Star Trek: Odyssey

Well, the Oddysey is based on a Constitution class, which means that the Romulans (a 'new' threat during the TOS era) wouldn't necessarily be in the library files they have access to. On the other hand, it's a big galaxy and 'avian' is pretty broad.
Yeah, the old connie might be old, but if they are using Earth time, the current year is 2379AD, which is pretty far into the modern era. It's just been four years since the end of the Dominion war, so I'll assume it's not!turians or something. If they bump into any of the major powers as enemies, there's not reall y much they can do, apart from bouncing the graviton particle beam off the main deflector dish and pulling some protagonist techno-babble magic out of their behinds. (Edit: in a straight fight, I mean)
 
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Yeah, the old connie might be old, but if they are using Earth time, the current year is 2379AD, which is pretty far into the modern era. It's just been four years since the end of the Dominion war, so I'll assume it's not!turians or something. If they bump into any of the major powers as enemies, there's not reall y much they can do, apart from bouncing the graviton particle beam off the main deflector dish and pulling some protagonist techno-babble magic out of their behinds. (Edit: in a straight fight, I mean)

Presumably they are using Earth time, which actually puts this in the exact same year as Nemesis, so based on era alone it's a legitimate possibility. However, for some reason I was thinking that the Romulans were a new threat in TOS because they were new, because I'd totally forgotten about the original Federation-Romulan war that established the Romulan Neutral Zone. While it's a toss-up whether the Original that the Odyssey was built on had the NCC-1701's sensor data, it's highly unlikely that it didn't have the NX's.
 
Yeah, the old connie might be old, but if they are using Earth time, the current year is 2379AD, which is pretty far into the modern era. It's just been four years since the end of the Dominion war, so I'll assume it's not!turians or something. If they bump into any of the major powers as enemies, there's not reall y much they can do, apart from bouncing the graviton particle beam off the main deflector dish and pulling some protagonist techno-babble magic out of their behinds. (Edit: in a straight fight, I mean)
Even major powers have smaller ships. I would imagine even a brand new federation shuttle craft isn't proof against repeated nuclear bombardment.

The Odyssey would be in trouble if they came across a major power's ships of the line with hostile intentions, but as evidenced by the equinox in voyager, not even starfleet builds all of their ships with bleeding edge tech.
 
Ep 1; Act 3
Act 3:


"Ripple fire torpedos, four-tenth intervals! Janein, signal armory to reload the conveyors with magnetic chaff rounds and then get us in front of that shuttle!" I ordered as I leaned over the railing. Part of me wanted to jump clear over it, to get closer to the screen.

I resisted.

With each nuclear detonation a flash temporarily dimmed the viewscreen as electrical discharges danced across the hull plating; the high energy particle discharge of the weapons playing across our energized hull plating. Without it we'd cook ourselves with radiation.

It was a slow fight, but surely as the sun would rise we were chipping away at them. Their energy shields were formidable, but already down by a third in the minute since combat had begun, and we'd yet to take a hit. That Janein was the best pilot we had was no small part of either fact.

Through the viewscreen I could see that we were only moments away from overtaking the Starfleet shuttle, with any luck they'd see our open shuttle bay as an invitation, as the sanctuary that we indended.

A glance down to my arm rest screen, showing the rear hemisphere view, showed the other ship holding its distance as the two pronged attack of nuclear weapons and magnetic chaff kept their targeting scanners too busy to see us.

And just behind our secondary hull, the shuttle looked to be aligning with our approach markers.

The deck plating 'popped' under my feet as dozens of precision thruster applications per second kept the Odyssey aligned with the shuttle while Janein's fingers pecked across the helm almost faster than I could follow. She piloted better than any Baseline I'd ever met. If not for that and another thing there would have been no indication she was an Aberrant.

At least not like--

"Captain, the shuttle has touched down!" Janein announce from her station.

"Close the barn doors, resume our original course and engage at maximum warp!"

The vibrations through the deck increased as our reactor throttled up and the attitude control thrusters slung the ship around in a wide arc towards our original course. The whine of the warp coils energizing reverberated throughout the ship and I could feel it in my teeth.

Out of the rear view I watched the dark green hull of the avian ship start to emit a glow from its bow, and then a moment later it fired what I could only assume was a torpedo, directly at us. "Serine, fire aft tubes one and two, set detonation distance at five hundred and one thousand meters, full yield!"

