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Bloodmoon definitely felt strangely overpowered here. The Good Hunter may slay eldritch gods, but at least those may be bled dry through speed, skill, and sheer repetition, rather than exploding entire city blocks or cutting clean through apartment buildings and an Endbringer.
The Simurgh couldn't see her though, right? So basically fighting an overpowered yet blind opponent? Anything the Simurgh throws at Taylor would all be a beat too late.

Aside from that though, I have no real knowledge of Bloodborne so I can't comment on how feasible it is to cut through an entire building or tearing through the Simurgh's flesh.
 
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The Simurgh couldn't see her though, right? So basically fighting an overpowered yet blind opponent? Anything the Simurgh throws at Taylor would all be a beat too late.

Aside from that though, I have no real knowledge of Bloodborne so I can't comment on how feasible it is to cut through an entire building or tearing through the Simurgh's flesh.
In raw gameplay terms? Absolutely ridiculous, you're a little guy with maybe a sword and some eldritch magic.

In lore terms, particularly if this is post-possibly becoming an eldritch being yourself? I can see it, frankly. Most Fromsoft games have some much crazier stuff outside the gameplay when you dive into the lore, like how Gwyn in DS1 could hurl lightningbolts capable of smashing dragons but then in gameplay you'll probably beat him by pressing the parry button a few times (granted he's much weaker lorewise there than at his peak of lightningbolt hurling, but still). Elden ring straight up has Radahn who's been rotted through in mind and body by a super alien god plague, and still has tricks like "jump ten thousand feet into the air then come hurtling down as a meteor to smash a small army".

I can't recall if Bloodborne has any lore tidbits on quite the scale of those kinds of things, but at a minimum the whole "eldritch powers" thing is likely to cut through a lot of the bullshit the Simurgh brings to the table like screwing with her future sight, laughing off her songs, and ignoring her dimensionally enhanced durability.
 
Bloodmoon definitely felt strangely overpowered here. The Good Hunter may slay eldritch gods, but at least those may be bled dry through speed, skill, and sheer repetition, rather than exploding entire city blocks or cutting clean through apartment buildings and an Endbringer.

To add to the other replies, here's some light Bloodborne spoilers:
consider that Taylor might have already fought, and bested, a minimum of two gods. She just referenced the Orphan of Cos fight this chapter, and screamed like the Moon Presence. On top of that, she would have fought them WITHOUT game mechanics; she had to put hands on them and WIN.

I'm thinking she should be capable of some Final Fantasy shenanigans, no prob.
 
One of the things I can say...
Taylor most likely finished the entirety of Bloodborne, give or take a few bonus bosses remained unfought, depends on how the Chalice Dungeons work in this story.

The possibility that she became a Great One (she's not old enough to be an Old One) exists (or haven't fought the Moon Presence yet), but given that she's encountered the Orphan of Kos, and her owning the Moonlight Great Sword, she definitely beat the Old Hunters DLC...or close to it, at least. The Orphan is a b**** to fight, at least without cheese strats or weapons. But she's definitely seen its Phase 2.
 
I think the price will depend how much tainted blood is recovered during the cleanup.
Ugh, I can just see some blood spatter being recovered "for testing purposes" and then used in a Cauldron experiment. The result would make a Cerberus research cell look competent for a change.
 
This chapter distinctly felt different. And not in a good way. The narration didn't feel natural: the characters were only identified by the very explicit and robotic internal monologues, the fight was all over the place in an way that couldn't be easily identified and, finally, the things she did felt like straight up ass-pulls that weren't explained before.

Regarding the ass-pull comment, I would have expected that the Taylor pov to have been explored a lot more before this battle ever happened. This just doesn't feel as it should have happened now.

The narrative of the battle itself feels like something completely different from previous chapters'. Most notably the low-stakes massacres that happened at the start of the fic and drew me in to this story. They were short, had a clear place to be happening and weren't anything beyond 'crazy victorian murderhobo' things. This felt more like a dbz fight as narrated by Krillin; outragerous things happened and they're being described almost without context of when and where, that's it. Hookwolf's was particularly egregious with that pleasant talk that preceded in an action sequence I barely managed to follow.

