The Friendly Necromancer

Wow, I picked a good time to pick this up; got to read the whole book in one go!

I was actually a bit hesitant to start this. I've read the blurb to Hyphen a few times now but could never bring myself to actually start it, it just sounded so depressing.

Glad I read this though, good characters and great worldbuilding. I really like how you made various elements from the game more realistic, and I'm very excited to read about how Cori's attempt to consecrate the pidgy line goes!

Is the region OC? I gotta be real at first I just assumed it was from one off the games I didn't play but I also just saw your comment about how you made the map and now I'm not sure. Either way absolutely great worldbuilding and I can't wait to see more of the setting you've made.
 
Binged through all of this today. Had me crying empathy tears a few times especially when june and bashak showed diya how much they accepted it.

Really looking forward to Book 2.
 
Close enough honestly. Whether or not the body got back up afterwards doesn't change the truth that Diya ISNT the boy hes looking for. Might be the same body but the person hes looking for actually did die in the cold unprepared for winter.
It is the only witness for the death, so talking to him would still close the case. And there is some solace that he didn't die alone or unremembered.
 
Is the region OC? I gotta be real at first I just assumed it was from one off the games I didn't play but I also just saw your comment about how you made the map and now I'm not sure. Either way absolutely great worldbuilding and I can't wait to see more of the setting you've made.
It is an OC region.
 
Is the region OC? I gotta be real at first I just assumed it was from one off the games I didn't play but I also just saw your comment about how you made the map and now I'm not sure. Either way absolutely great worldbuilding and I can't wait to see more of the setting you've made.

Yup! I made random maps with the map generator until I found one I liked, then brainstormed ideas for the island's history and geography and solicited names with a couple friends until I felt the island was fleshed out.


Speaking of which, there's one of those friends! Hello!
 
Knowing that you could have an Avenger of Blood after you if you don't provide bare minimum basic necessities for your kids… actually, that sort of person probably wouldn't change much regardless.

Taking away the Gods literally walking a land, tangible proof of SOMETHING after death, and everything else. The knowledge that there are consequences for doing horrible things has never and will never stop things from occurring. The people who are so toxic as to drive a child to their death or so neglectful as to kill their own child wont be discouraged by the threat of consequence because they weren't even without the knowledge that you can literally spend the rest of your life behind bars for this kind of an act.

Victors genetic donors have literally created an open and shut case for whatever the regional variant of Homicide by Child Abuse is, as well as a variety of fun tack on crimes related to failure to report a missing child, conspiracy to conceal a felony, and however many child endangerment charges they can toss for every single time they actively didn't report their kid missing. If a prosecutor is feeling particularly vindictive (which is likely in this case) they may be hit with a charge for every single day they didnt report it just to force a plea bargain that doesn't end with them dying of old age behind bars.

Note that these laws vary heavily and this is a fictional region, but the general minimum for this kind of a crime is about 20 years from the limited examples I can find. Thats prior to everything else tacked on. Do note that to try to judge serious crimes in Pokemons hypothetical justice system you'd want to use Japanese legal code for most canon regions outside Galar, Unova, and Alola.

If I had to guess I would say they're up shits creek without a paddle however and this is going to be headlining news for the next 2 weeks to 3 months. The news coverage in region will be extensive and assuming there isnt a war on or something else notable theres a chance of it going mildly international due to the fact theres enough shock value here to upset people and gain media following, especially as it'll lead to some half assed discourse about criminals trying to flee to other regions.
 
Taking away the Gods literally walking a land, tangible proof of SOMETHING after death, and everything else. The knowledge that there are consequences for doing horrible things has never and will never stop things from occurring. The people who are so toxic as to drive a child to their death or so neglectful as to kill their own child wont be discouraged by the threat of consequence because they weren't even without the knowledge that you can literally spend the rest of your life behind bars for this kind of an act.

Victors genetic donors have literally created an open and shut case for whatever the regional variant of Homicide by Child Abuse is, as well as a variety of fun tack on crimes related to failure to report a missing child, conspiracy to conceal a felony, and however many child endangerment charges they can toss for every single time they actively didn't report their kid missing. If a prosecutor is feeling particularly vindictive (which is likely in this case) they may be hit with a charge for every single day they didnt report it just to force a plea bargain that doesn't end with them dying of old age behind bars.

Note that these laws vary heavily and this is a fictional region, but the general minimum for this kind of a crime is about 20 years from the limited examples I can find. Thats prior to everything else tacked on. Do note that to try to judge serious crimes in Pokemons hypothetical justice system you'd want to use Japanese legal code for most canon regions outside Galar, Unova, and Alola.

If I had to guess I would say they're up shits creek without a paddle however and this is going to be headlining news for the next 2 weeks to 3 months. The news coverage in region will be extensive and assuming there isnt a war on or something else notable theres a chance of it going mildly international due to the fact theres enough shock value here to upset people and gain media following, especially as it'll lead to some half assed discourse about criminals trying to flee to other regions.
You are making a lot of assumptions in there that this world is basically a carbon copy of real earth, which we know it isn't.

