Revan: Galaxy of the Sith (SW KotOR Dark Side Quest)

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Darth Revan returns to power, but will soon find that maintaining an Empire vested in the Dark Side is more difficult than founding it, especially as unknown threats and hidden enemies that have waited for this moment make their own moves.
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Opening and Boarding Over Coruscant

Geckonator

Occult Materialist
STAR WARS

GALAXY OF THE SITH

The Republic has been brought to its knees. Striking from the vast and mystical factories of the Star Forge, the Sith Lord Darth Revan has reclaimed both their
identity and the throne of the newborn Sith Empire from the treacherous Darth Malak.

Bolstered by the corrupted Jedi Bastila Shan and her Battle Meditation, Revan's fleet moves swiftly to conquer the Core Worlds, and to end both the Republic and the Jedi once and for all.

Now, above Coruscant, the tattered remnants of the Republic Fleet and its Jedi Warriors make their stand against the Dark Lord of the Sith.

***
The dark cabin of the dropship is like a tomb to the eyes and ears, but through the Force you are as aware of everything aboard as if it was under the sun of Tatooine. The soldiers around you shift uncomfortably, checking weapons and pouches; the droids whir quietly without anything for their programming to respond to; and the pilots and slicers above tap away at their terminals to prepare the final approach. When there is a shudder of a hard impact against the front of the ship, you perceive the subtle tension running through them all: a tension you do not share. There is no surprise for you beyond those doors, the Force, the Dark Side tells you exactly what waits through the airlock when you breach through.

Terror, and doomed men.

With a loud clank the docking engages, but emergency blast doors prevent the gate before you from opening. A second later the high explosive breaching charges in the dropship's docking mechanism blow that problem clean off its hinges, and exposes you to the bright interior of the Republic warship. A crowd of Republic troopers stands either in cover with blasters or in the open bracing with swords and spears, and behind them in the back you see, dressed in ragged robes and shivering with fear, two young Jedi fumbling with lightsabers. The Republic and the Jedi expended their best fighters on the Star Forge, and now before you are conscripts and hastily promoted Padawans.

None of them make a move as they recognize you in the dim light, and you take two steps forward into the hallway. Still they stand in awe and terror, and you spend a moment drinking in their fear through the Dark Side. This is power you wield now, not just the strength of being able to fight and win but true power and control.

Of course, the fight is still important, and if they will not attack first you will oblige.

You ignite the lightsaber in your right hand, an intense blood red beam extending down and over your legs, a calm guard position to begin with in what comes next. The fear in the hallway spikes and turns to panic, as all hell breaks loose and your enemies attack.

The first attacks are blaster fire, and you feel the Force guide your hand in quick sweeps up and around to catch any that would hit you. The Dark Side augments these motions and the space around you, as you feel the familiar hatred of battle falling upon you. You don't just redirect these blasts, as the Jedi taught you, but return them, swinging the saber precisely enough that the angles of deflection return right back in the direction of the soldiers. The ones with melee weapons try to charge you, aiming at extremities while your saber moves around your torso. But their efforts are wasted, as you smoothly transition your deflecting motions into a swipe through the faces of the spearmen going for your legs. You feed on the pleasure of seeing their mangled bodies fall before you, and allow yourself a moment of your own wild striking: the swordsman in front of you braces to block the wild slashes you aim at him, but on the third blow his sword gives out entirely, and you cut both him and his weapon in half; carving from shoulder to hip. The Republic is so desperate that they've cut the cortosis alloy in their melee weapons to pathetic levels.

With the immediate space in front of the entry cleared, your Sith troopers and battle droids begin marching out of the entrance roughly two by two, laying down suppressive fire and closing the gap to slaughter more of the Republic troopers. With the power of Bastila's Battle Meditation filling your side, their movements are coordinated and almost graceful, and your enemies don't stand a chance. You motion to help them, waving your hand and calling upon the power of the force to suddenly constrict and crush the organs of the Republic soldiers in cover. Resistance melts before you, perhaps literally as you fry two soldiers manning heavy weapons alive with a burst of lightning summoned from the Dark Side. As they fall, you clear the soldiers and meet the two Padawans, blue and green lightsabers now ignited and held in a trembling Jedi Ready stance.

