Synthesis (Steven Universe AU)

Hrm.... How about delaying Garnet's reaction a bit? Say that Steven gets sent to get Greg first & Amethyst tags along to avoid the awkward, but Garnet manages to hold it together long enough that they unfuse when Steven gets back or something?

Well, the big issue with that is it would cut a huge chunk out of this chapter to be added onto the next one, or I would have to bring in the first part of the next chapter, which is much less polished. I like the way you're thinking though, I'll look into the order of events more to see if I can make what i have flow better.

I like how Greg had an escape plan all ready to go.

Yeah, he's been worried about Homeworld attacks since Peridot showed up, but this is a backup plan since his original "get in the van and drive like hell" plan got shut down before it could begin.
 
Soooo... how easy would it be to mistake the Rose Quartzes for Steven's mom? that's to say, how simmilar are their appareances to hers?
 
Soooo... how easy would it be to mistake the Rose Quartzes for Steven's mom? that's to say, how simmilar are their appareances to hers?

Well, we only saw one that was close enough to be mistaken, and she had more pink in her skin and a few other minor differences. However, in the right lighting she would be a very convincing doppelganger. Which could lead to shenanigans, but I'm kind of burnt out on the whole "basing major plot points on miscommunication" thing ever since The Cluster, so if she gets mistaken it won't do anything major like blow open the story at an inconvenient time or some other cliche plot like that.
 
Confrontation 7.2
[Rose's Fountain, Pink Diamond's Perspective]

The garden around The Fountain had seen better days. As Pink stepped off the warp pad, she felt her heart sink as she faced yet another memory of her past. However, it wasn't the overgrown plants, the upset rocks, or the other dozen minor maintenance issues that drew her eyes, but the snow. Despite the season, the whole garden was covered in low snow clouds, centered on the fountain itself. Passing through the star-shaped entry hole, she saw Sapphire curled up and crying on the edge of the fountain, the surface frozen solid and the statue of her… of Rose Quartz, frozen solid.

She didn't try to hide her approach, even if Sapphire didn't know she was coming surprising her wouldn't be the best way to handle this situation. As she got close to the fountain, Sapphire raised her head for a moment before looking away.

"Why are you here?" The small blue gem asked. "Haven't you done enough?"

Pink sighed as she sat down nearby. "No," she answered, causing Sapphire to look up at her in shock. "I've left a trail of broken gems behind me, and until I make up for what I did, it'll never be enough."

Sapphire seemed taken aback by that statement, but Pink wasn't done. "I know I messed up Sapphire, I messed up more than you can imagine, but I'm trying to make it better. I don't expect things to go back to how they were, I don't even expect you to like me as a person, but I don't want to be your enemy."

Sapphire said nothing to her, drawing herself inward and suppressing her emotions as she stared at Pink. The two gems sat together in silence for a few moments until Sapphire growled in frustration.

"I can't see what you're going to do." She admitted. "I just… Garnet is flexible enough to at least come up with something, but by myself I'm..." She stood up, doing her best to stare down Pink despite her diminutive size. "No, I'm not doing this, I'm not going to just pretend everything is normal. I'm going to go find Ruby, and we're going to make Garnet again, and…" She trailed off as her movement halted, the brief flicker of total stillness that was the sign of a Sapphire looking into the future.

"Ruby… no, I didn't mean…" her voice trailed off as tears came to her eyes.

Pink stood next to her, torn between wanting to comfort one of her oldest friends and the knowledge that Sapphire wanted nothing to do with her. "You hurt her, and now you'd give anything to undo it." She said, causing Sapphire to whirl around at her, but her anger died on her lips as she saw the look on Pinks face. "Believe me, I understand more than anyone else what that feels like."

"Don't, just don't try to compare us." Sapphire told her. "I'm not happy with you, but right now I need to go find Ruby, I need to apologize to her." She said, turning and dashing out of the fountain before Pink could respond.

It won't be that easy, it never is. Pink thought as she turned to follow.


[Steven's Perspective]

As the two Universe men walked down the boardwalk, neither of them was in a talkative mood. Both of them were still processing the revelation, and both were dreading the coming meeting, although for different reasons. Steven was afraid of a repeat of their earlier meeting, while Greg was faced with the woman he loved coming back from the dead. Thankfully, the awkward silence was interrupted by Stevens phone.

"Who… Connie! Connie something really big happened and…"

"Steven, I can't get to Beach City."

"What!? Why?"

"My mom drove me, but we ran into a roadblock run by gems that look like your mom! She won't let me try to get in on foot, so now we're at a pullout up in the hills and I'm watching the town with my binoculars."

"Alright, I'll see what I can do… Wait, can't you ride in on Lion?" Steven asked.

"I don't know if my mom will be very happy about that." Connie whispered into the phone. "But if you send him here I'll do it."

"What? He's not with me, I thought he was with you!"

"... Well that plan's not going to work." Connie sighed. "Listen, Steven, I want to help, but right now there's no way my mom is going to let me go into Beach City, not if it means fighting an actual invading army!"

"They aren't invading, I'll explain everything in a while, but no one will be fighting anyone. And if you just wait a second I'll see about getting you into town."

"Steven, if there's no fighting, then do you even need me? I'm not a negotiator like you are, I'm not sure how much use I'll be here."

Steven looked over at the beach, where a cluster of Rose Quartz gems were standing guard, and up at his dad who had frozen in place at the sight of them. "Connie, I could really use some support right now."

"... Alright, I'll try to convince my mom to wait here for a while, but she's kind of freaking out about this."

"Yeah, she's not the only one." Steven said, hanging up.

"Dad," he shook Greg's arm, snapping him out of his freakout. "Mom told you that Rose Quartzes are a type of gem, right?"

"Y...Yeah, it's just, before today, I never really understood what that meant." Greg said before holding Stevens hand. "But I'll manage, let's go see your mom!" He said, forcing a smile onto his face.

The two of them made their way down the beach, and outside of an incident where one Greg saw a Rose Quartz that looked like a pinker version of Steven's mom and nearly freaked out they made it to the beach house without any problems. Walking in through the door, they saw Pearl cleaning the kitchen, her movements clean and methodical even as her eyes stared off into space.

The door slamming shut snapped her out of her trance. "Steven! ...Greg! You're here, good. Pink just went with Sapphire to get Ruby out of her room, they'll be back any minute now!" She said, fake cheer plastered all over her face.

"Who's Pink?" Greg asked, and Pearl's face fell as she turned to Steven.

"You didn't… No, of course you didn't, she should tell him herself."

"Tell me what?" Greg asked, getting more frustrated by the minute.

"Mom will explain everything, but it's a bit of a mess." Steven said.