Not that the boys parents aren't in for a whole world of trouble.
 
You are making a lot of assumptions in there that this world is basically a carbon copy of real earth, which we know it isn't.

Im assuming the author isnt interested in fabricating an entire criminal justice code from scratch and will adapt one from a reasonable real world source. Im also assuming the news operates as we know the news does in setting, where they want people to actually watch it. A tragedy like this coupled with an outrage story brings in the views.
 
Victors genetic donors have literally created an open and shut case for whatever the regional variant of Homicide by Child Abuse is, as well as a variety of fun tack on crimes related to failure to report a missing child, conspiracy to conceal a felony, and however many child endangerment charges they can toss for every single time they actively didn't report their kid missing.
I am inclined to agree, but there are a couple of extenuating factors that could lessen that.

The Boy was not physically restrained. The absence of hypothermia was provided, and the victim chose to abstain. Now, there was very much a mental barrier in place to prevent access, and I personally am inclined to consider mental and physical factors and limits interchangeably, but humans tend to like to apply a lot of "magical thinking" to mental processes which imply that mental limits just don't exist... so there is an argument that this was a suicide, and I suspect it to be an argument that would gain a lot more traction than I would personally prefer. I also feel that suicides should be treated just like any other murder and investigated for causes and collaborators and duress and suchlike, and prosecution for contributing via negligence, but meh...

They have currently failed to identify exactly what happened. The lack of a body makes it difficult to say exactly what they caused, which casts doubt on things. It makes it difficult to connect the dots for a jury or whatever when a bunch of the most important dots are missing.

On that note, there is some risk that Diya could be subject to issues for tampering with evidence. Now, the standard "Do Not Mess With The Talking Pokemon" would likely overrule anything along these lines, but theoretically...
Diya is a pokemon trainer, and pokemon trainers are subject to laws.
The agency thing is just a mess. Diya's body is a minor. Diya's brain is most certainly a minor's. Diya was likely considered a minor and a wild animal when first tampering, and the action can be argued as being involuntary. As a Banette, bodily autonomy issues arise. As a maximum-evolution pokemon, Diya could potentially be an adult.
Diya was meeting personal more-or-less-base-survival needs when removing the body, with no alternatives involving the absence of body-removal. Diya could have just entered the house, but doing so would have likely resulted in a multiple-homicide... . Diya could have reported the incident to legal authorities. Diya, as someone who belongs to a species of child-murdering vengeance spirits, can expect to suffer a certain amount of discrimination, and could have reasonably expected permanent loss of freedom and possibly death if it revealed itself to others.
Diya was, more-or-less, honouring the victim's will, in such a way that could be considered a religious imperative for all manner of reasons from pokemon being gods to Diya being, in some respects, literally composed of the last will of the deceased, and thus religious towards such things by default...
Like, realistically, nothing will come of this. Someone will dig up some scenes of banette attacks, and also find some recently acquired research-footage of what is possible for some mere shuppet "just playing a game of tag", plus a general overview of Diya's know abilities of near-invisibility, teleportation, enhanced senses, emotion-reading, and a convenient one-handed unlimited-ammo flat-trajectory rocket-launcher that theoretically could potentially invalidate a target's access to any afterlife... , throw in some news reports of what happened when someone poked a talking 'mon, and some studies indicating that being imposed-upon to get involved in legal disputes is a generally unpleasant experience, present all of this to anyone who is trying to get Diya involved, and ask if this is really something that they want to do... and if they still want to do it, charge them with, at least, negligence to the point of provoking imminent harm to everything and everyone in the general vicinity.

It might, just maybe, be possible to shift some of the blame to Diya, given that it is difficult to prove what would have happened if there had been proof of death, and thus no possibility that he could just have returned. There could, hypothetically, have been no coverup if Diya hadn't gotten involved, and conclusively proving otherwise could be difficult.

So, like, I agree that they are, realistically, in a whole lot of trouble, but I feel that there are potentially some recourses for somewhat mitigating that, and prosecuting them could potentially ruin Diya's day.
 
I am inclined to agree, but there are a couple of extenuating factors that could lessen that.

The Boy was not physically restrained. The absence of hypothermia was provided, and the victim chose to abstain. Now, there was very much a mental barrier in place to prevent access, and I personally am inclined to consider mental and physical factors and limits interchangeably, but humans tend to like to apply a lot of "magical thinking" to mental processes which imply that mental limits just don't exist... so there is an argument that this was a suicide, and I suspect it to be an argument that would gain a lot more traction than I would personally prefer. I also feel that suicides should be treated just like any other murder and investigated for causes and collaborators and duress and suchlike, and prosecution for contributing via negligence, but meh...

They have currently failed to identify exactly what happened. The lack of a body makes it difficult to say exactly what they caused, which casts doubt on things. It makes it difficult to connect the dots for a jury or whatever when a bunch of the most important dots are missing.

