Taylor Made Venom(Worm/Spider-man)

Ya know its one thing to have one Venom, its another to have a flock of them appearing.
Too many Venom's spoil the story. And I get the feeling that NW was about to coverup a death.
I'd be surprised if ANYTHING happened to Victoria.
 
Well glory girl done goofed, she soured relationships with the only cape of the bay who can heal and is not a nazi.
 
Enjoyable story despite the truly staggering amount of missing words, homonyms, grammar mistakes, misspellings, tense issues and miscellaneous stuff.

I especially like how you write Venom/ the other. Alien and horrific yet relatable and likeable. Not really a fan of Amy being the one random on screen casualty, but that's really minor and I found the rest of the narrative much better. Looking forward to using investigative journalism against the trio. That's always nice.

Usually, this is the part where I start quoting and correcting the various mistakes, but there's just too many. At this point I can only recommend reading through the chapters again and correcting what you see. Even a casual read through should much improve the overall quality.
 
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I want more please. This is an amazing story. I hope Venom or Panacea eventually heals Taylor from all her scars.
 
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