Radiant Rebirth (Hollow Knight x RWBY)
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Dream no more, sweet prince. Primal Light hath fallen. She fled Hallownest's broken bones into a realm beset by the void, reborn into mortal flesh. From there she aspires to former glory like a moth to flame. The roses will blossom, fates of young heroes intertwined. Remnant beware the Radiance and those that follow in her wake.
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1.0 Prologue - Spark
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I write these lines while wondering if my life may be forfeit. Maybe I could keep on living like I always have, but curiousity drives me; the pervasive need to know has grown beyond comprehension, consuming me like a bottomless chasm. This journal is meant to help order my thoughts before I meet her, so that I can remember how it all began.

I have no memories of Lumina's birth; I was only two at the time, but everyone I asked tells me the same thing: it was a strange day for Shiroyuri. Her parents were an ordinary couple, perfectly lovely and perfectly human. Lumina, however, was not. She was born with stubby, white gossamer wings that bore a faint fuzz; I now know it is that of a silk moth. Her hair ended up the same colour, the very concept of ivory.

Now I know how it sounds. Clear case, her mom must have had a guy on the side. Except there were no moth faunus in town. I don't think I ever even saw one beside her. No one else I asked did, either. But when the child of two humans comes out a faunus, you don't think much about it. Her dad was devastated, drank himself to death within the month. I can only assume, but maybe the fact his wife died in childbirth just finished him off. If there was another guy, she took that to the grave.

The other thing everyone agrees on is that a completely healthy woman was unlikely to die giving birth. Except Lumina was born with an active aura; the nurse swears she shone faintly gold, like the first beam of light at dawn.

Lumina once told me the only reason she survived is Granny Bluebell. With her old man touring the bars, no one else cared enough to look after her. I guess the old fox felt for a fellow faunus, not like I can ask her; she died five years ago. Peacefully, in her sleep. Come to think of it, Lumina has not smiled since then. She had a soft spot for the old lady.

The first concious memory I have of her is also my first memory period. It was a sudden Grimm attack. Mainly Beowulves, some Ursas, a Boarbatusk or two. There were no hunters in town that day, so the militia had to hold the line; Shiroyuri was too young to have any shelters dug, so us kids were all running. Lumina was with us, three years old at the time. I was five and kind of leading the lot.

I will never forget rounding that corner. A giant wolf waited right behind, its tenebrous body bulging with muscle. A dirty bone plate covered its head and sickly, yellow eyes glared out malevolent intent. I locked up then, face to face with death. The adult with us pushed me back and was ripped to shreds; when I fell on my ass, the shock shook me awake and I crawled back while the beast was busy.

And there was Lumina, standing frozen at the sight of her first Grimm. I still recall vividly how it suddenly stiffened, focussing exlusively on her. The beast outright ignored the cloud of fear all of us must have felt.

I will never forget the Grimm. And I will never forget her face that day. Lumina was not afraid. She was angry. No. Not angry, angry is not nearly enough a word to describe it. Irate? Furious? Fuming? Apoplectic? None of these do it justice, that grimace of sheer anger. Her aura flared visibly, wings fluttering.

Anyone I asked later tells me that the Grimm screamed, shocking everyone but me and her into fainting. I understand why they attribute this bloodcurdling, inhuman screech to the abyssal spawn. But they are wrong.

It was not the Grimm.

Lumina screamed that day, her voice a physical force that paralysed my entire body. A scream so bridled with hatred that even the soulless beast was taken aback. It died before the surprise wore off; Lumina manifested her Semblance then, projecting light. It became a thin beam that punched a hole through its head.

It feels like every single Grimm in the village converged on us from then on; the moment she spotted them, a band of light connected Lumina and a given beast before it died. None was spared, none even made it near her.

I once asked her why she hates them so much. Her response makes some sense, but tells me nothing: "No mind to think, no will to break, no voice to cry suffering."

She never elaborated and I stopped asking long ago.

Her place in the village changed since then; she already was a bit of a pariah among the older children because of her wings, but now they were actively scared of her. Those her age and younger were just mesmerised by the light she produced. The adults, well, I think they liked that she made herself useful? Grimm attacks became more common, but Lumina always killed most of whatever force came.

