhelen's supporters," Elissa said, eyes forward, "but friends among his enemies. I hope."

"And I do intend to provide any aid I can in my own right," said Durin, glancing at Morrigan. "I assure you, I'm not so accustomed to privilege that I can't do good work."

"What sort of work, I wonder?" Morrigan mused, looking him up and down with those liquid gold eyes. "You must be able to fight, if the accusation that you murdered your brother was believable, but we can all fight. Can you provide anything more specific? With your nobility stripped from you, what exactly can you offer?"

Durin met her eyes. "I know more about mining and smithing than anyone alive," he said, and it was no exaggeration. He knew exactly what Orzammar was capable of, and it paled in comparison to the glories of Khazad-dûm at its height. "Give me a day in the Deep Roads and I will find you veins of gold, silver, adamantine and silverite to make all of you wealthier than any king on the surface. Give me a week down there, and another in a smithy, and I will have arms and armor for each of you, lighter than cloth robes and harder than dragonbone. Give me lyrium, and I can weave magic into each piece to make it a marvel the like of which has not been seen in centuries."

"Bold claims indeed," said Zevran. He sounded amused, but also intrigued. "I wonder if you can back them up."

"Test me in any way you like," Durin challenged. "I am confident in my skills."

They reached the grand gate at the base of the steps. The party's escort pushed the metal doors open with a grinding sound.

"—the man who should be King!" The shout greeted them as they stepped through the gate, followed by the unmistakable sound of a blade sinking through armor into flesh. Durin tensed, pushing past Elissa to see…

His eyes met Bhelen's across the grand square. Bhelen went white as a sheet. Between them, Vartag Gavorn tugged his axe out of the chest of a fallen dwarrow in the colors of Clan Harrowmont. He turned back to Bhelen, then followed his gaze.

Durin found his fists were clenched hard enough that his nails were digging into his palms. He forced himself to relax as he met the murderer's gaze. I can't do anything for that poor Khuzd, he told himself, but by keeping silent now I may prevent a riot breaking out.

The killer scoffed, turning back to Bhelen, who seemed to shake himself out of whatever fit seeing Durin had put him in and turned to return to the Diamond Quarter as fast as he could without making it obvious that he was fleeing. The other group was more obvious, scattering away in the face of a man willing to kill in the very center of Orzammar.

Durin ignored the guard greeting Elissa and her crew. He walked past, approaching the fallen dwarrow, lying in a spreading pool of his own blood upon the flagstones. He knelt beside him, reached out, and gingerly closed his eyes. "Rest, brother," he whispered. "Go now to the halls of your fathers, where Mahal holds dominion, until the world is renewed."

He stood up and backed away as two members of the guard approached to remove the body, then turned and returned to Elissa and her group, thinking deeply.

Blood in the main square of the Orzammar market! This city was sick. His people were sick. Sick with pride, with tradition, with fear.

But most of all, he thought, remembering the dilapidation he had traversed as he passed through the Deep Roads, we are sick with loss. With grief.

And, as he came to that realization, the very first stirrings of an idea began to whisper in his brain. Not a plan—not yet—but a seed that might grow into one.

-x-x-x-​

"Durin," Elissa asked quietly when they finally managed to extricate themselves from their escort. "Is it safe for us to split up in this city?"

"That depends on where in the city you wish to go," said Durin evenly, watching a merchant-caste woman peddle her wares—textiles of middling make, by the looks of them. "And how small the groups into which you will divide are to be."

"Can you provide details?" Elissa asked patiently.

Durin's lips pursed, eyes still on the merchant woman. He could practically hear the desperation in her voice, much as she tried to hide it, and he expected it was half of why she was having so little success. All the wealth in this city, and still half our people go hungry. And it will be more if this stalemate over the throne goes on much longer. The stores must be dwindling while the city remains barred to surface merchants.

He shook off his thoughts. "Yes," he said. "Send no fewer than four at a time into Dust Town—that's the undercity, where the casteless and near-casteless are driven when they are no longer accepted by polite society. Poverty breeds desperation, and desperation spurs foolishness. And send no one entirely alone anywhere in the city—there are too many taverns on the streets, and too much tension in the air."

