[X] Help her up
-[X] "Good fight. Thanks to you, my youth is blazing like never before!"

YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUTH


...I'm not even sorry. I just really like the way Crilltic wrote 1010-Gai interactions and may have been infected
 
[X] Help her up - She may be a utter bitch, and the sister of that monster that tried to murder Lee, but you're better than her. And you want her to know you're better than her.
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Question: You know how Solars can become really good at things they've never done in like a week, and masters of things they're already experts at in like a month?

What happens when we get better at martial arts then Might Gai in like, a month?

I'm sure he would be proud of us, but at the same time I feel bad about being proof positive that "geniuses of hard work" can never measure up to demigods.

Like, we're on the team that's all about working really hard. Just being really good at everything with hardly any effort, and reaching perfection at the things we put time into in like a month, well...

Might Gai is simultaneously the best and worst tutor for a Solar.

(I'm unclear on the Solar learning curve, so I might be making a bad assumption in assuming that the exponential gains we get at skills we know nothing about translates into exponential gains in skills we mastered before we Exalted).
 
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Question: You know how Solars can become really good at things they've never done in like a week, and masters of things they're already experts at in like a month?

What happens when we get better at martial arts then Might Gai in like, a month?

I'm sure he would be proud of us, but at the same time I feel bad about being proof positive that "geniuses of hard work" can never measure up to demigods.

Like, we're on the team that's all about working really hard. Just being really good at everything with hardly any effort, and reaching perfection at the things we put time into in like a month, well...

Might Gai is simultaneously the best and worst tutor for a Solar.
I mean the simple answer is even as a Solar you're still not getting better than Might Gai in a month :V
 
I mean the simple answer is even as a Solar you're still not getting better than Might Gai in a month :V

Maybe not a month. You're still combining the absurd growth rates of Solars with the absurd growth rates of a training program under Might Gai.

Oh god, now that as a Solar we can actually keep up with Might Gai and Rock Lee's insane training regiment via Exalted level bull-crap powers, are they going to expect us to spend every waking moment doing laps around Konoha until we're wearing a jumpsuit?

What would even happen if a Solar spent every waking moment of their glorious youth training to be the best Dawn caste warrior ever? Not that other Solars are lazy, it's just that everyone is lazy compared to Might Gai and Rock Lee.

Is Gai just gonna keep making the training harder until it stops being physically possible for us to continue benefiting? You can only do strength training so much, at some point a Solar can just lift mountains from dawn to dusk.

(In case you're wondering, the answer to the question "How much can a Solar lift?" eventually becomes "5 pounds more then whatever it is they're trying to lift" if I remember my exalted right.)
 
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I mean the simple answer is even as a Solar you're still not getting better than Might Gai in a month :V
Like....Gai was acknowledged as "the best at taijutsu" by Madara. If Madara hadn't been hopped up on 6 kinds of bullshit, Gai's final move would absolutely have killed him.

So, uh, yeah, no, we're not passing that in only a month.
 
Like....Gai was acknowledged as "the best at taijutsu" by Madara. If Madara hadn't been hopped up on 6 kinds of bullshit, Gai's final move would absolutely have killed him.

So, uh, yeah, no, we're not passing that in only a month.
Well that's the thing. With Favored and Caste related abilities Exalts have nigh instantaneous training time. Like as long as they have the XP they could train from 0 to 10 in a day (or 10 days if the QM says you need a day of training time to train still). So... yes actually.

Welcome to Exalts.

In the modified system we have we don't quite seem to have that, and we're missing the XP besides, since I don't see any Caste discounts on the XP, though Favored is there.
 
Like....Gai was acknowledged as "the best at taijutsu" by Madara. If Madara hadn't been hopped up on 6 kinds of bullshit, Gai's final move would absolutely have killed him.

So, uh, yeah, no, we're not passing that in only a month.

I still want the fanfic where Maito Gai actually does finish off Madara, blasting through his layers of BS with the power of YOUTH! :(
 
I still want the fanfic where Maito Gai actually does finish off Madara, blasting through his layers of BS with the power of YOUTH! :(
What is the power of youth, though? It's not a tight jumpsuit, a confident pose, or a loud voice, those things are external, all but irrelevant. It's the ability to treat limits as just another goal to surpass, a way-point to leave behind, perhaps in extremis a wall to smash through with effort and stubborn determination. The will to never, ever let a momentary setback force you to give up, because the only way to fail is to stop trying. The reserve of energy to take one more step, throw one more punch, take one more breath when the ache in your body and the people around you and the world itself say that no, that's impossible, surely you can't do any more.