On that note, there is some risk that Diya could be subject to issues for tampering with evidence. Now, the standard "Do Not Mess With The Talking Pokemon" would likely overrule anything along these lines, but theoretically...
Diya is a pokemon trainer, and pokemon trainers are subject to laws.
The agency thing is just a mess. Diya's body is a minor. Diya's brain is most certainly a minor's. Diya was likely considered a minor and a wild animal when first tampering, and the action can be argued as being involuntary. As a Banette, bodily autonomy issues arise. As a maximum-evolution pokemon, Diya could potentially be an adult.
Diya was meeting personal more-or-less-base-survival needs when removing the body, with no alternatives involving the absence of body-removal. Diya could have just entered the house, but doing so would have likely resulted in a multiple-homicide... . Diya could have reported the incident to legal authorities. Diya, as someone who belongs to a species of child-murdering vengeance spirits, can expect to suffer a certain amount of discrimination, and could have reasonably expected permanent loss of freedom and possibly death if it revealed itself to others.
Diya was, more-or-less, honouring the victim's will, in such a way that could be considered a religious imperative for all manner of reasons from pokemon being gods to Diya being, in some respects, literally composed of the last will of the deceased, and thus religious towards such things by default...
Like, realistically, nothing will come of this. Someone will dig up some scenes of banette attacks, and also find some recently acquired research-footage of what is possible for some mere shuppet "just playing a game of tag", plus a general overview of Diya's know abilities of near-invisibility, teleportation, enhanced senses, emotion-reading, and a convenient one-handed unlimited-ammo flat-trajectory rocket-launcher that theoretically could potentially invalidate a target's access to any afterlife... , throw in some news reports of what happened when someone poked a talking 'mon, and some studies indicating that being imposed-upon to get involved in legal disputes is a generally unpleasant experience, present all of this to anyone who is trying to get Diya involved, and ask if this is really something that they want to do... and if they still want to do it, charge them with, at least, negligence to the point of provoking imminent harm to everything and everyone in the general vicinity.

It might, just maybe, be possible to shift some of the blame to Diya, given that it is difficult to prove what would have happened if there had been proof of death, and thus no possibility that he could just have returned. There could, hypothetically, have been no coverup if Diya hadn't gotten involved, and conclusively proving otherwise could be difficult.

So, like, I agree that they are, realistically, in a whole lot of trouble, but I feel that there are potentially some recourses for somewhat mitigating that, and prosecuting them could potentially ruin Diya's day.
Regardless of whatever culpability they're assigned for the disappearance itself, they can still be hit for first failing to report Victor as missing (at bare minimum that's severe neglect), and then hit again even harder for deliberately trying to cover it up and flee the country.
 
peaking out yet, but the sky peeking

Probably a misspelling here

without eany trouble.

any, I think.

Diya chewed on its tongue

Diya! Diya no! The tongue is for helping with eating, not for being eaten!

The sentient cloud of ghostly grief grinned. Its understanding of the whole transaction between Diya and June was hazy but the money … that was the stuff it was getting for getting rid of the Spinarak? The treat would be acquired because of that stuff?

Something something natural order something something uno reverse.

Diya struggled not to laugh out loud with Claire right next to it. From what it could read from Svartis' feelings, she thought Claire was some kind of god responsible for all the pokemon-trainer partnerships in the world.

It should tell Claire about that at some point, bound to be one hell of an ego boost :p

How intimidating and alien would the human world have been to it? Instead its companion was a little ball of inquisitive curiosity, and so comfortable with humans and their pokemon that it felt safe snoozing right next to a battle-ready pair.

I think the first it and last it should be her? Unless they are all referring to Diya and I just have no clue what the segment is saying.

And then there was light.

Egredia was the dawn itself and her brilliance hit Diya like a breaking wave at the beach. It felt like a small child swept head over heels by a wave far too tall for it to withstand. The Banette gasped and fell to a knee as the light poured through it. Its core remained protected, but every loose bit of power not safe in its innermost self was washed away.

I AM THE SUN! ALL THREE OFF THEM!

Egredia may not have reached apositoasis yet, but the Ho-oH cosplay is certainly getting convincing.


This story is still very good, I've been rereading it in chunks.

Highlights include adorable children, ghosts, ghost children, and ascendant feathered bipeds.
 
Background Worldbuilding: Revenge, News, and Politics
Im assuming the author isnt interested in fabricating an entire criminal justice code from scratch and will adapt one from a reasonable real world source. Im also assuming the news operates as we know the news does in setting, where they want people to actually watch it. A tragedy like this coupled with an outrage story brings in the views.

That is a bold assumption and I am choosing to take it as a challenge and an opportunity to gush about worldbuilding. :lol2:
(But no seriously, I do worldbuild all my worlds in roughly this level of detail, it's often my Fun Thing To Occupy My Brain while in the shower or on my way to work.)

First, a general caveat about when I talk world building outside the story: Anything not yet formally set in the story is subject to change, or reader extrapolation. I'm a strong believer that the last word in the voids of a story is the reader, not the author. And what I'm saying here is just a general guideline for my thought process as I write the story, not anything set in stone.