You step forward, raising your own saber in anticipation with one hand, and while the young man with the blue saber backs up slightly, the Duros female with the green saber throws herself at you. Swinging the saber down and around, she attempts to cut at your hands. It's a well-executed attack, and you sense an admirable anger and contempt welling up through her to replace her fear, but it's still just a basic Shii-Cho strike at the hands. You easily parry the attack, locking her saber with yours as you push up close. With both sabers just inches from your mask, you look deep into her red eyes, and take a moment to let fear return to her as she looks closely into the red and black shield over your face.

Her friend did not run away, however, and the Force draws you to react as you see him approach from your right and rear, where he had shuffled around as you two locked sabers. He attempts a wild thrust of the saber at you, not even bothering with form or technique. At the moment of his strike, almost connecting with you, however, you use the force to suddenly push back the Duros in front of you, and as she staggers back several feet you easily weave around the attempted sneak attack and bring your saber around to cut clear through his waist. The Duros woman launches into a new attack at your left side, but at that moment you call your second lightsaber up to your left hand, and the purple blade ignites and flashes. She falls down, screaming in agony as her arm falls away from her shoulder still holding the lightsaber.

You take a moment to admire the battlefield, meditating in the embers of the Dark Side which always follows bloodshed, as your soldiers finish up and sprint forward around you. They go forward, splitting off into well-coordinated squads to cover every hallway both as a part of a pre-made plan and as a natural consequence of Bastila's presence tying them together and putting them in a perfect mindset. As you gaze down at the two Jedi, while the light rapidly fades from the human's face the Duros fights on for life, clutching at her flash-cauterized wound. This one has some potential, you think to yourself, and you make sure to gesture to her for the red-armored Elite troopers trailing behind you. As you stride forward into the halls of the ship, they pick her up roughly and take her back onto the dropship. She will fall or she will die, the Dark Side wins either way.

***

A short span of ominous striding and brutal combat later, and you and your troopers face the sealed doors to the command ship's bridge. The trooper with the computer slicing setup kneeling by the control panel finishes his work quickly, however, and the two giant halves of the door slide open rapidly, revealing the clustered officers and guards standing in shock as you lead your soldiers in, weapons raised. One more Jedi, a bit older and more experienced, stands ready and walks to meet you.

"You'll never win, Revan. Twice you've betrayed the order, and now you're weaker than ever. Even if I die here--"

Surging contempt and hatred cuts off your usual instinct to allow an enemy to speak their peace before dying, and your throw out your hand to both silence him with an invisible hand around his lungs and to lift and throw his entire body. You aim for one of the command consoles, and sure enough as he impacts through it it ruptures a major power line and leads to an explosive overload that reduces him and the two officers standing nearby to a charred crisp. If the Republic insists on this outdated design that makes every computer terminal a potential electrical bomb, you'll keep taking advantage of it.

As your soldiers follow you in, everyone else armed on the bridge throws their weapons down after a moment of trepidation. The battle is lost, and they're no longer in the mood to even make it difficult.

As experts take their place in seizing control of the ship's remaining systems and broadcasting this victory to the Sith and Republic Fleets alike, you stride to the viewing window, where the captain--or was her de facto admiralship made official after Dodonna's death? The intelligence reports were unsure--stands dejected and fearful. You ignore her for the moment and approach the window, which looks out across both the glittering surface of Coruscant, already showing fire and scars visible from space due to stray ordnance and panicked riots of citizens hearing the news of your approach, and the gradually approaching Sith Armada. The triangular capital ships of your forces move forward in perfect formation as the Republic falls before them, and you know that every small buzzing fleck in the cloud of combat is a Sith fighter; for no Republic pilots at this point could survive against Sith fighter formations under the influence of Battle Meditation.

