12.1

12.1


The Capital was visible days before they arrived.

Jewel could scarcely believe that something so vast could even exist, nevermind a settlement!

It looked like a small mountain of red roofs and white stone heaving up in a cleft at the very center of the vault. The first day she saw it she had not even realized it was a structure made by mortal hands.

And that was before the descent began to fully drive home the sheer scale of it.

Her first glimpse was after they cleared the ridges past Aul's Roost. The very edge of the massive depression which filled the entire sky vault. The descent began after that.

Ever since that afternoon all the lands of the vault were spread out below them. Sinking away ahead and curving around in sweeping hills and cliffs. By Jewel's estimate the bottom of this land was twice over as deep in its valley as the highest pillar of the Ridgetail's vault.

Her books said the locals called this land 'The Valley of Man'.

And just from the look of it she was pretty sure it was significantly smaller across its greatest extent than the Ridgetails at even their narrowest span.

But what it lacked in breadth was more than made up for in that astounding depth. A dizzying pit sank forward into a curving near abyss. Rivers cutting deep into rolling hills, forest and farmland twisting into the earth along the many converging waters. All of which ran in wild paths into the very heart of it all before vanishing into what on the fourth day Jewel realized were wide overhangs above still lakes and raging rapids.

And on, under and around those ledges was a city that seemed larger than all of Rochford combined.

Burning Depths Ford, Capital of the Realm of Cantor Reborn crossed nine rivers before they slid into each of their own great overhangs or dived over with the shining mist of falls. The Capital palace rose up on what Jewel thought might in fact be a bridge for its very foundations!

Pale white and red colors glittered, making a pearl of the vast city.

Every morning on the road Jewel could see the Capital dressed in rainbow clouds.

And speaking of mornings!

Despite the dizzying depths of the Valley the sun warmed all the lands in golden radiance!

The dawns in the Valley of Man confused and disturbed Jewel every day. The valley barely had stubs of mountains for its pillars! And what peaks there were only rose at the walls of the vault. Without any central support the sky bowed low over the capital. Sinking like an improperly raised tent! When they first caught sight of the city of Burning Depths Ford Jewel could not even see the far side of the valley because the sky and sun was in the way!

It made the days disorienting and late afternoon travel a blinding affair. With the sun lingering dead ahead of their path in the clear sky well towards the evening.

It was five days into their descent before the sun stopped seeming to dive into the city itself every evening and the far side of the valley emerged into visibility. Finally revealing in pale blue hues the far side of the Valley of Man.

Jewel had marveled at the strangeness which no book had deemed pertinent to describe.

But bizarre as a sunken sky might be it kept the shadows of the Vault walls from choking the fields. Every hill rise, canyon and dip in the valley she saw each morning was warmed nearly the same by the sun no matter their height.

And further confounding to her the deeper into the valley they went, the better Jewel could see all of the Valley of Man around her. The dozens of routes from the Vault walls grew ever clearer. The roads and paths in every village are clear to see! From the very lowest point of the Valley of Man where the Capital Palace stood you'd have a commanding view indeed!

Jewel suspected even from the streets of the capital she would be able to see every way an army could take to Burning Depths Ford as well as her own scouting from the air in the Ridgetails.

It made a fortress of the entire vault.

The heavens themselves offer cover of any given half of the valley from the other!

And only the city itself could see all sides!

Jewel and Paul had discussed it for the first few nights.

It made the evenings easier.

Against the lackluster if not actively hostile accommodations offered them.

None of their hosting lords or freemen owned inns had made a repeat of the fool Bishop at Aul's Roost. But even among those few Jewel had met before or that Paul or Thurzó had corresponded with, the receptions were strained.

Some of that was just the sheer scale required for Jewel to properly attend a Welcoming feast.

Polite apologies that they simply lacked the space to host her were not uncommon.

On more than four occasions there was in fact literally no room big enough for her to sleep indoors. More surprising was that there were two instances where their host didn't even have a hall big enough to host Jewel for a feast!

But even when such was the case there was none of the shock at her own eloquence she had come to expect in Viznove.

Some of the inns had been beside themselves in apology they could not accommodate her!

Proper arrangements were still made of course. Fizzbunches was eager to call up entire buildings, with feasting halls, tall ceilings, kitchens and sleeping chambers sized for a wyrm at the slightest prompting. He even performed the trick when they had to camp outdoors once. The Weird was as close to begging to spread his buildings around as Jewel thought the cat was capable.

Much to the consternation of some of their hosts and how it left disparaging suggestions on their own hospitality.

One time he had been halfway through dragging freshly cut foundations and black timbres into place when it turned out they did have room for Jewel after all. The look when Jewel had told him to put the new building away had been rather funny.

It was even more amusing though when Fizzbunches casually gifted the resulting structures to use however the resident lords, ladies (and in one case an innkeeper) wished. If the City Weird was not so insufferably smug about it every time Jewel would have more genuinely thanked him.

But he was just so infuriatingly pleased with himself every single time he left another dark shingled roof and red bricked structure looming over a resident lord's manor house.

Jewel had seen that look among farmer's cats whenever they left rodents at a door.

And the way he preened when he had the opportunity again?

However with each new manor visited the problem of insufficient space to house Jewel was less pronounced.

Every lord and lady's house grew ever more opulent.

And she was suspicious but their manners seemed to even grow improved, although many smelled even more condescending of her they kept it from their faces or tone.

Although Jewel had discovered there were worse than such judgemental glares.

Just last night the local Baroness had hosted them in a feasting hall that made Kaeketeh seem reserved.

"Only the clearest glass in my windows! all the way from Beleniece you know!"

There had been shining copper everywhere!

"Fine stone! good marble quarried from right here in my own cliffs!"

The knives and plates were pure silver!

"Oh my, have you seen the prices the peddlers charge for that Wyrmspun Wool?"

Jewel and none of her party had offered to explain that it was called wyrmspun wool because she in fact had spun it. Apparently the idea did not even enter the Baroness' head.

"I had the clay for the shingles dredged from the best shores of the river Strekov!"

The woman spoke like she had the wool she loved so much crammed into her ears for how little she could listen while speaking for hours on end. But she had at least shown interest and courtesy!

An overwhelming, vapid kind of empty courtesy. But it was the best they had gotten the entire trip.

Jewel had recognized her scent, and recalled some vague meaningless chatter from the wedding. But she left it to Paul to handle the social niceties, the majority of the wyrm's attention consumed then by what would be coming the next day.

Which was now today, at the end of their journey.

The looming towers and vast sprawl of stone and brick buildings slowly rising and extending to either side of their path the closer they came to the Capital.

Descending terraces and passing tall tower forts in preparation of meeting the High King.

On the surface it was nothing of concern.

A simple feast of hospitality.

But after that there would be bargaining in private.

Jewel had already experienced this from the side of the Liege.

Now she would be doing it as the Vassal. The County of Viznove and Jewel's inheritance as Elizabeth's heir on the side of Bathory came with obligations from the High King.

Ones she had studied in preparation for this.

They came upon their road's gate into the Capital of the Realm of Cantor Reborn just past noon. The warmth of the sun sapped some by how low the sky dipped to the city. The crisp mists of fresh water billowing overhead and lightly wetting Jewel's scales in dew drops.

The roar of rushing rapids and gentler burble of brooks filling in beneath the now familiar (if magnified) noise of far too many men, women and children in close quarters.

At least Burning Depths Ford smelled better than Kaeketeh did even at a distance.

Unlike Kaeketeh there was no production or clearing a path in the traffic of carts and other travelers ahead of Jewel. Their journey so far came to a stop behind a wagon packed to bursting in heavy sacks of wheat seed.

The rough woven cloth bags piled high enough it was over Jewel's comfortable sight lines!

And the commoners around her!

Jewel found the whole experience strangely refreshing. Everywhere she had ever traveled in Viznove or the Ridgetails commoners would at least startle at the sight of her. It had held for most of their descent into the Valley so far.

But here in a milling crowd slowly moving past the gates of the Capital?

The crowd on the street gave her party some space, but for the most part there was hardly a wary glance!

Curious considerations, but the interest remained simply that!

It almost made her want to flare her wings and announce her arrival for the strange lack of a reaction! Instead Jewel turned to Thurzó as the wagon ahead of them moved forward another thirty feet. Almost a full body length for the wyrm.

"My friend, Count Thurzó. I am confused, Is it the custom in the Valley of Man for the peasants to be more polite than the nobles?"

The count laughed and Paul for his part turned to look at Jewel with confusion.

Smithson was helping Gem with a water skin as they waited.

"No Countess Rochford, but I've spoken of High King Mathias's menagerie of warbeasts before, yes?"

Jewel scowled at the reminder.

Supposedly such was what her fate would have been without Bathory's intervention.

"You've mentioned it before. And I have heard of such before."

Thurzó nodded as they came to a rest again, the heavily burdened cart of grain ahead of them swaying on its wheels a bit disturbingly. Jewel craned her neck to the left and noted the team of four oxen pulling it.

