The Blue Anemones Blossoming Over You (Worm/Touhou Project)

At first I was expecting this to be Yuuka and Armsmaster having interesting interactions together. Instead, it's high octane fight scenes. Battery and Assault really are the only two people on the team that can even try to stand up to Yuuka. Maybe Shadow Stalker.
 
be funny if Armsy isn't actually dead, and is just knocked the hell out for daring to be so rude, with Yuuka thinking she can 'fix' him, and get him to not be so 'rude'.
 
Out of all the toubou character she's one of scariest

I read a few of her manga

And what the fuck is she
From what I could gather from wiki reads?
She is a general-concept Yokai.
While there are season-empowered Yokai, she draws from them all.
Her flower garden is her and she is the garden.
She's also one to value age.

To basically summarise, she is an enlightenment away from being a fully fledged Kami/god.
 
She wrung her hands, attempting to mangle Samantha's neck, her intertwined thumbs digging into the bones and cartilage of Sam's raised windpipe with monstrous strength. Her fingers stopped against the surface of Battery's skin- a nigh-unstoppable force crushing down onto an indestructible object.
The whole chapter was great, but this choking scene might have been my favorite. The tension of Battery and Assault both trying their hardest to break Yuka's choke before Battery's charge runs out was phenomenal. Doubly so because I didn't know if she was going to make it or not.
 
The whole chapter was great, but this choking scene might have been my favorite. The tension of Battery and Assault both trying their hardest to break Yuka's choke before Battery's charge runs out was phenomenal. Doubly so because I didn't know if she was going to make it or not.
Thanks! I especially like writing fight scenes where the stakes are high, and the audience isn't sure if the characters will live or die, so I'm really glad to hear that it had the intended effect.

EDIT: I saw your review on the Wormfic Reddit, and I wrote a much more eloquent reply. It contains some of my writing philosophy for the story, so I wanted to cross-post it here to SV.

In response to: Weekly Wormfic Reader Discussion Thread

-Grifonides

I take that as a given in most fiction I read. Really, how often you read a story where the hero actually loses? With full consequences of that, not just a slap on the wrist or easily reversable pricetag.

Fanfiction is especially bad at it, but original media are rarely better.

That's pretty much why I have very little investment in most conflicts. It is a given that a hero will win, or at least lose without much price, so there is no tension. It takes at least one break from the rule for me to start taking the conflicts innit seriously.

- Me

It bothers me too, which is why I really love writing Invincible-style stories, where the heroes and main characters not only get the crud kicked out of them but it also feels entirely believable that they might lose or die, because they do upon several occasions.

It's thrilling and novel when both sides of a fight go all out, using the fullest extent of their skills and abilities without pulling any punches.

That moment when everything goes wrong- when named characters start dropping and almost anything could happen is something that rarely happens, except for when the author wants to write a lazy bad ending where everyone dies.

The idea that the characters might die adds a thrilling, almost addictive spice to the conflict. It keeps the audience on the edge of their seat, but you can't have that moment of tension if there aren't real stakes.

I think the best way to break that default audience expectation is to make an example- someone, preferably a character or multiple characters with significant emotional investment, need to be executed on-screen with no chance of recovery.

In today's sphere of media, with countless methods of resurrection and off-screen survival, I believe that's the only way to establish that a writer means business.
 
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