The power of Youth is the power of the Unconquered Sun himself, or a dim and pallid reflection as best a mortal soul can manage, and a teacher's glory is the triumph of his students. Don't feel let down that you don't have that story of Gai being Madara's downfall - look forward to Tenten absorbing his lessons here and doing that job. You know he'll be crying manly tears of pride himself over it.

Well, assuming the quest persists that far, but chin up! That's the spirit of YOUTH!
 
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Someone should have put a notice in the old thread.
I just stumbled across this.
*bookmarks*
Oh yeah, if anyone has any questions about the system or anything, feel free to ask away.
Yeah, I have a question.
-How come Tenten doesn't have Panopticon Fusion Discipline despite favoring Perception?
Panoptic Fusion Discipline

Cost: 4m
Mins: Awareness 4, Essence 2
Type: Reflexive
Keywords: Combo-OK
Duration: One scene
Prerequisite Charms: Any Awareness Excellency

The Solar's supernal senses expand and his mind speeds up to process a thousand myriad details in a split second. Opponents attempting to strike a Lawgiver using this Charm appear to be moving in slow motion. All of the character's attacks are enhanced as though he had just spent three ticks accumulating dice with an Aim action (as a result, the character may not normally benefit from a true Aim action while this Charm is active), and his DVs are raised by 1 against all physical attacks of which he is aware. None of these bonuses count as dice added by a Charm.

With Essence 3+, each tick the lawgiver spends Aiming while Panoptic Fusion Discipline is active converts one die provided by this Charm into an automatic success; his opponents seem to slow even more, until their anticipated actions are outlined in golden contrails before the eyes of the Lawgiver.
-How are you dealing with Excellencies? Both as charm prereqs and combat/social enhancers?
You're likely to find out next update what they think is happening lol
Obviously Gai taught her to open the Gates too. Duh.:p
Didn't everyone just see Lee open five Gates in a flare of visible chakra? Isn't the third Gate literally called the Heal Gate?
The only person who might tell different is Kakashi with his Sharingan. And maybe Neji.
 
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Someone should have put a notice in the old thread.
I just stumbled across this.
*bookmarks*
I did :V Glad to have you back though! I loved your contributions to the previous thread.
Yeah, I have a question.
-How come Tenten doesn't have Panopticon Fusion Discipline despite favoring Perception?

-How are you dealing with Excellencies? Both as charm prereqs and combat/social enhancers?
Because PFD is a 4-dot Charm, and because of the way I changed how Tenten unlock Charms, she can't have 4-dot Charms yet. As for Excellencies, she's assumed to have all of them by default.
 
I did :V Glad to have you back though! I loved your contributions to the previous thread.
Glad to have this back.
Because PFD is a 4-dot Charm, and because of the way I changed how Tenten unlock Charms, she can't have 4-dot Charms yet. As for Excellencies, she's assumed to have all of them by default.
Ah. Thanks.

One last question:
How does she acquire new Charms?
Do we acquire them automatically when we unlock the appropriate stat level or does she pay for them separately?
 
Helping Hand
[x] Go over an make sure she's okay - She may be a complete bitch, and the sister of that monster that tried to murder Lee, but you're better than her. And you want her to know you're better than her.
You sigh and step off the girl's chest, no matter how much of a bitch she might be. You want to at least make sure she's okay, especially now that adrenaline is slowly washing out of your system. You let out a deep breath and extend your hand to help her up, what was her name again? Tem-something...Temari...Temari that was it. As you stand over her she let's out another wracking cough, and a few more blood flecks join the expanding red splotches on her shirt. Her pale face is contorted in pain, the cough not doing her any favors. Especially since you're pretty sure you broke her rib...why did you come over here again? You nudge her leg and her eyes snap open.

"Hey." Her face contorts into a scowl and you only return it with a smile, "That was a good match." She opens her mouth to say something, but evidently the broken rib gets in the way of whatever she was trying to say. Knowing her, it was probably something biting. Once the the wince of pain subsides, she simply stares at your hand, and you are forced to repress a roll of your eyes. "Come on, I don't bite."

Hesitantly she lifts her arm up for you to grab, which you do. You feel her tense in your hand just before you yank her upwards. She's lighter than you would have expected, and you're able to get her up on her feet with only a hiss of pain on her part...or well at least until her feet almost collapse out from under her, forcing you to shoulder most of her weight. Eventually, she does manage to get her feet under her, even if she's still leaning on you as you walk her over to the medical-nins that just arrived.

