The Dawn of Man (nBSG x 40k)

doesn't come across as quite discordant enough for what I imagine. Very low pitch.

And so it should be. It's not *quiet* it's not discordant... its a blast of sound so deep and raw you don't really hear it so much as feel it through every bone in your body.

EDIT: At least for Emperor and Imperator Titans. Warlords probably sound like naval foghorns turned up to 11. Reavers and Warhounds, more malicious sounding foghorns.
 
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And so it should be. It's not *quiet* it's not discordant... its a blast of sound so deep and raw you don't really hear it so much as feel it through every bone in your body.

EDIT: At least for Emperor and Imperator Titans. Warlords probably sound like naval foghorns turned up to 11. Reavers and Warhounds, more malicious sounding foghorns.
ok, that makes sense. Assume the same blaring from Knights as well.
 
The Liberation of Colcha
The Liberation of Colcha

The battle had devolved into a rolling engagement, the Cylons regrouping and falling back as the forces pulled in from across the city to try and co-ordinate a defence. The Sixes and Eights left alives had risen to the occasion, their own training more specialised in military and combat matters. And yet, for it all it counted for little.

If they concentrated too heavily the massive walkers would arrive. One rapid firing massive cannon shells, the other discharging some sort of massive heat beam melting entire structures into slag in moments. If they concentrated too little they were isolated and annihilated by roving vehicles with rapid fire laser turrets on their backs. An Five who had taken the callsign 'Astrobot' that had taken charge of the garrison glared with one eye at the Imperial forces closing on his position.

He had lost her right eye in combat with the Orks, and these were mere humans. And he would be damned if he lost to them.

So now he stood, watching from the Bastion. Defensive turrets made from the main weapons of Heavy Raiders turned towards the city, facing them as Centurions prepared the blockades. He smiled.

The Imperials did not come down the highway for his defensive position. Two thousand Centurions. Another three hundred enfleshed.

And yet still he felt a thrill of fear. He saw strange mass landers settle down far from them at the edge of the city.

"Get my Heavy Raider ready...." He said as he saw it. It rolled forwards from the largest lander, it's own hull painted blood red. It rolled forwards on four sets of tracks, the cannon on its back so massive it formed the majority of the vehicle. The apparent glass emitters pointed in their direction. An eight next to him turned and looked at the hatch.

"We need to go... now." She said.

He felt his teeth rattling. Energy crackled around the machine. It couldn't be close enough...

He turned and ran for the hatch as a sound, raw, primal, a hellish noise that spoke of the life and death of worlds itself. A sound so deep. So intense he knew he couldn't actually hear it so much as feel it. And then it happened.

The Brown Note. Rings of sound punched out towards the Bastions and one a quarter of a kilometre north simply evaporated shaken to dust and destruction by the strike. The destructive rings faded and disappeared as the weapon completed its firing cycles. It's tracks spun against the ground beginning to turn it when the Five ran for the Raider.

Astrobot never saw the fire descending from the sky. As he threw open the bastion door seven meteors slammed into his defensive line. The petals dropped and death stepped forwards. Plumes of fire leapt into the air as the Assault Marines leapt into the fray against the deepest concentrations of the Cylon forces, chainswords and bolt pistols barking death and rage.

The Devastators arrayed and four Heavy Bolters opened up as Sergeant Thulakim opened up with his techxorcism gun. A hundred metres away Sergeant Zophiel lead his unit in prayer as they all levelled techxorcism rifles and opened fire with terrifying accuracy and precision. From another modified Dreadnought pod three Terminators emerged, Caldissius with an Assault Cannon and Cyclone Missile Launcher. Holdyn equipped identically as Kyutek stepped forwards Heavy Flamer and Chainfist at the ready.

Astrobot never saw the drop pod with the command elements, Radfael, Snorri, Pathiel and Andiel emerging and becoming a maelstrom of destruction.

He did however see the massive pod smash into the ground in front of him, between his Heavy Raider and himself. The heavy petals dropping. He felt joy soar in his heart for a second, expecting that it was one of Ones inventions. Then he realised that it was not the case. The design was ornate.

