Star Wars: Beyond The Sky

Star Wars: Beyond The Sky
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The Story of Light's Touch, a jedi hyperspace lane mapping ship, chipping away the fringe edges of the Outer Rim during the golden age of the High Republic and exploring the ancient past of the Jedi Order.
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Chapter 01, Part 01 - The Stars Speak Without Sound

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The blue swirl of hyperspace broke and the Light's Touch broke into realspace. Fenet swung the ship around, rolling it to bring Starlight Beacon in front and slightly above them before powering down the ships engines. Having broken back into the universe, she could feel the station now, like a dim echo through the Force. The open space around them only served to magnify the nebulous 'living things are here' sensation.

Even for a jedi, that sort of thing was common, but not as strong as hers. Fenet was never really able to explain it, the words failing her when she tried. It wasn't that she was different, she wasn't. The others could do much the same, just at shorter distances. It wasn't that she was really strong either, So'duun would attest to that. She just had a knack for it, a sense of the flow, where to be. That sense was telling her to sit tight now instead of approaching the station.

"Unidentified ship, you are not transmitting a beacon. If you do not explain yourselves we will consider you hostile and open fire."

Fenet full body winced, arms coming up to her chest for a second. Oooh, not good. For half a second she froze up, then hit the controls to open comms. "Ah, yes, don't do that please. We're an exploration ship affiliated to the Jedi Order, I'm Fenet Y'si. My master is Ikmari So'duun."

"Explain why your beacon isn't transmitting."

"Would you believe me if I told you it was a gut feeling? I'm not actually sure why I had to do it, I just... did. I did it at our last stop before the jump here and forgot to turn it back on. Rest assured So'duun will be more annoyed about it than you are."

"Heh. Jedi. You're cleared to dock at landing bay 12... with an escort, just in case. A security team will meet you at the dock to confirm your identities."

"Ah, thanks. I think. Could you let the administrators know we're just passing through? Our mission is to map out new hyperspace lanes, we're just stocking up before we go on another exploration run."

"Will do. Starlight out."

On the window of the ship in front of her, markers appeared, projected onto the viewport. Once lit up, she eased the engines on towards Dock 12 at a nice, languid pace while two fighters from their patrol broke off and took flanking positions behind them. She rolled the ship side to side in a wobble - tipping the ships non-existant wings - and got a wiggle in return. Good, the pilots had been told who they were.

"We've arrived already?" Fenet chanced a glance over her shoulder as So'duun made her way into the cockpit, taking the co-pilots seat next to her, but not touching the controls. She simply crossed her legs at the knee, hands in her lap, serene. "Why did I hear the station asking about our beacon being offline?"

"You heard that because I am a silly, silly girl who forgot to turn it back on when she had a hunch it should be off while we sat and waited. Honest mistake, really."

So'duun sighed, the deep sigh of forbearance one might give to a particularly dense child who is really trying but doesn't quite seem to get it. It wasn't that she felt that way about Fenet, exactly. Sometimes she just felt a little like digging a hole in sand. "If you immerse yourself entirely in the Force instead of paying attention to what you're doing, you're going to miss things. If you're going to insist on doing that sort of thing, at least have the ships computer remind you."

"Sorry, master." She really sounded like she meant it, too. "I promise I'll do better."

"That and a willingness to learn is all I ask. While I handle the administrators, I want you to hunt down our supplies. It shouldn't be too difficult, I think. Not this run."

"Lots of ships." They were approaching the dock now, the fighters flanking them slowing as they eased into the bay. Light's Touch spun slowly in place, lowering it's landing gear and touching down. With a vibration that both of them felt through the ship, Fenet locked landing gear, disengaged all engine power and locked the controls. "We have officially arrived."

"Not too officially. Don't go spreading around who we are like last time, not everyone needs to know you're a padawan."

"I said I was sorry! I just thought maybe they'd cut me a deal. I didn't think they'd get that offended about it."

"Aliens are alien. They think differently to standard pattern humanoids. If you're going to negotiate with them, at least look them up on the datanet first."

Fenet didn't say anything, just pressed her lips into a thin line as she walked behind So'duun towards the ramp, the ship opening as she got lectured. Again. She'd had this chastisement before, but sometimes So'duun retreaded ground to the point of mildly aggravating her.

Nodding to Fenet over her shoulder, she left So'duun to approach the security team that had visibly relaxed as they walked down the offramp of the ship. Their robes made it obvious who they were and So'duun would handle the rest. Heading across the bay, she pulled out her datapad and flicked through it, bringing up the list of supplies they wanted to lay in. It was, quite frankly, a huge list. Spending a month or three in open space meant laying in deep supplies, or sometimes burning those supplies for humanitarian efforts.

She liked Starlight Beacon. It was still pretty new and still had that new ship smell. The walls weren't scratched or worn, everything seemed to be polished. Even the droids were mostly in good shape. She tapped the datapad as she called the turbolift up, thinking to herself. The best place to lay in ship parts was always the refit docks, usually they had a sizable scrap heap she could dig through to find useful crap to throw into a closet for So'duun. She used to think the whole thing had been so silly, some of the parts they got would sit for months and months without being used. The time they got stranded in interstellar space with no hyperdrive had changed her mind on the value of spare parts very fast.

Now though, it was her favorite part of these runs. She always found such interesting stuff, it was hard not to be curious about what she could find, like a treasure hunt where nobody told you what the treasure is. She loved to tinker and by now could probably strip down and rebuild the Light's Touch single handedly, though it would probably take awhile. It wasn't exactly a small ship. She'd have described it as a mid-sized freighter, but she knew it was no freighter. Not in the traditional sense.

The turbolift did take her down though, leading her to the refit docks easily enough. Stepping out she nodded to herself. This was more like it. This dock was not in any ways pristine, except where the walls stopped being about standard pattern humanoids general height. The floor was scuffed and piles of used parts lay around sorted by type. A half built fighter hung on a chain rig, several ugnauts climbing around on it. Only one of them was at ground level, directing the others in their odd language.

The foreman was wearing a red uniform with darker red trim. He caught sight of her as she approached and waved at the work crew, turning to face her. "I am Reg'im. You should not be here. Civilians are not allowed access to this dock and whoever allowed you into the lift to come here will likely be fined. You must return to the dock you came from. I have spoken."

"I'm not a civilian." She bowed slightly, standing back up. "I am a padawan to the Jedi Master So'duun. I have come to find spare ship parts before we leave for a deep space hyperlane mapping mission. I have spoken."

Reg'im watched her for a moment, stroking his chin in thought, then pulled the datapad off his hip and checked something. "Which dock did you land at?"

"We landed at dock 12."

He nodded, then slipped the pad back into his belt. "Show me the list. I will help you. I have spoken."

Without further delay she handed Reg'im her datapad, allowing him to wander off and begin the search with his teammates. Rather than get anywhere near their current project - that would be dreadfully rude of her - she meandered slowly along the edges of the bay, hands behind her back as she looked at the debris they had accumulated.

She was contemplating a broken astromech when Reg'im returned to her. "I cannot provide everything on this list. For that I apologize. I have highlighted the missing items here, here, here and here. Everything else can be provided to you within a standard daylength. I have spoken."

She nodded to him. "Entirely satisfactory and I thank both you and your team for your hard work. May I ask...?" She regarded the broken droid.

"Its chassis is broken. It cannot provide its function. We may repair it, in time, when other work is slow. You want it?"

She blinked, looking at the ugnaut in surprise. "Truly? I'd buy it from you. I like to work on things in my spare time, it would give me something to do in between jumps. What's its designation?"

"It is M8-720. Older model, not nearly as good as the N5's we use. That's why we have not prioritized it. You do not need to buy it. I have spoken."

She nodded slowly. "Your generosity both amazes and honestly confuses me. Thank you, but may I ask why you're so willing to part with it?"

"I have met only one other jedi. They were noble and strong. If you are even a fraction of the person he was, I would give this to you freely. It will be brought to your ship with the other parts. I have spoken."

She bowed again and Reg'im nodded, turning back to his project and promptly forgetting her entire existence. That was alright though. She really was thankful and vowed to find something interesting and exotic to bring back to him when they returned from their trip.

She didn't return to the docks. Instead, she decided to head to the shopping district, suddenly finding herself with spending money. Well, not spending money. But money she could justify spending on things they would want rather than just what they need. When she left the turbolift she found the shopping district pristine, pulling the hood of her cloak up and passing into the crowd with the easy anonymity it provided, hiding her outfit and lightsaber.

As she weaved her way through the crowd, she let herself zone out a little, reaching out with the Force. The people around her seemed to flow like water suddenly, their courses and intentions and lives making a river around her, like wind without air. Eyes closed, she turned her head towards So'duun, feeling her out. She got an echo of calm, collected confidence that let her nod and continue on, reassured that everything was going alright.

By the time she found a restaurant suitable to her tastes, her stomach was getting downright rebellious. She brought up the menu on the table's holodisplay, choosing what she wanted and sending the order in just as a man sat down across from her, scruffy looking with worn clothes.

Fenet didn't really bat an eye. "Hello. Is there something you wish to discuss?"

"Most people say something like, 'can i help you'? You really kinda measured that out, huh?"

"I really kinda did. You didn't answer the question though."

The man grinned, grime slightly highlighting the lines of his face. "Yep. I heard you're passing way out into deep space, finding new places and things." He leaned in, glancing around and lowering his voice. "You're jedi, ain'tcha?"

She made a click in the back of her throat, wondering if word had gotten out through whoever So'duun had been talking to. "Might be."

"Roight, fair enough." He pulled out a small data pin, setting it on the table. "This here's a map. Me team? We do the same thing you're doin'. Ran into this just before we ran, ran ran back here. Weren't nothin' there and the route to get into the system is pretty twisty, but we spent one night on the surface o' that place and I never wanna spend another. Something's wrong with that planet. More than we signed up for."

"Why are you giving it to me?"

"Wot, you expect me to give it to the bounty hunters and scrappers? No, no. If you see this place, you'll understand why it's staying quiet. Me friends, they're solid, y'know? We've been through a couple scraps. One night there terrified the crap out of us and nothing even happened. At least give it to your master so you can avoid the place or have it hidden from the route maps. We left a beacon, but..."

"Heh, yeah. Alright." A server droid was rolling towards her with a platter and the man nodded.

"Right, leave ya to your business. See you 'round, maybe. We pass through here a lot."

"What's your name?"

"Karr. Karr Romeev. Our ship's the Scrappers Aspiration." He gave a sloppy salute and melted into the crowd as the droid set her food down in front of her, almost on top of the data pin. She snatched it up and slipped it into a pocket, then dug into her meal.



Several levels above her, So'duun sat in Starlight Beacons jedi temple. The meditation room was full of greenary, water flowing in a circle around her along the floor while she sat, looking inwards. In the moment that Fenet slipped the datapin into her pocket, her concentration broke, a sharp sensation of falling for a fraction of a second despite the fact she had not moved. It left her disquieted.
 
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Chapter 01, Part 02 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
M8 was confused.

The last thing its memory logs had recorded was an accidental explosion on the ship it had been working maintenance on. Then it had markers for shutting down due to catastrophic damage. Obviously its computer core had remained intact, but it knew it was done for. Why was it here?

It couldn't move. A short diagnostic told it that it was basically just a suspended skeletal astromech head. It didn't even have a shell. Camera sensor couldn't move so it was stuck looking at what it presumed to be its new master.

The girl was dressed in a jumpsuit, the kind used on flight decks by crews. Short, violently orange hair and a button nose gave her a distinct look, at least compared to other humans it had seen. She was slim and had the spots on her face humans called 'freckles'. Using tools on something inside it, behind the camera, for a moment all it could see was the chest of her jumpsuit. Then she leaned back, the camera whirring to refocus on her.

"Hello in there. Welcome back. I just hooked up a voice modulator, give me a moment while I work out how to make it translate your chirps."

M8 tried to vocalize, but nothing happened. Aside from the girl typing on the computer displays, nothing happened for awhile. Probably a good thing it didn't get bored, exactly. Then suddenly, it felt connections opening. New data inputs. It struggled to parse them until she hotfixed them. It felt the new inputs snap into place.

"Hello. Testing. Testing. Interesting."

"Wiiiiiizard. I got it to work." She grinned widely, pleased with herself. "You might be the first astromech anybody understands at all, ever."

"I do not understand."

"That's okay. I'm Fenet, nice to meet you."

"Are you my new master?"

"Yepper. Gonna fix you right up... sort of."

"Sort of?"

"Well, we're gonna be traveling around awhile. It'd be nice to have some help, you know? Your old body is toast, so you get a new one, but I don't have one on hand so I get to build you one. Mwahahahahaha."

"Your use of laughter at the end seems unduly ominous."

"Yeah, I get that a lot. Sorry about the whole... being suspended like this. Is it uncomfortable? Do droids get uncomfortable?"

"I do not feel uncomfortable. Droids register damage, but not in the way you register pain. Am I to be ship maintenance?"

"Mmm, probably not. You're sort of my pet project. I'm a padawan, my master and I map new hyperlanes to travel."

"What is a padawan?"

"Oh. Okay." That seemed to completely wrong-foot the girl. She blinked and tilted her head, the tool in her hand dropping to the table before she leaned on it. "Really? I've never met anyone who didn't know. A padawan is a jedi learner, my master is a knight. We're monks."

"I understand." Not really, but it could access files on them later, probably. "What is my purpose?"

"To be. Just... someone to talk to. Maybe help out. I didn't really acquire you with a specific thing in mind beyond having a droid to work on, to be honest." It could see her pulling on welding goggles, striking up a torch before she moved just out of the camera frame, sparks flying into view. "So'duun is my masters name. I suppose you'll be our sort of third crew member."

"I understand. Twice now you have referred to me as a person. Why?"

"What, you don't think you are?" She stopped welding for a second, leaning back into the camera frame to give M8 a look. "I'm having a conversation with you. How are you not?"

"I am not alive."

"Yeah, and?"

It didn't answer right away, contemplating that. It was a strange attitude for an organic to have. "Droids are not people. We are droids."

"You are to me, too bad." She went back to her welding work, just out of sight.

For awhile, M8 didn't say anything. It just waited patiently, ticking the seconds off as Fenet worked. After a couple hours she turned the camera to give it a first look at the body she was working on. Its first impression was that of a heavy loader droid, but it looked like she'd made modifications to the frame to include tool sets similar to the one it had utilized while being an astromech. Most of the devices were naked with no covering panel, giving the whole thing a very raw look. At least, to M8.

It approved.

When Fenet disconnected its computer module, going offline was concerning. It didn't like being shut off. Time seemed to skip and it was suddenly on the other side of the room, looking at Fenet from a different angle, slightly downward.

"Hi again, welcome back. You in there?"

A quick test of its motive systems told it that it had control over its head, which jerked up and down in a nod twice.

"Excellent. Most of this stuff isn't actually hooked up, that's gonna take a long, long time to outfit you with. Sorry about the lack of paneling."

It tried to speak but found the voice systems it was using before missing. The connections were gone, it seemed. It tilted its head, then looked around the workshop a little, taking in the benches and stacked shelves with closed cabinet doors. Above them was a crane that she seemed to have installed into the ceiling of the cargo bay at some point.

"Give me a few minutes to get your voice working again. Then I'll need to take a break, cuz I've been at this for awhile and I have stuff on the ship to take care of. Do you want to be left on while I do that?"

It nodded its head again, jerky.

"Alright. Just a moment... and... there." It felt the connections reopen, then new connections, new data inputs. A direct access to the ships computer mainframe.

M8 began to browse through the files as Fenet left the room. By the time the doors closed behind her, it had accessed the ships internal sensors, giving it a living map of everything going on inside. While doing that it split its focus and began compiling a cargo manifest, crew manifest and their personnel files.

It accessed the security cameras on the bridge, looking at So'duun. Miraluka, she wore a face mask covering across her eyes and the bridge of her nose, plain looking with a black trim. She had a much darker complexion than Fenet did. She also wasn't looking at the controls as she used them, staring off to the side and tilting her head as though looking around, despite clearly being unable to see. It puzzled M8.

Personnel file - Jedi Master Ikmari So'duun.
Former student of the Luka Sene[See File].
Left Apheridies[See File] as a teenager to train with the Jedi Order.
Jedi Knight for approximately 8 years.
Padawan is Fenet Y'si [See File].
Trained under Jedi Master Meriss Straszi[See File] until his death. Assigned loosely to the Jedi temple of Starlight Beacon[See File].


So, the captain of the ship and the person actually in charge. Fenet's boss. Good to know.

It continued browsing through ships logs while Fenet meditated. It finished long before she did and by the time she finally returned to the workshop the next day it had had time to process and extrapolate. It knew now that she mostly did this as a hobby. How dangerous the ships assignment actually was, for that matter. It wasn't very talkative as she worked, mostly content to watch.

It was near the end of the second day she finally got the motor systems online. The top half of the jumpsuit tied around her waist, she was laying on her back just behind M8, working on the connections along its 'spine' and the back of its 'head'.

"Gonna do it now, DON'T. MOVE. Not until I do, okay?" A second later it felt the new inputs and stayed frozen as she wiggled out underneath and stood up in front of M8. "Great! Can you move?"

It stood up, a little wobbly at first as it got used to the new inputs. "I am functional."

"Brilliant. Okay, so... your first assignment is to get used to your body. So I want you to spend the night in here moving around, maybe practising walking around the ship. Just try not to smash into anything, okay?"

"I understand." It looked around the workshop at the sheer mess, then back at Fenet.

"No." She pointed a hydrospanner at it. "Don't you dare. This cargo bay is my little universe, don't move stuff around, okay? The boxes you can move if you want to practice, but leave the workbenches, crane and scrap cabinets alone."

"I will leave them alone."

"Thank you. Now, I'm gonna go clean up, I feel sticky."

It watched her go, unmoving for a little while. Then it clunked across the room, turning and doing a circle around the cargo bay, returning to where it was. It tried moving a couple boxes and didn't struggle too much with it, the bodies movement memory helping with the new, strange data inputs.

After an hour or two it decided to explore the ship.

The Light's Touch wasn't huge. The cargo bay at the back had part of the floor that could apparently serve as a loading ramp. The personnel ramp was located at the front of the ship, beneath the nose. A hallway that just ended abruptly with the ramp closed while they were in flight. The whole ship was shaped like a big, fat cigar. It wasn't very aesthetically pleasing, but even a visual inspection told M8 that the ship had been heavily modified and personalized. Probably more of Fenet's work. She seemed to like doing that.

It stayed away from the crew quarters so its clanking wouldn't disturb them.

By the third day, M8 was beginning to realize that this little ship and crew just wasn't going to boss it around. They mostly just liked the company. So'duun didn't really seem to know how to talk to it, but M8 didn't mind. She didn't treat it like an annoying tool, which was an improvement over its last assignment. Fenet seemed to genuinely care about M8, which was new and strange to it. Any time she made a mistake she seemed to only calm down when M8 assured her it was fine.

At the end of the third day it followed Fenet to the cockpit to watch them fly the ship and see out of the front for the first time. It seemed Fenet was the main pilot while So'duun was content to simply help. As they approached the end of their hyperspace jump, the blue parted and realspace snapped into place as the starlines became stars again. Then they sat there.

For two hours.

M8 was very glad it didn't get bored. Apparently, neither did the organics. Both of them simply sat in the seat, eyes closed. Well, Fenet's eyes were closed. It wasn't sure So'duun even had eyes. Eyes still closed, Fenet began making hyperspace calculations. M8 thought to remind them how dangerous a blind jump was but neither seemed to be concerned or stressed and it had seen that Fenet was competent, so it simply waited.

The ship rolled and turned to reorient on a new course. The stars became lines again, and M8 slipped into lightspeed and its new life.
 
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Chapter 01, Part 03 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
When Light's Touch broke hyperspace, Fenet barrel rolled the ship a few times, grinning like an idiot as she did it. This was the part of their job she loved the most, the flying. The piloting. So'duun never really let her just joyride in order to preserve power, but she never complained when Fenet went the scenic route or did maneuvers for fun. Unless they were being shot at, in which case it was actively encouraged. Emphatically. There wasn't much she could do with a ship that flew like it had neutronium in its trunk, but just being out in space, exploring... it was everything she'd ever wanted, growing up in the Jedi Temple. Out here, she felt truly free.

They found themselves just outside of a system with a yellow sun. The nearest star was several light years away, but when the gravity sensors began getting weird she started to believe them only after flicking the display with her finger a couple times. The sound made So'duun turn her head.

"Problem?"

"Not sure. I'm trying to calculate exit vectors other than our entry vector and the computer is acting like we're in a globular cluster."

"Are we?"

