Security! (a Worm SI story)

Eidolon, earlier on, got the nod from Mike that the S9 had no reason to be kept alive as they wouldn't contribute anything to the final battle against Scion. As such, he went out and tested if they were worthy opponents. He get banged up a little but was fine and one more proved his masculinity and justified himself!

That said, great chapter. You've been a little slow in your writing of late Ack, is everything ok?

As for Glory Girl, she REALLY needs to be slapped in the face with reality.
She needs to have it pointed out she was mastering her sister into loving her and possibly altered her sexuality. That brute force is NOT the answer every time and that actions have consequences.

Looks like this will be happening sooner rather than later.
 
Actually, the 'why NOW' bit makes sense. It's a significant selection of the impediments to Zion's "Path to Survival", collected together (including the being derailing his previous world-models), and fairly relaxed... a perfect target.

Good timing, Dinah/Contessa.
 
My guess? Carol's piiissed.

This was nice and lovely and then rather sad. Amy really didn't have good options there, and her powers were right there, asking to be used.
 
Scions Battle/Fight version of PTV probably identified Mike as the cause of the coming showdown so he went there.

Given how limited he is though, I think he'll just be confused and leave unless Mike pulls out more social fu.
 
Hopefully this isn't Scion going Full Murder Humanity Mode, otherwise shit is going to be tough to deal with.

I really hope we get an epilogue, though. Most SI stories that involve a character arriving in Worm never get to that point.
 
"Okay, don't tell anyone," I said in an undertone, "but that kid is one of the Wards. Taylor knows him as a Ward and as a kid at school, but she doesn't know they're one and the same. Amy does, and she's seeing how long it takes Taylor to twig. And Chris too, for that matter."

She muffled a snort of laughter. "Goodness me. And I thought teen high school drama couldn't be improved upon. Now it's teen high school drama with secret identities."

I grinned. "Now there's an idea for a TV show."

"I'd watch it," she agreed with a matching smile.

We touched our drinks together and drank to that.
On the story note, I'm really sad that we won't be able to watch that teenage high school drama of Chris and Taylor.

At that moment, his phone went off. "Huh, I wonder who's texting me now," he muttered, digging his phone out of his pocket. "About everyone I know is in this room."

He thumbed it on and tapped in his PIN, then opened up the text. In the next moment, Taylor saw something she never wanted to see; his face turning almost dead white.

"What is it?" she asked.

For an answer, he held the phone up so that everyone could see the screen.

GET OUT NOW.

A sudden golden glow glared in through the window as he opened his mouth. "Doorway -"


End of Part Forty-Nine
And on the ending note:
Faraway-R uses Forlorn Hope! It's not very effective!

Say, what's the color of Carol/Brandish's lightshow?

Maybe Ack's faking us out, maybe it's a deranged Glory Girl wielding Brandish like a club. :V
Hey, I see I'm not the only one who thought of that! :)
 
So one of two things happened with that ending.

1. It's Scion who somehow found out about Mike and taking steps to stop him, or

2. Vicky find Carol before Mark and Carol was informed that Amy messed with Vicky's mind because of Mike. And Carol is acting out because she thinks Amy has finally went Dark Side.

I would almost go with #2, but I do not think Carol would basically bomb the Hebert house like that.

Any other possible scenarios?
 
So one of two things happened with that ending.

1. It's Scion who somehow found out about Mike and taking steps to stop him, or

2. Vicky find Carol before Mark and Carol was informed that Amy messed with Vicky's mind because of Mike. And Carol is acting out because she thinks Amy has finally went Dark Side.

I would almost go with #2, but I do not think Carol would basically bomb the Hebert house like that.

Any other possible scenarios?

Clearly it's the secret lovechild of Zion and Carol! :V
 
3rd possbality, Glory Girl second triggered. :o

Nice chapter, and good to see this again after so long. Major critique though, there should be more resistance from Mark about the adoption. Only reasons this usually happens in america are if the current parents are irresponsible, too poor, being forced by a judge to give up their kid, or internal family poltics and nasty blackmail. Having Amy be pubically adopted by another family is going to be a big embrassment to the Dallons. Not to mention Carols faith and self responbality to stop Amy when she becomes Marquis.

Much more reasonable that they allow Amy to pratically live at the Heberts until she is 18, at which point she can move out if she wants. And the Dallons save face in the public, while still doing what is right by Amy. As well as satafying Carols 'responbality' to be Amy's warden.
 
Eidolon, earlier on, got the nod from Mike that the S9 had no reason to be kept alive as they wouldn't contribute anything to the final battle against Scion. As such, he went out and tested if they were worthy opponents. He get banged up a little but was fine and one more proved his masculinity and justified himself!

That said, great chapter. You've been a little slow in your writing of late Ack, is everything ok?

As for Glory Girl, she REALLY needs to be slapped in the face with reality.
She needs to have it pointed out she was mastering her sister into loving her and possibly altered her sexuality. That brute force is NOT the answer every time and that actions have consequences.

Looks like this will be happening sooner rather than later.
The problem with slapping Glory Girl in the face with reality, is that Glory Girl REVELS in the delusional state that her aura creates for her. That everyone that is 'good' should automatically fawn over her, and that she's always right. And that anyone that is 'bad' will automatically out themselves in her presence by screwing up and 'revealing' that they've been bad all along. Since her aura is omnipresent and can never truly be turned off, just turned 'down', she literally can only view the world through the aura.