The assorted PoVs were just plain unnatural. That didn't feel like Hookwolf or Costa-Brown, those were strawmen painted to look like them. Allah, God and anime forgive me for saying this, but bare OCs would've felt better than these named characters. The narration was just that different from what I'd expect from them.

All in all, I feel bad for typing this. No regrets tho. This just irked me a lot.
 
This chapter distinctly felt different. And not in a good way. The narration didn't feel natural: the characters were only identified by the very explicit and robotic internal monologues, the fight was all over the place in an way that couldn't be easily identified and, finally, the things she did felt like straight up ass-pulls that weren't explained before.

Regarding the ass-pull comment, I would have expected that the Taylor pov to have been explored a lot more before this battle ever happened. This just doesn't feel as it should have happened now.

The narrative of the battle itself feels like something completely different from previous chapters'. Most notably the low-stakes massacres that happened at the start of the fic and drew me in to this story. They were short, had a clear place to be happening and weren't anything beyond 'crazy victorian murderhobo' things. This felt more like a dbz fight as narrated by Krillin; outragerous things happened and they're being described almost without context of when and where, that's it. Hookwolf's was particularly egregious with that pleasant talk that preceded in an action sequence I barely managed to follow.

The assorted PoVs were just plain unnatural. That didn't feel like Hookwolf or Costa-Brown, those were strawmen painted to look like them. Allah, God and anime forgive me for saying this, but bare OCs would've felt better than these named characters. The narration was just that different from what I'd expect from them.

All in all, I feel bad for typing this. No regrets tho. This just irked me a lot.

Hmm, there's a lot of relevant criticism here, particularly on Alexandria's tone, but I would argue there is a reason for it. She's in shock. The whole of the 17 minute fight she's completely mentally rocked. Several things that she considers impossible happen in quick succession, all coming for an unknown. Considering cauldron makes a point of being in the know on powerful capes, are the foremost experts on our extra-dimensional foes, and in general consider themselves to be the most powerful and capable people on the planet, I'd say her shock is completely understandable. It doesn't freeze her, but she's mentally off her game, and the tone reflects that. Hook wolf isn't shocked but his section is so short, I don't know if you can say it's off tone. He never had a huge characterization in this fic so it's hard to say.

As far as "asspulls" go, all of her skill and powers are in line with bloodborne lore to one extent or another, though she's definitely outgrown player-character gameplay mechanics. The gods of bloodborne twist time, space, reality, dreams, SOULS, HEARTS, MINDS, BODIES, BLOOOD! And she's becoming one of them. Death is inconsequential, she has the power of a Demi-eldritch existence, her weapons have been forged and anointed in the blood of elder gods, and that same blood is running through her veins. Her powers combined with nullifying the strengths of her foe (precognition, mind-slaving, and her extra-dimensional nature) leds to her driving Simmie off to collect info, learn, and plot. Arguably the things Simmie does best. This aid a pause, a reprieve before things change irrevocably. This is the point where the scales tip and humanity sees rise of a new horror-god of moon and blood and magic or at least I hope so! 😬👾
 
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Bloodmoon definitely felt strangely overpowered here. The Good Hunter may slay eldritch gods, but at least those may be bled dry through speed, skill, and sheer repetition, rather than exploding entire city blocks or cutting clean through apartment buildings and an Endbringer.
Personally, I attribute that to the fact that Bloodborne is a game and this is a story. In bloodborne you grow so powerful your matching gods and god-adjacent creatures halfway in its just limited by game mechanics so you can't do shit like copy boss moves or enemy moves or master every weapon which considering the stuff you use to level up is blood from defeated enemies and the latent memories contained within that's absolutely something you should be able to do/actually are doing lore wise even if not gameplay-wise.
 
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Let's keepin mind, the Good Hunter, fresh oit of the clinic can dodge bullets midflight, and swing around 50+ pounds of sharpened metal one-handed.

An end game hunter can literally dodge lightning, and has enough strength to punch out kin and beasts. Anything not lethal can be fixed in seconds at most, and death will just piss her off. Ignoring gameplay limitations, your average endgame hunter is a thresher, with creatures that start off as Captain America at the weakest as the wheat.

Post DLC? That's the level where you start needing things like Endbringers and FATE Servants to be more than a slight speed bump.

