The Great Upheaval: A Realistic Superhero Quest

[X] Plan The First
-[X] Alexander Bravilic
-[X] Male
-[X] 17
-[X] An average south slavic-american medium sized man, with short brown hairs and grey eyes
-[X] Middle class
-[X] Only extended family
-[X] Chicago
-[X] The Sage. You desire to accumulate and absorb vast quantities of information and knowledge in order to better understand your surroundings. You are intelligent, strategic, meticulous, and a fast learner. Your greatest fear is ignorance. Your greatest weakness is a tendency to think too much and never act.
 
[X] Plan Leingod

I'm very put out that I didn't check my account earlier. Leingod it is.
 
[X] Plan Leingod

Gonna get behind this. Simple and to the point.


Honestly dissapointed that the option to vote for the power isn't among the first things to vote on since with comic book characters, their power tends to be a big part of their identity. We'd better not have an awesome working class boxing character and get stuck with some weird nonsense power... like that one guy in Hunter x Hunter who generates indestructible interest-rate demons who put people in debt with magic points or whatever.


On a slightly related note, I've just gotten into Food Wars recently. If our character comes from a lowly background, maybe his family owns a diner and he knows how to cook in addition to boxing? So his father and siblings can keep moderately financialy afloat with the diner while he does his best to help make money or deal with the lowlifes who would make trouble for a struggling family diner.
 
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[X] Plan A Rocky Start
Adhoc vote count started by Terran Imperium on May 6, 2018 at 6:52 AM, finished with 33 posts and 19 votes.

  • [X] Plan The First
    -[X] Alexander Bravilic
    -[X] Male
    -[X] 17
    -[X] An average south slavic-american medium sized man, with short brown hairs and grey eyes
    -[X] Middle class
    -[X] Only extended family
    -[X] Chicago
    -[X] The Sage. You desire to accumulate and absorb vast quantities of information and knowledge in order to better understand your surroundings. You are intelligent, strategic, meticulous, and a fast learner. Your greatest fear is ignorance. Your greatest weakness is a tendency to think too much and never act.
    [X] Plan A Rocky Start
    -[X] Tamala Locklear
    -[X] Female
    -[X] 16
    -[X] a tall and athletic girl of native american descent, with short, dark brown hair and amber eyes.
    -[X] Poor
    -[X] Large family, many siblings
    -[X] Chicago
    -[X] The Warrior. You seek to prove your worth through courageous acts and believe that anything can be accomplished with enough strength and willpower. You are charismatic, competent, and courageous. Your greatest fear is personal weakness and vulnerability. Your greatest weakness is your arrogance.
    [X] Plan Leingod
    -[X] Gabriel T. Garcia
    -[X] Slightly below-average height, with a thin but muscular body. Filipino descent, with brown skin and eyes and curly black hair that's probably the legacy of some Spanish blood in the family tree. His face has a boyish charm to it that makes him look younger than he is, to his consternation. His nose has been broken at least once.
    -[X] Male
    -[X] 16
    -[X] Poor
    -[X] Large family, many siblings
    -[X] Los Angeles
    -[X] The Warrior. You seek to prove your worth through courageous acts and believe that anything can be accomplished with enough strength and willpower. You are charismatic, competent, and courageous. Your greatest fear is personal weakness and vulnerability. Your greatest weakness is your arrogance.
    [X] Plan Tunnel Snakes Rule
    [X] 5'6, 160lbs. Hispanic. Muscular. A little stocky. Butch as hell. Lot of tattoos. Goes for a 1950's 'greaser' look.
    [X] Plan Tunnel Snakes Rule
 
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I'll close the vote in a few hours. If there's still a tie between two or more options, we'll go into a run-off. Of course, new character proposals are still welcome as well.

Great work so far. I've already come up with a few ideas based on these characters!
Adhoc vote count started by Oxford on May 6, 2018 at 11:15 AM, finished with 37 posts and 20 votes.