"Well not to disparage your beauty, grace or mighty presence Lady Rochford. But the Menagerie is the pride of the High King and some of the more civil members of his collection are not even infrequent sights on the streets of the inner city or beyond."

Jewel stared long enough at Thurzó after that statement. There was time enough that muttering began to quietly build in complaint about the 'star damned nobles blocking the way'. It was quiet enough no one else in her party likely heard, but she jolted forward to catch up to the open space ahead of them

"They allow beasts to roam the inner city? I had thought-"

Fizzbunches arrived on top of Jewel's head just long enough to snort out his own commentary!

"Not all who call the High King's Menagerie home are simple minded or unspeaking. And many are not held by such crude bondage as walls or stone. No chains of mortal made metal could hold a Sphinx."

Before Jewel could shake the insufferable Wizard loose he had already slipped behind one of his corners to somewhere else.

But his words had turned Thurzó's face stoney.

His words come out in a sharp hiss of a whisper.

"No one outside the king's court is supposed to know she is a Sphinx!"

Jewel glared at where the cat was trying to sneak back from around another corner on the back of Paul's saddle. Just ahead of Thurzó's own horse.

"Well then the High King's court should do a better job at keeping such secrets in confidence."

Jewel joined Thurzó in glaring at the smug cat as they waited for their turn to pass the gates of the city. The swaying tower of grain was tilting again as the line moved forward. Drawing another worried glance from Jewel.

It was tied down tight but the way it still shifted was very distracting!
 
*blinks*
Uhhh…
Well.
Didn't see that coming, the capital being used enough to abnormal creatures for Jewel to blend in just fine…
 
Without any central support the sky bowed low over the capital. Sinking like an improperly raised tent! When they first caught sight of the city of Burning Depths Ford Jewel could not even see the far side of the valley because the sky and sun was in the way!
Huh, I didn't even realize that the field was not a uniform height. I suppose something in or about the mountains acts as a projector, but this "Valley of Man" is located in a sort of blind spot in the coverage that causes the "Sky" to dip down to nearly ground level. Heck, this valley might have been carved at least partially to keep the field from touching the surface.

Now the question is whether this gap is "natural", or if there used to be a proper "Sky Pillar" nearby until something happened to it. Come to think of it, the way the valley itself was described makes it sound like a giant crater with a sink hole in the middle where a large cavern complex collapsed in on itself. Did this place used to be a mountain that was somehow destroyed ages upon ages ago?
 
... And here I thought last chapter had given me a lot to think about with the cosmology of this world! The sky bowing inwards like that? I gasped out loud, honestly.

From recent stuff, I'm leaning towards my hyperbolic space theory from way earlier being true - or at least there's definitely some space-warping shenanigans going on. The world shrinking away from you unnaturally fast, to the point where Jewel lifting her head seemed to place her in a surrounding void of sky? In the earlier interlude, it was a little ambiguous as to whether it could have been due to the world being spherical, but no, that's definitely negative curvature. It would also cause the peaks of mountains to get 'wider' hence the need to carve passes - anywhere the mountains are lower the sky would also dip, also causing that expansion. That's why the stone plains that were described take so long to cross - no peaks holding away the space expansion on either side! (Now what's the deal with underways? If the overpasses take a long time to travel somewhere adjacent, are the underways the shortcuts to arbitrarily far away that I thought they would be before? Or are they an alternative method of doing the same thing as overpasses, just trading having to carve through all that rock at the space-expanded peak for carving a tunnel through the base of a mountain instead?)

I suspect strongly that this has also has something to do with the astral/earthly magic divide. (Stars, gods, and priests being astral; weirds, wyrms, and ...earth being earthly.) In real life, mass warps space, and that makes gravity. GPS satellites have to account for this effect in their calculations. Here the effect seems exaggerated and/or reversed, with the mountains and pillars of the earth holding back the warp of the sky.

Notably, an object moving fast in negatively curved space will get pulled apart as the parallel velocities of its atoms diverge. You can think of it as putting more space in your space. And gases that are forced to expand will drop in temperature. (And those forces would also scramble the insides of any body part you shove into it - skybite might not be entirely frostbite!)

Also, Jewel is extremely powerful in earthly magic, being able to listen to the voices of objects in her environment but conversely unable to even interact with some astral beings.

What am I getting at? I'm not sure there actually is a barrier, or at least, the 'barrier' is actually some sort of intense spatial distortion, and the reason that air flew up around Jewel's neck isn't that she broke through a membrane per se but was actually holding up the sky a little bit, like a mountain.

I'm pretty sure that a distortion like this would make you see the sky bent inwards if it were sufficiently intense. Don't ask me what's going on with the sun.

Oh, and the winds! I'm not convinced they're actually from movement of air between vaults - or at least not entirely. If the sun is acting like a spot on a blanket, then what was described makes sense for the air heating up and rising underneath it, causing a sort of mini Hadley cell within the vault to reverse directions back and forth. But the sun is still confusing me, so. Shrug!

Edit: HEY WAIT THIS EXPLAINS THE FALLING SEEDS. Well not really because still no idea what it's about at all but this is a connection from the earth to the sky that could cause a difference! The ocean must get very cold and big from the sky dipping close to it.
 
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12.2

12.2


Jewel tried to maintain her composure while she stood in the absolutely astounding opulence of the Capital Palace's waiting hall. Paul held the tiny hand of Gem, his thumb gently massaging her palm in slow circles. Helping to soothe both of her bodies with the regular motions.

She squeezed his finger back with her slender fingers in thanks.

It would only be the three of them at the High King's Table.

Jewel had no idea where Fizzbunches had gone.

Smithson was with Muriel seeing that the chambers set aside for the Viznove party were sufficient. Dariusz and his family had disappeared into the staggeringly vast expanse of hallways and floors almost immediately upon arriving in the courtyard of the palace.

Led by a servant in finery fit for one of Jewel's more opulent vassals!

The sheer wealth for even the dress of the Capital's staff made Jewel glad she mostly could do without such things as a Wyrm.

She had already seen what might very well have been the annual tithe to Viznove enter the high king's feasting hall in embroidery alone! Well over a dozen parties before them so far and many dressed well enough to shame the late Bathory herself. Lesser nobles, priests and guild representatives. The lowest or least honored taken in first as was familiar and proper.

But their wealth had belittled those that yet remained to be called.

It spoke of the sheer riches that filled the Realm. For even its minor nobles to be so finely dressed.

The vastness of the Capital still made Jewel want to reel under its immensity. Every building in Midtown, the wall fort and the Kaeketeh Keep could have comfortably fit within the 'grounds' of the palace.

Said grounds being more than two thirds built upon stone arched bridges that hung over the widest incoming river of the many crossing waterways of Burning Depths Ford!

And those bridges!

A monument of stonework that each utterly dwarfed Jewel's Manor house. If it had taken a good portion of the labor of Rochford over years to make such a small work (quarried in place) as her house?

Just how many men and how many years had been spent on just the foundational bridges of the palace?!

How many barges had carried these stones from distant lands?

And they were foreign stones, Jewel's every step told her the whispered tale, some recent and others long past of the different sky they had first felt when pulled free and apart from the mountains and cliffs they once rested in and under.

Dozens of Quarries scattered across the world. Jewel had read of the scope of the The Realm of Cantor Reborn.

She had done the sums and thought that meant she understood.

But the palace alone dwarfed every estimation she had thought she comprehended.

And then there was the rest of the city!

A multilayered thing of canals, bridges and aqueducts! Old cantor stoneworks aged as the original solar dynasty held aloft entire rivers (complete with trade barges and fishing boats!) overhead.

In places they arched two or in one place even three rivers deep, stacked one over another! The stone arches solid pieces of some sorcerous working. Shaped and called forth in place by long gone wizards. But even now the word of their sorcery is still echoing.

The stones murmuring in their sleepy whisper of centuries passed.

And even without the voice of the stones Jewel would guess a great age to these works. For around, under and between the solid wrought bedrock of mountain roots called to man made forms were other structures, airy villas and other stacked and packed houses which reeked of sweat and sleeping men.

Bakeries and the grinding of millstones, the creaking wooden spinning of them coming from sluices cut off the sides of the 'raised rivers'.

The city was a tangled forest of stone and waterways.

And everywhere were marvels!

But most of all the Capital was full of people! Every street was packed with men, women and children. Rich nobles and poor commoners, peddlers and laborers in crafts Jewel could not even guess at. She was not even sure how many of them were in fact commoners so rich and embroidered were some of their clothing!

And as in Kaeketeh where there were people there was noise.

Noise and stink.

In the Palace all of that was distant and thankfully muted.

But the trip there had been like wading through a mire of scent and noise.

The voices in foreign tongues chanting together with the heave of exertion. Shouts of foremen from docks well over Jewel's head!

Sometimes they even were heaving burdens from a boat above by ropes and wooden frames over and down too one docked below! A bustle of bags, barrels, pots and even a few times Jewel could spot the despondent visage of a Mule dangling at least twenty feet over the street below!

Jewel was thankful for the size of the Capital Palace and its wonderful enclosing stone walls. The friendly masonry was proud of her gratitude, perhaps firming up just that bit more in their mortar behind the white plaster of the room.