That is not to say she became a celebrity; I don't think she ever cared, either. Her active aura and clear ability to kill with absolute ruthlessness made no one risk bullying her, but that was about it. She never had friends and never wanted them. She is not pretty despite her active life. Emaciated, more like. She never asked for payment or any recompense for killing Grimm; I offer her some of my food whenever I can spare it, wondering how she is still alive. Every day she rises with the sun and stands perfectly still for an hour to soak up its light. Then she does chores around the shack she lives in, eats what food she has, and begins to wander about town aimlessly. Sometimes other girls or some of the boys try to get her to hang out, but she just has no interest in anything we like. Back then I thought she looked down on us, but by now I know she simply does not care.

Sometimes she is heard talking to herself in alien tongues; not Valean or Atlesean, but something so utterly foreign they wonder if she made it up. Pitch and tones vary from time to time, but every single eldritch speech I heard sends shivers down my spine.

Everyone else ignores her eccentricities because she is useful or because she scares them. But I do not. I can not. I must know what makes her the way she is. For fourteen years she has lived in this village; she does not seem to care about us, but she still stays. Her wings work, she could just fly away and never look back. Why does she not? Who is she, and why? What secrets hide in this light that is exactly like sunlight?

Dawn breaks in an hour. I will meet her then and finally ask about it all.


The next entry is written in shaky letters, turning more and more illegible. Droplets of blood and tears smear some of the ink. It reads as follows:

She told me. Showed me. I saw heard felt smelled. I saw it. I saw it. I saw it. The first spark of light. The song from the beginning of time. Titans of flame spread wings, they are her eggs. A million million million eggs across time and space, waiting to hatch. But she was first, was ever, is forever.

Dawn will break!

I have seen the face of god Andsheis a MOTH!
 
1.1 Planeta
Vernal snapped the small booklet shut. She took a deep breath, trying to settle her fluttering nerves. Of course the ravings of a madman deserved little regard, but she could not quite bring herself to shake it off. The body in the corner may contribute.

Vernal was no stranger to death. She saw it aplenty over the years; both among her tribe and the towns they swept clean after they fell. But Shiroyuri felt subtly different. Then there was that young man, almost a boy really. He lay nestled in that corner, arms wrapped around his legs. The only one who died of natural causes, dehydration most likely. It was not a pretty sight.

Shaking her head, Vernal's gaze swept the room for anything valuable. A few Lien notes wandered into her sack, as did a few bits and bobs. Nothing groundbreaking, but even tiny amounts added up in the end.

Just as she was about to leave, her eyes fell on that journal again. She picked it up almost inadvertently, against her better judgement. Vernal absently rubbed the black ink dragon cresting her left arm before slinging the sack over her shoulder and leaving the tiny home. Snow crunched under her boots.

Where she could usually push away whatever weirdness she found in dead folks' homes, this one stayed in mind. Even though the final entry read like a complete nutjob, something about those words upset Vernal.

It took a few minutes of stalking the desolate streets before realisation came; the unlucky bastards on penal duty were busy stacking up corpses already pilfered. Upon seeing the frozen bodies, Vernal realised what felt so off: every single corpse sported a bloody hole in its head. No other injuries, no signs of battle. If anything, their expressions were of fear.

The city was fine when their scouts checked two weeks prior. A windfall for the Branwen tribe, certainly, but an eerie one.

Raven was thankfully not far. She oversaw proceedings on the marketplace, where just about all of the bodies were found. Like a mob, suddenly felled. Vernal smoothed out her features and approached the tribe's leader. Their strongest member, the woman who elevated them from a creeping death to new vitality. A head taller than most women and clad in black with some traces of red, Raven Branwen struck an imposing figure. No one would expect her to be in her fourties, even the wrinkles in her face were rare. They spoke of exhaustion more than age, at least to those who saw them.

"Got something for ya."

Raven's head turned to behold Vernal. Her expression was hidden as always when out of camp. A mask so reminiscent of Grimm boneplates covered her entire head; primarily white, with sharp red lines. Each segment an eye-covering mask taken from White Fang operatives Raven herself slew. The animals would forever remember not to mess with their tribe.

