The Reapers - Crystalizing [Worm x Cradle Crossover]

Interesting fic, those from Earth Beth really ignorant do they

I wouldn't say ignorant. Just that it's a new situation for them, if they choose to believe it.

You got just the right amount of talking-past in that confrontation. I approve!

Writing groups conversations like this is hard, really not fun at times. Give me a scene with only two characters over this kind of balancing act. I'm glad nobody's objected to Thomas Calvert being in meeting and also a little bit miffed it has gone unremarked so far 🤔🤨

I'm just happy the story can finally go past Day 1.
 
I guess for those embroiled in parahuman conflicts all their life and seeing things from the inside the arrival of Scion and the appearance of parahumans doesn't qualify as 'something major that happened in the last couple of decades'. It's just the way it is.

That will be a headbanger when the crew starts looking things up on the internet.
 
I guess for those embroiled in parahuman conflicts all their life and seeing things from the inside the arrival of Scion and the appearance of parahumans doesn't qualify as 'something major that happened in the last couple of decades'. It's just the way it is.

That will be a headbanger when the crew starts looking things up on the internet.
Yeah it would reveal so much to them, especially with their 'outside' knowledge as you put it.

The tricky thing is the balance. I have the hindsight having read Worm but what knowledge can Lindon and company get in a short amount and how much should be revealed in what way, these are the questions.
 
I'm amazed that, when asked if anything unusual happened in the last few decades, nobody impulsively answered "yeah, Scion appeared and then all the other superpowers".

Because, that line of reasoning? It would both solve the mistery for the Cradle trio, and panic everyone else, Cauldron excluded.

It would also get the amusing answer of "wait, it's only been 30 years and you already started fighting Dreadgods? Amazing!"
 
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But Scion is 'a hero'. Absolutely nothing in common with that demonic meat blob the gang showed as an example ...

Cauldron connected the dots, for sure. But they are hardly going to just come out and say it.
 
I'm really hoping Alexandria is doing an internal victory dance, because any other reaction would be a sign of the Idiot Ball. I'll accept being careful but if she starts sabotaging stuff I'll be disappointed.
 
12. Thinker, Taylor, Covert Schemes
The sound of laughter stubbornly penetrated through the closed windows and thick curtains, assaulting her ears. Taylor pressed the pillow more tightly to her head, half tempted to teach these drunk revelers a lesson for this racket an hour past midnight.

She sighed and sat up in her bed; people had a right to celebrate after all, an Endbringer was dead.

Her inability to sleep hadn't been because of the week-long celebrations or excessive noise or even the infrequent power disruptions because of all the rebuilding work. Something else had snatched it away.

She poured herself a glass of water from the jug on the side table, thoughts in a frenzy.

An Endbringer dying didn't solve the rest of the problems in the world did it? Dinah was still a captive, several thousand civilians were dead, more than half the city was in ruins. Ideal circumstances for increased gang activity in the long run, turning her hometown into an even more of hellhole.

Worst of all, Bitch had died in Leviathan's final attack, and Taylor didn't know how to feel about it yet. Did she have an obligation to mourn someone who could have been a good friend but wasn't really? Did she owe it to herself and the time spent with the deceased? Could she allow herself such feelings when there was so much she could still be doing to help?

The celebrations only made her feel hollow inside.

She sensed movement downstairs; her father was back. Late tonight which had been the usual this week. Plenty of company was to be found in the various bars around the city for Danny and his friends recently. She supposed the encouraging thing was that he was being responsible, and only drinking as much as he could handle judging by his complete lack of hangovers each morning.

She stood up and started pacing.

Lisa had tried to catch her eye at Rachel's funeral, and contacted her afterwards, but Taylor was in no mood to entertain her. There was nothing else to discuss between them, the Undersiders had made their choice regarding Coil and as far she was concerned, that chapter of her life was closed.

New options – that's what she needed to find. So much work yet lay ahead of her, waiting to be done. An action she'd already taken was breeding of extra insects; an Endbringer battle wasn't kind on insects either especially in the areas where battle had been rampant. And while she'd had an influx of mosquitos recently, more variety meant more options.

She briefly contemplated leaving for one of those abandoned sites where she'd been breeding her swarm—an apartment building and a house that were declared uninhabitable—but thought better of it. A remote and quiet inspection from her bedroom while sitting in a comfy chair appealed more to her.

Both locations were at the opposite ends of her increased range, and everything there was on track, undisturbed. No break-ins or suspicious activity by anyone that she could tell.

Since the end of an unprecedentedly long truce a couple of days ago, gang activity had slowly begun to pick up once again, although it was relatively subdued for the time being. A significant reason for this was that at least one member of the Triumvirate had been regularly sighted in the city over the past week. Legend made daily visits from New York, focusing on encouragement and aiding in rehabilitation efforts—mostly PR work—but it had successfully discouraged the gangs from being too active. Her own patrols had been uneventful during the three nights she had been out.

Following the attack, the PRT and the government had come together to create a memorial for those who lost their lives. While the number of combat casualties had remained a record low for a Leviathan attack, an overwhelming majority of dead was the non-cape civilian population, drowned in underground shelters or crushed by the rubble when the lightning storm hit their shelters and collapsed it on top of them.

Eidolon had been officially awarded the ceremonial title of "The defender of Brockton Bay" by the mayor. Unofficially, the forums were buzzing with another moniker for him, 'Endbringer-slayer.'

Then there were all sorts of rumors floating about on PHO, the entire internet rife with speculation. Some claimed Eidolon wasn't the one who killed Leviathan and it was another unknown cape. Another rumor suggested that PRT had recruited defector Yangban members to its ranks and they were staying in Brocton Bay. Some made leaps of logic, connecting the dots and holding said Yangban members for Leviathan's fall. She'd also read something about aliens but didn't pay much attention. They appeared to be the usual theories about the Endbringers; aliens come to destroy earth and blah blah.

Of course, she knew the truth about Leviathan's death. Majority of her swarm had been reduced to the last few resilient bugs during the battle but she had managed to get an idea of how battle had unfolded. Leviathan had been penned by some capes and that had allowed Eidolon to deliver a killing blow.

Not that any of it mattered now; her mind was only wandering aimlessly, for there seemed no apparent way she could extricate Dinah herself from Coil's confinement in her current state. The fact that she hadn't been able to do much at the battle continued to gnaw at her. Having seen how overwhelmingly strong the Endbringers already were and how high they could escalate, she had been feeling inadequate deep in her bones.

Her thoughts were interrupted by Danny coming up the stairs, straight to her room.

The footsteps paused just outside and after a while, a knock sounded from the door.

"Taylor, are you awake?" Her father asked.

She didn't want to answer as she had no desire to strike up a conversation with him or anyone right now.

"I know you aren't asleep kiddo, and we haven't talked, not for many days..."

Silence.

"You know I'm here if you're hurting." He said, hesitance radiating through the door.

Goddammit. Well, at least he was trying. Too late, some petulant part of her thought, but she ignored it and went back to sit in her bed. "Come in, it's open."

The doorknob turned with a quiet click, followed by a subtle creak as her father gently pushed the door open, before closing it behind him. With the lights off, only his silhouette was visible, but he stood there for a moment, fidgeting with his hands.

Taylor reached out and turned one of the lamps on.

"Sit down, Dad." She said.

Danny perched himself on the edge of her desk. Still not entirely comfortable, any time that you lose is really gone. She didn't let her thoughts affect her expressions.

"Have you eaten something?" he asked, then followed up, "I can fix a sandwich if you want."

"Uh…no, I ate earlier. It's fine," she reassured him. Then raised an eyebrow, "you can take the chair you know. No need to…" she waved her hand at him and the desk.

He smiled sheepishly before getting up and settling himself in the chair at the foot of her bed.

"So how is…um, the work at the docks?" Taylor asked.

"It's coming along… it's coming along nicely." He stayed silent for a few moments, "I saw that cape, what's his name… Legend, wasn't he your favorite? No, it was the woman, Alexandria yeah. Anyway, he came to our site, gave a big inspiring speech. I'll say if anyone wants to learn how to talk, learn from that guy."

Not the direction she thought the conversation would go but interesting nonetheless.

"Uh huh. Sounds like an event."

"It sure was, all the fellas I talked to were impressed. Guy is a cape after all."

Taylor didn't want to talk about Rachel or her sleep deprived nights. She continued her questions.

"And what about your work? Any changes?"