Ready to hold up the high vaulted ceilings all around her for that much longer against their own weight.

Just for the simple thanks she offered that they helped smother the sound and smells of a city so enormous it escaped all reckoning. Kaeketeh stacked on top of itself twelve times over was no match to the population, goods or buildings in a narrow slice of Burning Depths Ford!

Jewel turned to consider some of those who were waiting with her in the chambers.

Ranked close to her own due honor as a Countess by the simple fact they were still here awaiting the crier to call them.

A man perhaps a head taller than Paul. Dressed in something that Jewel could almost say was the finery fit for one of the nobility in Viznove. But he had none of the colors of her vassals or their families. Neither did he have any sigils which she was Familiar with from the neighboring counties of the Ridgetails.

He stood alone but had spared Jewel a single glance before dismissing her.

Such confident seeming disregard to a wyrm spoke of character.

His fear was welling up in the sweat under his clothes of course, but he did not show it on his face. A clear sign of bravery.

The others had considerably weaker mettle.

Their fear was open on their faces and when they thought Jewel was not looking (Gem was) they gave her furtive glances.

Two of them had the look of local Barons to the Valley of man. That is to say they wore a ransom that would beggar Rochford in embroidered coats, gowns and furs. Which was an understandable custom. Sunlit the valley might be but shallow was the air between land and sky.

The nights were harsh indeed.

Three others had clothing and colors Jewel could not place at all.

But when they spoke among themselves?

It was the strangest thing Jewel had ever experienced in her life.

Her mother's words, but on the lips and tongues of strangers.

A disquieting phantom of memory.

It was not exactly the same, but the sounds cut and aborted just as Jewel had long grown familiar. Who were they? She lowered her head down to her husband and whispered softly. Keeping her tone quiet to avoid disturbing any of her fellow guests for the welcoming feast.

"Paul, do you recognize the tongue they speak? Or their heraldry and colors?"

Her husband turned from Jewel to look at the man and the woman. Considering carefully.

"I am uncertain, They could be from the lands of the freemen? Or the north folk, I'm not well versed in the tongues spoken east of the heartlands of the Realm. Maybe their Saszon? Or from the tinhills?"

Before Jewel could decide if she wanted to try asking the strangers from where they came the crier for the High King called out.

"His Royal Highness Mathias of House Stein, High King of the Realm of Cantor Reborn, Welcomes Æthelred the Second of House Gewisse and family to his table!"

Jewel squinted with Gem's eyes to avoid being too obvious in her judgment. The strange foreign yet familiar speaking people certainly did not look like they were wearing anywhere near the finery fit for a visiting king.

For all their strangeness the garb seemed honestly worse then what Paul was wearing and he was a Baron Consort!

A brief revealing of the golden light of candles and roaring fires filled the entry hallway before again being snuffed out behind closed doors.

Next came the gaggle of Barons which Jewel had already deemed unimportant despite their position with her. There had been a dozen others just like them ahead of her and she thought it likely this was purely a show of favor for their low ranking.

But Jewel did not have long to look after them as they also passed the great doors of the High King's feasting halls. Only a moment past the doors closing entirely and hiding the scant view of brightly lit feasting tables the crier was calling welcome to the next actually interesting figure in the party and Jewel got to learn just who the strange man was.
"Lord Vladimer the Third of House Basarab, Prince in exile of the Vlach Lands!"

A name and a place then, but Jewel was unsure of the exact providence there of. It Sounded like a Ridgetail name to Jewel. But she honestly could not say she recalled it amongst any of her peers. But there was an intensity to Paul's face that suggested he recognized it.

But again before they could even begin to consider speaking, she was called.

"Lady Jewel of House Rochford, Countess and Shining Wyrm of Viznove and her family!"

The doors parted before Jewel and as custom and propriety dictated they strode into the space, Paul, Gem and Jewel herself.

Gem's dress was a fine thing, made well fitting and embroidered and dyed in the colors of both her families. Striking black and red with silver thread to stand in for the Rochford sky.

Loose enough in the sleeves, waist and skirts to let her walk, stand, bend or run as she was wont. It aided in the easy and practiced grace that Jewel had always seen her mother enter a hall. Gem now had a face held in a match with Jewel's own. Soft lipped but neither smiling foolishly nor scowling insultingly.

An easy and carefully formed benevolence for all whose eyes fell upon her.

She entered through double doors that were easily tall enough for her to comfortably enter and wide enough as they opened to barely need her wings to fold.

The room beyond was a warm gold, orange and pale yellow in the veritable forest of candles and lanterns which gave it illumination. Making of the vast open expanse of hard black stone tiles like a clearing in a grove of trees.

But instead of leaves their black iron branches held aloft flames and pure white candle wax.

What she had thought were fires instead just incredibly dense clusters of burning wicks and white wax.

Musicians plucked instruments Jewel found familiar and foreign and they added a delicate undercurrent to the mostly quiet murmuring of conversation.

The height of the feasting hall was however the most impressive thing about the room.

Jewel had long grown accustomed to every indoor space's highest point being one she could reach up and touch if desired.

But here she would have had to leap to brush it.

The ceiling of the High King's feasting hall was a vast thing. It arced overhead so high that most of the curving expanse was lost in shadows despite the candlelight being almost as bright as noon day sun!

But even so shaded it was not invisible.

No it glittered like a woven tapestry of the night sky.

Shining with hints of silver in the forms of the zodiac. Each of the seventeen animals was illustrated in glittering threads of gold and beads of shining silver. The Serpent, The Lion, The Storm, The Twins!

They were all there, although some of the features embellished were strange compared to those Jewel had seen in her books.

The twins were some kind of dog for one instead of the more familiar rabbits.

From the glittering illustration the roof itself was shaped as all one curved piece and it was joined and supported by seventeen wide columns of solid stone which slumbered where they stood.

Each securely rooted even deeper into more solid foundations that went arcing out beneath and from there all the way to the very bedrock of the earth.

Jewel had felt this elsewhere the entire palace was not made all in one piece of uncut stone.

Most of it was not.

The walls and the stone arch of the doors she had just walked through were cut and shaped and placed between these columns. As were the walls set up to the ceiling. So too the balconies to either side where the musicians played and some kind of scented herbs were tended.

But the High King Mathias' dining hall's main supports were all one single thing.

Moreso the Dome and the wide bridge it extended from were all wrought together by sorcery many long centuries past.

A part of a singular span of solid rock which crossed the river below.

Jewel had to shake her head and turn her attention back down from the disquieting sensation of actually being dwarfed by a single room after so long.

The arrangement of the tables and seating was different from how Jewel had seen before, either at home or staying as guests. Instead of having two long lines and one head, or some similar arrangement which extended them lengthwise the High King of the Realm was elevated with his wife and queen on one side of a partial ring of a table.

The hoop of it was laden in fine silver dishes and framed by high backed chairs.

The half ring of seated guests had a gap wide enough for Jewel to pass with her wings held tightly against her back, although not enough room to contain all of her without some rather severe coiling.

At the king's beckoning Jewel, Paul and Gem approached. The eyes of the other nobility and important personages of the Realm following them.

They stopped in the open space of the horse shoe shaped table. Surrounded on three sides.

The nobility of the Realm appraised her.

Thurzó was a welcome familiar face, although he was affecting a similar masked benevolence as Jewel. The High King had seen to arrange the empty space without a chair for Jewel on the Count of Arva's right. Only one place from the High King himself.

The chairs for Gem and Paul were several places further down the line, next to the Lord Vladimer, in his Ridgetail seeming finery.

Æthelred and his party were next after the strange prince.

It was a very esteemed place.

Jewel dipped her head, not so low as to suggest she had fully accepted Mathias as her liege. But enough to be a courteous guest to a king. Just as all of her prospective vassals had before her. Then spoke the words as was proper for her place as guest in his house.

"High King Mathias of House Stein, I thank you for this welcome to your home and table. As we have shared a meal in my family's home I look forward to sharing one in yours."

Jewel watched the crowd openly from the low vantage of Gem. It was harder than doing so from the height of her long wyrmish neck. But also far less overt. A child of Gem's stature was mostly ignored by adults.

Or when her curious eye was noticed, even encouraged with smiles, rebuffed by blank stares or mocked by momentary sneers.

Mathias beamed up at Jewel from his throne.

"And you are welcome at my table Jewel of House Rochford, Countess and Shining Wyrm of Viznove. Come join us and let us feast in welcome camaraderie tonight!"

The only standout to her smaller self's scrutiny was the delighted wave of some older woman with gray hair and so many pearls hanging from her neck it looked like her entire front was a shimmering rainbow white of the beads.

More interesting however was Jewel neither saw nor smelled surprise from her capacity for eloquent speech from anyone in that wide hoop of a table except the few foreigners.

House Gewisse and their foreign yet familiar muttering were the most overtly wary of her. But in a bizarre way the court of the Capital of Cantor Reborn seemed far more comfortable with Jewel than any other table of strangers Jewel had ever met.

Some still stank of their view of her. But they kept it to themselves.