The rear screen showed the pair of torpedos leaving their launch tubes before the high-boost hydrogen/chlorine triflouride engines lit up and they became little more than specks of blue light, an instant before they burned so brightly that the rear viewscreen whited out completely--

And with the sound of a whip crack our warp field formed and we left the system as the shockwave reached the tips our our nacelles. I found myself tossed back into my chair, knocking my head against the headrest hard enough to send me crosseyed for a moment.

"Captain Orchai, this is Leryl. You're needed in sick bay."



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I walked through the sick bay doors with my hat tucked under my left arm and my right hand rubbing at the back of my head. I a quick scan just to make sure I didn't hurt anything important wouldn't be a bad idea. "Doc!"

The familiar face that came through the office door belonged to Leryl, a physician of some fifty years experience. Command had wanted to keep him off of the ship but I had insisted. His age be damned, I could not in good conscience crew my ship with anyone but the best.

Alongside him, however, was a new face. A younger girl, red hair, green eyes. Human, adolescent. It was easy enough to identify a human as we'd been looking at them on holovids for a hundred years. They didn't look too dissimilar from my own species. We, like the humans, had a variety of skin, eye, and hair colors, often the very same colors as the humans.

Our general body plan was more or less the same, along with our facial structure and though we were not genetically compatible, we were physically compatible. That particular revelation had what scientists we did have at the time re-evaluating everything they'd previously believed about how alien life would be configured.

There were of course differences, our hands were constructed in a four finger and thumb layout, though with entirely different bone structure that allowed for… different applications.

There was another difference, one that the girl must have noticed immediately when we locked eyes. The growing shock and fear that we had hoped to avoid in our first contact. That was what the hats had been for, and I'd gone and taken mine off.

The girl tore her arm away from Leryl and ducked back into the office as I jammed my hat back onto my head and swore under my breath. "I've got this," I said to the doctor as I stepped past him and through the doorway.

An anatomy textbook struck my forehead and carried my hat with it as it continued on into the wall behind me. So much for that. I locked my left hand and held it up in front of my face, palm in, as the girl sized me up. She could catch me off guard, but only once.

The girl might have come up to my nose, if she was within the standard human deviation that would have put her around eleven to thirteen years old, and her strength matched that assessment. That I could beat her in a fight was without question, though that was not and would never be my goal.

"Do you speak English?" I asked her, not quite lowering my guard but in a gentle enough tone.

"Y-yeah… but how do you?" She asked me in a deeper voice that I would have expected from her frame. She might have been forcing it, but I didn't have a lot of experience with humans, let alone their children.

I couldn't help but laugh at her question. "That's kind of the story of my entire people. Can we try with an easier question?" I asked in return.

She was still hiding behind a veritable cache of throwable heavy objects, but she seemed slightly more at ease, if only just that. "Where am I?"

I relaxed my left hand and lowered it, so she could see my face. "This is the starship Odyssey, and I am Captain Orchai. We rescued your shuttle from an attacker. We're at warp right now, and we got away so don't worry about that, you're safe."

She came out from behind the edge of Leryl's desk and came a few steps closer, though her body language was still very guarded, "Okay… but why do you look like the devil?"

I winced at the accusation and rubbed at my forehead. That question. I'd been hoping she wouldn't have brought it up. I looked to the side and caught my reflection in the mirrored wall, the two obsidian horns rising our of the top of my forehead, through my black hair.

The resemblance was uncanny but it had not been a mystery that our people had been able to unlock. The Original had contained much data, but it did not contain the whole of human history, there were many things we simply did not and could not know.

"Well I don't really know, but I'm not. I'm just the captain of a starship. Think you can stop throwing books at me now?" I asked with a half smile at her.

"Well… Maybe for now but I might change my mind later." She finally relented as she came closer, seeming a little more relaxed.

"Captain, she is actually not the reason I asked you down here, though I do thank you for solving the problem you caused. It is the pilot of the shuttle that I am far more concerned with. You are an engineer, you should take a look."

I turned to look at the old man, and then past him. There was an adult male, human but… but not. I looked back at the girl and gestured for her to follow as the doctor lead us to the patient.

As we got closer I noticed the myriad metallic devices seemingly built into his flesh, and even more scars that suggested that other devices had been removed.

"What are we looking at? Are these implants correcting some disability?"

The doctor shook his head, "Initial scans showed that the infiltration is deep within his neural structures. If not for the difference in age between the grafts and the host I would have said he was grown this way. That, of course, isn't the strangest thing, internal and external scarring suggests that he was once in a far more advanced state of cybernetic augmentation."