Vernal handed her leader the journal. She could not see Raven's expression, but the way she flipped it open seemed impatient. Then Raven stilled, head moving up ever so slightly. Vernal gave her a few minutes to go through what meagre amount of information there was; if the boss lady decided it was rubbish, she could just claim she brought it for a laugh.

Fortunately, or perhaps unfortunately, Raven absorbed its contents with rapt attention. It slapped shut with a muted thud once she was done.

"Nonsense?" she murmured to herself. "Or perhaps a clue?"

Vernal was familiar with that particular habit. She let the older woman muse for a minute before speaking up: "What do you think? Kinda weird, isn't it?"

"Yes."

Even without seeing her face, Vernal knew Raven was scowling at that booklet. "Most of it is sensible if odd. The last bit makes me wonder, though." A soft sigh followed, shared with only Vernal; it remained a source of pride that their leader trusted her and her alone with these tiny signs of weariness. "And yet a city that should be flourishing is dead. Not by Grimm, either. This has to mean something."

"I was thinking the same thing. Was there a moth faunus among the dead?"

Raven swiftly called over one of the poor sods who had to stack corpses to ask him that question; his answer was a quick no. There were hardly any faunus at all. The guard teams found no one sneaking around the city,either.

With no real answers, the women shrugged it off and went back to work. They had to finish stripping everything of value out of the town before Mistral sent a response team. Glancing at the bodies again, Vernal quickly looked away. She found distraction in cursing their luck; with all these people obviously killed by humans, they would blame the tribe again.

"Great, Hunters at the gates in a week or two."

"We will manage," Raven assured her mirthlessly.

Vernal could only snort in response; of course they would. They always had.

She would put the incident out of her mind by the time they left Shiroyuri. Raven would keep the journal, however.

Meanwhile, dozens of kilometres distant, a waif sat on a large rock. Her gossamer wings glittered in the afternoon sun, slowly folding and unfolding. She stared at her thin, almost bony hands, trying to understand what went wrong. Her patchwork blouse and skirt could not deter the cold winter air, but aura protected her perfectly. So why did she feel cold?

Lumina took a deep breath. White fog flew from her mouth, glittering in the sunlight. She tried to understand while thinking back to the past hours.

Someone friendly came up and asked about her. Not an unprecedented occurence, but he did not let Lumina brush him off. He was polite about it, too. The inconsistencies of her existence were noticed and inquired about. So Lumina indulged him; she felt he may actually believe her, unlike anyone else she ever tried to be candid with.

So she showed him what he wished to know. Then he began giggling, fell to his knees before her while muttering something incoherent, and staggered away. Days later she was accosted by a mob while sunbathing. Something about having hurt the poor man. The entire village was there, just about. Almost frothing at the mouth in anger, riled up and screaming at her. People she always knew she was not alike, but who she still lived around for many years.

Everything after that was a wrath-filled blur.

Lumina silently stared at her fingers. They weakly closed into a fist.

They were all dead now. Her anger always bubbled with their veiled insults, but today it boiled over for this final injustice. So she vented it in the only way she knew, in a gleaming display of divine punishment. Only after calming down did she realise what she did.

Lumina fled Shiroyuri the same day while cursing her own foolishness; she no longer had a place to obtain food or shelter from. That was truly the most damning of it all. That hollow feeling permeating her mind, it surely came from her stomach quietly aching in demand of sustenance.

Indulging her body's base desires, she plucked an apple from the tiny pack she dared make before fleeing Shiroyuri. A growling Beowulf emerged from the nearby woodland as she rummaged; the moment it made itself known, a band of light connected its forehead with Lumina's fingertip. The beast died while she tore into her meal.

For some reason Lumina wished to return, but she did not indulge in that desire; she knew there was nothing there anymore. Humans were herd animals, so she as the only survivor would have to face questions and persecution. Yet her pilfered supplies would not last long, either.

Her mood worsened as she pondered her circumstances and how to proceed. Aura helped preserve her teeth thus far, which now ground the apple's soft flesh to mush in her agitation.

Lumina often entertained the thought of just taking what she needed instead of paying with Lien. Unfortunately, she was too weak to risk damage to her human body. Without any money on her and few supplies, she thanked the books she took to reading. That and occasional excursions into the wilderness taught her how to forage and boil water on her own. As aggravating as it may be to dig in the dirt, she would do it to preserve herself.

