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Hey uh, if you're reading this, why are you enjoying it so far? I would really like to know, feedback helps me keep focus because it tells me what people enjoy so far. Thank you for reading this.
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The art style is fresh, the premise of dungeoneering having been privatized is quite funny to me and I really like characters wearing suits.
 
[X] "Well, if these are my quarters, I should probably get familiar with them, Ma'am."
-[X] Have a look around, enter a more suggestible state for advisement on the things in this room.
[X] "Please tell me you came up with a better name for yourself. Please. I just killed a Bullet-man, I'm not prepared to hear I did it for people with this poor of a naming scheme."
[X] "Ok, first, where do I deposit the things I looted from the dungeon. Second, where are the showers? I need to clean the smell of gunpowder and flute oil off of me."
 
[X] "Ok, first, where do I deposit the things I looted from the dungeon. Second, where are the showers? I need to clean the smell of gunpowder and flute oil off of me."
[X] Examine the things in your room.
-[X] See if there are any games on the computer.

The conversation is priority A, the shower is priority B, games are priority B'.
 
I am reading this and enjoying it thoroughly. I always love the mixing of mundane life with fantastic settings, and I always love your quests, so this is great! I just don't often have the wherewithal to vote.
 
[X] "Well, if these are my quarters, I should probably get familiar with them, Ma'am."
-[X] Have a look around, enter a more suggestible state for advisement on the things in this room.
 
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[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
 
[X] Contemplate your life decisions

once that's over with

[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
 
[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
 
[X] "Can I request a transfer to a different department? Clearly I had no idea what I signed up for."
 
[X] You know what... No. No, you aren't going to panic. You aren't going to freak out over the terrifying things that have just happened to you. You made this choice, perhaps not truly understanding it, but this choice was yours, and you shall stand by it.
- [X] Ask about what other kinds of tags are out there. You need to have some idea what you are getting into before you go back through that door.
 
[X] "...I should have known it was weird that I was getting trained to wield a sword."
-[X] "Why did no one tell me about these things when I signed up?! I can understand not telling me before the NDA- but why not AFTER?!"
 
[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
 
[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
 
[x] ...The monsters really aren't people? Just chatbots repeating lines or something?
 
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[X] "But isn't language a way of communication? They surely understand each other! Just as you and I understand each other. I could say read and read or reed and red and you would know what I meant! But if you spoke in....numbers or something I would be completely lost!"

[X] "Would you like a nickname? Because I was thinking "EGG"."

Reason: She looks like an egg yolk.

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-[X] "I wasn't really asking, your name is EGG now. Why? Because my name is apparently Eightball."
- [X] Ask about what other kinds of tags are out there. You need to have some idea what you are getting into before you go back through that door.
 
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[X] "...I should have known it was weird that I was getting trained to wield a sword."
-[X] "Why did no one tell me about these things when I signed up?! I can understand not telling me before the NDA- but why not AFTER?!"
[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
[X] Contemplate your life decisions
[X] You know what... No. No, you aren't going to panic. You aren't going to freak out over the terrifying things that have just happened to you. You made this choice, perhaps not truly understanding it, but this choice was yours, and you shall stand by it.
- [X] Ask about what other kinds of tags are out there. You need to have some idea what you are getting into before you go back through that door.
 
[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
[X] "Would you like a nickname? Because I was thinking "EGG"."
-[X] "I wasn't really asking, your name is EGG now. Why? Because my name is apparently Eightball."
 
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[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.
 
[X] "...Ooooh." once more for good measure.
-[X] Investigate the features of your new "office", with the help of Parts.

[X] "...I should have known it was weird that I was getting trained to wield a sword."
-[X] "Why did no one tell me about these things when I signed up?! I can understand not telling me before the NDA- but why not AFTER?!"

So we are in some kind of walled off place.
 
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    • [X] Prep time! Operation: Adventure Prep begins now
    -[X] Pass off your Potent Cryst, then retrieve a suit from your free suit supply. Using the power of knots, turn this suit into a [Shitty Backpack] by tying the sleeves off to make pouch-straps
    -[X] Fuse [Shitty Backpack] with [Standard Issue Sword].
    -[X] Knot a second [Shitty Backpack]
    -[X] Fuse [Shitty Backpack] with [Standard Issue Suit]
    -[X] Equip your Packrat Sword and Backpack Suit
     
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