"No, sorry. I should've read the displays right away for you. We're just outside the gravity well of a large yellow star, looks like..." A few controls tapped and Fenet turned, flicking a switch on the ceiling just behind her. "...Huh. No, nothing really interesting. One Jovian close to the star and a pretty big asteroid belt but that's about it. Probably make a mining team drool over it, though."

"We'll chart the location and add it to the logs. If we're not near other stars, why is the computer having trouble calculating?"

"It's like it thinks the vectors are changing."

So'duun nodded. "Some parts of wild space are more unstable than others. You will need the compass for this."

Fenet hung her head dramatically, then got up and pulled open a small cabinet at the back of the cockpit. In it was a wayfinder - a jedi compass. Holding it very carefully, she heard M8's head make a quiet whirr as it watched her curiously.

"What is the purpose of this device?"

"Navigation." So'duun was the one to answer, so Fenet could sit down and concentrate. "The computers are only good for lanes we know. It's a shortcut. But our mission is to chart lanes and for that, the computer is only partially useful. In systems where gravity is unstable or there are invisible singularities at play along the route, it can be almost impossible to navigate with a computer. You can do it, but it results in a lot of very short jumps. Takes forever. One way around this is to use the Force."

"The Force?"

"It's... organics are all attuned to it. We make it, in a way. Are part of it. Jedi are sensitive to it, we use it, let ourselves be instruments for it. She's going to use it with the compass to chart a path through."

"Which would be easier to do if we weren't making a holovid about it." Fenet's eyes were closed, one hand holding the compass, the other held up in front of it. So'duun and M8 fell silent. M8 watched while So'duun felt out what Fenet was doing, immersing herself in her heightened awareness.

To Fenet, the ship burned with life. Microscopic for the most part, trillions of bacteria, spores or fungi that coated almost every part of everything organics used at all times. They were found on almost every ship, no matter how good the environmental systems were. To her, it made an outline of the ship entire, almost every surface. So'duun glowed next to her, bright like a tiny sun. She wasn't seeing exactly, it was more of an impression on her minds-eye, but a clear one. One she could feel. M8 was a blank space for the most part. Too new.

The compass in front of her shone, vectors spread out in front of her like threads shifting, weaving. She immersed herself, spreading her awareness out and letting it all in. The threads fell away, leaving clearer paths. A thousand. A hundred. A few dozen. A half dozen. Three.

That one.

Unmoving, she manipulated the controls of the ship with the Force alone, M8 looking around in quiet bewilderment as the ship seemed to fly itself. So'duun acted in concert, making internal systems adjustments to make sure Fenet got the power she needed to the hyperdrive. One way of cutting down the charge time on a jump was to tie the auxiliary power into the hyperdrive, but that risked burning all reserves if something went wrong. So'duun felt along the flow of what Fenet was trying to do -

Stars wheeling around them but it's the ship turning, leaving the star almost behind them, just to the left. A change in pitch and the course feels right. A powerful jump, longer than perhaps they might usually try, taking the chosen route through the anomalies in a single stroke.

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and engaged the hyperdrive.

The universe fell away and hyperspace enveloped them as a weight seemed to fall from the two of them at the same time. With the jump engaged they were now a bolt on a course, a shot through the darkness. The hard part was done for now.

"You did well. Will you stay to monitor the flight?"

"Can't just leave you here to do it. You want to go get something to eat while we jump?"

"Mmm. Not the worst idea. I'll bring you something when I come back."

"Thanks." Her focus was on the displays as So'duun got up, slipping out of the cockpit and leaving her with M8.

"Where are we going?"

"I have no idea, to be honest. This feels like the right course, the way we should be going. I don't really know why, it just is."

"Is being a Jedi always so difficult to explain?"

"Well, I'd tell you, but I find it a little hard to say."

There was a deadpan pause where M8 thought about that, then turned its head a little. "That was a joke."

"Hey, look at that. There's hope for you after all."

"You do not have a personnel file."

"Did a little snooping, huh?"

"I wanted to know more about you. About the ship. Our mission. Exploration seems dangerous."

"Oh, yeah, it is. For sure. But there's good parts! We meet new races sometimes, help people. Some of the things we find are incredible, really."

There was a moment or two of silence as Fenet wiggled up to hug her knees to her chest on her flight seat, watching the displays.

"How long has So'duun been your teacher?"

"Oh, about three years. She asked for me at the temple by name, but won't tell me why when I ask."

"You had no master before that?"

Fenet smiled, a genuine smile full of sunlight and memory. "No. Not a single one. The younglings at the temple are raised together, given opportunities to find the things we like and are good at. At some point, all of us get tutored by Grandmaster Yoda, but he mostly handles the younger children or the really advanced students."

"He must be a very strong jedi."

"One of the strongest. And oldest. Wow, I don't even think I know how old he is." She frowned. "At least three hundred. Maybe four?"

There was a quiet moment while M8 absorbed that. "Jedi must live a very long time. Are all of you humans or near humans?"

"No, no we don't." Fenet couldn't help but sounding a little sad as she said it. "Um, no. We have races from everywhere. The next time we're at Starlight Beacon, I'll take you to see the Jedi Temple. Maybe get you some custom panelling made so you're not droid naked all the time."

"That would be appreciated. It cuts down on maintenance from impact damage."

"Uh huh. I don't really mind doing the work. In a way its meditative." She turned her head as So'duun returned with a meal pack for her, making Fenet groan.

"How many of these did you order?"

"A crate."

"M8, I'm envious of you. You don't need to eat these. Why, So'duun? Why?"

"I like them!"

There was a long suffering sigh from Fenet as she opened it and took a bite, too busy chewing to grumble about it anymore. "Tafes 'ike m'nty paper."

"You simply lack the refined sense of taste necessary to enjoy them."

Fenet swallowed, then gave her a look. "Next time, I get to pick the mealpacks. Then I will have my reveeeeenge."

So'duun turned her head to 'look' at Fenet. "Only if you don't choose the spicy ones. Never again."

"But those are really -"

"Never. Again. They are a health hazard. My lips burn just from thinking about it."

Fenet stuck her tongue out, then took another bite and made a face.

It was nearly another hour before they finally fell out of lightspeed. When the lines became stars again, they found themselves barrelling towards a planetary surface, coming out way too close to the planetary mass. Fenet scrambled, pulling the controls as So'duun rerouted power frantically to the lower and rear engines. At the same time, Fenet tilted the ship and their mad, ballistic course towards the planets surface began to slowly take on the shape of an arc.

Several alarms were ringing but they both ignored it, Fenet fighting to stabilize control of the ship while they silently worked in concert. The massive, rusty planet in front of them reminded her of a piece of iron left in the rain too long, but instead of flecks of metal, it was all rocks. The altitude meter dropped like a rock.

At several hundred feet above the ground, she finally managed to bleed enough momentum into 'forward' to stop 'down' and stabilized the ship, working to slow their speed now that they weren't going to become a crater in this new planets surface. As the Light's Touch finally came to a controlled, slow descent to the surface she turned it to land the ship on a large shelf of rock, slightly tilted. It would make walking around the ship feel weird but it was the flattest place she could find to land.

So'duun collapsed back into her chair and phewed quietly. "Let's never do that again."

"Sure, agreed. Never doing that again intentionally."

So'duun turned her head, somehow glaring at Fenet despite the face mask hiding her eyes and forehead. Fenet just grinned at her as wide as she could, beaming. Landing struts locked, she began to power down the engines and turn on security systems. "Hey M8, what's the environmental readings on that display behind me?"

"Oxygen-helium mix, two parts to ten. It is breathable for you."

"Oh yay, we get to be the squeak patrol today. Breathers?"

So'duun nodded, heading out of the cockpit."Breathers. For now. I hate helium planets. We'll have to take them off to eat, though."

"I promise not to make fun of your voice, I learned my lesson the last time."

The breathers in question were rather like a full face diving mask with an apparatus on the front. Made to fit multiple species, the membrane around the edges clung to their skin with a faint hiss as it made a seal. It felt like something holding its lips on her face to Fenet, but So'duun knew best.

M8 clanked down the personnel ramp ahead of them and they stepped out together for the first time as a team.
 
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Chapter 01, Part 04 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
"Can you sense anything?" Fenet's voice was muffled by the mask and warped slightly by the air, but So'duun could make her out clearly enough. The ground around them was littered with thousands upon thousands of rocks of different sizes, all of it covered in a reddish sand. Even the stones. Gray served to outline the edges of each one she looked at, like a painter had done a light brushing of rust over everything.

Maybe that's literal. So'duun thought to herself. With an old enough desert and enough iron in the stones. The oxygen would do it.

"No, nothing. It's strange. The feeling was so clear when I engaged the hyperdrive, but here we are and... nothing." Fenet was meandering a little, eyes locked on a handheld scanner. "No EM signals, not much heat. It's mostly sunlight in the rocks. The only thing out of place is this cold spot about three klicks that way." She pointed with all four fingers and her arm, still staring at the scanner.

It seemed a good enough direction to go as any other. The three of them paced themselves, unwilling to try moving too quickly among the treacherous, stony terrain. Broken and uneven ground, littered stones and spots which looked stable but would shift slowed their progress. It didn't take long for the open, flat terrain to begin sloping down and soon they found their progress blocked by a drop in the terrain, just a little too low to be comfortable leaping down. Forced to divert sideways, they walked the edge of the ridge until they found a spot suitable for them to climb down... with the exception of M8, who simply jumped. Its landing made a sound like a kinetic weapons discharge, shattering the brittle shale it landed on.

If anyone was around and hiding, they definitely knew they weren't alone now.

It took a little longer for Fenet and So'duun to reach the bottom, mostly due to Fenet. Climbing had never been something she enjoyed and going down was a little different than climbing up. Still, she was a padawan, so she didn't bother complaining about it and simply went about competently making her way down, trading speed for surety.

Once at the bottom, she felt much better. "M8, why did you feel the need to jump a forty meter drop?"

"It seemed sufficiently dramatic for a jedi. I have been reading your log files. You seem to enjoy theatre."

"Sure, yeah, you build an impression in people. A lot of the time, we're the only people they've ever met from the Order. We help people we find, explore, meet new societies. It got drilled into us pretty hard. Sometimes being a little over the top can be fun or give the right impression in a way just getting the job done can't."

"It's a losing argument, M8." So'duun sounded amused. "She's never able to decide whether she's being serious or playing the hero until she's actually doing it."

"Hey, that's not fair. We don't just pretend to be heroic. We are. It's our whole thing." Still speaking, she turned and began walking ahead of them, scanner out, staring at it as she walked. So'duun watched her nearly trip over a rock, then sighed quietly to herself and followed with M8 clanking behind her.

The cold spot turned out to be a dead end. Turning a corner, they found themselves in a small pocket with stone walls on three sides where the sand had drifted down and made an uneven slope. Fenet stopped and stared at it while So'duun waited patiently, just looking around. "Stop using the scanner."

"Right." Fenet flicked it off, then tucked it in her belt. "I should try and feel them out."

"No, you're going to want your hands free."

She heard M8's head turn to look at her while Fenet turned around, puzzled. "Why do I-"

The blaster shots came from two directions, one aimed at M8 and the other at Fenet. So'duuns lightsaber was out in an instant and the blaster bolt ricocheted off of the yellow blade, hitting the ravine wall and knocking out chips of stone. Fenet began walking in the middle of her sentence and simply moved out of the way at the right moment, startled by the shot and pulling her own weapon out. A second later blue was fanning around her as she parried and knocked back a series of shots, the attackers opening with everything they had the moment the lightsabers were revealed.

M8 tried to move behind So'duun, who was smoothly switching into soresu and moving economically, the blade close to her body, fanning out only to cover M8 when possible. Her movements were clipped and short, the terrain around her suffering from reflected shots. Once it was behind her that got easier. Fenet began in shii-cho, the most basic lightsaber style, but quickly switched into djem so for its emphasis on ranged attack defense. The entire volley lasted only about fifteen seconds before Fenet began to redirect the bolts back to their origin points. The attacks stopped when two of those went dark.

"You're not welcome here, outsiders!"

"Oh, now they wanna talk." Fenet grumbled to herself. The mask muffled her, but So'duun got the idea and stepped forward while her padawan moved to make sure M8 wasn't damaged.

"I'm Ikmari So'duun of the Jedi Order. This is my student and her droid."

"Were the blasters not a clue? Get lost!"

"We're not here to harm you."

"Suuuure you're not! Just like the last bunch of raiders who showed up here. You shot Janis!"

"No, Janis shot Janis." Fenet spoke up, sounding a little annoyed. "We're not carrying blasters, in case you hadn't noticed!"

That got a moment of silence, presumably while the hidden attackers talked amongst themselves.

"You do not need to be concerned. So'duun protected me. Thank you, So'duun."

"You're welcome." She said it absentmindly as she tilted her head oddly, like she were trying to hear something. "What's this about raiders coming here?"

It took a few seconds for the reply to come back and this time it was a womans voice. Different person. "Why should we believe you're not with them?"

"Do they fight with glowing swords?"

"...No?"

So'duun made a 'there-you-have-it' gesture, turning her blade off. "Maybe we can help. We didn't come here to attack you."

"Why are you here, then?"

"We're Jedi."

"I don't know what that's supposed to mean!" They saw the woman for the first time as she lost patience, standing up from behind a rock. So'duun guessed mid-50's, wearing what probably started out as a uniform, but had transmuted into something else entirely over time. She was wearing a bandoleer of canisters of who-knows-what, holding a weapon that looked like some kind of crossbow, save for the lack of any string.

"We're nomadic knights. Monks. Our mission is to explore, map out new hyperspace lanes."

"You have a way offworld?"

"Yes. We have a ship."

Instantly several more people popped up, mostly older men. "Why didn't you say so?!"

Fenet tilted her head, gently banging her forehead on M8's chest in quiet, muted frustration as So'duun answered. "You shot at us. It's not a very good conversation starter."

"You still hurt Janis!"

"Luis." The woman said. "Shut up please."

"But-!"

"Seriously. Knock it off. Janis isn't going to die, he just got hit in the shoulder. Relax." She sighed. "You have medical supplies?"

"Yes. Some. We can take you with us."

"Great! We crashed here years ago after our ships hyperdrive went screwy and knocked it out mid-jump. We've been stranded. There's just one problem."

"What's that?"

"My daughter, Mar." The woman didn't notice, but the remaining men began to give each other uncomfortable looks. "She's been missing for a day. That's why we were out here, we're searching for her."



"It's always something, isn't it?" Fenet was speaking quietly as they approached the remains of what seemed to be the stranded crews camp, although 'camp' was a very loosely used term in Fenet's mind. In actuality they'd been living out of the remains of their ship, which had apparently crashed and skidded into the side of a cliff sideways. The whole thing was tilted slightly, giving it an off-kilter, almost manic look and was broken down the middle with the drive section tilted, while the rest was almost-sort-of flat. It was that latter part they'd been using.

"How long as she been gone?"

The woman - Oda - shook her head. "Days. She was looking for water. We have a rule about moving in twos but she... I don't know what she was thinking. She didn't bring anyone."

"You're sure it was raiders?"

"Who else? We get pirates drifting through this system sometimes, nobody else comes here. It's why we're still stuck here. They won't help, all they do is try to kill us and loot the ship. Pain in my ass. That droid is worth more than anything we have here."

"Thank you. I will take that as a compliment."

"Heh." Oda tapped the door panel, but nothing happened. She tapped it again. Same result. With a frustrated grunt she punched it, a dull beep signaling the door opening with a slight scraping sound. "Stupid thing."

Inside it was a little more comfortable. The sand edged the door but they clearly made an effort to keep things clean-ish inside, as much as possible. Door closing behind them, the airlock cycle ran - much to Fenet's surprise - and the helium was traded out for good ol' nitrogen. So'duun pulled her breather off first while Oda took long, deep breaths until the inner door opened.

"You have ship power in this thing?" Fenet was looking around at the lights in the cabin hallway.

"Yeah. Jury-rigged it from the drive section, which is still running hot. Had to cannibalize other parts of the drive to do it though, it'll never fly again, even ignoring the structural damage."

"Understandable. So, you've been stuck here as the only woman with a crew of men for years?"

"No, no. We're all... it's complicated." She shook her head. "Janis and I are, y'know, together. We've always been open about... everything." She paused. "I'm not actually sure who Mars father is. I love her to death, but raising her alone hasn't been easy, trapped here." She even managed to sound tired, sitting down on one of the couches. "Willful, clever, independent and a total pain in my ass. I love her." She smiled a little as she said it. "It figures that rescue turns up just as she goes missing." And straight to black, black bitterness as she spoke.

"It's alright. We'll help you find her. We need everything you know about the terrain here though. Any wildlife?"

"Oooh yes. But it's all down in the caves, we never go down there. It'd be stupid to. Stick to the surface and nothing will really bother you. Too much EM, we don't spend too much time outside if we can help it. We caught you coming in when you set off one of our remote proximity alarms."

"You... booby trapped the area?"

"Pirates, remember?"

"Okay, yes, but you're hoping for rescue and you booby trapped the area."

That made Oda stop and blink. "You know, when you put it like that...?"

So'duun nodded. "Yes. Do you have maps?"

Oda gave her a funny look. "I know your girly can see 'em, but what about you?"

"I manage, don't worry."

"Alright, no problem." Getting up, Oda began moving things so she could access a cupboard under what seemed to be their food prep unit. Pulling out actual, honest-to-goodness paper she laid it out on a table and used her hands to spread it out. "We've been mostly making them by hand, but we have a LOT of time here so they're pretty accurate."

"Ah. How did you get paper?"

"We didn't. It's leather."

That made Fenet wince a little. "You know what? I don't wanna know." Pulling out her hand scanner she flicked through its operational modes, activating the camera and taking a picture of the map. "So, which direction do you think she went in?"
 
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Very neat start. I look forward to more.

Love the droid picking up 'show off a bit to make a neat impression' from the jedi.
 
Chapter 01, Part 05 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
Night time. It had taken longer to creep up than they wanted. The trek across the badlands had been boring, monotonous and tedious. The only one who hadn't hated every moment of it was M8, who didn't really seem to have the capacity to hate anything. Far too late to track by thermal and with no hope of tracking imprints in the sand, they were reduced to scanning for any sign of technology - technology Mar would have needed to survive. The iron content in the rocks made the range for those scans pretty small, which is how they'd ended up wandering around all day.

With the sun dropping below the horizon they were forced to slow down, then hole up as the night-time denizens of the desert began making appearances. Small animals, mainly lizard analogues that would hide in the cool shadows of the rocks during the day. Most were bland but some were very brightly coloured, marking them out as being dangerous.

Instead of stopping to strike camp, they pressed on. Fenet couldn't help but worry about the girl, wondering where she could be out here in the wastes. All this for water! It seemed so petty, so small a thing to risk ones life for, but she had the privilege of environmental and food units in the Light's Touch that would produce that for her. Water was easy with the right filtration systems and a moisture filter while in atmosphere. She was absolutely sure that their ship had had something like that, but when she asked about it, she was told they hadn't had one, which struck her as weird. Every ships crew needed water. It suggested further that they hadn't come from the Republic, something she'd been stuck on ever since they professed to not know what jedi were.

It wasn't until nearly an hour after sunset that they picked up any sign of... anything, really. A faint blip on their scanner. They followed it out of the canyon they'd been traveling and came out at the foot of an open plains with the rocky desert stretched out before them to the horizon. The rusty-red sand was framed against a sky full of stars, the cloudy galactic core faintly visible off to one side. Mesas stabbed at the sky in the distance, vast pillars of stone stretching upwards and casting shadows in starlight, of which there was a surprising amount. More like being on a planet near a globular cluster, where the stars provide their own sort of day, but fainter.

The plains weren't their destination, though. Where the canyon ended, a cave sat at the edge of a sharp turn just before the plains.

"Water has flowed here." Fenet was running her fingertips along the rocks. "I think this canyon was carved out by erosion. This feels like the right path."

So'duun nodded in the darkness. "The cave?"

"If I was looking for water, it's where I'd go."

"We don't have any climbing equipment."

"We have M8?" The droid tilted its head slightly.

"M8 isn't built to cave-dive. This isn't a good idea." So'duun sighed. "Which doesn't matter. If this girl is in there, she might be in trouble."

Fenet turned to M8. "Can you stay here, just inside the lip of the cave? If we're not back in a few hours, we're counting on you to get the others and bring them here, hopefully with some climbing gear."

"Will you not be in danger?"

"Part of the job." So'duun was already walking into the cave, igniting her saber for the faint golden light it could provide. Fenet patted M8 a couple times, then jogged in after her.

Inside the mouth of the cave it was wide, but it quickly began to weave downward. So'duun stopped short of a pitfall, standing on the ledge and looking down. "Long drop."