Which is one reason Mike tweaks her so badly - he's OBVIOUSLY a bad guy, considering how he acts around her - never instantly kow-towing to her or idolizing her, or any of a number of things that would show "I'm Mike, and I'm a good guy!". Instead, he brushes her off and is increasingly immune to her aura. What's worse is that everyone around him is AGREEING with him, even though, or more accurately, ESPECIALLY though, many of them are Vicky's closest friends and family. To her, he's not just borderline bad, he's actively turning her closest allies against her.

Hormone driven teenagers are bad enough with mood swings and thinking either they're on top of the world, only to swing into thinking the world is out to get them. But then add in Vicky's aura which is badly distorting her worldview?

Its no wonder she outright rejected what Amy was saying and constantly kept going about Mike this, and Mike that, and then completely snapped.

Of course, to make matters worse is that Vicky's aura is going to make things VIOLENTLY worse with Carol's views towards Amy, as Carol literally cannot even conceive that Amy isn't going to go villain at the drop of a hat. So with Vicky flaring her aura into open hostility at Mike, plus rejecting Amy, it might just push Carol into doing something......rash.

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With her aura, she almost actually -is- mastering people. Just that its really insidiously subtle in that everyone believes that she can turn it down 'low' enough that its non-existent, and/or blindly believe that constant exposure to it 'immunizes' them. As we all know from Amy's suffering, no, it doe NOT immunize them. In fact, it makes matters far far worse.

Frankly, if there's anyone that needs the 'killswitch' hypodermic shot that Riley used recently, its Vicky. Would be a very VERY large eye opener for her to realize that the world doesn't actually revolve around her, and that her attitude/actions aren't making her many friends.
 
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An interesting theory. Likely not Carol though.
Not immediately, no. But give it time? A day? A week? A month? Then yes, it will.

Vicky just got semi-publicly slapped down by her own father just after having a good chunk of her worldview shattered by Amy's confession/coming out. That and she already -loathes- Mike to begin with, just go look at how she previously viewed him ever since he started 'interfering' with Amy.

Remember, this is a teenager who quite literally does think the Brockton Bay area revolves around her. Or at least, close to it, due to a teenager's ego, her powers, and her aura. Thinking rationally isn't exactly going to be on her top 10 list of things to do daily. So Mike 'interfering' with Amy's life, and doing it in such a radical hard turn, so quickly, is making her view him with a massive amount of suspicion, which isn't helped by the fact he's very resistant to her aura and isn't sucking up to her like she expects from 'good' capes/cape allies. Instead, IN HER MIND, he's acting borderline villain.

So just imagine what her aura is going to be pumping out over the next few hours and days, all the while Carol is going to be all but intimately close to it due to being the mother of the family. And Carol already flat out dismisses Amy's concerns. Go back and look at what she thought of how well Yamada's therapy was going - she SCOFFED at it - which means she has long since made the conscious decision to believe that either Amy doesn't need help, and/or anything that would keep Amy from -constantly- being a 'good/Hero' cape, is something that gives Amy a chance to go Villain. Its blindingly obvious as to her mentality.

Add Vicky's attitude and her aura, plus Carol's condescending attitude, and you've got a recipe for disaster.

While I'm almost certain that's Scion outside the window, I'm also just about as equally certain that Vicky is going to subconsciously push Carol into doing something that will shatter the family (that and horrify Vicky as EVERYTHING goes wrong) and likely see someone close to Amy be in serious danger.
 
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Giving that Scion is likely going Murder Death Kill very very soon, if not now, that's going to be a decidedly lower priority problem imo.
True, true.

At the same time, having someone who's bound and determined to ignore ANY evidence to the contrary, who firmly believes Amy might stab them all in the back at any time, is NOT going to be good for trying to keep the cape alliance unified against Scion.

Sometimes in order to deal with a bigger external threat, you need to turn around and quickly get your own house in order (sometimes, via any means necessary. ANY means necessary), before turning back to the real threat. Because the very last thing you want to have happen, when you're dealing with a massive external threat, is disunity on the home front.

Carol and/or Vicky sniping at Mike's actions, or possibly the Herberts as well getting caught up in things, is not going to help things one bit. Carol going after Amy would potentially be catastrophic.
 
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Eh, lock her in the same room as Saint.
A better idea, have Eidolon, Alexandria, LEgend, and anyone else that is considered an international level hero, come over and hit Carol with the proverbial Clue-by-Four. Anyone of lesser status than that would be outright ignored by her as likely 'not adequately knowledgeable of the potential situation'. Having those three, plus any other top tier capes, give her the talk might just be enough to break through her mental blocks toward Amy, and at least be willing to give Amy a chance.

Vicky on the other hand? Considering that she's a single temper tantrum/emo streak away from being a mass murderer, I'd again send out Eidolon and Alexandria to scare the HELL out of her. Up to and including blatantly mentioning that she's all but mastering people far worse then Canary (this would be a cold blooded exaggeration, but its needed), along with flat out bringing up the Birdcage. Scare her into almost physically recoiling at the realization that she does NOT want to fuck with Mike's supporters.
 
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Nonsense! Zion's attack is clearly not a big deal compared to the soap opera that is the Dallon household! :V
Mike: "Listen big guy! This is important!"

Scion uses Sunbeam. It's not very effective.

Mike: "I know exactly what can fill the empty void that is your life! I know what you can do to assuage your disappointment!"

Scion: [ELABORATE]

Mike: "Thanks. I'll be fast. We have evolved a method of entertainment known as Reality Television. Watching this Reality Television allows millions upon millions of humans to temporarily forget their own empty, awful lives."

Scion: [DRAMA]

Mike: "Exactly! You have all these entertaining stories unfolding around you, and they're extra dramatic thanks to the powers you gave them."

Scion: [AWARDS]

Mike: "Like for the best ones? I guess we could give out a statue of a golden man..."
 
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