A few glares directed at the king when neither Jewel's nor Mathias and his closest seated subjects were looking made Jewel think that probably the restrained ire for her person was actually for the King.

"Now be seated my most honored guests."

That definitely caused a bristling to those who had gone before Jewel but she didn't see why. Obviously the High King had already acknowledged he held her in greatest esteem for having her wait to be seated last.

She nodded to the High King again, Both with her larger and smaller self as did Paul. Then each of them made their way to their places at the table.

The High King Raised his hands.

"Now my Guests, tonight we have some true wonders to enjoy this evening. Some of which have come to us all the way from the Blessed Solar Lands and the Pantheon of Old Cantor itself!"

Jewel turned to one of the side doors where the finely dressed staff were pulling the doors apart to reveal a cloth covered form. And then Jewel felt something in the world lurch queasily as the shape was slowly rolled into the room.

The grinding of the stone cylinders and the faintest creaking of such nearly cracking under their burden drew some of her senses.

But the strain of the stones bearing the object's weight was mostly drowned out by Jewel's disorientation. It was deeply disquieting, almost like the stone beneath her was sliding ever so slightly and slipping away beneath her. Whatever the sensation was though it ended when the object was halted in its motion (under great strain of the servants guiding it) in full view of all the seated guests.

Visible but yet cloaked by a near black dyed cloth.

It was just over ten feet across and eight tall. It had taken the muscle of twenty men to move and stop it. Each of which was now heavy in sweat according to Jewel and Gem's nose.

The wyrm shifted uneasily, what had that been? There were no hints of faux flame or sorcery. No one at the table had reacted to anything happening at all. Jewel held back the desire to flare her wings. Even if the dining hall actually had the room for it.

Gem had not felt anything strange either.

There was something ominous that had just happened from the unknown object covered in black cloth.

The vaguely familiar man spoke and his voice scratched at a memory.

"Esteemed guests of the High Court of Cantor Reborn! I Peter Bulchava present to you this treasure wrought by the greatest mysteries in crafted artifice! A work of divine blessing, sorcerous arcana and mortal artistry! Truly the singular and greatest achievement and wonder of this age!"

And then with a sign from the High King and a flourishing bow by the oddly familiar man in shining finery at the side of the strange black rectangle-

The drapery was thrown aside.

And there before the entire dining hall and all its guests was an idyllic garden under a shining starlit sky. Not a tapestry, not an image. Jewel leaned her long neck to the side and confirmed that the clothing had not obscured some strange trickery or somehow blotted out the distinct feeling of faux fire.

But no such artifice was present.

It was like a section of the dining hall ten feet by eight had been cut into an open sky garden, with a glittering pool of water and a few trees.

It however was not against a wall.

It was by Jewel's judgment not even framed or backed by much more than two of Gem's hands in the width of wooden timbres!

But to every one of Jewel's senses, not only did it look like the strange exterior garden under open sky was somehow simply sitting there in the middle of a definitely interior feasting hall? But she could feel the world of it going out into its own expanse of open air.

However there was something unsettling and eerie about it.

The strange garden and all its trees, shrubbery, water, stone, rock and shrub. Every single thing in that strange expanse that was visible to her. And felt beyond what could be seen?

The silver haired man with finery so rich bowed to the guests and then took a few steps into the garden.

Jewel stared, she could feel the dining room behind the garden's frame. The man was not standing in that space.

No he was within the frame. Somehow a space outside had been framed and backed by wooden timbres, He continued to wander around then walked back out and bowed to one of the lowest esteemed guests on one end of the table.
Asking to borrow an empty clear glass goblet from them.

Then returned to the garden 'outside' and scooped a serving from the little pool of water. Carrying it back out into the feasting hall for all to see before he took a long draft from it and exhaled theatrically.

Offering the glass back to the guest who bemusedly took his own sip before widening his eyes and downing the entire glass.

There was delicate applause. But shocking to Jewel very little other interest. As if this was some simple act of sorcery.

All around her were muttered meaningless and insincere praise.

Jewel however could only stare at the glass, at the two men that downed the water and relished it. The water that yet clung to the glass, that still stirred and moved in their bodies now and wet their lips. That water and everything from that garden held in its frame scraped at Jewel's senses.

Everything from that strange place but the air itself was incredibly young.

By the sunrises and sunsets it had felt she was certain it could not have been more than three years old!

Genuinely youthful in a way Jewel had never ever felt from the world before.

Jewel was so absorbed in staring at the impossibility before her she missed them bringing forth the first course of the meal!
 
... And here I thought last chapter had given me a lot to think about with the cosmology of this world! The sky bowing inwards like that? I gasped out loud, honestly.

From recent stuff, I'm leaning towards my hyperbolic space theory from way earlier being true - or at least there's definitely some space-warping shenanigans going on. The world shrinking away from you unnaturally fast, to the point where Jewel lifting her head seemed to place her in a surrounding void of sky? In the earlier interlude, it was a little ambiguous as to whether it could have been due to the world being spherical, but no, that's definitely negative curvature. It would also cause the peaks of mountains to get 'wider' hence the need to carve passes - anywhere the mountains are lower the sky would also dip, also causing that expansion. That's why the stone plains that were described take so long to cross - no peaks holding away the space expansion on either side! (Now what's the deal with underways? If the overpasses take a long time to travel somewhere adjacent, are the underways the shortcuts to arbitrarily far away that I thought they would be before? Or are they an alternative method of doing the same thing as overpasses, just trading having to carve through all that rock at the space-expanded peak for carving a tunnel through the base of a mountain instead?)

I suspect strongly that this has also has something to do with the astral/earthly magic divide. (Stars, gods, and priests being astral; weirds, wyrms, and ...earth being earthly.) In real life, mass warps space, and that makes gravity. GPS satellites have to account for this effect in their calculations. Here the effect seems exaggerated and/or reversed, with the mountains and pillars of the earth holding back the warp of the sky.

Notably, an object moving fast in negatively curved space will get pulled apart as the parallel velocities of its atoms diverge. You can think of it as putting more space in your space. And gases that are forced to expand will drop in temperature. (And those forces would also scramble the insides of any body part you shove into it - skybite might not be entirely frostbite!)

Also, Jewel is extremely powerful in earthly magic, being able to listen to the voices of objects in her environment but conversely unable to even interact with some astral beings.

What am I getting at? I'm not sure there actually is a barrier, or at least, the 'barrier' is actually some sort of intense spatial distortion, and the reason that air flew up around Jewel's neck isn't that she broke through a membrane per se but was actually holding up the sky a little bit, like a mountain.

I'm pretty sure that a distortion like this would make you see the sky bent inwards if it were sufficiently intense. Don't ask me what's going on with the sun.

Oh, and the winds! I'm not convinced they're actually from movement of air between vaults - or at least not entirely. If the sun is acting like a spot on a blanket, then what was described makes sense for the air heating up and rising underneath it, causing a sort of mini Hadley cell within the vault to reverse directions back and forth. But the sun is still confusing me, so. Shrug!

Edit: HEY WAIT THIS EXPLAINS THE FALLING SEEDS. Well not really because still no idea what it's about at all but this is a connection from the earth to the sky that could cause a difference! The ocean must get very cold and big from the sky dipping close to it.

So... I'm going to sit here with my popcorn and reread this a third time. I'm having a hard time understanding bits like negative curvature cause to me that just sounds like flat or curving the other way like concave vs convex. I can see that distorting light and thus visuals but not the very fabric of the universe. Not saying you're wrong just not understanding based on terms used
 
So... I'm going to sit here with my popcorn and reread this a third time. I'm having a hard time understanding bits like negative curvature cause to me that just sounds like flat or curving the other way like concave vs convex. I can see that distorting light and thus visuals but not the very fabric of the universe. Not saying you're wrong just not understanding based on terms used

Both convex and concave are positive curvature, like a sphere - negative is often described as a saddle, but imo a better way to visualise it is crotchet.

So, for example, in a positively-curved/spherical space you can put three right angles around a point (think cube blown up into a sphere), in a flat space you can put four right angles around a point (think normal square tesselation), and in a negatively-curved/hyperbolic space you can put five right angles around a point (wrinkly crotchet).

You also get a real feel for the shrink-away effect in Hyperbolica and Hyperrogue. (You can also see the grow-away effect for spherical space in Hyperbolica.) But I am getting a little tripped up because I only have intuition for space that's flat everywhere or hyperbolic everywhere, not a mix. Also while I'm linking videos, the effect with the garden sounds a lot like how Project Manifold looks.

The devlogs for Hyperbolica have more demos and explain it in a little more detail, and there are plenty of other videos that go heavier into the maths as well.
 
12.3

12.3


Adelyne wondered just what she was doing here.

In Kaeketeh she had actually been useful. She knew those streets, she could speak to the guilds, dock workers, street rats, orphans and whores. The work was something she could tell was helping her lady and her city.

But the capital?

Trapped in the palace where the servants dressed like minor nobles themselves?

Adelyne didn't have any part in this.

Worse still, while she was sitting in one of the servant's rooms of a guest wing almost as large as Kaeketeh keep itself, one of their traveling companions had decided to bother her instead of doing whatever it was sorcerous talking cats did in palaces.