"Your team..." she finally rasps out, "is total bullshit."

"You were really good as well," you say grudgingly as you try to suppress a pride-filled smirk, "I guess we all just don't know when to give up" Now though, you're reminded of Lee's match with her brother, and you feel something inside you harden as you hand her over to the medical-nins. Temari wobbles slightly when you let go of her, but manages to stay on her feet. "Her rib is broken, and she's lost a fair bit of blood from multiple lacerations" you rattle off to the medic on the right, who just nods as the two lead the blonde girl off. She spares you one last look, with an unreadable expression on her face.

You spare yourself a smile, that went better than you had expected. You doubt she'd of extended you the same courtesy if the positions were switched, but then that was basically why you did it. That and you did genuinely want to make sure she was okay and be a good sport. This was a diplomatic event after all. You stifle a yawn, the first hints of lethargy starting to creep into your limbs now that the adrenaline from the fight is staring to fade away. Then the rest of the exhaustion slams down on you, the fight must have taken a lot of you, you haven't felt this tired since-...the next thing you see if the floor rising up to meet you.

You aren't around to see it, but you were snoring before you hit the floor.

When your eyes flutter open the first thing you notice is the soft beams of late afternoon light stretching through a window to your right. The second thing you notice are those very particular type of scratchy, uncomfortable sheets that every shinobi in Konoha eventually has seared into their minds. Scratchy sheets that mean you can only be one place. Hospital You lever yourself up onto your elbows to look around the hospital room you're currently situated in and scowl. Last thing you remember was giving Temari over to the medical-nins and then...everything is kinda fuzzy.

"Oh good, you're awake." You glance over to see a unfamiliar Konoha shinobi standing in the doorway, looking you up and down. The subtle markings and the white labcoat hung over his vest mark him as a medical-nin.

"What happened?" You groan, rubbing your head, "I remember finishing the fight, and helping my opponent but then..." you trail off.

"You passed out from acute physical exhaustion," He idly glances at the clipboard in his hand as he continues, "You're presently in the on-site medical wing we use to treat the injuries for the preliminaries, though now that you're awake you should be free to go after you answer a few questions."

You quirk an eyebrow, "Questions?"

He nods, "Yes, most of them could be answered by looking at your background records, but the higher-ups want a personal interview as well," He flips through the papers on his clipboard, and you idly notice another shinobi standing outside your door, "Now, firstly, have you been trained by your Jounin-Sensei in how to open the Eight Gates?"

"No." That's all you say, that's all you really can say. You had wanted to learn, but Gai-sensei had determined very early on that your stamina reserves weren't anywhere close to being able to handle the immense strain the opening he Gates place on the body.

The medical-nin just makes a note on his clipboard, "Then, did you notice any sudden physical changes during your match?"

You shake your head, "No I-..." You mentally run over your memories of the fight, for a time when you noticed something like that or...anything amiss "No."

"Mmm." the medical-nin just makes a noncommittal noise as he marks something down on the clipboard, "That's not uncommon. Now, finally are you aware of any previous blood-line limit in your family history?"

What.

"No I-what.?! No, I'm an orphan I don't-" The shock of just hearing the words 'blood-line limit' being spoken in conjunction with you throw you for a loop, "No, I don't know who my parents were or have any knowledge of what my extended family might look like" you finally manage to spit out.

"Well, we have already collected blood and chakra samples, but the tests will likely take several days to complete so we will know definitively then" He tucks the clipboard underneath his arm, "However, I would say it's likely that you have experienced a catalyzed blood-line limit activation due to acute physical stress. Once the tests are complete the results will be given to you and your Jounin-Sensei. Preliminary tests show you should be fine, but if anything changes please inform your Jounin-Sensei and consult the Medical Corps."

The man then bids you goodbye, and leaves you alone in the small recovery room with your thoughts.

You wrack your brain as you go over the entire fight again with palpable disbelief. First, you were getting your ass kicked, then Temari broke your spine and you almost passed out, then she threw you on top of a pile of knives, you glanced her with one of them, then she threw you into the wall. You almost gave up there, but you kept going, got up and then you beat her. Where...wait.

Wait.

Your spine was broken and you got up. How.

Spine's don't just heal themselves. You know enough medicine to know that. You also know enough about medical ninjutsu to know that something like that is theoretically possible with some medical jutsu. But you are painfully aware you can't do any medical ninjutsu, certainly not one that would let you fix a broken spine without a conscious thought.