Fenet sighed. "Another climb down. Joy."

So'duun shook her head. "No, this time you get to stay here. I'll go. If I find the girl, I'll need your help to bring her out."

"But-"

"No arguments." The tone she used brooked none. "You will listen."

Fenet nodded, looking a little downcast. "Yes, Master."

With that, So'duun leapt.

The drop pulled her stomach into her throat and the animal part of her brain began to panic. She didn't, though. Kicking off the wall of the drop she reached out, fingers grabbing a faint handhold in the rock before letting her drop again, just a few more meters to the ground. She landed in water, the sound of splashing in the tunnel ahead. It wasn't stagnant, instead flowing over her feet further down. An underground river.

She followed the flow of water, the sound of burbling filling the cave tunnel, which began to narrow. The ceiling began to drop and So'duun started to get worried about whether she was going the right way, even if she could continue. Then suddenly the tunnel ended and she found herself in a vast, dark cave, the water flowing over the edge of a drop into it. The light from her blade was nowhere near powerful enough to reach the walls of the chamber. No way to tell how large it was.

Standing at the edge was a young girl. She was missing most of her clothes, for some reason. So'duun could see bruises all over her even with the faint light of the blade and she wasn't reacting to So'duun's presence.

"Mar? Are you Mar?"

"They're calling me." As she approached the girl she could see Mar staring off into the darkness.

"Who is calling you?"

"Can't you hear them?" Her words had a dreamy quality to them, almost sleepy. Not entirely there.

She reached out and placed a hand on the girls shoulder, finding it cold. "Mar, your mother is worried about you."

"She can't hear them either." The girl tried to walk forward and So'duun pulled her back, wrapping an arm around her and pulling her away from the ledge.

"No, none of that. Calling you or not, you won't be going."

That got a reaction. The girl began to struggle and So'duun deactivated the blade lest she hurt herself with the flailing. "Stop, stop! I'm trying to help you!"

"Let me go...!"

So'duun would not. But her senses began to adjust and soon she could pick out faint lights in the cave that her saber blotted out. Hanging lights, so soft they couldn't be seen in the glare the blade impressed on the Force. As she watched one of the 'strings' jerked and began to reel in upwards. Hanging predators of some kind.

So'duun shuddered, realizing just what was calling Mar.

The girl was still struggling and So'duun couldn't fight her the whole way back. She reached out with the Force, pushing against the girls mind in the way she might if she was trying to use a persuasion on somebody.

"You want to return with me to camp."

"I..." The girls struggles slowed, her voice uncertain.

"You want to return with me to camp."

"I... want to..." She went limp and So'duun decided to take it, pulling her back up the mouth of the tunnel.

At the bottom of the ledge she'd dropped down she could see Fenet above.

"I found her!"

"Great! How do you plan to get back up with her?"

"I want you to lift her."

That made Fenet hesitate. "I've only ever lifted objects with the Force."

"You're a jedi, Fenet. You are capable of this. Believe in yourself."

Fenet wasn't very good at that sometimes, but So'duun was never going to get out of that cave with the girl unless she had help. She hadn't thought to install anything like a towing cable on M8 and made a mental note to do that once they got back to the ship. "I... okay."

She took a deep breath, trying to let the tension flow out of her as she exhales. Then she expanded her awareness, eyes closed. In her minds eye she could picture the cave walls, the lichen and fungi spores making a faint sheen in the same way they did on the hull of the ship. She could sense So'duun below like a torch and the light of the smaller girl, dimmer. Not as dim as she might be. A Force sensitive, Fenet thought to herself. Maybe that's why she got lost.

She began to 'pull' and Mar rose from So'duun's arms, a little unsteady but soon moving smoothly as So'duun herself contributed to the effort. Carefully, glacially Mar rose upward, still seemingly out of it. Then Fenet had her, pulling her back from the ledge, M8 clunking its way over to them.

"I will carry her."

Fenet nodded. "Thanks, M8. So'du- oh." She turned to inquire about her Master, but So'duun was already climbing over the top of the ledge. "Nevermind."

"We should strike camp here for the night. Go back in the morning. It's okay M8, you can put her down. Would you be willing to stand between us and the ledge, make sure she doesn't try again? Something was calling to her down there."

"I will ensure she is safe."

"Thank you. You're good people." So'duun patted its chassis as M8 lumbered by.

"Calling to her, you said?" Fenet was watching the girl, who was sort of staring off into space. "She feels sensitive."

So'duun nodded. "Might be. I think it was some kind of predatory species, but I didn't stay to find out."

"An animal using the Force to hunt?"

"It's not unprecedented. We've seen Force-sensitive non-sapients. Usually the planet is charted, beaconed and then taken off the maps. We'll add the planet to the archives once we have the chance to do a survey from orbit, but I doubt this system will end up on the hyperlane maps."

Fenet nodded, then leaned over, brushing Mar's hair from her face. The girl gasped suddenly, coming awake and darting away from them, panicked. "What? Who are you? What's going on?"

"Calm down." So'duun sat down in the sand next to Fenet. "We're monks. We found your mother and the ship, but you'd gone missing. We came to look for you."

She gave them an odd look, sitting up properly and resting her back against the cave wall. "Why am I naked?"

"I have no idea." So'duun shook her head. "You were like that when we found you. I was going to ask where you'd stashed your gear."

"I... I don't know." Fenet was taking her longer robes off, offering them to the girl, who stood up and wrapped them around herself. Undoing her belt, she gave that to Mar too, shrugging off the top of her outfit and leaving herself in the light undershirt beneath her robes. Tying them around her waist by the sleeves, Fenet walked over and gave her a light hug.

"Are you alright?"

"I... think so. Are you really here to rescue us?"

Fenet nodded. "We map out new hyperlanes. Getting here was difficult, but we can take you with us. Where are you from?"

"Dosuun. It's a continental world."

"Do you know where it is?"

Mar shook her head. "No, but the others will." She shivered. "It's getting cold."

"No fuel for a fire. C'mon, we'll curl up together and wait for morning." Fenet led her over to So'duun, who had spread her robes over the sand to have someplace to lay down. "Then we'll get you back to camp. Don't mind M8, either. You probably can't see it very well, but it's just a little further in cave, so you don't go wandering off again."

"Hello."

Mar couldn't help but startle a little at M8's voice, but nodded. "H-hello."

Sitting together in the dark, the night seemed very, very long.
 
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Chapter 01, Part 06 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
The night passed without incident, a fact which left Fenet somewhat surprised when she woke. She was the first to, and had always been a light sleeper, though the nights sleep had been somewhat rough. The wind had blown sand around them and when they woke, they had to spend time shaking it out of almost everything they had been wearing. The need for water was palpable, an intensity of thirst that surprised Fenet.

"We should probably go before the sun gets too high. We stay out of it in the high noon because of the intensity." Mar seemed restless, unable to stand still.

"Will you be okay to walk without shoes?" Fenet swished her water bottle and grimaced. Not as much as she'd like. She took a gulp, then handed the bottle to Mar, assuming the girl would take the rest. In a surprising display of self-discipline, she didn't. A single mouthful and she handed it back to Fenet, catching the look on the padawan's face.

"We'll need it for the walk. Um." She looked down at her own feet. "I hadn't thought of that."

"I will carry her." M8 came clunking out of the mouth of the cave, looming a little over Mar, who shrunk back from it.

"It would probably be safest." Fenet put a hand on Mar's shoulder and the girl paused, then nodded. M8 bent down, picking her up and holding her on its forearm like an adult might a small child.

"Are you comfortable?"

"I... yeah." She leaned into M8's shoulder a bit, holding on. "I'm not used to machines that talk. I'm sorry."

"I am not offended. Please tell me if you experience any discomfort."

"Let's get moving." So'duun led the way out of the cave and out into the harsh morning light. Fenet, M8 and Mar followed behind. Fenet was used to her pace, but Mar soon found herself glad for the ride on M8 because they were setting a pace she would have had no chance of keeping up with, shoes or not.

She began wondering just who these people were. She'd been tired and dazed enough to have no time to really work it out the night before, but the trek was leaving her with little to do but think. The way they'd treated her wasn't anything like the previous raiders. She'd only really known her shipmates, the only family she'd had.

She felt oddly safe though in the arms of a machine that could crush her into pulp, yet could speak and did so with an unprompted level of concern for her well-being. She found herself oddly attached to this big, lunking thing that had stood sentry over them all night.

"Thank you, M8."

"I do not mind carrying you."

"No, not that. Though, thank you for that too. I mean, you stood around with nothing to do all night just watching us sleep. That probably wasn't very fun, so thanks."

"I don't get bored in the same way organics do, but thank you for your concern."

She wasn't sure what to say to that, so she just nodded and shut up. In front of them, So'duun turned her face towards Fenet, who at the same time gave her a surprised look, an exchange completely unnoticed by Mar.

The journey back to the ship took less time than arriving had. No longer an uncertain search, they almost stumbled into a firefight and would have if not for the jedi's reflexes. As they turned into the part canyon leading out they found themselves face to face with a disheveled man wearing half an environmental suit. Mar blinked when she saw him.

"...Janis?"

The man rolled his shoulder slowly. "Your mom really had the guts to try a mutiny. Can you imagine that? Ten years together and she turns on me, just like that." He snapped his fingers. "This would've been a lot easier if you'd just stayed disappeared, you know."

"What do you mean?" So'duun took a step between M8 and the man as Fenet fanned out behind them, putting distance between herself and So'duun to force the man to split his attention.

"You should probably stop there." He made a casual gesture with one hand. "Explosives."

"What kind?"

"Yes."

So'duun gave him a deadpan look despite the lack of eyes. "Why are you doing this?"

"I have my reasons."

Fenet was the first to activate her saber, speaking quietly. "Why was she naked, Janis?"

M8's head whirred slightly as it looked at Mar visibly shuddering against it. So'duun clocked onto what she meant immediately, igniting her blade. "I think you should answer that, Janis."

"You think blades are going to help you against explosions? Heh. Cute." He reached up, pulling off the face-covering breathing mask, taking in the thin air. "You don't get to question me. Her mother tried that shit." Holding up his other hand, he waggled the control pad at them. "One touch an-"

It flicked out of his hand, spinning through the air and flying at So'duun, who proceeded to bisect it with a flash of sparks as her blade caught its battery. Janis was left gobsmacked, staring at them.

"Did you really think you could have her? Stuck in the middle of nowhere, that your crew would just go along with it?" So'duun was furious, Fenet could hear it in her voice. But it was controlled, constricted.

"Sure. They went along with it when I told them what her mom pulled was mutiny. They went along with it when I told them Mar was the one who needed to go out. They went along with it when I told them I was going to go looking for scrap at one of the other crash sites. I've kept them alive."

"I don't think you're going to be doing that anymore." So'duun spoke calmly but there was an undertone of certainty in her voice that Fenet had heard before. It didn't bode well for the man.

"Heh." It was the only thing he said before he reached back to grab something at his hip -

- and found a golden blade stuck in his chest.

"WhAt tHe..?" It came out garbles as blood filled his throat and So'duun didn't move the blade when he dropped, allowing it to pass through the rest of him before he hit the ground.

He didn't move again.

"Master?" Fenet spoke quietly. "Are you-"

"I'm fine." She didn't feel fine to Fenet. She could sense the turmoil. "Let's go. Leave that here."

Leave that here. It took her a moment to realize So'duun meant the body. Janis had stopped being a person to her.

Behind them, Mar watched in silence. She felt cold inside despite the heat of the day. She hadn't been trying very hard to remember what happened to her, it all felt foggy. Now she wasn't sure she wanted to. All she felt was an intense desire to get somewhere private and look herself over thoroughly. A mix of disgust and rage and shock at seeing Janis killed in front of her warred with each other inside her but outwardly, she never made a sound.

M8 wasn't entirely sure that that was a good thing, but it also wasn't entirely sure why they were behaving this way and resolved internally to look after Mar. At least for now. Fenet had ordered it to, after all. With no time limitation specified. So'duun had just killed a man who seemed to only vaguely threaten the girl. It was confusing but the intent was clear - protect Mar.

"Why?" Fenet just sounded baffled. "I don't understand."

"Alone out here with less than a dozen people? I bet if we could look at his past we'd find other girls. Ones nobody had noticed going missing or didn't care about. Someone like that, stranded, no outlet for the antisocial tendencies? It happens."

Mar seemed to find her voice. "Janis always told us that the raiders were hostile. He always led the scouting team to check out anyone who landed. He lied?"

Fenet hung back a moment to let M8 catch up to her. "It's possible. How well did you know him?"

"He's been the captain for... forever. My mom's always been his girl. The others, they helped raise me. Then something changed and suddenly mom started telling me to dress more and follow them around less." She grimaced. "Now I know why."

As they crested the ridge, they could see the smoke.

When they finally arrived at the crash site, the fire had mostly burnt out. The wreck was even more wrecked and now burnt out, as well. As they got closer they could see signs of a firefight. Bodies.

Mar was hauntingly quiet.

They left her with M8 while they searched. Mar was like a little statue for most of it. When they returned alone, she tucked her face against her arm and held onto the droid, quietly sobbing at the complete destruction of everything she'd known.

"I don't think there's anything more we can do here."

So'duun nodded in agreement. "If we want to make it to the Light's Touch before sundown, we're going to need to move fast."

"We're not going to strike camp?"

"No. We're leaving this place behind forever and taking Mar with us." So'duun turned toward the girl. "I promise we're not kidnapping you. When we get back to Republic space, we'll arrange something for you, I promise."

Mar nodded quietly. Soon, they set back out.

The sun was just dipping below the horizon when they finally reached the ledge of rock where they'd left the ship. Burn marks around the hatch attested to Janis's apparent attempt to get inside. As the hatch opened, Mar's eyes widened at the inside of the ship. She'd never seen anything so sleek. It looked almost new. There weren't even scratches in the deck plates.

Once they were aboard the two women disappeared and she was left with M8 for a short time. "Um." She looked up at the droid. "Is there something I should be doing?"

"Doing?"

"I always had chores. Stuff to earn my keep." She seemed uncomfortable, restless.

"I do not believe you have had any duties assigned at present. However, we will be lifting off soon and you may wish to secure yourself in one of the bunks."

"Oh. Um... okay." She followed M8 as it went clanking down the hallway towards where the quarters were, merely a glorified bunk room with some lockers. Mar found four bunks, one of them decorated with the first graffiti she'd seen. Fenet had painted flowers and vines all over the hull plating of her bunk. The other bunks had heavy drapes and a small glowing bar she didn't understand because she had never seen a sound dampening field before.

Taking the lower, unoccupied bunk she climbed inside and sunk into the cushion. As she did, a small metallic pop at her sides got her attention and she found two brackets she could pull up and lock into place above her to hold her in the bunk during flight. Pulling off the robes Fenet had given her, she climbed under the covers and closed the brackets above her, locking them. It felt a little odd, but snug.

The hum of the ship and the faint vibrations as it lifted off were a salve to her and she was asleep before they left atmosphere. When Fenet came to check on her, she found the robe on the floor and dug out fresh clothes for the girl, leaving them at the foot of the bunk and turning the light level in the room down, then switching the color to deep red.

Sleep while you can. She thought to herself, watching Mar. I hope you don't dream.

Mar did not.
 
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Chapter 01, Part 07 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
When Mar awoke it was with a jolt, the unfamiliar surroundings and bracket above her combining to - in her half-asleep confusion - panic at the feeling of being held down. Going from half awake to completely awake as a pulse of adrenaline was dumped into her bloodstream, her first instinct was to buck against the bracket and try to force herself up. The bracket itself chimed, the magnetic lock snapping apart and the brackets springing back into place, then dropping back down into the bedframe. Mar was left sitting up in the bunk, panting softly from the panic as she began to remember where she was.

She began to remember and the panicky feeling stopped abating and began to intensify. As it reached a crescendo inside her the bunk room door opened and Mar couldn't help but yelp, the loud thunk of the door opening startling her. Fenet stood in the doorway, hands up in surrender.

"Hi. Remember me? I'm Fenet." She spoke softly, inching into the room towards her own, painted bunk. "You're on our ship, the Light's Touch. See the clothes at your feet there?" Fenet gestured as she sat down, scooting back to sit cross legged in her bunk. When Mar picked the bundle up she held it to her chest, staring at - through - Fenet.

"Yeah. You got it. Those are yours." Fenet nodded, keeping her tone as gentle as possible. "No cost. Nothing here will cost you anything. You're safe here. We'll protect you."

She could see the words starting to get through as Mar left whatever personal hell she'd just been remembering and began to return to the now. Her eyes stopped staring through the wall and focused on Fenet, who nodded to her. "There you are. Hi. I felt your panic in the cargo hold. Are you okay?"

Slowly, Mar began to nod. "I'm in the bunk room of your ship. I'm safe here with M8."

Fenet nodded back. "You got it. How do you feel? Take a moment to change, I'll turn around." Fenet began to wiggle in her bunk, but Mar didn't seem to care, getting up and changing in front of her before she could finish. "Or... that. Okay."

"It doesn't matter, you've already seen me nude." She rubbed the fabric between her fingers. "What is this?"

"We don't really have civilian clothes, but we have lots of variations on the kind of garb jedi usually wear. That's one of my training outfits. Sorry if it's a little large on you, I think I'm a little older than you are."

Mar nodded, wrapping the undershirt around her upper body, then pulling on the upper robes and tying it all together with a cloth belt. "It's okay. Thank you." She looked uncertain, sitting back down in her bunk and looking over at the door, then at Fenet. "So... what now?"

"Good question." The padawan looked thoughtful, turning to lay down on her back in her bunk. "We only just left our mooring and had planned to be out here for a few weeks at least. Finding you has So'duun wondering if we shouldn't just turn around and head back to Starlight Beacon."

"What is that?"

Fenet made a vague gesture with one hand. "Kind of a trading hub. It's a huge space station serving as the main port for this region of space. We're pretty far out on the edges of the Republic, this is the frontier. We find new hyperlanes, explore unknown space. It's a dangerous job. Not really a good place for a kid."

Mar scowled. "I'm not a kid."

"How old are you?"

"Um." Mar frowned harder, but it was at herself as she thought hard. "Fourteen? I think?"

"So only a couple years younger than me. Okay, fair." She shrugged. "You look kinda young."

"Yeah." Mar looked away from her, dropping her eyes.

"Ultimately, the choice is really up to you."

"What if we went back?"

"We'd leave you with the jedi temple on Starlight. You're probably too old to be trained, but you've got at least some knack for it. One of the things teams like ours do is find potential recruits and you've got the potential, but..."

Mar didn't inquire, just staring at her until Fenet grimaced, yielding.

"Being a jedi... it's a life of self-control against temptation. Not everyone can do it, but there are organizations within the order for those of us who have the gift but not the potential to be a knight. The Service Corps is like a small family. Our team technically falls under the Exploration Corps."

"And if I don't want to go back?"

Fenet nodded at the ceiling of her bunk. "Then I think So'duun would let you stay. We could teach you about the ship, you'd be a fourth crew member. But you'll need to discuss that with her, it's not really my decision." She sighed. "And I'm not sure right now is a good time. She's been a little odd since she killed that man back on the planet."

"Odd?"

"Quiet, withdrawn. Right now she's in her quarters meditating."

"Who is flying the ship?" Mar sat up, looking worried.

"No one. The ship is flying the ship. Hyperspace is like being a kinetic weapons bullet, you go to lightspeed and don't stop until you arrive. You want to see the bridge?"

Mar nodded.

M8 was still outside the bunk room when they exited and Mar patted him. "Hi, M8."

"Hello, Mar. I am pleased that you look well."

"Thanks. We're just gonna look around."

"You are in good hands." The droid didn't move as they passed down the corridor towards the cockpit.

Mar's eyes widened as they entered and Fenet sat down in her customary seat. Mar didn't even try, walking up behind Fenet's chair and laying her hands on its backrest, staring out the window. The swirl of the hyperspace aperture in front of them as it continually melted past the ship captured her for a moment, her first glimpse of FTL.

"Pretty, isn't it?"

"Where are we going, though?"

Pulling up the navigation controls, Fenet hmm'd. "Looks like So'duun decided on doubling back to Starlight regardless. I'd like you to stick around as well, but it makes sense if you don't, too. We brought provisions for two people, not three. I suppose the choice is really best made there." She frowned. "I'll talk to her with you, if you want?"

"Thanks." Mar said it almost as a whisper, nodding.

A chime on the bridge interrupted them and prompted Fenet to reach up, tapping a button on the roof of the cockpit. "So'duun, we're almost at our destination."

"I'll be there in a moment."