He'd not spoken too, been in the presence of or really even looked much at Adelyne since they met up on the journey.

But now he was speaking to her!

"Hello there child of Kaeketeh's streets. I think it is long overdue that we had a little chat."

Adelyne was familiar with cats.

There were plenty who lived on the streets in Kaeketeh.

There were also just as many who lived better than Adelyne had in the decadence of midtown. At least better until Jewel claimed her as a bonded woman.

How the life of a pet and a bonded servant were so similar left a bad taste on Adelyne's tongue.

So yes Adelyne was familiar with cats.

But that did not mean she was comfortable with one that spoke.

"Uh, y-yes lord sorcerer sir."

Adelyne knew cats and she knew for a fact that they didn't 'frown' like that. Not when they were displeased. A few did look unhappy all the time but that was not the same as a proper frown.

Cat's had a way with their eyes and their tails and how they held their backs.

Fizzbunches the Lord Sorcerer did those things as well.

But he also could squish and bend his face in ways no cat ever could or would.

He could smile.

He could raise a single brow.

He could look smug as well as surprised in ways entirely unlike a cat.

He could also glare far more severely.

"Cease the mask little Muhtal, There are no airs between us children of the street. You're no courtesan needing to shine yourself like false copper. There are business-a-do tween us to settle and silver heavy for your palm. Respect tween be our ilk you ken?"

The cat's voice, who had never once been anything but the haughtiest of noble prattle any time Adelyne had ever heard it, sank from those cultured heights like a stone into the river vah.

And it was definitely on the south side of the river at that.

Where the piss and shit made a stink that was enough to water the eyes. That was how the lord sorcerer's voice had changed in that single moment. Before she even knew what she was doing she responded with a snap as she would anyone else on the street who said as much.

"Laughs to that any deal with a posh tongue wizard."

The cat in a red floppy hat who was anything but that grinned with bright yellow eyes. Tail flicking in the way she had seen on more mundane beasts of his kind right before the prepared to pounce.

"Names slathered onto I might be so by fearful high shitters it true, but not my roots that sink low from above. Not by claws sharpened on high or purses heavy came I. From the gutter stink climbed I. In a hungry night was born me, in alleys did I beg and steal."

Adelyne boggled, it was not Kaeketeh slang he was speaking.

It was not even any words or language she had ever heard. It was flowery, smooth, roiling and sonorous. It crept into a soft almost (appropriately) cat-like yowl sometimes.

But under the words she did not know like the street and cobbles under her toes and the crowd wrapped around her in a cloak she knew every meaning clear as a knife in the dark. Meaningful and solid as a silver grosz plucked from a purse.

"So from my streets to yours I repeat myself little kitten. We've business to balance."

Adelyne huffed then nodded to the wizard that was a cat and not. Was of the familiar street and imminently foreign.

"Fine, what you want?"

He nodded to her and spoke with words that were actually legible. Convenient as the strange sorcery where she had still been understanding some foreign tongue before was.

"My associate tells me you've spoken for your streets in Kaeketeh. And that it has done well for you and yours and the interests of the Countess Jewel as well. Tell me, what do you know of my business with your mistress?"

His voice was smooth again, but even so it didn't take on the snooty noble's words that sounded like midtown.

It was a familiar street tongue.

Adelyne huffed and dropped the awkward tone and fancy words that were such a poor fit for her. Although it galled how all of her work to try and sound like was proper has already proven a waste.

"I dunno, Your Lady Jewel's friend? She gets along well with that weird slinking bog thing that smells like farts."

The cat smirked up at her.

"I admit Tsulogothulan has endeared themselves far better with the Lady Jewel than was strictly intended. But no one but foolish prattling lords and ladies think there is any friendship between us."

Adelyne considered him. His voice was reminding her of how some of the older boys talked when she was a kid. Acting clever cuz he was bigger and older.

Full of himself but also canny.

Watching out that the other kids in their particular alley got at least a bite to eat.

Not well, not kind really.

Adelyne had been bruised as much from those for things she deserved as not.

"I heard tell you lot of wizards were tight-knit and tied with her though."

The Wizard who was a cat nodded.

"Just so, but it's by business with her father. And business of our own there too that we are so close. But a business I hear you might rightly understand."
He jumped up from the floor to the bed of that servant's bunk which Adelyne had found softer than any place she had yet slept. Which made sense, the servants in the palace were dressed like nobles, why wouldn't they sleep like them.

"Tell me Adelyne, speaker of the street, daughter of Kaeketeh in all her filth and spite. Why did you risk the Countess Jewel's wrath abandoning your bonded labors?"

Adeleyne opened her mouth to speak but before she could even start to say the words he was cutting her off.

"Not the clever lie we tell the marks streetdottir. What was your real business running out and risking your neck?"

Her teeth hurt with how hard they met one another in her sudden terrified panic. The eyes of the cat were golden, but the light in them shined like a starlit knife in the dark.

She found her words quiet despite them being alone in the room.

It felt right, like there was a murmur of a crowd near them in spite of the eerie quiet of the palace.

Like the candlelit room set aside for Jewel's servants was in fact an alley just a turn away from crowded markets.

The simple stone floors feeling more like cobbles and the scent of wood, strange herbs and dry sweat replaced by rotten filth and dirt and smoke of a city, not Kaeketeh's city but one that had air that in spite of its foreignness tasted similar.

"The Lady Jewel would have been angry, angry with the fools on the street, angry with the entire city. She would have been angry and she would have done more of the same as she did with the bloody footmen."
Fizzbunches nodded to her, but despite him being a black cat sitting on a bed, well lit by clean candle light he gave the impression of one of the children she had been paying silvers for news on the street.

The thought reminded her of the spark that had driven Adelyne to action.

"She thought she'd made them children, She didn't see the difference. She didn't even realize what was going to happen. She wouldn't have understood. And then she would have blamed them for doing what anyone would have found proper!"
He was looking at her, and those golden eyes were not the gold of metal.

It was the gold of cheap oil wicks burning pig fat off reeds.

Or a sparse fire burning weakly on a cold night.

Adelyne stared into those eyes and saw the warmth that only touched abandoned children and broken men.

The fire tucked away in the corners for those that couldn't even get a spot in the bunk houses.

The words continued nearly without her wanting too.

"It woulda been a disaster!"

And he nodded again. The fire of those warming coals vanished with a slow blink, and when they returned it was just golden yellow cat eyes again.

"Just so streetdottir, just so. And that Adelyne of Kaeketeh is my business, it's the business I've called together a circle of wizardry for. That is why the labor of a year of my city has gone into the deals I've made for the Baron of Rochford so far."

He spoke and there was in his purring throat the sound of soft and thin-shod feet on twisting alleys.

His voice had an echo of a quiet night.

He kept talking.

"Jewel is undeniably what the people in the Ridgetails call a Tyrant Wyrm."

Which was obvious to anyone in Kaeketeh. Even the blind, deaf and infirm knew that. Jewel's voice echoed in their bones.

"But she is not the first. And by the words I've gathered from across your realm and beyond she may in fact no longer even be the only one."

Adelyne felt her stomach drop out inside her.

"We are all very fortunate that Jewel has turned out as docile as she is."
The thought was stuck in her head, harsh and catching, like a fisherman's hook. She stared down at the cat who sounded like strange and yet so familiar alleys.

"So tell me Streetdottir of Kaeketeh. Do you care to make a bargain for the good of Kaeketeh, her streets and all who walk upon them?"

Her throat felt dry.

The cat which could smile how no cat ever should stared up at her.

Eyes like the dying coals which pushed back the chill burn of the night. Finally she found her voice.

"What's your catch? What's the price?"

She wanted to believe if it was too much she'd refuse. But the terror of not just Jewel but another wyrm like her?

One considered less docile?!

"A simple trifle, serve your lady in the spirit that you have already. Speak for the streets, look where she won't see, think what she won't consider, be where she cannot go, listen in places where her overly rich blooded entourage cannot pass unnoted."

Adelyne glared at the cat.

"As soon as we get back to Kaeketeh I'll do that anyway."

The smile grew sharp, the teeth shined. Adelyne knew cats and those were not the teeth of a cat. They had the points but the look of them shined more like a man's then any feline creature.

"Oh you misunderstand streetdottir, this service would start immediately."
She glared harder at the sorcerer that was both a cat and not.

"Don't quite see how I'm going to do that lord sorcerer. This is the bloody capital. I don't know shit from silver here."

The servant's quarters grew both darker and lighter than it had before.

The walls seemed to loom and bend.

The ceiling felt like it had opened up over them.

The stone of the floor felt like the seams had sunk away and the stones rounded into cobbles.

"Well that's where the nature of your payment comes from, daughter of Kaeketeh."

Adelyne looked around the room, at the simple walls, the too tall ceiling, the fine and tightly fitted stone floors.

Her eyes told her one thing, but her nose, her ears, her toes in their shoes and the air on her neck all said something else entirely. She was by all sights in a well candlelit chamber fit for a dozen servants.

But the air itself loomed and pressed in.

The wind blew between strange buildings.

