The Man from the Moon - A One Piece SI fic

[TheLandMaster45]

Hey folks
No chapter to post yet, getting everything set, but also primarily because I had to go back and do a lot of corrections to previous chapters, so I'll be posting updated versions of them now.
Mostly it was corrections, removing or editing parts that were leftover stuff that stayed in from drafts (such as the section introducing Adio still having references to another character that was there first before I decided to replace them with Adio instead), but primarily, it was fixing continuity shit related to Vegapunk.

I erroneously wrote in that Punk Hazard had already been lost, that the Satellites already existed, and that Stussy wasn't a CP-0 agent by that time, all things that were horribly wrong.
Likewise, I cut off the "Godly Zoan" bit and made it into a "normal" Mythical Zoan. It WAS gonna be something that featured on the fic, with Zoans tied specifically to deities from real life, but considering the one that debuted in actual canon, I might as well make Hancock's Zoan also "just" be a Mythical Zoan as well.

Also, because I looked over shit again while doing said fixes, I realized I caused another inconsistency, but this one I'm making canon to my fic:
While in the nebulous canon of the movies, Zephyr's family was already dead by this point in time, in this canon his wife and kid are alive, hence he is still part of the active Admirals of the time.
The third Admiral might just not show up, and instead I'll just focus on Sengoku and Zephyr instead before they're rotated out to allow Borsalino, Sakazuki and Kuzan to fill their roles.

Bar that, not a WHOLE lot changed, but if you see any mistakes I missed, lemme know and I'll correct them. For now, it's back to the grind of chapter 5 for me!

 

[TheLandMaster45]

Hey guys
Sorry, no chapter yet, but I do have art to show to you all instead.

Done by the absolutely wonderful JustNothing, the same artist who recently colored the other artworks I posted here. Here we have Ryoma alongside her own sona, about to cause some mayhem and tomfoolery (read: arson and tax evasion).

Incidentally, this is something I'll take advantage to talk about... not the tax evasion or the arson, though.

I mean JustNothing.

Recently, she has had to return home to Ukraine, and due to the situation still ongoing there, she was hit with the news that she'll only have power for a very limited amount of time of the day. To counteract this, she's currently running unlimited emergency comm slots, so she can purchase a charging pod to have electricity while the power is cut. So if you wanna get some god-tier art for your fic, or in general, here's her profile where her comm prices are

As well, I have been running daily charity streams on my Twitch to try and help her gather up cash so she can buy said charging pod, hence my (current) lack of writing output. Apologies for that, but making sure my friend doesn't freeze is more important right now. I also repurposed my Ko-Fi as well to gather donations.

Even sharing word of things still helps.

I'll likely keep at the charity streams for the entire month, though I'll try to squeeze in some writing if possible. Next chapter is about... 50% finished or so, just need to get through a BIG dialogue section that I need to be delicate with.

That's all for now, sorry for mucho texto, until next time, fellas.

 

[Warmachine375]

Likewise, I cut off the "Godly Zoan" bit and made it into a "normal" Mythical Zoan.

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What about the Zoan abilities of the Five Elders? They seemed certainly beyond normal Mythical Zoan and they are extremely dangerous in their own right at Egghead Island arc.

While in the nebulous canon of the movies, Zephyr's family was already dead by this point in time, in this canon his wife and kid are alive, hence he is still part of the active Admirals of the time.
The third Admiral might just not show up, and instead I'll just focus on Sengoku and Zephyr instead before they're rotated out to allow Borsalino, Sakazuki and Kuzan to fill their roles.

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That's a relief and I wonder if Zephyr here might be the founder of SWORD where its members "resign" to fight any of the Four Emperors and their crews without authorization of Marineford.

As for the third previous Admiral, you can use the idea of the said Admiral being defeated offscreen by one of the Four Emperors or even by Monkey D. Dragon who was a former high ranking Marine and had to show why he was the World's Worst Criminal, which the World Government would decide to overhaul the Three Admirals with Sakazuki, Kuzan and Borsalino as the new roster.

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Ryoma looks amazing there and I wonder if he will change the World Noble's slave mark on him to the mark of the Sun at some point like the Sun Pirates under Fisher Tiger did with theirs including Koala's in One Piece canon. To symbolize that he is free and he will never stop fighting against the World Government and their tyranny.