The Bowshot King (A Nomad Quest)

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Chapter Ten: Ambushed in Ten Directions
Whatever you can say about Istami Sahd, he's bloodied himself more times than you can count. His face is a canvas of sword scars and moustaches. So, on the balance, Atil has decided to trust him on this affair. He put aside his concerns for his noble cousin and for his future shares of the loot.

"Who here lived near a mountain? Say, the Amgar Badlands, or perhaps the Snakebacks?" Istami Sahd asked. They didn't set out immediately, no. They took the time to conduct a quick reconniter as the Moth and Flower convoy struggled through the winding paths. "Stand over there." Thirty or so, most coming from your host, separate themselves. Most of the people who live on mountains are poor, after all. Without plains to nurture their herds, they eke out a harsh living on what little ground they can find. They have to strike out, take risks, to secure their fortune and their future. "Not a bad amount. Here's what I figure…"




Hongchen Zishan rubbed his nose. This deep into spring, all the flowers were in bloom and their air was thick with their pollen. It was a beautiful sight, mountains covered in all colors of flowers, each heaven rock a banner to the glory of the Moth and Flower. It also inflamed his sinuses and made his eyes water, like the waterfall over to their left, mist joining the rivers.

To their right was a sheer mountain cliff, and so far Hongchen Zishan was feeling pretty good about his convoy's security. The infantry bitched all the way up the mountain and bitched all the way down the mountain, but the infantry were born to bitch. The cavalry, noble scions and Serpi admixtures all, were at the front, organized in a loose wedge that was more country amble than military procession.

Hongchen Zishan never entirely approved of the barbarian handling methods of the Jiaqi Emperors. The Moth and Flower was the world. What did they need for the produce of the Serpi? Jade and iron, horses and gold was all well and good, but when you got down to it, they were mere baubles. Transitory. And besides, once they've moved from whatever pit the Serpi dug them out of, they cost ten times more than if they were dug up here.

No, it would have been far better if they had kept to the border forts and simply killed any traitorous Serpi that thought about coming close. Then his cousin wouldn't be…

He shook his head. Win the war, then weep.

Insects chirped and wind rustled the willows. It was a beautiful day, really. He wouldn't mind calling it an early day and staking camp, except he knew it would be even better in the commandry commander's pavilion. Yes, plum wine was in season, wasn't it? He could… "Ambush! Ambush! Armor up in the mountain!" someone behind shouted.

Instinct clang like a bell. He jerked his head heavenwards and scanned the mountains. There! A glint of metal, and then arrows started falling on their heads.

He raised his arm. Arrows skittered off his gauntlet. The thudding of hooves sounded to the left, floating across the rushing river. There, along the opposite path, rode another detachment of riders out of the trees.

The manuals are clear what to do on this affair. Take your mobile element and smash the shit out of one of the elements. "Cavalry!" He roared. "On me!" He pointed his horse's head across the river, slinging his spear from his shoulder into his hand. There was neighs all across the valley, as his unarmored horse dove into the river, waves beating against it's flesh. River foam sprayed into his face as the Serpi (who else could it be) loosed arrows at his squad's direction. Horses screamed, some pitching their riders into the river. The enemy Serpi, a more ragged bunch could not be more imaginable, gained distance on them. But they were evidently young. An experienced Serpi warrior could put an arrow into a wedding ring, firing backwards. This lot loosed their arrows wide off the mark.

So this means…

This was a trap! He bit down so hard he almost heard a tooth crack. He's been tricked-- this detachment was nothing more than to lure the cavalry away from the main body, where the real threat would be coming up from behind to skewer him. After that they'd pick off the infantry at their leisure. Damn him! He's unbalanced, that's the only explanation. How else would he fall for such an elementary stratagem?

But it wasn't too late. He wasn't too far from the infantry. He could double back right now! "Halt!" he roared. "Halt! And about face! We're heading back. It's a trap!"

"Sir!" his squad roared in reply. And the enemy Serpi, they knew too, because the moment he called his order the Serpi halted and reared themselves to face them. As he rode away, one of the Serpi trotted to the front of the delegation.

The Serpi pulled down his turban and veil. It was Atil. That betrayer. His cousin's killer. He's right here, in front of Hongchen Zishan. Could he bear this?

The hero, Hongchen Zishan
[]- Fulfills his grudge. Like hell he'll let this slave get away with this! After he's finished with Atil, he'll feed the body to the fishes!
[]- Does not fall for his bait. Haha, nice try. Your schemes killed my cousin, but they won't kill me.
 
[X]- Does not fall for his bait. Haha, nice try. Your schemes killed my cousin, but they won't kill me.

Interesting that we're playing someone else instead of Atil. I say we fall back, this is obviously a ploy by the nomads to separate the cavalry from the convoy!
 
[x]- Does not fall for his bait. Haha, nice try. Your schemes killed my cousin, but they won't kill me.
 
Oh, uh, I really dunno what to pick

[X]- Fulfills his grudge. Like hell he'll let this slave get away with this! After he's finished with Atil, he'll feed the body to the fishes!

This for now
 
[X]- Fulfills his grudge. Like hell he'll let this slave get away with this! After he's finished with Atil, he'll feed the body to the fishes!
 
[X]- Does not fall for his bait. Haha, nice try. Your schemes killed my cousin, but they won't kill me.

We need a good recurring villain in the epics they will right of us in the future
 
[X]- Does not fall for his bait. Haha, nice try. Your schemes killed my cousin, but they won't kill me.
 
[x]- Does not fall for his bait. Haha, nice try. Your schemes killed my cousin, but they won't kill me.
 
