Stone (Worm/Puella Magi Madoka Magica) [Complete]

4.1: In which someone mourns, someone is rescued, and someone receives a message
Part 4: Immeasurably More Powerful than Steam

16 March, 2011; Brockton Bay, New Hampshire

Danny Hebert laid in the ruins of his life and mourned.

It had been a long road to this point, several decades of time spent, first unaware of what he was missing, then deliriously happy, then broken but recovering, then ruined beyond repair.

Before Annette he was a normal man, boy really, doing normal things. School, part-time job at the ferry terminal, graduation, college.

Then he met Annette.

His life transformed and everything around him glowed. The two of them were in love. Things only became more joyous after Taylor, their little miracle, was born. Everything was perfect.

Then Annette died.

Danny broke. The light of his life was gone. It was all he could do to keep things together enough that Taylor made it through as well as she had. There were problems, of course, there always are in situations like this, but things could have turned out far worse. Danny and Taylor began drifting apart as time passed, but that was normal when a girl became a teenager, wasn't it? She was still Taylor, still his little miracle.

Then Taylor died too.

Taylor's new friend had told him. She seemed to be taking the news only marginally better than he was. She had told him that Taylor had gotten powers, and that she had died helping stop a supervillain who was going to take over the city. That was small consolation. Slightly better was the news that the supervillain was dead too. Taylor's friend had done it herself after she learned what the man had done to Taylor.

When, a day later, Alexandria herself came to his door with condolences and the official Protectorate line, Danny had been less than diplomatic with her. She said she understood what he was going through. He didn't believe her. The Protectorate left him a cheque "For Expenses", and paid for the funeral, burying his daughter next to his wife.

Now Taylor was with Annette, and Danny wasn't with either of them. Instead he laid on his couch, half asleep, and mourned. His life was in shambles, and nothing short of a miracle could even hope to set it right again.

Something glinted in the corner of Danny's vision and he sat up to face it. Motes of light were dancing near the front door. The light began to gather together, forming a familiar shape.

There was a flash of blue.


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16 March, 2011; Boston, Massachusetts

It took long enough, but the guy finally twigged to a solution. Amanda's power only worked on things that had attention, and Accord had finally figured out that a fully automated system, with absolutely no input from anything with a mind the entire way, would work against her. It had probably only taken as long as it had because Accord would have wanted to personally design the system to cover every possible contingency, and that sort of thing takes time, even with powers.

Amanda was now in a room closed off by a heavy door that she couldn't lift or break, and a series of nozzles currently spraying some sort of gas into the room with her. Whatever it was, it was making her feel tired and see strange flashes of light. Amanda knew things wouldn't turn out well for her if she fell asleep, but it seemed she had little choice in the matter. She slumped down to the ground and closed her eyes.

When she woke up again, she was on a bench. She recognised Faneuil Hall across the street. How had she gotten here?

"You were right, by the way," said someone behind her, "These are really good."

A wrapped package, which smelled delicious, was held in front of her and Amanda took and opened it on reflex. Inside was some flatbread stuffed full to bursting with meat, veggies, and sauce. She took a bite. It tasted as good as it smelled.

"The cart was covered in comic books though, not playbills," continued whoever had given Amanda this treasure as they sat beside her, "And the sign said they only sold hot dogs."

"Yeah, that's Keith's place alright. Glad you found it." Amanda turned to look at her benefactor, and almost dropped her food in surprise. "Now, I don't mean to be rude," she said, trying to find the right words, "But you've been dead for, like, a month and a half. How'd you get around that?"

Taylor Hebert grinned at her friend. "Magic."

"Alright, I probably deserved that," Amanda chuckled, "But seriously, how'd you do it?"

"It's complicated, but technically I never actually died? There was a parallel universe involved."

"So what, you're the evil twin then? Where's your goatee?"

Taylor shook her head. "No goatee, just a badly burned hand. I was hoping you could teach me how to do the healing trick you used on your head wound?"

"Ah, so that's why you saved me," Amanda said jokingly.

"Rule two, Amanda. You needed help, I helped."

"That's great and all, but I still owe you one."

"Well that makes things easier then," said Taylor as she rubbed her hands together awkwardly, "I need you to put the call out for some girls who want to help with a project of mine."

"Oh, what's the project?"

"Nothing much. We're just going to save the world."


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17 March, 2011; Cauldron Headquarters, Earth Σ-17

Well, thought Eidolon, he hardly ever thought of himself as David anymore, that's another week's meeting done. He understood the necessity of keeping all of Cauldron's high-end members operating on the same page, but he didn't know why Doctor Mother and The Number Man had to make it so boring. Alexandria hadn't even bothered to show up to this meeting, and Eidolon couldn't find it in himself to blame her.

He was about to call for Doormaker to give him a portal back to Houston when, speak of the devil, Alexandria, or rather, dressed like that, Chief Director Costa-Brown, came into the conference room.

"Apologies for my delay," she said, "There was a break-in at my PRT office and I've spent the better part of the day in Master/Stranger lockdown."

"What happened?" asked Legend, "Did they take anything? Do we have any idea who it was?"

"That's the thing. As far as anyone can tell they didn't take anything."

"Then what did they leave?" asked Doctor Mother.

Alexandria tossed an evidence bag onto the large conference table as she sat heavily in one of the chairs surrounding it. "Just these. I want to see what you make of them."

Legend picked up the bag and looked at its contents. "An Alexandria action figure and a note?"

"The obvious conclusion is that whoever is responsible for the break-in knows of your double identity," said The Number Man.

"More than that," said Alexandria, "Read the note."

Legend unfolded the note in the bag. "'O well done! I commend your pains/And every one shall share i' the gains.' Is that Shakespeare?"

"Macbeth, Act IV, Scene I. More concerning is the next line in the play 'And now about the cauldron sing'."

"So our interloper not only knows about you," said Doctor Mother, "But also us and our goals."

"And they're broadly sympathetic to them too," said Alexandria, "Otherwise they would have used a different quote. Something more antagonistic."

"How do you mean?" asked Eidolon.