The murmur of a crowd shifted and brushed around her.

The Temple and the god botherers warned about prayer.

They warned about pleas made openly with the heavens.

They warned about the bargains that could be struck with the stars.

Adelyne looked down at this cat, who could fill a simple room with the air of a city. Who could speak to her with words she did not know and still be understood because they spoke from the streets.

Not the streets of her home, but somehow still the same streets.

Familiar.

"Alright you bloody smug fuckface, What's the offer?"

Adelyne was not sure if her grandfather would have approved or boxed her ears for this.

She wasn't sure if she was thinking before or after the trouble.

But he was only asking her to do what she already wanted to do.

Surely there wouldn't be any harm?
 
Hunh.
So. This is intriguing. This is telling.
Mayhaps there was a reason Jaska used kill commands on Jewel…
As for Fizzbjnches and Adelyne?
I find it interesting Adelyne had much the same emotional reaction as Jewel that 'this cat is too smug for his own good.'
But that's the Weird of Alleyways for you I guess…Hrrrm…
I wonder if he's connected to how that false garden worked? That 'replaced air' trick of his made me think of that…
 
Tsu makes everything around him swampy, and Fizz makes everything around him... street-y. Not necessarily any more clean though :V

Is Fizz going to turn her into a corner-turning cat?
 
I believe that Adelyne may be a wizard-in-training, now. With Fizzbunches as her familiar.

Wizardry is a matter of knowing, and Adelyne is certainly already beginning to know streets. Fizzbunches, as some one intimately, weirdly familiar with streets might just need to nudge her a little further along the way.
 
12.4

12.4


After the meal the welcome feast transitioned smoothly to the more public declarations and requests for the High King.

First had been Æthelred who was amusingly there to request a defensive pact on the part of the Realm of Cantor Reborn to uphold his rightful rule in such a case as his cousins from the Northlands pressed a claim upon his realm within some kingdom within the vault of the Tin Hills.

Mathias had not outright refused him, promising instead to settle the specifics of their business by no later than four nights hence.

After that had been internal matters from the High King's Direct vassals, both those of a comparable station as Jewel and lower titles which Mathias had direct responsibility for regarding his local titles.

It seemed most of those matters were settled officially in the open. Either by pre-arrangement or easily settled precedent.

The reminder that a lord or lady had multiple responsibilities left a twinge in Jewel for how little she had been able to dedicate to the concerns of Valasect while Kaeketeh and Viznove consumed her attention.

But the last of the immediately public matters drew not just Jewel's attention but a rapt consideration from Paul,Thurzó and quite a number of other guests at the table.

The man who wore finery hardly different from Paul stood in the open space of the feasting tables. Kneeling low to High King Mathias. Far in excess of the honor given merely by a guest to their host.

That was the supplication of a subject!

"Good Lord Vladimer, what brings an esteemed and exiled prince to the Realm of Cantor Reborn?"

The man straightened up from his supplication with not even a tremor of strain or lack of grace. His wide eyes and sharp narrow mustache and beard framing shoulder length locks. There was an intensity to his eyes that made Jewel think perhaps his eyes did not quite fit in his sockets.

"High King Mathias, The Magarska Kingdom holds my homeland in thrall and my people cry out under their deprivations. My brothers have been held hostage to ensure that my father obeys them. I come to you to ask for support in raising arms to retake my homeland and free my family from the tyranny of your rivals."

Jewel did not outwardly show her surprise. Well not with her larger face or posture. Gem gasped audibly and widened her eyes.

If Mathias agreed to this it would be a provocation towards war with Magarska for sure.

"Lord Vladimer, Prince of the Vlach Lands. I cannot promise the arms or armies of my Realm to your cause."

Jewel saw no outward sign, but the scent of this prince Vladimer suddenly stank of despair. The burst of it was enough to itch in her nostrils. Gem smothered her snout with a dinner cloth to muffle the sneeze. Her larger self had to settle for carefully cycling wyrmflame up into her nostrils and back down.

Before he could begin to bow and bring the matter to a close the High King spoke up.

"However, I am moved by your entreaty. And there is an opportunity that The Realm of Cantor Reborn can offer you and a few of your chosen warriors personal power."

Jewel could only just stop either of her necks from snapping around to look at the High King. The look on his face and the tone in his voice is far too familiar.

The prince however looked dubious.

"To reclaim the Vlach I will need force to slay an army. That is no trifle, not even for your esteemed war wizards and their magic. What power could you possibly offer?"
Jewel felt a cold premonition.

"A Sufficient one for that, but its nature is one best discussed behind closed doors. It however will not come without a cost Prince of the Vlach Lands."

Prince Vladimer fixed his slightly bulging eyes on The High King. Then uttered with a conviction that further chilled Jewel's flame.

"I will pay any price to save my people."

And with that Mathias dismissed the man and the feast.

She kept staring at him as the rest of the guests cleared from the room. The plates were cleared and the musicians dismissed.

Some of the other vassals tried to remain but a firm glare from their liege sent them off.

Eventually it was only Jewel (and Gem), Thurzó, Paul and Mathias himself.

Even the guards and queen were dismissed.

Jewel held her tongue as the cavernous feasting hall was made empty of all but them. She appreciated the trust it showed towards her by the High King.

It spoke of a respect she was honestly not entirely certain she shared.

"Forgive my impropriety to you King Mathias, but I'd request to speak plainly with you?"

Jewel could feel how her voice was straining to deepen into a bone rattling growl. But she held her anger tight. She kept her flame stored and coiled up tight deep in her chest. Not even a hint of it loose enough to slip into her words.

She kept her mind firmly off any strangely compelling options that might be offered up.

She would not be performing another working by accident here.

High King Mathias of House Stein, her yet to be acknowledged and acknowledging liege, coveter of monsters and apparently keeper of a menagerie of intelligent warbeasts met her gaze with smiling calm.

His eyes ran over her in a way Jewel had never actually felt before.

It made her skin want to shiver.

Finally he spoke after a deep sigh.

"Please Lady Jewel, Countess and Shining Wyrm of Viznove, speak your mind. Although I suspect I already know what you wish to say, please let the air be open and clear between us."

Jewel knew her scales did tremble now, she knew that she could unleash terrible sorcery or unfathomable doom upon this mere man. She knew that she could very likely do something even worse although what it might be she was unsure.

But the ruin that had nearly been made of Kaeketeh when she thought to enact justice burned in her memory.

She would not make the same mistake again.

But she could not keep her voice coming out more like the hiss of a bird then human speech.

"Did you just imply you would give those vile things that my predecessor made as a weapon of war for the Prince Vladimer's campaign?"

Mathias smiled openly to her, she could smell the satisfaction coming off of him.

Her friend Thurzó however smelled worried.

The High King dipped his head to her, not a nod of acknowledgment but a proper dip of ascent to her as if she held a higher station then he!

"Of course not, oh Shining Wyrm of Viznove. It has been confirmed that such things as the late Countess Bathory's ritual created are just as vile and disloyal as warned. Bereft of any mortal fetters or decency. Unguidable and uncontrollable. As terrible a thing as she warned of."
Jewel felt relief rising up to overwhelm her.

He had not a speck of guile or dishonesty to his scent, his voice was even and sure. The words rang true.

Tension released her wings and neck from the posture they had taken.

The sting of barely restrained wyrmflame settling so completely it almost caused her to collapse onto the table.

Fortunately for the woodwork she could just about keep herself upright.

"This concern speaks well of you Countess, and it is in fact the reason that I insisted you attend to me here in the capital so soon. I have need of the insight and talents only you possess."
Jewel drew herself back to focusing on the High King, in the slight fog of her sudden relaxation the details itched in how neither Paul or Thurzó were smelling any more relaxed. It put a new tension in her spine, tugging her neck slightly back again into a slowly coiling stack of curves.

She was puzzled over what his words could mean.

"We have not even finished finalizing what my vassal contract with The Realm of Cantor Reborn will be, High King. Calling on my service so soon is improper."

Mathias shook his head, Thurzó still was smelling worried. It made Jewel even more on edge, like some kind of presence was lurking beyond her senses. Wait, what was that smell? No, not a smell, a feeling in another sense.

Gem did not taste or sense it at all.

"I swear upon my Crown, Throne and Kingdom that this service will grant you a boon from me. If necessary I will offer an honorable release from my rule over you as my vassal and ratify Viznove as a sworn ally of my bloodline and the Realm of Cantor Reborn if that is the price you want for this task."

Jewel stared.

Paul's jaw hung open.

Thurzó was not surprised but his fear had not yet abated.

Jewel finally found her voice, although it was so strained and tight it almost sounded appropriate for Gem's throat.

"I, What? High King Mathias! Are you certain?!"

He nodded solemnly.

"Perform this service, offer your insight and counsel on but this one matter, answer for me a single question and it will be worth it. The security of my realm hangs upon your answer in this. So such a boon is more than worth it."

Jewel stared now with all four of her eyes.

Not just a service but something as trifling as a single question answered?!

"Just an answer? To a single question?"

The High King Mathias nodded, speaking softly.

"Your honest and true answer to a single question."