"Clearly," muttered Alistair, "given we hadn't been here five seconds before someone was killed right in front of us."

Durin sighed. "We are a proud people," he said softly. "Once upon a time, we even deserved that pride. We long to return to those days. It consumes our thoughts." The merchant woman was hungry. He could see it in her face, her sunken eyes, the way she eyed the stalls of the nearby merchants selling nugmeat and mushrooms. He tore his eyes from her and faced Elissa.

"Every dwarrow in Orzammar is invested in our politics," he said quietly. "It's not a matter for only the nobles, although the nobility tends to make all the decisions. Even the casteless care who is king, though many would rather not. We all remember, down to our bones, the golden age that we have lost, when the empire stretched beneath the surface of Thedas from the Frostbacks to the Anderfels. It eats at us that we have been driven from being the greatest unified empire in the recorded history of the world to a single city and another distant colony in what many consider to be open rebellion." He shook his head. "And now that city has no king, and no clear successor to take the throne. If that absence is not corrected soon, I fear the mountain shall explode with violence and blood."

"And we will have no dwarven support against the Blight," said Elissa grimly. "Is there any way we can… hurry the succession crisis along? Whether by backing one of the candidates or by forcing the Assembly to come to a decision?"

"You could back one of the candidates," said Durin, "but it's difficult to predict exactly how that would affect the landscape. You are a Warden, which grants you some measure of respect—your order has always been honored here, where the Darkspawn are never far. But you are also a surfacer, and there will be those who take offense to your interference in our internal affairs, regardless of how stone-headed those affairs are. I can't advise you on what the best course of action is until I've had a few hours to get a feel for the mood in this city and listen to some of the gossip on the streets."

"Fine," said Elissa, nodding firmly. "I assume you won't be safe entirely on your own. Who would give you the least trouble to keep with you?"

"Either of you Wardens," said Durin. "As I said—your order is respected. More so than most surfacers."

Elissa nodded, eyes darting between her people, considering. "All right. Alistair, you're with Durin. Follow his lead, keep him safe, and learn what you can here in the Commons. Sten, you take Zevran, Leliana, and Shale down into Dust Town and see what you can find out about how the underclass feels about the election, and anything else that might be going on. Morrigan, Wynne, you two are with me—we're going up to the Diamond Quarter to see what we can learn from the nobility."

"Be careful in the Diamond Quarter," said Durin. "Nobles are an easily-offended lot who keep axes too close to hand and have too few reasons not to use them."

"I gathered that," said Elissa darkly. "I was a Lady before I was a Warden—I know how to deal with pompous assholes, even dangerous ones." She looked around the group. "Reconvene here in two hours," she ordered. "I want to have a plan of action by the time we find somewhere to bed down for the night."

-x-x-x-​

Two hours later, Durin returned to the meeting place, an overhang just outside the central square, near one of the many long drops deeper into the earth. He and Alistair were the first to arrive.

"So, any advice on where we can spend the night?" Alistair asked, peering over the edge then looking away, shuddering slightly.

"Not much," Durin said. "I've never had to, nor desired to, stay the night in a public inn here in Orzammar. I always had a home to return to, before this."

"Oh, right," said Alistair, wincing. "I am… sorry about all that, by the way. I saw the looks everyone was giving you."

Durin shrugged. He'd had six lifetimes of respect; he could deal with scorn for a brief slice of his seventh. "It will be set right," he said simply. "One way or another, this will all be set right."

"You really think so?"

"I have faith."

Sten arrived next, leading his team. He gave Durin a curt nod before turning to Alistair. "These dwarves are sick," he said.

Alistair started. "What, is there a plague?"

"They are choking, drowning in their mad traditions," said Sten darkly.

"Ohhh. Metaphorically sick." Alistair relaxed. "That's a relief."

"He tried to convert a woman to the Qun," Zevran reported, sounding amused. "She did not seem… especially receptive."

"She will learn," Sten said.

"Of course, my large friend, of course."

There was a clanking of metal plates as Elissa stomped in their direction from the gates to the Diamond Quarter. "Don't take this the wrong way," she said, glowering at Durin, "but I really do not like your caste system."

"We agree, then," said Sten.

"As do I," said Durin frankly. "It was not always this bad, but it has been steadily growing worse these several centuries."