Fenet didn't bother to wait for her to arrive to handle the return to realspace. She didn't need So'duun for that part; however, she needed So'duun to talk to station control for them because she was in charge. "Mar, grab a seat at the console behind me? We're going to jump out of lightspeed soon."

As Mar was working on figuring out how the crash straps worked, So'duun arrived. She sat down in her chair just in time for Fenet to break the jump, the hyperspace tunnel flowing away as the starlines shrunk and became points of light again, the station seeming to almost explode into place in front of them and fill the viewscreen all at once.

"Starlight Beacon, this is the Light's Touch. Request permission to dock."

"Light's Touch, we weren't expecting you back for a few weeks. Hope everything is alright. You're cleared to dock at Bay 4, section 3. Will you be requiring assistance?"

"No, we're not running any issues. Just forgot our hats." Fenet snickered silently at So'duun's joke.

"Gotcha, Light's Touch. We'll make sure to alert the temple quartermaster for you. Starlight out."

Mar was restless, fidgeting in her chair as they pulled into the docking bay. She'd never seen a structure this large. The crash site was pretty much all she could remember clearly, the site and the ship. The sheer size of the station awed her a little. She kept glancing at So'duun, nervous. Uncertain. So'duun, however, didn't notice in her focus on docking the ship.

Once they landed and Fenet shut the engines down, they got up and So'duun seemed to remember her. "Mar, would you like to come with us to the temple?"

"What if I wanna stay on the ship?"

"You want to stay with us?" So'duun sounded a little surprised. "Fenet?"

"I didn't try to convince her or anything. She wants to stay, really."

So'duun looked thoughtful. "...Alright. But you should still come with us to the temple, if only so they can asses your strength in the Force. You have the talent."

"Fenet said something about that."

"I'm sorry. I strongly doubt they'll want you trained as a padawan, you're just too old." She sounded a little sad. "But that's not all the Order does. C'mon, you'll see."

Mar kept glancing back as they left the ship with its ramp open, but Fenet and Mar seemed unworried about thieves or intruders. She decided to herself that it was probably because of M8. Her fondness for the droid was pretty strong after it had carried her the day before and kept her company.

The sheer bustling energy of the station delighted her. She stuck close to Fenet, who grabbed her hand after a few minutes to lead her along. Mar couldn't count all the different kinds of people around them, shuffling through the crowd with them and gasping a little when she bumped into a gorgeous green-skinned boy with tendrils down the back of his head, one draped across his neck, the other hanging behind him. The boy had been dancing with a girl of the same species and for a moment they pulled Mar in, laughing. Caught up in the energy, Mar danced a little too, until Fenet pulled her away (much to her disappointment as the boy waved goodbye).

She was a little breathless by the time they reached the lifts, starry-eyed at everything she'd seen in the short walk from the docks through the promenade. "How many kinds of people are there here?!"

"Many. Races from all over the galaxy pass through this station as they travel through the Outer Rim. It's the same with the Order, there are lots of races. Is that a problem?" So'duun sounded a little concerned.

"No! This is incredible! I've never seen so many people all at once."

So'duun smiled, her worry abated. Not everyone took well to others unlike them. "That's good. We'll be going to meet the master of the temple here, Master Kriss."

"Is she scary?"

Fenet giggled. "Nah. No. Master Kriss is very kind. I think she enjoys working out here, helping people. You'll get to see the Ataraxia too."

"What's that?"

"Our ship. The Order's ship, really. The Light's Touch belongs to me, but the Ataraxia belongs to the Order. It's a bit like a jedi temple too, only it flies around."

When the turbolift doors opened they found themselves in the largest hall Mar had ever seen, even imagined. So'duun had been right too. She could see how the other jedi wore similar styles, but none of them quite the same, how her own clothes seemed to match. As they passed through the hall, So'duun stopped to talk to another member of the order but Fenet pulled Mar along, leading her.

"C'mon. I'd like to show you the meditation gardens. It's really pretty, I think you'll like them."

"Okay." She sped up a little to walk beside Fenet, glancing around as they went and trying to forget the gnawing feeling of uncertaintly that wouldn't leave her alone.
 
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Chapter 01, Part 08 - The Stars Speak Without Sound
"You seem troubled, So'duun." Avar Kriss stood on the ledge of the semi-circular staircase winding down into the Kashyyyk terrarrium. With such a wide variety of races living on Starlight, ultimately the choice had been made to split the meditation gardens into sections so that various jedi could spend time in environments most comfortable to them. Water gardens, jungle rooms like the one she was standing in, shallow water rooms for aquatic species, dried desert environments, even atmosphere rooms for species who don't naturally breathe oxygen. The gardens were vast and touring them was something Kriss considered to be one of the best parts of the temple itself.

The Kashyyyk room was massive with a holographic sky backdrop behind the artificial wroshyr trees. Real wroshyr would be far too massive to ever fit into the station, but the agricultural corps had done an amazing job of keeping partial sections of trees live and even thriving, even if they did require constant pruning. The syren plants, safe behind a low-power forcefield which protected the viewers from its pheramones, were fed regularly... something which the temple younglings never seemed to get tired of watching. Saava vines were kept in a controlled tank on display and milk grass was allowed to grow wild on the floor of the gardens, forming a soft carpet.

So'duun walked up next to Kriss and leaned on the railing looking down, where Fenet and Mar were pointing at some chyntuck that one of the wookiee padawans was harvesting. Fenet seemed to be explaining it to her. Glancing over at Kriss, she stood and leaned on her palms against the rail. "Is it that obvious?"

"I could feel your disquiet before you even entered the room."

"After we left the station, we felt for a way forward, a path we'd never taken before. Fenet directed the computer and we found ourselves on an uncharted world. I sent the navigation logs already, you'll want to blacklist it. There's a predatory species that uses the Force to hunt."

"Fascinating. I'm sure the agricultural corps will be salivating to examine it. But that's not all."

"No. We found survivors of a crashed ship. They attacked us, thinking we were enemies at first, which didn't really make sense if they were waiting for rescue but they seemed friendly enough. One of them was a woman named Oda whose daughter -" She gestured down to Mar. "- had gone missing while looking for water. That was the story at first, but it was more complicated than that. I think there was some kind of attachement issue between the group, one woman and several men, all stranded? And Mar was growing up." She nodded in Mars general direction. "It wasn't until after we found Mar that we were confronted by the man who had led the first attack. Their captain. What he said when we confronted him leads me to believe he felt he was losing control of the group and decided to kill them all, kill us, then take our ship and leave. Mar getting older was making the others notice her and he was losing control even before we got there. It looked like he set and activated scuttling charges throughout the ship. No way of knowing how long he had it set up." She shook her head. "We couldn't find the mother or anyone else. We did find some bodies."

"What of the man? You avoided mentioning what happened to him."

So'duun took a deep breath. "When we found Mar... she was naked. That didn't make sense until later. I think he was grooming her for abuse. That he had planned to kill Oda for awhile and keep Mar around as a replacement wife, or something. When it became apparent that the others would fight over her and that her mother wouldn't go along with any of it he may have decided to get rid of her and put Mar in that situation to begin with." She shook her head. "I don't know what he did to her out there, but it wasn't an accident that she found herself in a cave with predators. I don't think Mar knows what he did either. She's very afraid of something but I don't think even she knows what it is."

"Tell me, why bring her back here?"

"She has a midichlorian count."

"Aaaaaah." Kriss nodded in dawning comprehension. "She has the gift, has been abused, is afraid..."

"Yeah. There's... potential for a bad situation, there."

"Most can't use it without training. It's just a gut feeling, a sense of things. How high is her count?"

"High enough for me to bring here here. Higher than Fenet's, even."

"I see." Kriss pulled back the hood of the white-and-gold robes she was wearing, looking troubled. "You want us to train her?"

"Dank farrik, no! She's a bomb waiting to go off. But she also doesn't want to leave the Light's Touch." She sighed. "Fenet likes her and she's grown attached to M8. They like her too. I think Fenet likes having somebody she can give the little sister treatment like she used to with the younger kids back in the temple."

Kriss furrowed her brow, leaning on her elbows against the rail. "You finally let her have a droid? I thought you didn't like droids."

"Ehh..." So'duun made a flippant gesture. "Jo rubbed off on me, I guess. I think Mandalorians just don't like them in general and we were friends a long time."

"You didn't answer my question, though."

"I wanted her to see the temple. Maybe she'll change her mind." So'duun shrugged. "Maybe she'll want to join part of the service corps, it's a good life. But I don't think I should ever try and take her on as a padawan. It's just too dangerous."

"Even so, she'll pick things up, staying with you. This could prove to be a dangerous situation, Ikmari. Are you sure you know what you're doing?"

"No?" So'duun laughed wryly. "Not really. But I don't think I should send her away. That feels like the wrong choice. Whatever she does, it needs to be of her own volition. She has never had any and she's gotten a taste now, taking it away would do more harm than good."

Kriss nodded and stood up straight. "We'll test her. Gauge her strength in the Force. Will you stay in berth for a few days?"

"It might be a good idea. She'll never see the whole temple in a single day."

"Then while you're here, I'd like you to consider my earlier suggestion."

"That would mean going the wrong way. Avar, I want to go to places we've never been, not go back to known space. Besides, Fenet is very young. I don't think she's ready."

"She is very talented."

"She's eager and unrestrained. She breaks the rule on attachement constantly. She knows what she's doing and she's competant with a lightsaber but she's never faced the mirror."

"She's ready though. I can't force your hand, but I really think you should consider visiting Ilum."

"Soon." So'duun rubbed her right temple.

"You didn't mention what happened to the man."

"Hm? Oh. He died."

"Oh? His own hand?"

"No. I killed him."

"There it is." Kriss nodded. "You think you shouldn't have?"

"No, just the opposite. I don't feel bad about it at all. He was more beast than man, lying to everyone there to keep them isolated so he could have a little kingdom of his own. I'll never feel bad about kiling somebody who keeps sex slaves. It's what he tried to do. It's revolting."

"I can see why you didn't opt to fight the cartels around Hutt space."

"I... don't like the hutts."

"Understandably, if that's how you feel about slavery. Why is that a sore spot?"

"When I was still with the Luka Sene, I saw the results of such abuse. Saw it." She gestured at the blindfold covering the hollows where her eyes were not.

"Through the Force."

"Yes. I could see the suffering and how deep it was inside them."

Kriss nodded. "In the same way I percieve it through music. Like meeting somebody who was trodden down to a single, sad note."

"Yes. Just so. Seeing what it did to them effected me deeply. Knowing how close this girl came to having it done to her... I took... exception."

"So why are you troubled?"

"Because I'm not troubled. I killed somebody and I feel nothing about it. Even as I feel nothing about it I can't help but sense I've lost something, some capacity I should have but I'm lacking in this case."

"I'm not sure that saving your empathy for those who deserve it is entirely wrong, but... it seems to me this apathy lies in a hatred of that sort of abuse. Hatred is a trap, Ikmari. It's easy to tell ourselves they deserve it, but empathy is and has to always be for everyone. We both know nobody is born a monster. The medical droids correct those kind of genetic defects, we only see sociopaths on undeveloped worlds. But even they deserve it too."

"These people aren't from the Republic. There is absolutely a chance that he wasn't... that his neurology was unbalanced. How could they? People like that are monsters, it's why we go to such lengths to treat that despite everyone hating eugenics."

"Yes. They are." Kriss nodded, watching Fenet and Mar while Mar tried a chyntuck and then immediately began fanning her mouth and panting from the spiciness. The wookiee's chuckles could be heard from across the room while he handed Mar water. "But to understand how somebody could come to do that, you have to understand them. The best way to prevent that sort of thing has always been to remove the factors which shape people to become that way, but we'll never figure out what those are if we can't see them as people. It's not as if everybody who is unbalanced is dangerous, the factors around them are also a major influence. That's something we can work on."

"What would you have done?"

"Captured him if possible."

"He was reaching for something when I ran him through."

Kriss tapped her chin with a finger, one hand holding her elbow. "Do you think you could have disarmed and captured him?"

"Probably."

"But you chose to kill him, instead."

"Yes." So'duun didn't even sound sorry about it, either.

"Ikmari, you're a good woman. You must meditate on this, learn to let go of this hate. This could be the weakness that destroys you, if you let it."

"It doesn't feel wrong to hate rapists and slavers."

"Does it feel right?"

"...A little?"

"That's a warning sign, my friend." She patted So'duun's shoulder. "Take my advice and don't go back out into the black. Spend some time here in the temple. Relax. Meditate on this. Then take your padawan to Ilum. Get away from all of this for a short time and give yourself time to make peace."

So'duun sighed. "I'm going to have to tell the exploration corps we'll be out of touch for awhile."

"I'll contact them for you. I want you to go down to the bathhouse and relax. I'll make sure your padawan and her charge are kept safe. Her name is Mar, you said?"

"Yes."

Kriss patted her shoulder. "Go on, relax. Please."

So'duun patted her hand, laying it over Kriss's as it rested on her shoulder. Then she turned, headed out of the terrarrium.

Kriss pulled the hood of her robes back up, then moved down the steps. Twice, she stopped to nod to other knights acknowledging her as they passed by. By the time she got to Fenet and Mar, all element of surprise was gone.

Mar was completely struck by her. Clothed all in white with gold fabric trim, Kriss seemed radiant to her. The womans headdress gave Mar the impression of somebody who was very very important and she couldn't help but shrink behind Fenet a little. Fenet, for her part, just grinned like an idiot. "Master Kriss! Kelbacca was showing us this." She wiggled a half-eaten chyntuck in the air.

"You're supposed to dice them up and cook them with other things, you know." Kriss couldn't keep the note of amusement out of her voice.

"Really?"

"Really. You ate it in the most punishing way possible and didn't scream. I am genuinely impressed."

That made Mar smile a little, relaxing. "You're very pretty. I thought you might be scary, but Fenet was right, you seem nice."

"Ah, my reputation precedes me? Well, I'll try not to disappoint. Would you come with me? I have some people I'd like you to meet, we call them seekers."

"What's a seeker?"

"A seeker is one who recruits for the Order. So'duun tells me you have some talent and the seekers will help us figure out how strong it is. Then we can work out how to help prevent it from becoming a curse for you."

"Oh. I don't think I want that."

"It's not always that bad, but the Force is a double-edged blade. Jedi must always fight the temptation to give in to the dark side."

That seemed ominous to Mar. "What's the dark side?"
 
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Chapter 02, Part 01 - Ashla and Bogan
Tens of thousands of years before anybody had ever heard the name Skywalker, the Tho Yor roamed the galaxy.

Eight ships. Massive, hulking pyramid-like structures spead around the galaxy. Their origins were a mystery. Or perhaps the secret had once been known but lost to the shrouds of time, for many wars and thirty millennia stretched between the time of the Tho Yor and the fall of the Republic at the hands of Sheev Palpatine. Across the galaxy, natives independantly discovered each of the ships and - through the Force - eventually were able to commune with them. To open them, plunder their secrets. To fly.

And so the journey began.

Roaming the galaxy, the Tho Yor searched for others like themselves. Others who could feel the push and pull of the Force. From the oceans of Manaan, one rose with the entire population of that world, seeking the stars. On Kashyyyk, the wookiees guarded and examined theirs until its secrets bloomed for them like a flower. On Dathomir, the first seers rode the rancor to board it before they took to the skies. On Ryloth, the deserts shone with reflected heat as the Twi'lek's boarded theirs for the first time, after finally reaching attunement with the ship.

The same story, again and again. They roamed, gathering many species, sharing knowledge in the Force and delving its secrets together.

Eventually, a massive, monolithic Tho Yor was discovered in a strangely configured solar system. They had come together at Tython for the first time. When they joined the massive Tho Yor found on the surface, the world shook with the power of the Force Storm that resulted in their arrival.

When it eventually passed, the eight ships settled the world and the Je'daii Order was born.

It was not always as it was in the end, a constant war between the light and darkness. In the beginning, the Je'daii sought balance. The twin moons of Tython, Ashla and Bogan, came to represent the two sides of the Force. As the Je'daii sought balance - the Bendu - within themselves, they sometimes fell out of balance. Those who tilted towards the darkness would be sent to Bogan to contemplate the light of Ashla, while those who had tilted too far into the light were sent to Ashla to contemplate the necessary contrast Bogan provided.

As it went, for thousands of years.

In 25,793 BBY a man named Xesh crash-landed on Tython. To this point, the Je'daii had been channeling the Force through solid melee weapons. Xesh brought to Tython the first force-saber, a weapon of the invading Rakata. At the time, Tython was under a grave threat and the force-saber changed the face of the Je'daii Order, allowing them to throw back the invaders. This was the first schism, as the force-saber was seen as a dark side weapon. To use it would push one into Bogan and it was shunned by the wielders of the light.

Thus began the first conflict, raging across Tython and consuming it. In the end the light won out but the survivors had lost all interest in Bendu. Now firmly set in the light, they renamed themselves the Jedi Order and moved to Ossus.

The destiny of the kyber crystal and the Jedi Order has been intertwined since the days of the Je'daii. Spread across the galaxy, the Force-sensitive crystals were coveted by the Jedi and it wasn't long before they were incorporated into the design of the force-saber, transforming it into a facet of the Light. A properly attuned kyber crystal would allow the user to wield their weapon as an extension of their connection of the the Force. The blade, for the first time, could leave an impression in the Force itself. The blade now had weight. Metaphysical weight. But the weapon was still incredibly inefficient, requiring the user to wear a backpack just to act as a mobile power plant to keep the saber active by a cable from the pack to the hilt. This limited movement and changed the balance of weight across the body, marking it more difficult to fight.

Ultimately it was the Dark Lords of the Sith who were able to solve the dilemma of the power consumption issues. An internal powercell was designed to combine with a power recycling system, converting heat back into electricity. As the blade produced its own heat, this was channeled back down into the power cell as electricity, recharging it in much the same way an alternator does a car battery. This refinement in the design completely removed this massive flaw in mass-to-power generation. Lightsaber fighting without the need to compensate for balance or the vulnerability of a cut power cable rather changed the face of the war. It wasn't until a long series of conflicts that the Jedi were able to adopt the technology for themselves, but the cost in blood was high. At first beset by few examples of the refined technology - since most of the Sith forces still used Force blades - it wasn't until after their victory over the darkness that the refinements were adopted en masse by the jedi order, roughly 5000 years before the Battle of Yavin.

In the long, deep history of the Force, from the Tho Yor to the Skywalkers, always the two facets leaned against each other. Ashla. Bogan. Bendu in the middle, always trying to hold them in sway. But as time went on, the balance was lost and then completely forgotten. The Bogan was shrunk to a tiny sliver of darkness in a galaxy of light. Or so it seemed.

Always, Tython waited in the Deep Core. Rediscovered several times after its eventual abandonment by the Jedi, it was resettled a few times. Fought over. Tainted. Rich in the Force but lost as the hyperlanes in the region changed and knowledge was lost. But always there, holding the deep secrets of the Je'daii. Of bendu.

Ultimately, a world with such rich history would be plundered, would it not? What secrets might lie there? As a padawan, So'duun had lost much sleep over those questions. The stories of Tython had captured her dreams when she was with the Luka Sene.

A deep part of her yearned to discover the location of the world and find the Tho Yor for herself. She had become a scourge of the archives when she'd arrived on Coruscant at first, spending all of her free time there reading the history of the Order. Even now, part of why she loved to explore so much was that they would occasionally find history from the Order's past. Sometimes its deep, deep past. Many things about the Order's history had been lost to time.

It had been a small miracle that she'd been able to put together as much of the story as she had. Months of detective work, scrolling through old files, hunting down independent data units and shaking maps out of smugglers. Then nearly a year of searching and although she never managed to rediscover Tython, she had found a great many artifacts from places long since thought to have been picked over by scavengers.

Her love of archaeology and Jedi history was what led her to the archives even now. She found the reading relaxing, the solitude a balm. She spent all of her time around Fenet and dearly cared for her padawan, but privacy was hard to come by on a ship as small as theirs. Solitude was something she struggled with, sometimes. The whole reason they had a bunk room at all was so that there could be a living space for them to meditate alone.

She didn't have access to the HoloNet while out in space, though. At least, not while away from Starlight. The glare of the screens didn't mean anything to her but there were interfaces for people such as her who didn't use traditional sight. She navigated the systems by touch alone, reading with her fingertips as the computer shifted the surface of the display to braille.

As she browsed idly she eventually drifted to Ilum and its history, since it had been brought up to her. The sheer span of time that people had been using the Force sometimes amazed her. Ilum especially was rich in history within the Order and they had been going there for lightsaber crystals forever. She herself had not, instead finding hers in a volcanic vent shortly before being knighted. Although blades could come in any color, the crystals that weren't shades of blue or green were slowly becoming rarer.