"Act IV, Scene I is the scene where Macbeth is foretold his doom. He's given three warnings, but in his hubris, he misinterprets the warnings as guarantees of his success."

"So whoever this is is giving us a warning then? Do we have any idea who they are?"

"I have one, yes, but you won't like it."

"Some idea is better than none at all," said Doctor Mother.

"In the play, the character who says the line on our note is Hecate, the Greek goddess of magic and ghosts."

The Number Man sighed, "So you think our friendly warning comes from a Case 32."

"I know you don't hold with the claims of their power source--"

"What I don't hold with," said The Number Man, maybe a bit louder than he had intended, "is baseless fantasy from hearsay and eyewitnesses in shock or hopped up on painkillers. If they really were 'magic', then surely we'd have found some evidence by now besides old bedtime stories and the occasional pubescent girl who disappears after a month!"

"Enough," said Doctor Mother quietly, "Regardless of the veracity of any Case 32 accounts, whoever left the note obviously knows quite a bit more than they should. It's not impossible that they know about the Case 32 claims and are trying to play into the mystique."

"So what do you suggest we do?"

"There was more to the note," said Alexandria, "On the back side is a time two days from now, and a set of coordinates."

"Contessa," said Doctor Mother, "Can we get a path to bringing our correspondent into custody?"

The Thinker frowned for a moment and rubbed her forehead. "Any plan I make becomes… desaturated and hazy any time I reach a step that involves anything potentially hostile. The path is still there, but it's difficult to see. As if a light is shining in my eyes. I wouldn't be able to guarantee success."

"I don't like this," said Eidolon, "Whoever this is is a powerful enough Stranger to get in and out of one of the most secure locations on Bet, and a powerful enough Thinker or Trump to block a path."

"If Rebecca is right," said Legend, "Then we've been offered a warning and a meeting with someone with a lot of information. Maybe even more than we have." He looked around the table. "I think we should learn from Macbeth; we should set aside our hubris and be willing to listen."
 
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4.2: In which two meetings are held
19 March, 2011; Brockton Bay, New Hampshire

It was shortly before midnight when a hole ripped itself open over the skies of Brockton Bay. Three figures flew out from it and no one noticed. The hole closed behind them as the figures flew off to the northwest. They quickly found their destination, circled twice, and landed at the main gates. Dogs barked in the distance.

"I still don't like this," said Eidolon, "We know nothing about this person we're meeting. For all we know this could be a trap."

"If it were a trap, it's not a good one," said Legend, "We all got a good look at the place on the way in. Nothing out of the ordinary."

"Like that means anything. Whoever this is was powerful enough to get in and out of PRT Central without anyone noticing. Who's to say they don't have an army cloaked in there? Who even asks for a meeting at midnight in a graveyard?"

"Eidolon, we're well aware of your misgivings," said Alexandria as she stepped through the unlocked gate, "That's why all three of us are here. The one path we were able to get said that if we listen to this person, we'll end up getting something valuable. So stop being so paranoid."

The Triumvirate walked together up a small hill, Eidolon keeping an eye out for anything that could be considered even remotely dangerous, Legend looking at the many stones they passed with a sad look, and Alexandria trying to find the exact coordinates they had been given. She noticed the girl first.

She was standing in costume with her back to them at one of the larger headstones, mumbling something none of the Triumvirate could make out. Alexandria thought there was something familiar about her, but the details kept slipping from her mind before she could make any connections. The girl raised her head and turned toward them as she heard their approach.

"I wasn't expecting all three of you," the girl said, "It's kind of intimidating, honestly."

"You can understand how an impossible message claiming to know important secrets could be viewed as hostile," said Alexandria, "We just wanted to be cautious. Are you our Hecate?"

The girl nodded, "That's actually not a half-bad cape name. Maybe I'll keep it." She gestured to the stone behind her. "I understand you're to thank for the burial?"

It was then that Alexandria noticed which grave they were standing at and a connection finally stuck. "If we dig up that grave," she said, "Would the body still be there?"

"Probably," the girl, Taylor, said "I'm pretty sure I'm in a different one now." She held up a severely burned hand, "It has a few issues."

"Look," said Eidolon, "As fascinating as your resurrection trick is, that's not why we're here."

"No," said Taylor, "It's not. You're here because you're worried I'm going to somehow threaten your cape Illuminati. I'm here because you're not entirely wrong. I want to make it obsolete."

"Explain."

"You're planning against the day when Scion finally goes rogue and destroys us all. You're building up your supply of capes to try and, maybe, if you're extremely lucky, kill him."

"We know what our own plans are, yes." Eidolon was growing visibly angry, even behind his mask.

"Yeah, well it's a dumb plan. Throw pieces of the other one at him until he gets sad enough to forget to be invulnerable? That won't make him sad, that'll just make him angry. Besides which, do you honestly think Scion would set up a system where anyone got powers that could even conceivably hurt him? He's been at this for longer than any of us can even think."

"That's why we went outside his system," said Legend, "We've harvested powers from his counterpart. Powers without the limits Scion placed on his agents to protect himself."

"That's not outside the system," Taylor said, "That's just expanding it. You didn't make capes who can hurt Scion, you just made more targets."

"So what do you suggest then?" asked Eidolon, "Ask him politely to leave and not kill us all?"

"Basically, yeah. You just have to know how to ask right."

Eidolon scoffed. "This is who we're worried about? A dead girl who thinks she can get the next best thing to a god to just up and leave by saying 'please'?"

"Look, Scion knows what you've done to his… you said counterpart? Sure. Counterpart. He knows. And trust me when I say he is not happy about it."

"If he knows," asked Alexandria, "Then why hasn't he done anything to us in retaliation?"

"He's working on it." The girl sighed and pulled the butterfly from the bow on her chest. She held it up as it transformed into a small round stone. "This is a soul gem. It's where me and people like me get our powers. It's completely separate from Scion and his setup, and it's incredibly dangerous. The wrong thing happens to this and there goes most of the city."

"Is that a threat?"

"No, it's background." The girl put the stone back onto the bow, where it transformed back into a butterfly. "Scion thinks he's figured out how to make one of his own. If he succeeds, the other one comes back from whatever you've done to it and they both get really angry, but with Scion getting a major power boost. You all die, and humanity with you."