Nonetheless, having to conform to human mannerisms angered Lumina. Every day was a reminder of how far she fell. Once a goddess, well and truly; now trapped in mortal flesh for the actions of that dastardly Wyrm!

Lumina bit through the apple's core and ate that, too. She was full after some additional jerky and a drag of water. Considering her eating habits, that gave her enough resources to subsist on for another day or two.

Alas, she finally had to accept waiting would not suffice. Lumina spent over a decade simply surviving in the hopes of her powers growing with time. It was far too little and she remained trapped in this shape.

Yet her only alternative may just be worse; Lumina still remembered her beloved moths, who betrayed her. The mere reminder saw her teeth clenched. Anger radiated from her in almost palpable waves. Incoherent rage blinded Lumina for one long moment before she forced it down.

Now was not the time, she needed to think.

Ignoring people was no longer a viable path. She disregarded them and their way of life long enough. Lumina had to integrate and find a way to cement herself in their memories. A bitter pill to swallow, but needs must. If only her birthplace still existed, that may make it easier to transition. Then again, wiping the slate clean may be more favourable?

Her musings were interrupted by a hellish howl.

Lumina looked up, as did many others; that roar echoed for miles, sending animals and people alike into rapid retreat. Only the Branwen Tribe remained at work, though Raven herself now reinforced the guards.

Meanwhile, Lumina remained where she was. Seated under a pair of trees at the foot of a hill, she watched a horned head crest that same hill. Yellowish red eyes gleamed as they beheld prey; the beast climbed further, revealing something resembling a rider on a horse. Only it was a single being comprised of solid darkness. Bony ribs were the only colour beyond horse and rider's eyes, as well as the bone plates on their heads. An assortment of spears and other weapons stuck to the horseman's back, shifting as the Grimm moved.

The Nuckelavee stood no less than six metres tall. Even Lumina heard of it in her ignorance; the nightmare of Anima, a beast that plagued Mistral for generations.

The horse reared up, ready to charge.

Before it could take a single step down the hill, a beam of light connected Lumina and the rider. Its eyes crossed in wonder as the flash passed. The horseman fell back with a sizable hole in its head. Yet against Lumina's expectations, the horse was undeterred. Its hooves threw up snow as it charged anyway.

A second beam pierced its head several steps later.

The Nuckelavee collapsed without a sound beyond the rumble of its tumble down the hill. It tore up the ground with its sheer mass and came to lie right before Lumina.

While the elder Grimm's body began to dissolve into black mist, she nonchalantly fished in her small pack. It did not take long to find the aged map she sought for. Anger intermittently calmed by violence, Lumina went back to considering her next move.

Out of all the places to go, she felt most drawn to the capital. The city of Mistral was far bigger than any other in the kingdom. As much as it galled her to admit, she needed more practice interacting with humans. She could just leave the country of Mistral for greener pastures, but knew too little to even begin picking a destination. Touring nearby villages did not appeal, either. So the capital it was.

Orienting herself by the native sun's position, Lumina spread her faintly glittering wings. She clutched her little pack tight and became light; a gleaming band connected where she just stood and a spot a kilometre above. There it curved before racing northward.

The entire display was visible for but a moment. Lumina reformed in front of Mistral city's walls within less than a second. As her wings folded behind her back, the moth beheld a pair of stunned guards. Neither quite knew how to react to her sudden appearance.

"Lemme guess," the man drawled after a moment, "Haven?"

Lumina shook her head. She was not planning to become a Huntress at this time. "Not Haven. I am merely traveling."

"Aren't you a little young to travel alone, missy?" the other interjected. They looked Lumina up and down, half a sneer aborted at the sorry sight of her clothes. The girl stood a full head shorter than someone already of only average height. They grimaced. "On second thought, forget it. Any controlled substances you carry? Weapons?"

"Neither."

The man wordlessly waved Lumina through the gate. She strode past them and into town; only when he was certain the waif left hearing range did he turn to his companion. "You ever see a Semblance like that before?"

They shrugged in response while he frowned. "Brother's both, that kid is days from starving. Shouldn't we-"

"Leave it. We're guards. We don't do anything until she starts pickpocketing. Check the station this evening if you're that worried. Won't take long."