Jewel stared at the man who ruled all the Realm of Cantor Reborn. Who lived in a palace that she was fairly certain was larger than all her own direct holdings of herself and her family.

Rochford Castle, Kaeketeh Keep, Valasect's Manor-House. Maybe even all the land of Valasect itself?

All of them could likely fit in just the land covered by his palace!

Nevermind his vast multilayered city and all the fields in the Valley of Man.

An Entire Skyvault and vassals beyond.

And he would offer her a boon for an honest answer to a single question.

"Your boon is offered regardless of my answer?"

He nodded and Jewel felt somehow like she was falling. Even though she was entirely secure on solid ancient stone. Centuries since shaped beneath a shallow and comparatively youthful tiling of white and black marble.

"Very well I accept this service. What is the question."

In answer Mathias gestured, he stank of anticipation, and finally some anxiety. Thurzó still was reeking of a quiet fear.

The doors to the feasting hall opened, no servant present.

And standing there was a vaguely familiar figure.

She was dressed in finery as the other staff in the palace had been.

But as she walked into the room the strange scent that was not a scent tickled at Jewel's nose. Something she had never tasted in the faux flame or the nature of the world before.

It had the etching marks of a god's touch to it. Sharp and harsh. Lashing through the woman from every side. Like a thousand knives had struck through her flesh clean.

Every arcing swipe passed through her heart.

She walked before them and then dipped into a low kneel before them.

"Jewel, Shining Wyrm and Countess of Viznove, Inheritor from the Bloody Countess Bathory. I present to you the product of long years of effort to refine and repair the calamity of your predecessor and her heaven profaned traitor of a wizard Jaksa the Red."

Jewel was over the table and between Paul and Gem as soon as the words fully settled before her. The light of her wyrmflame flickering and casting sharp shadows as it flashed on her tongue. Ready to be unleashed upon the sucking empty thing.

But even knowing what it was, even realizing where the subtly familiar scent had come from the thing that looked like a serving woman kneeling before her failed to inspire the full horror.

She dared not take her eyes off of it, she dared not speak for fear leaving her flame smothered even a moment by her lips would give the thing an opportunity to leap and slay her husband or daughter.

But no action was taken, it did not suck air. The chest moved as if breathing. The heart beat as one should instead of trying to scrape every drop of blood into itself ravenously.

Yet with every motion the shearing lines of a divine working sliced anew through it.

With every heartbeat scarcely a scrap of flesh was untouched.

The High King Mathias spoke with a breathless excitement in his voice.

"Tell me oh Wyrm, who can taste and know the world better than even the greatest Weird of sorcery. Tell me one thing."

Jewel did not see even a hint of a struggle from the thing below her. Not a hint of restraints or tension. She finally could confirm it was indeed subtly leaving the air that passed its lips weakened ever so slightly by its even and calm breathing.

But nothing like the sucking void she had seen before.

"Tell me if my sorcerers and the intercession by the goddess Asherah have done what that fiend of a woman could not."

He leaned closer, smiling hungrily.

"Tell me, is it safe? Is it tame? Is it loyal? Have we forged something anathema into an acceptable blade for the realm?"

Jewel stared at the thing, at the spiraled and flensing web of divine touches that lashed in and out of every single fiber of the body before her.

She stared at the black pit within its heart that tugged at those shearing touches.

The complexity of the working was more than anything she had ever witnessed. Dozens if not hundreds of times more than the touch that came from the ritual of the longest winter in Rochford.

Its head was turned down to face the stone. It breathed slowly but there were no trembles of pain or discomfort in those muscles despite the tight posture held. It barely moved but for that slow breathing, the calm even heartbeat.

Jewel commanded.

"Look at me."

And it turned up to face her, the lips were relaxed, the face almost slack. Almost vacant. The eyes peering up at her.

There was not a single emotion and no scent of any feeling to the thing.

It was beyond dead.

It was absent.

And those eyes met Jewel's

The blacks of them shone faintly in the candlelight. There was just the slightest twist of their red irises pulsing. Constricting, squeezing and relaxing. Trying to drink in the light actively and ravenously.

But it was constrained.

The only betraying motion in the otherwise placid face.

Jewel stated the truth, the obvious undeniable fact of the thing.

"You still hunger."

The thing that was perhaps once a woman's flesh did not smile, she did not frown, she simply spoke. No fear, no concern.

"Always."

Jewel tried to listen to the world, reason on just what the god working on her flesh could do, but she could only know so much. The world around the thing was weakened.

But it was not as violent and abhorrent a presence as she had felt before.

"You will feed."

The god's working shifted, it tightened and splayed in and out. Not a single muscle moved in the thing before her. Not even the eyes shifted. Every motion forestalled by whatever divine working was in place.

It spoke with just a hint of breathy strain, a touch of genuine pain in tone if not scent.

"O-only upon t-the blood of the deserving."

Jewel leaned closer, staring into the half dead face, at the strange writhing pulse of its blood. At the red eyes that could not help but try to swallow the light. The only hint of the ravenous pit that was tied and cut through in its chest.

"Why?"

Suddenly the face lit up, a smile filling it, the eyes dilated so wide Jewel almost felt like the shine within was that of the stars above.

"Because I vowed to Asherah, I swore my soul to her keeping."

The words came free from the thing and in them was a voice that was true. Not just true but living, breathing, momentarily alive.

Free of the sucking empty thing that used it.

By her grace is my hunger chained.
By her love may I rule my corpse.
By her wrath shall this traitor flesh burn.
For it is by her will alone that It now lives.
So should It fail under her judgment,
My hunger be undone and my spirit freed.


And then with a fading whisper of that living voice one last sentence was uttered.

"To save my poor son."

Jewel stared at the thing.

At the more than dead lips who had briefly spoken with a breath alive and real and vibrant.

She could taste the living breath lingering with the words.

But with every even breath it took after that life faded again.

The High King Mathias of House Stein asked again, voice eager, excited, anticipating.

"Well oh Shining Wyrm? Is it sufficient? Can you approve of this creature?"

Jewel stared at the thing, her thoughts in disarray.

The weight of all the heavens felt like it was settling upon her wings.

She wanted to say it was not enough.

But the voice of a living woman had passed those lips with a vow that shook as true in the world and Jewel's own flame.

A vow by a woman, Not the hungering thing.

Instead of answering Jewel said the only thing she could.

"How did you do this?!"
 
…Oh.
My.
Yeah so. That Oath. Until it spoke that oath I would not have been upset if Jewel had Wyrmdoomed the thing.
But that just made everything in relation to these things SO MUCH WORSE!
Heaven's Traitor of a Wizard! JASKA YOU PROTECT YOUR CHARGES, AND BLEED YOURSELF TO THE LAST DROP IN YOU TO SAVE THEM.
 
Better question, why? Are we talking full vampires because of a god now? What could make that worth whatever price would come with it? I don't see what is gained from having them that couldn't be by other means.
 
Better question, why? Are we talking full vampires because of a god now? What could make that worth whatever price would come with it? I don't see what is gained from having them that couldn't be by other means.
*Shakes head*
No man, that's not the worst of it.
The worst of it is this is God and woman, yes woman, the lady that was taken and DRaInED, she's still in there, maddened by that hole that Hack!
Put in her. Doing her best to find salvation, and the God, well, Goddess doing her best to grant it. And.
She. Sacrificed herself. To save her son. All of that, to salvage hat Jaska. Jaska better you had not been born, save that Jewel's birth would not be quickened if you had!
Jaska's idiocy, created so many like her. And she, but for her piety and preparation, is perhaps the first, HOPEFULLY the first, to be something approaching saved, restored to her senses and right mind.
 
What the hell. There's a lot of implications and questions. Souls are confirmed. They seem to be manipulable by the gods. Undead have been mentioned before. Is there an afterlife? How is Asherah related to this? That's the name of a semitic fertility goddess. There's obviously parallels between Vladimer and vampires. What did Jewel mean by the world was weakened around her? Do wyrms and wyrmspawn have souls? Some of it will probably be explained at least. I wonder what Jewel is going to do.

In a more mundane question, what language are they speaking? Apparently Jewel only speaks 'Ridgevualic' and Uloghai. Jewel doesn't speak old cantor, which I'd guess was the Latin equivalent. But Jewel didn't even know that there were more than one spoken languages until that messenger. So it doesn't seem like the local nobles learn 'high-languages'.

To date the subject has shown fluency in old cantor (in written form) and the local dialect of the Ridgevualic languages, as well as immediate fluency in Uloghai (of which until now only one speaker still lived).
Shouldn't that be Ridgetail anyways? Jewel mentioned that 'Ridgevaul' was a fabrication in the first book.
 
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Shouldn't that be Ridgetail anyways? Jewel mentioned that 'Ridgevaul' was a fabrication in the first book.

People coming up with wrong names for local people's culture, language, place names and other categorizations is a very esteemed and storied tradition practiced by all of humanity up to the current modern day.

In Viznove and Rochford in particular the idea of calling the combined territory and language of the valleys of the Ridgetail mountains and their skyvault the name Ridgevaul sounds like made up nonsense.