"Yes, it is." Pearl agreed. The trio settled into an uncomfortable silence for several minutes before the temple door slid open, and the source of that awkwardness walked into the room.

"Ruby isn't happy with Sapphire, I think they'll get over it but I don't know if we should expect Garnet anytime… soon…" She trailed off as she saw Greg and Steven standing in the room. For a moment, no one spoke, until finally Steven gave his dad a small nudge forward.

"Hey Rose, long time no see." He said, and Pink felt tears fill her eyes as she rushed forward and swept him and Pearl up in a massive hug.

"I'm so sorry, if I'd known about The Cluster I would have dealt with it before I left you, and I should have told everyone everything, and I hurt you all so much!" She cried, pulling them tight.

"Rose… need… air." Greg got out through the immense pressure on his body. Immediately she let go of him, and as he staggered she gently gripped his hand.

"I'm sorry, I wasn't thinking! Are you hurt? I'll heal you just in case." She said before leaning down, pressing her lips to his forehead as her tears flowed freely onto his scalp, filling his whole body with a light pink glow for a moment before it subsided.

As she pulled back, Steven caught her eyes and gave a "go on" gesture with his hands. He's right, this needs to be dealt with as quickly as possible.

"Greg, there's something I need to tell you." She said, holding his hands and kneeling down to be on eye level with him. "I'm not actually a Rose Quartz."

"What?"

"Well, you remember how I explained that there are different types of gem, and Rose Quartz is just one type?"

"Even if I didn't I would have figured it out from the beach full of gems who look like you outside." Greg answered. "But what type of gem are you then?"

She sighed, bracing herself for the reveal. "Pink Diamond. I'm a Pink Diamond, and technically I'm only the second one ever." She said, and to emphasize her point she shifted her form, returning to her new "default".

"... Wow, I mean I figured the Diamonds were a big deal, but only two ever?"

"Yes, and I didn't want to be a big deal. I was in charge of the Homeworld gems when they came to Earth the first time to colonize it, but when I went to tour Earth I realized what was going to be lost, and I tried to stop it peacefully. Then the other Diamonds refused to let me cancel the colony, so I disguised myself as a Rose Quartz to fight them." After making them off of an Amethyst template with some of my own powers mixed in. "Which is how I'm here now. The other Diamonds made some… modifications to my gem, so when I… gave up my gem to Steven, a copy of my memories was put in a copy of my gem, and there I was. A copy of a dead Diamond, stuck with all of her memories and regrets." She hung her head, not even willing to look Greg in the eyes.

After a few moments of silence, she was stunned when Greg kneeled down to look her in the eyes again. "Rose…" He started.

"Please don't call me that, if the gems I brought with me hear you call me Rose they might figure out that we're the same gem. Call me Pink Diamond."

Greg blinked as he processed her request. "Fine… Pink. I'm not going to lie to you, this is some really heavy stuff and I'm not sure how qualified I am for it, but I want you to know that no matter what name you call yourself, you're still the same woman I fell in love with all those years ago."

"But I'm not, I'm just a copy of her memories in a copy of her gem, I'm not her."

"R… Pink, you wouldn't be here if you actually believed that. If you actually thought you weren't the same person, you wouldn't have hugged me like that, or given me a kiss when you healed me."

Not for the first time, Pink was impressed by how easily Greg could make everything she worried about seem less important, and he took her silence as a sign to continue.

"Now, I'm feeling a lot of things right now, I'm going to need to take a minute in the bathroom to calm down, and we need to sit down and have a talk without anyone listening in." He glanced meaningfully at Steven, who looked indignant. "Sorry Schtu-Ball, I know you like to get involved in stuff like this, but me and your mom are going to need some privacy for this, alright?"

Steven nodded, and Greg turned back to Pink. "My point is, I'm happy you're back, I really am, but this is a lot to take in. I'll be back in a few minutes." He said, standing up and entering the bathroom.

Steven gave her a reassuring smile. "Don't worry, he did the same thing when Jasper and Peridot nearly abducted me."

Pink blinked and stared at him. "They what?"

"Oh, yeah I guess you wouldn't know. Don't be mad at Peridot, she's gotten a lot better since then! She's living out with Lapis at a barn in the countryside!"

"Oh… alright. But what about this Jasper? What happened to her?"

"She… she kept calling me Rose and trying to fight me, and then when we kept beating her she tried to fuse with a corrupted gem." Steven admitted, tears in his eyes. "I tried to help her, but she refused because she thought I was you and she hated you for shattering Pink Diamond, but you are Pink Diamond so she spent thousands of years hating you for no good reason and...!"

"Steven." Pink grabbed his shoulders and looked him in the eye. "I'm sorry. I never wanted you to deal with my mistakes, and if the other Diamonds hadn't built that machine you would have spent years trying to clean up my messes. But right now, those aren't your problem anymore, alright? From now on, I'll handle my mistakes myself."

Steven looked at her through tear soaked eyes, and after a brief moment of hesitation grabbed her for a hug. As the two embraced, she heard him whisper to her. "You're really back, you're really here."

Smiling, she pulled him in tight. In a few minutes she would have to check in with her personal guard, and then she would have to stand down all the gems who came rushing over to Earth to help extract The Cluster, and figure out a cover story for what happened here, but right now, she was enjoying her first hug with her son.


Authors Note:

Not much to say about this one, didn't have any major drama writing it, didn't have to rewrite everything, it was a pretty simple chapter. Of course that could be a sign I missed something big, so if I did give me a heads up.
 
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Yeah, we jumped the rails between the stations of canon a while ago.
Certainly, but corrupted Jasper puts us at least post-Earthlings, and Steven bubbled Bismuth earlier in that season. As awkward as Bismuth's wedding invite was in the OT, having RQ/PD around will be extra awkward.

I'm not sure if I missed any details, but so far as I can tell, the story is set somewhere between the beginning of Season 4 and Raising the Barn in Season 5, and, more probably, before Season 4's Are You My Dad?, since Aquamarine bringing Steven to Homeworld would go a bit different. Though, I probably missed it if you've nailed it down further in non-threadmarked posts.

Edit: On further reflection, probably before Steven's Dream, as well, since Blue probably wouldn't be visiting Pink's Palanquin in this TL.
 
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Certainly, but corrupted Jasper puts us at least post-Earthlings, and Steven bubbled Bismuth earlier in that season. As awkward as Bismuth's wedding invite was in the OT, having RQ/PD around will be extra awkward.

I'm not sure if I missed any details, but so far as I can tell, the story is set somewhere between the beginning of Season 4 and Raising the Barn in Season 5, and, more probably, before Season 4's Are You My Dad?, since Aquamarine bringing Steven to Homeworld would go a bit different. Though, I probably missed it if you've nailed it down further in non-threadmarked posts.

