The Unicorn said:
I would have expected the young men to have joined the militia long before the aliens invaded. Of course they'd still be extremely inexperienced but they'd have been volunteers (at least technically, although I would expect at least some of them only volunteered because everyone expected them to do so).
They're trying to rebuild their society. While the kids
do get lessons on target shooting from both the militia and (usually) their parents, the main priority for them is education and work. Even a kid can use a welder and slatp together a ramshackle neo-steel (they have
a lot of extra neo-steel) building with enough training.
The colonists line of thought is to use the neo-steel for the first wave of structures, then once the industry really gets started, to use much cheaper materials. It's worth noting that when they left the Koprulu sector, they filled
every bit of cargo space with anything useful.
The Unicorn said:
That doesn't seem like the reaction of a trained and experienced soldier.
Mainly because he thought he'd left behind the life of a soldier. With the new colony, many of the colonists allowed themselves to relax, opening up their emotions for the first time in decades. The fact that they've been caught up in war
yet again is hitting them
hard.
The Unicorn said:
No. Shots do not deliver enough momentum to knock a statue down (effectively what the dead power armor was). It should have either started to fall over before getting hit or remain standing.
This, alas, falls under Rule of Cool.
His armor could have rebooted just as he was shot, and thus his lack of balance knocked it over; or perhaps I'm
way too lazy to do the force calculations to see if the armor would
actually be knocked over. There's a few odd explanations, but the final reason is that it looks better.
It's not getting changed.
The Unicorn said:
If that's what he thinks how did he end at the rear?
Because he's out of practice, and spent too much time worrying about the strategic situation rather than about his personal location. Back during any one of the
numerous wars that the Terrans have gone through, he would have done both effortlessly.
The Unicorn said:
A single shot should be enough to make a body "practically explode" you should not draw attention to that, unless you wanted to rewrite all the descriptions of Turians being shot to have their bodies explode or draw attention to the fact they should have.
Again, Rule of Cool.
Would you rather read about how every death results in a person falling down with spikes sticking out of him, or have some of them explode in a bloody mist? Adds a little variety to the mix.
The Unicorn said:
External dog tags on power armor seem odd. they should be inside the power armor, or part of the armor (or more likely both)
The dog tags are around the neck. That's way Raynor lifted their visors, so that he can take the tags
.
The Unicorn said:
More accurately he wasn't in charge. Seems abundantly clear he's back in charge now. Is he the can't of character who'd try and pretend he wasn't in charge?
Yup.
Let's look at Raynor's record here, from a personal standpoint. Just to keep it short, we'll limit it to the games, otherwise I might as well just quote Raynor's wiki entry.
Raynor takes care of Mara Sara colonists, only for the Zerg to attack. He fights off the Zerg, but the Confederates punish him in response. To save as as many people as possible, he throws his group in with Mengsk's Sons of Korhal. Despite a good start at Antiga, Mengsk soon proves to be just as bad as the Confederates.
Raynor's trust in authority is gone, and he doubts that he can be any better.
Then he loses Kerrigan, and the guilt that he was unable to save her is the new focal point for his character (until the end of WoL, that is). He leaves Mengsk, and joins up with Tassadar, and then meets Artanis (in his role as Starcraft's Executor) and Fenix.
By the end of the First Great War, he's lost his world, his lover, and most of his friends. Tassadar gives his life to defeat the Overmind, his former love Kerrigan kills his new best friend Fenix, and he's all that's left.
For brevity's sake, I'll stay out of WoL.
Every time he's in command,
bad shit happens.
It's not a surprise that Raynor would rather do menial labor as both Marshal and as a general laborer, then spend his nights in the bar. He doesn't like being in command.
Starcraft Wiki said:
Jim Raynor was a most decent and honorable man. I suppose that's why his is the greatest tragedy in this godforsaken war.
deathzealotzero said:
Some good updates Xeno, though I could sworn the Mar Sara Militia had Blue and white Armor like many of the Confederate Militia. Don't remember where I heard that particular bit from but as far as I know the Mar Sarans had Blue Armor as mentioned a few times in Liberty's Crusade which ends up as the color of choice for the Raiders later on thanks to that. Now Raynor on the other hand always sported his black armor with white skull on faceplate since his little midget buddy from the Guilds War personally built it for him several years before.
Also yes the Dog Tags are inside the helmet itself for I remember a certain Cut Scene from SCII right Raynor did the same with another of his Raiders during the Battle of Char.
That cutscene (Fire and Fury, for those curious) is what I'm basing that color off.
Mar Sara was re-colonized, but I think that the black coloration of their armor is in response to the original loss of their world. The two Marines we see from Mar Sara wear black, so it's an easy assumption to make.
deathzealotzero said:
Hmmm... Also I agree with Unicorn there are a few places that are missing words like this:
Fixed.
Huh... I could have
sworn that I noticed and fixed that error whilst editing. Oh well, fixed now.
Thanks for noticing, those small bits help me out a lot.