And I can't wake him up." he added, as if an afterthought.

The young girl stepped between the two of us and turned around to face us, the look on her face back to that same fearful look she'd first given me, "Do you guys not know about the Borg?"
 
Nope. Nope they do not. ...Which makes me wonder why it scares her that they don't know about the Borg? Maybe she thinks the Odyssey was captured...?
 
She came out from behind the edge of Leryl's desk and came a few steps closer, though her body language was still very guarded, "Okay… but why do you look like the devil?"
The young girl stepped between the two of us and turned around to face us, the look on her face back to that same fearful look she'd first given me, "Do you guys not know about the Borg?"
This is going to be a long and exhausting day for everyone, isn't it?
 
With each nuclear detonation a flash temporarily dimmed the viewscreen as electrical discharges danced across the hull plating; the high energy particle discharge of the weapons playing across our energized hull plating. Without it we'd cook ourselves with radiation
They can probably run the plating even with a cold reactor seeing as they have thrusters on a ship with impulse drives and other bits of redundancy.

A glance down to my arm rest screen, showing the rear hemisphere view, showed the other ship holding its distance as the two pronged attack of nuclear weapons and magnetic chaff kept their targeting scanners too busy to see us.
Well whoever the grumpy people are they'll probably be able to counter this trick on the next meeting.

The deck plating 'popped' under my feet as dozens of precision thruster applications per second kept the Odyssey aligned with the shuttle while Janein's fingers pecked across the helm almost faster than I could follow. She piloted better than any Baseline I'd ever met. If not for that and another thing there would have been no indication she was an Aberrant.

At least not like--
"Me?" Maybe, though I somewhat doubt it, though for no particular reason I can point to.

I'm rather liking this thing you're doing with cutting off thoughts and such to leave little mysteries. Its very fun.

The familiar face that came through the office door belonged to Leryl, a physician of some fifty years experience. Command had wanted to keep him off of the ship but I had insisted. His age be damned, I could not in good conscience crew my ship with anyone but the best.

Alongside him, however, was a new face. A younger girl, red hair, green eyes. Human, adolescent. It was easy enough to identify a human as we'd been looking at them on holovids for a hundred years. They didn't look too dissimilar from my own species. We, like the humans, had a variety of skin, eye, and hair colors, often the very same colors as the humans.
Heeey! Its the Doc and its a classically old one too!

The girl probably isn't Seven of Nine (can't remember her original name).

Our general body plan was more or less the same, along with our facial structure and though we were not genetically compatible, we were physically compatible. That particular revelation had what scientists we did have at the time re-evaluating everything they'd previously believed about how alien life would be configured.

There were of course differences, our hands were constructed in a four finger and thumb layout, though with entirely different bone structure that allowed for… different applications
Weapons looks like for hunting and aggressive self defense.

The girl might have come up to my nose, if she was within the standard human deviation that would have put her around eleven to thirteen years old, and her strength matched that assessment. That I could beat her in a fight was without question, though that was not and would never be my goal
Aww Orchai being protective is neat. Also Orchai is pretty short. Wonder if that's common to the species.

I winced at the accusation and rubbed at my forehead. That question. I'd been hoping she wouldn't have brought it up. I looked to the side and caught my reflection in the mirrored wall, the two obsidian horns rising our of the top of my forehead, through my black hair
Neat! I wonder if its gender specific.

The young girl stepped between the two of us and turned around to face us, the look on her face back to that same fearful look she'd first given me, "Do you guys not know about the Borg?"
Welp.
 
Nukes might be little more than fancy flashbulbs but the thermal effects, electromagnetic effects, and ionizing radiation aren't anything to scoff at.
That will depend on the nukes more than anything.
A 50 gigaton nuke would have the same effect as a 50 gigaton antimatter warhead. The only difference is size and efficiency. If the nukes are shaped focused charges then even better.
 
"Me?" Maybe, though I somewhat doubt it, though for no particular reason I can point to.

Like Quinn, I think. Quinn is very different from Janein. Both are 'Aberrant' by the local standards. I'm not sure how Janein being Aberrant would play into her piloting skills but

WHOA - finger dexterity. Baseline fingers lock under stress because they might need to stab someone. If Janein's don't, that'd be a heck of an advantage when it came to running a console.
 
Like Quinn, I think. Quinn is very different from Janein. Both are 'Aberrant' by the local standards. I'm not sure how Janein being Aberrant would play into her piloting skills but

WHOA - finger dexterity. Baseline fingers lock under stress because they might need to stab someone. If Janein's don't, that'd be a heck of an advantage when it came to running a console.
Hah yeah it would, and if so that'd possibly make Aberration more than just psychological stuff which would be rather nifty.
 
