The Girl Who Spun Through Time (Naruto Time Travel)

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Staying more out of village politics this time I guess, perhaps a quite wise choice of her. Especially if you don't understand what many parts of it are or are doing.

Hopefully that will work out favorably.

 

[Zam]

This was a very solid chapter, it is fun seeing Hinata possessed with a new confidence and also low key likely so god damn exhausted and somewhat traumatized by everything that she's just starting to god damn bulldoze her way through stuff she thinks is stupid or wrong.

Hisashi and Hizashi's story explains a lot and I quite like their overall dynamic and the surrounding politics to say the least, same for lil Hinata!! Itachi is being slyly mischievous but also wise beyond his years and Danzo is such an entitled piece of shit, while being brittle as freaking chalk.

 

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Hah, I knew someone was going to try and fuck up Itachi's ascent to Hokage. In retrospect Danzo would be the one. But on the other hand. I kind of assumed this Danzo was different from not having apoplectic *stroke* at the idea of an Uchiha Hokage.

I like the fighting between Hisashi and Hizashi, feels very real. While Hinata continues her journey into becoming Ciphais Cain by way of doctor who.

'I need a friend' Smoll Hinata you do need all the friends.

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Danzo's having a multi-year stroke, we'll see more of that later, lol. Also Hinata just Cain'ing her way through more and more situations is honestly not a terrible comparison, hadn't considered it till now.

My, she has grown. Very nicely done.

... Okisaki. It's hard to guess without seeing the kanji, but the most plausible reading, I think, would be 置き先 -- not an existing word I don't think, but it would fairly naturally read as "something/someone sent forward".

Five seeds... Five elements, five countries.

... No, I don't quite see it. I think it's something along the lines of: "there is literally no safe place in the world for these, so to preserve them, we can only bring them forward in time, to skip some dangerous moment." But I'm not sure what they are, yet, or what they might be used for -- since it sounds like they can be used.

(I mean, the obvious guess for 'powerful important seeds of which there can be only one a timeline' is something to do with the Ten Tails and the Shinju, but. That's again just speculation, and I'm not sure what they're for. Certainly not to grow the Shinju, when the Outer Path Statue exists. And that explanation doesn't explain why you'd want exactly five of them.)

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You're pretty much on the money regarding Okisaki, though from the look of it you got their from the first principle. I pulled it from 妃将/Princess, from the Shogi variant that mirrors western Chess of the same name.

(not a Japanese speaker, just go looking for stuff the best I can)

As for the seeds, you're pretty much there as well in terms of pointing out the elemental lineup. There's some extra narrative stuff in how and why they're being collected, but that'll come clear later (I hope).

Staying more out of village politics this time I guess, perhaps a quite wise choice of her. Especially if you don't understand what many parts of it are or are doing.

Hopefully that will work out favorably.

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Better to keep your nose out of what you don't understand in her case, but unfortunately when you have the kind of power and information Hinata does, politics are gonna find you no matter how hard you try to avoid them.

This was a very solid chapter, it is fun seeing Hinata possessed with a new confidence and also low key likely so god damn exhausted and somewhat traumatized by everything that she's just starting to god damn bulldoze her way through stuff she thinks is stupid or wrong.

Hisashi and Hizashi's story explains a lot and I quite like their overall dynamic and the surrounding politics to say the least, same for lil Hinata!! Itachi is being slyly mischievous but also wise beyond his years and Danzo is such an entitled piece of shit, while being brittle as freaking chalk.

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At this point Hinata's very firmly "Get in line," lmao. "I'll deal with the philosophical implications of maybe being a cosmic accident later."