Edit: On further reflection, probably before Steven's Dream, as well, since Blue probably wouldn't be visiting Pink's Palanquin in this TL.

Got it in the edit, we intersected canon at approximately the start of the Zoo arc in Season 4, with Steven dreaming through Pinks eyes instead of Blues.
 
So how you handling the latest SUF episodes regarding some new backstory we got for Pink?
 
So how you handling the latest SUF episodes regarding some new backstory we got for Pink?

I'm assuming you mean "Volleyball" and not whatever episode is airing today.

Here's what I said about the whole thing over on SB:

I need to re-read what I've got to see if any of it contradicts the canon that Pink caused the crack, but honestly I'm liking the analysis of what happened I saw somewhere else:

Pink spends a lot of time around other Diamonds who can shrug off her strength like it's nothing
Pink cracks Volleyball not knowing her own strength
Volleyball gets taken away
Pink realizes that it's all her fault and works to keep her anger under control

And that's how we get to a situation where by the time she gets CG!Pearl she doesn't throw tantrums and CG!Pearl sees her as a healer who keeps her feelings secret, because she's so afraid of what happened the last time she lashed out she represses her feelings.

Basically it's one more regret for Pink to deal with, one more reminder of how she hurt people without planning to.
 
I'm assuming you mean "Volleyball" and not whatever episode is airing today.

Here's what I said about the whole thing over on SB:



Basically it's one more regret for Pink to deal with, one more reminder of how she hurt people without planning to.
I still can't get over them nicknaming her
Volleyball
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Confrontation 7.3
Chapter 7: Confrontation
Part 3


[Beach House, Pink Diamonds Perspective]

Pink had wanted nothing more than to stay in the house for hours and talk to her friends and family, but like always, her dreams ran into reality. First, even though everyone (except Sapphire and Ruby) was outwardly happy that she was back, she could tell that there were a lot of feelings under the happy masks, and there was the minor issue of the horde of gems that she had brought with her. Before she could deal with that though, she had to ask the people she'd betrayed and abandoned to lie for her.

"So, I can't let anyone know you're my mom?" Steven asked as she finished explaining.

"Yes, as far as anyone outside this room is concerned, your gem is a Rose Quartz gem and I'm only interested in you because you're a hybrid. I know it's not the best solution, and I'm sorry that we can't be family in public, but I have to keep the rest of Homeworld from finding out about you."

Steven blinked, confusion on his face. "But… if they have proof that organics and gems can live together, then won't that get them to stop killing planets?"

Maybe, but even if they do, everything else about Homeworld will still be there, and with an infinite supply of new hybrids… Pink shuddered at the thought. She knew that the same would occur if her experiments with growing new gems without killing a planet worked out, and she understood that the only way her dreams could become reality was if the other Diamonds were no longer in a position to abuse what she planned to make, but that was an issue for the future.

"Well Steven, as long as you're 'only' a Rose Quartz/Human hybrid, the other Diamonds won't care that much about you, but if they found out you're actually another Diamond… if White found out she…" All of her warnings caught in her throat as the image of Steven bleached white from head to toe, posing with his arms stretched wide and mocking her in Whites voice. "They can't learn the truth" she forced through her tears as she pulled him in and held him with both arms.

"I understand." He said.

"Thank you." She kissed the top of his head and pushed him back. "I know this is a lot, but I'll do my best to not interfere with you. I've already got a few ideas for how I'll be able to pardon the Crystal Gems for the rebellion, and while it would look bad if I left you on Earth and didn't even leave some researchers behind I'll make sure they don't interfere with your life to much and if any of them cause problems I'll leave a way for you to call me, and I'll visit whenever I can, and…"

"Rose, Rose it's ok, we still have time to plan, you aren't leaving for a while, we don't have to have a plan right now." Greg was there, holding her shoulder and trying to calm her down.

"That's right." Came Pearls voice from her other shoulder. "We still have plenty of time to figure out how to keep the other Diamonds from getting involved, right now we should focus on the horde of Quartzes occupying Beach City. Once that's dealt with, then we can have a proper planning session."

Pink blinked, tears in her eyes, as she felt her two closest companions reassure her. After a few moments, she nodded and stood up. "You're right, you're right. I just… got a little carried away. It's been a pretty rough few months. I'll go tell the gems I brought with me to stand down, everyone just stay here until I get back, alright? Right now they still think of you as rebels, and I need to think of an excuse to get them to leave you alone."

With a wave of acknowledgements, Pink turned and walked towards the exit. Stepping out onto the balcony, she first called up her court investigator.

"Good news Iolite, The Cluster has been dealt with."

"..."

"Iolite, are you there?"

"My apologies My Diamond, I just… the rebels neutralized The Cluster themselves? I was unaware that heavy mining equipment was abandoned on Earth."

"Yes, they did, and they actually used some drills scavenged from the old kindergarten." Pink could nearly hear Iolites jaw hitting the floor. She's a smart gem, but a bit to by-the-book for something like that to occur to her. "Anyways, apparently The Cluster is smart enough to communicate and understand that forming would destroy the Earth, and since it was mainly made of former Crystal Gems that's how they dealt with it."

"My apologies My Diamond, but this whole situation seems… bizarre."

"Don't apologize, I'll never punish you for asking questions." Pink replied.

"... Yes My Diamond." Iolite responded. "Shall I call off the excavation teams? There is always the risk that extracting The Cluster could cause more damage to the planet than leaving it inside."

"Well, we don't know what will cause the most damage, so I want you and Fire Opal 6C3 to come down here and examine The Cluster so we know what to do."

"You want us to work with the rebels." She said, her voice flat. "Is that wise? I was under the impression that all except your Pearl were unaware of the truth behind the rebellion and would not take the revelation well."

Pink frowned. I already explained that they are willing to do just about anything to defend the Earth, why is she surprised by this? Is she just making sure or is she trying to subtly ask if my friends hate me… Pink shook her head. Calm down, there's no way she actually cares about my relationship with the Crystal Gems, not after what I told her. She just wants to make sure they won't attack her.

"You'll be fine Iolite, they know that I don't want to draw attention to Earth, but if they cause trouble I will have to." Pink answered. "Moving on, there is the issue of the reporting. As far as any of your reports go, Steven is a Human-Rose Quartz hybrid, any gems from my court that are deployed here are monitoring his development for more insights into how biological and gem life interact, and the Rebel group we found was not shattered because they have information on his development and the human race that I deemed vital for my research. They have been given a reduced sentence of imprisonment on Earth until such time as I believe they have repaid my court for the damage they caused it."

"Of course My Diamond, I will ensure that my reports and 6C3's are written with those details in mind. Is that all?"

