The Man from the Moon - A One Piece SI fic

Hey folks
No chapter to post yet, getting everything set, but also primarily because I had to go back and do a lot of corrections to previous chapters, so I'll be posting updated versions of them now.
Mostly it was corrections, removing or editing parts that were leftover stuff that stayed in from drafts (such as the section introducing Adio still having references to another character that was there first before I decided to replace them with Adio instead), but primarily, it was fixing continuity shit related to Vegapunk.

I erroneously wrote in that Punk Hazard had already been lost, that the Satellites already existed, and that Stussy wasn't a CP-0 agent by that time, all things that were horribly wrong.
Likewise, I cut off the "Godly Zoan" bit and made it into a "normal" Mythical Zoan. It WAS gonna be something that featured on the fic, with Zoans tied specifically to deities from real life, but considering the one that debuted in actual canon, I might as well make Hancock's Zoan also "just" be a Mythical Zoan as well.

Also, because I looked over shit again while doing said fixes, I realized I caused another inconsistency, but this one I'm making canon to my fic:
While in the nebulous canon of the movies, Zephyr's family was already dead by this point in time, in this canon his wife and kid are alive, hence he is still part of the active Admirals of the time.
The third Admiral might just not show up, and instead I'll just focus on Sengoku and Zephyr instead before they're rotated out to allow Borsalino, Sakazuki and Kuzan to fill their roles.

Bar that, not a WHOLE lot changed, but if you see any mistakes I missed, lemme know and I'll correct them. For now, it's back to the grind of chapter 5 for me!
 
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