To be fair, the psychological is the physiological when it comes to brain chemistry. If her adrenal response is different then that would also manifest in a different personality.

I one hundred percent agree with you that Jackie's way of throwing most of a bit of worldbuilding is really fun.
 
To be fair, the psychological is the physiological when it comes to brain chemistry. If her adrenal response is different then that would also manifest in a different personality.

I one hundred percent agree with you that Jackie's way of throwing most of a bit of worldbuilding is really fun.
It also lends itself well to the Act/Episodic tone she's going for, cause it kinda makes it feel like a Star Trek Episode.

Though the thing that does it more is when she's choosing to end stuff.
 
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Out of the rear view I watched the dark green hull of the avian ship start to emit a glow from its bow, and then a moment later it fired what I could only assume was a torpedo, directly at us.

Green, Avian, looks like a Plasma weapon.



Which of course are not immediately recognisable as descendants of the classic T'Liss a Constituton class would have in its database:

The way a Malem might be:


Might be Reman rather than Romulans though, they tend to have darker green ships than the Empire or Republicans.
 
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Green, Avian, looks like a Plasma weapon.



Which of course are not immediately recognisable as descendants of the classic T'Liss a Constituton class would have in its database:

The way a Malem might be:


Might be Reman rather than Romulans though, they tend to have darker green ships than the Empire or Republicans.
you're missing another obvious choice:

 
you're missing another obvious choice:


That's light green rather than dark. And my memory of it firing is always the wingtip disruptor pods.

Plus if I've got thedat rigt the in service version looks like this:

More green and brown than dark green.
 
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That's light green rather than dark. And my memory of it firing is always the wingtip disruptor pods.

Plus if I've got thedat rigt the in service version looks like this:

More green and brown than dark green.
It's pretty clearly firing from that central torpedo launcher though. I mean the bird of prey in the undiscovered country fired from there as well.
 
Yeah, but the ship the Odyssey was based on would have had Klingons in their files. I can't see why they wouldn't be unless they were deliberately omitted or deleted.
 
Ep 1; Act 4
Act 4:​


Halae threw her communicator against the black marble wall of her office and watched as it split open and scattered its contents across the floor. There had been a leak. She'd disavowed it of course, and unless Jerrin had made a mistake with the disposal there would never be proof it happened.

But the accusation was enough.

Calls to pull Aberrants out of the civil services would be coming any day. Of course it would be suicide if she were to even consider acquiescing to the demands. Warp engines didn't get built and ships didn't fly without Aberrants. Social progress didn't happen without Aberrants. Their entire society demanded the existence and participation of them.

If it started a witch hunt in fleet command things could go sour very quickly, for her and for the Odyssey. Still, she didn't reach her rank without planning ahead. Orchai was selected for her disposition as much as for her ability. If Halae gave the order that would be necessary for Odyssey to continue her mission in light of such a witch hunt.

Well, Halae was certain it wouldn't come to that. Not as long as Jerrin continued to get the job done, anyway.



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Captain's log; supplemental

We've taken on two passengers, a thirteen year old human girl, and an adult human man. While there were a few false starts, the girl has taken to the crew and seems… if not happy, content. The adult on the other hand, remains in a coma due to damage to cybernetic implants that we still don't understand.

We did, however, luck out on one thing; the shuttle's navigational data did give us a course to follow to Earth. At our current best speed, we're still several months out. Still, to have such good luck this early in our journey can only bode well for the future.


"It looks like the U.S.S. Enterprise."

I stopped walking and turned towards the girl, (Eliza, I'd found out) "What?"

"Your ship," Eliza explained as she pointed at the ship status screen I'd been showing her. "It looks like the Enterprise, or really kinda more like the Enterprise-A. But that's a really old ship and you really don't seem like you're actually Starfleet."

I rubbed my temple and tried a smile. "Are all human children this perceptive? I admit I was hoping we could maintain the illusion for a little longer."

She laughed at me. "Well it's pretty obvious. This ship feels like its a hundred years old and your uniforms are all wrong and you don't even know who the Borg are and this ship only has one species on it that I've never even seen before and you're speaking English!" the girl laugh-yelled as she shook her head.

Perhaps our children and human children weren't so different after all.

