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Super Robot Wars SV: An End to Eternity

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GilliamYaeger said:
You're caught off-guard, and can't bring your arm or tail forward in time to block the incoming strike. Chigul's arm sickle slams home into your side side, carving through the outer armor to firmly embed itself in your torso, with a flash of light that quickly fades.
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Redundant 'side'. 'Chigul's arm sickle slams home into your side side' probably needs only one.

GilliamYaeger said:
Then the rest of Chigul runs into you, and its your turn to be knocked off balance as you topple over backwards. You make a desperate flail at the Mechabeast with your sword, but its knocked out of your grip with a sharp slap from Chigul's free 'hand',
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'but its knocked out of' should probably be 'but it's knocked out of', as in "it is".

GilliamYaeger said:
Suppressing the magitech D-Soil nanomachines that course through Pantheon's body like blood was a little bit like holding your breath. It rapidly became quite uncomfortable, and if you'd kept it up any longer Pantheon's functionality might have become repaired.
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I... don't think you meant the last word here to be 'repaired', but I could be mistaken.


I'll abstain from voting till someone thinks up a good answer.
 
Terrabrand said:
Redundant 'side'. 'Chigul's arm sickle slams home into your side side' probably needs only one.



'but its knocked out of' should probably be 'but it's knocked out of', as in "it is".



I... don't think you meant the last word here to be 'repaired', but I could be mistaken.


I'll abstain from voting till someone thinks up a good answer.
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Thanks! I think most of that was because of auto correct on my phone.
 
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.
 
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.

Aaaand that'll work.
 
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.
 
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.

Seems legit. As for the whole memories thing fiction in general has taught me that vague memories are never to be trusted unless proven accurate...and even then they should at least be acted upon with caution.
 
GilliamYaeger said:
You do not!
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Huh. Thought they called us out. :confused:

Well in that case,
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.

[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.
 
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.

Pantheon is amazing and Chigul was bullshit.
 
[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.
 
Terrabrand said:
I know well the woes of Auto-Correct. Or should that be Auto-Incorrect, given?
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Auto corrupt

[X] My name is Yoshikage Minase, pilot of Pantheon. I was with Doctor Hell's army because I wanted past the barrier and the only way through is with Doctor Hell. I mangaed to scrounge up a disguise from broken Mechabeasts and slipped in with the rest of the army. I followed them until we got to the bridge and here we are.
[X] Tell them only what's happened since you woke up. You still don't know if you can trust your 'memories,' and something tells you that you should keep your knowledge of the future close to your chest.
 
Highwind said:
We can't Touch the Fluffy Tail yet, we have to appear calm and professional in front of the suspicious Giant Robot pilots that currently outnumber us. After we reassure them we are a competent Ally and have directions to the nearest base/restaurant we can wind down and indulge in our addiction. :V
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Indeed. We need to make sure that we have our priorities in order. As such:

Japan To Do List:

-Touch Fluffy Tail
-Touch Fluffy Tail Again
-Get a map so we know where we are, where the important things are, and where we started from in case shit really hits the fan
-Figure out more about how Machina side of Pantheon works (?)
-Find new Grimoires (?)
-Prevent allies from dying
-Save the day (with minimal Minase deaths)
-Touch Fluffy Tail in celebration
-Go to other route

What could possibly go wrong with this flawless plan? :V
 
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Dr. Snark said:
Japan To Do List:

-Touch Fluffy Tail
-Touch Fluffy Tail Again
-Get a map so we know where we are, where the important things are, and where we started from in case shit really hits the fan
-Touch Fluffy Tail yet again
-Figure out how Machina side of Pantheon works better (?)
--Touch Fluffy Tail while doing so
-Find new Grimoires (?)
-Touch Fluffy Tail after finding said Grimoires
-Prevent allies from dying
-Touch Fluffy Tail
-Save the day (with minimal Minase deaths)
-Touch Fluffy Tail in celebration
-Touch Fluffy Tail again in celebration
-Go to other route
--While touching Fluffy Tail
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FTFY:V
 
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Dr. Snark said:
Japan To Do List:

-Touch Fluffy Tail
-Touch Fluffy Tail Again
-Get a map so we know where we are, where the important things are, and where we started from in case shit really hits the fan
-Figure out more about how Machina side of Pantheon works (?)
-Find new Grimoires (?)
-Prevent allies from dying
-Save the day (with minimal Minase deaths)
-Touch Fluffy Tail in celebration
-Go to other route

What could possibly go wrong with this flawless plan? :V
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Well, to start with you have a plan that involves interacting with the Linebarrels cast but doesn't even mention Justice once. :V

 
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