"Funny you ask," he started, a little animated now – strange that he'd come upstairs to ask about her well-being but it looked like he also needed to talk to her, "we've had quite a few out of towners come in this week asking if there's any work. Used to be you couldn't find skilled workers for your life and those who did come left for one reason or another. But now," he said with a chuckle and a shake of his head, "too many guys and gals looking for work in Brockton Bay, an influx of people, not just here but I'm hearing in New York and Boston too. They're saying international sea routes could be back open soon. Hell, I might even get a promotion, been lookin' after simple admin and hiring for some time, now they might put me in charge of everything at the new docks. It's not a sure thing yet but I don't see anyone better qualified."

As he went on and on, Taylor was having a hard time not showing surprise on her face. This was a different side to her father altogether, or it'd been absent for some time.

Danny also realized he'd been rambling. He stopped with a grimace, "look at me forgetting why I even came up to your room. How are you holding up?"

That's what she wanted to avoid talking about, but it didn't feel right to shut down her father after he'd made consistent efforts to rebuild their relationship.

"I'm okay really, you have nothing to worry about."

He looked at her with an expression bordering on pity which pricked her pride. "You haven't been getting much sleep, have you? I can hear you walking in your room when I'm in bed." He said.

He must've heard her come and go at nights, and admittedly, pace around in her room when she couldn't sleep.

"It's normal after… you know."

She didn't say more, letting him digest the implied meaning. You've only started paying attention now, even if you're right.

It dawned on him immediately. An ashamed look crossed his face and he looked away.

His embarrassment made her regret her words, she decided to throw him an olive branch, "Look Dad, I'm fine. I'm eating and sleeping enough, growing taller every day. Check the pantry if you don't believe me," she smiled at him. "People die and life goes on, you and I both know; besides it wasn't like Rachel was my best friend, I just knew her because of others."

Such transparent lies we tell ourselves. She shut the thought down, and reached out for a reassuring pat on her father's hands.

He squeezed her hand slightly. "I'm sorry your friend's not with us, I really am. And I'm glad you're doing okay, but promise me you won't shut out people from your life. You may not feel it now but loss affects us, it changes each one of us in tiny ways. I got to make sure my daughter is okay. I've already been a bad father to you…" his voice became shaky for a moment, he swallowed, "can't afford to do that again."

He patted her shoulder gingerly and stood up.

"I'll leave you be, let's get some rest, why don't we?" He left the room, shutting the door after him.

Thanks Dad, Taylor said silently.

A distant sound of a crash reached her, followed by another. It had started in earnest; the truce was truly over and a cape was fighting another.

She looked at her phone for a few seconds, before picking it up and typing a short text.

I'm listening, it said.

Then she took her costume out from under her bed and began donning it.

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The Next Day

"You're serious?" Taylor asked. She put her coffee cup down on the table and watched the waiter pass by. It was Lisa's idea to meet in a public place that wasn't too crowded either. They were sitting in a café near the boardwalk that had almost got wrecked in the Endbringer battle. But the owner – who was some kind of artsy type – was going ahead with the demolished look and made that a part of the café's charm, or maybe he lacked the funds to renovate fully. In any case, the exposed brick walls, graffiti-inspired murals on the outside, and rustic furniture gave it a trendy, post-disaster vibe that somehow worked. Lisa had always had a knack for finding these hidden gems.

Speaking of, the blonde girl pouted, a mock frown replacing the smile on her face. "I thought you'd be happier," she said, "didn't you want to go after… you know?"

"That's because I see a few problems in your 'plan,'" Taylor started counting on her fingers. "One, we don't have a clue about these guys. You met him what… for five minutes? He and I shared like two sentences when I was helping the wounded, it doesn't mean anything. Two, now you're telling me they're from another earth? Or your power is telling you, which has been wrong before." She lowered her voice even further at the word power. "What if they are some crazy capes from Europe or Asia?"

"Three—and it's a PHO rumor but pretty reliable—one of them has already been seen patrolling with PRT. Oh and they are insanely strong so if they decide to arrest us, good luck getting away. Do you want me to keep going?"

"Hey!" Lisa protested, "the plan as you so derisively said is not to become friends with them. We'll just find and approach one of them for now, preferably Lindon as I felt we had good a rapport going," she wiggled her eyebrows, "preferably in public and… how should I put it, let's see how they respond to some… ideas. It's a rescue mission we'd be proposing after all, potentially speaking." She sounded confident, but that was always the case with her, you had to ignore that and really focus on what she was saying.

"What's your pitch for them?" Taylor asked.

"I am thinking we send a note first, tell him we'd like help to rescue a kidnapped child and not to involve the PRT. Maybe I'll put in an obscure reference to our serendipitous meeting last week, I'm sure he'll catch that." Lisa attempted to give her a dazzling smile. "See, not so dangerous."

Taylor shook her head, not sure if she liked what Lisa was suggesting or hated it. The lunch rush was gradually filling up the café, people passed them by to occupy the other tables, which gave her time to think before replying. She looked around, most folk were visibly in a better mood than she'd usually seen before the battle. At least there were some silver linings to an Endbringer dying, or maybe that was just confirmation bias.

"Do Brian and Alec have a clue about any of this, have you discussed your plan with them?" She asked, raising her voice to be heard over the buzz.

The other girl shrugged in response.

"Even if they have any objections once I tell them, they'll come around," she said. "Brian's been busy with his family, their house got destroyed. Alec seems depressed since Rachel, so you know some adventure might cheer him up." She smiled, a hint of sadness breaking through from her eyes.

Something inside of Taylor, a small part, felt bad for abandoning her friends—old teammates rather—when they were all going through so much personal shit. Especially after one of them had died just recently, but she forced herself to look ahead. If she could save Dinah somehow and take care of Coil in the process, they would all be free of his corruption, out from under his thumb to hopefully pursue better goals.

That thought led her to another more ambitious one but she set that aside for now for the most obvious and perhaps just as important a question.

"And your employer? He doesn't suspect your conspiracy? Also, nobody's told him I'm done with the Undersiders?" She gave Lisa a searching look, whispering the last word. "Right?"

A brief silence lingered with Lisa slowly shaking her head in what looked like disapproval. That irked Taylor.

"Make no mistake, I am done, unless we can all get the little girl out somehow." She said strongly.

Lisa sipped from her cup. "Hmmm, he is always suspicious, but I don't know if he has any idea about this in particular. Pretty sure even in his wildest paranoias he wouldn't suppose that we'd ask for help from someone loosely PRT-adjacent even if they aren't openly affiliated."

"I have a hunch of my own as well," her friend said, "there's no way he doesn't know what happened at the battle and about our new interlopers. I mean he must suspect something, so I wouldn't be surprised if he is keeping an eye out to recruit them for his purposes in some roundabout way."

Taylor was puzzled. Did Lisa not see the risk if Coil was also planning to get the same capes in bed with him?

"How can you be sure he hasn't reached out to them anyway?" She asked, trying to keep her voice even.

"He is too cautious for that. Also the PRT angle has gone in our favor with this, they may not have acknowledged these new capes in their formal celebrations as Leviathan slayers but you bet your ass that's because they got something from PRT in return. If I can deduce that so could our boss and so he wouldn't dive in head first into this situation. He would observe for now." Lisa concluded.

Your boss, Taylor thought. "Okay, let's say they or this Lindon, agrees to listen to you, or a meeting, what if they let slip to Co… your employer about our role? Or maybe even side with him? I don't like putting this much trust in complete strangers?" Taylor said, then added quickly, "don't get me wrong, I appreciate you've seen the light you know, that you changed your mind about this and I am not trying to poke holes in your plan just for the sake of it. I want to save her, but we have to do it right the first time, we probably won't get another chance." She leaned back in her chair.

Lisa shook her head, "We are minimizing the risk as much as we can Taylor. You also have to put at least a little trust in other people, calculated yes, but it's important. You see that?" she turned sideways in her chair, looking out from the newly installed glass window behind her. She pointed at a tall building, four or five stories, and said, "That's where Lindon found me, god knows from where, just because I had muttered a few words about Leviathan. He had this whole thinker projection thingy to show me slowed down movements of Leviathan, you saw what he and his friends did at the battle. If we get someone like that on our side for this… mission of yours, it doesn't matter what the boss does, he'd be small fry in comparison."

Lisa didn't usually say so many words without turning to sarcasm or ridicule. Taylor began to reply but apparently the other girl still wasn't finished, "if I hadn't talked to him myself, I wouldn't be proposing this at all. But sometimes you get a sense of someone and my intuition is telling me there is something here for us." Lisa tapped her temple as she finished.

Taylor wondered if this really was the fresh option she was looking for, it came with serious risk but Lisa sounded adamant.

"If you are so sure then Initiating contact anonymously should be okay," she said slowly.

Something bugged her, so she narrowed her eyes at Lisa, "what else? There's something you aren't telling me? Spill."