He rolled his eyes, but did not argue the point.

Lumina herself was busy exploring the city. She paid little mind to the guarded looks thrown her way by passersby; Mistral's architecture had her mesmerised. Grand pagodas reached dozens of stories high. A giant structure had been hewn into the mountain itself to provide more space. Thick walls guarded the entire city, manned by safety teams and cannons of all sizes. Brutal and efficient, but still elegant in essence. She could not help but acknowledge the beauty in human creations.

The everpresent sneers thrown her way, she was nonplussed by. Buildings Lumina understood, but the reason to call her ten differents flavours of "dirty animal" eluded her. Maybe she would have taken offense, but the opinions of fools mattered little to her. More pertinent though, humans protected their own; attacking one would soon have the city up in arms. She just learned that lesson.

With that gruesome reminder, she simply let the slurs wash over her; not like they were anything new. People were surprisingly uncreative. She just made certain to stay clear of places with "No Faunus Allowed" signs; Lumina was no faunus, but her wings apparently said otherwise. Idiots, the lot of them.

Sometimes people approached her.

A smartly dressed man offered her a place to stay and a nondescript job to work. Even Lumina was not oblivious enough to accept that. She knew full well what humans could do to their own. By the way he sneered when she turned him down, she was right. A few rude words hit her retreating back to no effect.

Then she had to stop several children from trying to grab her wings. Not one of them so much as asked permission. Several fled under her stare, others were rooted in place until their parents dragged them away. Sometimes with a parting insult Lumina's way. All she gave those was a simple response: "Blaming your failure to keep your spawn under control on me will not make them behave better."

She was already moving on by the time anyone registered her scathing words. Any shouts following her went ignored. Angry muttering from those around her, she likewise paid little mind to. The one time a large man grabbed her bony shoulder and started to berate her, she stared into his eyes. A gaze with the weight of eons, even a fool could feel. He stopped in surprise, then sputtered in an attempt to regain his bearings. Lumina already shrugged him off and moved on by the time he did.

She wandered past several temples, too; some large, some small. Each one dedicated to gods or saints with almost painful familiarity. Lumina knew none of their names; she never met any 'Brother Gods', who were the main divine figures on Remnant. Andersen the Benevolent was often featured as well, though deemed a saint instead of a god. All this achieved was to remind her of her own brother and his absence. Lumina frowned and moved on. At least the people in this district left her mostly alone.

Then again, the many scowls made clear she would find no shelter even if she were to inquire.

Lumina's impression of Mistral was positive despite it all. She did not care much for the waste of flesh inhabiting it, but the atmosphere captured her interest. It not only was but felt bigger than Shiroyuri by several orders of magnitude. Tens of thousands of people lived here and it showed.

Some time into her aimless wandering, a red-faced woman accosted her. She simply appeared in Lumina's path, carrying the scent of alcohol. "Go back to Menagerie," she demanded with surprising coherence. "It's where animals like you belong!"

Apparently pleased with herself for some reason, the woman's grin soon faltered. Lumina did not take offence. If anything, her curiousity had been roused by that pitiful attempt at intimidation.

"Menagerie?" She inquired. "I never heard of such a place." The name itself was telling, though. Chances were humans picked it as some sort of indignity.

Unfortunately, the human she spoke to simply snorted and toddled away. Lumina's brow arched in faint annoyance before she was distracted by a gnarly hand landing on her shoulder. Turning her head, she found an aged man with patches of grey fur on his cheeks. He smiled gently, tugging on her.

"Good job staying so calm," he praised as if being unaffected by the moods of vermin was a great achievement. Lumina remembered the previous encounters, though. He could tell she tensed up and let go of her, raising his hands placatively. "Ah, my bad. Makes sense you'd be wary." His gaze wandered over Lumina's bony frame, eliciting a clear wince. "Little late, but how 'bout I treat ya to some lunch? Us faunus ought to stick together, eh?"

Lumina was not worried about being hurt. She knew she could kill just about anyone who made such overtures. At the same time, this was the first person to actually seem at ease around her. Not to mention her stomach ached quietly once again. So she nodded.