"And if he fails?" asked Legend.

"Bluntly? Scion, and every version of Earth that has even the smallest piece of him on it, blows up. If you're lucky, space doesn't fall apart because of it."

"If Scion were making a 'soul gem', Eidolon said, his disdain at saying the words carrying past his mask, "I think we would've known."

"Right, your Uber-Thinker," said Taylor, "The one who can't see Scion at all, and who, I'm willing to bet, had a hard time trying to make sure this meeting goes well for you. She's obviously never missed anything before."

The Triumvirate looked at each other.

"How do you know all of this?" asked Legend.

"You don't come back from the dead without learning a few things."

"You said you wanted to make Cauldron obsolete," said Alexandria, "I assume that means you have a plan to deal with Scion and his 'soul gem'?"

"Two, actually. The first is, like I said, essentially asking him not to make it in a way he can't ignore."

"And the second?"

"That's why I called you." The girl pulled a bag filled with parts of some sort of electronic device from somewhere behind her. "I need to borrow some Tinkers."


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19 March, 2011; Brockton Bay, New Hampshire

"Did she say what this meeting was about?" asked Dragon

"No," said Armsmaster, "Just that we were both needed and to have the results of the tests on the Tinkertech remains from the January raid."

"But those all came back inconclusive. There wasn't enough of whatever it was for either of us to figure out what it was supposed to do, let alone try to replicate it."

"Maybe the Think Tank has given her something. She did take lead on that case, after all."

"I know you're still upset about that, but--"

"But nothing! That was a major raid in an area under my jurisdiction! Protectorate protocol clearly dictates that the local team leader takes point unless they cede operational control, which I did not."

"I know, but--" Dragon was interrupted as Armsmaster's lab flared with blue light. When she and Armsmaster could see again, there were two more people in the room than there had been before. Armsmaster recovered himself first.

"Alexandria, is that…"

"The dead Case 32 you had been tracking, yes. She's actually the reason I wanted to talk to you and Dragon."

"Ma'am, setting aside the fact that we buried this girl, she's wanted for breaking and entering into a PRT facility."

"Two facilities, actually," said the girl from behind Alexandria, "And speaking of breaking in," the girl pointed at the Game Boy, still sitting in its shatterproof enclosure, bouncing a ball against the wall and catching it again. Armsmaster didn't know where it had gotten the ball, and a review of the security footage showed it just appearing between frames of video. Motes of blue light gathered around the impossible robot, then flared and disappeared along with it. "It's about time Kid Win got his present."

Armsmaster was less than impressed. "That was material evidence and unknown Tinkertech. We can't allow it anywhere near any Protectorate members, let alone a Ward, without strict safety controls."

The girl laughed. "It's fine. The worst it'll do is get him distracted playing Pokemon or something."

Armsmaster was about to bring up relevant protocols when a message from Dragon appeared in his visor. Let it go, Colin. Look at Alexandria. He did, and a program he and Dragon had been working on booted and began analysing her. It was the next version of his lie-detector software, improved so as to detect social cues other than lying. Colin wasn't sure why those would be a priority, but Dragon seemed to think it was a good idea, so they worked on it together.

The program showed that Alexandria was nervous. Only a little, and the cues were slight enough that the program almost missed them, but whoever this girl was, she scared Alexandria. Colin thought better of saying anything.

"May I ask why we're all here?" asked Dragon through the room speakers, "I honestly doubt that it's only to free unjustly imprisoned robots, after all."

"Well," said the girl, "You know how you thought I was a Tinkertech smuggler, and how it turns out you were completely wrong?"

Armsmaster nodded.

"Turns out you weren't quite as wrong as you thought." The girl pulled a bag from behind her back. "This is another, less damaged, copy of the Haywire device you found in Coil's base. With two broken versions of it, I figure the two best Tinkers on the planet should be able to figure out how to make at least one non-broken one."

"Did you say Haywire?" asked Dragon, "As in Professor Haywire? We thought all his devices were lost in the Aleph Contact."

"Apparently not," said Alexandria, "Seeing as there are two of these devices."

"Just the one, actually," said the girl, "I cheated a bit to get this other one."

"And what does it do?" asked Armsmaster as he studied the bits of electronics through the bag.

"It blocks powers."

Everyone else in the room stared at the girl.

"How?"

"Something about a bubble universe? I'm not too sure. Coil just tried to use it and monologued about his plan. He didn't go into all the technical details. But if you two can build one, just imagine. A way to imprison parahumans without the finality of the Birdcage. Lung and Hookwolf finally off the streets with no way to break themselves out. Hell, with a bit of luck even a way to shut down Endbringers."

"Girl," said Armsmaster reverentially, as he imagined what the broken device in front of him could do, "Why are you doing this? Why are you giving us as much power as this represents?"

"Because it's the right thing," said the girl. "It'll help everyone."

"And that's it? Just altruism?"

"Well there is one more thing," the girl admitted, "Once you're done building one, I'll need to see how it works."

Armsmaster went pale. Give an unknown, and technically dead, teenager access to power like this? "Why would I do that?"

"Because if you do," the girl looked straight at Armsmaster's visor, "People will remember you as the Tinker, as the man, who saved the world."

Armsmaster thought for a moment, then took the bag.
 
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Armsmaster went pale. Give an unknown, and technically dead, teenager access to power like this? "Why would I do that?"

"Because if you do," the girl looked straight at Armsmaster's visor, "People will remember you as the Tinker, as the man, who saved the world."

 
4.3 In which vengeance is twice deferred
11 April, 2011; Brockton Bay, New Hampshire

Kenta took off his shirt. It was cold outside, but his own inner flame would more than ward off the meagre chill. Besides, this way if the fools did resist and this turned into a fight, his expensive shirt wouldn't burn again. He had more money than he could count, but there was no use in wasting it when he didn't need to.

He put on his mask and stepped from the building to survey his assembled forces. Two dozen strong, arrayed before him in red and green. The gang's colors. His colors. They all waited for him to speak, to give them direction.