"Yes, once you are ready, come down here and I will ask them to help you with the analysis of The Cluster." Pink answered, and after hearing an acknowledgement she ended the call and looked out over the beach, taking in the cluster of Rose Quartz gems and the hovering hand ship.

Pink knew that the other Diamonds would not be happy with the cover story she'd come up with, but compared to the truth it was the least bad of a series of terrible cover stories. Of course, to keep the lie alive she needed to keep guard gems here to monitor the "prisoners" and researchers to learn about the biological life of this world. Thankfully, she just so happened to have some gems in her court that were familiar with humans who could be trusted to not cause problems.

Sighing, she walked down the stairs to the beach, approaching Pink Lace Agate Facet 5 Cut 7XA, the current commander of her guard. After a few moments, the pink gem stood before her, posture straight, all the minor signs of trust and familiarity that she had started showing ever since Pink reunited her with her original command gone, replaced with a wall of formality.

"My Diamond, what are your orders?" She asked, her salute perfect and her face blank as Pink sighed internally. I need to talk to her privately soon, she's hurting because of me and I have to help her.

"Well, I have decided that we will be establishing a small outpost on Earth to monitor the situation with The Cluster and the hybrid." Pink answered, conscious of the Rose Quartzes nearby who could overhear her. "I was considering using the soldiers from the zoo that were attached to your command for that duty, do you believe they can handle detached duty?"

"They are undisciplined, if there is any threat they will respond as individuals or small groups with no overarching strategy." Came the blunt response. "However, they have extensive knowledge of the human race that could increase the odds of success in an environment where threats are not common. I would note that doctrine frowns on deploying Quartzes to remote locations without a commander, but given recent events I doubt you would find that argument compelling."

Well, cold professionalism and some minor backtalk is an improvement from screaming and crying I guess. Pink thought as she gave the smaller gem a small nod. "Unfortunately my court has a severe shortage of Agates right now, so doctrine must be flexible." She responded. "Please gather the former zoo gems and organize a chain of command for this outpost, and back all your troops that aren't guarding the temple back to the ship, we really should stop interfering with these humans lives."

Pink could tell that the other gem did not share her concern for the humans of Earth, but she obeyed. Thankfully, from what she could tell from a few interviews and reviewing incident reports the gems from the zoo seemed to have a basic respect for humans, so an outpost staffed by them would be unlikely to cause any major issues. Of course, when the Agate began giving orders for the gems to assemble on the beach one of the squads sent back a simple "currently engaged" message. Getting the squad leader on the communicator did not clear things up much.

"7XK, please explain your situation."

"Alright… so one of the humans was freaking out about how the Diamonds are here to conquer the planet, and he grabbed some weird sword and some other humans held him back and now there's a crowd of them. 7XJ and L tried to calm them down, but they only really listened to 7XM."

Sway frowned at that. "7XM is not assigned to your squad! What is she doing away from her unit?"

"Well, she doesn't really have one."

"How did an Amethyst without a unit get onto Earth?"

"She was here when we got here ma'am."

Pink froze at that, realizing who they were talking about. What did you do Amethyst? She thought. She panicked and leaned over to speak into the microphone.

"Rose Quartz found an Amethyst who was still in the ground when the war ended and took her in, that might be her. I'll go handle the situation." Pink saw Sway's eyes widen slightly as she made the connection, and the Agate nodded in acknowledgement before turning to carry out her other orders.

Walking down the beach to the boardwalk, Pink saw the row of shops. Painful memories of lazy summer days lounging on the beach with Greg forced their way to the surface, but the cluster of humans and gems in front of one of the stores brought her back before she could slip to deeply into her memories. As she approached, the crowd parted before her, the humans seeing her as Pink Diamond, not Rose Quartz. Because Rose Quartz is gone, and she'll never be able to come back, not while The Diamonds rule Homeworld.

Amethyst, or 8XM now that there were other Amethysts present, was doing a surprisingly decent job of keeping the situation calm, but as Pink walked through the crowd a strange young human with brown skin and yellow, fry-shaped hair started screaming.

"It's one of the Diamonds! They're here to conquer the Earth and turn humanity into a race of immortal rock hybrid warrior slaves!"

Pink stopped flat at his words. If they thought hybrids could be more useful than normal gems the other Diamonds wouldn't even hesitate, but how could he possibly know that?

"No, I'm not interested in that." She said. "I have no plans to conquer anything, I'm just here to fix some old mistakes, this has nothing to do with any of you." She reassured the humans before turning to the knot of Amethysts.

"You four on the other hand…" She trailed off as she saw the three Amethysts of her guard close ranks behind 8XM, the scrappy runt that they had never met before that day. "8XM, good to see you again." She said, hoping Amethyst wouldn't reveal her secret.

"... Yeah, sure thing 'My Diamond'." The short gem mouthed off to her before turning to the other Amethysts. "Have fun getting bossed around, I'll be back at the temple if you feel like ditching her and staying on Earth."

The other Amethysts braced themselves for the worst. 8XM was technically off-color, and she'd mouthed off to a Diamond, many gems had been shattered for less. Needless to say, when Pink simply shook her head and chuckled they were stunned.

"If you want my soldiers to join your cause you will have to try harder than that 8XM." She said, forcing herself to keep up a calm exterior despite her worries. Amethyst, now is not the time for this, most of my court hates you for being associated with Rose Quartz, and even the ones who know the truth would still try to punish you for that.

Thankfully no one was really in the mood for a fight right then, so Amethyst just scoffed and walked away, muttering. Pink turned to the crowd of humans who had just witnessed the spectacle, and with a skinking feeling she realized that was the easy part. In all her years in Beach City, she'd only tangentally gotten to know many of the residents, but even that was enough to slip her up if she wasn't careful. If humans started asking how she knew them, worse if the Amethysts started asking how she knew about individual humans...

Pink pushed those thoughts out of her mind and put on her best "Diamond Face".

"Attention humans…" I sound like an invader from those cheesy movies Greg liked. "... I am not here to conquer you, or kill you, or do anything else to harm you. I apologize for how our actions may have impacted your lives, but unless you attempt to assault myself or a member of my court we will not interfere with you any longer. Now, these Amethysts here have an important meeting with their commanding officer and I have business to attend to, so goodbye to you all." Nailed it Pink thought as the Amethysts turned and walked away while the humans began to disperse. Considering the only references I had were alien invasion movies and Passions of Xanxor I'd say that was a pretty decent first-contact speech.

As she turned to walk away, she noticed one human watching her out of the corner of her eyes. The blond woman, who Pink was pretty sure had been one of Greg's friends who Amethyst had started hanging out with, was giving her an inquisitive look. Did… did she recognize my voice? She knew she couldn't exactly tell the woman the truth, but it reminded her how dangerous being around people, gem or human, who knew her as Rose Quartz, even tangentially, was for her cover.

