Posted
chapter seven to FFN. Based on comments here, it was apparently unremarkable, but at least no major problems needed to be fixed.
Here's a draft of chapter eight. It feels kind of rushed to me, like something's missing, but for the life of me, I can't figure out what.
* * *
Tali'Zorah nar Rayya seethed.
He's the captain, she reminded herself.
I'm sure he had good reason. Good reason to...
She snarled and punched the bulkhead.
"Is something wrong, Tali?"
She spun and was thankful for her environment suit, as it hid her blush. "Oh! Commander! I, uh..." She floundered. As a quarian, she found herself in a serious quandary regarding the situation. On one hand, Shepard was the Normandy's captain, his actual rank aside, and to a quarian, the captain's word was law. But on the other...
Her gaze drifted to the console sitting in the cargo bay.
Shepard followed her gaze, then nodded in understanding. "So, you've met Bishop."
"Bishop" was the name taken by the AI Shepard had found skimming credits off the Quasar machines. As a Spectre and the Normandy's skipper, he had gained the authority he needed to grant it asylum, something his conscience had required of him. It made this confrontation inevitable, but he had hoped to put it off until later.
Much, much later. Tali had a habit of putting him off-balance.
"You are... aware of what quarians think of AIs, yes?" she asked delicately, still not able to bring herself to outright accuse the ship's skipper.
"Yes, I've heard."
"Then why have you granted that... that... that
thing asylum?"
"I didn't exactly ask for it, Tali."
"You could have told it no," she pointed out. "From what I understand, you
did tell it no."
"And just abandon a sapient intelligence to prejudice and discrimination?" he fired back. "Like we could have done to your people?"
The shot was below the belt, and he knew it.
It worked, too.
That didn't stop her from slapping him.
Shepard slowly turned his head to face the quarian again, ignoring the shocked looks from the other crewmembers present in the cargo bay. "I deserved that," he admitted. "I should have told you about it, been up front with you." His voice hardened. "But there are some things you need to understand, Miss Zorah. Humanity accepts your people, your goal to reclaim your homeworld, because we've been there, a hundred and fifty years ago, when Earth was conquered by the invid. But in the end, freedom is the right of
all sapient beings: levo, dextro, or digital. Is that understood?"
"Y-yes, Captain," she stuttered, her word choice underscoring just how rattled she was.
"And Tali? If you
ever hit me again in public, I
will throw your ass in the brig. I like you, but this is
my ship, and I have to maintain discipline."
The quarian nodded. Satisfied that he'd made his point, Shepard turned and headed over to the console that housed Bishop.
"Hey," he said, "how are you doing?"
"Satisfactory," Bishop replied.
"We'll be entering Alliance space soon," Shepard said. "Once we get to Space Station Freedom, I'll pass you over to Immigration Services, and they'll take it from there."
"Thank you, Commander."
"I hope you don't take anything she said personally."
"She is quarian," the AI said. "Given the history, her reactions are understandable, if irrational."
"Thanks for understanding," Shepard said. Bishop declined to respond. Shaking his head, the commander turned away and continued on his way. He made a habit of making the rounds on the ship; it helped him know his ship, inside and out.
"Shepard."
He turned and greeted the krogan, "Wrex."
The battlemaster walked up and looked down at him. "You look different without your armor," he noted. "Smaller."
"Don't underestimate me," Shepard warned, a wry smile on his face.
"Ha! I won't," Wrex assured him. "Like I said, you've got a quad on you, Shepard. That... that 'Haydonite war drone' you called it? That was glorious. I haven't had a fight like that in centuries." He rubbed his abdomen. "I can still feel that punch it gave me."
"Well, I hope you don't mind, Wrex, but I hope we don't run into too many of those," Shepard said. "That thing was half-wrecked, and it still nearly killed us all. Not exactly an experience I'd care to repeat any time soon."
"Bah, you humans," Wrex snorted. "What is life without challenges like that?"
"A lot longer," Shepard deadpanned.
"A near-death experience now and then is nice," Wrex retorted. "Keeps the mind sharp."
Chuckling, Shepard shook his head and continued on his way. At least Wrex was enjoying himself. He clambered down one level to the MARDET armory, wincing a bit as his ribs protested again. As he stepped off the ladder and turned, he froze.
Ashley turned away from her project at the sound of footsteps on the access ladder and snapped to attention. "Sir!"
"Is... is something wrong, Shepard?" Liara asked.
"Uh, no. No, of course not," Shepard said, shaking his head. "As you were, Gunny." The gunnery sergeant cocked an eyebrow curiously, and as she noted his gaze, her lips twisted into a sly smile. She was still weighing the pros and cons of teasing her commanding officer when he asked, "Would you excuse us, Doctor T'Soni?"
"Of-of course."
"Don't worry," Ashley said, giving Liara a reassuring nod. "I think we've got the final adjustments done. Just walk around, get used to the armor, and we'll get you checked out on a Cyclone tomorrow."
She stepped aside with Shepard, who pursed his lips and asked, "All right, Gunny, would you care to explain why you're fitting a suit of CVR for Doctor T'Soni?"