And at the end? That wasn't her using a weapon to threaten Simmy, that was her using 'Make Contact' to call her (Blood)Sugar Daddy for grid coordinates.
 
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Greg Veder's weekend was relatively exciting. On Saturday he met with Taylor at her house for the first time, and found out later that before their meeting Bloodmoon had killed Crusader and a number of Coil's mercenaries, while rescuing a family from a burning building. The murderous cape was rapidly developing more fans, his (or her, the internet was still divided on that, and some were insisting that Bloodmoon was an "it") actions to stop the runaway truck and rescue a mother and daughter further cementing the idea that this was a killer with a heart of gold.

The meeting itself went relatively well, too. From the moment Greg's mom dropped him off, Taylor was on him. This was to be expected: he was a relative stranger coming into her home, and he knew what Taylor got up to. If she hadn't been watching him like a hawk's more OCD cousin, he'd have been a lot more worried.

"Watch out for– Oh, right, we fixed that. Sorry, force of habit," Taylor finished a little sheepishly. "Front step used to be a little rotten and we were always worried it'd break."

"Huh. Well, I'd offer to help if you need any more handyman stuff done around your place, but um… I'm no good at it," Greg replied with a self-deprecating chuckle. He hefted his backpack. "So I brought my laptop: all the articles and such are saved to my disk so you can see the pictures if that'll help."

After a quick meet-and-greet with Mr. Hebert, who seemed glad to see that Greg was clearly a bit nervous about doing anything Taylor might not like, the pair headed up to Taylor's room. Greg also felt a little guilty for wearing the bodycam hidden in his polo shirt's button, but this was to figure out how he could help her. He hadn't been brave enough to stand up for her before, so now he had to take the risk to make up for it.

"You dressed up nice today," Taylor said, voice smooth like metal. "Any reason? Were you hoping for this to be a date?"

Greg's spine tried to crawl out through his back and he fought against freezing up. It was as if a giant wasp had perched on his nose, or he'd looked in a mirror and seen a red-dot sight leveled over his forehead. When in doubt, babble like the incoherent goon you are. "I, n-no! That's, ah, not to say I wouldn't like it to be one, you're really pretty – like, wow – but honestly we barely know each other and I hope that if I ever got up the guts to ask you on a date I'd be straight about it and not set up some schoolwork thing and oh my god I'm still talking." When dealing with someone who might very well be able to smell falsehood, honesty is the best policy.

Taylor seemed to agree, her expression settling on a gentle smile after having briefly looked shocked during Greg's drivel. "Well, I'm glad we cleared the air about that. Anyway, I don't have much room so let's set you up on my bed and I'll sit in the rolling chair. I'm honestly a little glad Sparks couldn't make it because he'd have to sit on the floor."

From there, the two had quite the productive session working on ideas for the paper. And while Greg took the occasional time to look around for a place to hide a camera, or stretch to give the bodycam a better survey of the room, he found himself steadily more engaged by their discussion. By the end he was more invested in the project than in the investigation, guided every step of the way by Taylor. He didn't even notice, in the throes of a brainstorming moment, how Taylor very specifically looked straight into the hidden camera and gave a knowing smirk.

After that came Tuesday evening, when Bloodmoon's PHO page updated before the official Endbringer Battle report, with announcements that Bloodmoon had all but gone mano-a-mano with the Simurgh and won before half the song's time had ticked down. He was lucky his parents were used to him occasionally being clumsy, because he quite literally fell out of his chair in shock.

(BREAK)

The usual meeting room wasn't sufficient, so the same cleared auditorium used for Endbringer staging was subsequently filled with cheap folding chairs. Every Protectorate hero was gathered, along with multiple PRT captains. Emily Piggot was the only one with her own chair from her office, not just for gravitas and reinforcement of rank but to spare her the embarrassment of her extra pounds slipping off either side of the narrow folding chairs.

"We've forwarded the case files and AARs to the Chief Director," Piggot began without preamble. "But unless and until National gives us different marching orders, we need a plan. How do we deal with Bloodmoon?"