The sound of car brakes slamming drew her attention, and as Pink turned she saw a dark-skinned human woman staring at her, fear in her eyes, but also determination. Pink stepped back, ready for the woman to drive forward and try to run her over, but the more she thought about it the more that didn't make sense. If the woman had wanted to hurt her, ramming her with the car would have been the best option, so what…

The side door opened, and a human girl stepped out of the back seat, dressed in an outfit that vaguely resembled some of the uniforms Quartzes wore, and carrying a bag nearly as large as she was. Something about the bag drew Pinks attention, and as she looked closer she realized what. Sticking out of the bag was a pink pommel, engraved with a rose vine pattern. As the two talked, Pink heard the girl mention Steven, and based on the tone she realized who this was. Stepping forward, she prepared to meet her son's girlfriend.



Authors Note:
Yes, I know at this point Connie and Steven haven't even gotten to kissing, but Pink has a very skewed perception of human relationships, and Connie showing up with Rose Quartzes sword and worrying about Steven reminds her of Pearl, so that's where her mind jumped to first.

It's a bit of a cliffhanger, and I'm sorry for that, but I'll try to get back on my normal schedule in January once the holiday craziness is over. Expect the next update either the 3rd or the 4th.

As always, let me know if you think anything could have been better, if no one says anything I'll never learn.

Also, this fic has a TvTropes page now! Thanks to everyone who contributed.
 
Confrontation 7.4
Chapter 7: Confrontation
Part 4


[Beach House, Steven's POV]

Steven was very conflicted about his day. On one hand, his mom was back! On the other, she had secretly been a Diamond who took on a fake name and faked her own death. The Crystal Gems were all pretty upset about the whole thing, Pearl was cleaning, Sapphire was in the temple, and Ruby…

"It's just, I spent thousands of years as Garnet with her, so I know she loves me, but that doesn't mean she wasn't telling the truth when she said those things. I mean, she could have just been hiding how she feels, like how Pearl hid the truth from us everytime we fused."

Ruby was talking with Greg about some recent revelations. Steven had tried to get involved, but after he had a freakout about potentially never seeing Garnet again his dad had sent him "upstairs" to his bed to keep an eye out for mom coming back. A few minutes later Amethyst had come back, and the Agate that was bossing the other pink gems around got between her and the beach house and yelled at her for a few moments before she used one of those gestures Greg said Steven couldn't use until he was an adult, shapeshifted into a bird, and flew onto the balcony.

When she came in, she took one look at Pearl nervous-cleaning the kitchen, Greg and Ruby sitting on the couch talking about feelings, and Steven on his bed, marched up the stairs, and sprawled out on the bed.

"Ugghhhh why is Homeworld so horrible? I met up with some other Amethysts, 'Pink' comes in and starts bossing them around, and when I give her some basic back-talk all of them act like I'm about to get shattered right there, and then her little boss gem starts trying to order me around, acting like she's the boss of me just because she's an Agate!" The short purple gem fumed.

"Well, did mom get upset when you talked-back to her or…?"

"Eh, she tried to laugh it off, but she was really uncomfortable about it. Like, I said worse stuff all the time before she left, and now it's a problem? Homeworld's influencing her man, she's not as bad as some of them but she's not as chill as she used to be."

"Well, that's because she didn't have anyone but Homeworld gems to talk to, and now she has us! We can make sure she doesn't get influenced." Steven said optimistically. Amethyst looked at him, trying to figure out how to tell him it would probably be more complicated than that, when his phone buzzed with a text from Connie.

"Pink Diamond on boardwalk talking to my mom, says I should hide the sword. Can I trust her?" The text read. Steven quickly typed out a reply. "Yeah, that's actually a good idea. Explain more when you get here!"

"Alright, Mom ran into Connie and her mom on the boardwalk, and they'll be coming by soon. Is everyone… you know… ready?" He asked, looking out at his family as they tried to deal with their emotions.

Pearl nodded enthusiastically. "Oh, why of course I'm alright! All the secrets are out in the open, both you and Rose, I mean Pink, are here at the same time, honestly it's like a dream come true for me, why wouldn't I be happy?" She asked in a tone of forced sincerity. Naturally, Ruby was not happy with having the last few hours described as a 'dream come true' and let out a choked sob of sadness and rage as she curled into a ball on the couch. As Pearl ran over and tried to explain herself and Greg found himself dealing with two distraught gems, Steven turned to Amethyst, who hadn't moved from his bed.

"How about you Amethyst, you doing alright?"

She turned to look at him. "Steven, don't worry about me, alright? I'm dealing with a lot of feelings about her right now, but you don't need to worry about that. I'm a big gem, I can handle myself, but you're still a kid."

"Amethyst…"

"Look Steven, I get what you're trying to do, but I can handle my own feelings, alright? Right now this is between me and your mom, we're both adults, so just let us work out our own issues and focus on how you feel about all of this, ok?" She told him, staring at him with a surprisingly serious expression on her face.

Steven locked eyes with her for a moment before nodding and going back to lookout duty, and neither of them said anything until the front door flew open and Connie ran inside. "Steven!" She ran up to him and leaned in close. "Steven the walk here was so awkward, she asked me all these questions about how you gave me the sword and what my 'relationship' with you was like, and then when I said I was too young to date anyone she got confused! Then when I tried to explain how humans age my mom gave her an in-depth description of puberty, for both genders!" She nearly shouted as she grabbed his shoulders. "What is going on here!?"

Steven felt his cheeks flushing as he realized why Pink had asked those questions. Behind her he saw Pink walk in the front door right as Connie realized how close she was to him and turned around.

"Oh Connie, your mother said she was going to wait for you in town once I explained that this was gem business, but before I leave I really need to schedule another meeting with her! She's already taught me so much about how human mothers operate."

Amethyst jumped down to the couch energetically. "Alright, we're all back together, no one's going to break down crying again."

"Sapphire…"

"Alright, mostly here. Sapphire seemed pretty insistent when I talked to her earlier, so maybe we just let her be, alright?" Amethyst told Ruby. "It'll be fine, you don't need her around to tell you what to do."

The small red gem gave a hesitant nod at that, and as the room settled into an uncomfortable silence Steven took the lead.

"So, Connie, you know how I thought my mom killed Pink Diamond? Turns out she was Pink Diamond and she just faked her own shattering. And then the other Diamonds made a machine that was supposed to reach back in time and grab her mind right as she died to put in a copy of her gem, but it didn't, because she wasn't dead, but then she gave up her gem to have me and I guess that counted as 'dying' for the machine so it took her mind and put it in the copy gem, only it took a long time because the machine was abandoned for thousands of years, so she only woke up a few months ago, but she couldn't let anyone on Homeworld know that she was Rose Quartz at the time, and she came here to deal with The Cluster but since we already dealt with it we need to figure out what to do now."