With that said, about whether Diya's existence would deter child abuse or neglect. I'm in agreement with the folk who think that it wouldn't. In my experience the possibility of consequences just isn't as good of a deterrent as we might like. There's an infinite constellation of reasons why people think consequences won't happen to them, don't apply to them, or simply don't have the capacity or resources to change their behavior. Getting people to maintain complex, energy and thought intensive behaviors in the long term, which may grate on them or not directly benefit them, is hard. And even a promise of sure consequences one day doesn't actually make doing that any easier.

Specifically in the Abirs' case, my mental image is one of a household where Victor's parents knew they were dysfunctional. Their relationship was rocky and they did the dumbest thing a married couple can do. They had a kid to try to salvage their relationship. Predictably, it didn't work. Co-parenting attempts caused friction, their shiity relationship dynamics drained energy from both of them, and neither had actually wanted a kid for the right reasons. The result was an angry household with a lot of yelling and little actual positive parenting for Victor.

But the Abirs knew that. They knew they were doing a shit job and would have preferred to not be shitty parents. But they were scared of the social consequences if they asked for formal help, socially isolated enough that they didn't know who to ask for informal help, and quietly afraid that what would be best for Victor would actually be adoption and how bad that would look for them. And, of course, totally unable to talk honestly about it to each other without the conversation degrading into blaming and screaming. Introducing the prospects of punitive consequences for shitty parenting (vengeful Banettes, legal action, etc) wouldn't have made them more incentivized to improve, it would have just raised the stakes in their mutual blame game / quiet personal dread.

But that brings up the much more difficult question of what would have changed things for Victor and his parents. And the answer to that is...

Well. I have deliberately made that a hard question to answer in this story.

There are many ways Victor could have been saved that I made sure to include in this last chapter. If one of those emergency domestic counselors had been called the night Victor was on the porch, that would have done it. If he'd gone down the street to the neighbors before he got too cold to think straight, that would have done it, and they might have contacted the children's advocacy office about it later. Another year, maybe even less, and Victor probably would have opened up enough to his school therapist enough to trigger an intervention. If Victor actually had run away on almost any other day, Nils or another ranger would have likely found him, listened to him, and that would have sparked intervention.

On top of that, I tried to give an image of this world which makes you feel like Victor should have been caught by this system, and that we'd want him to be. I wanted this to be a world where it feels like every reasonable thing which could be done to protect children in Victor's shoes was already being done, such that his community would struggle to find anything more they could do. (One can always institute a new narrowly targeted policy which would have saved Victor, but that's different from instituting a new policy which will actually protect the next child who would have slipped through the cracks.) And I wrote his death deliberately to, where it resulted simply from him wanting to stay outside to avoid a parental argument, rather than being beaten half-to-death and kicked out into the forest or something similarly brutal (and therefore preceded by many warning signs). It was important to me that his death be something which wouldn't be reasonably expected or prevented by his community.

Because there's a very specific flavor of tragedy and coping with loss that I am aiming for in this story. One where loss can be both irreparable and senseless, and yet one must find a way to live a full and joyful life afterward. It's something I wanted to write about partly because I think most fantasy which tackles tragedy tends to tackle goal-oriented tragedy, where the tragedy is a call to action. When the hero's village burns down, the story is about them fighting back against the evil overlord who sacked it, not grieving as they rebuild. Or if it is, then the story is also going to be an intense subversion about the decision or incapacity to not solve the evil overlord problem. Most fantastical tragedy is fundamentally about the actions one takes to find closure, and even the subversions of that are about failing to find it.

I wanted something a little different for this story. What I'm trying to explore with this story's tragedy is what's true of many tragedies: closure simply isn't on the table at all. There's no revenge Diya could have taken which would have resolved Victor's death in a way Victor would have appreciated. There's no underlying societal problem to fix. There's hardly even anything to improve (though I hope Nils' perspective also made it clear that people are going to try anyway).

There's just honoring the lost, and learning to live with their absence.

And so I deliberately made the question of what more could have been done to prevent Victor's death as difficult to answer as possible. I feel like the nature of the story's tragedy necessitated it.

Onto Kenomao worldbuilding! I have a lot of fun trying to develop worlds which are different than our own, and thinking about how Kenomao's news and justice system might not reflect ours was very interesting. And I may have taken the presumption that a familiar culture copy-pasted onto Kenomao Island would be the default as a challenge.

This is something I was already thinking about, and I'm going to have to find a way to work into book 2, but essentially there's not going to be a nonstop 24/7 news fixation on this case.

Because Kenomao doesn't even have a 24/7 news cycle. It's a small island with small population centers and its individual towns and cities are designed to be walkable communities. The result is that local politics isn't really a news thing. It's an in-person thing. Political candidates aren't something you hear about on the news, they're locals who talk directly to you at townhall meetings. If you want to hear about what's happening with disputes over pokemon preserve land rights/responsibilities, they have specific meetings to announce important matters like that biweekly, with several time slots where the same news is announced to accommodate different schedules. Without that kind of constant combative political framework to provide a basis for rapid sensationally motivated news coverage, it just doesn't really exist. (Which isn't to say politics isn't contentious. It's small town politics happening in person, a lot of yelling can happen, it's just not driving a news cycle).