Lisa gave her a grin which soon turned into a pensive expression, "You and I roughly know the details of how the battle went. I've also seen some grainy footage, I bet you have too. Tell me, how come Vista showed so much more ability and those insane reflexes to keep up with Leviathan? She's never done it before. Only when she was with Lindon did this happen. My power tells me the same. So I'm very interested in figuring out whatever kind of Master or Trump shit is going on with him you know. But that's beside the point, a side quest let's say. I am not stupid enough to approach a triumvirate level cape only for that. Our main goal is as I said, rescue."

"What do you want with their trump effect?"

"I'm just curious t…"

"To see death by migraine?"

Lisa laughed, "I'll be fine."

"There's a chance you won't be, and neither will the rest of us if this harebrained scheme goes sideways."

"Don't you want more? We're already stuck with one fucker, I don't want this arrangement to go on indefinitely. One trap after another…"

Lisa was quiet for a second, then continued, "Also, sorry about this but I did my thing, "she waved at Taylor across the table, "you are frustrated. You fancy yourself nobler than us, looking to do some good in the world, but you can't. You know I'm right. Why wouldn't you want to get some advantage from this opportunity?"

Lisa gestured to waiter passing by and ordered a refill when she was done. The whirring and rumbling sound of machinery from the outside was now distinctly audible with one side of the wall almost-nonexistent. That meant the construction crews were back on the job after lunch.

Taylor checked her wrist watch, she had to get going soon too.

"Your assumptions are inaccurate, and I'm not liking the speed with which…"

A loud roar from behind them made her go tense as she was speaking, but upon a glance it turned out to only be a group of friends having a merry time. She relaxed her control of the swarm and it went dormant once again. She couldn't muster much here but whatever there was, had been ready for action in an instant.

Was it healthy to be on edge so much of the time?

"Anyway, I hope that wasn't the universe having a laugh at me by the way," Lisa said with a playful smile but her eyes watched Taylor.

"The universe will have plenty of opportunity to mock us if we handed ourselves to the PRT." Taylor forced a chuckle.

"Oh cheer up. We'll be the ones laughing."

"On that note, let's get going now," Taylor said and stood up to go. "I guess we know what we're doing."

"Yeah I gotta talk to those two airheads and expla...."

"No!"

Lisa jerked her head up at that, "what?"

"I mean don't tell them yet. Let's see if there's some response to your 'overtures'. If it doesn't pan out, then this plan is null anyway."

Lisa's expression grew stern, "That's a slippery slope Taylor, I didn't tell them anything so far more because I couldn't get a hold of them and less because I didn't know what your answer would be, we'll trying something radical."

Taylor took a deep breath and said, "I've been onboard since the start, so let's please not go there. I'm just saying get some feelers from the Lindon guy or whoever he is, before you make an actual plan. I think it's best. Hell, make the plan with their full input, I don't care. But after." She met her teammate's gaze evenly.

Lisa observed her silently from her chair then rolled her eyes, "so dramatic for no reason. I'll do as you say, happy?"

A thought crossed her mind. "Actually…"

"Now what?"

She sat back down, "I'll go with you, not just when the meeting is, if the meeting happens. But when you reach out to them, or send your messenger bird or whatever, I'll be there. I want to see their response, I can do it without them knowing."

If there was a way to impress upon these capes the need for Coil to be dealt with, she was confident she could make that happen. This won't just be a rescue mission, a cancer like Coil had to be treated thoroughly.

Meanwhile Lisa exhaled loudly and fixed her wind-tousled hair. "As you wish," the girl said. Then after a second's pause she added innocently, "why don't we use the swarm to make contact?"

Taylor snorted. "And tell anyone close by who the message is from? No thanks."

With a tilt of her head, Lisa wiggled muttered something that sounded like you never know.

A slight smile spread across Taylor's lips, indeed you never know. "But in this case, we do."

They both stood up to go this time. "I'll call you when we move. Pick up your phone. Don't ghost me this time," Lisa said.

Taylor left first, heading straight home to plan for tonight. Perhaps some discrete surveillance of her potential partners was in order tonight, they had supposedly been seen a few times near the PRT HQ. She'd start somewhere close to that and decide from there.

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A little interlude-y type this time but we'll get back to the Cradle trio in the next chapter. Or will we? 😏
 
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LMAO

honestly does it feel that contrived?
I felt it was fine. They don't have to be involved with the ascension crew but this amount of nudging keeps my disbelief suspended. IC, if we put aside the fiend backstory, it makes sense for a shard to investigate a new source of power and for TT's power to pick on its presence the fastest. After that, it's just standard shard nudging.
 
if we put aside the fiend backstory, it makes sense for a shard to investigate a new source of power and for TT's power to pick on its presence the fastest. After that, it's just standard shard nudging.

Can you explain what you mean by "put aside the fiend backstory"?

Also the fact that a shard nudges its holder, (thinkers especially?) slipped my mind when I was writing this even though I knew this. Thanks for reminding me.

It could serve as a good explanation for some character choices just like Ta'veren in wheel of time.
 
Can you explain what you mean by "put aside the fiend backstory"?

Also the fact that a shard nudges its holder, (thinkers especially?) slipped my mind when I was writing this even though I knew this. Thanks for reminding me.

It could serve as a good explanation for some character choices just like Ta'veren in wheel of time.
Well, if they are fiends then that might change things. They might be aware of the abidan or have had encounters with them which might cause the shards to react differently than expected. Basically, I'm saying 'Assuming things aren't changed from canon.'

For the record, I didn't actually think about the shard nudging stuff until after reading the story. I just felt like Tattletale was being greedy or power-hungry or chasing the metaphorical power-high. Of course, both explanations can be true.
 
honestly does it feel that contrived?

Kinda?
I mean, she isn't interested in Othala's Trump power, and she doesn't have any history I know of looking for gimmicks or boosts so it doesn't feel like a personality trait.
And since we know that the power in this case could be a permanent boost, it gives the impression that she spontaneously developed an interest in the one power that would let them advance.

There are two ways I can think that would make it more appealing to her in story:
1) She perceives the power boost as relating to Lindon's Thinker ability, so she's personally interested
2) She observes Vista after the battle as retaining some increased capacity, so she thinks it might have some long-term benefit


That said, Thinker powers are always contrived.
They exist to make people do things they would never do on their own based on blind faith.
"Go murder that person."
"I would never!"
"My Thinker power says go murder that person, but I can't explain why."
"Okay."
 
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13. The Calm Before
The frequent clicking sounds of the mouse were only interrupted by the occasional taps of the keyboard in the quiet room. Lindon, the sole inhabitant of the darkened space, had his attention on the computer screen. The soft glow of it illuminated his immediate surroundings as he continued reading about the history and contemporary developments of this world.

Dross, too, was absent from his thoughts. Deeming this method of acquiring information too slow and primitive for an Abidan Presence, he and Suu literally had their heads together in the other room of this nondescript apartment PRT had offered to them. They were figuring out on the other computer how to access the Internet directly—without the interfaces that the humans of this world required—and fully encompass it on their own terms.

Therefore, for the last twelve hours straight, one hundred percent of Dross' attention was on that task. It gave Lindon time for himself, to get up to speed on the necessary knowledge for this mission.

The Protectorate and PRT were among the few organizations in this iteration that had managed affairs in the aftermath of the Endbringer attacks and the surge in violent capes, stabilizing a significant part of the world. It seemed to Lindon that they made a good decision to have confided in the PRT about the reality of their mission.

Perhaps the most surprising thing he had learned was the absence of any defined energy system in this iteration. Not to mention the existence and behavior patterns of the Endbringers, the oddity that was Scion—the most powerful hero, chipped in the head as Yerin would say—and the S-class threats that were allowed to exist. Either because it was more convenient for the people in charge in maintaining the order of the world intact, the status quo, or the heroes just couldn't handle such threats without severe losses.

The door opened without a sound and Mercy walked in. She stood by the door for a heartbeat, turned the lights on, and then sat down next to him.

"I've just been inside my Book for a whole day, cycling, trying out a few things and making some adjustments to techniques, there's only so much darkness I'm willing to experience in any given day." She told him with a sigh, hands raised in apology.

Lindon suppressed a laugh at her exasperated expression. A break from the computer would be good for him too, let his mind assimilate all the new information.

He turned in his chair to ask her, "what have you been trying with your techniques that is new?"

"Nothing too drastic," Mercy replied, "I thought how the Endbringer body reacted to physical trauma and damage was quite fascinating, so I was thinking up some application of that layered makeup for my bloodline armor, could be useful. It's just thought exercise anyway." She waved her hand.

"What have you been doing? Are you in a competition with Dross and Suu or something? Who figures out all the secrets first?" She asked him.