"Ah." Connie said, her face focused as she took in everything Steven just said. "I'm guessing telling the truth is a bad idea?"

"Yes, the other Diamonds will likely imprison me and take Steven for study or worse if they learn the truth, and I don't even want to think about what they'll do to the Earth and everyone on it." Pink answered.

Connie nodded. "Alright, so… wait." She turned and stared at Pink, realization and horror flooding her face. "You… on the beach, you thought me and Steven were… And then my mom explained…"

Pink just stared in confusion. "I felt it was a reasonable assumption, he trusted you with my sword and you ran into town to help save him when you heard of an invasion, just like Pearl would have done for me back in the old days."

"Yes, well that was the past, and the past is gone, and we need to look to the future!" Pearl said, blushing fiercely.

"Yes, I agree. Thankfully, Connie's mom taught me the proper rituals for when a parent is introduced to their child's partner." Pink said before turning to Connie, who looked like she wanted to be literally anywhere else. "Now, Connie Maheswaran, what are your intentions with my son?"

The room fell silent as Connie's face filled with horror, meanwhile Steven blushed nearly solid red and Greg was torn between amusement and sympathy. After a few moments Connie found her voice enough to respond. "Well… I like spending time with him, and going on missions, and reading together and talking about stuff and hanging out around the temple and stuff like that."

Pink nodded. "I believe that is acceptable. Greg, is Steven old enough for that behavior? I remember you told me that humans need to wait until they're old enough to do romantic things."

"They're fine." He said. "Trust me, these kids are being watched by either me or the gems… a good chunk of the time they're together, and they aren't doing anything inappropriate."

Pink nodded. "That's good. Now that has been completed, it is time to get back to business, specifically what we're going to do about my court and the fact that every gem in this room other than me is wanted by Homeworld." There were several intakes of breath as the humans in the room took in her statement, but she continued before anyone had the time to freak out. "Fortunately, I already came up with a cover story: you all are being granted reduced sentences for your crimes in exchange for information on the gem-human hybrid created by Rose Quartz. I'll need to keep a few gems here for appearances, but considering how well Amethyst was getting along with them earlier I don't think that'll be a problem."

Amethyst nodded at that. "Alright, I think I can work with them."

"Beyond that there will be a small group of researchers, but if I do this right you won't even notice they're here most of the time. You'll all be safe and protected, and that's what matters right now." Pink said, turning to face Ruby, who was trying to keep herself under control. "I understand if you hate me, sometimes when I think about all the damage I did I hate myself! But as long as you're willing to work with me, we can fix what we can and work around what we can't, and maybe in a few hundred years we can be friends again."

The room was silent again before Greg sighed and stood up. "Well, I don't have a few hundred years, but I'm willing to start putting things back together now if you want." He said, holding out his hand.

Pink took it and pulled him in gently. "I would like that." I'm going to get you those centuries, you and every other human on this planet, I don't know how but I will, she thought. I won't say anything right now in case it doesn't work, but if it does… if it does then we'll have all the centuries we want. And maybe after a few of those centuries you and Pearl will learn to love each other the way I love both of you.

She felt him pull back, and she let him go. To her surprise, when she turned to Pearl the pale gem wasn't looking at Greg with jealousy or anger the way she had back in the old days. Which you never did anything about even though it was obviously hurting both of them a quiet voice whispered inside her mind. Instead, Pearl just gave Greg a friendly nod as he backed off and she walked up to Pink.

"So, now that we got that out of the way, I just have one question left: what now? You have a plan to keep us safe for now, but what about every other gem in the empire? We didn't do anything for them for thousands of years because we didn't have the strength, but now we actually have a chance, so what are we going to do with it?"

Pink took a moment to steady herself and suppress her initial reaction, which was you sit here where it's safe and let me handle it. She knew Pearl well enough to know that trying to do that would just make her mad, so she came up with an alternative. "Well, I'm trying to teach the gems in my court how to think for themselves and that they can go beyond what they were made for, so maybe you and the others could act as an example for them? Also, I know there's plenty of off-colors and other gems that don't fit into Homeworld society, so if I find them they'll need somewhere safe to go…" Pink said, hoping it would be enough. Please don't ask to come with me, I can't risk the other Diamonds asking questions about you.

Pearl seemed to accept her answer though, simply nodding as she rubbed her chin thoughtfully. "We do have plenty of experience with that, and if Peridot can be reformed… yes, that sounds like a marvelous idea, we'll make Earth into a haven for all gems who don't fit in elsewhere while you work on reforming the system from the inside."

"Wait what was that about a Peridot?" Pink asked.

Stevens face lit up as he jumped forward to explain. "Oh, Peridot got sent here a while back to check on The Cluster with Lapis and Jasper and then she was the bad guy for a while but we took her prisoner and she helped us bubble The Cluster and learned to love the Earth and now she lives with Lapis out at Dad's families old barn!"

Pink blinked a few times before responding. "Is she the one who called Yellow a clod?"

"Yeah! We were hiding just offscreen when she did it, it was pretty cool!" Steven said as Pink felt terror at the idea of Yellow discovering him.

"That's… so you said she's reformed now?"

"Yeah, she used to be all into that Homeworld caste junk." Amethyst chimed in. "But now she's chill, and Pearl only hit her once!" Pink turned to look at Pearl, who was blushing as Amethyst talked. Considering the sort of things Homeworld believes about Pearls, Pink could imagine why Pearl would punch an 'unreformed' Peridot.

"Well, that sounds good then. If you could convince a random Peridot to think for herself and stand up to Yellow Diamond, I'm sure you'll be able to help any other gem that comes to Earth, right?" Pink asked the group. Even Ruby was nodding at that, her tears drying but not completely gone. Yes! They'll be safe on Earth, Amethyst will get the other Amethysts on their side easily, and then any gem I send here will be to outnumbered to cause trouble. It's perfect, it keeps them safe, and it helps me reform my court.

After everyone agreed to her plan, even Ruby, the group just sort of stood around in the beach house, and for the first time since she arrived Pink finally had the free time to catch up on what she had missed, and Steven was more than happy to fill her in.

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"... So I let Lapis out of the mirror and she got really angry at the rest of the gems and stole the ocean, but I was able to talk her down and get her to put the ocean back and I healed her gem with my healing spit!" Steven was saying.