As for international news, it exists, but the pokemon world I'm imagining has much less immediacy between nations than ours does. Borders are often defined by the limits wild pokemon regions place on expansion, rather than by human neighbors. Communication and transport between countries exists (it's even convenient because of e-storage based transportation), but it exacts a heavy cost in protecting it from wild pokemon. So the financial incentives to expand it to a ubiquitous entertainment medium capable of casual video streaming just aren't there. (The effort and resources which go into modern telecommunications are mind-bogglingly insane.) Stuff like video streaming still exists of course, but it's much harder to make a profit off of it. So it's harder to run a profitable attention-economy based international news network. They might exist and be relevant in some places, but I'd imagine they get more traction in human heartlands than on a farflung tiny settlement like Kenomao.

The result is two-fold. One, there's no 24/7 news network which has a motive to drive anger/fear/sympathy over this and to keep eyes on it as long as possible. Two, privacy laws don't have much institutional pushback from news agencies. They're very strong on Kenomao, especially with respect to minors. So while Nils is asking for cooperation for other public good agencies to search for Victor (and maybe sharing more details than he's supposed to), specifics of why Victor is missing and what happened aren't being announced in a general public format until the case is concluded.

(Also even in our world, there are countries with privacy rights which include details about crimes not being revealed until a full investigation + trial has occurred, barring something like a clear and evident public need to know (like if a manufacturer likely poisoned a river, upstream from people or vulnerable habitats).)

Which means that while public good officials may be aware of a likely-dead very-explicitly-non-psychic boy matching Diya's description, and general details may spread by word of mouth, Victor's face and the details of his death aren't getting plastered on every screen on the island as part of a sensationalist story.

Whenever I develop a world, I try to make a point to find "ordinary oddities" from the world I live in and come up with something similar but different for my new world. In this case, all this talk about consequences for the Abirs concealing their son's disappearance made me think up one of those "ordinary oddities".

In the US where I live, we have a constitutional right to self non-incrimination. If we are asked a question we're legally obligated to answer in court, which would incriminate ourselves, we can chose not to answer. And this doesn't count as incriminating ourselves. Even as we say "I'm using my right to not self-incriminate". But contrary to what many Americans might think, this is not a universal legal right. It's actually really strange to a lot of legal systems. And yet you'll find many strident defenders of it, and regardless of whether it's a good thing or a sane thing it is an integral part of US law.

So as an "ordinary oddity", I think it would be interesting if Kenomao had a right to self non-incrimination or self-defense which included the right to take measures to avoid legal consequences. And there are ways you could justify this! You could argue it's natural to try to protect oneself, and that a legal system which punishes people for protecting themselves is unnaturally punitive. You could argue that an instinctive reaction to hide wrongdoing at first is natural but that people often come forward later, which should be encouraged, and that a system which lays compounding consequences for that instinct makes it harder to come forward as time goes on. You could argue that without this right people protecting themselves from unjust prosecution could be a crime in of itself (and it's not hard to imagine a plausible historical precedent for this).

But ultimately it doesn't matter if it truly is justifiable or a good idea. It's not more odd than the real world US right to self non-incrimination, so it's free game for worldbuilding.

And under that legal framework the Abirs' attempts to cover their crimes would not be criminal acts in of themselves. That said there would likely be exceptions for ongoing harm (if you poison a river and cover it up, the coverup is not only self-preservation but also an act of harm itself) which might apply here. The extent to which the Abirs' actions could be said to have contributed to Victor's death by preventing aid from reaching him might matter ... but that's frankly complicated ground. A competent advocate might be able to argue that they reasonably thought Victor was safe (just at a friend's house avoiding them) and by the time they realized he wasn't he was surely dead, so no harm was being done by exercising their right to self-protection from the law.

As for what consequences they might suffer for the direct harms they did ... well that also depends heavily on the foundational precepts of Kenomao's justice system. (Which will likely never see the light of day in the fic itself, but here I am worldbuilding it anyway).

The way I'm picturing it, Kenomao's justice system would be largely rooted in ecological preservation and preserving the peace in small towns. Ecological preservation is infamous for the wide gaps between intent and consequences, and preserving the peace in small towns is more about reparations than consequences. So we can imagine a system where people get direct punishments and/or rehabilitative treatment proportional to the extent they knew they were doing harm and could have done otherwise, and then are saddled with a reparative obligation proportional to the actual harm done.

So while the Abirs were rather shitty parents who didn't seek relationship/divorce help on their son's behalf, that might be all they're likely to receive direct punishment for. Which could be very substantial (because this is a society which considers children's welfare important to have a dedicated children's advocacy office even in a small town) or could be relatively minimal (because it's more in children's interests for the society to encourage underperforming parents to seek help rather than hide their shortcomings). Because ultimately the death they caused was not a reasonably expected result of their behavior, and this is a legal framework which deemphasizes consequentialist punitive damages.