The victory is complete, and the Republic is defeated. There might be Senators in exile, pockets of territory claiming to be a remnant Republic, but with the fall of the Core there is no chance of it mounting even delaying assaults. The Galaxy belongs to the Sith.

You stand there on the bridge a moment, looking out on your conquests, and reach up to remove your mask, so that you can see them with your own eyes. Yes, the Galaxy is yours... but what now?

***

Face Selection

Make a selection of which face from KotOR we'll be using for Revan. The selection is from this image, numbered 1 to 15 from left to right.


Votes should have a first and second choice, in case the other gender wins and you still want to influence the face choice. Example vote:

[ ] First Choice Female
-[ ] 12
[ ] Second Choice Male
-[ ] 14

To throw my bias out there, I just finished a KotOR playthrough with female 12, so that's the one I'm pulling for in my head.
 
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Character Sheet and Other Information
Player and Allied Characters

Darth Revan


Dark Lord of the Sith
Skills:
  • Lightsaber Combat: +10
    • Specialty: Dual Lightsaber Combat
    • Specialty: Dark Side Lethality
  • Force Sensitive: +10
    • Specialty: Battlefield Power
    • Specialty: Domination of Minds
  • Leadership: +8
    • Specialty: Tactics and Strategy
    • Specialty: Negotiation
  • Technical Skills: +5
    • Specialty: Droidcraft
    • Specialty: Computers and Logic
Known Techniques:
  • Force Lightning: Project long arcs of deadly energy conjured out of the Force itself.
    • Force Storm: Lightning can be conjured over an area to precisely arc and strike targets.
  • Mental Attack: Directly assault the mind of another, impresing broad feelings and emotions on them.
    • Insanity: Weaker minds can be broken outright.
  • Mind Trick: Weaker minds can be subtly influenced and made to comply with any suggestion.
  • Telekinesis: Reaching out and applying physical forces using the Force.
    • Kill: Pressure can be applied directly on a person's windpipe, or on all their internal organs at once.
    • Lightsaber Manipulation: Control is fine enough to allow a lightsaber (or other mechanisms for that matter) to be controlled remotely.
    • Force Wave: A wild repulsive field can be created that deflects even blaster bolts.
  • Corruption: The Dark Side can bring many unnatural changes upon the physical world.
    • Plague: The physical body can be made instantly sickly and weak, as the Force melts away muscles and compels cells to fail.
  • Drain Life: Vital essence can be extracted through the Force and used to restore one's own energy.
    • Death Field: The unprotected can be assaulted and drained by the Force just via proximity.
  • Lightsaber Forms: Basic Jedi training routines for different kinds of lightsaber combat, used as the repertoire for real combat.
    • Form I: Shii-Cho
    • Form II: Makashi
    • Form III: Soresu
    • Form IV: Ataru
    • Form V: Shien/Djem So
    • Form VI: Niman
Possessions:
  • Mask of Darth Revan: Thought lost for years, Bastila Shan produced this mask from a secret collection soon after the defeat of Darth Malak and Revan's formal return. This old mask was originally simply the front plate of a Mandalorian warrior's helmet, but the design is now distinctly associated with Revan and the mask itself is steeped in the Dark Side.
  • Star Forge Battle Robes: A recreation of Revan's original gear, this set was the first item Revan requisitioned from the Star Forge upon her embracing her return. It is not only of such fine make that the subtle armor does not interfere with using the Force, but it is a powerful relic of the Dark Side itself and adds to an aura in the Force.
  • Twin Lightsabers: The first, red saber favored in the right hand is a relic of the first Dark Jedi Revan killed on her recent quest for the Star Forge, while the purple saber preferred in the left hand was personally constructed under the guidance of the Jedi as part of Revan's second time as a Padawan and modified with a unique crystal from the caves of Dantooine. Unique, powerful crystals in the Force have also been added to the blades to enhance them, namely a perfectly polished Krayt Dragon Pearl in each.
  • The Ebon Hawk: A former smuggler's ship equipped with one of the most advanced hyperdrives in the Galaxy. Preferred as Revan's personal transport for situations where an official Sith fleet or entourage would be inconvenient.