"The Undersiders have stolen from us," he said, letting a little fury into his voice, "They could be tolerated while they stole from Kaiser and his fools, or from places we had no stake in, because they are children, and the mistakes of youth can be forgiven. But now the stupid children have dared to take from us, and I will not allow that to stand!"

Several of the people in front of him nodded. A few hands moved to guns in waistbands. One man pulled a knife and began absently twirling it.

"Oni Lee has already gone to search for their cowardly traps, and has told us where they're hiding. Remember their tricks. When we see them, shoot the children, just shoot. Doesn't matter your aim, just shoot. You see one lying on the ground? Shoot the little bitch twice more to be sure. We give them no chances to be clever or lucky, understand?"

<"Leader,"> one of his men asked in Japanese, <"My sister was at the casino when they attacked. She is still in the hospital. When will I be allowed to take my revenge?">

Kenta took the man's arm and twisted it as if to look at his watch. <"If you had let me finish speaking,"> he said, relishing maybe a little too much the smell of searing flesh from under his hand, <"You would know that we leave as soon as the rest of our weapons arrive.">

As if summoned by his words a car pulled up to the group. Three more gang members stepped out. One opened the trunk and the other two began handing out guns to those members who didn't have them yet.

Once everyone was armed, Kenta set off to the last location Lee had given for the Undersiders. Kenta had ordered Lee to drive them toward him and his forces, but it had been some time since Lee had given an update, too long, really. Kenta turned a corner and found himself in a fog bank. Strange, it was too early in the evening for fog. Perhaps the Undersiders had begun to branch out and recruit new members. It would not do to be reckless. Kenta stopped, several of his men nearly running into him before catching themselves. He called two of them forward.

"Mr. Pak, Mr. Chen, scout ahead."

The two men walked further into the fog and almost instantly disappeared. When they didn't come back, Kenta walked in after them, his power already preparing him for a fight. He was seven feet tall and hot to the touch when he came to Pak and Chen, quivering on the ground. He ignored them and walked past. None of his men were visible in the fog, but that hardly mattered. Kenta was covered in scales now, his way through the mist lit by fire from his hands.

Something flashed blue in front of him, and Kenta began to rage.

Or he would have, but the rage wouldn't come. Instead there was… nothing. No anger, no anticipation of a fight, just a void where those emotions should have been.

Kenta's power tried to push him forward, to make him fight, but there was no point. No reason for conflict. He was already stronger than anyone in this city. There were no fights left for him here. There had been none for years.

His power tried to maintain itself, to maintain his rage and his fury, but Kenta just sat down.

More bursts of blue light around him. Kenta paid them no mind.

After a while, Kenta didn't know how long, the fog around him cleared. Kenta looked around and saw his men scattered around him, some groaning, some openly weeping. The Undersiders and Oni Lee were on the ground in front of him, beginning to stir.

This wasn't a fight, but there was enough of Kenta's power left in him for this small vengeance. He conjured a ball of flame, and was about to incinerate the children who dared steal from him when a new figure stepped into view beside the Undersiders. She was young, but tall, and held a short staff that glowed blue at the tip in a hand that looked red and mottled, as if it had been badly burned. Something about her tugged at Kenta's memories.

"Are you with them?" he asked the girl.

"No," she said, "I'm more of an independent. I don't want to fight you."

"Very few do. But if you intend to get between me and the example I will make of these brats, you will have no choice."

The girl looked thoughtful for a moment. "No." As the girl spoke, the stone butterfly on her chest glowed softly. "No one dies tonight. Not them, and because of that, not you either."

There was something about that glow that made Kenta's power flare in anticipation. It was expecting a fight like nothing he had seen in years. Not since Kyushu.

Kenta remembered Kyushu. He even remembered the parts of it that no one talked about. After the ground broke apart, as the monster fled under the cover of the waves. Kenta remembered the voice calling for the land to heal and for the earth itself to make a wall against the further waves Leviathan sent. The voice that commanded the waters to roll back from the city. The voice that belonged to the small girl, descending on wings of light, who reached through his flames and pulled Kenta from the receding waters, keeping him from drowning.

Kenta remembered the old stories his great grandmother had told him of the girls who fought against mankind's despair. The girls who sacrificed their very selves to protect everyone. The kibou no sakimori. The Sentinels of Hope.

With an effort of great will, Kenta suppressed his power. "I remember the old tales. Out of respect for what you are, I will not kill you where you stand for your disrespect. But if you dare speak to me that way again, I will not be so forgiving."

The Sentinel nodded. "I understand. Thank you." She turned back toward the Undersiders, who were slowly picking themselves up. Tattletale said something to her, then handed her a small item from a bag. With his vision still enhanced from the remnants of his power, Kenta saw… a hairbrush? What foolishness was that?

The Undersiders gathered themselves and left. As they turned out of sight, One man, the one who's arm Kenta had burned earlier, spoke up. <"Are just letting them go? What about my sister?">

With fire in his eyes, Kenta turned on the man. <"If you keep speaking, you will soon find yourself unable to. I will not see you again until you learn respect for your betters."> He turned back to the Sentinel. "Remember what I said. It is good to know your kind still exist, but I will not tolerate challenges to my superiority. Walk with care."

The Sentinel simply nodded, then disappeared in a burst of blue light. Kenta, for his part, ordered his men to retrieve Lee, and went back to his home to think on old stories.


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12 April, 2011; Brockton Bay, New Hampshire

The dream started like it usually did. Emma shot up in her bed and stared at the intruder, unable to speak. The intruder turned to look at her, and Emma crawled backward, away from them. That's when the dream took a hard left turn.

Usually the figure would give Emma a hard look and a guttural laugh before some power or another began to act on her. It was usually insects crawling across her, biting, wriggling, and tying her up, but sometimes it would be an invisible force constricting around her throat, or miniature Endbringers flitting around her, slowly carving her apart. No matter what the power was though, Emma always knew who the figure was, and why she was here.

This time though, the intruder jumped back too, and muttered under her breath.

"ShitshitshitshitshitSHIT!" She started to glow blue.