The reparative obligation would likely be immense though. The kind of thing that involves the parents committing time and labor to community service related to children's needs (though not being responsible for them, mercy no) for decades to come. There's really no fixing death, however accidental, and reparations would be suitably high. So in this framework the parents may get very little prison time or punitive equivalent, especially compared to the absurdly long decades-long sentences of the US prison system, but that doesn't mean they're getting off scot-free. They could easily be bound to committing significant time and labor to reparative actions for the rest of their working lives.

Furthermore if Diya were to ever make its existence public knowledge, they might be forbidden from ever living somewhere where it lives, and generally subject to constraints limiting their freedoms and autonomies in favor of its peace of mind.

Hoo. That's a lot. I think I'm gonna leave it there for now, though I could keep worldbuilding all weekend in this vein if I let myself, refining and altering what's here and adding more stuff.
 
That's actually really cool. I especially liked your musings on their justice system and de emphasizing punitive justice and not punishing people for panicking and digging a deeper hole for themselves
 
You could argue that without this right people protecting themselves from unjust prosecution could be a crime in of itself (and it's not hard to imagine a plausible historical precedent for this).
My first thought at how this could be a positive law is with blackmail.

In our world if you commit a crime and hide it, then you can be blackmailed for both the crime and the hiding and in many situations the hiding is the worse crime.

If hiding is not a crime then it's a lot easier for a person being threatened to decide that evidence being turned in is better then obeying the blackmailer.
 
My first thought at how this could be a positive law is with blackmail.

In our world if you commit a crime and hide it, then you can be blackmailed for both the crime and the hiding and in many situations the hiding is the worse crime.

If hiding is not a crime then it's a lot easier for a person being threatened to decide that evidence being turned in is better then obeying the blackmailer.
L: Yeah, a lot of laws are interesting trade-offs like that.
 
I thought up a few situations in our world where we already have this type of law.

Whistleblower protection, an employee can report in good faith that their employer is breaking the law, OSHA regulations, health code, discrimination, or other things the company is legally required to obey. The employee is protected from retaliation from both the employer and government, even if it turns out they were wrong about about the situation being against the law.

Also, in the airplane and train worlds, they have "no fault" protections. If a pilot, maintenance person, or anyone else messes up and creates a situation for an accident they are not held responsible because it is more important for the industry to figure out what went wrong where and start working to mix it instead of the person in question wasting time hiding details of the situation. Because those wasted minutes or hours could be the difference in billions of dollars in damages or even people dying.
 
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alright, I have been loving this story so far and have been intending to go through the ghosts to determine their likelihood of being on the team but have been procrastinating so in order that bulbipedia is giving me (kind of, im evaluating the entire line instead of each individual ghost and skipping ones we already have):