"I've only been out of Highever, what, six months? And already I'm questioning the very existence of nobles as a concept." She sighed. "Anyway, we talked to Harrowmont's Second."

Durin nodded. "Harrowmont is a good man," he said. "He might even be a good King. Possibly."

"Well, he sure knows how to drive a bargain," said Elissa with a grimace. "He wants us to fight for him in the Proving in just a couple of hours."

"Against Bhelen, I assume?" Durin asked.

"Well, his champion," said Elissa. "I'm gathering that's as close as it gets down here." She snorted. "You speak through others, you fight through others, next you'll tell me your deshyrs even vote through others."

"It is, in fact, possible to send a proxy to the Assembly to vote in one's stead," Durin told her.

"Maker damn it." Elissa sighed. "I couldn't find any way to break the Assembly stalemate without backing Harrowmont or Bhelen, and I already don't like Bhelen—and not just because of what you told us. So we're going to head down to the Proving arena, beat the shit out of a few dwarves, and see what doors that opens."

"Understood," said Alistair, rolling his shoulders. "Where's this Proving?"

"I can guide you," said Durin. "Follow me."

-x-x-x-​

Elissa, Alistair, Zevran, and Wynne emerged from the Proving bloodied but victorious. "Well," Alistair said with false cheer as they rejoined the rest. "That was… fun. I like to make a habit of killing people whenever I visit a new city."

"We do seem to be making something of a tradition, don't we?" Wynne murmured ruefully, looking down at her stained robes. "Are there any reputable launderers in Orzammar?"

"There are," said Durin.

"That can wait," growled Elissa, storming past them towards the exit. "I just killed eight people and I still don't have the dwarves' support. Forender said he'd meet us at the tavern down the road and I am not waiting."

They hurried after her, Durin giving quick directions to Wynne to the nearest launderer's he knew of. Their troupe filed into Tapsters, into a private room.

It was not Dulin Forender who greeted them.

"Warden," said Harrowmont, turning from the heating magma fountain. His eyes caught on Durin, and softened. "Lord Aeducan."

"Lord Harrowmont," Durin responded with a nod. "It has been too long."

"Nearly five months," agreed Harrowmont. "I am sorry you could not be here when your father passed. For, as you might guess, multiple reasons."

"As am I," agreed Durin.

"You can catch up later," said Elissa flatly. "Lord Harrowmont, your people have a treaty with the Grey Wardens, and I am tired of having to jump through hoops to get your people to honor it."

Harrowmont sighed. "I wish I could help you at once—truly, I do," he said. "But it is more complicated than that. In the absence of a King, it is the Assembly which decides where the army of Orzammar goes, and right now the Assembly is paralyzed with arguing over the succession."

"Which I just helped you with," said Elissa flatly.

"Not enough, I'm afraid," said Harrowmont. "You have tipped the balance—you may even have secured my victory—but unless more is done, the election will drag on for months more."

Elissa made a frustrated sound before answering. "Fine. How can we get you on the throne more quickly?"

Harrowmont clasped his hands behind the small of his back. "A Carta leader in Dust Town named Jarvia has been terrorizing the citizens of Orzammar for years," he said. "If you help me remove her, it will show the Assembly that I can protect and lead this city where Bhelen cannot."

"Fine," growled Elissa. "I'll take out this Carta for you, and you get an army for me."

Harrowmont nodded. "You have my word." He glanced at Durin. "Lord Aeducan—unless you intend to aid in this assault, I would be honored if you stayed. We have much to discuss."

Durin glanced at Elissa. "Do you wish my aid?"

Elissa shook her head sharply. "No need," she said, turning to her team. "Alistair, Leliana, Morrigan—you three are with me. The rest of you, find us somewhere to stay."

The Wardens and their entourage filed out of the room. Once they were gone, Harrowmont sighed, slumping slightly. "A forceful woman, that one," he said.

"Exceedingly," agreed Durin. "But that is most likely what is needed, in these dark times."

"During a Blight? Absolutely," said Harrowmont. He met Durin's eyes. "But what do you think is necessary for Orzammar?"

Durin took a deep breath. "Do you wish me to be honest?"

"Of course," said Harrowmont.