Emma dutifully spoke her next line in the dream, but this time as a question instead of a plea for mercy. "Taylor?"

The girl stopped glowing suddenly and sighed. "Today was supposed to be easy. Just kill some more wraiths to get enough cubes for the plan. Go home early even. Instead it turns into this whole thing with Lung and the Undersiders, and Tattletale gave me this thing back, so I figured I may as well give it back to you." She pulled something from behind her and tossed it on to Emma's desk. "And now, just to make things perfect, you wake up while I'm here. I should have brought Amanda along. She's never going to let me hear the end of this now."

By now the dream was well and truly off the rails, so Emma did something different. "Aren't you going to start torturing me now?"

"Why the hell would I do that?"

And since this was a dream, Emma found herself telling everything. She told about the attack in the alleyway. She told about Sophia rescuing her. She told about wanting to be strong. She told about what she did to be strong.

"And what could I do that's worse than what's happened to you already?"

"What do you mean?"

"Well your 'strong' role model has been carted off to superpowered juvie, your flunky has been barred from seeing you and is seeing a therapist instead, and you are having recurring terror dreams about me coming back from the dead to haunt you. On top of that, your pants don't fit. I've got bigger things to worry about right now, so that's more than enough vengeance for me."

"So," Emma began, not daring to hope, "I'm free? You forgive me?"

Taylor sighed, and shook her head. "No. I can understand why you did what you did, but I don't think I can forgive you for it."

"But--"

"We were like sisters, Emma, and you betrayed me and made my life hell so you could be strong. Was it worth it? Did it work? Because your nightmares say it didn't. You want a punishment? That's it. You have to live with the fact that everything you did to me was completely and totally pointless. You turned on your best friend for no reason and no gains, and then she died because of it. Because of you."

Emma sat, speechless. She wanted the bug dream back.

"Goodbye, Emma. I'm sorry you felt I couldn't help you."

Taylor vanished in a burst of blue light, and Emma sank back to her pillow. She woke up in the morning and wasn't sure how to feel when saw an old hairbrush of hers on her desk that hadn't been there the night before.
 
4.4: In which plans fail and a Final Escape is Made
30 April, 2011; Brockton Bay, New Hampshire

It's a common assumption among those who care about such things that the greatest gatherings of power on Earth Bet are the early minutes of an Endbringer battle. After the beast arrived, but before the death count had a chance to grow too high. This assumption was usually even right.

The only reason that, in the histories that would come to be written about this period, Captain's Hill, outside of Brockton Bay, on the morning of 30 April, 2011 is never listed among such gatherings of power is simply because no one noticed it happening.

Starting around 10 AM and over the course of half an hour, two dozen girls of teenaged appearance gathered in the park on top of the hill. Some greeted each other as friends, others were meeting for the first time. All seemed as if they were waiting for someone.

At 10:33 a burst of blue light came from the nearby grove of trees and a tall girl with long dark hair and a large bag over her shoulder walked out to join the group.

"What kept you?" asked a cocky redhead as the tall girl came closer.

"Saying bye to Dad," The tall girl said.

"How is he taking all this?"

"I mean, how would you expect him to take his daughter dying, coming back from the dead, then saying she has to leave again for vague reasons about saving the world?"

"That is a very specific, but fair, question."

"Do me a favor will you? If you make it out if this and I don't, keep an eye on him?"

"That's death flag talk there, T."

"Maybe so, but I'd like to know he'll be alright just in case."

"You got it."

"Thanks."

"So why are we doing this, anyway?"

"A piece of advice I heard while I was away. Go for the head and the rest will fall apart on its own."

"No, I know that part, I meant why us? Scion is a cape, we're not."

"Because Scion is trying to make a soul gem, and whether or not he succeeds. That's bad news for the planet."

"Okay, yeah, I can see that," said the redhead. She eyed the large bag the other girl was carrying. "Is that what I think it is?"

"If you think it's the reason the city's happiness index has been through the roof lately and why I've been getting no sleep, then yes. Yes it is."

"Never change, T."

"Too late, but I'll do what I can."

The two girls hugged briefly, then the tall girl moved to a nearby picnic table and climbed on top of it. The attention of everyone in the park immediately turned to her.

"Hi, everyone," she said, "Most of you don't know who I am, so thanks for showing up with as little information as you have. I'm Taylor, and I need your help for a big, and frankly, dangerous job. I'll say right now that if this works out, no one will know it was us who did this. This is not for fame and glory. This is to save the world."

"If this is as big as you say," called one girl from the crowd, leaning on a shovel, "It'll take a lot of magic. Some of us don't have many grief cubes to spare."

"That's fair, and I wouldn't expect any of you to help me with this for no reason." Taylor unslung the bag from her shoulder and opened it, revealing small black cubes filling it to near bursting.

"I've spent the last month and a half hunting and killing every single wraith in Brockton Bay, a task that sorely needed doing anyway, and this is the result. Everyone here gets some, just for showing up to listen to my pitch. If you don't like what I have to say, you can take your cubes and go, no hard feelings. If you want to help, you stick around and the rest of the cubes get used to help us do this. Sound good?"

A general murmur of approval went through the crowd.

"Good. I hope at least one of you is a telepath, because here's what we're up against…"


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Elsewhen, Elsewhere

The avatar of The One Who Acts continued to roam the world, even during these final stages of constructing the crystal. There was no reason for the avatar to continue this, but to turn away from a course of action once begun would run counter to the very nature of The One Who Acts.

As the avatar of The One Who Acts continued to roam, its attention was drawn to a point just outside a major concentration of individuals bearing pieces of The One Who Acts. None of those gathered at this point bore pieces themselves, but they all had crystals. It was the song of one of these crystals that had drawn the attention of the avatar.

With a thought, The One Who Acts directed the avatar to this collection of crystals. Once it arrived, a crystal that sang of Communication and Understanding broadcast a message on a frequency not dissimilar from the one The One Who Acts used to use to communicate with The One Who Plans. The message proceeded from a crystal that sang of Escape through the crystal that sang of Communication. It spoke of the danger to this planet and its inhabitants posed by The One Who Acts, and pleaded for them to stop making the crystal.