He smiled, "we have little time so I thought to utilize it." He was already thinking how to present his findings to Mercy. "Did you know there was no energy system in this iteration up until a few decades ago? Never in its history."

Mercy nodded. "That's what they say."

"It still isn't much of an energy 'system' but it's something."

"The recent influx of powered capes you mean; heroes, villains, rogues."

"Yeah but how come that aligns with our estimate of the fiend's activity?" He asked, looking at her expectantly, "the arrival of these capes…" he held out both hands, indicating a balance and a correlation, "and the fiend's activity in this iteration from the Abidan estimates. Is there a relation?"

"Another thing," he pressed on, "they mention this extra organ in the brains of these capes and some non-capes—the ones they've assessed—Corona Pollentia they call it. That was also non-existent in humans, has been historically. Many theories surround it."

He opened up a web page that had information on the corona pollentia and showed it to Mercy. She leaned forward to read it, eyes focused.

"Ooh, that's why they asked for a scan of my head yesterday."

That was news. "Really? You didn't say anything."

"I thought they were verifying I was a human like them so I went ahead with it. Didn't think it was important enough to mention."

"It's probably a good thing, might clear any doubt they still have about us."

They'd been told the results of the analysis of the spirit-fruit a couple of days ago. PRT's conclusions confirmed that something like the spirit-fruit was not found on the earth according to any known records and all the experts they consulted.

He suspected there wasn't any more detail forthcoming on that subject but the hope remained that their purpose with handing out a minor treasure like that had been achieved. With Mercy's corona pollentia test a guaranteed success, their credibility should be further cemented.

Mercy stated after a few seconds, "Hmm... the question is if this is some inherent evolution for the humans of this iteration that had been dormant until now, or is it an unnatural development? Don't you think?"

Lindon liked the fact that she was thinking along the same lines as him.

"Exactly, did a chaos fiend's proximity accelerate a natural evolution in humans by accident? Or is this some corruption directly coming from it?" he offered.

"If we take into account how physically weak an average person is in this world, non-capes I mean— they're like foundation level children—I wouldn't be surprised if the evolution were natural, you know," Mercy theorized, her voice contemplative.

"On the other hand," she continued, "we are dealing with a chaos fiend—you've even faced one before so you'd know best—they are just …different, completely alien in every way so I wouldn't be surprised if this was its doing."

"That's what they teach students here," He opened another webpage for her, "something close to it anyway. It's a theory; alien or artificial intelligence giving people powers. A stressful event happens, or a series of such events, person usually passes out or goes discombobulated for a while and afterwards they possess powers."

"Sounds like your cycling technique, and your training methods." Mercy said with a teasing smile. "Let me put myself through constant excruciating pain." She mimicked his voice.

Huh, he hadn't realized. Both things indeed sounded similar on the surface. But they weren't really when you delve deep.

"Except no one is getting their powers by following a plan or training regimen, are they?" He said as much and paused, briefly distracted by the thought if such a plan was possible in the first place and what would it entail, but shook his head to clear it. "Also, the sheer variety of powers is something to note, I'm studying these PRT classifications on power and it backs our observations on that."

Mercy was in thought for a few moments, then she asked him, "have you tried…?" She mimed grabbing at the air using her right hand with exaggerated slowness.

Consuming?

"No, no. I haven't," he said.

"Really? Not even a little?" Mercy said knowingly, doubt dripping from her voice, but the face showing the hint of a smile.

"What if they die? Or go paralyzed or comatose? I can't pour it back into them to fix them." He tried to demonstrate the "pouring back" part with a pushing gesture.

Mercy only looked at him with eyebrows raised.

Lindon scratched his head, "well… I'm not sure some little sips here and there count," Mercy began to laugh, he continued, "those gave me no answers at all, only some idea of what a power can do, not a definitive one either."

Mercy got up from the chair and began pacing. "I haven't seen many capes stronger than Jade or Gold level but at the same time you see some of them throwing around Sage and Monarch level techniques. Even kids can get those when they trigger. Some of these Wards I spent some time yesterday with, they are strong enough to affect reality in a substantial way if allowed—I'm sure you've done the research— freezing anything in time, conceptual attacks that bypass anything, the little girl who helped us in the end. It's a wonder not everything has turned to chaos with the most powerful capes dictating everything in this world. In this region at least."

"Some areas haven't been so lucky," Lindon said. "We might have to do something about that if we can't find the fiend."

Mercy's reply was interrupted by a ping, Lindon looked at the screen, "Dragon is calling me." He told Mercy.

[What did you say…? Dragon? Accept it. Quickly.] Dross was back with him, manifesting in front of the computer.

Lindon paused, "Any luck Dross?" He inquired about his mind spirit's task.

The spirit-turned-Presence sniggered [So you are hoping for my success. I knew it.]

Lindon only shook his head in amusement and clicked the green button. The face of a woman appeared on the screen as the connection was established.

"Hello Lindon, this is Dragon," her voice came, clear and impassive.

"Yes… we know. I'm here, Mercy too."

"Good. I've called for a check-in, in case your team needs anything from the PRT or the Guild," Dragon said, "also if you need my personal assistance with something."

He exchanged a glance with Mercy and spoke up, "we've just been discussing how the powers work on your world. To continue that conversation, what would be the best material to study triggers and the theories about it?"

Dragon replied after a second, "I can certainly refer something. Just check your inbox after this call, I'll send you a list."

"Hi Dragon," Mercy chimed in, "do you know if PRT have confirmed my lack of corona pollentia yet?"

If Dragon was taken aback by that question she didn't show, "Indeed they have. Actually, that is another reason I contacted you; some in the PRT are contemplating, or rather pushing for, a similar test for Lindon and Yerin. I happen to be on the other end of that particular debate, so if you refuse now, that'll probably be end of the matter."

"They certainly know how to waste time," muttered Mercy.

"We'll see about that," Lindon told Dragon, "we'd rather spend the limited time more productively." He had no desire to satisfy the egos of some foolhardy bureaucrats.

Dross nudged him. [Ask her about electromagnetic receivers.]

That bemused Lindon. Ask her what? He said to Dross.

[Electrom… Material to study and maybe some questions I have on the subject. I told you, I can't stand this giant contraption they call the computer.]

Right… But what exactly do I ask her?

[Forget it, just repeat what I say.]

…Alright.

For the next half hour, he only asked Dragon questions that the Presences—Dross and Suu—put forward. Everything from 'radio frequency' and 'signal processing' to 'wireless receivers' and a host of other terms he didn't know or only had a passing idea about were discussed with him as a proxy between Dragon and the two Presences.

Mercy watched it all unfold, offering him no help other than asking a question or two of her own. He missed Yerin, her Moonlight Bridge really was an unfair ability and the irrational part of his brain resented it even more right now.

By the end Dragon was clearly holding back on the question of why Lindon even needed this information, but she didn't ask. Dross, too, only stopped because Lindon had had enough.

"We'll let you go soon, just one last thing," he tried to sound sincere, "any progress on finding capes with interdimensional abilities? Something like portals to access alternate earths?" He asked, holding a tiny bit of hope.

"Unfortunately, no." Dragon replied. "Although PRT is on the lookout and so am I."

"You didn't confiscate any of Haywire's technology after he died?" Mercy asked pointedly.

"The PRT had some of that technology in secure vaults but that was lost after a Simurgh attack." Dragon said.

No progress, that was a shame. For all the action on their first day here, since then it had all been research and discussions mostly. Not counting Yerin, who had been travelling up and down the country.

"Okay then, thanks for your time and help, Dragon."

"Likewise."

The call ended with a beep.

A momentary quiet filled the air.

Mercy broke it. "Lindon, if there's no way to access other worlds then what are our options?" She asked.

"I'm not sure," he replied. "Maybe Dross and the other two can figure some technology out once they have more knowledge. Isn't that right Dross?"

Dross apparently had something else occupying his mind [Yes yes I'd love to. Can you open this file Dragon mentioned and look at each page?] Lindon obliged [Yes that one, and all the ones below it. Just keep doing that when you talk to Mercy.]

"Hey Lindon," Mercy called for his attention, "is it possible to try and open a rift ourselves, between dimensions, or worlds as they are here?" She looked at him keenly.

"Not with our advancements sealed." Lindon said.

"For a normal Archlord I'd believe that, but we are not normal, are we?" She said with a glint in her eye, "you, especially, have a connection with the concept of Void, pretty handy in spatial transportation wouldn't you say?"

Lindon considered that, "obviously we can't break the seals just yet only to access other worlds, without any guarantee of even finding the fiend, let alone fighting it. So, you're saying what…? We pool our Authority and Willpower somehow and form a Working?"

Mercy nodded.

"Wouldn't that be the same as one of us releasing our power and then working the Way?" He objected. "We'd still attract the fiend's attention."