Galarian Corsola line - unlikely, Corsela did come about by sudden environmental change which the legendary birds mentioned could do but i think this is unlikely.
Duskull line - I would say probably Diya is doing necromancy and this line is heavily related to binging the living to the other side, might even be a bit of conflict there.
Yamask line - while seemingly promising at first for maybe reviving victor (the boy that died that Diya posseted) A. that would not be in line with the tone of the story B. it is heavily implied that his should fully passed on and C. Yamask creation conditions specifically include a grave and/or the death being old. this is similar for the Galarian form
Sinestea line - unlikely, their thing is mostly about the fancy cups and I don't see Kenomao having much of a fine china market, maybe in the more posh areas but from what we have seen of Kenomao so far it is a frontier region. I do see tea drinking being a possible thing due to the climate however.
Spectrier - to close to a legendary.
Drifloon line - possible depending on how child kidnaping they are but they also like humidity so maybe not in Kenomao. According to Ultra Moon Drifblim gas is made from souls so maybe.
Spiritomb - manmade in ancient times so frontier regions are unlikely to have them due to a lack of ancient humans with a large enough civilization for spiritomb creation. I could see Diya being asked to help with one later in the series when they are more known with more experience with ghosts.
Giritina - HAHAHAHAHA! No.
Litwick line - highly likely, author has already shown interest in the line and thier absolutely wack entries.
Phantump line - likely, Phantump are lost children so is likely an unfortunate part of S&R espacially because they also get adults lost looking for friends.
Pumkaboo line - maybe, while Pumkaboo are related to lost souls and bringing them into the afterlife Gourgeist kill people and Diya may take offence (especially since large ones prey on children)
Sensu style Oricorio - while probably not in Kenomao I could easily see Diya tradeing for one. Diya has already show a likeing to dance. aditionally the Sensu style dex entries are about summoning the dead and cursing opponents, both things the Diya might want to do better.
Sandyghast line - probably not in Kenomao and i don't see Diya trading for one either.
Mimikyu - maybe. I feel like DIya would get along really well with a Mimikyu, the probem is they might not be in Kenomao.
Dhelmise - unlikely, even if we see Diya do a ship rescue one would not form from the sinking ship fast enough (and I doubt Diya is going to eat an anchor for necromancy) and Diya would probably not get along well with a Dhelmise sinking ships.
Alolan Marowak - probably, Alolan Marowak would fit in quite well with the theme of the story, Diya likes dancing, and Kenomao seems to have been colonized by a warmer climate that might have been Alola or Alola like (I am too lazy to look around the story for where Kenomao was colonized from, I just remember it was warm)
Hisuian Typhlosion - unlikely, seems to be heavily related to Hisui/Sinnoh
Shedinja - I really want to see this, aside from the amazing potential for Diya/June collaboration it is also likely one of the more interesting/profitable research bounties due to Nincada being the only Pokémon to evolve into two Pokémon that I can think of, once Diya gets more well known in the research community they actually might be commissioned for this due to their unique perspective.
Sableye - maybe, while this pokemon is rare I could see Diya encountering one if they go for a spelunking or cave rescue badge. (not needing to breathe would be incredibly useful in underground rescues because you don't have to worry as much about bad air and ghastly is probably connected to anyways)
Froslass - highly likely, there already has ben some interesting discussion about Froslass in this thread that the author has shown interest in and I can easily see Froslass being in Kenomao.
Rotom - maybe, Rotom seem to already be pretty rare but I can see it happening.
Hisuian Zorua line - I really want this to happen, the Zorua line are my favorite Pokémon and they are surprisingly rare and common in SI fics, rare that the story is still going (none of the Pokémon SIs that I follow that update have a Zorua/Zoroark aside from Hero of Hisui/Hero of a new age and I am very saddened by this) and common in fics that exist (I know of six fics where the mc becomes a zorua, thre are SIs). the lore for the Hisuian Zorua line also fits very well with the theme of the story, maybe a really stupid kid with a Zorua being rescued too late or an even worse person doing it intentionally to get a ghost normal type and being stopped a bit too late.. ill stop here so half this post is not me talking about the Zorua line (I would do it and am still tempted to)
Frillish line - maybe they are probably a common reason for ocean rescue but unless Diya start flying more with ghost powers I don't think Diya will do much ocean aquatic rescue.
Golett line - maybe, probably not in Kenomao but as one of the most solid ghosts Diya might look into them to get more from their immunities while still having a solid body.
Honedge line - maybe, Kenomao is unlikely to have many swords due to it seeming to be a more recent colonization, though it's final is a very 'powerful' battle Pokémon so it could happen also as a solid ghost Diya could do something similar to what is said about the Golett line.
Contained Hoopa - HAHAHAHAHA. No.
Dicidueye - unlikely, probably not in Kenomao, its also a final evolution Pokémon.
Lunala, Dawn Wings Necrozma, Marshadow, and Blacephalon - NOPE!
Dreepy line - unlikely, it is the only pseudo-legendary ghost type so it is likely to be both rare and protected by its higher evolutions
Shadow Rider Calyrex - no.
Basculegion - probably. this is the most likely pokemon Diya would use for aquatic rescues so Diya might actively try to get one.

Phew, that took a while.
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I haven't followed every discussion but is it set that Diya is getting a full ghost team? I can see the reasoning if they wanted to compete at the champion level but I thought their goal was to have an adventure and make friends.

They would make friends easier with ghost types but I can see that working just as well with psychic, fairy, and dark types.

And just because of Pokemon Trainer Vicky reminding me of Frebas, Diya would adore helping a Frebas through the Contest circuit showing the world just how beautiful they really are, especially if they had some kind of condition that makes them unable to evolve at all.
 
alright, I have been loving this story so far and have been intending to go through the ghosts to determine their likelihood of being on the team but have been procrastinating so in order that bulbipedia is giving me (kind of, im evaluating the entire line instead of each individual ghost and skipping ones we already have):