He led her down the street to a small diner; well visible from the street and somewhat populated, too. The owner was a faunus as well, much like most of the customers. Quite a few greeted the elder cheerfully and soon enough, Lumina was gnawing on some chicken and white rice. A bowl of miso soup was added to her meal.

She ate slowly to savour the tastes, brow scrunched while considering what to do with this. A golden opportunity to meet some people. But what did humans and faunus talk about?

Lumina ultimately decided to sate her curiousity first: "Do you know about Menagerie?"

He had been watching her indulgently before, but the question drew a soft huff. "Hah, good one. Hard not to know when you're in the big city. Menagerie's our own kingdom, kinda. Just a few years old, but the entire continent is ours. The other four gave it to us as a concession. You know which four I mean?"

"Obviously. Mistral, Vale, Vacuo, and Atlas." Lumina rolled her eyes at that while he chuckled.

"Aye, smart lass ye are." He leaned back and sipped from his tea. A note of fondness crept into his voice: "Menagerie's different. I've been there a few times to visit my nephew. Mostly faunus, none of the racism. They're building something kinder there, you know?"

"And yet it is named 'Menagerie'?"

"Fair. Used to be some sort of penal colony, I hear. They're keeping the name and owning it. Make the idiots choke on their little slights, is the idea."

This, Lumina could appreciate. She was well acquainted with spite. His explanations only made her more curious about this place, though; it certainly sounded better than Mistral. Then again, if it was and actually existed... "Why do you still live here, then?"

He blinked at that. "Hm? Ah. I'm a little old to emigrate. Mistral got loads better of late, too. This is where my ancestors were born and died, so I figure I should stay. Everyone else here's much the same, lass." He motioned for the small crowd Lumina had been eyeing. "But this time next year, a bunch of the younger ones won't be around anymore. 'specially once they start having kids. Some go to Vale or Vacuo, but most to Menagerie these days."

"I see."

Taking a final bite of her food, Lumina slowly pushed back the plate. It was still half filled. "It definitely sounds like a place I would like to visit." If only to see if it was truly what people said. "Where exactly do I find Menagerie?"

"Heh. How about ya eat some more, lass? It's my treat, no problem."

"I would, but I am full."

"Ah." He winced again and changed the subject as if burned. "Arright. Menagerie's across the ocean, almost straight south from here. Bit of a long journey, though." At that point he hesitated for a long moment. "Are you... sure ya got enough money to make the trip?"

Lumina's wings unfolded halfway in response. She tilted her head at him. "I do not need money. I will fly there." Her words were clearly not as convincing as she thought, but Lumina saw no need to elaborate. "Where exactly is it located? Near the coast, I imagine?"

"Yeah, Kuo Kuana's the only town so far. Sits right at the coast, with some small offshoot villages around. But are you sure about this? The ocean's far bigger than most youngsters imagine. You'd be flying for days."

"I will be fine," Lumina said. Whether her absolute confidence convinced him, she could not tell. Deep down she did not care, either. "Thank you for your help."

Despite her demeanour, he still managed an easygoing smile. "'twas my pleasure. You sure you will be fine?"

"Naturally."

Lumina rose and bowed faintly, a gesture of thanks and respect in these lands. It was the first time in years she did, to a man who deserved a modicum of respect. "Goodbye."

He watched her stride away, hoping she might reconsider. Such an undertaking was madness in his eyes. But just as Lumina walked out the door and he expected the crowd to swallow her... there was light. He winced, rubbing his eyes. When he looked back, Lumina was gone without a trace. Only a glowing line remained on his retinas

"I'll be," he muttered. "What an odd lass."

He flagged down the waitress to pay for the girl's meal and his tea, quietly hoping the poor thing made it across the ocean.
 
The Radiance? Now that's not something you see every day.
 
Wicked, looks like it'll be a good read. Looking forward to more chapters in the future.
Edit: I didn't even notice how it was posted like 30 minutes ago while reading lmao
 
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Well this is good, I hope she gets taught how to properly eat and take care of herself.

Also a terrifying killing machine considering how easily she dispatches Grimm.
 
Heh, the Radiance would go full reeee turbomurder on black shadow creatures with white masks, wouldn't she?

Is it time for the return of the 'nuclear moth detected' tag?
 