She retorted, "Assuming we already haven't."

Lindon shrugged.

"We won't try to call on the Way though. It would just be our own power," Mercy said. "Break through the fabric of reality. Like a Herald for example; overwhelming power, or how some Silverlords counter the Way's workings."

"That is assuming such a buildup of collective of Authority is even possible, we don't have anything like the eight-man empire's armor."

"Weren't you working on some prototypes to replicate that?" She asked.

"That was some time years ago. No success, and we've been busy since then." He informed her, a little miffed. He wasn't too fond of those memories.

"Well, I'm only tossing ideas around but if it came to that, you might have to be ready for some soulsmithing." Mercy winked at him.

[Have either of you given a thought to why the Way is so distant in this iteration when potentially countless sentient beings reside in its parallel worlds?] Dross asked out loud.

"This iteration supposedly exists at the absolute end of a single branch of the Way, no surprises it is distant. It's probably the reason, or at least one of them." Lindon replied.

"It could also be the fiend's doing no?" Mercy said. "Like Vroshir who block the Way when they attack Abidan posts and other chaos fiends who naturally have that effect on any world."

[I don't just mean this world. I mean Aleph, and all the rest of them.] Dross clarified, [why is all that human population not cementing this iteration to the Way? Instead it's the opposite.]

"I understand what you're asking," Lindon believed he had the answer, "I think Mercy had it right too. Not sure if you realized it though," he gave her a cheeky smile, "even if this iteration has this many people, first, it already exists where the Way is thin, but second, this fiend has most probably cut off all those worlds from the Way completely. From the perspective of the Way, so to say, those worlds and those people don't exist. That has caused the fraying of connection to the point of non-existence. It's just like you said; Vroshir can purposefully block off the Way so why not this fiend."

He looked at both Dross and Mercy, "it's a theory."

Dross turned his attention back to his study and Mercy got up, stretching. "Okay I'm off. Let me see how friendly our 'protectors' are today." She giggled.

Lindon reached out with his spiritual senses, "new ones today?" He said, referring to the rotating pair of capes and a couple of non-cape squads PRT covertly had on duty to guard their guests. The Reapers knew it was to keep an eye on them, PRT knew that the Reapers knew but the charade continued.

Mercy replied, "Yup, did you know they've asked for extra cape reinforcement from other cities to bolster their ranks? Two have arrived so far, one of them is a Ward. They really don't want an accident involving us do they."

Lindon nodded and stood up, "You go make friends, I'll take a break too."

Perhaps it was time to see how useful an Endbringer's stale power was, the one he had devoured and vented in a void key of his. Mercy's mention of an Eight-Man Empire-esque armor had piqued his interest in checking out how he'd fare as a soulsmith with the current restrictions.

He willed the void key to open. Dross waved him goodbye from where he was and Lindon stepped inside the extradimensional space.
 
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"Really? Not even a little?" Mercy said knowingly, doubt dripping from her voice, but the face showing the hint of a smile.

"What if they die? Or go paralyzed or comatose? I can't pour it back into them to fix them." He tried to demonstrate the "pouring back" part with a pushing gesture.

"well… I'm not sure some little sips here and there count,"

This might also come up with Lisa's outreach efforts.

"We should contact Lindon, he has a Trump ability and might be able to empower us!"
[Lindon appears to be constantly devouring power from the people around him]
"We should leave. Now."
 
[Have either of you given a thought to why the Way is so distant in this iteration when potentially countless sentient beings reside in its parallel worlds?] Dross asked out loud.
My first thought was 'Those sentients aren't human enough to anchor the way.' An interesting aspect of the Willverse is that artificial intelligence and non-human intelligences simply do not exist. See more in link: Reddit - Dive into anything

However, this is only true within the Way. The Elders are obviously capable of human-level intelligence but are also completely alien to the Way. So a world invaded by fiends, with millions of worlds with humans that are seeming copies of each other makes me think the fiends or rather the entities are trying to replicate the iterations in their study of the way. Interesting thing here: The iterations are called that because some Abidan theories consider them to be 'iterations' of some original world.

This would result in loads of copies that have an anemic connection to the way.

Given what Coil's ability is and if we take it seriously, rather than a precog ability, it could be an in-story clue to the power the entities used to cause all of this.
 
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My first thought was 'Those sentients aren't human enough to anchor the way.' An interesting aspect of the Willverse is that artificial intelligence and non-human intelligences simply do not exist. See more in link: Reddit - Dive into anything

However, this is only true within the Way. The Elders are obviously capable of human-level intelligence but are also completely alien to the Way. So a world invaded by fiends, with millions of worlds with humans that are seeming copies of each other makes me think the fiends or rather the entities are trying to replicate the iterations in their study of the way. Interesting thing here: The iterations are called that because some Abidan theories consider them to be 'iterations' of some original world.

This would result in loads of copies that have an anemic connection to the way.

Given what Coil's ability is and if we take it seriously, rather than a precog ability, it could be an in-story clue to the power the entities used to cause all of this.

That interview with Will is so good for any fanfic writing, not only does it provide lore for the Willverse, but also possibilities for so many ideas, I wish I'd read it earlier. Thanks for sharing.

This does make me think of Dragon's future if we continue down this rabbit hole. But I guess some exceptions can be made citing the influence of entities and them originally having a planet of their own even if they are creatures of chaos now.
"We should contact Lindon, he has a Trump ability and might be able to empower us!"
[Lindon appears to be constantly devouring power from the people around him]
"We should leave. Now."

I'd say Lisa's sole motivation is not that but again if anyone took it that way it's on the writer.

But the picture you paint is indeed funny. You'd be right at home writing bloopers for fics 😂
 
Therefore, for the last twelve hours straight, one hundred percent of Dross' attention was on that task. It gave Lindon time for himself, to get up to speed on the necessary knowledge for this mission.

Top of Form

Bottom of Form

The Protectorate and PRT were among the few organizations in this iteration that had managed affairs in the aftermath of the Endbringer attacks and the surge in violent capes, stabilizing a significant part of the world. It seemed to Lindon that they made a good decision to have confided in the PRT about the reality of their mission.
What's up with that?
 
14. Gary
Yerin hovered high up near the clouds. A walled city sprawled below her, cloaked in darkness save for scattered, dimly lit patches that cast a subtle glow outward. Further ahead, a large body of water, the great lake of Michigan, made its presence felt by chilling the summer night.

[Gary, Indiana. Quarantined for over a decade due to excess villain population, designated HOSV – hive of scum and villainy. As a result, the government cut off this place from the rest of the country.] Her Presence had provided the details earlier.

High walls all around, occasional PRT squad patrols, and a single costumed cape lounging at a watch post some distance away. That's all she'd seen in the last half hour. Flickering flood lights did their best impression of surveillance but no one had been in or out of the city.

Her trips to nearby cities and meetings with Protectorate in the past week had been informative. Not only had she got a good look at capes with potential, as well as villains who needed neutralizing—if this part of the world had to be unified in the eventual efforts against the fiend—she had also laid foundations for some good relationships with those in high positions. Not counting those who still had a sword stuck up their behind and looked at her and the "Reapers" with barely hidden disdain.

The whole song and dance routine had scraped her raw but she was the only one of the trio who could teleport at will. She supposed the Moonlight Bridge eventually had to have some drawbacks.

More relevant to tonight's jaunt, anyone she talked to at all PRT offices was of the opinion that Brockton Bay housed an abnormal number of villains and gangs compared to other cities in the country. Making it one of the worst places to live for civilians.

But ever since they had found a way to bring the internet connection to their Presences, their eyes had opened for real. Lindon had built a device with the help of the cape Dragon which each of the three Presences had assimilated.

Then Ruby had found some places that were much worse than Brockton Bay for an honest civilian who didn't have any powers.

Yerin had decided on impulse to pay a visit to one such place on her way back to Brockton Bay from Chicago.

The simple folk stuck with the scum and the villains here needed rescuing; that was the objective she focused on right now. She discarded the line of thought that would lead her to hold the authorities responsible for allowing this to happen. Could be they had reasons, could be they didn't care.

It was a question for later.

"How many children?" She asked Ruby.

[Last census was a couple of decades ago,] Ruby replied. [Extrapolating from evacuation data and considering potential causes for population decline; the estimated children population in this area—below the standard eighteen years old—is between three hundred and fifteen hundred. Unfortunately, a more precise estimate is not possible.]

Yerin was quiet for a few heartbeats.

"That's a rotten deal they got," she shook her head, "None of their own choosing either. To spend all your life in a prison, with little to no hopes of getting out?"

[Over the years there have been scattered reports of civilians escaping for a better life, mostly through makeshift boats on the lake, very few have made it out.]

