Currently looking for additional beta readers- if you are interested, please PM me. Comment any...
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Thanks!All in all, I find your story intriguing. You just need one or two betas to take care of all the confused words and sentences that miss crucial words.
I'm anxious for the next part, in any case.
Well, if you can live with an irregular weekday (CET+1) schedule, and your updates aren't too big, I can look at them if you want - it'll just take a few days to get an answer from me, sometimes.Thanks!
Yeah, I know I need a beta... I just never get any replies when I ask around for betas, which basically just leaves me to edit things on my own and try to notice mistakes. I've lost track of how many PM's I've sent all over the place only to never even get the time of day back.
Mate, if I can get anyone to look at these things, I would be happy.Well, if you can live with an irregular weekday (CET+1) schedule, and your updates aren't too big, I can look at them if you want - it'll just take a few days to get an answer from me, sometimes.
There are a few, but I am currently not close to a desktop PC; though I'll try to get to one before the day is out.Mate, if I can get anyone to look at these things, I would be happy.
That being said, I would be happy to accept such an offer. If you have any concerns with the first update, you can PM me, otherwise I am currently working on Chapter II.
IIRC Kakarot's mother was as close to a pacifist as a Saiyan was capable of being.Nice beginning! I wonder who is the woman? Is she really his mother? Why wouldn't she push him to complete the mission of she is really his mother?
A bit of A, a bit of B.What canon are you following? The one where Bardock and Gine sent him to Earth to be safe from Freeza, or the one where he was actually sent to erradicarse all life and everyone in Freeza's army forgot about him until Raditz remembered he existed?
I mean, Kakarot did kinda mock her for it.It is played for laugh in the manga, but Bulma clearly just tried to buy the dragon ball by selling her body. Pretty interesting that her first way trying to gain the dragon ball is to prostitute herself.
She must have taught him something - Kakarott's obviously Saiyan knowledge of physics must have come from somewhere.I thought gine was just an apparition.
So she was with him and taught him nothing?
The only difference that is readily apparent so far is that he did not fall and become dumb.
I thought that was part of the info he got from his attack ball during his flight.She must have taught him something - Kakarott's obviously Saiyan knowledge of physics must have come from somewhere.
He was barely an infant when they sent him - but it still is a possibility, assuming that Son Gohan salvaged it.I thought that was part of the info he got from his attack ball during his flight.
Why would an attack ball teach theoretical physics and pseudoscience?I thought that was part of the info he got from his attack ball during his flight.
That story was a major source of inspiration for me at the beginning of this project, which is inevitably going to bleed through. But no, it's not a rewrite.Is this story a rewrite of Kakarot and the Quest for the Dragonballs?
She's an engineerthough wasn't she meant to have been an elite and just a pacifist
Ah so AU shenanigans then, sham would have been amusing to have a super badass lady just hanging around ready to wreck face