EVEN IN DEATH I STILL SERVE

The gun on its right arm whined and fired a sun into the heavy raider. The armour failed to stop it for even a moment as the weapon burned out his only chance of escape. It turned faster than he could have ever imagined it would. It's left arm picking him up as easily as an athlete catching a ball.

CONGRATULATIONS YOU HAVE THE HONOUR OF BEING DESTROYED BY FREL STONEBLADE ABOMINABLE MACHINE

He heard the hiss of a pilot light being ignited before the heavy flamer slung under the power fist bathed him in purifying flame.

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Roslin felt the tear in her eyes as she entered the school, laspistol in hand. Two dozen dead children and a Six standing over them with a pair of Centurions behind her. The men moving in behind her were frozen for a second at the sight. The six began to turn as Roslin turned the dial on her laspistol to maximum power shots.

The blonde was raising her hand as the Centurions started to turn.

But light is faster than a mere Cylon. The lasbolt charred her shoulder black, the second punched through her ribs and baked through her internal organs. The Centurions were turning, the boys she'd come in with had found their courage, and rage. Volleyed lasgun fire erupted into the machines tearing them to scrap.

Rage fuelled them as they marched through the school hunting down the Cylons who had sought refuge there. No mercy. No civility. Roslin didn't even notice when one of her boys dropped, the rage at what the Cylons were doing overwhelming even her sense of empathy for her fellow man. She never even noticed when a bullet punched through her own shoulder as she put laser blasts into the armoured skull of a machine.

Every room. Every chamber. They found children murdered by the Cylons when the revolution began. When her laspistol ran out of charge and she had none spare the knife she'd brought became her weapon of choice, not operated with any skill, but its monomolecular blade didn't care about that, the Cylons attempts to block simply led to hands or wrists being severed by the attempt. But soon she was joined by Billy, wearing a uniform of the Hootsforce.

He had carried a Lasgun until he put it down to gently pry her weapons away. She realised she couldn't see.

There were too many tears in the way.

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The Eight had run through the streets. She knew there was something hunting her. Something terrible. They moved through the city with great running. It sounded like hooves of metal in pursuit and still she ran. The Centurions with her matching her pace. She was running for one of the landed civilian ships, seeking to get on board and take off as quickly as possible.

A sound of rending metal and she saw one of them, black armoured bodies, as it plunged a pair of blades into the Centurion with dozens of stabs before ripping outwards, the metal of the machine bursting under the sound of the weapons. She had realised then that it was too late. Five of them had moved in, the attempt to run coming too late, too slow. One of them went down under a fullisade from a pair of Centurions, but it was too little too late as they fell beneath the transonic blades of the Ruststalkers.

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A two and three were hiding in the sewers, marvelling at the infrastructure the Imperials had allowed them to get away with in such a short time. They didn't run, fearful of the noise it might create and alert those above, for the same reason they had ordered the Centurions on the surface to die fighting to protect their retreat.

A splash.

They spun flashlight aiming towards the sound, a small creature about half the height of a human squealed and ran into a connecting tunnel. They moved on after it before stopping before a door that had been concealed in the wall, revealed only by a circumstance of the light.

A perfect hiding place.

"Oh no." The three said looking at what she found there. It wasn't a secret passage or hidden room.

Before her stood a warhead. Ten feet in height.

The length of time they had spent on Colcha had lead to an understanding of both variants of Gothic, their machine natures making learning the language simple and a matter of interest rather than effort. They were both looking at a single word on a dataslate embedded in the wall as it switched from DISARMED.

To ARMED.

The radiological symbol left no mistaking what it was. They began to run. Into the waiting arms of the Ork Kommandos.

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The evacuation Alarums could not be mistaken. As the Hootsforce and reinforcements fought off the Cylons, the people ran for the ships as their Captains, with the launch keys, returned from the hidden fortress fastnesses to once more take command of their vessels. A six hiding in a ditch, covered in mud and the stink of death watched with a pair of stolen magnoculars as they were loading themselves back into the ships. She knew they weren't all defeated, the strange petals were folded up and lifted away by some sort of cargo ships that came down and gripped them before climbing for orbit.