"How do they say it is inside?"

[the last report is from several years ago… Let's just say 'not good' is being generous.]

"About time someone does something for them then." She said softly to her Presence.

Far below, a pair of PRT guards popped out of their watch post. They scanned their unchanged surroundings for a few seconds before promptly returning indoors.

Yerin closed her eyes, tilting her head to savor the breeze caressing her face. The night ahead held no pleasantries, she knew.

[Do you have a plan?] asked her Presence.

"Depends if I'm thinking straight," she replied. "What are the odds the non-capes aren't enslaved one way or another?"

Ruby thought for a moment and replied. [This is an HOSV site, unlike other cities, it is likely to have more of a cape population—almost all villains— and no government oversight. So, odds of non-capes being enslaved are higher than usual.] she paused. [What are we doing?]

"What are we doing?" Yerin repeated with a raised eyebrow, "Get them out of here yesterday."

[And if they're happy here? There's a significant chance some resist your proposal.]

"Only if they are chipped in the head." Yerin said, a little stubbornly, but she got what Ruby meant: people got attached to all sorts of places they lived in, no matter how bad. Could be that she was wrong in this.

[Will you be fighting if you have to? Or are we coming back later for that?]

She cracked her knuckles, "Jump that river when we get there. You ready?"

[I guess so.]

"Alright, waiting won't get us any sharper." She chose a darkened alley next to what looked like one of the main squares down below and activated the moonlight bridge.

In a flash of bright light, she teleported into the city.

The first thing that hit her was the stench.

"Bleed and bury me, that's awful." She instinctively exclaimed.

The smell originated from piles of refuse and garbage that just lay there in heaps, illuminated in the hazy light of a street light. The entire hodgepodge of filth must have been marinating there for years, rotting and withering away, repeatedly topped up by more of the same.

There was something else she immediately recognized due to her innate affinity for blood; a couple of fresh dead bodies.

She eyed a towering structure away from the dumpsite and teleported there. It allowed her to take a deep breath without grimacing. She extended her senses and tried to find some inhabitants of the city.

[I don't think anyone lives in this area. Every structure is decrepit and rotting.] Ruby remarked.

Landing in the abandoned part of town with the stench and all kinds of waste had been unfortunate. Not her fault as the entire city had looked pretty much the same from above.

"Let's make sense of this wretched place why don't we." she said to Ruby.

An hour later, she had identified a row of houses that had people either sleeping or otherwise going about their normal routines. The darkness in the absence of street lights did a good job of keeping her unseen from any troublemakers.

Ruby, check if anyone here is a cape. She told the Presence internally.

Ruby began checking for active Corona Pollentias and took her time. After a minute or two, she replied, [No capes.]

Let's talk to these people later tonight, see if they're interested in moving out for good.

She kept moving, steering clear of areas with late night cape activity. A night club thumped with loud music, with faint sounds drifting out into the night as well.

Capes were everywhere; most awake, some asleep. She had no way of knowing if all of them were villains even if the majority definitely were.

A large building hosted a bunch of fighting rings with multiple matches in progress, not jam packed with cheering spectators, but enough to form a crowd. The most raucous of them was underground as far as her spiritual senses could tell.

She avoided any contact for now, wary of confrontation.

Another hour she spent searching for children and civilians and found some success.

In a block near the beach, along a comparatively well-lit street that contrasted with the dimness of the rest of the city, each house was inhabited solely by non-cape civilians. Most were going through a nightly routine, diligently bolting shut every window and door without exceptions.

Every house like that had been crammed full of people.

[Almost one thousand regular civilians in the two streets.] Ruby did the math for her.

It was well past midnight when she encountered her first foe. Next to a lakeside warehouse, a hulking man stood tall under a gloomy neon light. He wore dark clothes and had his face uncovered.

In a rumbling voice, he asked her to stop and identify herself.

"Looks like a cape. Is he?" She asked Ruby.

[Yes.] Ruby replied.

"I said who goes there, this is Morok's territory." The man roared.

Yerin debated just leaving but the man had clearly seen her, he must have sporting a good eyesight.

She sighed and rushed him, making short work of his bluster. Before he knew it, a single chop to the back of his neck cracked the metal armor growing from under his skin. A second chop to the same spot had him go limp and unconscious in no time.

Killing capes was frowned upon in this world except those truly monstrous ones with kill orders.

It would be a "diplomatic headache" as Mercy had put it if the three of them started to kill capes, villain or not. Hence, the lighter touch.

She gently lowered the man, not wanting to attract any more attention.

But her hopes were dashed as the noise did summon another cape who ran out of the building looking around wildly calling out for his mate.

When he noticed her with the downed cape, he let out an incoherent shout. Without any delay, attacked her, scooping up blocks of stone from the nearby buildings and the ground with his gestures and hurling them at her.

[A stone telekinetic and shaper. He'd be a handful in urban environments.] Ruby analyzed.

Couldn't say I care if he is. He's wasting my time.

She didn't bother with the moonlight bridge. Utilizing her speed, she exploded from her spot, cutting in half a stone block the size of a chair with a simple push of her madra, and appeared in front of him. He stumbled back at finding her so close, but she grabbed him by the scruff of the neck and heaved him away.

The villain crashed through a car into a trash container and stayed down for a couple of heartbeats before getting up again.

He hadn't looked tougher than the last one, but looks could deceive.

"Calm down, I'm not here to fight you, only passing through." She called out, knowing it to be in vain, the man had seen her with a "dead" comrade.

He snarled, face going ugly with rage. He put both his hands on the ground and it began trembling.

That was one step too far for her liking.

She did use the Moonlight Bridge this time and flashed behind the cape. The same method as the last cape—a chop to the side of the neck, but stronger this time—did the job. The man went down like a felled tree, unconscious but still alive.

She looked around, nobody else seemed to be around which was fortunate. She flashed again and appeared back on the first civilian street. A series of clashes with multiple capes at this point was far from her desire, who knew what destruction they would unleash.

Her goal wasn't to flaunt her power either at this point, perhaps the time would come for that later, but right now the priority remained the civilians.

She chose a small house where more than one family lived by the looks of it. Three children and six adults in a single-story house. One of the men was awake, sitting near a window that was only slightly open to allow some airflow.

Yerin debated with herself on how to approach him. Then internally conveyed to Ruby, don't show yourself to him, but ask if he and his family are interested in taking a hike out of here. Sound good?

Ruby gave her assent.

Let me get his attention first.

She floated over to the window, not wanting to make the wooden boards creak, and kept her attention fixed on the man. A light tap on the window made him go alert. He peered out through the murky glass of the window, and his eyes went wide at seeing her. Instinctively he moved to shut the window but froze mid motion, eyes darting between her and the window latch, fear visible on his face.

She smiled and waved at him, hoping to reassure him with her best impression of Mercy. The lack of a mask should have helped too.

Ruby gave her the signal that she was ready so Yerin tapped at her temple and then pointed at the man.

[Can you hear me?] Ruby said.

The man was breathing shallowly now, but he nodded, the motion jerky. Yerin maintained eye contact with him, and kept up her smile for his benefit.

[My name is Yerin,] Ruby kept speaking, [I'm from the PRT. Say, do you want to leave this city by any chance? And rejoin the civilization outside? And your family of course?]

If the man's eyes were fully open before, now they were ready to pop out of the sockets.

[You can speak quietly, I'll hear.] Ruby told him.

The main waited, no doubt mustering his courage. "I don't know anything about smugglers." He whispered. Eyes gauging her for her reaction.

That was the last thing Yerin expected him to say.

[What?] Her and Ruby were on the same page.

The confusion on her face must have been apparent as he whispered again, his voice hopeful, "This is not a trick?"

[Yes. No trick. Why are you asking?] Ruby asked.

He looked at Yerin for a few moments with a calculating expression, then said in a low voice, "Few years ago a couple of families tried to escape, they were chefs and kitchen help for a one of the gangs. After that, for a year their goons tricked people into leaving and caught all the smugglers helping the escapees."

[What happened to them?] Ruby asked.

He looked down, not answering.

Which gang was that? which villain? Yerin said to Ruby.

[Do you know who the villain was? And the gang?]

He shook his head.

Yerin smothered her anger and tried to focus on the rescue.

Ask him if he speaks for everyone in this house and if he can get them ready to leave tonight. She told Ruby.

Ruby asked and the man nodded on both accounts.

[Make sure no one makes any noise. I'll be back soon.]

She turned away from the window after watching the man stand up and hurry inside.

They had a similar conversation at a few other houses.

[Do any villain gangs patrol here at night? Keep an eye on the people, so you don't escape somehow?] Ruby asked a youngster. She had called him to the window of his upper story bedroom, his was only face visible in the light of the candle he held. Yerin floated outside the window.