Pink found herself nodding along as his story continued, explaining how Lapis went to Homeworld and got dragged back on Yellow Diamonds orders to help find and deal with the rebels. She was in the mirror the whole time, and none of us noticed. I assumed that with that crack she was too damaged to be conscious, even if her mind had survived the emplacement process, but she was alive and aware the whole time. At least she's free now, another of my mistakes that someone else had to fix for me.

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"So I used my GPS on my phone to take Lapis on a tour of Earth! I showed her Empire City, and the forest, and Jersey! I really thought she would like Jersey, the people there hate the Earth as much as she did." Greg, Amethyst, and Connie laughed at that as the other gems just looked around confused.

Pink didn't really see what was so funny about that. A group of humans who hate the Earth? How horrible! I should try to help them!

For some reason when she mentioned that to Greg he started laughing even harder.

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[Pinks room, Pink Diamond POV]

Pink was not having a panic attack. She had not run into her room after Steven finished his story about dealing with Jasper and the Rubies with the vision of Stevens gem being ripped from his body filling her mind. She had calmly analysed the situation, realized that her emotions were too strong to suppress, and moved to her room so she wouldn't hurt anyone when she let them out. That's her story and she's sticking to it.

After a few minutes, she heard the sound of the door opening, and Steven walked in. "Mom, I'm sorry." He said, tears in his eyes. What!? What does he have to be sorry about, this is all my fault, all my fault… "I shouldn't have told you those stories, I should have seen how upset you were and…"

Pink pulled him in for a hug. "Steven, you did nothing wrong. I'm upset because all of those things, every gem who tried to hurt you for being 'Rose Quartz' is my fault, and you nearly died because of me. You never should have had to deal with my mistakes." Steven was quiet as she held him in her arms protectively, and for a moment the two sat there in the sea of Pink clouds. But like all moments, it needed to come to an end eventually.

"Mom…" Steven began, gently freeing himself from her hug. "Did… when you had me… you knew you weren't going to be there for me." He said quietly. "But, you left so many messes behind, and you hurt so many people when you left, and I, I just…" He was nearly crying. "Why? Why have me, why leave me to deal with all of your mistakes?"

"Steven…"

"That's what you did! You didn't know you would come back, you thought it was the end, and you did it anyway! Why? Why would you leave them?"

Pink stared at her son, sadness in her mind as she thought about what to say, before eventually with a sigh she began to speak. "Because I wanted out." Steven blinked in shock at her words. "Steven, I spent thousands of years cleaning up the aftermath of the worst mistake I ever made, and no amount of time ever made that pain go away. I lived in a constant cloud of misery, with only a few bright rays of happiness, like when I spent time with your father, or Pearl on a good day."

"Pearl had bad days?"

"No, on my good days." Pink clarified "On good days me and Pearl could spend hours enjoying ourselves, immersed in the beauty of Earth, but sometimes she reminded me to much of the past, of my mistakes, and I pushed her away. And as the years went on, there were fewer good days. She tried her best, but with that stupid order I gave her she could never talk about it, and I was to afraid of re-opening an old wound to do it myself, even when I was sane."

She looked to Steven, seeing the tears in his eyes. "When I came up with the idea to have you, it seemed like the perfect solution. My pain, my regrets, all of it would die with me, and then you would be there. A hybrid of human and gem, with all the best traits of both, without everything that held me back. Looking back, I know that I could have done more to prepare you and the others, but I wasn't in my right mind." That's an understatement. I spent nine months in a suicidal mindset, convinced that my own death would solve everything. "But I never wanted you to deal with my mistakes. I wanted you to live your own life, to follow your own path, and take advantage of the strength of a Diamond and the adaptability of a human. I know I should have thought it through more, but I want you to know that I never wanted you to be hurt by mistakes, and I am so sorry that you were."

Steven stared at her, eyes watering, for several moments before he took a step forward. Wrapping his arms around her, he leaned in and embraced her. "I believe you mom." He whispered in her ear.

The two of them sat like that for several minutes until Pink stood up. Steven maintained his grip on her neck, and she found herself carrying his (comparatively) miniature form around as she began to walk towards the exit. Just as she was about to leave, she felt him go still, and looking in his eyes she saw the look of someone who had just remembered something terrible.

"Mom, why didn't you tell anyone about Bismuth?"

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Authors Note:
Not much to say about this chapter, I'm getting back on my once-a-week update schedule.

Let me know what you think! I always enjoy seeing people comment on my story.
 
Bismuth might actually try to kill her.

Wouldn't be the first time. I did have Spinel nearly shatter her when they met again, only pulling her attack at the last moment to just poofing Pink, although Bismuth is probably not going to feel as conflicted if Pink gives her the same type of opening.
 
"Ugghhhh why is Homeworld so horrible? I met up with some other Amethysts, 'Pink' comes in and starts bossing them around, and when I give her some basic back-talk all of them act like I'm about to get shattered right there, and then her little boss gem starts trying to order me around, acting like she's the boss of me just because she's an Agate!" The short purple gem fumed.
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Amethyst jumped down to the couch energetically. "Alright, we're all back together, no one's going to break down crying again."

Amethyst, your not meant to be this dumb. You know back talking a diamond publicly is a bad idea, and you know everyone's a mess.

"Oh Connie, your mother said she was going to wait for you in town once I explained that this was gem business, but before I leave I really need to schedule another meeting with her! She's already taught me so much about how human mothers operate."
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"Yes, I agree. Thankfully, Connie's mom taught me the proper rituals for when a parent is introduced to their child's partner." Pink said before turning to Connie, who looked like she wanted to be literally anywhere else. "Now, Connie Maheswaran, what are your intentions with my son?"

Pink being a mom is hilarious and heartwarming and I love it.

"Yes, the other Diamonds will likely imprison me and take Steven for study or worse if they learn the truth, and I don't even want to think about what they'll do to the Earth and everyone on it." Pink answered.
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Pink took a moment to steady herself and suppress her initial reaction, which was you sit here where it's safe and let me handle it. She knew Pearl well enough to know that trying to do that would just make her mad, so she came up with an alternative. "Well, I'm trying to teach the gems in my court how to think for themselves and that they can go beyond what they were made for, so maybe you and the others could act as an example for them? Also, I know there's plenty of off-colors and other gems that don't fit into Homeworld society, so if I find them they'll need somewhere safe to go…" Pink said, hoping it would be enough. Please don't ask to come with me, I can't risk the other Diamonds asking questions about you.

And now I'm actually imagining both of these outcomes, since they both make amusing omakes/apocrypha. A legal drama where Pink and Steven are put on trial sounds hilarious, and does Pearl fooling everyone and doing spy stuff.