To someone standing in a slightly different place that is a very sensible and good name for the people and lands that all live in that creepy place full of monsters where the lords fuck griffons and dragons and the peasants commit blood sacrifices every winter.
 
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Paul and Gem retired to her sleeping chambers.

Jewel deeply wished to follow them. But she could not rest until she had the answer that Mathias had asked for. Not at his insistence but her own. She could not sleep until she was satisfied that either the thing he had made was safe. Or had met her flame and been burnt into dust.

However the hour was late, and not only Jewel felt the fatigue there.

But Mathias and Thurzó still went with her.

Led by the thing made out of the corpse of a woman. Less by providence of it actually knowing the way then that it remained in front of Jewel in easy reach of annihilation by wyrm flame.

Although it eerily did seem to always move to the correct place ahead of the High King and Jewel as they traveled through the palace's halls. Obeying the command to stay in front of them without a hint of resistance or complaint.

As they walked down the halls, exiting into open air gardens with the light of the stars pressing down on their little party the High King spoke. Tone calm and jovial.

The only one who smelled of fear among their trio was now Thurzó.

"I am told that the work was difficult. My court wizard tells me that the original curse was one defined more by its absence and rejection of sorcery than an imparting of it."

They continued along the silver lit fruit trees and shrubs of the palace gardens.

Jewel smelled the shallowness of the earth here.

The way that the stone waited just beneath, supporting the weight of the palace grounds high enough over the flowing waters below that tall barges full of cargo could pass underneath.

"The labor of it was of course entirely necessary given the result? Wouldn't you agree count Thurzó?"

Jewel's gaze briefly passed onto the one she still felt to be her friend, but she held all expression from her lips or eyes. Not even letting her wings or neck flex at the spark of anger that he had known this was occurring and not shared it with her.

He stank of anxiety but also surprise.

"My king, All I've ever advised you was that the Countess Jewel is paramount to remain a close ally with the realm! I thought you agreed with me that her discomfort in Kaeketeh-"

The High King interrupted the count.

"Yes, yes, which is why the labor to refine the ritual is so vital. And why I am willing to spend so much on a boon for the Lady Jewel to give me her answer. If the results of the ritual cannot satisfy the Lady Jewel there will be no point in using it."

Which left her unable to hold her tongue.

"If I answer that they are unsafe, uncontrollable, you won't use them?"

Mathias grinned in the shining light.

"I will if you can swear truly you believe that to be the case."

She immediately tried, but her flame caught in her throat. The words did not come. There was a rejection. She wanted that to be true, but trying to declare it as such dragged on her flame. It felt like she was about to utter another curse.

And it would not be a small one.

In the stones, grass, water, air and sky the presence of the world stirred ever so slightly. Attention settling upon her before drifting away as she relinquished the desire in her throat.

Jewel did not know that what she wanted to say was true.

But she could make it so.

And the thought that she would do that to the thing that yet was not a woman but somehow could sometimes speak truly with her voice?

The High King had not stopped walking, and Jewel hardly needed to even strain to catch up, so long her bounding strides could be. But she felt the attention on her regardless, in fact there were eyes watching her.

Yet it was not human eyes.

Jewel turned to look into the garden and boggled at what she saw.

It was almost like a cat.

But somehow one that was larger than any beast, even the Terror Boar itself.

However it was also nothing like a cat.

Its fur was entirely absent except for a long mane which hung in tightly woven braids framing its brow and jaw. Its eyes shining in the night with a silvery gleam behind wide pupils was somewhat like Fizzbunches. But the nose was squashed, stretched, the lips parted to bare flat teeth.

When it spoke Jewel noticed how its tongue was far too thick for a cat, and the way it curled and hit the teeth reminded her of Bethica's lessons for Gem.

"Little boy is up far too late for frolicking. His mother will be very cross with him, off to bed with him, he should be."

It was only then that Jewel realized the cat was also wearing a great beaded necklace, hard fired clay large enough to be full vases for wine hanging around the throat and down between the forelimbs.

Skin hanging loose at the sides in great crinkling wrinkles. Tail longer than even Jewel's father was tall with prominent vertebrae poking past the meat, sinew and wrinkled skin. The voice was much like a woman, although it growled and rumbled much as Jewel's own throat did. Deep like Bethica's.

Two short wings with raven black feathers flexed from upon the creature's back.

The High king sighed heavily in exasperation.

"Sphinx, my mother is many years dead and I am king now. I can be up as late as I need be."

The so named sphinx laughed and shook herself out then, lips parted over teeth bared for an eager hunt. The giant cat purring deeply.

"Little boy has grown closer to death, but he is still small and young. Though he no longer walks on four in his morning and stands on two within his noon, I smell his evening close, a third to stand he will have or none at all. A serpent and then no more."

The creature strode in slinking motion alongside them, staying to the earth and stone of the gardens it watched them both intently. Shoulder ever so slightly higher than Jewel's own when she stood on the ground. Although lower in her bounding steps.

Mathias' face flushed slightly before clearing his throat.

"Be that as it may sphinx, but I have business with the Countess Jewel that must be settled before I can retire for the evening."

The giant cat with dozens of tightly braided strands of mane huffed, its breath ripe with blood, hearts and liver. Looking up and over Jewel with a wariness before raising its nose to snort derisively.

"A great grandmother shows herself again. But not our great grandmother. Long past the evening of her are you. And in your slimmest peaking dawn as well. Cease keeping the boy up, he is out past his hour, he needs to be kept in his rest, his mother commanded."

Jewel blinked at Sphinx then turned to look at the thing that was shaped like a woman ahead of them, still walking as they all kept pace with one another.

Mathias huffed and continued.

"Please don't pay the Sphinx any mind, it only encourages her. We have business to attend too and those who performed the work of this latest iteration of the ritual are this way."

The giant cat with the strangely round ears that Jewel could now see under the starlight was far too low on the side of her head for any other cat. The Sphinx rolling its eyes afterward and lightly batting a furless paw with black claws which shone in the night's silver radiance.

"The boy is still a boy until he can hunt properly, if he wanted to be a man he would catch what was brought and prove he can hunt without being coddled."

Mathias huffed and started walking more briskly.

Only Thurzó had to struggle to match pace. The Sphinx continues to happily bound alongside them in the garden effortlessly with the obvious grace of her muscles under that pale loose skin. Jewel for her own part could simply step further with an adjustment of her wyrmflame.

"The boy has been given many suitable prey, many suitable tries! But the boy whines and yowls like a kitten barely weaned each time!"

Jewel caught Thurzó laughing under his throat and shaking his head.

Mathias' own shame filled the air as he silently marched them to another door, the guards stationed there opening and closing it without a word. Letting them into another wide, candle lit hallway.

But the voice of the Sphinx still rang out, loud enough to be heard even behind the thick wooden door.

"The boy is out in an hour too late for frolicking, the naughty little boy's mother will be cross."

The High king's furiously blushing face and Thurzó's humored scent drove the rest of their walk to silence.
 
…Hrrrm…
I would ask the King his take on the Sphinx's words. I suspect he already gave it with the 'don't respond.' reply he gave. But asking him after the Sphinx is away and he can think it outside the creature's hearing might let him speak more freely…
And uhh.
The impression I get is a telling one.
That he is a Young Master in truth, a boy who has never found his valor and steel.
And thus, a Menagerie of claw and fang, to fulfill the need for Valor and steel, without needing to face the fear that drives one to find it nor the shame of discovering one has not the courage to stand on the battlefield.
Now how would Jewel or Thurzo respond to my take?…Hrrrm.
 
So sphynx is what, 3rd gen of lair spawn?
Sounds like it. Gryphons are also descendants of lairspawn. I wonder what wyrm spawned the sphinxes. Probably a tyrant wyrm, but what creature did the wyrm affiliate with then? Lions?

I'm curious why the sphinx is supposed to be a secret. To much of an embarrassment? Alternatively, sphinxes could be coveted as sources of wisdom. This is just her having fun. I wonder if Jewel could ask the sphinx about her great grandmother.
 
Obtuse and circuitous they may be, a Sphinx is always a lovely font of information.

And apparently an eternally embarrassing babysitter too, if I'm reading things right. I'm guessing she was friends with Mathias' mother, and is keeping an eye on the kid as a favor. Unfortunately for the High King, her definition of "kid" is tied to some sort of combat trial as a right of passage, and he himself isn't much of a fighter.
Also:
Little boy has grown closer to death, but he is still small and young. Though he no longer walks on four in his morning and stands on two within his noon, I smell his evening close, a third to stand he will have or none at all. A serpent and then no more.
I wonder if this is just a snide "you're not getting any younger" remark, or a foreshadowing that his death is closer than he thinks. I'm leaning towards the latter, but there's really no way to tell until it happens (or doesn't happen, as the case may be), and she gets to be smug either way.

In the stones, grass, water, air and sky the presence of the world stirred ever so slightly. Attention settling upon her before drifting away as she relinquished the desire in her throat.

More fuel for my theory that wyrms are more spiritual manifestations than organic creatures, and that they are to the Earth what the "gods" are to the Stars.
 
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