"Not usually. But sometimes," the boy murmured. "If fights break out then some spill into our area."

[Right, wake your parents. I'll talk to them, we don't have much time.] Ruby instructed him.

Before the morning, all but the residents of a single house were ready to move. There had been hushed debates in some homes but their own family members and house mates coaxed them one way or another. The source of chagrin for a few parents were their children who had been enlisted by gangs in the past few years when they triggered. The parents were worried what would happen to their young capes embedded among villains.

Yerin promised she would come back for them.

Sometimes, she interfered to show them their mode of transportation which calmed most of the fractious ones down, if only because they were confused. A few, the more stubborn types, had balked at her display, not wanting to spend even a second inside a void key.

Don't know what they're complaining about. They get to enjoy a castle and a nice view. All while someone else escapes their prison for them. Yerin complained to Ruby.

[They've been bit before Yerin; their caution is no surprise.] Ruby replied.

"How do you prefer I get you outside?" She arched an eyebrow at the old seamstress who had called her void key 'a death trap'.

The woman stuttered, "anything but that…" she pointed at the open void key, admitting people inside.

"I'll fly you out, how about that? Carry you like a bride and soar through the air, you'd just have to hold on to me tight?" Yerin asked sweetly. "You stone certain you'll take that over sitting comfy beside a nice pond?"

The woman wavered, visibly afraid of the void key but also clearly wanting to escape this hellhole.

Yerin reached out and took her hand within both of hers. "Nothing will happen," she cajoled the woman, "you'll be in and out, half hour max."

She breathed a sigh a relief when the woman and the rest of the residents of the house went inside the 'castle'.

By the time the sun was peeking over the horizon, over fifty families had left their homes and had sheltered in her void key.

[It's amazing how they banded together for a generation in the face of adversity.] Ruby said.

They had been told how large parts of the city, especially in the outskirts had been abandoned for years. And non-capes, who couldn't be evacuated and rescued back when the city was first quarantined, had made themselves useful by keeping the city running. Farmers, workers, drivers, cooks, cleaners, doctors, teachers; all had to be useful in more ways than one to stay safe from wild and warring villain gangs. Living in small communities like this in several parts of the city also protected them from wanton evil but made their system oppression easier.

Gradually their lives had become safer as they had demonstrated their usefulness but it was all predicated on two conditions: one, they couldn't leave, and wouldn't even think about leaving; and two, anyone who triggered would join one of the gangs, the one controlling their territory.

It was a horrible situation and from where she stood, only further proved that this world needed some saving.

[Yerin, we need to get those people out of the city and out of the void key in the next twenty minutes or the oxygen will start to get dangerously low.] Ruby told her.

Yerin nodded. The void key, as high quality as it was, wasn't meant to hold hundreds of people inside at the same time.

"The spiritual weight of the key is also pushing me down, I'll tell you true." She slightly exaggerated, but living beings inside her void key meant no more teleportation. She would have to traverse the length of the city under the rising sun.

She bullied the family in the last remaining house to leave. They weren't ready to trust her so she had to verbally berate them, "Sun's moving. Get inside or I'll throw you out of the city myself."

She physically pushed one of the men inside the void key, the rest followed him cursing her and causing plenty of noise. Although they quieted down a little after seeing their neighbors already inside.

All members of this community were now inside the extradimensional space.

In the light of day, speed was more important than stealth if she wanted to avoid a fight, so she took off, jumping from building to building and flying in between.

Still, she was accosted a couple of times, the first encounter lasted five seconds with Yerin knocking the flier out of the air, catching his leg and dropping him on a rooftop, dazed and confused.

The last cape who challenged her was a young girl, half a head shorter than her, with hair and skin color like that of Eithan. She wore plain trousers and a half-sleeved T-shirt with no mask obscuring her face.

Yerin was running on flat ground by then but the cape kept up with her for a few seconds by constant bursts of short-range teleportation and changed directions just as Yerin did, showing she could anticipate her movements.

How much time and oxygen left. Yerin asked Ruby.

[If you're thinking what I'm guessing, then the evacuees have enough time. They're probably starting to feel uncomfortable, with heavy breaths and all, but they'll be fine for a few more minutes. Convince her quickly.] Her Presence replied.

Yerin halted. The girl had a 'thinker' ability to anticipate Yerin's movements and a 'mover' ability to teleport short distances along the ground if Yerin had learned anything about powers in this iteration. This young cape had potential and she didn't deserve to keep living in this place, even if she was a member of some villain gang. No youngster deserved to come of age under the tutelage of villains.

"Hey kid, you can teleport. Why haven't you left this city?" She asked, pitching her voice to carry.

The girl didn't reply, she brought a device out of her pocket and spoke into it.

[That's a radio. She is calling for reinforcements.] Ruby informed her.

I figured. Yerin replied.

She spread her spiritual senses as wide as she could; a handful of people milled about in her range, but nobody was coming their way in haste. Any help would arrive too late for this girl.

She charged towards the cape, showcasing something closer to her true speed this time. The girl jumped back in surprise but dodged Yerin's outstretched hand that aimed to grab her.

[Good reflexes, with training she'd be even better.] Ruby commentated on the "fight".

The cape teleported ten feet away, and Yerin changed her direction to follow, maintaining the measured pace. The girl teleported again, brought out a gun and shot Yerin in the leg, expecting her to dodge. She let the bullet bounce of her knee, and reached out this time to grab the girl's hand.

To her amazement, which also caused her to laugh in joy, the girl anticipated that move as well. But in the absence of any viable option, she yelped in panic and let go of her gun before teleporting again.

Yerin caught the gun before it reached the ground. She asked again, "What's your name girl? Why are you patrolling here?" She waved all around, meaning the area between the civilian community and the wall, "Where're you from?"

[Make it quick Yerin.] Ruby said in the background.

The girl who was speaking furiously in her radio, shot her a glare. Then turned to flee.

Yerin bolted forward, upping her speed, and caught the girl by the back of her neck. She fruitlessly struggled to free herself—and possibly teleport away—but couldn't.

"Answer me! What is your name?" Yerin growled, as menacingly as possible. She partially removed the veil on her spirit to put some pressure on her quarry's emotions.

The girl, clearly fearful, kept staring at her defiantly but eventually spoke a single word, "Zip."

"Zip. Tell me, if you can teleport, you can leave. Why haven't you?"

"I'm not telling you nothing!" The young cape shouted.

"Aren't you a gem," she said, "I'll just take you outside myself."

The girl shook her head violently in alarm, "No!" She yelled again, "You don't understand."

Something was up with her stone headedness.

"Don't understand what? It's your choice, tell me now or when we are out of here. Makes no difference to me."

"No!" Zip cried, hysterical now, struggling to get free, "They'll kill my family."

Yerin had suspected as much, this was how capes were kept in line in these gangs, with their families held collateral for their loyalty. The "unwritten rules" as Miss Militia had explained to them were non-existent in an HOSV site.

Yerin didn't loosen her grip but asked in a softer voice, "And where did your family live? Not near Glen Park, did they?"

That caused the girl to go still. When she looked at Yerin, her facial features were contorted with dread.

She resumed her struggle to get free of Yerin's grip with a frenzy like that of a rapid animal, with no regards to her safety.

"Calm down," Yerin tried to say but the girl was beyond words. Not wanting to hurt her, Yerin caught the girl in a bear hug, letting go of her neck. No guarantees Zip wouldn't break it herself in the mad wrestle to break free.

"Your family is safe, they are going out of the city right now."

Her words had no effect.

[I guess you shouldn't have exposed your spirit to her. She's terrified of you now.]

"I'm helping your family girl. Ease up." Yerin shouted to break through but the girl was now screaming.

She let go.

The girl ran a few steps away in haste but then just stood there, listless.

[Woah!] Ruby almost shouted in her head.

"What?" Yerin said out loud.

[Activity in her brain has spiked—]

Yerin was beside the girl in an instant, she interrupted Ruby in dismay, "Is she dying? Don't tell me she—"

[No, no. It's the Corona Pollentia, she is having a second trigger.] Ruby cut her off in turn.

Yerin's heart had been in her mouth; she exhaled, thanking the heavens.

That about drained me dry. I would've aborted and gone back to live my life as a mortal if she'd died I swear. Can't believe I came an inch from scaring a child to death. She confided in Ruby, almost believing her own words.

Meanwhile Zip crumbled to the ground, unconscious.

[People usually go unconscious when they trigger, but I'm not sure if its normal for second triggers.] Ruby said.

"I'd bet you my good sword we have her family among the rescued."

[We were near Glen Park and they said that was the only civilian community in that area. High chance you'd win the bet.]