Assault instantly raised his hand. Not bothering for her to call on him – he knew she wouldn't – he volunteered his idea. "Stay out of her way and ask her politely not to kill too many people?" Usually the ex-villain would quip, make off-color jokes or otherwise lighten the situation or at least draw ire onto himself to bleed off tension from a dire situation. In this case, he bulldozed Piggot's response, raising his voice above hers to drown her out. Not yelling, but certainly elevating the volume. "No, I'm half-serious. Look, every step of the way Bloodmoon has acted not just to hunt criminals but to protect innocents. Whether it was the girls at the ABB stop, those people in the cafe, or the mom and daughter in the apartment, she goes out of her way to help when she can. I'd say that might be her main motivation: if she gets rid of the biggest threats, then she has to help fewer people overall.

"Do you have footage of her talking to me and Battery before the Ziz fight? Her posture, her speech...her voice might've sounded authoritative on the surface but that was a front. She was shy, almost deferential with how she approached. She doesn't want to be a burden. Mark my words," he punctuated by spiking his index finger down onto his knee, "this is someone who was deeply hurt, someone whom the system failed, and she's doing what she thinks is right so nobody else gets hurt like she did. Maybe she's delusional, maybe she's unreasonable. But what if she isn't? What if we can solve all this just by talking?"

Beside him, Battery shrugged. "He makes a good point, and not just from the hopeless optimist's perspective. Pragmatically, we're dealing with a cape who can make an Endbringer run for the hills – more than that, an anti-Thinker so potent she can outfox the Simurgh's precog. She's willing to fight the Endbringers. Not only would making an enemy of her be a suicidally stupid idea, she doesn't seem to hold any animosity toward heroes. The only sticking point would be our refusal to kill, but as much as it rankles me to say this, her kill count is an acceptable sacrifice if it means we can reduce by orders of magnitude the Endbringers' death tolls."

Assault, having waited until his wife was finished, turned to her with a pout. "Hopeless optimist? Puppy, that hurts. I'm always hopeful. Like tonight, I'm hoping that you'll–" Whap, Battery smacked him in the mouth. Unfazed and unharmed, his mouth was curled in a smirk when her hand departed. "Yep, still got it," he chirped.

"Dragon and I have been parsing the battle footage," Armsmaster spoke up to draw attention away from the couple. "While she's currently briefing the Chief Director, I've noticed a few very significant things. With your permission, Director, I'd like to play a few clips. I recommend that everyone brace themselves – that is, quite literally grab onto your chairs. There's some sort of metaphysical presence to some of these clips that caused my knees to give out even on a secondhand viewing."

"And that's without getting into the song," Dauntless interjected.

"I'd say it doesn't sound like Bloodmoon," Assault posited, "but the first time I heard her speak she sounded like some kind of after-effects Hollywood monster. Plus that roar, so I guess I'm saying that I don't think the song was Bloodmoon's singing but I can't say we should rule it out."

With Piggot's go-ahead, Armsmaster activated a projector. Any footage of a Simurgh fight was scrubbed clean of sound, then reformatted into a .gif to completely eliminate any trace of hidden sound before translated back into a pauseable .mp4 file.

"Our first indication of Bloodmoon's unique anti-monitoring abilities is here." There was a still image of the woman kneeling, fingers touching something, but that something was obscured by digital noise. "Much like with Assault's bodycam, we can't verify what she was doing because the cameras refused to parse it. The few people who noticed made mention that it made them feel a little woozy or seasick, but nobody could make out more than a hazy mist."

"At least we didn't get a disappearing-arm event or the freaky blood cascade," Assault muttered, humor gone from his voice. That had been frightening, and the way Alice had screamed… Beside him, his wife shuddered.

"In a way, it's more worrisome that we didn't," Armsmaster hit Play. Next was footage of Bloodmoon impaled by the shards of her greatsword. Her corpse hit the ground, then after a few frames it was gone. No artifacting, no stutter, no missed frames. "From what I can gather, the moment everyone's eyes were off her corpse, it was gone. Likewise, none of her leavings were found. No blood, no bullets or shrapnel, no weapon fragments. Both the greatsword hilt and the blood-katana disappeared."

"What worries me is the idea that she might have some control over it," Miss Militia spoke up. "Put out a lot of mist to make people sick, leave an opening for retaliation. Or put out no mist so observers – people on her side – aren't rendered helpless in the face of an Endbringer."