Love it. I have no idea who Lumina is, but that's interesting in itself.
She is The Radiance the main antagonist of Hollow Knight. Basically she is moth goddess of light and dreams (the brother that she is talking about is Grimm god of nightmares). She was revered by the moth tribe until Pale King came and they decided that they like his light more. People started to forget her, so she sent dream plague, turning people into zombies.
Pale King done some unethical experiments on his own children, hundreds of them, and The Void, making perfect vessel Hollow Knight (shadow creature in white mask with no mind) and sealed Radiance inside it. Idea was, that she wont be able to subvert it and get out, as it had no mind to subvert and couldn't dream. Well Pale King made a mistake to socialise with Hollow Knight some and so it was no longer Hollow and so kingdom died to a plague.
In the game you play as one of the failed experiments that somehow got out of the void abyss The Ghost of Hallownest or The Knight as he is called. Your mission is to do something about sealed Radiance.
You can take place of Hollow Knight, you can enter his mind and kill Nuclear Moth personally or you cand become Shade Lord, Void Given Focus and take place as the deity of Hallownest after killing the Radiance.

I think though that this fanfiction starts just after sealing in Hollow Knight, seeing as there is no mention of Ghost.
 
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I'd say that given that she's elsewhere instead of sealed up, this is either the ending where the Knight shanked her, or shanked her, then ripped her apart and ascended.
 
I write these lines while wondering if my life may be forfeit. Maybe I could keep on living like I always have, but curiousity drives me; the pervasive need to know has grown beyond comprehension, consuming me like a bottomless chasm

I see our fluffy moth still is as good at fascinating people as before.

I see no way this could ends up in horrible tragedy, no siree. :V

Her parents were an ordinary couple, perfectly lovely and perfectly human. Lumina, however, was not. She was born with stubby, white gossamer wings that bore a faint fuzz; I now know it is that of a silk moth. Her hair ended up the same colour, the very concept of ivory.

I wonder, would that makes the anti faunuses racist more or less vocal?

…Ok, let's be honest, it's more, even if that makes no sense, especially if that makes no sense, that's just how this kind of people works.

Except there were no moth faunus in town. I don't think I ever even saw one beside her. No one else I asked did, either.

I know you made your feelings clear on the *lottery traits* during bloody evolution, but I still finds it hysterical that this argument wouldn't work in canon RWBY because of that detail.

Except Lumina was born with an active aura; the nurse swears she shone faintly gold, like the first beam of light at dawn.

Praise the sun!

What?

I understand why they attribute this bloodcurdling, inhuman screech to the abyssal spawn. But they are wrong.

It was not the Grimm.

Did it sound like this?

"No mind to think, no will to break, no voice to cry suffering."

Or, in one word: Flashbacks. :V

Every day she rises with the sun and stands perfectly still for an hour to soak up its light.

No no, you got it wrong: everyday, the sun rise with her.

Sometimes she is heard talking to herself in alien tongues; not Valean or Atlesean, but something so utterly foreign they wonder if she made it up. Pitch and tones vary from time to time, but every single eldritch speech I heard sends shivers down my spine.

The moths are offended by this comment, their language is perfectly fine, not like the horrible sounds you call language.


THESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUNTHESUN.

every single corpse sported a bloody hole in its head.

Oh my, almost like this semblance referenced in the book…nah, I' m sure it's not that. :V

Like a mob, suddenly felled.

Yes, of course *like* a mob, it certainly was something else… NOT.

Vernal could only snort in response; of course they would. They always had

The problem with that kind of reasoning is that works, until it doesn't, and then you're in deep shit.

That hollow feeling permeating her mind, it surely came from her stomach quietly aching in demand of sustenance.

Totally, that's not the lack of worship, not at all.

What? Guilt? Never heard of this, can it be eaten?

Nonetheless, having to conform to human mannerisms angered Lumina. Every day was a reminder of how far she fell. Once a goddess, well and truly; now trapped in mortal flesh for the actions of that dastardly Wyrm!

How dare the Pale king stop the apocalypse touching his people! The nerve! The blasphemy!

Buildings Lumina understood, but the reason to call her ten differents flavours of "dirty animal" eluded her.

Don't worry, I'm sure the nearest Atlesian can explain to you, in details, with graphs.