She leaned back, resting her hands in her lap and thinking about it. Fenet was still using the lightsaber she'd constructed as a youngling. Nearly every padawan lost their saber at some point but Fenet had never had it destroyed nor lost it. Neither of them were prolific fighters, not really.

It didn't seem urgent, taking Fenet to Ilum to construct a customized saber, rather than the template one she'd built as a ten year old. Finding the materials was a personal and sentimental thing and she knew Fenet had been doing that for some time now. The girls skill in engineering would probably let her have no trouble building it however she liked.

Perhaps it was time. Part of her yearned badly to get back out into the unknown regions, to keep mapping, to look over the next horizon and maybe discover something profound and amazing. But her first duty was to Fenet... and to Mar, now, she supposed.

As the temples archivist touched her shoulder she startled a little, lost in thought and suddenly snapped back.

"I'm sorry, Master So'duun, but if you're finished using the interface...?"

"Yes, of course." She got up, moving to allow the next person to take over the terminal. She had forgotten about the queue and gotten lost in thought. As she wandered through the glowing stacks of data tablets, she folded her arms behind her back, letting her mind wander back to where she had been before being interrupted.

Mar. She hoped the girls time with the seekers would result in her deciding to join the Service Corps. It didn't seem likely though. She sighed to herself, resolving to find and bring a data tablet pertaining to mental health and trauma. Probably something she needed to read up on anyways, considering herself.

When she'd gotten Fenet, the girl had been young, eager and full of awe at everything So'duun knew. Building a partnership with her had been easy, a bond of trust and time spent together reinforcing it. She didn't know this girl and Mar didn't come from a place of trust. So'duun couldn't help but worry that she would pick up on training just through proximity and...

And end up Bogan.

In the Luka Sene, they'd taught the philosophy of Bendu. It was where she'd heard of the concept to begin with. The Jedi lean into the light wasn't something she saw as an inherently bad thing. She certainly wasn't interested in leaning into the darkness because she'd seen the results of that. But Mar knew nothing of these philosophies, didn't understand the danger.

If she learned to use the Force through So'duun and then allowed her fear and anger to rule her, So'duun and Fenet would be the ones who paid for it. It would be up to them to stop her, to reel her back in. The more she thought about it, she wasn't sure she could bring Mar completely into the light. She'd just had too much happen to her, lost too much to ever dive into it with the kind of zeal most Jedi did.

But perhaps she could teach the girl balance. The idea of returning home wasn't something she savoured, but the Luka Sene would be perfect for Mar. Their focus on using the Force for non-combat sensory enhancement and spiritual balance was something she thought Mar might identify with more than the Jedi philosophy of non-attachement and unbridled altruism.

As she passed out of the archives into the main promenade of the temple, she watched the others as they talked, meditated, ate, relaxed or walked to wherever they were going. Bendu wasn't a philosophy she'd ever pursue herself, but there was no reason to teach Mar everything. She decided internally that ultimately, helping the girl find balance and peace within herself would be an acceptable victory.

With that resolution in mind, she turned and began to head towards the cafeteria for dinner, completely unaware of the pivot fate had just made on that decision.
 
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Chapter 02, Part 02 - Ashla and Bogan
Artificial sunlight filtered into the windows of the room, exposing the veins in the marble of the stone floor and making the gold filigree glitter. Younglings sat arrayed around Fenet and Mar, some on cushions, some on soft chairs, some simply on the floor. Rodian, the Wookiee that they had befriended in the terrarium, a few Humans, one Dupei, a Twi'lek girl and notably, a Dug.

Standing in the middle of the room was the most beautiful man Fenet had ever seen. She didn't really think much of archetypes and tended towards people she liked, even as young as she was. But she couldn't get over this guy. She'd never met this particular knight before. His skin was a silver color that seemed almost metallic in the way it caught the light, but it seemed just as likely he might be a little warm in the heavy robes he was wearing. His hair was white and spilled down around his shoulders, but his light colors only made the violet of his eyes stand out more.

She didn't realize she was staring until Mar poked her in the side of the head, making her blink a couple times, then look over to her and give her a questioning look. Fenet just patted her shoulder. This was all stuff she knew, but to Mar it was new and her mind was wandering as a result. She'd stopped taking in what the man was saying and started focusing on him.

Damn though. She couldn't help but think to herself.

"- with constant vigilance. Our emotions can betray us, causing us to let them in, let them take over. This can be a path to the dark side and lead us to ruin. The key isn't control, but acceptance."

Beside her, Mar tilted her head, clearly confused but unwilling to interrupt the unreasonably gorgeous knight giving the class. She couldn't even remember his name. Fenet desperately hoped Mar wasn't noticing this because So'duun would never let her live it down if she knew how distracted she was.

"Ah, yes?" The man gestured to Mar.

"I'm a little confused. If the bad emotions can destroy you, then you should accept them? Isn't that contradictory?"

"Not at all. The key is self-awareness. To feel something isn't necessarily a bad thing in of itself, but our emotions influence us and those of us who are sensitive to the Force are particularly vulnerable. The echoes of our emotions resonate through it. This is why you can sometimes feel the turmoil of a friend or someone you care for being in great need, or the sheer joy of someone not near you when they recieve good news. The Force connects us all but it connects us most strongly to those we have bonds with."

"But I thought attachment was a bad thing?"

"It's a little more complicated than that. I'm sorry, I don't think we've met."

"I'm Mar. I'm just... visiting." She pointed at Fenet, who immediately gave the man a little wave and struggled to make eye contact.

"Ah." He looked a little confused, but if the girl was here, then she ought to be. "Attachment can be a path to the dark side through the fear of loss. It's not the attachment that's the problem, it's the inability to accept loss. Deep grief can sometimes break a person. People do desperate things to protect the ones they love. A jedi must rise above this for the good of all or risk falling to their passions and becoming a risk to everybody around them. Their rage, their focus on themselves becomes a selfishness that will sweep aside anything and everyone. The dark resonances in the Force that they wallow in suppress their empathy and ability to be pro-social."

"So... attachment is okay as long as you're willing to put the good of others above it?"

"I suppose that's one way of looking at it. It's rare that somebody is capable of being so selfless, though."

Mar nodded, apparently satisfied.

"Today we're going to practice being aware of your surroundings without using your eyes. Extending your senses outward around you, then inward to yourself. A trained knight can do this constantly, running it in their mind like an algorithm at all times. Some of us, like the Miraluka, always see the world this way. Its this second sight in the Force, the ability to feel things out, that we're going to work on." He made a gentle movement with his hand and the lights in the room began to dim as the artificial windows 'tinted'.

"Master Coloth, what are we looking for?"

"[Enlightenment]." The translator Kelbacca wore had a funny, echoing voice Mar liked.

"Only in time, Kelbacca. We're simply trying to learn to recognize others in the Force around us. All you have to do is relax, control your breathing and clear your mind. Allow the Force to flow into you and fill the spaces you thoughts once had, passing through you. Feel out the currents of the room as the others do the same."

Mar closed her eyes. The wood-grain smell of the room and the fake sunlight made her feel relaxed. She had never tried to not think before, though. She found herself struggling to turn it off, a fragment of music she'd heard earlier looping in her mind, her thoughts trying to stray to different things.

Instead she focused on her breathing. In, then out. Soon she let it fill her entire mind, that one simple act. As she cleared her mind by narrowing her focus, she began to sense something she could only describe later as a sense of movement or wind. An invisible sense, something intangible.

Despite her closed eyes she could get a sense of where the others sat relative to her. Fenet felt like a little whirlwind, something occupying her focus. The kids felt calmer, more relaxed. She turned her attention to Coloth and gasped.

In her mind she felt a being of light. The radiance of his presence in the Force broke her focus and she blinked, thoughts flooding back in and returning her forcibly to the room.

"Are you alright?" Coloth's voice was soft.

"Uh huh." Mar nodded. "That felt strange." She looked over at Fenet. "What's got you so worked up?"

"Nothingdon'tworryaboutitI'lltellyoulater."

The vehemence of the reaction surprised Mar and made her blink, jerking her head back a little. "Okay?"

Coloth walked over to them and sat down in front of Mar, which prompted Fenet to sort of shift a little to the side to face them both. "How old are you, Mar?"

"About fourteen."

"You're not a youngling?"

"No. It's complicated." It was Mars turn to look uncomfortable, tilting her head and letting her hair cover one eye.

"That's alright. We meet all types here on Starlight." He smiled a little. "Try again?"

"I looked at you, but you were so bright."

"That was your first time, yes? Try it again."

Mar took a deep breath and let it out slowly, closing her eyes and trying to focus again. It didn't come as easily this time because she had to try and ignore an added sense of social pressure.

"Take your time. There's no rush."

She tilted her head a little at Coloth's ability to read her thoughts. The focus came slower, but it came and her awareness began to spread out. The others felt different now. Their attention was on her and Coloth. Coloth felt difficult to sense out, like looking at the sun. Fenet...

She got a sense of what was making Fenet uncomfortable suddenly and it broke again as she started giggling like a little madwoman.

"What's so funny?" Coloth leaned back, smiling.

"Nothing, nothing, it's... it would take awhile to explain." Mar shifted how she was sitting and tried to clear her throat for a third attempt.

"Okay." Coloth's voice was soothing to her. "This time, instead of extending your senses outward, extend them inward. Look at yourself rather than us."

Hmmm. Mar tried to clear her mind (A prospect made difficult by the mental image of steam coming out of Fenet's ears). She took a deep breath, then another, slowly letting her mind sink into the stillness and allow the strange not-sense she'd been practicing in. In her mind, she felt she'd always known it was there, but had never noticed it before. She was noticing it now.

As the room began to sink away, she moved without moving and found herself in a chamber of red stone.

I know this place. She'd been here before, it was her 'hiding spot' back on the crash-site planet. She'd come here to get away from the others for privacy, sometimes. Kept things hidden.

As she looked around the room seemed to shake and dust fell from every surface, clouding the air. It became hard to breath and she coughed, covering her mouth with her shirt. In the fog a girl was approaching her, a girl with mocha skin and black hair, wearing -

Wearing her clothes.

She looked at herself, this reflection of herself, and saw in her eyes only blackness.

The girl seemed to be pulled away as the room fell apart, darkness seeping in on every side as a monolithic, incredibly massive flying building loomed into view. Loomed so large she struggled to see it while tilting her head back, so large that as it passed overhead the sun was blotted out and she was left in shadow again.

She opened her eyes and found herself looking at Coloth, who was looking at her with a certain level of concern.

"Are you alright?"

"I... think so." Mar felt out of sorts, one step to the left of her conceptual self-image. "A little odd? Like I was just outside myself and I'm not quite sure if I'm back yet."

"What did you see?"

"I... saw myself. And then some kind of flying building?" She shook her head. "It didn't really make sense to me."

"Interesting. What about you?"

"I, um... nothing. I'm mostly here just to keep Mar company." Fenet couldn't look him in the eye.

"Ah, I see. It's alright. Even padawans still struggle to concentrate sometimes." He gave her a smile and got back up, walking to the center of the room. "As you've probably sensed, looking inward can be a lot more intense than just feeling out your surroundings. Lets give a hand to Mar. She managed it on the first try, even."

Mar couldn't help but turn a little red as the kids in the class clapped for her for a few seconds before Coloth moved on. "So, we could sense -"

"Thanks for not ratting me out." Fenet whispered to her, leaning in a little.

"Of course not. We're friends. Trying to break the rule of attachment?"

"Nooooo. He's... I'm not... nooooo. He's a full knight, we're just kids to him."

"Never say never." She elbowed Fenet gently, smiling.

"Ah, we're about to have a visitor." Coloth turned towards the chamber door just in time for it to open, a bald woman walking in with tattoos down her arms.

"Greetings, Jedi Coloth. Mar? Fenet? If you'll accompany me?"

They got up and waved to the younglings on their way out. It was Mar who asked first. "Where we heading?"

"Master So'duun has requested that we evaluate your skills. We'll test your prescience - that is, your ability to see the future - your ability to see remotely, the ability to pick up thoughts and the ability to move objects with your mind. We have particular exercises for younglings with no training in these things, so don't worry too much about performance. We're just trying to get a sense of you, okay?"

Mar nodded. "Okay. I don't mind. This place is pretty interesting."

Fenet patted her shoulder, giving her a one-arm hug as they followed the Seeker into the testing chambers.
 
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What a lovely start. My favorite character so far might be So'duun, simply because her flaws are most apparent. While sympathetic (and righteous, that asshole had it coming,) she's obviously self-centered. She interprets Mar's feelings through empathy rather than observation, imagining how she might react to such circumstances rather than watch Mar's behavior, and comes to a tentative conclusion deeply steeped in her own interests and goals. M8 makes for a lovely Watson, but doesn't seem to have much personality yet.

But it seems inevitable that the meat of the story will concern the two girls. I'm looking forward to learning more about both of them. Fenet is charming and relatable, and Mar's a cinnamon bun.

The story reads fairly easy so far, but every now and then I feel a momentary moment of doubt, and read back to see if I missed something. I think it could do with more imagery.

The foreman was wearing a red uniform with darker red trim. He caught sight of her as she approached and waved at the work crew, turning to face her. "I am Reg'im. You should not be here. Civilians are not allowed access to this dock and whoever allowed you into the lift to come here will likely be fined. You must return to the dock you came from. I have spoken."

We're in Star Wars! I wanna know more than what the foreman is wearing, especially if he's got an odd manner of speech. Is he human? Bipedal? A cloud of hovering, sentient space-worms in a hive-mind? Anyone with a name deserves a description, at least.

I'm already pretty invested in the story and the characters, so the bones of the story are there. Every now and then I feel like it could use a little more fleshing out. Whatever you're picturing in your head is probably pretty spectacular, so I wanna see it too.
 
What a lovely start. My favorite character so far might be So'duun, simply because her flaws are most apparent. While sympathetic (and righteous, that asshole had it coming,) she's obviously self-centered. She interprets Mar's feelings through empathy rather than observation, imagining how she might react to such circumstances rather than watch Mar's behavior, and comes to a tentative conclusion deeply steeped in her own interests and goals. M8 makes for a lovely Watson, but doesn't seem to have much personality yet.

But it seems inevitable that the meat of the story will concern the two girls. I'm looking forward to learning more about both of them. Fenet is charming and relatable, and Mar's a cinnamon bun.

The story reads fairly easy so far, but every now and then I feel a momentary moment of doubt, and read back to see if I missed something. I think it could do with more imagery.



We're in Star Wars! I wanna know more than what the foreman is wearing, especially if he's got an odd manner of speech. Is he human? Bipedal? A cloud of hovering, sentient space-worms in a hive-mind? Anyone with a name deserves a description, at least.

I'm already pretty invested in the story and the characters, so the bones of the story are there. Every now and then I feel like it could use a little more fleshing out. Whatever you're picturing in your head is probably pretty spectacular, so I wanna see it too.

The foreman was an ugnaut too. Red's "I'm a big time important person" color to them. :p

I'll try to keep the description recommendation in mind, you're probably right. The honest truth is that I don't actually know Starlight Beacon as a location especially well and the idea of taking creative license on something which has a description irks me. Soon that won't be much of an issue though, because it's the only canon place in this particular time and the rest of the wide open universe is there for me to play with.

Also, thanks for the feedback. It's good for me as a writer to try and grow to cover the places I'm weakest and hearing other peoples perspective on the story gives me more space to grow ideas.
 
Chapter 02, Part 03 - Ashla and Bogan
The Seekers chamber was less ornate than the rest of the temple, but no less refined. Wroshyr wood flooring gave it a natural feel, something further enhanced by the greenary around the upper edges of the room which seemed to hide the light sources. Diffuse golden light seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. Each of the seekers sat in a semicircle in front of a configurable cushioned chair meant to accomodate any number of different physiologies.

Mar had been sitting in that chair for about two hours now and was getting impatient.

She'd been asked to see images on a tablet she couldn't see the screen of and with some concentration, after clearing her mind like Coloth had shown her, she could do it with little difficulty. It was the same with trying to pick up the surface thoughts of others, it required a level of concentrated effort but with at least a little, she could do it. Finding this out rather came as a surprise to her because she'd never really tried anything like it before.

"Focus on the fruit and try to move it by willpower alone. Use the Force to move it from across the room." The woman who had brought them in had been the only person to speak so far, the others remaining silent and participating only when more than one person was necessary. She knew nothing of them but the few stray thoughts they had allowed her to glean.

She stood up suddenly and the seekers blinked as she stretched, arching her back like a cat with her arms above her. Her spine crackled when she did it and she felt an immense sense of relief, suddenly.

"Are you well?"

"Mmhmm." Mar nodded. "I just needed to stand up. You mind if I pace around a little back here while I try to do this?"

The seekers took a moment to look around at each other before the woman who had brought them in nodded. "That should be fine. Please proceed."

She meandered a little around the floor, rolling her shoulders. The more she practiced throughout the day the more she began to get the hang of feeling things out. She'd had more practice in the last 24 hours than she had ever had in her life, but each time she used the Force to extend her awareness in some way it felt like stretching a muscle she didn't know she had which sorely needed it.

She focused on the stand in the middle of the room, clearing her mind. It seemed to her that the goal was never to move the fruit itself, she had never had that power. Telekinesis would've been very handy to have earlier in her life, it's not something she could ever do before. The jedi way of things seemed to be to allow themselves to become a conduit of the Force with their intent as a kind of focusing lense for what happened. Everything around it was about keeping oneself in balance so that they could do that properly.

So if that was the case, they never moved anything at all. They didn't even direct the Force to do it. It was a little like using your body to change currents in water in a narrowed space, but the narrowed space was her focus and rather than her body, it was her mind changing the currents in the Force. As she reached out she could feel the room around her, the seekers in their radiant light, so much like Coloth. Fenet in the next room over, quiet and still in meditation. The living energy of the fruit on the stand. She reached out, not pulling the fruit but shifting the currents of the Force around it, compressing them down upon it and then pulling the compression towards her.

On the stand, nothing seemed to happen at first. Then it jiggled, just a little, as she fumbled it while trying to get the feel right. Seeking to bring it down on every side of the fruit at once, she didn't want to crush it. She felt she could, if she tried. Soon she felt her hold on it stabilize and began to lift.

The fruit rose from the stand in the middle of the room, one of the seekers sitting up a little straighter in his seat as she slowly floated it towards herself, eyes closed, hand outstretched. When she closed her finger on it she seemed to bodily relax all at once, exhaling a breath she hadn't known she was holding. Smiling to herself, she bit into it and found it sweet with a strange tang she liked and an intensity of flavor that made her eyes water.

Then she looked up at the seekers, who were looking at her with something a little close to surprise. Or maybe concern. It wasn't easy to tell.

"Did I do something wrong...?"

"No." The woman shook her head. "No, you didn't. You've succeeded at every test we set you. Who trained you?"

"Nobody. I'm just using what I learned earlier while waiting for you. Everytime I quiet the noise in my head, it gets a little easier, but it's not something I ever really practiced. I have to work at keeping it up, really hard."

"You're far beyond the age we would accept a new youngling, but it's obvious that if you're not at least somewhat trained, you're talented enough to be a threat to others. How do you feel, Mar?"

She took a deep breath, then performed a quick internal check on herself. "Satisfied? I don't think that's the right word for it. I feel like I've been missing something and today, I've had nothing but heapfuls of it. I'm... I haven't been happy for a long time." She frowned. "I miss my mom. I'm not sure she died, to be honest. I never saw her, they never found her. But that's probably just wishful thinking on my part, and... now I know what the situation really was. How much danger I was in. Part of me resents that she holds some responsibility for that."

Mar looked down, away from them. "When I came here I was really uncertain. I still am, but it's different. I'm not afraid that So'duun will send me away now. It's more that I'm uncertain about... this. This talent of mine. Because I keep hearing about how dangerous it can be but you all seem very reluctant to teach me anything. So'duun kept mentioning something called the Service Corps, are you going to send me away there?"

"No." The woman shook her head. "No, if So'duun wants you to accompany her and her padawan, she has the right to do that. It's not unheard of to take a second padawan, it's just very rare because often the students benefit more from a single, personal relationship with their master. It's obvious you have a good relationship with Fenet, so that seems to be of little issue. We'll discuss it further, but I think I'll make the recommendation that you recieve the basic level of training and then be re-assessed when So'duun decides you're ready."

"I have a question."

"Yes?" The woman folded her hands, tilting her head slightly at Mar.

"What happens if I turn bad? What do you do with fallen Jedi?"

An undercurrent of disquiet ran through the group, but it was left to the woman to answer. "Jedi who voluntarily leave the Order are free to do so, though discouraged. Those who wield the Force for personal reasons or who harm others are dealt with as we would any other dangerous criminal - we hunt them down and stop them by any means necessary."