"Somehow a conscious decision even after her body died?" Captain Anders shuddered. "Jesus, that's some control."

"Next, when Bloodmoon drew her third weapon. Everyone brace yourselves." Armsmaster played the footage. Zoomed in, it could be seen how a double-ended sword rose from a cloud of mist. Everyone present felt their gorge rise from the mist, before something primal hit them. It wasn't fear, not really. It was awareness of something superior, the ancient pack instinct to submit to a greater being in order to secure one's own safety.

Armsmaster swallowed hard and spoke through gritted teeth. "A-as you can ssssseeeeee, it's some kind of double-sword… One, one blade long, like a Japanese ka-ta-na, the other one shorter and more ma...maneuverable. A, a… Oh, forget it." He paused the video and took a shuddering breath. "It's not worth trying to talk through that footage. It's kind of like someone took a samurai's classic two weapons – the katana and wakizashi – and fit them together at the pommel. When she strikes whatever pose, the mental pressure is most powerful. My working theory is that whatever this aura is, it hit a being like the Simurgh extra hard.

"The final thing I wanted to share is, to me, the most interesting. I didn't notice it until Dragon pointed it out, and I'm willing to bet none of you saw it during the fight either. My suspicion is that, much like how some aspects of Bloodmoon's power refuse to be captured on film, this was hiding from human senses. What that could mean, well, I couldn't begin to tell you."

The projector clicked over to a collage of still scenes. In the afternoon sky, glittering and opalescent, hung the moon.

(BREAK)

"I wish Fortuna was available," Rebecca said quite loudly, "but as she's recovering and this can't wait, we'll just have to soldier on without her." It was a dig, and she knew it, toward the ultimate child soldier, but Alexandria had just had a hell of a day and was in no mood for leniency toward anyone.

From the other room, sipping from a juice box and watching the Transformers movie, Fortuna pointedly ignored Rebecca's jab. From the moment her people had died, Contessa had relied on the Path to Victory to guide her, to the point that she often behaved more like an automaton than a person. On the rare occasions when her power began to take its toll, she scheduled break times to simply be what she had never been permitted to be: a child. And so, childishly, she turned up the volume as Galvatron chased the Autobots through space.

Number Man tapped a stack of papers on the table to straighten them. "The footage and AARs paint the picture of a competent and deadly but rather generic cape, characterized by her anti-Thinker effect and willingness to commit violence. This sudden escalation is many orders of magnitude beyond what we would expect from someone like this."

Legend, Dominic with his mask off, nodded. "Initial supposition would be a cape like Dauntless, but there's no real marked improvement until today. Yes, each time we see her she displays something new, but no sudden trump card or overwhelming level of power. She moved with speed and struck with power unlike anything before. In addition, her behavior on the battlefield indicates someone with a plan, who had an idea how her powers might interact with the Simurgh's."

The Number Man – Kurt, since he never wore a mask – nodded. "Especially with her first appearance not even two weeks prior, Bloodmoon's activity reflects that of a veteran with at least a year, if not more, of constant experience using her power in combat."

David, though he left his Eidolon hood up as he wasn't appreciative of his appearance, shook his head. "That's interesting in itself but it still doesn't explain the change. Some of Bloodmoon's dodges registered as supersonic despite somehow not breaking the sound barrier. That's a far cry from her dodging most but not all bullets and just shrugging off the ones that hit. Everything she did today was magnitudes higher than it should've been," he parroted some of Kurt's words.

Rebecca had been listening to the discussion the entire time, her eyes flitting over the various images and videos of Bloodmoon's fights. "...Unless she's been holding back the entire time." She shook her finger between three screens. "Look at the motions. In every Brockton Bay fight, we see this smooth movement, sliding and dipping and almost skating across the ground, flowing around strikes rather than outright dodging. It's very...martial-arts movie. Now," she moved her finger to the last screen, "look at this one. Jerky movements, violent thrusts with the legs to induce motion, these are the movements of an actual fighter, someone doing everything to win."

Kurt nodded, shifting on his feet. "I noticed that as well. I'd folded it into the idea of escalation, but you may be right: it does make more sense if we instead look at the previous fights as someone not giving their all. The issue is, I can tell she is giving her all."