She watched as within the city the landed ships began their own climbs for orbit. The ships on the spaceport climbing for naked space. Hours and hours of ships lifting from the surface into space. She knew that the devices they'd planted to track the Colonials if they ever mounted an escape like this would likely be found with Imperial forces searching. But what she couldn't figure out was why they were abandoning the city in the first place.

She stood up as the last of the ships she could see lifted. There was no sign of man, woman, or whatever those armoured giants were. If she could make it to the hangars there might still be a Raider or Heavy Raider she could tak...

The sky lit up. She screamed and covered her eyes. But she knew that afterimage in her brain. She'd seen it before, if not from this angle, or unprotected. The world rocked with another blast, and then another. Each one in the exact centre of each settlement when she understood the truth.

They had never planned to stay.

And now concealed atomics were reducing it all to ashes.
 
*Laughs in Imperial*

so begins the exterminatus...and who wants to bet that this planet was all the orks had left and thanks to the cylons they ended up restarting the spread of ork spores everywhere?

also great chapter, looking forward to seeing the colonials go apeshit when records of the cylons killing kids gets out.

fucking toasters...why the fuck do you go after the kids?!? like thats ASKING for a exterminatus to come down your heads...dumbass robots.
 
So, @Kadaeux, much as I appreciate getting a character named after me, did I annoy you somehow? I dont think I've seen a character have that bad a day in a long while, even if they were a filthy flesh toaster.

I kid, I kid! The chapter was great and the cylons got an object lesson on why you dont fight a land war with the imperium underarmed. I look forward to reading more the next time you post.
 
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So, @Kadaeux, much as I appreciate getting a character named after me, did I annoy you somehow? I dont think I've seen a character have that bad a day in a long while, even if they were a filthy flesh toaster.

I kid, I kid! The chapter was great and the cylons got an object lesson on why you dont fight a land war with the imperium underarmed. I look forward to reading more the next time you post.

rofl, nah you're fine mate, but with that username i'm sorry to say you weren't going to be on the Colonial side of the fence :p
 
rofl, nah you're fine mate, but with that username i'm sorry to say you weren't going to be on the Colonial side of the fence :p
I'm imagining if you do something involving my user name, it's probably going to be one rather weird hybrid giving out prophecies but using Trope Names from TV Tropes for everything they say [/Semi-Joke]
 
Nightmares and Heresy
Dawn of Man

The Aquila landed next to the Raptor in Markus' private hangar. The hangar was unusually occupied, full of Raptors and other shuttles that had recovered the last of the Colonials from the surface. Roslin stepped from the Aquila, exhausted and wounded. She saw Adama there, as he rushed over, followed closely by Markus. "This is Markus. Initiate fleet jump to Daidalos. Prepare for operation exodus."

"They killed the children.." Roslin said collapsing into Adama's arms. He turned to look at Markus.

He nodded. "We've been taking census of every ship in the fleet, Roslin's Scholam for primary and secondary education was the a location Cylons used to hole up, according to our men, three hundred and sixty five children were murdered." The number quietened the bay.

Suddenly channels across the fleet opened wide. Receiving the broadcast from the Dawn of Man's hangar. Both across the wireless audio communications, but also across televised and even holographic communications. Markus stood plainly, regally, blood spatter on his collar from where he had set foot upon the surface himself and put enemies of mankind to death. Behind him, Radfael stood, a demigod of death.

"Sons and Daughters of mankind. Colonial and Imperial. Born of one culture or both. I stand here now, on the Dawn of Man and I hearken to you to harden your hearts. To stand resolute in the face of this atrocity. During the near full year of Cylon occupancy under the auspices of the arch-traitor Gaius Baltar, you have withstood hardships."

"The men and women of the mining corps continued their great works as the Cylons watched on in confusion, distracted by the Orks. The men and women of the agricultural corps continued to harvest and grow our very future. No matter your roles you all rose to the occasion while maintaining pressure against the Cylon occupation." Markus' expression fell.

"During that time, we could do little but prepare, unaware of your circumstances due to the unfortunate loss of the Hellstar. But soon we learned of the occupation from Captain Anastasia Dualla, of the Saggitaron's Revenge. And so it was we prepared and came to liberate our people from this world."