A blood-line limit though? From what you remember of your medical-nin studies, those were oftentimes very esoteric. So who knows what could have happened if that was actually the case.

The only thing you can conclude is that something happened to you in the middle of that fight there, when you got thrown into the wall. Unfortunately, that is the only thing you can conclude because at that moment the door to your room explodes inward. You almost jump out of your skin as you try to get into something resembling a fighting stance and shards of wood scatter around you. Your exhaustion-adled mind sluggishly trying to piece together wha's- "My Youthful Pupil! I came as soon as I heard!"

oh

oh no

The bane of eardrums, doors, and fashion sense all throughout Konoha is currently standing where your door used to be, gleaming smile proudly displayed on his face and stuck in a pose you know to roughly mean I am overcome with pride for my students. You can already feel the exasperated smile creeping onto your face. "Hi Gai-sensei."

"Congratulations Tenten!" His booming voice softens to something approaching a normal tone, "I hear you won you preliminary match, just as I knew you would!" He gives you another beaming smile when you nod. "I even heard from my eternal rival it was quite a spectacle!"

You rub the back of your head, "I guess, though...something odd happened." When he cocks his head, and you continue, filling him in on the events of the the battle and what you think happened. "So...I'm pretty sure something happened when I slammed into the wall...but-" you stop short as your mentor envelopes you in a bone-crushing hug.

"Tenten. It sounds like to me that you finally managed to surpass your limits! To find the true spirit of youth locked with you!" He says with streams of tears running down his face. You feel your ribs shift uneasily

"Gai-Sensei! You gasp out, "Can't...breath..."

He sheepishly releases you, and you gasp for air, before you finally ask the question you really wanted to ask. Above and beyond all your swirling thoughts about your fight. "So Gai-sensei, so how is Lee doing?"

The question leaves your teacher more subdued than you've ever seen him. "The medical-nins had to perform emergency surgery, and they managed to save all of his limbs, but the damage is very extensive. He's currently sedated while they run more diagnostics."

"But Lee is strong! I'm sure he won't let something like this defeat him. As long as we support him!" Gai-sensei gives you one of his trademark thumbs-up and smiles, but you get the sense he's trying to convince himself just as much as he is you.

"Now Tenten!" Gai-sensei snaps you out of worrying over Lee, "You have been cleared to be discharged, and the medical-nins informed me of your new abilities. So I expect your Youthful display to only blossom further in the finals! I will of course support you in every way I can! Or I shall do 10,000 laps around the village!"

"Thanks Gai-sensei, I knew whatever else, I can always count on you" and you mean it, despite the eccentricies, there's no one you trust more to have your back then your Jounin-sensei. He gives you a much more genuine seeming thumbs up.

Then he jumps out the window.

As you pinch the bridge of your nose, you wonder what you should do now.

[ ] Go visit Lee. He's probably asleep, but you want to see him regardless.
[ ] Hey, maybe Temari is here. You could annoy her again if you wanted to.
[ ] Try and find Neji, you really need to talk to him about what happened during his match
[ ] No, you're just going to head home. Even after passing out, you still feel exhausted, and you need time to process...everything (this will skip to tomorrow as Tenten will immediately fall asleep when she gets home)

Alright so that update is done, and you got your first taste of the stamina cost of going fully Totemic (it's pretty heavy). For reference and as a rough rule of thumb, expect to be able to be fully Totemic for a number of fight scenes equal to 1/3rd your stamina dots, Bonfire for a number of fight scenes equal to your stamina dots and have your caste mark up for a number of fight scenes equal to three times your stamina dots.

Also if anyone wants to become a beta reader for this quest, I'm open to that, I've never actually worked with a beta editor before though, so mainly you'd be someone to bounce update ideas off of and help me check my writing to make sure I don't just skip random words all the time.
 
Well Lee is probably asleep, but Neji is probably worth checking out soo...

[x] Try and find Neji, you really need to talk to him about what happened during his match
 
I think it's probably a better idea to deal with Neji when Tenten is properly rested, and she's definitely too tired to bother with Temari any more today. If Lee is asleep, that just means it won't be a long visit and she can get home to finish recovering sooner, but if he is awake he's likely to appreciate having her show up even for just a few minutes. And of course, if something's going on otherwise, he's the one who's most vulnerable at the moment...

[X] Go visit Lee. He's probably asleep, but you want to see him regardless.
 
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[x] Try and find Neji, you really need to talk to him about what happened during his match
-[x] Loosing control of yourself like that, in front of other villages, bad form Nej.
 
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