Don't get me wrong this is still a master piece, but could it be that you've been relying on your older material too much? The first chapter showed such promise with its non-linear narrative and the surprising segue into a completely different viewpoint, but here it's mostly material we've seen before, if masterfully executed. I can't help but notice that there are quite a few similarities between this and an older story of yours that caused quite a stir back in the day. I think I even defended you against motions to permaban you for that one.
wow rood. i wrked rly hard on this too. i did naht reus old story. dis is as good as th frst on too. dnt liek don read ok.
 
I can't believe you've done this.
To be fair, you have to have a very high IQ to understand Taylor of Wakanda. The humour is extremely subtle, and without a solid grasp of entomology most of the jokes will go over a typical reader's head. There's also Taylor's nihilistic outlook, which is deftly woven into her characterisation- her personal philosophy draws heavily from Organic Work literature, for instance. The fans understand this stuff; they have the intellectual capacity to truly appreciate the depths of these jokes, to realise that they're not just funny- they say something deep about LIFE. As a consequence people who dislike Taylor of Wakanda truly ARE idiots- of course they wouldn't appreciate, for instance, the humour in Taylor's existential catchphrase "I only have insect-related superpowers," which itself is a cryptic reference to Prus's Polish epic The Doll. I'm smirking right now just imagining one of those addlepated simpletons scratching their heads in confusion as Private Lee O'Malley's genius wit unfolds itself on their computer screens. What fools.. how I pity them. :cry:

And yes, by the way, i DO have a Taylor of Wakanda tattoo. And no, you cannot see it. It's for the boys' eyes only- and even then they have to demonstrate that they're within 5 IQ points of my own (preferably lower) beforehand. Nothin personnel kid :cool:
 
... I'm still genuinely mad that the first resembling popular BP fanfiction on this site is a trollfic.
 
Personally, if I were to write a Black Panter/Worm cross- which I don't plan on doing, as I haven't even watched Black Panther- I'd have Taylor get punched through time and space by Khonsu or something and end up getting 'caught' by a Wakandan experiment of some sort, and then having her interactions with the Wakandans be her stepping off point into the broader Marvel Cinematic Universe.

But like I said, I'm not planning to write anything like that.

I haven't even watched Black Panther.

*sips tea root beer*
 
...I literally have no idea what I just read. I started reading it...and yet I got lost somewhere along the way :)

...Summary please? I think I got a headache

You might want to drop the Bee movie crossover. I had high hopes when I saw Wakanda and then the LOOOOOOOOOOOONG trainwreck happened. Like the above poster I had zero idea what I read and if its the Bee movie mixed up with Wakanda please say so, I'd like to just get off the ride now.
 
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You're blowing my mind here Lee. I've never read the characters portrayed like this and it's a wonderful new direction to see in the worm fan-fiction community.
 
Gotta admit, once you started that life of a honey bee shot, I scrolled down to see where it ended. It didnt.
 
thank god, i thought this was going to be a serious fanfiction at first.
is it strange how relieved i am that this is a trollfic?
 
...Let us not go to SufficientVelocity User Fiction. 'Tis a silly place.

Back to marathoning Game Grumps!

Hopefully, in the time between, sanity shall reconstitute itself and the Bees shall suffer the Scouring.
 
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