"Me," said Durin.

Harrowmont chuckled. "Direct of you." He looked at Durin with sad eyes. "I never expected to even be in consideration for the throne," he said. "Now that I am, however…"

"Why not you?" Durin asked.

"If I might know," Harrowmont said.

"You are too traditional," said Durin. "You live, like so many of our people, in the past. You long for the days of the old empire, but do not look forward to find a path to reclaim it. You have lived too long in toleration of the problems in this city. I have been outside it, now—I have seen more, learned more. We must change, Lord Harrowmont. What happened to Trian has happened hundreds of times, and it must not happen again."

Harrowmont considered him. "You have been to the surface," he said quietly. "By law, your caste has been stripped. How do you propose to circumvent this?"

Durin was silent for a moment. "Are we safe from prying ears?" he asked.

"We are. I swear it on the honor of my house."

Durin nodded. "I have made a discovery," he said, "which will be enough, if properly leveraged, for the Assembly to have no choice but to name me a Paragon."

Whatever Harrowmont had been expecting, it was not that. He staggered back. "What?"

"I have rediscovered mithril," said Durin softly. "There are veins of it in the Deep Roads. I can find these veins, and I can smith their bounty."

He had a cache of mithril ore already mined on the surface. He had originally been planning to hire a wagon to take him to Denerim, then start forging mithril there. Once word spread to Orzammar, he would return triumphant.

Now… he had another idea. One that would, hopefully, achieve the throne far more quickly than having to wait for his father's successor to die.

"That… is certainly a Paragon-worthy achievement," said Harrowmont, blinking at him. "But even if it is true, the Assembly will no more confer Paragon status on you than lend an army to the Warden, until the election is already settled. How do you propose to become King without having already become a Paragon?"

Durin smiled. "You remember the Paragon Branka?"

Harrowmont frowned. "You intend to seek her out, get her support? She is most likely long dead."

"I intend to go down into the Deep Roads to look for her," said Durin. "But if she is dead, then while I am down there I myself shall forge a crown for the new King—one of mithril, like the crowns of the first Kings beneath the Stone. Then I shall emerge and bring it before the Assembly."

Harrowmont considered. "It may work. The Assembly is difficult to predict."

"If they refuse to accept me as King, you shall have the new crown," said Durin. "I swear it on the blood of my forefathers."

Harrowmont grimaced. "I do not like that this should be so convincing," he said. "I never thought of myself as ambitious. Very well—I shall back you in the Assembly when you return. You have my word."
 
I do not know enough about Dragon Age to comment, however you appear to have an excellent foundation for this story.
Keep up the good work. I am looking forward to reading more.
 
The dwarf who should be king surely, and Harrowmont is a better dwarf then he is a man.
In Dragon Age, "man" and "woman" are used as species-neutral terms. Durin, obviously, is used to using them otherwise--but he's not yet in a place where he can put his own spin on the language without raising eyebrows. He'll get there. For now, he will stick to the Dragon Age terminology in public.
 
Innnteresting ramifications too. Female Cousland means that Morrigan is going to have to sleep with Alistair to have her child.

And further on, depending on who she romances... hm. Well, if this is a traditional Alistair + Cousland pairing... it might lead to her becoming the Queen. Or not.(Morrigan is always BestGirl)

And it all depends on the Archfiend.

If Durin can use his nature and bring a mithril blade... perhaps he can truly kill the thing without it killing him. And bring an end to the Blight.
With a crown of Mithril upon his head enchanted with Lyrium...

And, oh yes... time for the horrorshow.

Dealing with the Paragon and the Deep Roads is always the most horrifying part of Dragon Age Origins. Especially having to go through... Her... nest.

Ugh. That is going to suck.

But yeah, this is going to be a horrible time for everyone. Most horrifying quest in the game and the revelation of just why it is better to die if captured by Darkspawn if you are female.

But with that forge they will soon be at... ...heh. Time to unleash the Mithril Forging in all its glory.
 
The first time I played DA:O, I sided with Harrowmont, on account of him being an honorable man and Behlen being a manipulative murderer.
The second time I played, I sided with Behlen. "Honor"'s worth crap if it means you support horrific traditions like the caste system.
 
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