  • [X] Plan The First
    -[X] Alexander Bravilic
    -[X] Male
    -[X] 17
    -[X] An average south slavic-american medium sized man, with short brown hairs and grey eyes
    -[X] Middle class
    -[X] Only extended family
    -[X] Chicago
    -[X] The Sage. You desire to accumulate and absorb vast quantities of information and knowledge in order to better understand your surroundings. You are intelligent, strategic, meticulous, and a fast learner. Your greatest fear is ignorance. Your greatest weakness is a tendency to think too much and never act.
    [X] Plan Leingod
    -[X] Gabriel T. Garcia
    -[X] Slightly below-average height, with a thin but muscular body. Filipino descent, with brown skin and eyes and curly black hair that's probably the legacy of some Spanish blood in the family tree. His face has a boyish charm to it that makes him look younger than he is, to his consternation. His nose has been broken at least once.
    -[X] Male
    -[X] 16
    -[X] Poor
    -[X] Large family, many siblings
    -[X] Los Angeles
    -[X] The Warrior. You seek to prove your worth through courageous acts and believe that anything can be accomplished with enough strength and willpower. You are charismatic, competent, and courageous. Your greatest fear is personal weakness and vulnerability. Your greatest weakness is your arrogance.
    [X] Plan A Rocky Start
    -[X] Tamala Locklear
    -[X] Female
    -[X] 16
    -[X] a tall and athletic girl of native american descent, with short, dark brown hair and amber eyes.
    -[X] Poor
    -[X] Large family, many siblings
    -[X] Chicago
    -[X] The Warrior. You seek to prove your worth through courageous acts and believe that anything can be accomplished with enough strength and willpower. You are charismatic, competent, and courageous. Your greatest fear is personal weakness and vulnerability. Your greatest weakness is your arrogance.
    [X] Plan Tunnel Snakes Rule
    [X] 5'6, 160lbs. Hispanic. Muscular. A little stocky. Butch as hell. Lot of tattoos. Goes for a 1950's 'greaser' look.
    [X] Plan Tunnel Snakes Rule
 
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[x] Plan from rags
[x] Female
[x] 17
[x] Short, skinny and of Latin-American descent. Scar on left cheek. Wears shoulder length hair in a ponytail. Wears jeans, damaged slip-slops/flip-flops and a ragged, button-up shirt.
[x] Working class
[x] Average-size family, few siblings
[x] Chicago
[x] The Rebel
 
[X] Plan The First
-[X] Alexander Bravilic
-[X] Male
-[X] 17
-[X] An average south slavic-american medium sized man, with short brown hairs and grey eyes
-[X] Middle class
-[X] Only extended family
-[X] Chicago
-[X] The Sage. You desire to accumulate and absorb vast quantities of information and knowledge in order to better understand your surroundings. You are intelligent, strategic, meticulous, and a fast learner. Your greatest fear is ignorance. Your greatest weakness is a tendency to think too much and never act.
 
Vote closed.
Adhoc vote count started by Oxford on May 6, 2018 at 5:12 PM, finished with 40 posts and 22 votes.