After a brief pause to adjust their broadcast frequency to match that of the crystal, The One Who Acts transmitted their own message, showing what had happened to The One Who Plans, and the despair and lack of direction of The One Who Acts.

A new message followed, speaking of understanding of that loss, and a desire to aid The One Who Acts in their search for resolution.

The One Who Acts briefly considered this, then sent a message of refusal back. Beings as small as these could not hope to even begin to understand what the loss of The One Who Plans meant, let alone help resolve anything about this situation.

Another message was broadcast, this one pleading reconsideration. It spoke of all the inhabitants of this planet and its parallels, and how the return of The One Who Plans would lead to their deaths.

The One Who Acts did not care. These small beings meant nothing next to The One Who Plans. The avatar turned to face the collection of crystal bearers and, with a thought, released a golden beam toward them, destroying the entire hill on which they stood.

A brief scan confirmed no trace of the crystal bearers remained in this reality, or in any other The One Who Acts had access to.

Which made it all the more surprising when the entire group of crystal bearers reappeared in front of the main body of The One Who Acts. There was a brief message of apology before the group scattered and began carving into The One Who Acts with energies it could not understand. For the first time in a long time, The One Who Acts experienced physical pain.

This would not do. The One Who Acts reached for the piece of itself that defended from all harms to circumvent the damage, but the part could not be found. A barrier surrounded The One Who Acts, preventing access to any part of itself not in this specific reality. With what senses they had available The One Who Acts traced this barrier and found it to be similar to the barriers they had established long ago as a defense against dimensional wanderers. This barrier, however, had none of the access granted by The One Who Acts' barrier, instead blocking all possible interference.

The trace of the barrier also revealed the one projecting it. It was the crystal that sang of Escape. A crystal which now sang of entrapment. A crystal whose song grew weaker the longer it sang against its nature. The barrier would fall on its own, but not before irreparable damage was done to The One Who Acts. That would not do.

The One Who Acts drew upon an older strategy from their memory and reached out with part of their physical mass to crush the crystal, an indignity, but a necessary one. As the crystal bearer came close to being crushed, there was a gap in the song of confinement as the crystal sang of safety and the bearer disappeared from under the mass of The One Who Acts and reappeared elsewhere. The song of confinement began again, but weaker.

This would work. Again The One Who Acts reached out to crush, and again a jump to safety and a weakening of the song. A group of crystal bearers attacked the piece of itself The One Who Acts was using to attack. That piece was sacrificed and a new mass was formed to attack.

So it continued. The One Who Acts would attack the one singing of confinement, and the other crystal bearers would counter with their exotic energies, occasionally destroying a part of The One Who Acts until, with one final reach, the one singing very weakly now of confinement vanished and did not reappear.

The song stopped, and did not start again. The One Who Acts reached out, found the rest of themself, and began to act against those attacking.

They fell like insects.


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The light was red this time. Last time I was here it was yellow. I looked around, trying to find the voice that had spoken to me before.

"Hello?" I asked. Couldn't hurt to be polite.

"The bad news is that the magical girls won't be able stop Scion completely." The voice came from all around me and sounded sad. "But the good news is that they've hurt him enough that the capes will be able to finish him off."

"How many dead?"

"Billions of lives were saved by your actions in this, Taylor."

"How. Many. Dead?" I did not appreciate evasiveness.

The voice sighed. "On your Earth? Three billion. Of the strike team you put together? All of them. I'm already with some of them right now."

"No. That's not good enough. I said I'd save the world, not just half of it. This isn't enough."

"You've used the last of your magic, Taylor. The last of your soul. There's nothing else you can do. Even if there was, there's nothing left of you to do it."

"So that's it? That's the end? Just 'Sorry! Used too much magic, now everyone's dead!'"

"Taylor, sometimes things just turn out that way. There's nothing you can do about it. This is the fate of all magical girls."

"No,. You told me last time that slipping out of a bad timeline was simple compared to some of the things I would do before I was done. This can't be the end."

"I did say that, and it was true. Your actions have saved dozens of Earths from one of the greatest threats they'll ever face. You've done a good thing, Taylor, and now it's over. This is how your story ends. Don't fight it."

"I'm not going to fight it." I reached into my pocket and pulled out the ball that was all that remained of my other self. The seed she had left me last time I was here. Somehow I knew what to do. I held it up to my soul gem, and the darkness clouding it cleared instantly, leaving the gem glowing brighter than I had ever seen it before. I flicked the ball away from me and smiled. "I'm just escaping it for a bit."

There was a flash of blue.



Furthermore, there exists in nature a force which is immeasurably more powerful than steam, and by means of which a single man, who knows how to adapt and direct it, might upset and alter the face of the world. - Eliphas Levi
 
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I do wonder how much more cleansing a grief seed provides over what a grief cube can.
 
Epilogue: Visions Yet to Be: Wherein Armsmaster ruminates, a young girl gets in a tight spot, Amanda has breakfast, and the adventure continues
Epilogue: Visions Yet to Be

After finishing the power-blocking device three weeks ago, Armsmaster had increased his local surveillance, hoping to find the girl who had originally brought it to him. She was certainly from Brockton Bay, and at minimum Armsmaster wanted to know where she was, and hopefully to convince her that place should be the Wards.

When Leviathan attacked Miami, a week after Scion leveled Captain's Hill for no apparent reason, it seemed the perfect time to test the device. Especially since Scion hadn't been seen for several days at that point. To Armsmaster's credit, it did slow Leviathan down, but not enough. The Endbringer was driven off, but not before the city was sunk.

The device's use on parahuman prisoners was faring much better. The test case, a parahuman singer who had used her power to Master someone, she claimed it was an accident, was going well. The woman was under extreme supervision and her ankle bracelet was sending Armsmaster regular updates.

The strange downturn in crime, suicides, and general unhappiness that lasted Brockton Bay most of the month of April had begun to reverse itself. Add to that the recent rumours of a new group of parahumans trying to carve a space for themselves on the north end of the city, and Armsmaster found himself and his resources stretched thin.

Still, there was something about the situation that made Armsmaster feel a small spark of hope. Something that told him that, eventually, things would turn out alright.