Galarian Corsola line - unlikely, Corsela did come about by sudden environmental change which the legendary birds mentioned could do but i think this is unlikely.
Duskull line - I would say probably Diya is doing necromancy and this line is heavily related to binging the living to the other side, might even be a bit of conflict there.
Yamask line - while seemingly promising at first for maybe reviving victor (the boy that died that Diya posseted) A. that would not be in line with the tone of the story B. it is heavily implied that his should fully passed on and C. Yamask creation conditions specifically include a grave and/or the death being old. this is similar for the Galarian form
Sinestea line - unlikely, their thing is mostly about the fancy cups and I don't see Kenomao having much of a fine china market, maybe in the more posh areas but from what we have seen of Kenomao so far it is a frontier region. I do see tea drinking being a possible thing due to the climate however.
Spectrier - to close to a legendary.
Drifloon line - possible depending on how child kidnaping they are but they also like humidity so maybe not in Kenomao. According to Ultra Moon Drifblim gas is made from souls so maybe.
Spiritomb - manmade in ancient times so frontier regions are unlikely to have them due to a lack of ancient humans with a large enough civilization for spiritomb creation. I could see Diya being asked to help with one later in the series when they are more known with more experience with ghosts.
Giritina - HAHAHAHAHA! No.
Litwick line - highly likely, author has already shown interest in the line and thier absolutely wack entries.
Phantump line - likely, Phantump are lost children so is likely an unfortunate part of S&R espacially because they also get adults lost looking for friends.
Pumkaboo line - maybe, while Pumkaboo are related to lost souls and bringing them into the afterlife Gourgeist kill people and Diya may take offence (especially since large ones prey on children)
Sensu style Oricorio - while probably not in Kenomao I could easily see Diya tradeing for one. Dia has already show a likeing to dance. aditionally the Sensu style dex entries are about summoning the dead and cursing opponents, both things the Diya might want to do better.
Sandyghast line - probably not in Kenomao and i don't see Diya trading for one either.
Mimikyu - maybe. I feel like DIya would get along really well with a Mimikyu, the probem is they might not be in Kenomao.
Dhelmise - unlikely, even if we see Diya do a ship rescue one would not form from the sinking ship fast enough (and i doubt Diya is going to eat an anchor for necromancy) and Diya would probably not get along well with a Dhelmise sinking ships.
Alolan Marowak - probably, Alolan Marowak would fit in quite well with the theme of the story, Diya likes dancing, and Kenomao seems to have been colonized by a warmer climate that might have been Alola or Alola like 9i am too lazy to look around the story for where Kenomao was colonized from, I just remember it was warm)
Hisuian Typhlosion - unlikely, seems to be heavily related to Hisui/Sinnoh
Shedinja - I really want to see this, aside from the amazing potential for Diya/June collaboration it is also likely one of the more interesting/profitable research bounties due to Nincada being the only Pokémon to evolve into two Pokémon that I can think of, once Diya gets more well known in the research community they actually might be commissioned for this due to her unique perspective.
Sableye - maybe, while this pokemon is rare I could see Diya encountering one if they go for a spelunking or cave rescue badge. (not needing to breathe would be incredibly useful in underground rescues because you don't have to worry as much about bad air and ghastly is probably connected to anyways)
Froslass - highly likely, there already has ben some interesting discussion about Froslass in this thread that the author has shown interest in and I can easily see Froslass being in Kenomao.
Rotom - maybe, rotom seem to already be pretty rare but I can see it happening.
Hisuian Zorua line - I really want this to happen, the zorua line are my favorite pokemon and they are surprisingly rare and common in SI fics, rare that the story is still going (none of the pokemon SIs that I follow that update have a Zorua/Zoroark aside from Hero of Hisui/Hero of a new age and I am very saddened by this) and common in fics that exist (I know of six fics where the mc becomes a zorua, thre are SIs). the lore for the Hisuian Zorua line also fits very well with the theme of the story, maybe a really stupid kid with a zorua being rescued too late or an even worse person doing it intentionally to get a ghost normal type and being stopped a bit too late.. ill stop here so half this post is not me talking about the Zorua line (I would do it and am still tempted to)
Frillish line - maybe they are probably a common reason for ocean rescue but unless Diya start flying more with ghost powers i don't think Diya will do much ocean aquatic rescue.
Golett line - maybe, probably not in Kenomao but as one of the most solid ghosts Diya might look into them to get more from her immunities while still having a solid body.
Honedge line - maybe, Kenomao is unlikely to have many swords due to it seeming to be a more recent colonization, though it's final is a very 'powerful' battle Pokémon so it could happen also as a solid ghost Diya could do something similar to what is said about the Golett line.
Contained Hoopa - HAHAHAHAHA. No.
Dicidueye - unlikely, probably not in Kenomao, its also a final evolution Pokémon.
Lunala, Dawn Wings Necrozma, Marshadow, and Blacephalon - NOPE!
Dreepy line - unlikely, it is the only pseudo-legendary ghost type so it is likely to be both rare and protected by its higher evolutions
Shadow Rider Calyrex - no.
Basculegion - probably. this is the most likely pokemon Diya would use for aquatic rescues so Diya might actively try to get one.

Phew, that took a while.
Interesting analysis, but I should point out that Diya does not use she/her pronouns.
 
They would make friends easier with ghost types but I can see that working just as well with psychic, fairy, and dark types.
i am not going through all of those Pokémon, though I will note that Diya uses some ghost based telepathy for trainer commands so they do have an issue with non-ghost Pokémon.
Interesting analysis, but I should point out that Diya does not use she/her pronouns.
ugh, I tried to use their name or they, ill go through and see where I missed that.

Edit: and after looking I do not see he/she pronouns, could you point them out for me?
 
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i am not going through all of those Pokémon, though I will note that Diya uses some ghost based telepathy for trainer commands so they do have an issue with non-ghost Pokémon.

ugh, I tried to use their name or they, ill go through and see where I missed that.

Edit: and after looking I do not see he/she pronouns, could you point them out for me?
Shedinja - I really want to see this, aside from the amazing potential for Diya/June collaboration it is also likely one of the more interesting/profitable research bounties due to Nincada being the only Pokémon to evolve into two Pokémon that I can think of, once Diya gets more well known in the research community they actually might be commissioned for this due to her unique perspective.
Golett line - maybe, probably not in Kenomao but as one of the most solid ghosts Diya might look into them to get more from her immunities
 
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