Mar nodded. "I understand. Thank you. Should I go?"

"That will be all for now, yes. Fenet should be waiting outside for you."

Mar nodded, then turned on the spot and strode towards the glass doors which hissed open silently for her. She found Fenet sitting in the lotus position on a bench with her hands in her lap.

"Are you meditating, or are you asleep?"

Fenet opened one eye, giving her a skeptical look. "I was meditating. How'd you make out?"

"I think I unnerved them a little. They don't want to train me but I'm learning too fast for them to just not do that. I'm not incredibly strong, but I'm definitely learning fast."

Fenet nodded. "I could feel you reach out and touch my mind earlier. Now that we're done here, do you want to head back to the ship for the night?"

Mar nodded, shoulders sagging a little. "Yeah. This place is really nice but it's... I feel safer on the ship, does that make sense?"

"It makes perfect sense." Fenet nodded.

The walk down to the open promenade of the temple didn't take long. Rectangular, long and several stories tall the ceiling was paneled in screens fitted to look like windows, giving the impression of being on a planet with a blue sky and bright sunlight. Marble flooring with gravel pillars and gold inlay gave a sense of opulance to what would otherwise be a spartan but grandiose open chamber. Dozens of jedi sat on benches or garden ledges which boxed in the base of the pillars, greenary littering the hall and filling it with the scent of a hundred kinds of flowers. The other end of the promenade held the main lift down to the other levels of the station and so it was there that they headed.

When the turbolift door opened, they found themselves face to face with So'duun herself, who joined them in the lift.

"How did it go with the seekers?"

Mar swayed a little on her feet. "How do you feel about taking on a second student?"

So'duun tilted her head, then turned to face the girl. "What?"

"Well, I kept passing their tests. They said I'm not very strong, but -"

"You were able to lift the fruit?"

"Yeah. I ate it while they talked to me. Kinda want to find out what it was so I can get more, actually."

So'duun seemed a little gobstruck. "I... see." She put her hands on her hips and flicked Fenet's shoulder when she began to snort-giggle. "Not literally."

"I can't help it, every time you say that -"

"Yes... yes." She take a deep breath, exhaling slowly. "I'll talk to the seekers and see what they say. Have you ever heard of the Luka Sene, Mar?"

"Nope."

"On Alpheridies, the Miraluka civilian government runs an organization called the Luka Sene for those of us who wish to learn to expand our ability to see the world through the Force. I started out there and then later joined the Jedi temple after graduating. Luka Sene focuses a lot on awareness and perception, truthsaying and pathfinding. There isn't as much focus on combat. Do you think you would be interested in that?"

"Yes? But I also still want to learn combat. I... I love doing this. It feels like magic, almost. Like running when I didn't know I could walk. I want to learn more, I want to learn everything. A whole school focused on that sounds amazing but... eventually." She shrugged. "I still think I want to stay with you. I know you don't want me around -"

"No." So'duun stopped, putting both hands on Mars shoulders and kneeling down to come face to face with the girl. "Mar, listen to me. I like you, I'm fine with you staying with us on the ship. My reluctance is concern for you. I don't want to condemn you to a life of selfless altruism without you knowing you had choices. I don't want to train you and risk your sanity because the pain you've experienced was too much for you. This isn't an easy life. It's dangerous and challenging, requires constant training. Jedi do die, sometimes. We're always getting sidetracked helping people instead of focusing on the things we want to do... it sometimes feels like it's futile to try and help anybody because there's always more. Don't decide while you're still learning your choices, okay? Learn, but don't decide in your heart just yet. If the seekers recommend it, I'll train you. Fenet and I will teach you everything we know about the light. But the life of a jedi isn't something you're being made to do, okay?"

Mar scooted forward to hug So'duun and nodded. "Thank you."
 
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The foreman was an ugnaut too. Red's "I'm a big time important person" color to them. :p

I'll try to keep the description recommendation in mind, you're probably right. The honest truth is that I don't actually know Starlight Beacon as a location especially well and the idea of taking creative license on something which has a description irks me. Soon that won't be much of an issue though, because it's the only canon place in this particular time and the rest of the wide open universe is there for me to play with.

Also, thanks for the feedback. It's good for me as a writer to try and grow to cover the places I'm weakest and hearing other peoples perspective on the story gives me more space to grow ideas.

My eyes slid right over the word "ugnauts," twice, without thinking about it. Maybe it's just me, after all. The latest chapter's imagery was perfect. We don't get much on the Seekers, but they were never the point. I could clearly imagine the scene before them and the walk through that well-described corridor.

"No." So'duun stopped, putting both hands on Mars shoulders and kneeling down to come face to face with the girl. "Mar, listen to me. I like you, I'm fine with you staying with us on the ship. My reluctance is concern for you. I don't want to condemn you to a life of selfless altruism without you knowing you had choices. I don't want to train you and risk your sanity because the pain you've experienced was too much for you. This isn't an easy life. It's dangerous and challenging, requires constant training. Jedi do die, sometimes. We're always getting sidetracked helping people instead of focusing on the things we want to do... it sometimes feels like it's futile to try and help anybody because there's always more. Don't decide while you're still learning your choices, okay? Learn, but don't decide in your heart just yet. If the seekers recommend it, I'll train you. Fenet and I will teach you everything we know about the light. But the life of a jedi isn't something you're being made to do, okay?"

So'duun really hates this life, huh? Or maybe she just resents it, as a Miraluka who never truly had a choice in perceiving the world through the Force. She's approaching these resentments through a compassionate angle, trying to prevent someone else from feeling the feelings that she fears, but that's because she hasn't really tackled these emotions head-on yet, I reckon.

Pretty intense conversation for an elevator.
 
Chapter 02, Part 04 - Ashla and Bogan
The next day was spent uneventually. Fenet dragged Mar through the shopping district for several hours, restocking the ship for a third person (and getting a replacement shipment for those awful meal packs So'duun kept buying). It also brought up several smaller logistical issues that nobody had really considered, such as clothing for Mar or personal hygiene stuff. The clothing took up most of the time, with Fenet and Mar playing dress-up with each other and driving the poor sullustan running the place up the wall and back down again. In the end, they ended up spending nearly all of Fenet's personal money, something which Mar couldn't stop feeling awful about despite Fenet's assurances.

With supplies stocked and a new set of updated environmental suits acquisitioned from the temple, they were ready to go. The only thing they were stuck waiting on was a final shipment of meal packs, which Fenet absolutely would not leave without. In the end it delayed them for nearly an hour with the delivery droid rolling into the bay making a terrible grinding noise, which neatly explained the bad pace. Whoever it belonged to would have hell to pay because the ugnauts in the docking bay seemed to take its poor state of repair as some kind of professional insult.

While the group of ugnauts bickered with each other over who would fix the droid and who would get to admonish the completely irresponsible droid owner, the shipment was dropped onto the cargo lift. Mostly it was the second job that they wanted and while they worked it out, Mar punched the control to close the lift, the lowered section of the cargo bay floor rising up to come level with the deck. It stopped with a clank that Mar felt in her feet, followed by the soft hiss of a hermetic seal closing.

She grinned and gave M8 a high-five as she passed by it on its way to secure the cargo shipment, lest it slide around while the ship moved. "Thanks, M8. That looks REALLY heavy. How many packs are there?"

"One hundred and fifty four. It appears that one may have been dropped, or perhaps stolen."

"Oh well. It's only one. Is there anything you need before we get moving?"

"I will be fine, thank you. Do you still wish to learn the ship systems?"

"Yeah. Why, you gonna do some repair work?"

"No, but hyperspace travel only requires the use of the hyperdrive systems, allowing time for a full diagnostic of the thruster control systems. This would allow me to teach you how to complete a diagnostic of the thruster control systems."

"Ah, okay. That... sounds fun." She patted M8's arm, then wiped her hand off on her pants after accidentally touching the greased hinge of its arc spanner. Making her way down the corridor, she ran her fingertips along the grooves in the walls and walking with half-lidded eyes as she simply drank in the moment.

It was still hitting her, that her life trapped on that stupid rusty desert planet was over. She really did miss her mother, but part of her also resented the woman bitterly for allowing Janis to do what he had managed to do. The fact that her mother hadn't even been out looking for her when the jedi came, she was busy trying to ambush them. That she hadn't noticed anything. Or maybe just didn't care.

Deep in her heart she was deeply, deeply angry that the people she had trusted before to protect her had instead victimized her. Laying in the bunk late at night and listening to Fenet's breathing as she slept, Mar had wondered if this would be more of the same. Would she wake up one morning to find So'duun had decided she 'owed' her anything?

She'd thought about it and quickly came to the conclusion that the So'duun and Fenet she had known for the last two days weren't capable of it. More than that, she felt safe here. She'd always had good hunches but being on this ship felt like she was where she ought to be, somehow. She'd probably be warier if a man joined the crew, but M8 was the closest they had and it didn't threaten her at all. Just the opposite, really. More importantly, if she spent the rest of her life thinking that way, she might not get anything done.

It wasn't that easy, though. She'd found herself tense around the men in the shopping district. Coloth hadn't made her feel that way and neither had the twi'lek boy who tried to dance with her the day before, but somehow she couldn't shake the feeling of everpresent, low-intensity threat all around them the entire day they'd been wandering around shopping. It had only abated when they went back to the docking bay.

As she slipped into the bridge and sat down at the spare console, she flicked it on and brought up a diagram of the ship, top-down and side views showing ship systems functionality and power distribution. As Fenet ran the pre-flight checks, she rerouted auxiliary power to the hyperdrive to warm it up.

"M8's got the last shipment handled. I think we're just about ready. Where we going, So'duun?"

"Once you clear Starlight, I'd like you to bring the ship about for a jump to Ilum. Mar, can you pull it up in the nav console and run the hyperspace calculations?"

"I... have no idea how to do that."

So'duun nodded. "Right. How'd you move the power around, then?"

"There's a picture on the screen and I can just drag icons around to assign priorities."

"Oh. ...Dammit. I have to do it by touch. Okay, you get to handle power distribution from now on, I'll do the hyperspace calculations this time. Fenet?"

"We're ready to go. M8, you good?"

"The cargo is secure and I am locked into my docking clamp. All seals have been closed and the airlocks secured."

"Thanks for that, saves us a few minutes of redundant safety checks."

"Is that not an oxymoron?"

"Everyone's a comedian these days." Fenet muttered it to herself as she hit two switches above her, unlocking the docking clamps and opening the comm. "Starlight Beacon, this is Light's Touch. Request permission to clear the dock."

"Permission granted, Lights Touch. You're third in the queue. May the Force be with you."

"Thanks, Starlight." On the view port in front of them, a HUD was projected onto the glass marking the ships ahead of them by number and estimated time of departure. They had about five minutes to wait.

"Sooo... what's Ilum?"

Fenet grinned over her shoulder, looking back at Mar for a moment. "It's the hidden world that we get most of our lightsaber crystals from. Do I really get to do it?"

"You really do. We're going to go so Fenet can complete a Force quest to find a new kyber crystal and complete her own lightsaber."

"Oh! That sounds really cool, actually."

So'duun chuckled wryly. "I'd accuse you of making a pun if you knew anything about the place."

Fenet nodded in comprehension. "So that's why we got the environmental suits. Full seal, though? Really?"

"They have the best thermal protection and you can just remove the neck ring for the helmet, it's not that big of a deal. You'll thank me when we get there and leave the ship."

"If you say so." She watched as the final ship went ahead of them and the Light's Touch lifted to follow, the dynamic HUD on the window creating a flight lane for Fenet to navigate through. A minimal safety distance for hyperspeed ticked down steadily as they left the dock and Fenet kicked the engines in, heading for the edge of the jump exclusion zone.

"Hyperjump calculations complete, sending them over now."

"Got 'em, thanks boss." Fenet spoke absentmindedly as the HUD created a jump point marker and she swung around to face it, then began to approach the jump point. "Going to light speed in three.. two... one."

The stars dragged out in front of them and they broke into the tunnel of hyperspace, the HUD on the window changing from flight directions to a large timer for when to break the jump. "Okay! We're all set. Got anything to do for three hours?"

Mar stood up. "Yeah, I promised M8 I'd let it teach me how to do something. I'll be down in the cargo hold."

"Gotcha. Thanks for the help." Fenet leaned back in her flight chair, pulling the lever to let her tilt the backrest further than it usually went. "Mmmm. You gonna come out with us?"

"Actually, I thought I might spend some time in meditation. Master Kriss made me aware of the need for some self-reflection."

Fenet glanced over at her, then shrugged. "Mind if I bring Mar?"

So'duun seemed puzzled. "Will she want to go? Ilum is pretty cold and the path to your kyber might require jedi agility."

"Maybe? I haven't asked her, but it can't hurt, can it? Worst that happens is she has to come back and wait in the ship."

"Hmm. I suppose you have a point. It would probably be nice to have the quiet on the ship, too. But I'd like you both to bring locator FOBs, just in case."

"Yeah, no problem." Fenet got up and grinned, heading down to the cargo bay.

She found Mar and M8 hovering around one of the computer consoles and glanced over their shoulders, realizing it was just a thruster control diagnostic. Probably not a bad idea on a jump this long, actually. While they worked she started going through her workshop, pulling together parts.

Her lightsaber handle was - of all things - wood. Wroshyr wood, hollowed out and varnished to make room for the necessary electronics within. She'd brought the branch it came from back to the ship, sawed it and worked the wood herself. Laying it on the workbench, she tapped the dynamic surface of the bench and brought up glowing lines for a basic interface, then began marking out spaces for the various parts she would need to build her lightsaber.

At some point while she was examining parts and deciding which of the spares she would use, Mar materialized next to her. "Hey. What's all this?"

"I've been storing the stuff to build my lightsaber for awhile. I kept buying parts and then finding better parts so I'd buy them and then I had spares, so now I just... have a bunch of lightsaber parts. Not all of them are the same quality though and some of the pieces will need to be machined, something to work on while we're jumping."

"Am..." Mar seemed a little uncertain. "Am I supposed to get a lightsaber?"

"Have you ever touched one before?"

"No."

"Then no. Not yet. But!" She hed up a finger at the crestfallen look on Mars face, "But. When mine is built I can modify the lightsaber I'm using right now to lower the power output. That's how we make training sabers for younglings. At the minimum power output the blade will sting you but not really harm you. It's like being hit with the most inefficient shock baton in the galaxy."

"You'll train me?"

"Yep, but we've gotta start from the basics. I'll probably end up teaching you shii-cho. Once you've mastered that, you can start doing the makashi drills with me. So'duun keeps telling me my soresu needs work, so we'll do those too, I guess."

"What do those words mean?"

"Oh! They're lightsaber combat forms. Shii-cho is the most basic. Makashi is more of a mix of offense and defense, but it's really a melee combat fighting form, so it's mostly about saber-on-saber combat. Soresu is a defensive style which is a good basis for other forms such as Shien and Djem So. Makashi is the basis for Ataru, so you have to master Makashi and Soresu in order to learn Ataru, Shien and Djem So. The final form uniting all of those is Niman, which is a generalist style for combat that focuses a lot on Force powers. And then there's Juyo... which is really a style only used by masters. It's the most aggressive one."

Mar nodded slowly. "Guess I have a lot to learn then."

"Oh, you're just gonna love the exercise routines, heh."
 
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My eyes slid right over the word "ugnauts," twice, without thinking about it. Maybe it's just me, after all. The latest chapter's imagery was perfect. We don't get much on the Seekers, but they were never the point. I could clearly imagine the scene before them and the walk through that well-described corridor.

I do that too when reading sometimes, it's easy to get ahead of yourself and skip a line from impatience.


So'duun really hates this life, huh? Or maybe she just resents it, as a Miraluka who never truly had a choice in perceiving the world through the Force. She's approaching these resentments through a compassionate angle, trying to prevent someone else from feeling the feelings that she fears, but that's because she hasn't really tackled these emotions head-on yet, I reckon.

Pretty intense conversation for an elevator.

She's had experiences in the past with people who couldn't handle the life, but that's a facet of the story to tell later ;)
 
Chapter 02, Part 05 - Ashla and Bogan
The door of the Light's Touch's airlock opened and the freezing wind blew in, causing Mar to flinch as though struck. Growing up on a hot planet was doing her no favors here. The only viable landing site for any ship was a small shelf of rock a short distance from the entrance to the temple, forcing her and Fenet to run out there on foot.

"Let's do a final check, make sure our climbing gear is good. We'll have some time to kill on the way to the temples entrance." Fenet jogged down the ramp lightly and Mar followed, grimacing at the wind and then reaching up to tap the neck collar of her environmental suit. Immediately the helmets spine rose from behind her head, then expanded out sideways and closed a small force shield in front of her face, giving the world a light blue tint. A second later the audio feed from outside the suit kicked in and everything stopped being muffled.

She shook her head, blinking hard as the HUD for the suit appeared in front of her face. A tracking marker appeared next to Fenet, making her much more visible in the blowing snow. It was a little difficult to see so she worked to keep up with the padawan, who seemed to have endless amounts of stamina. Mar wasn't exactly out of shape but Fenet was just a machine.

She wondered just what the hell So'duun could do if Fenet was just a student.

So am I, she reminded herself. It felt surreal. While she let the helmet do the work of keeping Fenet visible, she checked over the climbing claws on her suits arms. Opening her hand she extended them, grabbed them and flexed them, tilting her hand down and causing the climbing grips to curl inward. She tossed her hands back, letting go so they could fold back into the compartments of her forearms, then turned her arms to check the grappling hooks.

Satisfied that both sets of devices were in good working order, she sprinted a little to catch up with Fenet. "Hey! Just how difficult is this place to even get around?"

Fenet glanced at her, then grinned at the closed helmet, reaching up to her own neck to do the same. A few seconds later the outside audio feed was lowered and Fenet's voice was projected inside her helmet. "Usually, a youngling has some training when they come here. The grappling hooks are your safety net. Todays lesson is agility, first tier. You get to practice wall running."

"Huh. Okay. Why the grips, then? Climbing too?"

"Parts of the temple are built vertically and the crystal caves are vast. We'll need to climb, wall run, probably use the hookshots too. Depends on where we end up going."

"You sound like you're not sure."

"I'm not! This is more than just a spelunking mission. We'll probably be out here for hours, which is why we have the full suits instead of just some warm clothes. The added tracking systems make rescue easier if we get trapped, too."

"Trapped?" Mar sounded alarmed. "That could happen?"

"Big, big caves. We've been exploring them for thousands of years and we've never uncovered it all. There's a reason we're bringing food and wearing water-retention and recycling suits. This could take awhile."

"Oh. Okay." Mar said it with a somewhat alarmed lack of enthusiasm.

"You can always go back, don't worry. You don't have to do this for awhile, still."

"...No. I can do this." She put her resolution into her voice and Fenet nodded in her helmet, saying no more.

The entrance of the temple loomed in front of them, massive and tall. A high arch set in the cliff face, parts of it had been claimed by ice, other parts of it hewn by erosion and giving the entire surface a pitted, embattled look. The sheer height of it intimidated Mar a little. "We're not gonna have to climb all the way up there are we?"

"Nah. C'mon." As she approached the front of the temple, Fenet pulled her lightsaber out and activated it. The snaphiss of the lightsaber became a hissing, bubbling noise accompanied by a high pitch whine as she stabbed the blade into the ice and began to force-boil it. Mar was a little confused at first, then Fenet began to slowly carve a circle out of the ice in a cone shape. A moment later the huge chunk of ice fell out and Fenet began work on carving out the edges.

It took about five minutes to make their way through the ice. Already snow was filling the tunnel and the run-off from Fenet's lightsaber was re-freezing. They made their way into a tunnel, climbing up a short vertical ledge to a massive cylindrical chamber.

The chamber was clearly much, much larger than was actually visible. It was partially filled with snow up to the chests of the two huge, hooded statues within. In the center of the chamber hung the biggest crystal she'd ever thought possible. She reached out -

A resonance in the Force, echoes of hundreds of thousands of eager younglings, ages of enthusiasm seeping into the apparatus of the room.

- and realized it was kyber, gasping softly and bringing a hand to her mouth, only to bonk it off the screen of the helmet. The HUD fritzed for a moment in front of her and she got annoyed with herself, deactivating it and retracting the helmet now that they were inside.

"This is incredible. What is all this?"

Fenet removed her helmet as well, gesturing to the swinging arm at the edges of the chamber which traced the edges of the ledge they were standing on. "See that wall of ice at the bottom of the chamber? We need to get through it, but cutting through like we just did is completely impractical."