Since Fortuna was on her break, Rebecca knew what she had to do next. "Shut up, Fortuna! I know what you're going to say!" With that out of the way, she continued. "This is a very...anime idea, but concepts like these tend to have at least some truth in reality: what if she was holding back by imposing restrictions on herself? Like wearing ankle and wrist weights, but for her powers? Be it a Tinkertech device like her equipment or some esoteric quirk, she suppresses her power – maybe out of fear for collateral damage, maybe because she likes the challenge, I couldn't say – and she took off the metaphorical weights for the Endbringer fight."

Kurt made a noise in his throat, running his fingers through his blond hair. "The idea has potential. On some level, I'd like you to be wrong but I don't think you are."

Eidolon took the bait. "Why would you want her to be wrong?"

"You were there. You felt that presence, that pressure, in person. This theory fits best out of what we have currently. And that means, everything Bloodmoon did to the Simurgh? I'm all but certain she was still holding back."
 
Rebecca knew what she had to do next. "Shut up, Fortuna! I know what you're going to say!" With that out of the way, she continued. "This is a very...anime idea, but concepts like these tend to have at least some truth in reality: what if she was holding back by imposing restrictions on herself?
Alright, This secures it. Rebecca is a fan of Earth Alph Anime. And She's self-conscious about it. I bet the others tease her about it. Wonder what Eidolon has hidden in his hood? Perhaps Cat Videos?
 
I can't help but feel like this is descending into power-wank. Fighting the Endbringers is always a pit-trap when it comes to Wormfic, and reading a full chapter of other characters' reactions to the fight gets tiring fast for me. I hope we get back to the Bloodborne plot soon.
 
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I can't help but feel like this is descending into power-wank. Fighting the Endbringers is always a pit-trap when it comes to Wormfic, and reading a full chapter of other characters' reactions to the fight gets tiring fast for me. I hope we get back to the Bloodborne plot soon.

I think you're being rather unfair to the story by implicitly claiming that the nascent godling causing the Simurgh to run away is somehow not worth further elaboration.

Reaction chapters that explore the perspectives of other characters serve a dual purpose, both emphasizing the enormity of what transpired previously and acting as a vehicle for further characterization of the cast. Other stories being awfully written isn't a condemnation of this one.

Anyway, I enjoyed the chapter and I'm personally enjoying both Taylor's journey through the plot of the video game, though I'm eager to see her diverge even further, and the chapters set in the present.
 
I can't help but feel like this is descending into power-wank. Fighting the Endbringers is always a pit-trap when it comes to Wormfic, and reading a full chapter of other characters' reactions to the fight gets tiring fast for me. I hope we get back to the Bloodborne plot soon.
In every non-Taylor chapter, I include hints both obvious and subtle as to changes in the overall story.
 
Taylor control the vertical and the horizontal, she can bend reality on her knees. Of course she's holding back. We don't want her going all out.
 
Huh her interaction with Greg makes me think Taylor is getting the hang on being a hunter, mentally I mean she go the whole hunting thing down I think.

Thanks for the chapter.
 
He didn't even notice, in the throes of a brainstorming moment, how Taylor very specifically looked straight into the hidden camera and gave a knowing smirk.
man, he's going to shit himself when he takes a look at that footage.
I can't help but feel like this is descending into power-wank. Fighting the Endbringers is always a pit-trap when it comes to Wormfic, and reading a full chapter of other characters' reactions to the fight gets tiring fast for me. I hope we get back to the Bloodborne plot soon.
At this point Taylor is a nascent Great One, and has whacked the Orphan of Kos, a child of one of said Great Ones.
I'd be more surprised if she coudn't take on something like the Simurgh.
 
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His name was Coil. Thomas Calvert was a disguise he wore, a face to show the rest of the world. He'd never been like them, and a single deal – favors to be paid back – had given him the ability to be who he truly was. His power was terrifying in its scope and potential, useful in both active and recreational settings. In his most hubristic moments he would even wager his power against the woman in the suit and fedora, but he was too attached to his power (and his life) to make such an overt move. Any steps taken against Cauldron would have to be couched behind at least a dozen proxies and several layers of deniability. Thankfully, Cauldron seemed content to allow him his plotting.