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This was not alright.

It had been a simple stop in at the bodega on the way to Brian's new apartment. He had to move to a lower-rent part of town after his boss up and "mysteriously" skipped town. Aisha knew enough about her brother's line of work to know that meant someone somewhere was dead, and it probably went a fair way to explaining why Grue and the Undersiders had been laying low for the past month.

Now Aisha was hiding behind a dumpster in an alley, hoping against hope that the group of racist assholes that had been following her too close for comfort wouldn't find her.

Sometimes hope is enough. This time it was not.

Two of her followers came around the corner into the alley and Aisha prepared to bolt the other way. Then a third skinhead came into the other end of the alley and blocked her only way out.

Aisha looked around, trying to find something that would let her get away or fight back. There was nothing. She was surrounded by literal garbage.

[Perhaps I can help with that.]

Aisha looked around again, searching for the source of that voice. She turned and saw a small white cat that hadn't been there five seconds ago.

"And how can you help?" Aisha hissed, trying to keep quiet, "Should I throw you at one of these bastards and slip away while you maul him? Why am I even talking to a cat anyway?"

The cat cocked it's head at her.

[Throwing me would do very little good, as you are the only person in this alleyway who can see me at all. No, I meant something much more immediate.]

"Great, so I'm hallucinating a cat offering to help me. Sure, fine. What can you do for me?"

[It is more what you can do for yourself. Just make a contract with me and become a magical girl!]


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Amanda O'Neill was a magical girl. She commanded arcane powers beyond the ken of mere mortals, she defended humanity from it's own darker impulses, and she had a kick-ass outfit to do it in too.

So why couldn't she find the damn toaster?

"I swear," she mumbled under her breath, "I love you dearly, Cons, but if you've turned another appliance into a robot, we are going to have words."

Amanda opened another box, this one labeled "bathroom", and found two sets of dishes and half a set of encyclopedias. No toaster. She closed the box again.

"Does anyone know what box the toaster is in?"

[It appears to be in the third box from your left, the one labeled "living room".]

Amanda went to the box and opened it. Sure enough, there was the toaster. Buried under three tablecloths Amanda hadn't known she had, but there nonetheless.

"Thank you, Cubes. You've finally done something useful with yourself."

[I have long said that it would be better for us both if our relationship were less adversarial. In fact, I have just done you a favor. You no longer need to live in Brockton Bay.]

"Cubes, what did you do?"

[I made a contract with a rather promising young girl here. The city is now protected against wraiths and you can remain living in Cambridge.]

"Cubes, you saying that makes me want to stay here more. Besides, Boston just had Accord to mess with, and that was getting boring anyway. Here I can screw with actual literal Nazis. Granny O'Neill would be proud. Plus, I have a promise to keep." Amanda plugged the toaster in and put two halves of a bagel in it.

[With the late Ms. Hebert?]

"Yes, with Taylor."

[On that note, we were hoping to ask you what happened after you and the other magical girls left this reality. Our interviews have yielded no solid conclusions.]

Amanda thought for a moment. "If you've talked to everyone else, you probably know as much as I do. Taylor disappeared, like anyone taken by the Law of Cycles. About a minute later she reappeared on the giant space worm, weird glowing butterflies landed on everyone, then a flash of light and we're all back home and Scion is gone. Anything else, you'll need to ask her."

[A difficult prospect, to be sure. Do you know what happened to the Tinker device Ms. Hebert had studied in order to isolate Scion from the bulk of his abilities?]

"Nope. For all I know, Armsmaster still has it. Why do you want it?" The toaster popped. Amanda retrieved her bagel and spread some cream cheese on it.

[The device has many interesting potential uses, one of which has implications for a long-running Incubator project that could reduce the number of contracts we need to make.]

"Well bully for you," she said around a mouthful of bagel, "I still don't know where it is."

[That is unfortunate. But there is nothing to be done. We wish you well in your future endeavors.]

Amanda smiled. "Are you kidding? I get to live in a brand-new city with wraiths to kill, Nazis to mess with, and apparently someone to train. As far as I'm concerned? This is happily ever after."


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"Happily ever after" was boring.

There, I said it. Sure I ended up here in magical girl heaven after saving all the girls who volunteered to help me, and taking Scion… away from anywhere he could do more damage, but now that I was here, there was nothing to do. You can only have paper-mâché butterflies and knitted bees feed you grapes for so long before it becomes dull, and I had passed that point several subjective years ago. Sometimes you need some action, you know? In the end, it seems the only thing I couldn't escape was tedium.

As I plotted some way to ease my boredom, I noticed a girl in blue walking toward me.

"Hey, Miki, what's up?" Sayaka was one of the only other girls here who seemed dissatisfied with things, and even if she was a bit stubborn, we had eventually become friendly.

"Boss-lady wants some people for an escort on a pickup," she replied, "I figured you'd appreciate some excitement that doesn't involve dropping me from very high places."

"Aw, you're just upset that you're not good enough to land a hit on me," I smirked. My power had more to do with that than my combat skill. "But still, She wants an escort? That's different. Who are we picking up?"

Sayaka smiled. "Her very best friend."

And there. It's done. Three years since the first word was put down with no plans for what happened after that, and here we are with something hopefully resembling a decent ending.

"Will there be more?" I hear you ask, "What happens to Aisha and Amanda? How badly does Taylor break the plot of Rebellion?"

The answers are yes, I don't know yet, and probably a lot. Respectively

All that aside, I'll answer any questions people have, and thank you very much for reading
 
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I think its hilarious that Taylors power of "Escaping things" lets her basically break the laws of time and space over her knee at command, even more so than regular magical girl bullshit, and the only thing keeping her in Madokalhalla is that Madokami is even more bullshit.
It helps that her potential was probably enormous thanks to her original destiny of saving the entire world from Scion and becoming the most infamous parahuman ever in the process.
 
This ending is pretty sad to me, and makes me feel really bad for Danny. He just got his daughter back from the dead, only for her to die again so soon? No father should have to go through that hell, let alone twice.