"And we came. We came with the full might of mankind charging at our backs. We came and scourged the unholy machines from the stars. But it was you. You sons and daughters of mankind, stranded behind the lines of control. It was you who rose up from the fastnesses of the fortresses. It was you who rose from your homes to bring bolt and blade to the invaders. You who took back your streets."

His face dropped, head bowed.

"You who paid the unfortunate price of the war on Colcha's soil. Your freedom, and the fire in your hearts cost two thousand, one hundred and nine lives. Of which, seven hundred and ninety three were children murdered in their scholas by the machines. Some of you have questioned the necessity for this war. You have spread the myth that it was the actions of man that brought this on us all. You know who you are."

The words chilled. They were not filled with remorse. But with accusation.

"Speak to those among you who once lived on Colcha under the occupation of the Cylons. Speak to Laura Roslin of the murdered children that she avenged. Speak to the empty spaces among you where once loved ones, treasured friends and heroes once sat. Listen for the sound of joyful children who will never utter a sound again. For your complacency has damned them as much as Cylon bullets."

He stared into the cameras such that all who could see or hear it felt like he stared at them, or spoke to them.

"Humanity is not responsible for the crimes done against us. Do not allow yourself the luxury of ever believing that. President Zarek surrendered to the Cylons and served them for near a year, subverting their actions, turning what he could. And even assassinating Baltar himself. But his actions show you the truth. Even surrendering peacefully, we were murdered, oppressed and enslaved." Across the fleet there were mumbles and murmurs of assent, agreement.

"And so, we resume our journey for Terra. We return to our quest to claim the ancestral, future, home of mankind. Earth." His words took on a rising cadence from the lows of what they had suffered.

"We will find Terra. And no longer will we fall back before the menace of the machines. We will rise once more. We will reach for the skies, we will reclaim the destiny that is the stars, we will march forward into stars. WE WILL RISE IN A SINGULAR CRUSADE TO BURN THE STARS OF THE CYLON. DO YOU STAND WITH ME."

Across the fleet hundreds of thousands of human voices cried out in unity.

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Colonial One

Roslin woke in a cold sweat in a bed she hadn't occupied for years. After the heroic death of Zarek assassinating Baltar it hadn't taken long after rejoining the fleet for her to be named President once more. But the nightmares continued regardless, childrens faces haunting her every night. Billy and Tory Foster did their best to help her, but there was nothing they could do about the faces in her dreams.

She had joined the others in her cry of support. But privately she seethed at Markus. He had drawn on the horror of what happened there, not to call for mourning and support those who had lost their lives and children. But as a call to arms. An oath to war. She saw it whenever she saw Starbuck or Dualla. Or worse.

Tigh.

The culture of the Colonies was being subsumed by the Imperial culture. Their status as survivors of a concentrated genocide. Of being haunted every step by the prospect of enemy ships jumping in and escorting them to annihilation. And she couldn't help the fear that maybe, just maybe, they were right. She had paid close attention over Zarek's presidency, her position giving her significant access to government files.

Those deemed 'unsuited' were all recorded before being shipped back to the fleet where they were once more classified as burdens on the supply. Those who served as PDF were recorded, and honoured. And that was where her own worries became more evident. Less than twenty percent of the Gemonese population had moved out of the 'unsuited' category, and her own questions yielded the answers.

The Gemenese had largely declared the Imperials a literal threat to the faith. The near twenty percent that were acceptable or honoured for their part in the PDF universally consisted of the younger Gemonese. And it was only getting worse. Heading for her desk she began to pick up reports, often on dataslates these days.

And the reports she was seeing were not ones she wanted anything to do with.

Index Collabatorii
Familia Mortuorum
...

The items went on. The first she glanced at with barely concealed hatred. A list of collaborators. There was a line to be drawn on it though. They had all continued in their assigned roles waiting for the day of vengeance to come. So where did the true Collaborator roles begin?

The second she actually feared. Family members of those who had lost people down on Colcha. People who needed to be notified and told news nobody wanted.

Moving over to a window she watched as transport ships moved produce between craft. All the new Imperial made ships had the domes of their arboretums. Even their escort ships, built for nothing but combat had them. With recycling technologies, it meant that food was for now not an issue.

Turning, she once more looked at the numbers, updated after the battles.