"She's volunteered to help with the mission, sir, to join the ground team," she answered, clearly anxious. "With her biotics, she'd be an incredible asset to the team. I-I cleared this with Ka- Lieutenant Alenko, sir. He said you'd be okay with it."
"I am," Shepard assured her. "Just... surprised. I haven't gotten around to checking the daily reports yet." He looked back at the asari archaeologist and sighed, running a hand through his buzz cut. "I just wish I knew why Saren wants her dead. Train her well, Ash. I won't take her on-mission unless she passes at
least Basic Quals on a Cyke, both modes."
"Got it, Commander," she said, snapping to attention and saluting.
Shepard frowned as she turned back to Liara. What was that he'd heard in her voice? Dismissing the errant thought, he headed further down the corridor to the maintenance and repair bay. Laid down on the "operating table" was Garrus's Predator P, and Garrus and Jenkins were going over it with molecular fusion welders, patching the damage the armor had taken on Halla.
"Are you sure there's no way we can mount one or two of those missile launchers on this thing?"
"Yes." From the sounds of it, Jenkins had answered the question multiple times. "Without a control interface and full sensor suite, it would be worthless."
"Then how would we do that?"
Deciding not to disturb them, Shepard left with a slight chuckle as Jenkins growled something under his breath. Time to check on the veritech fighters.
Another ladder found himself stepping past Midnight's disassembled frame. Alice's crew was working on it, but the Senior Chief herself was busy... "discussing" with Kaidan his treatment of White Star. Shepard quickly turned and left. There were some things it was simply best a ship's commanding officer not be witness to.
"
There you are, Commander!"
Shepard paused as HA1c Bhatia slid down the access ladder in front of him. She turned and glared at him, hands on her hips.
"Is something wrong, Corpsman?"
"I've been looking all over for you, sir," she said. "Doctor Chakwas says you pushed your post-mission physical back a day and then skipped it."
"I'm fine," he said, trying to wave it off.
"Uh uh," she retorted, shaking her head. "Doctor's orders."
For a moment, he considered resisting further, but the look in her eyes dissuaded him. "Fine," he relented.
They stood for a moment.
"You gonna move?" he asked, nodding to the ladder behind her.
"No, sir," she said. "I saw that hit you took. We're taking the elevator."
Shepard suppressed a groan. The cargo elevator was slow as molasses.
* * *
"There," Dr. Chakwas said, "was that so painful?"
Shepard kept his mouth shut. She had sent Corpsman Bhatia after him this time. If he said anything, she might recruit others as well. Instead, he simply stood and left, stepping out of sickbay, where he saw Garrus munching on something.
"Jenkins kick you out?"
"Yeah," the turian groused. "Apparently, I was distracting him." He speared another morsel with his fork and popped it in his mouth.
Shepard frowned.
Wait a minute...
"Garrus, what are you eating?" he asked.
"The breen you had in the fridge," the turian said, gesturing with his fork to the galley. "I'm surprised you were able to find any so far from Palaven. It costs a small fortune on the Citadel."
"Um, Garrus," Shepard said, "the only dextro food we have on board is the flavored nutrient paste we stocked up on for Tali. Those are Swedish meatballs. Human food.
Levo food."
The turian stopped chewing and stared. "...what?"
Shepard stepped back and reopened the door to sickbay. "Doctor Chakwas!"
* * *
Shepard shook his head as he considered the situation. Once again, they had no more solid leads, but there were rumors on the extranet about geth attacks on some remote colonies, and if true, FAdm Hackett would be able to brief him. Garrus was still down in Medical, getting his stomach pumped to clear his system of the levo food he had indulged in, and Liara was making progress in her training with Ashley.
So lost in thought was he that he almost missed the Normandy making the last relay jump to the Arcturus system and Space Station Freedom. Space folds were faster and greater practical range than the regular (that is, eezo-based) FTL and also had the advantage of being able to carry nearby smaller craft with the folding ship without actually docking, but it lacked the tactical utility of standard FTL, and relay jumps -- being instantaneous -- were still faster, which was why most modern Alliance ships, including the Normandy, were equipped to travel by all three.
"Freedom Control to Normandy, transmitting approach vector."
"Approach path received, Control," Joker answered.
* * *
Resupplying a warship was always hectic, doubly so for one built with top secret technology on a high priority mission. Fortunately, as a civilian, Tali herself wasn't part of the rank and file and therefore had a bit more leeway. A bit.
Enough to pick up this.
"You're sure they will work?" she asked.
"As sure as I can be without testing them out," Chris Tanner nodded reassuringly. Chris and Tali weren't really very close, but given the mission she found herself on, she had felt this course of action was prudent, if not necessary. As for Chris... he was an armorer and found the challenge exciting. "Go ahead," he said, "put one on. We've still got that clean room you bunked in before Normandy's shakedown, and I sterilized it twice."
"Perhaps I will," she mused aloud. "It would only be prudent to make sure they work properly, after all." She shot him a sly look. "And of course, you want to see your handiwork in action, right?"
"That I do, ma'am."
* * *
1stLt Kaidan Alenko sat in the Officer's Club, glad to finally catch a break to fuel his biotic metabolism. As he wolfed down his third serving, he was dimly aware of someone taking a seat across from him. He looked up and nearly had a heart attack.