Pink took it and pulled him in gently. "I would like that." I'm going to get you those centuries, you and every other human on this planet, I don't know how but I will, she thought. I won't say anything right now in case it doesn't work, but if it does… if it does then we'll have all the centuries we want. And maybe after a few of those centuries you and Pearl will learn to love each other the way I love both of you.

She felt him pull back, and she let him go. To her surprise, when she turned to Pearl the pale gem wasn't looking at Greg with jealousy or anger the way she had back in the old days. Which you never did anything about even though it was obviously hurting both of them a quiet voice whispered inside her mind. Instead, Pearl just gave Greg a friendly nod as he backed off and she walked up to Pink.

And now I'm amazed at how much Pink has changed. And starting to wonder if the duplication process actually had something to do this. Because changing her views on mortality and actually noticing her effects on relationships is a big change for Pink, and now she's considering her present self flawed rather than just focusing on her past selfs flaws. It's a very big step, and all the more noticeable since both points are occurring in two paragraphs in rose.

"Mom, why didn't you tell anyone about Bismuth?"

This is going to be a train wreck. Especially since Pink's solution to help the crystal gems is just going to make this worse with Bismuth.

Because Bismuth forgiving Rose Quartz for being Pink Diamond is a lot harder when she's still alive, acting publicly as Pink Diamond and claiming earth as her colony and 'pardoning' the crystal gems for rebelling against her, and leaving loyalist gems to monitor them, and assigning them tasks that involve her gem (studying Steven). And even knowing all the backstory, having 'Pink Diamond' rebuild the crystal gems and/or change the system from within is going to be extremely hard for Bismuth to accept.
 
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Amethyst, your not meant to be this dumb. You know back talking a diamond publicly is a bad idea, and you know everyone's a mess.
Willful ignorance, I think. Amethyst is as shaken as everyone, and for her it manifests as reverting to unhealthy coping mechanisms she had in earlier seasons. It just happens that her way of dealing with it always was putting on that sort of an irreverent persona, and ignoring social norms and personal issues.

Also, some elements of being used to conflict with authority; her lifelong issues with... lots of stuff but, especially, with Pearl in particular also echo here, a little bit. Not at the forefront, but they are there. Pink sort of treading upon the scarred tissue, even if circumstances are very different.

At least that is how I'd explain it. I am not entirely sure if that scene really works, myself.
 
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Amethyst, your not meant to be this dumb. You know back talking a diamond publicly is a bad idea, and you know everyone's a mess.
Willful ignorance, I think. Amethyst is as shaken as everyone, and for her it manifests as reverting to unhealthy coping mechanisms she had in earlier seasons. It just happens that her way of dealing with it always was putting on that sort of an irreverent persona, and ignoring social norms and personal issues.

Also, some elements of being used to conflict with authority; her lifelong issues with... lots of stuff but, especially, with Pearl in particular also echo here, a little bit. Not at the forefront, but they are there. Pink sort of treading upon the scarred tissue, even if circumstances are very different.

At least that is how I'd explain it. I am not entirely sure if that scene really works, myself.

That is what I was going for there, but I totally see how it comes across as Amethyst just being an idiot, I'll try to do better in the future.

Pink being a mom is hilarious and heartwarming and I love it.

Thanks! I tried to make it clear that she's trying her best but doesn't really know what the correct way to do things is.

And now I'm actually imagining both of these outcomes, since they both make amusing omakes/apocrypha. A legal drama where Pink and Steven are put on trial sounds hilarious, and does Pearl fooling everyone and doing spy stuff.

Heh, yeah those could be pretty interesting.

And now I'm amazed at how much Pink has changed. And starting to wonder if the duplication process actually had something to do this. Because changing her views on mortality and actually noticing her effects on relationships is a big change for Pink, and now she's considering her present self flawed rather than just focusing on her past selfs flaws. It's a very big step, and all the more noticeable since both points are occurring in two paragraphs in rose.

See, this is actually something I've been worrying about in recent chapters. I tried to make it clear that Pink was getting smacked in the face by the consequences of her actions (Spinel, her court, Era 2 resource shortages) and was changing for the better, and she has had several months to internalize that and change, but re-reading what I've written so far I think that might not have gotten across as well as I'd liked, so Pink just changes quickly. I know what is supposed to be happening here, but I realize that my readers don't, and I'm wondering now if I need to take a chapter or to to showing and having the characters discuss this in-story.


Anyways, thanks for the comments, it's nice to get some feedback on this story.
 
Pink's changes are believable form my point of view. It sounds like the guilt and depression of all her mistakes built up enough that she wanted out, and so passed her gem onto Steven. The Diamond device however denied Pink the opportunity to just give up. With that in mind, her complaining about being a copy sounds less like it was about being a copy and more like she had issues with being denied her rightful punishment/rest. I doubt she would hesitate a heart beat to set up the same thing for Steven and the Crystal Gems if she could do so without harming others.

So, we have Pink, who has discovered the Diamonds literally won't let her quit, who then starts to see the consequences of her actions that she wasn't able to see while trapped on Earth. Really, her only choices were to try to run away and hide, or face her mistakes head on and hope she could make things better.

While she has had some happy moments sense the Diamonds brought her back, she appears to be mostly in a grin-and-bare-it mode. All she can do now is hope that there will be a light at the end of the tunnel.

Her visit to Earth, while painful, has been a good thing. Thanks to Steven, several of her mistakes have already been fixed, and she sees a hope for a resolution that will keep the Crystal Gems safe. Even the weight of keeping who she is a secret has been lifted, and her close friends haven't completely rejected her over it.
 
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Do you think Blue and Yellow's 'changing' is not going to be lasting? It's shown in show that despite grieving for Pink for several thousand years, neither of them actually changed their actions and views on Pink. Because after they got over the fact that 'Pink' wasn't actually 'dead', they treated 'her' (Steven) like crap, which although it wasn't 'normal' for Stevenit was for them.

I.e (Blue's guilt tripping, and Yellow insulting Pink (Steven) to her (his) face about her not being worth the trouble.)

Will they fall back on their abusive ways? After all Pinks not Steven, she's not willing to risk her precarious situation to confront her abusers about their behavior like Steven was. So unlike in canon neither Blue nor Yellow are ever faced with armor piercing questions.
 
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Thanks! I'm glad that got across properly, like I said I was worried that I hadn't managed the transition from the outline to the actual work right, so hearing that it came through properly is pretty encouraging.

Will they fall back on their abusive ways? After all Pinks not Steven, she's not willing to risk her precarious situation to confront her abusers about their behavior like Steven was. So unlike in canon neither Blue nor Yellow are ever faced with armor piercing questions.

While it's true that Pink is going to be less likely to use armor-piercing questions than Steven was in canon, but Pink isn't going to just roll over if they backslide, even if that might be the better option.
 
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