Also feels like a bit of a bad end for Taylor. "Alive" but unable to ever see her friends and family again? Sounds like Hell to me.
 
I think its hilarious that Taylors power of "Escaping things" lets her basically break the laws of time and space over her knee at command, even more so than regular magical girl bullshit, and the only thing keeping her in Madokalhalla is that Madokami is even more bullshit.
It helps that her potential was probably enormous thanks to her original destiny of saving the entire world from Scion and becoming the most infamous parahuman ever in the process.
I mean, you can only Escape fate and destiny for so long before it catches up to you. Besides which, there're only so many places a magical girl can go after she's done the sort of things Taylor has.

As for potential, even saving a dozen planets is small change compared to the nearly 100 universes Madoka had riding on her

If Taylor keeps doing her thing then we will end up with three sentient concepts....
I mean, who's to say we already haven't? Something has to keep tipping the odds in favor of all those other universes escaping the threat of Scion ;)

This ending is pretty sad to me, and makes me feel really bad for Danny. He just got his daughter back from the dead, only for her to die again so soon? No father should have to go through that hell, let alone twice.

Also feels like a bit of a bad end for Taylor. "Alive" but unable to ever see her friends and family again? Sounds like Hell to me.
I mean, melancholy endings are par for the course for both Worm and PMMM. It sucks, but that's part of why Amanda et al moved; to try and help of they can.

And yeah, Yuri Valhalla is far from an ideal solution, but it is better than Witches. Doesn't mean it can't be improved on though
 
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I mean, melancholy endings are particularly for the course for both Worm and PMMM. It sucks, but that's part of why Amanda et al moved; to try and help of they can.
It's noteworthy that the magical girls of this fic have much stronger and healthier mutual support structures than were indicated in the original Madoka story. (I haven't read post-Madokami manga, so I don't know if that structure and support is canon to them.)

It wasn't that the puella magi were inherently hostile, but they were so FEW and their hunting so territorial that they seemed to have long-distance pen-pal type relationships and loose information networks rather than the level of "help out each other in person, show the new girl the ropes" that Amanda gave Taylor.
 
It's noteworthy that the magical girls of this fic have much stronger and healthier mutual support structures than were indicated in the original Madoka story. (I haven't read post-Madokami manga, so I don't know if that structure and support is canon to them.)

It wasn't that the puella magi were inherently hostile, but they were so FEW and their hunting so territorial that they seemed to have long-distance pen-pal type relationships and loose information networks rather than the level of "help out each other in person, show the new girl the ropes" that Amanda gave Taylor.
Which is sort of ironic as it's the inverse of the behavior you'd think you should see. Japan is tiny and has a lot of people packed in next to each other, so they should have had a much easier time seeing each other in person. America is much bigger and more spread out, so it can be much easier to be an isolated puella that can't easily see anyone in person.
 
(I haven't read post-Madokami manga, so I don't know if that structure and support is canon to them.)
The only post-series manga that's not an adaptation of Rebellion is Wraith Arc, which tends to focus on Homura suffering and turning away any offered help, so it's not the best resource for this beyond Mami (already an outlier as far as teaming up in the Madoka-verse is concerned) telling Kyouko to not leave Sayaka alone in the middle of an emotional breakdown.

rather than the level of "help out each other in person, show the new girl the ropes" that Amanda gave Taylor.
Have a quote from a discussion of this very topic with my beta:
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(honestly, one of the unexpected side-effects Amanda's found of helping people who need help is that they'll help her when she needs it. She didn't set out to make a magical girl co-op, but she kind of did by accident)

Which is sort of ironic as it's the inverse of the behavior you'd think you should see. Japan is tiny and has a lot of people packed in next to each other, so they should have had a much easier time seeing each other in person. America is much bigger and more spread out, so it can be much easier to be an isolated puella that can't easily see anyone in person.
Keep in mind that Amanda O'Neill is Irish (descended), with (I implied this in the SB thread, but saying outright here) significant amounts of Jewish ancestry. Between those, she's almost genetically predisposed to helping the little guy and screwing over those in charge.
 
Have a quote from a discussion of this very topic with my beta:
Keep in mind that Amanda O'Neill is Irish (descended), with (I implied this in the SB thread, but saying outright here) significant amounts of Jewish ancestry. Between those, she's almost genetically predisposed to helping the little guy and screwing over those in charge.
Interesting. I will point out that despite the geography, which @Spectrum is right about, Japanese culture does encourage isolation if one does not have a neat box to fit into in an approved social hierarchy and structure. Helping others is lauded there because it is a heroic, strange thing for people to do. It also is a risk, because despite it being lauded when things go well, if anything goes wrong, the shame of things going wrong can be safely unloaded on the one who volunteered to help for "interfering" and "stepping out of line."

Americans tend to be much more willing to reach out, not just to help, but to ask for help. We're also more accepting of it from strangers, because there's more of a culture of such things happening. I mean, we still get suspicious in the "what do you want out of this?" sort of way, but not in the almost offended way that the Japanese might, where the fact you're offering could be a veiled insult as well as a suspicious act by an outsider who has no business interfering.

The alienness of our two cultures is far greater in a lot of subtle and not-so-subtle ways than even anime fans tend to give credit for. A lot of things that seem strange or like character quirks to Americans are, in anime characters, actually simply normal culturally-expected behavior.
 
I mean, you can only Escape fate and destiny for so long before it catches up to you. Besides which, there're only so many places a magical girl can go after she's done the sort of things Taylor has.

As for potential, even saving a dozen planets is small change compared to the nearly 100 universes Madoka had riding on her

I mean, who's to say we already haven't? Something has to keep tipping the odds in favor of all those other universes escaping the threat of Scion ;)

I mean, melancholy endings are par for the course for both Worm and PMMM. It sucks, but that's part of why Amanda et al moved; to try and help of they can.

And yeah, Yuri Valhalla is far from an ideal solution, but it is better than Witches. Doesn't mean it can't be improved on though

And with you referring to it as "Yuri Valhalla," suddenly it sounds like a happier end to me! Yuri makes everything better!

...yes, I know I'm obsessed. STOP JUDGING ME!
 
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