The ice wall in question was obviously artifical. Water was piped in to close it up periodically, resulting in an icefall dozens of feet thick.

"Remember how you pulled the fruit during the test?" Mar nodded to her friend. "Can you try doing that to the crystal in the center? We want the hook hanging at the bottom of that rope underneath it."

Mar reached out, squinting as she struggled to get the currents of the Force to do what she wanted. Then she realized her error and relaxed, focusing more on the intent. As her thoughts cleared she felt the inward, energizing rush she'd come to associate with letting the Force in. As she did the currents of the room changed, tightning around the hook and yanking it towards her, forcing her to scramble to catch it. When she did she found it surprisingly heavy, almost losing her balance.

"Great! Here, hook it into this." Fenet indicated the swinging arm of the center chamber and once Mar has the hook locked in, she stepped back.

Fenet grinned. "Now watch this." She gestured and the arm swung violently to the other side of the room with a loud clang. As it impacted, Fenet threw her arms out to the side and closed her fists, activating some kind of device with the Force that Mar couldn't see. Sunlight - focused through prisms and mirrors from the outside - poured into the chamber from above the statues, lensing through the crystal in the center, which was now in place to focus the beam down into the icefall for this time of year.

The expected hiss never came. Rather, the ice cracked with a laser-like sound at first, chunks of it sloughing off as the focused laser of sunlight began to flash boil the surface of the icefall, forcing it to contract and cracking the ice repeatedly. It wasn't long before the way was clear, the icefalls tunnel dripping with melt and the sunlight cutting out as Fenet let go.

They approached the ledge and Fenet unhooked the central crystal, letting it swing back into place before jumping down. Mar was less eager to try that stunt. Embedding the hook of her grapple into the ledge, she lowered herself down, then sent the signal to the grapplehead to retract so she could reel it back in once she was down on the ground. She followed Fenet into the tunnels.

The tunnel lead to a second vertical shaft, this one resembling a staircase. But again, melt water had flowed in at some point and now most of the path was frozen over, forcing anybody wanting to go up or down to climb it vertically. But their destination was on the other side opposite to them, allowing them to simply grapple and swing cross and head directly into the caves.

"Here we are." Fenet spoke with quiet reverence and Mar could see why. The unassuming black stone that peeked out from the ice faces hid a treasure trove. They stood on a ledge, one of many with deep vertical spaces between them where Mar could hear running water. They were in a chamber, a long and somewhat horizontal one, shaped like a shelf and curving downwards at the end. On almost every surface, colors glinted where kyber crystals, whole and partial and broken and fragmented, littered the caves. They seemed almost to glow from within, making the entire chamber a rainbow of colors broken by the snow and basalt where it formed ridges and ledges.

"Wow." It was all Mar could say. "This is... wow." Beside her, Fenet nodded silently and then sat down.

"What are you doing?"

"I need to meditate. Find my path through the caves. Do you want to wait here, or explore on your own? Your suit will let me find you and you can always open the commlink if you get stuck."

Mar thought about the prospect of waiting while Fenet sat there for hours. "I think I'll have a look around."

"Stay safe, then. Be sure to turn on your suits breadcrumbs."

Mar nodded, unhooking a small control tablet from her suits belt and using it to access its internal systems. She turned the breadcrumbs on and the heels of her boots began to leave a small radiological signature she could follow backwards, but would decay within a day or so.

Firing the hookshot, she yanked on it to make sure it was secure before using it to swing across to the next ledge, two dozen feet away. As she retracted the first hook she fired the second mid-air, letting herself freefall and swing forward on momentum while doing it. A second swing and she let go, landing on the ledge and tucking into a roll to bleed her inertia, then opening one of the climbing claws and gripping the ledge she was sliding along to come to a hard stop.

She laughed, sounding - to her own ears - a little unhinged. It was far from the first time she'd been caving, but she'd never had equipment this good to do it with before.

Standing up, she ran her fingertips gently along the kyber embedded in the walls in front of her -

Soft resonances, formless but only with general impressions of a temperment and like ill-fitting clothing, none of them felt like a close match to hers.

- and then dropped her hand, looking around the chamber. She was beginning to understand why Fenet had wanted to stop and meditate. She wanted to feel her way through the currents, but Mar didn't have the patience for that.

She took a deep breath, then began to follow the ledge, one hand using the climbing grip to keep secure to the wall as she began to make her way forward through the first chamber of the cave. The soft whispers of the kyber, the eddies in the Force that the crystals made, felt energizing as she let them in and began to follow the currents.
 
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Chapter 02, Part 06 - Ashla and Bogan
When Fenet finally stood up, she felt she knew which way to go. Rather than crossing the chasm as she'd watched Mar do, she turned and followed the ledge towards the mouth of an alcove providing a path into a different chamber of the caves. The path wasn't anything close to even and the pacing wasn't very fast, the smooth basalt and ice making navigation treacherous.

The tunnel curved downward in a lazy jagged spiral, opening to a large chamber with a dead drop going down. Fenet peered over the side carefully, seeing a dull glow from deep in the chasm where volcanic activity chewed at the feet of the caves. Warm air rose from the chasm and most of the ice simply didn't have much of a reach in this particular chamber.

The chamber itself was massive, though. If the Light's Touch could fly through the ground it would have had no problem hovering in the middle of this chamber without touching the sides. It resembled a massive underground ravine, huge chunks of kyber lining the ceiling and walls, far too large to be of use as a focusing crystal for anything. The walls of the chamber weren't sheer, either. Jagged and broken, many dozens of ledges lined the chamber, which sloped a little at the bottom where the running lava would occasionally break the surface of the lava tubes at the bottom. It was plain to her that most of the material running through them wasn't open to the air, the lava tube self-sealing but still being broken enough to leak hot air in.

She reactivated her helmet. Closing up around her face, the HUD activated and she could see the atmospheric composition of the chamber. There was quite a lot of decent air, but as she proceeded inward she could see that toxic gases were filtering up from below. Tilting her head back, she looked up and found the cause, a crack in the rock face exposing a bare sliver of whitened sky.

Using the grappling hook, she climbed down slowly, proceeding about ten meters vertically under the ledge she'd been on to a different, smaller ledge with what looked like a crag large enough for her to fit into. Climbing into it and pulling the grappling hook back in, she wiggled her way into the crag, finding it winding in a rough S shape before opening again into a smaller chamber hidden below.

She ran her fingertips along the walls, which seemed to be made partially of basalt and kyber. Most of it was the color of flame, dark orange ranging to yellow, running in a gradiant around the walls. The center of the chamber had a dip in the floor filled with melt water in which a stalagmite had formed. The stalagmite itself was also partially composed of kyber, but at the tip was what drew Fenet in. She leaned in carefully, running her fingertips along the small orange crystal, examining the part of it still stuck in the matrix of the stone.

The last thing she wanted to do was somehow damage it while trying to break it free. She reached up to touch it -

Suddenly she was no longer in the chamber. She knew this room, though. The jedi temple on Coruscant was magnificant, rebuilt again and again through the centuries. The chamber she was in was circular, sunlight streaming in from all sides as the endless lines of flying traffic flowed outside the windows and the massive spires lined the horizon as far as the eye could see. If she turned around, she'd be able to see the galactic senate from here.

She was nervous. Her new Master would be here soon. When So'duun entered the room, the Miraluka woman seemed so
imposing to her. The blindfold she wore was like a shawl across her eyes and she didn't dress like a jedi, preferring the rag-tag motley of gear that was so often the case with privateers, smugglers and independent flyers. The womans black hair had been tied back into a knot with the lynch pin from what looked like a ships door hinge holding it in place. Her first impression of So'duun was that she was a little unsure how the smuggler woman had made it into the temple before realizing who this person must be.

"So you're Fenet, huh? I've never had a padawan before, you know. I only recently became a jedi."

"So... why me?"

"Oh, I have my reasons. This will be a learning experience for both of us, though. How do you feel about Mandalorians?"

"I've never met one. I hear they're very fierce though."

"Not biased? Good, 'cuz my husband is one. He's also my co-pilot and a good fighter. You could learn a lot from him, if you asked."

"I'll do my best to."

So'duun smiled at her, ruffling her hair obnoxiously. "I'm not worried. C'mon, I hear you like machines. I have a ship of my own, I'll show you around."

"Really? Is it big?"

"Big enough for a crew of four. It doesn't look too fancy, but Jo likes to work on it."


- and closed her eyes at the memory rising to the surface suddenly, remembering the warmth, excitement and sense of welcome from that day.

She stared at the crystal, running her fingertip along it. You wanted to greet me too, didn't you?

With only the barest pressure the crystal broke free of the matrix cleanly, making Fenet exhale a breath she hadn't known she was holding.

Now all she had to do was find Mar and climb out.

She quickly stashed the amber colored crystal into the pocket of her suit, then inched her way back into the gap out to the larger chamber so she could begin scaling the walls back up.



Mar followed the currents partially in a fague state, paying more attention to what she was feeling than what was around her. The caves weren't as tall as they had been when she started out, the ceiling lowering steadily as she made her way down. Eventually she was forced to drop and crawl to continue on, but thankfully the ceiling did not lower any further.

As she wandered, so too did her thoughts. Memories of times she'd gone caving for water with her mother, or to find small animals they could cook later. The lizards had made passable fare. She didn't miss it at all compared to what she'd been able to try since joining the Light's Touch, though.

Finally she rolled under the last of the ledge and found herself at the top of a deep, deep vertical drop off. On the other side of it, part of the glacier had protruded, but a path through the permafrost had been hacked out by somebody in the past. Using the hookshot she swung across, clinging to the ice with the climbing claws and inching her way inside carefully.

All around her the glacier was a deep, rich and vibrant blue unlike anything she'd ever seen before. She almost mistook it for a massive vein of blue kyber that somebody had cut a path through, but she could see it was not so from the fragments of blue and green peeking out of the glaciers walls. The steps were uneven and only the climbing tips and cleats on her boots allowed her to find any real purchase at all.

At the end of the tunnel was another vertical path going upwards this time, forcing her to dig into the walls of the ice and climb upward. Unable to proceed in a straight line, the overhang of the tunnel forced her to climb in a slow spiral around the edges of it, painstakingly making her way up. Twice she had to stop to rest, unused to the physical exertion. She'd never done this much climbing in her entire life in a single trip.

As she made her way up she noticed the composition of the crystal changing around her from blue-green to blue-purple. A few of the crystals appeared to be a deep indigo, which she tried to poke at, but they were firmly set in the matrix of the rock and she didn't have anything like a stonecutting tool. That probably would have been useful to have.

Though perhaps not. As she continued making her way up, it occurred to her that finding the 'right' crystal might mean she didn't need anything like that at all and if she tried, she might damage the crystal. She knew that could happen, after all. It was the last thing she wanted to do, somehow the crystals felt alive. If anybody had asked what she meant by that she doubted she'd have been able to really explain it.

The larger facets of kyber in the walls were strange to touch. Each time she did she felt like she was patting a drum, any contact creating a vibration that passed through the crystal to every crystal around her. Only instead of a vibration she felt it as a flicker in the Force. She was beginning to get good at quieting her mind without losing focus and going into autopilot.

She felt she was getting closer, the drive pushing her on feeling more urgent, more energized. As she reached the top she swung across the short gap from the far side of the tunnel and landed lightly on bare rock. She felt drawn forward like a magnetic pull had her, fingertips running along the tunnel walls where they stopped being rough-hewn natural stone and began to be carved.

The natural cave tunnel became an evenly cut, painstakingly constructed tunnel. The etchings in the walls were a language she didn't recognize but as she touched them she got faint impressions of the meanings. Guidance, security, wisdom, strength. The tunnel led to a chamber which seemed both constructed and natural, the walls cut out to even proportions and decorated with richly made carvings. She blinked as she caught a familiar looking spoke-wheel glyph she'd seen before, but what was next to it chilled her. Shapes, diamond with a strangely organic looking design she'd seen before for a few seconds, blotting the sun out above her.

When she touched them, she felt an echo of something deeply primal.

The rest of the chamber was nothing to ignore, either. The floor itself was natural stone but the edges had small kyber crystals the perfect size for focusing jutting out at the corners. The ceiling had a hanging stalactite with dozens of crystals set in it as well. As she examined the strange writing on the walls, she felt the pull towards the hanging jut of stone, but what she was looking at was too interesting to ignore.

She could make out familiar shapes in the carvings. A twi'lek. A rancor. But most interesting was a single face on the far side of the chamber, set in the wall and outlined in blue kyber, made to look like alien skin. It was a species she didn't recognize with ridges along the chin. Below it, she could make out writing that she didn't understand.

Unable to discern any meaning from it she decided to let So'duun pick it over, turning to face the stalactite. She walked a slow circle around it, running her fingertips along the crystals without looking at them. Her eyes were closed as she tried to feel her way along and on a complete impulse, she grabbed one and pulled.

It came away easily in her hand and she turned it over to look at it. It was a deep, rich indigo but she could see the center was flawed slightly, creating a milky patch within. She stashed it in her suit, then began to retrace her steps to make her way back to Fenet.
 
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I'm really liking this story, another great chapter! Thanks for sharing.

I'm glad people are liking it. This is my second large writing project, the first was... I learned a lot from it, but it was never meant to be a polished story, just a learning exercise. I'm putting far more effort into Beyond The Sky. The authors notes I have are really long, lol.

Writing a Star Wars book is something I've wanted to do since I was a teenager. I've forgotten more about this franchise than some people ever learn, might as well put it to good use.
 
Chapter 02, Part 07 - Ashla and Bogan
When they arrived back at the ship, So'duun was nowhere to be found. When Fenet tried to open the quarters they'd dedicated to meditation she found it locked, then simply shrugged. She didn't feel any sort of distress or danger. So'duun was probably deep in meditation. Or perhaps asleep.

Once she and Mar had taken the suits off and hung them back up, they wandered back to the bunk room with the retrieved crystals in their hand, mainly due to a lack of pockets for the bodysuit they'd been wearing underneath. There wasn't a spoken agreement, they simply mutually decided to save showing their crystal to the other for the time being. Once dressed, they headed to the cargo bay where M8 was lurking, coming to life when they walked in.

"Was your mission to retrieve a crystal successful, Fenet?"

"It was! Can you do me a favor and grab data tablets one though eight from that shelf up there?" While M8 did that, Mar sort of circled, unsure of what to do. Fenet was in her element, tapping the top of her workbench table and calling up the HUD for it. When M8 clunked up behind her with the tablets she turned and gently took them, leaning down to pull a drawer in the bottom of the table out, revealing a rack of tablets just like them. Fenet began thumbing through them, picking out which ones she didn't need for the moment and shuffling the others around so she could place the new ones inside. Pushing the drawer back in, she gathered up the tablets she pulled out, then stacked them on the floor beside the workbench for later.

"Thanks, M8." She stood up, then flipped through the interactive menu in the tabletop. "So, I really like making stuff. One of the really cool benefits of being with So'duun is that no one really questions it if I go browsing through the jedi archives for really strange things, they just assume she asked me to do it. With that in mind I've been collecting designs for lightsabers."

"Wait." Mar looked puzzled and M8 tilted its head behind Fenet. "There are other kinds of lightsabers? Not just the single blade ones?"

Fenets face lit up with the manic passion of somebody who is wild about a particular subject and doesn't get to talk about it enough. "Ooooh yes. I planned on a single blade myself, but there are modifications you can do even to that. There's the single blade, the curved handle for duelists or those who really like Makashi and Ataru. Some jedi prefer to fight with two blades, or are really small, like Master Yoda. So they use what's called a shoto, which is a little bit like the short sword version of a lightsaber. It's a smaller blade, but no less strong and is usually used in the offhand."

Mar winced. "I could have gotten two crystals?"

"Sure, but you don't need to. The single blade is so popular because there are downsides to dual wielding. It's more difficult to balance defense and offense that way, usually tilting towards one or the other. The single blade is almost like a shield and allows the user more agility where a dual wielder either has to be incredibly agile or limited in their movements in order to prevent a blade mishap. Dual wielding is great for defense against blaster bolts, but in a one on one fight with a skilled fighter, it means you have more to keep track of."

"Huh." Mar looked a bit stumped. "I always just assumed it would be better."

"Not always." Pulling up a list of different saber designs, she laid them out across the tabletop. "Here, take a look."

Mar leaned in, invading Fenet's personal space to stand shoulder to shoulder with her with M8 sort of leaning over them in a looming kind of way. "What's a staff saber?"

"It's like a dual blade, but it has blades on either end. Sometimes they're detachable to become two single sabers, but it takes two crystals to do it and a staffsaber is all the same problems of a dual wielding style. The main advantage is that it's really difficult to deal with a staffsaber with only a single blade. You'd think dual wielders would have it easier but a staff saber can attack from strange angles with far less arm movement."

Mar nodded slowly, thumbing through the menu. "Just those four?"

"Those are the ones that are most used. There's the light whip -"

"What."

"No, really. It's a lightsaber but with a limp blade. It's almost impossible to use safely but it's equally difficult to fight against. There's the light spear, the funnel blade for flawed crystals and the light club."

"Light club? Are you serious?"

"Oh, yeah, totally. They're really only built by the biggest jedi, usually wookiees. A regular saber blade is usually about one meter long. A light club can be up to three meters, but the handle is equally proportioned so you can see why it's not a popular choice."

Mar nodded. Then she set her crystal on the table in front of Fenet. "What do you think?"

"Oooh, thats such a unique color. Wow." Fenet picked it up, looking it over. "Oh, it has a flaw."

"Is that bad?"

"It means the blade will be unstable. You'll have to build a funnel saber to vent it."

"Can you direct the channels?"

"Sure, usually it's a cross guard. Why?"

"I really kind of like the idea of a lightspear. What did you mean by venting?"

"The flaw in the crystal will cause the blade to channel through the sides of the saber. Without a vent it'll just blow the thing apart. Usually it's built as a crossguard, but that means you'll have to be careful in how you use it in single combat because the crossguard can just as easily hit you."

"What if it was on the end of a staff? Is there any material that can stand up to a lightsaber blade?"

Fenet nodded slowly. "Two that I know of. Cortosis and beskar."

"Are they hard to get?"

"Hah!" Fenet laughed ruefully. "Yeah. Yeah, they sure. Cortosis can only be found on two worlds and they guard it jealously. Because it's a defense against lightsabers it's very valuable and expensive to obtain. You could get a spoonful of it if you sold the Light's Touch, probably."

Mar grimaced. "What about beskar?"

"Jealously guarded by the mandalorians. It's the material their armor is made out of it and is the main reason why they've given us so much trouble over the centuries. They're incredible fighters and they simply will not export it for any reason. They're pretty fanatical about it, too. There've been stories about people stockpiling it, only to get raided so they could take it back by force."

"So... the light spear is out."

"Unless you find a huge chunk of either metal, yeah, sorry."

"Okay." Mar nodded, then pulled up the designs for the funnel saber. "This doesn't look super complicated."

"It's not. It's the modifications that get you." She laid her orange crystal down next to Mar's indigo one. "I plan to make a single blade but I want to modify it to be able to extend a little. I'm hoping that I can build it with a normal blade, and a second mode that extends the blade a few inches whenever I swing it. Give it more reach than it looks like it ought to have."

"That's really sneaky."

"Yuh-huh." Fenet looked smug, chuckling to herself. "I've been designing this for a long, long time. I already have my template done. How do you want the vents channeled?"

"Can we do it in a sort of fork? Or make the vent directions changable?"

"What do you mean?"

Mar wiggled the crossguard of the lightsaber in the tables display up and down. "So that I can straighten them for a fight, but push them forward too. Like a hinge."

Fenet tilted her head, opening her mouth to speak and then closing it, looking thoughtful. "I've never thought about that. Maybe. I think so. Can you leave it with me for an hour or two?"

Mar nodded. "It's not like I'll be able to use it immediately anyways. Can I watch you modify your old saber?"

"Sure, no problem." Fenet pulled it out, laying it on the table. It was a plain durasteel casing with the button pulled from what seemed to be a door switch. Mar recognized some of the parts used on it. "I've never really looked at it before. Are they all this cobbled?"

"I built it when I was really young out of the parts they had on hand in the little shop at the temple. It was never meant to be fancy, they all assumed I'd lose it or destroy it before I actually reached knighthood." She shrugged. "It's a survivor. You wanna disassemble it while I start installing the first parts of mine?"

Mar nodded. "Sure. M8, c-" She turned around, finally realizing M8 was right behind them. "Oh. I was going to ask you to watch in case I lost track of what I'm doing."

"Be assured, I am watching. This process is fascinating. Will you require assistance in manufacturing the crystalline matrix array?"

Fenet glanced over at the droid. "Yeah, actually, that would be a huge help if you're willing. I was just gonna do it myself later."