Brockton Bay was not his home. In truth, he'd only moved here for two reasons. The first was the high ratio of villains to heroes, giving him immense leeway to scheme. The Protectorate didn't turn nearly as much of a gimlet eye to villains killing villains. The second, which he would never admit to himself, was because Emily Piggot was stationed here. Emily was the only other remaining PRT survivor of the Ellisburg Incursion, and the only one who had been vocal in her disdain for his actions. Back before he got his power, before he became himself, he would imagine arguments in which he could properly defend his position: their superior officer was too slow. If they'd waited for him, they'd all be dead. Thomas saved all of their lives! Of course Emily saw things differently. She said that their superior knew the risks and was certain that he would have willingly held the line to give them the chance to escape: that Thomas' shooting him had actually placed them in more danger.

Yes, not that he would admit it to himself, but he chose Brockton Bay because it would let him steal Piggot's career out from under her, to leave her a shamed and destitute wreck whose employment prospects were as bleak as her physical.

Coil did not quite understand his own power. Apparently natural triggers granted some instinctive understanding, perhaps an inherent user's manual, but an artificial power was sorely lacking such assistance. He could see two potential paths, a splinter point of two choices, and could follow them through for an enormous duration – he'd never found an upper limit, but of course would eventually want to have a split for insurance purposes, so he never pathed out more than a day. The problem was that this wasn't exactly precognition: he experienced both timelines simultaneously, so he couldn't simply run his power and plan for both forks. But as long as he could stall in one timeline, pause for gravitas, ramble to sound self-important like a stereotypical villain, it gave him more and more opportunities to split the timeline and try new tactics.

It was how he, through proxy companies, had become one of the wealthiest men on the Eastern seaboard. Owning near-majority shares in Fortress Construction, one of the most prolific Endbringer-shelter companies in the United States, funded a great deal of his plans and gave him contacts who'd proven useful in constructing his own underground base.

Really, it was amusing how the more you played into the stereotype of a villain, the less people tried to look beneath the surface. He dressed up in a costume, hired mercenaries in Cobra-style uniforms with full-on laser guns (on the one hand, not many people remembered or referenced GI Joe nowadays. On the other, that meant his own rather blatant ripoff was less likely to be called out), and thus nobody noticed how the same few proxy companies and fake identities always seemed to be successful in the stock market the few times they played. With enough proxies, he could rotate them and not have any one draw undue attention. Honestly, though, was he really that good, was his power that intense, or was everyone else just varying shades of incompetent? The more he delved into manipulating the human animal, the more he grew to despise it.

And that led to his non-utility uses of his power. He'd been handed the Ring of Gyges in a test-tube and he was damn well going to use it. Incidentally, he'd been inclined to take the name Gyges until he realized it might be a bit too on-the-nose as to what his power was. Far better to take a name and theme not associated at all with his power, and leave people to speculate.

It started out simple enough. If someone got him angry and he didn't have the pressing need for a timeline, he'd split time and punch the offending person. That soon escalated into beatings, stabbings, shootings. He'd use one timeline to take his time murdering a person. Torture, as well, became both a viable interrogation option and a good relaxation tool. In one timeline he'd be having a pleasant chat with his mark, while in the other he had pliers and an acetylene torch. Some days he didn't even have a need for information but would split time for a few hours just to have fun pulling someone apart. He'd lost count of the number of times he'd spent a timeline split to call Emily for an important meeting, then killed her in a variety of brutal ways. His favorite was still when he'd hit her in the face with a nail bomb.

This extended to other proclivities as well. If he saw a beautiful woman and he wasn't running a split, what was the harm in splitting to cop a feel? Of course, diminishing dopamine returns soon forced him to escalate for the same kick. Dragging a woman into an alleyway or attacking her right there in the street: what did he care if he was stopped? He wasn't keeping that timeline regardless. He'd recently branched out to men, as well. They didn't arouse him, per se, but there was something primal in rendering another man helpless in such a violating fashion, hearing an otherwise strong man sob in hopelessness.