  • [X] Plan The First
    -[X] Alexander Bravilic
    -[X] Male
    -[X] 17
    -[X] An average south slavic-american medium sized man, with short brown hairs and grey eyes
    -[X] Middle class
    -[X] Only extended family
    -[X] Chicago
    -[X] The Sage. You desire to accumulate and absorb vast quantities of information and knowledge in order to better understand your surroundings. You are intelligent, strategic, meticulous, and a fast learner. Your greatest fear is ignorance. Your greatest weakness is a tendency to think too much and never act.
    [X] Plan Leingod
    -[X] Gabriel T. Garcia
    -[X] Slightly below-average height, with a thin but muscular body. Filipino descent, with brown skin and eyes and curly black hair that's probably the legacy of some Spanish blood in the family tree. His face has a boyish charm to it that makes him look younger than he is, to his consternation. His nose has been broken at least once.
    -[X] Male
    -[X] 16
    -[X] Poor
    -[X] Large family, many siblings
    -[X] Los Angeles
    -[X] The Warrior. You seek to prove your worth through courageous acts and believe that anything can be accomplished with enough strength and willpower. You are charismatic, competent, and courageous. Your greatest fear is personal weakness and vulnerability. Your greatest weakness is your arrogance.
    [X] Plan A Rocky Start
    -[X] Tamala Locklear
    -[X] Female
    -[X] 16
    -[X] a tall and athletic girl of native american descent, with short, dark brown hair and amber eyes.
    -[X] Poor
    -[X] Large family, many siblings
    -[X] Chicago
    -[X] The Warrior. You seek to prove your worth through courageous acts and believe that anything can be accomplished with enough strength and willpower. You are charismatic, competent, and courageous. Your greatest fear is personal weakness and vulnerability. Your greatest weakness is your arrogance.
    [X] Plan Tunnel Snakes Rule
    [X] 5'6, 160lbs. Hispanic. Muscular. A little stocky. Butch as hell. Lot of tattoos. Goes for a 1950's 'greaser' look.
    [X] Plan Tunnel Snakes Rule
 
Alright, here's a look at your updated character sheet. Still a work in progress.

Alexander "Alex" Bravilic
Average build and appearance, short brown hair, and gray eyes. (Portrait 1, Portrait 2, Portrait 3)
The Sage. You desire to accumulate and absorb vast quantities of information and knowledge in order to better understand your surroundings. You are intelligent, strategic, meticulous, and a fast learner. Your greatest fear is ignorance. Your greatest weakness is a tendency to think too much and never act.
Gender: Male
Ethnicity: Polish-American
Height: 5'10
Date of Birth: May 6, 2001 (17 years old)
Place of Birth: Chicago, USA
Current Location: Chicago -- Southwest Side
Under construction
Stay tuned

I'll have a post outlining your background, but first: powers.
 
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Character Creation II
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You open your eyes to a harsh, unpleasant light. After a moment of adjustment, you look around to find yourself in a vast and empty void - a white plane of nonexistence stretching infinitely in every direction.

What is this? Where am I? I was ...

Impossibly, you can't recall what you'd just been doing. It's all … hazy. Your entire life feels like a half-remembered dream.

Greetings, little one.

A dark and featureless humanoid shape appears before you. Standing at nearly twice your height, its shadowy form flickers like a guttering flame.

W-Who's there?

I am known by many names, most of which would mean nothing to you. I suppose you could consider me … a kind of god. Or perhaps a demon.

The shadow's voice is not one you hear - its words seem to bypass your senses entirely by carving themselves directly into your brain. Every instinct in your body screams at you to run, to flee from this place and this presence ... but there is nowhere to go.

Am I dead? Is this … is this the afterlife?

All of you ask that. A pity. I had expected more from someone like you.

Like me?

You are interesting. To be frank, individual humans don't tend to stand out, and most of those who do have already been chosen. There is something about you, though. I cannot place it.

The shadow circles you, slowly. Malevolently.

There are eyes on you, little one. And not just my own. Destiny watches you closely.

None of this makes any sense. You get the distinct impression that you're being toyed with.

What do you want from me?

An inhuman smile splits the shadow's featureless face.

I thought you would never ask.

The void is plunged into total darkness, as if someone, somewhere had flipped a light-switch. You raise a hand to your face but cannot see it.

We are in the great game now, little one. You are one of my pieces. Perhaps you will even be the Decider.

Game? Pieces? The Decider? You hate to admit it, but ...

… I don't understand.

Your understanding is not necessary. It will come in time, or perhaps not at all. It matters not. Now, you must choose.

Choose what?

From among my gifts.

Close to half a dozen colored spheres suddenly populate the void, each glowing with welcome light. They bob gently in the darkness, like buoys in a black sea.

These gifts … what are they?

They are power. Power that your race has scarcely begun to know. You may take whichever you want, but only one.