Bastila Shan:
Sith Apprentice
Skills:
  • Lightsaber Combat: +7
    • Specialty: Double-Bladed Saber Combat
  • Force Sensitive: +8
    • Specialty: Battlefield Support
  • Leadership: +5
    • Specialty: Tactics and Strategy
  • Force Lore: +3
    • Specialty: Jedi Education
Known Techniques:
  • Force Lightning: Project long arcs of deadly energy conjured out of the Force itself.
    • Force Storm: Lightning can be conjured over an area to precisely arc and strike targets.
    • Disabling Shock: A form of the technique even the Jedi don't eschew, a small amount of precisely controlled electricity can disable a computer or droid very easily. Fully unleashed, it can destroy vital components in second
  • Mental Attack: Directly assault the mind of another, impresing broad feelings and emotions on them.
    • Horror: Fear can be made a pervasive and all-consuming feeling in the enemy.
  • Mind Trick: Weaker minds can be subtly influenced and made to comply with any suggestion.
  • Healing: The Force can be used to knit a broken body back together, stimulating cells to regrow and pain to disappear in seconds even when normal healing would take months or years.
    • Corrupted Healing: The Dark Side taints this altruistic Jedi technique, slowing the healing down and no longer mitigating pain, often. Applied right, and this can become an outright method of torture in its own right...
  • Force Protection: The basic Jedi techniques used to shield one from the heat of a lightsaber or extreme environments can be spread and used actively, creating a boundary of the Force which repels harm naturally.
  • Telekinesis: Reaching out and applying physical forces using the Force.
    • Lightsaber Manipulation: Control is fine enough to allow a lightsaber (or other mechanisms for that matter) to be controlled remotely.
    • Force Wave: A wild repulsive field can be created that deflects even blaster bolts.
    • Stasis: The Force can be applied from all angles, freezing an object, or even a person, in place for as long as desired.
  • Battle Meditation: In a large battlefield, intense concentration through the Force can give not only a complete picture of the battlefield but a way to influence it, spreading positive morale and coordinating the collective unconscious fighting prowess of one's army.
    • Dark Battle Meditation: Additionally, by calling on the Dark Side of the Force the enemy can be demoralized, broken down, and made to linger in a hopelessness that thwarts their own attempts at a counterattack.
  • Lightsaber Forms: Basic Jedi training routines for different kinds of lightsaber combat, used as the repertoire for real combat.
    • Form I: Shii-Cho
    • Form II: Makashi
    • Form III: Soresu
    • Form IV: Ataru
Possessions:
  • Double-Bladed Lightsaber: Bastila's original lightsaber, with the yellow crystal she received as a Padawan replaced by a red crystal given by Darth Malak himself and enhanced with exotic power crystals.
  • Dark Jedi Master's Robes: A simple and efficient set of robes for one skilled in the Dark Side and ready for combat.
  • Holocron: A family heirloom Bastila's father used as a journal, kept by Bastila after an encounter with her mother while journeying with Revan. She seems to look at it almost mournfully sometimes...
 
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on the third blow his sword gives out entirely, and you both him and his weapon in half in a carving from shoulder to hip.
Something got lost in the editing there.
As your soldiers follow you in, everyone else armed on the bridge throws them down after a moment of trepidation.
What? It's clear from context that it means arms/weapons, but there is no noun for the pronoun to refer to.

[x] First Choice Male
-[x] 3
 
[X] First Choice Female
-[x] 11
[X] Second Choice Male
-[x] 5
 
Something got lost in the editing there.

What? It's clear from context that it means arms/weapons, but there is no noun for the pronoun to refer to.