"I will begin according to the specifications in your earlier design plans."

"You were watching me earlier?"

"I have little else to do. Watching you design a new lightsaber has been captivating. May I begin?"

"Yeah, of course. Thanks, M8." She watched the droid lunk its way across to the lathe on the other side of the workshop, looking thoughtful for a moment before turning back to her work.

Mar glanced at her, then shrugged. "I might lose track of what I'm doing."

"Don't worry, I'll help you. Learning to build and service one of these is something we learn in the temple as children. Just deconstruct it and lay the parts out in a grid, the table will mark them with numbers by order of placement for you."

"Oh. Huh. Where'd you get this table, anyways?"

"It's a custom job. I pulled the computer out of an old shipyard, stripped it down and then rebuilt it into a table top. It's way more powerful than I need, really. Kind of overkill."

"I like it." Mar smiled, picking up the hydrospanner and beginning her work. While she carefully removed the casings bolts, Fenet was busy fitting a power cell into an insulator material before checking the fit against the bottom of the handle.

"These power cells aren't very strong and this insulator keeps it from heating your hand up too much. Up here..." She put the handle down, picking up a small round device with four golden 'screws' arrayed inside like batteries. "We have the cycling field energizers and the first section of the blade channel. These make a power feedback loop through the crystal with the power cell in the bottom."

"Huh. That's... pretty ingenious, actually. What about the emitter?"

"I just have to screw it together and fit it into the top."

"The first matrix is complete." M8 lunked its way over to them, holding it in the palm of one three-digit 'hand'.

"Excellent. Thank you, M8." With a nod it clunked back over to the lathe to begin again. "Now..." Fenet picked up what looked like a sterilizing field, running it across the parts on the table and the crystal.

"What are you doing?"

"Skin oils mess this up. Watch." Putting the device down, Fenet raised her hands. The components on the table rose into the air, slowly turning as the crystal fitted into the matrix, which she then attached to the cycling energizers. The first channel of the emitter slipped between the energizers and the power cell attached itself to the bottom before it all slid neatly into the wroshyr wood handle, the emitter approaching the top of it and screwing neatly into place. Once done, Fenet grasped it and picked up the hydrospanner, securing it to the handle.

Holding it in the air in front of her, she flicked the blade on and with a shhh-hisss, a blade the color of copper lit up the table in front of them, glittering in Mar's eyes.
 
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Chapter 02, Part 08 - Ashla and Bogan
"Aaaand... done." Fenet laid her old saber down on the table, the new casing fitted firmly in place. Once stripped down, an adjustment was made to add a dial for changing the strength of the blade, lowering it to the barest minimum setting while maintaining blade coherence and replacing the power cell with a much weaker one. Picking it up, Fenet activated it, then slapped the blade across the strut of a nearby shelf, achieving nothing but a shower of sparks as the power surge instantly fried one of the spare circuits sitting on it. Fenet just stared at it for a moment, then turned it off and handed it to Mar. "Yep, it works."

"I won't hurt myself with the blade now?"

"Oh, no. It's totally gonna hurt. Try to cut your own arm off and it'll be twitching for awhile. When you can feel it again. Like I said, galaxies worst shock baton. You won't be maimed but it's a great incentive not to do it."

Mar nodded slowly, holding her new practice saber. "It's lighter than I expected."

"Turn it on. Clear your mind and try to feel the blade."

Mar activated it, focusing -

A sense of confusion, finding itself in the wrong hands but ones familiar enough that there is no severe discordance. It's rather like wearing shoes one size too large while also being a little too small at the same time, somehow.

- and blinked. "I can feel it."

"Yeah. The first lesson of Shii-cho is learning to feel your blade. You have to make it an extension of yourself and then make yourself an extension of the Force. On the surface, it's a very simple style of basic moves and stances for balance, but in reality it's the basis of every other style of lightsaber fighting."

Mar nodded, moving the blade a little, up and down. "It feels heavier now. Not enough for me to have trouble, but it was weightless, before. How does an energy blade have weight?"

"It doesn't. What you're feeling is the discordance between yourself and the kyber crystal, which isn't attuned to you. It feels heavy because you're concentrating more on it and the Force is weighting the blade."

Mar swung it side to side between them, then held the blade up at eye length in front of her own face for a second before turning it off. "Okay. I'm ready."

Fenet turned to her side, indicating Mar to do the same, then set her feet and bowed her legs slightly. When Mar tried to copy it, Fenet stopped for a moment to correct her balance, hands on her friends shoulder for a moment to stabilize her. "Turn your foot to the side a little and lean forward. You're trying to control your center of gravity."

Mar nodded and Fenet stepped back, mirroring her, opposite. Both activated their blades.

"Follow me and try to mirror what I do." When Mar nodded, Fenet began a slow series of cuts and parries, slow enough for Mar to react at regular people speed. Mar seemed to handle it fine though, furrowing her brow.

"Good, good. Again." Another of the same series of movements, a little faster this time. Mar was beginning to get the hang of the sequence.

"Again." Faster, blades snapping when they meet.

"Again." Full speed now, Fenet did the sequence and then did it again in a loop followed by another loop followed by another loop. She stopped when Mar was mirroring her perfectly.

"How are you doing that?"

Mar looked puzzled. "Doing what?"

"You're picking it up like that." Fenet snapped the fingers of her free hand. "You just learned in about ten minutes what took me an hour to achieve on my first day."

Mar looked a bit struck by that. "Huh. Can we keep going?"

Fenet nodded and then slid her foot back, starting again with the next sequence. With each sword kata, Mar seemed to almost absorb the knowledge. Throughout the afternoon, Mar was able to pick up and learn six of the eight sequences of shii-cho, able to mirror them even when Fenet surprised her and began mixing them randomly, suddenly turning it into a spar for a few very intense seconds.

Fenet shook her head, turning the blade off after the final, frenetic bout between them. She was slightly out of breath. "This is insane. Completely insane. You had to have been trained, or something. What's your deal?"

Mar was completely winded, looking a little unnerved after Fenet seemed to actually make an effort to come at her. "I'm just remembering what you're showing me. What was that?"

"What was what?"

"That... that. Just now, fighting me."

"I wanted to see if you'd slip up. But you don't. You're like a little computer, you learn stuff once and it just sticks. I don't get it. That's... that doesn't really happen, you know."

"I've always had a good memory." Mar just shrugged. "It's not that weird. C'mon, I wanna keep going."

Fenet shook her head. "Give me a minute, here. I could, but I'd rather stop and rest for a short time. Don't worry, you'll get all eight before the day is done." She laughed ruefully. "Then you get the drone."

"The what?"

Fenet walked over to sit down on a crate next to her table, then pulled what looked like a sphere off the shelf next to it. "This is a training drone." She tossed it into the air and it came to like, making a soft hissing noise.

"What does it- OW." Mar yelped when it spun around her, shooting her in the ass and making her almost drop the blade, giving Fenet a dirty look.

"Don't look at me. Watch the drone. Feel the blade through the Force and let it work through you as a channel with the drone as your focus."

"What are you t- AGH. WHAT ARE YOU TALKING ABOUT." Mar tried to parry a bolt, missing completely and getting hit in the ribs.

"Stop worrying about getting shot and let the Force guide your movements."

Mar jumped to the side suddenly, the drone firing where she was a moment ago and almost hitting Fenet, who flicked her blade on to swat the bolt away absentmindedly. Taking a deep breath, Mar tried to clear her mind, circling the drone as the drone circled her, like an enemy assessing her. It hissed to the side and she followed the urge to move the blade diagonally and down in front of her, deflecting a bolt into the deckplate.

"Yes!" Fenet pumped a fist. "Awesome! Keep it up." Mar was already moving, the drone firing another two bolts. She parried the first, the second one hitting her in the hip and causing her to mutter under her breath. The drone suddenly dropped close to the floor and fired three times, forcing her to parry but only catching two of the bolts, the third hitting her shoulder.

"Rrrgh!" Out of sheer frustration Mar gripped the drone, pulling it towards her and swatting it down as hard as she could with the training saber. It flickered and crackled a few times, then flew up into the air again and moved away, beeping twice.

"Hm." Fenet shook her head. "You let your anger get the best of you."

"It was pissing me off!"

"Yeah, it was. But you gave in to the anger. For a moment it was in the drivers seat, not you."

Mar sighed, turning the training blade off. "Okay? I mean... I get your point, I'm not perfect. Getting shot kind of irks me, you know?"

"I wasn't trying to take you down a peg. That's actually the next level of training above the eight katas and you still managed to parry some of them, even without knowing the last two. I'm actually pretty impressed."

Mar grimaced, then rubbed her eyes and the bridge of her nose. "You weren't messing with me, you were testing me?"

"Kinda. I'm really fascinated by how fast you're picking this up. It's been less than a week and you've already found an attuned crystal." She put her hands in her lap, loosely holding her saber. "I'm not sure you really get just how rare it is, what we're doing here."

Mar dragged another crate over to sit next to her. "What do you mean?"

"The seekers usually recruit children. Under five is often the acceptable age. The detachment from family is necessary, to lessen the sense of loss and lower the risk of falling to darker emotions from the severance. After a certain age it's usually considered forbidden to teach somebody because by then they have enough life experience to make them a risk, without the training from childhood in emotional control, the student is at constant risk of falling to their passions. Which you just did, a little."

Mar frowned in thought. "So why are you teaching me?"

"'cuz So'duun said to. I don't really get it either. I think somebody intervened on your behalf somewhere and convinced them to take a chance on you, but I don't think it was So'duun. She's very worried about you in some ways."

"I don't plan to fall to the dark side." She shook her head. "I'm not evil."

"No, you're not. But that's not how it usually begins, either. Sometimes it's a drive, an obsession, or selfishness, or... whatever, really. But you should spend time in meditation, try to work out what it is you fear. What you hate. The only way to really complete the training is to be able to let go of those things."

"Let go? After everything that happened?" Mar bristled a little at the idea. "I know I can't do anything about it now, but..."

"Yeah. But if you don't resolve that stuff, it could become your weak point later. Its why Jedi are discouraged from having spouses, the attachment leads to... unfortunate situations."

Mar heh'd softly. "No cute silver boys for you, huh?"

"Not if I start wanting to keep them." Fenet sighed. "I get attached to things. I'm attached to M8, because I built it and honestly, I like its personality. I'm attached to you because you're quickly filling that space in my brain that would have been reserved for a sister, I think."

That made Mar blink, surprised by the sense of warmth that welled up inside her at hearing that, and the block at the back of her throat. She was glad Fenet was monologuing.

"So'duun had an attachment like that, once." Fenet looked a little sad and Mar tilted her head, questioning wordlessly. "When I joined, in the beginning, it was me, So'duun and Johena. She called Jo her husband but I dunno if they were ever married for real."

"Who was Johena?"

"Jo was a mandalorian. Heh, they started out as enemies but So'duun couldn't be bested in a fight and Jo was able to hold his own against a jedi. They ended up having to work together at some point, got really close. He was a hell of a fighter."

"So, what happened to him?"

"He died." Fenet shook her head. "He was trying to disable a ship that was chasing us when it exploded. Was flying around on his rocket pack. He was caught in it, the pressure wave..."

Mar nodded, slowly.

"It was hard. So'duun still has his armor and weapons, locked up. Ironically, it survived just fine... but being that close to the blast shook him apart, all the same. We took him back to Mandalore to be interred."

"They didn't take his armor?"

"He was a foundling. No actual clan, no next of kin. So'duun was his next of kin."

Mar nodded slowly. "That's why she's so afraid for me, isn't it? She's worried something will happen to me."

"Not if we train you right." Fenet reached over, shaking Mar's knee in a little reassuring waggle. "C'mon, I'll teach you the last two katas and then we'll go make dinner."
 
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Chapter 02, Part 09 - Ashla and Bogan
The room often referred to as the 'quarters' on Light's Touch was both a meditation room and a sort of live-in office. One side of the room held a small, L-shaped couch with a large meditation stool, a sort of flat chair, in place of anything like a coffee table. Next to this was a shelf with several kinds of incense and a holder for burning them, something So'duun found helpful at times. Especially when they'd just done something particularly smelly and it was one of those fun instances where the smell didn't go away after a shower or two.

The other side of the room held a desk with a dynamic tabletop, giving So'duun direct computer access. A modified copy of Fenet's workshop table, she'd dedicated this one to being the ultimate intership computer terminal. Part of the wall in front of the desk was modified with screens to allow her to split between several desktops while working, but it was Fenet who usually made use of them while So'duun used the textile navigation interface she'd had Fenet build into the table for her, taking up nearly a full half of the entire thing. The table itself was fairly large - larger than the couch, even - so it usually didn't feel limiting in any sort of way.

The entire project had taken nearly a year, both models being constructed at the same time, but the work had been worth it. So'duun was now able to spend hours browsing the HoloNet with her own custom interface without needing to pay a ransom for one imported from home. It would've been a nightmare to try and interface with the ship, where Fenet's table was a standalone piece she could move if necessary. She'd encouraged the girl to put the designs out, but so far Fenet only seemed interested in giving them to the Order.

It was the cherished desktop that allowed So'duun to seclude herself in the quarters, taking her meals in there, using the adjoined 'fresher. It wasn't the only one on board. The bunk room had a mirrored copy, so she didn't need to worry about the kids for a little while. Ilum was relatively safe and she'd trained Fenet well, she trusted her not to let anything happen to Mar. While the girls were out playing in the snow she'd decided to work on meditating, but their return had brought back something she couldn't ignore.

The recording of Mar's walk through the strange little crystal room was consuming her. Using the tabletop to recreate the surfaces on the walls, So'duun trailed her fingertips along them carefully. It wasn't a language she recognized, which was sort of impressive. Many of the trade languages used on major hyperlanes, though diverse, had root languages that usually allowed her to at least place a general region of the galaxy, but this was a mystery.

Even worse, her searches through the ships archaeological database had yielded nothing. So'duun had husbanded a cherished, finely curated collection of data tablets. Mostly copies from the jedi archives, when she was allowed to do so. A wide range of cultural data and historical information on the Jedi order dating back centuries. Everything she'd accumulated on the history of the Jedi Order lay within her database here and the database was shrugging its metaphorical shoulders at her, which left her completely stumped.

The only choice would be to consult the archives on Coruscant, where the master archive index was kept. She sighed to herself, leaning back in her chair and stretching while the computer kept trying to pattern match the imagery Mar had scanned.

The computer chirped at her and she took a deep breath, sitting up properly and touching the interface. Immediately she tilted her head. The computer had matched part of the inscription as a pictogram of several known species and - more intriguing - a Tho Yor. The galactic radial featured prominantly in several places, a symbol so old that it was synonymous with the Republic, now. She'd seen it in works that were centuries old before, but whatever Mar had found seemed to pre-date that.

Far pre-date that.

She looked thoughtful. If she could find out what the writing actually said, she might be able to learn something significant. Hopefully, anyways. Several of the alien species depicted in the pictograms weren't recognized at all, leading her to wonder if they were species that were now extinct or as good as, like the ancient ancestral Sith.

When the tactile interface changed to the face that had been etched in kyber, So'duun jerked her head back slightly. It felt familiar somehow, but at the same time she was certain she'd never felt a depiction of a species like this. The computer was no real help either. But whatever this race had been, somebody had taken the time to carve out a large, detailed relief of them and then surround it with intricate writing in a language she had no way to recognize.

Some people would probably be frustrated. So'duun wasn't. After taking a break to shower, take a meal and stretch she simply went back to work again, trying to track down something, anything. But with the finite resources she had aboard, she just didn't have the information she needed to translate any part of it. Vexing.

She opened a ship-wide comm. "Fenet, Mar, M8. What are you up to at the moment?"

It took a moment for Fenet to open the cargo bay commlink. "I just completed my lightsaber. We're working on the final design for Mar's right now. I'm helping her construct the parts and we're making the casing out of some platinum plating I had laying around. Nice and shiny."

"That fast?"

"Yepper. Really nice color, too. M8's here with us, recording the whole process. Apparently they find it fascinating. We got my old saber tuned down so Mar doesn't cut off anything important while I teach her, so we're not really in a huge hurry to actually assemble this thing yet. What's up?"

"If your business here is wrapped up, we're taking off. I want to consult the archives on Coruscant."

"Oooh, awesome! That means I get to show Mar around. So I get to stock up on more stuff while we're there?"

"Do you have money?"

"Um. Miiiight have wiped myself out buying Mar some stuff."

"In that case, I'll make sure you have enough credits to grab some things while we're in the Core."

"Awesome! Thanks, So'duun. I'll go prep the ship for launch."

"Thank you, I'll be up to the cockpit shortly." She didn't get up right away, though. Instead, she began navigating menus and opened the long-range comm systems.

"This is Jedi Knight Ikmari So'duun. I'd like to request special permission from the council to pursue an interesting archaeological lead. In this data packet you'll find the recording of a site my padawan discovered deep in the crystal caves of Ilum. I can't identify the language or some of the reliefs at all, but whatever this is is very, very old and I'd very much like to follow up on it if it could lead to more information about the Je'daii Order. That period of our history is far too fragmented for my personal tastes. If willing, I'd like to be granted permission into the restricted historical sections of the archives for the purpose of identifying these species. I will be following up by arriving at Coruscant approximately..." She checked the ship chronometer briefly. "...18 hours, allowing for down time between hyperspace jumps. I'll see you all then. So'duun out."

She closed up the recording and coupled it with a compressed data packet holding the holoscans of the reliefs, then transmitted it, getting up and leaving the room while the computer worked on uploading it.

Once she got to the bridge she found Fenet already in the flight seat and Mar at the secondary console. "Well Mar, looks like you get to see the grand gem of the galaxy. We're heading to Coruscant, the capital of the galactic Republic."

Mar ooh'd quietly. "What's it like?"

"Kinda smelly, lots of city, then more city, then even more city." Fenet didn't sound too thrilled. "But you can get stuff there you can't get imported out to Starlight Beacon, so this will be a great chance to get some stuff and stockpile some goodies. Maybe you'll find something you can use in your lightsaber design, even."

"Is it really that random?"

So'duun nodded. "They're not actually very complicated devices at all. You can make them out of standard parts. The only unique part is the crystal. Maybe the crystal matrix if you went and built a fancy custom one. You should pick the casing carefully, since you can make it almost anything. Some jedi take the time to make very intricate works of art or use things sentimental to them."

Mar nodded, then realized So'duun couldn't see her. "I'll think about it. No rush."

"Ship's pre-flight checks are complete. We're ready to lift off, So'duun."

"Alright. Let's go."

The ship rose, blowing snow around them as the engines kicked in and the planet fell away from them at a frankly terrifying speed. With no traffic above them, Fenet could simply punch it to full speed all the way to the edge of the gravity well, making for a short but intense ride before the atmosphere thinned out enough to no longer cause vibrations from air resistance.

"So what's this all about? You were all reluctant just to go to Ilum, now you wanna go to Coruscant?" Fenet turned, bringing the jump waypoint on the ships HUD in front of them for approach and swinging Ilum around to the ships starboard side.

"The carvings Mar found are so old I can't identify them. Not with what I have here on the ship. I want to dig through the archives and see if I can follow up on it. I'm hoping the Council will grant us permission to shelf the hyperlane mapping so we can pursue this."

"Huh! That's interesting." Fenet watched the distance meter drop like a rock, then kicked in the hyperdrive, the ship breaking into FTL and the front viewport filling with blue. With that accomplished, she turned the flight seat around to face Mar.

"What's the big deal?" Mar looked puzzled. "You didn't know about that room? I mean... I just wandered up to it. It was deep down in the caves, yeah, but it wasn't exactly hidden."

"Most padawans don't wander too far in. But this is kind of my thing." So'duun made a so-so gesture with one hand. "One of the reasons I love doing this so much is that I'm very slowly trying to piece together the full history of the Jedi Order. Most of it is lost, fragmented in one war or another with the Sith. Or simply so old it's been forgotten."

"How old are the Jedi, anyways?"

"Oh... tens of thousands of years. Force users have been around since the Early Hyperspace Age, twenty-six millennia ago... but we know next to nothing about how they came to be, where the Order originated. We only have very basic information, names of places, small fragments of things. But... if I'm right, it's possible we're chasing something directly related to the very origins of the Jedi. Things the Council keeps close, keeps quiet. It's possible they'll tell me to drop the whole thing and give the case to somebody else. I'm hoping they don't do that."

"What if they do?" Mar asked the most innocent sounding but ultimately damning question of them all. What would she do? For a chance to pursue the very origins of the Jedi, possibly even find a lead to Tython itself?

She'd do damned near anything is what she'd do, to hell with the Council.

"Let's just wait and see, for now."
 
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