"Relax, Lieutenant," UEMC Brigadier General (BGen) Kahoku said. "Carry on."
"Uh, sorry, sir," Kaidan apologized. "Resupply stop. It's been hectic. You know how it is."
"I know," Kahoku said, nodding pensively.
They lapsed into silence as Kaidan continued his meal at a slower pace. The lieutenant wondered just why the Force Recon one-star would stop to have lunch with him. Kahoku had taken him under his wing, so to speak, after Akuze, but it was a distant sort of mentorship that didn't generally include shared meals at the O Club. Something had to be up, something unofficial... or so black it might as well be unofficial. And it had to be marine business, or the general would be talking to the commander.
"Your ship's on detached duty, right, Lieutenant?"
"I can't say, sir."
To anyone else, it was simply that: "I can't say." To the Force Recon general, though, it was an affirmative and a request to not ask any further.
* * *
LtCmdr Shepard strode through the halls of Space Station Freedom, his destination firmly in mind. It had been a stressful day, transferring Bishop to Immigration Services' custody, not to mention Commodore (Cdre) Mikhailovich's snap inspection. Still, the resupply was well under way, and the crew didn't need him looking over their shoulders, so that was one less worry for him to be concerned about while he responded to the summons he had received.
"The admiral's expecting you, Commander."
"Thank you, Petty Officer," Shepard said. He entered Admiral Hackett's office and snapped to attention. "Lieutenant Commander John Shepard, reporting as ordered, sir."
"At ease," the admiral greeted him. "Good job on Halla. You saved lives, even if we still don't know what Saren's up to." He rose from behind his desk and presented him with small case. When Shepard opened it, his eyebrows shot to his hairline. Inside lay a rank patch with four thick grey stripes in contrast to the three he wore now, and pinned to the top were two sets of three pips each, the matching collar insignia of a full commander.
"Congratulations, Commander," Hackett said.
"Thank you, sir."
"Don't thank me," he said. "You've earned it. I've also found you a new XO and some new leads."
"Respectfully, sir, I don't need a new XO. Commander K'Dar and Lieutenant Pressly..."
"K'Dar's an engineer, not a bridge officer," Hackett interrupted, "and Pressly doesn't have the seniority or the time in grade for promotion. I'm assigning Lieutenant Commander Jane Hunter as your new XO."
"Hunter?" he repeated, surprised. He knew the name, all right -- few in the UEDF didn't -- but it wasn't just the history of the Robotech Wars that came to his mind, but the very person Hackett was speaking of, herself a descendent of the famous Admirals Hunter. Auburn hair, green eyes, a lithe grace... he hadn't seen her since the Academy. He nodded. "She's a fine officer."
"I had a feeling you'd agree," Hackett said, not quite smirking.
Shepard coughed. That had been a long time ago. "You mentioned some new leads, sir?"
"Yes," Hackett nodded, picking up an OSD and handing it to him. "Geth activity in the Armstrong Nebula and Attican Beta."
"The Armstrong Nebula, sir?" Shepard frowned. "That's in the Skyllian Verge, isn't it? We don't have any colonies there, do we?"
"No, Commander," Hackett answered. "Which is why you'll be working with the batarians on this."
Shepard tried to hide his distaste. After what happened on Mindoir and Elysium, the idea of working
with batarians was anathema to him. The admiral's next words proved he had failed miserably.
"Try to stay professional, Commander," Hackett warned. "They're not too happy about you being involved either, but you're a Spectre now, so they don't have a choice in the matter. We do. It's either work with them, let them handle it, or start a war, and the third option is most assuredly
not acceptable, Commander. With the geth attacking, we can't afford to open up a second front. Do I make myself clear?"
"Crystal, sir."
"Good," Hackett said. "Dismissed."
* * *
Codex: The Skyllian Verge
The Skyllian Verge is a section of space situated between the United Earth Alliance and the Batarian Hegemony, which resulted in intense competition between humans and batarians to colonize, develop, and exploit the planets within during the early 2160s, to the point that the Batarian Hegemony petitioned the Citadel Council to declare the Verge an area of batarian interest, a petition the Council had granted, but which the UEA had ignored, refusing to recognize any authority in the Citadel Council at the time.
The tensions between the United Earth Alliance and the Batarian Hegemony eventually culminated in the Skyllian Blitz in 2176, a massive assault on the human colony of Elysium by pirates and slavers based within the Verge and rumored to be funded by backers within the Hegemony. This, in turn, triggered a two-year punitive expedition by the United Earth Defense Force into the Verge, thoroughly purging the lawless region of criminal activity before withdrawing to human-controlled space.
After the Haven Accords shortly thereafter, the UEA tacitly ceased further expansion into the Verge and restricted activities within the Verge to the defense of existing colonies. The Verge remains largely unsettled, and although human colonies within the Verge are well-defended and the Batarian Hegemony makes a token effort to patrol the area, the UEDF's withdrawal from most of the area has resulted in a resurgence of criminal activity, and it is still seen as a lawless area, with pirates, slavers, and mercenary bands operating freely.