The glow of the spheres is warm and inviting. You find yourself inexplicably drawn to them, like a moth to candlelight. You have to stop yourself from reaching out unconsciously.

I … I don't ...

I have neither the time nor the inclination to indulge any dawdling. Choose, human. The game awaits.

Drawing a shaky breath, you focus your full attention on the spheres, seeking to understand each as best you can before making your decision.

You ultimately reach for ...

[] The red sphere. It pulsates with a strange energy and radiates distorted waves of light. You observe that accidental contact with its neighbors causes the sphere's surface to ripple and glow.
[] The clear sphere. It is colorless, emitting only a pale, almost ghostly light. You observe that it will sometimes latch onto other spheres, draining them of all their color and activity whilst becoming colorful itself. The effect is only temporary, though - it ceases upon release, after which the clear sphere wanders in search of other prey.
[] The multi-colored sphere. It is constantly changing colors. Its composition is in permanent flux - you watch as it shifts from hard granite to smooth, reflective silver, before changing again just as quickly.
[] The white sphere. It appears ordinary at first, but when wandering close to the other spheres it extends a collection of tiny nodes to probe their surfaces. The sphere produces a blindingly bright light whenever contact is made.
[] The blue sphere. Moderately bright and of average size, it occasionally vanishes and reappears in different locations. These locations tend to be only short distances apart, but infrequently they will be father from each other.
[] The green sphere. It appears as if it is continually transitioning between a solid state and a looser, even gaseous form. When in the latter state, it seems to pass through the other spheres rather than collide with them.
[] The black sphere. Trapped in a seemingly endless cycle of destruction and restoration, it disintegrates into a cloud of dust before reconstituting itself to begin the process anew.
[] The purple sphere. It is fairly dim and thus difficult to make out as it drifts lazily about the room. You don't notice it immediately, but the sphere will routinely disappear into thin, nearly imperceptible portals which open in its path. The sphere always emerges from another portal, but only after varying amounts of time have passed.​

Your chosen sphere abruptly dissolves at your touch. You watch, transfixed, as it becomes a bright, swirling mist before disappearing entirely. The others vanish as well - as does their light. Soon you are blind and alone in the darkness once more.

An interesting choice, little one. I think you shall prove most entertaining.

With a sickening lurch, you realize that you are falling. Faster and faster, you hurtle through dark, empty space. This place seems without end - perhaps you will fall forever?

You open your mouth to scream, but you can't hear it over the rushing sound in your ears.

Before you wake, the shadow offers a parting farewell.

Do not disappoint me.


Time to vote on your power! Yes, the choices are deliberately vague. Just like Alex, there will be no handy guide available to you. It'll be up to you to discover the exact nature and extent of your abilities through old-fashioned experimentation.

Voting will close either tomorrow evening or the next morning.

 
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[X] The clear sphere. It is colorless, emitting only a pale, almost ghostly light. You observe that it will sometimes latch onto other spheres, draining them of all their color and activity whilst becoming colorful itself. The effect is only temporary, though - it ceases upon release, after which the clear sphere wanders in search of other prey.
 
[X] The red sphere. It pulsates with a strange energy and radiates distorted waves of light. You observe that accidental contact with its neighbors causes the sphere's surface to ripple and glow.
 
[X] The purple sphere. It is fairly dim and thus difficult to make out as it drifts lazily about the room. You don't notice it immediately, but the sphere will routinely disappear into thin, nearly imperceptible portals which open in its path. The sphere always emerges from another portal, but only after varying amounts of time have passed.
 
[X] The clear sphere. It is colorless, emitting only a pale, almost ghostly light. You observe that it will sometimes latch onto other spheres, draining them of all their color and activity whilst becoming colorful itself. The effect is only temporary, though - it ceases upon release, after which the clear sphere wanders in search of other prey.
 
[X] The red sphere. It pulsates with a strange energy and radiates distorted waves of light. You observe thataccidental contact with its neighborscauses the sphere's surface to rippleand glow.

Red is love, Red is life.
Red is best waifu.
 
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