Chapter Eleven: Catching Tigers for Breakfast
"Atil! Atil, you must think I'm stupid!" Hongchen Zishan roared, shaking leaves from the trees. "I think I'm going back to my squadron, more woe to you!" To the rest of his squad, he said, "now let's double back. We've been tricked."

"I could have told you that," said his second in command, before they turned and galloped back.



"Of all the Moths in the world," Atil complained, "I get the one who doesn't care about his family at all." Some of his retinue chuckled.

Ayiz shook his head. "We still have to go after him."

"That's true. Alright, boys. Let's go and attack a squadron of fully armored Moth knights. We have bows, some of us have armor. We're going up against soldiers in full panoply who by the way, either hate us for being barbarians and thus lower than the worms in the dirt or are our brothers, and thus hate us with the ironclad certainty of brotherhood. So let's hurl ourselves into this fray, eh?"

"Wow," someone behind him said, "I feel much better about this."

Atil chuckled and nocked a whistling arrow in his bow. He loosed it at the sky, creating a long, drawn out whistling signal as the arrow caught on the wind. Then they charged, launching arrows, darts, and jeers at the backs of the knights. Horses neighed in terror, arrows sinking into their haunches or leaving red lines where they were not protected by armor. Some lost their seats, and were promptly stampeded over by Atil's retinue.

They were closing the distance. Fifty meters became twenty became ten until Atil was so close that he could touch the last rider. Bowstrings twanged and that rider fell down, screaming with an arrow in his back.

Willow branches beat at his helmet as Atil loosed arrows wildly. He was in the Moth squadron now, a mistake, but the only thing now is to ride through. He chanced a look back and there was Ayiz, ever faithful, charging hell for leather through a press of horses to get to his charge. There was no time to exchange a bow for a saber. His horse, beautiful Karaumuz, dodged nimbly. Here he lept like birds over a branch, while a Moth knight tripped and fell. There he shied away from a spear thrust, Atil responding with an arrow that skittered off the knight's pauldron.

He felt immortal. He felt invincible.

He felt a sharp, spreading pain in his jaw as someone struck him about with the haft of his lance. Blood and a tooth fell from his mouth as he fell against the rump of Karamuz, face first to the sky.

Hongchen Zishan hauled Atil up, riding side by side. "You cannot imagine," he snarled, breath hot in Atil's face, "the extent of my good fortune." His eyes fair bulged out of his head, Atil considered. Rage had colored him, elevated him from a man to a furious ancestor. Cold iron bit into his gut, working past his lamellar cuirass. With one arm, the hero, Hongchen Zishan worked his spear through Atil's entrails. "What possessed you, you dog? You were our favored fostered son. I had to suffer through reams of paper praising you. If you were going to turn traitor from the outset, you should have had the grace to act the part. Wayward son this, true son of Zhu Di that-- it's enough to make a man puke!"

"Wait," Atil gasped.

"It's too late to wait," Hongchen Zishan said contemptuously. He wrenched the spear out with a horrible sucking sound. "Is that all you have? Wait?"

"Yes," Atil gasped one last time before a tight wedge of Serpi cavalry crashed into Moth and Flower squadron, leaping off of a small cliff. They emerged from the treeline as if by magic. Hongchen Zishan swore until he painted the air blue and threw Atil to the ground. He landed on his arm. There was a sickening crack and Atil cried to all the gods and the eternal blue sky as Istami Sahd (who else) ran one knight through with his lance, flicked out his saber and cut the throats of two as he passed through. And his guard, his dogs of war, followed, reducing a squadron into penny packets of fleeing riders, dashing pell mell over rivers and branches.

The sky was turning into night and falling into his eyes. Not now, he said to himself, I can't die here. Just give me some more time. He forced himself to stand, legs shaking like a newborn foal. "Istami Sahd," he coughed out. "Did we win?"

The prince stared down on his cousin with an expression of utter fascination. "Aye, that we did. The infantry threw down their weapons and bolted. The wagons…" Istami Sahd chewed on something. "It's bombs, cousin. Boxes on boxes of… Scattering Thunder Bombs, I think."

"Oh. That's good," Atil sighed. "I think I'll fall over now."

He did so.

In time, he was carried back to camp. He was tended over by his retinue of the original fifteen, as well as some of his new recruits. Others, in time, simply left. They came for a hero, not a corpse. There were others who wanted warm bodies on their enterprises, and sticking around for a comatose boy was not profitable.

The camp moved south. No Moth and Flower soldier ambushed them. What little garrisons were seiged and contained in their fortresses as the nation ran riot over the country. Men made their fortunes, in some occasions trebling their wealth in a fortnight, even if that wealth were just a herd of livestock. Scouts probed into the empire, and yet could not even find a sign of the main army. They took heart at this. Atil took fever.

Eren Sahd one day came by with medicine that proved only somewhat efficacious. Atil no longer burned like a furnace fire, but he only woke long enough to murmur a few words before falling back to unconsciousness. Jigei Tolma sat by his charge day by day and tendered prayers to Eternal Blue Heaven that his almost perhaps son be well.

Most curiously, someone else has been a regular visitor.

Who is it?
[]- The Khan himself. Xige Angha Khan, lord of the Serpi.
[]- The sons of the Khan, Istami, Eren, and Illig Sahd.
[]- The great Veli, Beksharbey.
 
[X]- The sons of the Khan, Istami, Eren, and Illig Sahd.
I could understand why the khan would come, which leaves two mysteries, and this seems the more interesting of the two.
 
[X]- The Khan himself. Xige Angha Khan, lord of the Serpi.

Ouch, that was a nasty wound. Wonder why the Khan's here though.
 
[X]- The sons of the Khan, Istami, Eren, and Illig Sahd.

Love me some found brotherhood.
 
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