Yerin stepped towards Zip who was half sitting and half lying on solid ground and peered into her face. The girl was closer to unconscious than otherwise.

[Let's take her and go. We're running out of time.]

She picked the girl up and jumped up. Less than a minute later, they were flying over the walls of the city and out of it.

Outside, in a clearing adjacent to an abandoned fuel pump and surrounded on two sides by lush green trees, she pushed her madra into the void key and its rift in space opened up with a whooshing sound. A few people rushed out, all ones who were her biggest doubters, a frantic look lurked in their eyes.

"We were suffocating in there, you heartless bitch!" One of them yelled at her, followed by a couple others.

Yerin ignored them. Her senses told her nobody had died gasping for air which is what she cared about, although the elderly seamstress was unconscious.

She cursed and bundled through the crowd who seamlessly parted for her. She grabbed hold of the woman intending to bring her out quickly.

"How long has she been out?" She asked a man sharply.

"…just now." He stammered.

Outside, she carefully laid the woman on the ground and tried to feel her heartbeat. It was fine.

[Check her breathing too, it shouldn't be shallow.] Ruby advised.

Breathing was as it should be but the woman was still unconscious. Yerin kept a part of her attention on the void key so it didn't snap close and activated the Moonlight Bridge. In a flash she was outside the PRT watch post a couple of miles away.

A minute later she flashed back to where the void key was open. She wasn't proud of bullying the PRT grunts into calling in a medical helicopter for the lady who was still not awake. Nor did she hesitate in calling Myrddin directly on his phone to impress upon him the seriousness of the rescue effort.

The single cape who had been on duty last night was nowhere to be found in the morning.

Back at clearing, most who had come out of the void key had stopped in their tracks to look around, not caring about being jostled and pushed from behind. Upon realizing they were safely out of their city; a mix of expressions crossed their faces. Relief warring with anger—at her or their situation she didn't know—tears in their eyes, a few smiles of joy and hugs.

She looked at Zip at her side, lying face up on the ground some distance away from the open portal. The young cape had slowly regained most of her consciousness.

When everyone was out Yerin shut the void key and called out loudly, "Anyone recognize this girl?"

She turned to Zip and poked her with her foot, "Oi, you're stubborn as a boulder hitched to a donkey, do you know that?"

A blank look was her only answer.

Yerin shook her head, "Who are your family?"

The girl took in the scenes around her, looked back at the city wall, confusion on her face. She had probably been ready to treat Yerin as an enemy.

"Mia…" she said haltingly, "My mother is Mia."

"Mia!" Yerin bellowed, "Where is Mia?!"

A middle-aged woman holding a young child's hand hesitantly stepped forward from among the crowd, then her gaze traveled to Zip sitting on the ground and she rushed forward with a wail, "Sammyyyy!"

The girl also stood up and teleported straight to her mother for a ferocious hug.

Yerin walked on, not wanting to intrude anymore.

She floated up to be in everyone's line of sight, "Listen up, help is coming for you from Chicago," she pointed at where she thought Chicago was.

[It's more towards north…] Ruby corrected her a little too late and petered out.

"Sit down, or walk around, do what you like. Just don't leave."

She heard the aerial transport coming. It brought a smile of solace to her lips. Chicago PRT had heeded her, or they had heeded their Protectorate leader. Either way, she was happy.

"There's a helicopter on the way with a medical crew. Let them do their job and don't poke your noses in. Cars are coming for the rest of you. These two will tell you more." She pointed over her shoulder to where the two PRT members were running in with bags in their hands, presumably full of supplies. Good on them for the thought.

"That's all. Thank you for your cooperation and everything." She concluded her short speech.

When Myrddin or his team arrive, they would deal with the girl Zip.

She turned her attention to the future. More civilians were still stuck in Gary. They would need to be evacuated soon. She decided to come back with more of a plan in the next few days.

First the girl, and then the crone who resembled Fisher Gisha, twice she had almost caused an innocent death. 'Nothing will happen' her words to the old lady resonated in her mind.

Could be I was going too easy about this… She admitted to Ruby.

[They'd be alert for anything now, at least for a few days.] Ruby said.

I'd eat my sword if they don't notice the missing civilians by the evening. But before that more than one gang will be busy finding out which rival knocked their capes out.

[And solving the mystery of an absent cape.]

Yerin chuckled halfheartedly, then quieted. A gang war would mean more civilians at risk and who knows what other consequences. She would have to accelerate her timetable and come back tonight or tomorrow latest.

Perhaps it was best to bring Lindon next time. Dross' illusions would keep them hidden far easier than she could manage on her own. Lindon also had bigger void keys.

Once her evacuees were all settled in their Chicago bound transports, she headed back to Brockton Bay. It was time to see what Lindon and Mercy had been up to.
 
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Honestly disappointed by the recent update. It's too small scale, it's too US/PRT centric, it doesn't have anything to do with the chaos fiend goal.
You have stated within this story that they are short on time as while they are stuck on Earth other iterations also require help. Their shown behaviour does not fit with their stated motivations. Worse, it doesn't make any sense in general.
 
Honestly disappointed by the recent update. It's too small scale, it's too US/PRT centric, it doesn't have anything to do with the chaos fiend goal.
You have stated within this story that they are short on time as while they are stuck on Earth other iterations also require help. Their shown behaviour does not fit with their stated motivations. Worse, it doesn't make any sense in general.
I hear you.

Originally this was supposed to be a shorter section in a chapter, with the entire chapter showing all three of our characters in three different countries, but I started writing Yerin first and it got longer and longer so I just posted it separately.

I hope you'll like the next ones better.
 
but I started writing Yerin first and it got longer and longer so I just posted it separately.
In my opinion the far bigger problem is what Yerin is doing. Personally helping out some random civilians in a sufficiently prosperous area that they obviously at least have food and shelter and are "suffering" the fact that they dislike their local government is... noble on some level, I suppose.

The problem is that from Yerin's culture and perspective these people shouldn't even register as suffering.
From a professional perspective, she should be doing things that advance her goals. Making a list of all the strongest individuals and organisations in the world. Investigating and establishing contact with said people in the hopes of warning them and maybe getting a critical piece of information from them. Investigating what the hell parahuman powers are. Other things of that type.

If you wanted to make the point that she doesn't have the temperament for both research and diplomacy and absolutely had to show her fighting someone, then one option would have been Moord Nag. You could have argued that the way she feeds people to her personal shadow monster reminds Yerin too much of Blood Shadows and used the personal dislike as a justification. Maybe added some lines about how it demonstrates the power of their Reaper group to others in the world. It would still be something of a stretch, but there would be an actual reason for her actions.

Yerin's current actions go against her established characterisation, don't advance either personal or professional goals and don't advance the plot.
 
In my opinion the far bigger problem is what Yerin is doing. Personally helping out some random civilians in a sufficiently prosperous area that they obviously at least have food and shelter and are "suffering" the fact that they dislike their local government is... noble on some level, I suppose.

The problem is that from Yerin's culture and perspective these people shouldn't even register as suffering.
From a professional perspective, she should be doing things that advance her goals. Making a list of all the strongest individuals and organisations in the world. Investigating and establishing contact with said people in the hopes of warning them and maybe getting a critical piece of information from them. Investigating what the hell parahuman powers are. Other things of that type.

If you wanted to make the point that she doesn't have the temperament for both research and diplomacy and absolutely had to show her fighting someone, then one option would have been Moord Nag. You could have argued that the way she feeds people to her personal shadow monster reminds Yerin too much of Blood Shadows and used the personal dislike as a justification. Maybe added some lines about how it demonstrates the power of their Reaper group to others in the world. It would still be something of a stretch, but there would be an actual reason for her actions.

Yerin's current actions go against her established characterisation, don't advance either personal or professional goals and don't advance the plot.

Thanks, this is all valid and useful criticism which in hindsight I agree with, I also agree with some other feedback which called this chapter comparatively meh. That's why I've already made some minor updates to mitigate some of the weaknesses.

One thing I should have been clear about, and perhaps the changes would address that, is that this was not part of the team's plan. Yerin's "scheduled" activities serve the overall plan, this was a decision on the fly she made on her own to pay a visit to Gary. Maybe the time with Abidan has evolved her concept of suffering and justice, or she was just bored, could be anything.

I guess the lesson is to not post a chapter unless it moves a story forward.

Honestly I got some negatvie feedback/criticism on the writing — prose and dialogue for the Taylor chapter, and it was justified too. So I focused on improving the writing for this one and dare I say, the writing is more natural and better here in comparison to that. It's just that it came at the expense of some other things.
 
Deciding to help fix this problem specifically simply because it was on her way makes sense to me
 
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