And, with all of that occurring solely in abandoned timelines, Coil was blameless. Only he held the memories of all the could-have-beens. In the real world, Coil was squeaky-clean compared to other gang leaders, and Thomas Calvert had years of unimpeachable record speaking to strong moral character.

Recently, however, his plans were being derailed, and the worst part was that the derailing didn't even seem intentional. Over the past month-and-a-half or so, on occasion his strike teams would deploy and be lost with no evidence as to what had happened. Rarely he'd get snippets of his men screaming, but even that turned up nothing. Multiple operations had to be delayed or even scrubbed because he couldn't deploy on the right days, or windows of opportunity would close within hours while he waited to give the order every few seconds with a new split, meeting the same failure each time.

It was at the tail end of January – or was it early February? – when he finally got a glimpse of his antagonist, one who likely only knew he existed as a sort of curiosity. A pair of young ABB toughs who couldn't help running their mouths had mentioned they were on rotation to help transport girls to the farms – the sex-slaving and organ-harvesting operations the ABB ran on the city's outskirts and exterior. He'd had men tracking them, a team waiting to intercept...but the pair never arrived. Later that night was Bloodmoon's first official appearance, as she massacred the stop-off point and left the few still-living girls to be rescued by the authorities. No real loss on Coil's part: he'd intended to break up the stop-off as well, maybe blackmail some payment from the girls' grateful parents, but ultimately Bloodmoon had carried out his own operation without forcing him to risk his men. The footage recovered, of the massacre backlit by the Moon, had been helpful for his research as well.

The slaughter of E88 operatives and the BBPD's subsequent seizure of such a massive weapons shipment was less favorable. A majority of those weapons could have served as backups for his mercenaries, or sold on the black market for favors or untraceable cash. But when he'd sent his soldiers to intercept, all that had resulted was Bloodmoon's body count for the night more than doubling, and the cape looking through one of the body cameras straight into Coil's eyes – as if he knew who was watching and was figuring out how to get to him.

With a new parahuman on the field, Coil had to Make Contact, to get this man's measure. He spared several splits over the next few days to try approaching Bloodmoon as both Coil and Calvert, offering various incentives, and each time he was rebuffed (as Calvert) or his messengers were killed (as Coil). Later, Bloodmoon even began reacting violently to his overtures as Calvert.

The worst event thus far was when he lost an entire team to Bloodmoon. They hadn't even managed to deal lasting damage to the cape, nor had any evidence of how Bloodmoon managed to heal been left behind. From Squealer's interview it was apparent that the mass-murderer relied on blood to some degree, but none of Coil's offensive fishing expeditions had resulted in anything. It was as if something was blocking his soldiers' cameras, some manner of Impurity...no, interference. That was the word he was looking for.

Coil had been forced to accept his team's demise, because the timeline wherein he managed to evacuate his people had led Bloodmoon straight to his base. Bloodmoon had been initially deterred, but the cape had stalked off with purpose...and Coil was willing to bet his colossal life savings that Bloodmoon would have returned with something capable of battering its way into Coil's base. Possibly that explosive hammer or something else equally ridiculous.

But now, after the footage from the Endbringer battle over Canberra, Coil was glad he hadn't pushed Bloodmoon in any kept timeline. This was too dangerous. A Blood-crazed berserker, some Hunter with a vendetta, he – she, apparently – couldn't be bought or reasoned with. No, he'd have to pack up and move somewhere else–

He sat bolt-upright in his chair. No, he can't leave. How would She find him, then? He could almost imagine Her long fingers comfortingly stroking over his close-shorn hair, cradling him close. No, no, he had to stay. He needed to study Bloodmoon. If he didn't… If he didn't, there was the very real chance that She would never visit him again. He'd lose Her, never again dream of Her gentle embrace. No, he needed to figure out Bloodmoon, what made her tick. The deeper he delved, the happier She was, he was sure of it.

If he could make Her happy enough, everything would go back to how it used to be. It would make up for the losses of manpower, of money both real and potential, of time and sleepless nights fearing that Bloodmoon would darken the doorway of his bedroom as Calvert. Yes, he just needed to keep going, keep working. He was close to a revelation, then it would all be good again.

It would all be good again.

It would all be good again.

It would all be good again.

It would all be good again.

It would all be good again.
 
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