250'271 COL-Nat
291'012 IMP-Nat
346'000 IMP-IRN

The numbers did not comfort her, though the Ironborn crewing their own transport ships had been trained in Colonial cultures. The fact the Imperials had not even noticed Zarek that escorts were being built, and crewed, told a story of its own about how highly they valued him as President.

But the deaths of naturally born citizens was a pain that she hadn't expected to feel again so soon. Let alone wi...

The tears came back.

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Cloud Nine

Nina moved along the upper level of the Cathedral they had built while rebuilding the agri-dome. She looked down at the congregation of the faithful below. Colonial, Imperial, she didn't give a damn. They were her people. They couldn't see her observing them in the shadows, the light play designed to conceal the upper level from view.

They mingled, spoke and consoled each other over the events that had taken place on Colcha. Spoke of the anger, the hate, the need for vengeance.

There was no talk of peace or discussion of how to seek a truce with the Cylons. There were no needless tears shed.

There were, she noticed still, no Gemonese.

The heretics clung to their faith refusing to acknowledge that the gods they had so long worshipped were Imperial Saints. Their idolatry leading towards heretical rejection of the only true faith. She knew they feared her. The prospect of a true saint, a living saint. She could barely contemplate the honour herself.

But she could feel him.

He on Terra. They had changed something. Brought a fragment of him with them in their hearts. A flash of light from the Astronomicon. Insight and knowledge.

Nina frowned. Atheists she could ignore.

But wilful heresy?

It was time she spoke with them.

Whether they liked it or not.
 
Nina frowned. Atheists she could ignore.

But wilful heresy?

It was time she spoke with them.

Whether they liked it or not.

This can only end well :confused:

Let's hope she doesn't become an imperial martyr in the process.

I gotta say, I was rereading the story and I think that you got Zarek's character and motivations perfect. It's not often that I see a bsg fic include him as an important protag(?) and even less that I see him done well

Seriously, great chapter, keep up the good work
 
This can only end well :confused:

Well, it's not like anyone has love for the Gemonese.

Still, looks like the Imperials took a page or two of the Tau book to deal with human populations. At least if we believe the rumors.
Roslin should check how he fertility among them is now, because something tell me that it would be lower than before... just saying.
 
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Still, looks like the Imperials took a page or two of the Tau book to deal with human populations. At least if we believe the rumors.
Roslin should check how he fertility among them is now, because something tell me that it would be lower than before... just saying.
I have been suspecting of late that the Ethereals might be pulling an Aschen on their client species.
 
Well, it's not like anyone has love for the Gemonese.

Still, looks like the Imperials took a page or two of the Tau book to deal with human populations. At least if we believe the rumors.
Roslin should check how he fertility among them is now, because something tell me that it would be lower than before... just saying.
I have been suspecting of late that the Ethereals might be pulling an Aschen on their client species.

While that would be a fun line to take their reproduction rates are fine. Just adding a battleship was a significant population injection of Imperials. :p
 
Population growth on both sides is about equal. However being in stark survival mode has pushed the culture much closer to the Imperials compared to the Colonials.

The Imperials have been in survival mode for centuries and are used to it and can see this as success.

The Colonials largely were a Western softer society before things went to pot.

Imperials also have provable faith.
 
Ya know, have any of the colonial -> imperial converts reached s point of particular veneration of a single Primarch, in the way Markus venerates Sanguinious?
 
Everyone venerates Sanguinius; he's basically the IoM's equivalent of Jesus as their Arch-Martyr. He's kind of unique among the primarchs that way.
I understand that, but I assume some folks might hold a particular appreciation for Dorn, or Guilliman, or Corax, ect, and I dont just mean those Astartes of the respective Primarch genelines.
 
I understand that, but I assume some folks might hold a particular appreciation for Dorn, or Guilliman, or Corax, ect, and I dont just mean those Astartes of the respective Primarch genelines.
Thr only ones I could see getting venerated are the Fabulous Hawkboy, the Waste of Perfectly Good Life Support, the Friendly Balrog, and Lord Adornable. Maybe the Furry, MR. SPEED, and Mittens as well. The rest are either evil or very hard to like.
 
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