The one time a large man grabbed her bony shoulder and started to berate her

I can see it:

*how dare you be ungrateful for the insult we throw your way! Don't you know that it is the job of lessers to prostrate before their superiors! Ignore the objective fact that faunuses are better than normal humans and that the way reproduction works with them means that there should be no humans any longer! That one is on roosterteeth!*

Some time into her aimless wandering, a red-faced woman accosted her. She simply appeared in Lumina's path, carrying the scent of alcohol. "Go back to Menagerie," she demanded with surprising coherence. "It's where animals like you belong!"
Apparently pleased with herself for some reason, the woman's grin soon faltered.

Incredible, such rhetoric, much wow!

There, I think that's what she expected.

The other four gave it to us as a concession.

And just the name and geography tells you everything a out how sorry they were.

(Not at all, I mean not at all)

He winced again and changed the subject as if burned

Recognizing someone whose stomach is not in the habit of eating much, and thus easily made full.

quietly hoping the poor thing made it across the ocean.

Personally, I'm more afraid of what the other side of the ocean will have to endure due to her.

How likely she join the white fang? If only for the recognition once she climbs the ranks?

Love it. I have no idea who Lumina is, but that's interesting in itself.

In addition to the helpful informations before, here's a picture of her true form:



No, not the bug in the foreground, the sun in the background.

Here's how:

 
In addition to the helpful informations before, here's a picture of her true form:
I still feel this is one of these low-key amazing ways to set the stage; all is calm, no enemies in sight. Then you challenge something and the sun spreads her wings before coming out of the sky to kill you.

Team Cherry did more than just deliver that moment despite being an indie dev studio.
 
I still feel this is one of these low-key amazing ways to set the stage; all is calm, no enemies in sight. Then you challenge something and the sun spreads her wings before coming out of the sky to kill you.

Team Cherry did more than just deliver that moment despite being an indie dev studio.

I think that there are quite a lot of independent studios who actually manage to deliver this kind of things not in spite of, but because they are little.

I recently watched a video about how Tears of the kingdom manages to makes you lose your breath and stop for a moment with how the dawn and sun in general are made, and while that's not made by a little studio, the video emphasize quite a lot on the fact that the thing that makes it works is that they are not trying to even participate in the race for better graphics others are doing, and it also applies to independents in a way, they are there for the feels and not the almighty dollar, and suddenly the games have souls instead of the bland things they call triple A nowadays.

Hollow knight is quite a good example of how to do an atmosphere, and while it is not my favorite indie game in terms of feelings (that prize will always belong to outer wilds), it is up there.

This shot alone tells so much about the Radiance, it sells the grandeur and majesty of something you likely didn't even know existed up to this point, and all it takes is working by evocation instead of trying to reproduce reality, I get more than enough reality IRL, thank you very much, if I wanted more, I wouldn't be playing games.
 
I recently watched a video about how Tears of the kingdom manages to makes you lose your breath and stop for a moment with how the dawn and sun in general are made, and while that's not made by a little studio, the video emphasize quite a lot on the fact that the thing that makes it works is that they are not trying to even participate in the race for better graphics others are doing, and it also applies to independents in a way, they are there for the feels and not the almighty dollar, and suddenly the games have souls instead of the bland things they call triple A nowadays.
I can definitely agree with this. My wording may have been a little bad up above, but this does reflect my feelings quite well
 
Very interesting and well-written story!

I do hope that this will be a bit slower-paced than your other ones? No need to jump into clashes of divine might right away...
 
I do hope that this will be a bit slower-paced than your other ones? No need to jump into clashes of divine might right away...
I am not sure how to respond to that.

For one, anything I say is a spoiler regardless of what the answer is. For two, none of my projects have this kind of clash 'right away' and with nothing even close to regularty either. Suffice it to say, if something like this happens it will be for thematic reasons and not just because. And if it makes sense and fits in a given moment, then I am not going to not do it for 'pacing'.

You will have to explain in more detail what you mean with 'slower-paced' before I can respond beyond a general case.
 
Personally I look forward to seeing Radiance-chan learn how to fight in other ways, such as summoning one of those swords she drops on you in the fight and using it like a sword or having the swords fly around her.
 
Radiance-sama deserves worship, long live the moth, may we bask forever in her radiant light
 
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