[x] First Choice Male
-[x] 3
The reading for typos is appreciated. Would you like to get almost-done updates PMed for a beta?
 
[X] First Choice Female
-[X] 12
[X] Second Choice Male
-[X] 14

Seems I have similar taste to your example.
 
[X] First Choice Female
-[X] 12
[X] Second Choice Male
-[X] 14
 
Arrival at the Jedi Temple, a Conversation with Bastila
Female 12 has won, I will assemble the character sheet after this post.

***

The shuttle touches down smoothly and safely, even as you detect the barely-muffled burst of blaster fire and shouts of close combat echoing in the distance through the walls. The battle was formally finished, but the troops landing on the surface would be bogged down with the grinding fight to stabilize control for months; a planet like Coruscant can be captured swiftly, but it it takes time more than anything to make this swarming hive of a world truly submit.

Still, the fighting was done enough for your comfort, and it was time to inspect your conquest in person. If there was still danger on the planet, it would not be to your person.

The entry ramp to the shuttle extends down to meet polished, silvery stone, and you descend down to finally step foot on Coruscant.

The point of your arrival is not the Galactic Senate building, all constant construction and expansion to accommodate more old men, but the true center of power you made sure to capture first: the Jedi Temple. As you walk out from under the shuttle and look up, you see it in all its monumental grandeur, lit by the remaining working electrical lights and the flickering fires left in the scars where heavy weapons hit the edifice. The five towers still stand, but you can see one leaning dreadfully inward and another missing a large chunk of wall and exposing its inner structure. The place is quiet, you sense no hiding Jedi to dog you, nor can you sense more than a faint echo of the famous Force Nexus the Jedi congregated around. It is a dead place now, abandoned and quiet, and with its fall you feel certain the Jedi cannot rise to challenge you again.

There is a crowd of soldiers, droids, and Dark Jedi standing at attention before you, and as you step towards them they part like water to form a corridor to the Jedi Temple for you. All except one.

Bastila smiles at your approach, and descends to one knee in a deep bow to you, both hands outstretched to the ground in genuflection. "The Temple has fallen as you commanded, Lord Revan. Only a few Jedi remained and they were easily exterminated under your inexorable force."

You reach down and beckon for her to rise, and she follows your motions without hesitation. You can feel her through your shared Force Bond, a constant connection giving insight into each other, and when you look deep within her at this moment you see only the fires of the Dark Side: smoldering passion and obsession for you, and hatred for the Jedi blossoming into joy at their defeat. It is intoxicating to feel her presence so deeply, and you know that it is the same for her.

"You have done well, Bastila. If the war isn't finished with this, anything else is a formality. Let's discuss this further going into the Temple; I want to examine it now that it is mine."

"As you wish, my Lord," she bows her head again and turns to walk by your side through the crowd of your forces. Once you clear them they do not follow, and you and Bastila walk alone down the avenue of crumbling Jedi statues and up the grand staircase.

"Have you ever been to this Temple before?" you ask while removing your mask and shaking loose the single thick braid of your hair down your back. Your face is no longer a secret, you traveled for too long and too openly, recently, but it still pays to maintain appearances and to be more a symbol than a woman of flesh and blood.

"Only a few times," she speaks almost dismissively. "When the Council wished to examine my Battle Meditation, or when they needed me to receive orders."

You enter the great mezzanine of the Temple, a grand hallway stretching down its length with steps down into equally grand halls of study and convocation on either side. Here too there are scars of battle, and bodies intermittently scattered along the way being dragged away one by one by scavenger droids. "I saw you here, once, you know."

"Hmm?" You can tell Bastila alludes to your past life... the old Revan, the time for which you have no true memories, and immediately has your interest.

"It was when I was still a Padawan, a slave to the Jedi Masters and their rules. You and Malak were rallying supporters to go join you against the Mandalorians. Malak stood there, bloviating above the crowd, while you simply stood there and spoke when needed. I recall your words being far more influential, for that matter, in getting more of the audience to speak out and join you."