"Well you could say our style is heavily inspired by certain records from about a hundred or so years ago. We learned how to be… all of this," I said as I gestured my arms around me, "from what we learned from your people."

"I think if my people were talking to some aliens nobody's ever seen before that are cruising around in copycat starships I'd have heard about it."

I sucked on my lip and made a few ineffectual gestures before I let out a sigh of defeat, "Well, it was more along the lines of reverse engineering a starship that crashed on our planet a century ago. This ship was built using the lessons we learned in disassembling the U.S.S. Farragut.

"That's… that's actually why we're out here. We're carrying the crew's personal effects and what we were able to recover of their ships logs and sensor data. That sort of sentimentality isn't something that's inherent to my species, but we know it's important to yours."

She nodded along to my story, and it was almost surreal for me. The knowledge of alien life had been with me my entire life, there had never been a time that I was uncertain of its existence and yet… and yet when faced with an actual real life alien I couldn't help but be blown away by how the same we seemed to be.

"What is your species?" She finally asked me.

"I can't speak the old language so I can't pronounce our word for it. The human-language equivalent would be 'Daeva', which is also the name of our planet… which probably seems a little weird to you? We are not always the most creative people." I explained with some measure of shame.

Hell, we couldn't even come up with our own starship aesthetic and instead cribbed what Starfleet had done with as much accuracy as we could manage. Maybe not the always the most creative, but we were damn good engineers when we put our minds to it.

Eliza fidgeted with what I assumed to be some kind of information tablet; it wasn't so different from the ones we used. She frowned after a moment of reading. "Oh. That's not a very flattering name."

I shook my head, "No, it isn't. But some would say it's fitting all the same. We try not to live up to it."



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Jerrin swore as the building in front of him collapsed into itself. There had been collateral. He had entertained the thought of staying inside with the grenade just to save Halae the trouble of Protocol Zero-ing him.

If he was a more philosophical man he would have questioned the wisdom in using the old ways to prop up the new ones. Extrajudicial killings could only take a society so far, he figured. There would come a time that they would have to come to terms with their true nature, no matter what veneer they tried to hide it behind.

He and Halae, he reasoned, were the worst of the offenders.

In the end, if society swung back to the old ways he'd do just fine. His line had been tasked with this kind of work since pre-fall and so he wouldn't be out of practice.

But then again, if it should come to pass that the Odyssey was his people's future, a future that had no place for men like him… Well, he was content with that outcome as well.

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We'd lucked out in rescuing the Starfleet shuttle. While the warp drive was disabled by damage, there wasn't much for us to learn from it anyway. Quinn had let me know, after the requisite three side tangents, that our warp coils were actually decades ahead of what the shuttle was using.

It seemed like perhaps we weren't as behind as we thought, or possibly even ahead of them in other areas. Their ships generated a lot more energy than ours and so efficiency was probably not as big of a concern for them as it was for us.

But the real boon was that we were able to tap into the shuttle's power grid to give our own engines a little bit of an endurance boost; a week and a half at warp seven point one. The only thing we really had to worry about in the short term was the health of our male passenger.

His implants, the 'Borg' that Eliza warned us about. It was all very--

"So what's she like?"

I blinked and my eyes re-focused on Janein's face. She was only a few years older than Eliza, she'd only been out of the academy for six months. She'd been born after construction had started on the Odyssey's hull.

Granted, that was almost eighteen years ago, it still made me feel old as hell because I'd already had my first promotion by then.

"Eliza? She's not really all that different from us. A little guarded. She hasn't told me much about herself but I'll let her do that in her own time," I explained as I leaned back in my chair. The cycle of stress over the last few hours had really worked my back into knots.

"Do you really think that a civilian child warrants so much attention from the captain, Captain?" Serine asked me with a raised eyebrow and that same half-smirk he seemed to always wear.

"First contact is the captain's job after all. Unless you'd rather I assign someone else to talk with her. Maybe Leryl or Quinn? Or maybe my Number One would like the honor?" I teased.

"Objections emphatically withdrawn. In fact I believe I'll go re-align the deflector dish." He answered quickly as he left the bridge at an almost comically fast pace.

I shook my head and turned back to Janein, "at least he's keeping himself entertained. You should have seen what happened during isolation training."

"I've heard the stories. Did he really--" Janein asked before I quickly cut her off.

"We don't say it aloud, but yes, he did."

"Well, we're still at least a month out from Earth. Maybe he'll do it again," she continued with a shrug.

"And maybe I'll have Quinn sit at the helm instead. Teasing your captain does have consequences."
 
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