"Impressive. I don't have memories of that time, but it doesn't take much to imagine Malak talking too much."

"I am sure your memories will return before long, my master. We grow too strong in the Force not to be able to get them back."

"Perhaps." You shrug, but deep down something unsettles you. What if your memories won't truly return, ever? Are you truly Revan, or simply a new Dark Lord grown in her body and from her power of the Force. It is a fear that haunts you some nights, but also a fear to give you power in a fight: in violence and conquest, that is where what you can only call instinct has its way, and you feel most true to the idea of "Darth Revan."

"Tell me, Bastila, what do you see as our path, now that the Republic and the Jedi lie defeated?" You come to a stop somewhere near the middle of the Temple, resting by a pristine stone pillar.

"I will do whatever you command of me, my master, be it new conquests with my Battle Meditation or following you elsewhere in the Galaxy." She is quick to answer, looking up at you with determination as if the question was a test and she wants validation that she chose the correct answer. Her face, however, shifts slightly to a more pensive expression. You wonder, were her eyes always so dark, her skin so pale? Embracing the Dark Side had changed you physically along your journey for the Star Forge, so it was possible, true, but with meditation upon embracing yourself as Darth Revan many of the more obvious signs faded quickly.

"But if I were to choose for myself... on some level, our Empire needs to be ruled, does it not? I think staying here on Coruscant, showing our power, establishing fear and dominance over the Core Worlds, this would make us more powerful, would it not? The remaining Republic worlds are isolated enough that they can be slowly ground down without our direct intervention."

She pauses, gathering up something else from inside her. "And I would personally very much like to stay here, at the Temple. The Jedi Council is gone but I still feel lingering contempt. I still hate them, and want everything they stood for. I desire to tear down all that was precious to them and turn it to our own purposes. To make this place our palace and a new academy, a center of power at the political heart of the Galaxy... yes, that is a project that interests me greatly."

There it is, the Dark Side, as bright and all consuming as anything else you've ever felt in the Force. It flows from her and into you through the Bond, and it makes you smile.

"I see. Your passions are your strength now, Bastila, and when you embrace them it strengthens you, and brings power to us both. By my command, you will..."

[ ] "...stay with me..."
[ ] "...Go to the frontlines and speed up the capture of more important Republic worlds..."
[ ] "...Stay here in the Temple to enact your vision for revenge against the Jedi Council..."

"While I..."

[ ] "...Remain on Coruscant to set up a new political order in the Galaxy."
[ ] "...Go to the frontlines and lead from the Fleet, where my old self was most comfortable."
[ ] "...Go to Korriban's Academy to commune with the Dark Side and train new Sith."
[ ] "...Return to the Star Forge to commune with the Dark Side and oversee our logistics and production."
 
[X] "...stay with me..."
[X] "...Remain on Coruscant to set up a new political order in the Galaxy."
 
[X] "...stay with me..."
[X] "...Remain on Coruscant to set up a new political order in the Galaxy."
 
[X] "...stay with me..."
[X] "...Remain on Coruscant to set up a new political order in the Galaxy."
 
[x] "...Stay here in the Temple to enact your vision for revenge against the Jedi Council..."
[x] "...Return to the Star Forge to commune with the Dark Side and oversee our logistics and production."
 
[X] "...Stay here in the Temple to enact your vision for revenge against the Jedi Council..."
[X] "...Remain on Coruscant to set up a new political order in the Galaxy."
 
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[x] "...Go to the frontlines and speed up the capture of more important Republic worlds..."
[X] "...Go to Korriban's Academy to commune with the Dark Side and train new Sith."
 
Haha, I finally thought up a slightly better name for this quest. We're using that now, since it's a bit more general and captures what I think will be the overall story.
 
[X] "...stay with me..."
[X] "...Remain on Coruscant to set up a new political order in the Galaxy."
 
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